Had/Left the village to next day Hua Xing with the steward very early in the morning, several days of time, outside the Fort Hua village had to assemble about hundred wild beasts, this year this wild beast building up speed are too quickly more than old times, this to entire Qi Country and even various countries was not a good news. 到了第二天华邢一大早就和管家出了村,就几天功夫,华家堡村外有集结了近百荒兽,今年这荒兽集结速度比往年快太多,这对整个齐国乃至各国来说都不是个好消息。 In the afternoon Hua Xing and Hua Fu steward comes back, Xihe Village Huang family situation truly such as Hua Xing suspected, more than 1000 wild beasts all gather at the Xihe Village entrance, entire Huang family enters on the line, Yijialing Village crisis Huang family has not then gone to support. 下午华邢与华福管家回来,西河村黄家情况确实如华邢猜想,一千多荒兽全都聚集在西河村门口,整个黄家都进入战斗准备状态,伊家岭村危机黄家这才没有前去支援。 The Hua Xing five Hua Fu stewards intended to kill over a hundred wild beasts, but fought brought in the more desolate beast groups firmly, they mounted the Xihe Village city wall, discussed with the Hua Kai two uncles under the countermeasure, Huang family initiate an attack finally with Hua Xing cuts to kill an desolate beast leader, this made the desolate beast group diverge 30% all of a sudden, other wild beasts did not attack a city do not depart, is still waiting outside the village, fought a Tianxi He Village pressure on reduce much. 华邢五华福管家出手杀死了上百只荒兽,可是战斗确引来了更多的荒兽群,他们登上西河村城墙,与华凯两个舅舅商量了下对策,最后黄家主动出击与华邢斩杀了一只荒兽头领,这让荒兽群一下子散去30%,其他荒兽也不攻城也不离去,依然在村外等着,战斗一天西河村压力减少了不少。 In the afternoon Hua Xing the plan stayed in Xihe Village to help Huang family solve other wild beasts tomorrow again, but thinks oneself do not return to the village Hua Kai affirmation to worry in the evening, perhaps can also lead the person to find Xihe Village, therefore two people rejected detaining of Huang Guangqi, finally returned to the village. 下午华邢本打算留在西河村明天再帮黄家解决剩余的一只荒兽,可是想到自己晚上不回村华凯肯定担心,说不定还会带人找到西河村来,所以两人拒绝了黄广启的挽留,最后还是回村了。 Hua Xing went to the Xihe Village 5 days of time continuously, he thinks of every means to kill some strength strong desolate wild beast each time, but Xihe Village each has had the wild beast to continue to come in the evening, 5 world die in Hua Xing and wild beast and wild beast under Hua Fu spear/gun has more than 4, but outside Xihe Village the wild beast placed about 1000. 华邢连续去了西河村五天时间,每次他费尽心机杀一些实力强的荒蛮兽,可是西河村每过一个晚上就有荒兽继续前来,五天下去死在华邢与华福枪下的荒兽与蛮兽就有四多只,可西河村外荒兽还是保持在一千只左右。 Hua Kai is getting more and more familiar with the habit of wild beast, only if wild beast outside village you can expel all of a sudden completely, otherwise kills many to be useless, the grandfather and steward this is familiar with newly growth at the same time the strength, on the other hand also kills several wild beast to collect some animal bones, even if a wild beast cannot eat, the fur cannot sell for money, the bone are least still wants above value 5 golds. 华凯对荒兽的习性越来越熟悉,村外的蛮兽除非你能一下子全部赶走,否则杀多少都没有用的,爷爷与管家这样一方面是在熟悉自己新增长的实力,另一方面也是多杀几头蛮兽多收集一些兽骨,一只荒兽即使不能食用,毛皮卖不了钱,骨头最少也要价值5金以上。 The Fort Hua destiny value has kept everyday at 5 o'clock about growth over the next several days, this and grandfather and Hua Fu steward killed this my many wild beast relations to be very big, the Fort Hua destiny value has risen to 152 points, the destiny value of later every day growing was short, Hua Kai also wants to accumulate enough 200 destiny value promotion family destiny, now looked like spends earlier is the correct path, didn't spend it not to rise this is not the waste? 随后几天华家堡气运值一直保持每天5点左右的增长速度,这和爷爷与华福管家杀了这我多蛮兽关系很大,华家堡气运值已经升到152点,随后每天增长的气运值就少了起来,华凯原本还想攒够200气运值升级家族气运,现在看来早点花了才是正道,不花它一直不涨这不是浪费？ That night Hua Kai first entry 【Ideal condition training mystical place】, This enter needs 5 destiny values mystical place Hua Kai to anticipate very much. 这一天晚上华凯第一次进入【意境训练秘境】,这个自己进入都需要五点气运值的秘境华凯很是期待。 Enters mystical place Hua Kai to discover oneself place a square shape in the well-illuminated space, all around was covered by light glass, looks like in an arena. This space spiritual energy is sufficient exceptionally, Hua Kai sees slow movement of a dazzling luminous spot from the space wall, that luminous spot with the lapse of time even more gloomy, Hua Kai felt that this should be a time thing, after waiting for the luminous spot to vanish , the space has the big change. 进入秘境华凯发现自己身处一个方形的通明空间里,四周被一层淡淡的玻璃笼罩,就像是在一个擂台上。这空间灵气充足异常,华凯看见一个耀眼的光点从空间壁上缓慢移动,那光点随着时间的推移越发的暗淡,华凯感觉这应该是一个记时的东西,等着光点消失后空间定有大的变化。 Really, about 2 minutes luminous spots walk randomly one happen to vanish in four walls, exhausted like the energy generally, Hua Kai sees in the space to appear with exactly the same form in the space corner. 果然,二分钟左右光点在四壁游走一圈正好消失,就像能量耗尽了一般,华凯看见空间中一个与自己一模一样的身影出现在空间角落。 „Mirror?” “镜像吗？” Hua Kai is curious, saw that form to kill to oneself, that „Hua Kai” was also the hand grasps the red-tasselled spear, what caused was 【Crack blank round】, The boundary and not the slightest difference. 华凯正好奇着,就看见那身影向自己杀了过来,那“华凯”也是手握红樱枪,使的是【裂空枪】,境界与自己一般无二。 Hua Kai does not dare to be negligent, he supports the spear/gun that the opposite party attacks to incur, felt that the opposite party marksmanship as if crosses the threshold, in some marksmanship links processes unusual is stiff, the transformation that but each spear/gun incurs is actually very prompt with the nature, the marksmanship of Hua Kai accomplishment level actually cannot take the opposite party, this makes him be startled. 华凯不敢大意,他架住对方攻来的枪招,感觉对方枪法似乎只是入门,一些枪法链接上处理的非常生硬,但是每个枪招的转换却是非常及时与自然,华凯大成级的枪法却是拿不下对方,这让他不由大吃一惊。 „Oneself marksmanship was higher than two ranks the opposite party, other attributes are exactly the same, is actually the having no way steamroll opposite party, are oneself so bad?” Hua Kai felt that these 5 destiny values the mystical place is different. “自己枪法比对方高了两个等级,其他属性都一模一样,却是没法碾压对方,自己有那么差吗？”华凯感觉这五点气运值的秘境就是不一样。 He starts the strength use of idea opposite party! 他开始主意对方的力量使用！ Same. 一样。 true qi use! 真气使用！ Same. 一样。 Style! 招式！ Too are badly many. 比自己差太多。 Actually does the issue leave where? 问题究竟出在哪里？ Is just thinking Hua Kai discovered that disappeared unexpectedly suddenly, 正想着华凯发现那个自己竟突然消失了, The space four wall luminous spots walk again, this gives the relaxation time? Hit for two minutes to rest for two minutes, after two minutes , the luminous spot vanished, that „Hua Kai” appeared in a space corner. 空间四壁光点再次走起,这是给自己休息时间吗？打了两分钟休息两分钟,等两分钟后光点消失,那“华凯”又出现在空间一个角落里。 Hua Kai and opposite party battle, the opposite party and was exactly the same a moment ago, after two minutes , the opposite party disappears again. 华凯与对方交战,对方还是和刚才一模一样,两分钟后对方再一次消失。 „When this way projects on, my what my obvious strength ratio cannot take the opposite party to side powerful unexpectedly, insufficiently spells?” Hua Kai thinks. “这样下去打到什么时候,我什么我明显实力比对方强竟拿不下对方,是不够拼吗？”华凯想到。 The third mirror appears, Hua Kai performance was cut-throat than a moment ago , and has the aggressiveness, but that mirror is also and hopes with raw hate, frequently trades the wound by the wound, made that Hua Kai is thrown into confusion, like this he has no way to occupy cheaply. 第三次镜像出现,华凯表现的比刚才更加凶狠而且有侵略性,可那镜像也是和自己希望凶狠,经常以伤换伤,弄得华凯一阵手忙脚乱,这样他没法占到一点便宜。 Another 2 minutes of relaxation time, Hua Kai careful recollection fight, that mirror, although is only the entry-level 【Crack blank round】, But has itself the move to suppress each time indistinctly , because he seems to know oneself then must use 【Crack blank round】 That move, oneself were limited like this everywhere, hit is very aggrieved. 又一个二分钟休息时间,华凯仔细回忆刚才的战斗,那镜像虽说只是入门级【裂空枪】,但是每次出招都能隐约把自己压制,是因为他好像知道自己接下来要使用【裂空枪】的那一招,这样自己被处处限制,打的很是憋屈。 Found the issue to be, Hua Kai observed the opposite party attentively the spear/gun rhythm, discovered the opposite party, although entry-level 【Crack blank round】, But he has been sentencing oneself walking position in advance with the spear/gun effort, the rhythm of entire fight is completely being controlled by the opposite party. Like this own shortcoming was enlarged infinitely, no wonder oneself more hit is more aggrieved. 找到问题所在,华凯用心观察对方的出枪节奏,发现对方虽然只有入门级【裂空枪】,但是他一直在预判自己的走位与出枪力度,整个战斗的节奏完全被对方控制着。这样自己的缺点就被无限放大,难怪自己越打越憋屈。 Found the issue to start in Hua Kai to fighting while learned/studied, he started to give the mirror to cause the damage unexpectedly, entire 【Crack blank round】 Move link free, rather than pursues the speed and strength of spear/gun constantly, like this it felt unexpectedly this mirror becomes easy to cope. 找到问题所在华凯开始一边对战一边学习,他开始出其不意给镜像造成伤害,整个【裂空枪】的招法链接更加的自如,而不是一味地追求出枪的速度与力道,这样它竟感觉这镜像变得容易对付起来。 Does not remember that this was several illusion appeared, Hua Kai and other mirrors arrived again, did not wait for him to respond that then killed to take the favorable position. That mirror martial skill was inferior oneself do not dare easily to leave kills to incur, fears to expose weaknesses, the Hua Kai exposing weaknesses opposite party has not advanced recklessly intentionally, depends upon martial skill advantage Hua Kai soon to have the advantage, saw that the Image ratio stabbing number spear/gun is not quickly good, 2 minutes vanished to the mirror. 不记得这是第几次幻境出现了,华凯等镜像再次降临,不等他反应便杀过去抢占先机。那镜像武技不如自己不敢轻易出杀招,怕露出破绽,华凯故意露出破绽对方也没有冒进,依靠武技优势华凯很快占据优势,眼看着镜像比自己刺中数枪很快就不行,二分钟时间到了镜像又消失了。 Hua Kai waits for the opposite party to arrive again, at this time Hua Kai actually discovered oneself have left the space, the system prompt resounds from own mind. 华凯等待着对方再次降临,这时候华凯却发现自己已经离开空间,系统提示从自己脑海中响起。 „Examination psychic force has reached the limit, the host 【Will training mystical place】 Training 23, have not struck to kill the goal to obtain the reward will value + 1.” “检测精神力已经到达极限,宿主【意志训练秘境】训练成绩23场,未击杀目标获得奖励意志值。” Hua Kai also thinks oneself have not killed the mirror not to harvest! However this trial made him the understanding about the martial skill also many, not only martial skill fixed style, that mirror use entry-level 【Crack blank round】 Even if the strength of display are not careful is possibly defeated, the opposite party has integrated oneself all styles completely, the move transformation use is decisive and effective. 华凯还以为自己没杀死镜像没有收获呢！不过这次试炼让他对武技的认识又多了一些,武技不只是固定的招式,那镜像利用入门级【裂空枪】发挥的实力即使自己不小心都可能落败,对方已经把所有招式完全融入自身,招法转换使用果断而有效。 Turns on the property panel. 打开自己属性面板。 Hua Kai: Quenches body boundary 5 华凯:淬体境五层 Aptitude: d- 资质:d- Physical: 15 体质:15 Physical strength: 16 气力:16 Will: 21 意志:21 Heart law: Peaceful mind secret art( yellow step intermediate heart law) accomplishment 心法:静心诀(黄阶中级心法)大成 Marksmanship: Crack blank round( yellow step high-level marksmanship) accomplishment 枪法:裂空枪(黄阶高级枪法)大成 Special heart law: Great Dream Visualization( god level) crosses the threshold 特殊心法:大梦观想法(神级)入门 Special skill: Eye of Truth( is unable promotion) 特殊技能:真实之眼(无法升级) The will increased a point to lead other attribute big truncations, believes after oneself digested this mystical place obtained, strength to promote a big truncation again surely. 意志增加了一点已经领先其他属性一大截,相信自己再消化了这次秘境所得之后实力定能提升一大截。 Will sleep Hua Kai to hear in the courtyard the steward really in the practice marksmanship. For these days although before Hua Fu steward already not, was so uncomfortable, whenever must exhaust the physical strength to go to sleep to the night, Hua Kai set out to arrive in the courtyard, called own room the Hua Fu steward, and sent in him 【Ideal condition training mystical place】. 正要睡觉华凯听到院子里管家真在练习枪法。这几天华福管家虽然已经没有以前那么难受,但是每当到了夜里都必须耗尽体力才能睡下,华凯起身来到院子里,把华福管家叫到自己房间,并把他送入【意境训练秘境】。 The Hua Fu steward fought for three hours more than 60 fights to come out from the mystical place space, he only defeated one to obtain 4 ideal condition value rewards finally. 华福管家战斗了三个小时60多场战斗才从秘境空间出来,他只战胜了一场最后获得四点意境值奖励。 Hua Kai planned that while opportunity that the Hua Fu steward body drug efficacy overflowed, making him cross all mystical places, when the time comes the Hua Fu steward can to become a family big strength. 华凯打算趁着华福管家身体药效没过的机会,让他把所有秘境都过一遍,到时候华福管家又能成家族一大战力。 Afterward day Fort Hua enters during the normal winter life, the grandfather practices the martial stage to take the lead in training every day, Hua Kai often gives the young people according to everyone natural talent, the loyal value and level of effort the reward, every day some people enter the mystical place trial, person family member on the Hua Kai discovery space crystal column slowly has almost entered the mystical place, but 【Ideal condition training mystical place】 Hua Kai were open to grandfathers, stewards, four uncles, Erzhuang, Hua Yue and the others. 随后的日子华家堡进入正常的冬季生活当中,爷爷每天练武场带头训练,华凯按照所有人天资、忠心值、努力程度不时地给予年轻人一些奖励,每天都有人进入秘境试炼,慢慢的华凯发现空间水晶柱上的人家族成员一个个差不多都进入过秘境了,但是【意境训练秘境】华凯只是向爷爷、管家、四叔、二壮、华岳等人开放。 After the grandfather Hua Yue three trial spaces experience one time, achieves to practice breathing exercises boundary 4, like his B level aptitude almost already basically to the end. Four uncle qi circulation boundary 2, Erzhuang essence governing boundary 9, Hua Yue qi circulation boundary 1. Those who let Hua Kai rush is strange is the property panel of Hua Fu steward. 爷爷华岳三个试炼空间都经历一次后达到练气境四层,这样他的b级资质差不多已经基本到头了。四叔气动境二层,二壮开元境九层,华岳气动境一层。让华凯赶到奇怪的是华福管家的属性面板。 Hua Fu: qi circulation boundary 9 华福:气动境九层 Aptitude: b- 资质:b- Physical: 52(45) 体质:52(45) Physical strength: 46 气力:46 Will: 41 意志:41 Heart law: Peaceful mind secret art( yellow step low level heart law) complete 心法:静心诀(黄阶低级心法)圆满 Marksmanship: Crack blank round( yellow step high-level marksmanship) accomplishment 枪法:裂空枪(黄阶高级枪法)大成 Loyal: 100 忠心:100 Hua Fu steward three big attribute over 40 points, but has not entered practices breathing exercises the boundary, his physique has arrived at 45 points, several days of time his physique increased 12 points fully, before the fragile body now becomes is the muscle, this regarding a 55 -year-old person was also an alternative. 华福管家三大属性都超过40点,但是还是没有进入练气境,不过他的的体质已经来到45点,几天时间他的体质整整提升了12点,以前瘦弱的身体如今变得全是肌肉,这对于一名55岁老人来说也算是个另类。 Yu Jun the incarnation storytelling mister, was all right the street for these days all day in the village free explains the Chinese classics to everyone, at first surrounds is some children and old people, the person who later listens to storytelling are getting more and more, can sometimes have over a hundred people. 虞钧这几天化身讲书先生,整天没事儿在村里街头免费给大家说书,起初围观的都是一些小孩和老人,随后听书的人越来越多,有时候能有上百人。 On this day Hua Kai also listened to Yu Jun a half hour of novel in the entrance, what he said was a knight-errant gives self up to rescue the story of monarchy, this was one family/home country -themed world, everyone was interested in the concerned monarch and head of household's topic specially, in some people heard to be thin unexpectedly crash-bang a weeping sound piece, this made Hua Kai very puzzled. 这一天华凯也是在门口听了虞钧半个小时的小说,他讲的是一个游侠舍身救君主的故事,这是一个以家国为主题的世界,所有人对于有关国君与家主的话题都特别感兴趣,一些人竟听得稀里哗啦哭声一片,这让华凯很是不解。 His ancestors are loafing for more than ten years, the story of such simple hackneyed stuff road in Hua Kai it seems like ordinary cannot be ordinary, the Fort Hua common people hear with great interest the son unexpectedly. 他上辈子在游荡十多年,这样简单老套路的故事在华凯看来普通的不能再普通,华家堡的老百姓竟听得津津有味儿。 „Head of household, did you come?” Yu Jun sees Hua Kai also to listen to storytelling, happy serious, he said that arrives at side Hua Kai, for these days he free food and lodging in the Hua Kai family/home, as the Fiction School good thousand li (500 km) rumor thousand li (500 km) book, that is practicing, now the day stabilizes slightly, he came out to explain the Chinese classics. “家主,你来了？”虞钧看见华凯也来听书,高兴的不得了,他说完一段就来到华凯身边,这几天他在华凯家里免费吃住,作为小说家行千里路说千里书,那是一种修行,现在日子稍微稳定下来,他就又出来说书了。 „Un, good that said! Is this story you writes?” Hua Kai opens the mouth to ask, such simple bored story actually said the most hour . Moreover the classical Chinese literature, villagers cannot understand being pleased with oneself that you also spoke. “嗯,说的不错！这故事是你写的？”华凯开口问到,这么简单无聊故事竟然说了大半个小时,而且还是古文,村民们很多都听不懂你还讲的沾沾自喜。 „I may be unable to write such good novel, my teacher crane emblem mister three years ago creates this erupts, he specially permitted me to say his book.” Mentioned own teacher Yu Jun to be proud, Hundred Schools generally only then became everyone to accept the disciple publicly, everyone ordinary circumstances were the innate above strength. “我可写不出这么好的小说,我的老师鹤徽先生三年前创此大作,他老人家特许我可以说他的书。”说起自己的老师虞钧一脸自豪,百家一般只有成为大家才能公开收徒,大家一般情况都是先天以上实力。 „Do you have your work, heard that your Fiction School will have own novel.” In Hua Kai hear of villages the teaching mister had said philosophers Hundred Schools different thought and characteristics, Fiction School walks randomly in the world explains the Chinese classics everywhere, then once in a while goes home to write own work, in the city many teahouses like Fiction School moving into the teahouse, like this he each gets an idea to be better inborn. “那你有没有自己的作品,听说你们小说家都会有自己的小说。”华凯听村里教书先生说过诸子百家的不同的思想与特色,其中小说家游走于世界到处说书,然后隔一段时间回家来写自己的作品,城里很多茶社都喜欢小说家入驻自己茶社,这样他每天生意会好很多。 „I... I now am also only a student, without learning the novel should have the thought and deep meaning that I am reorganizing my experience, the draft manuscript I have prepared in the two years many, after a period of time I will write my work.” After Yu Jun hears, quickly spoke. “我…我现在还只是学生,没有学到小说该有的思想与奥义,我正在整理这两年自己的经历,手稿我已经准备很多,过一段时间我就会写自己的作品。”虞钧听见后急忙说到。 „Ok, I am waiting for your erupts! You also had any good novel to continue one.” Hua Kai felt that in so many novel repertoires with own memory, writes one should in the novel of this world fire to be very easy, then he is quick can become the Fiction School tycoon? “行,我等着你的大作！你还有什么好小说继续说一段。”华凯感觉以自己记忆力中那么多的小说套路,写出一本在这个世界大火的小说应该很容易,那么他是不是很快就能成为小说家巨子？ „I altogether will tell 8 stories, is the work of my teacher crane emblem mister, then I told a «clear/pain Ji Brandishing a sword» story to everyone......” “我总共会讲八个故事,都是我的老师鹤徽先生的作品,接下来我给大家讲一个《楚姬舞剑》的故事……” This world people's intellectual property protection consciousness is very strong, a work of person has not passed through oneself agreement others unable to the bystander to demonstrate. 这个世界人们的知识产权保护意识还是非常强的,一个人的作品没有经过本人的同意其他人不能向外人展示。 Yu Jun said a opening, Hua Kai could not listen, the character described extremely in detail, the plot extremely in the simplicity, mainly dancing Ji of Chu danced in other words and swordsmanship unusual, obtained the appreciation of Weiguo monarch. 虞钧说了个开头,华凯就听不下去了,人物描写太过详细,剧情太过于简单,主要就是说楚国的舞姬舞蹈与剑法都非常了得,都得到了卫国国君的赞赏。 Waits for the Yu Jun lecture with great difficulty, under a warm applause, Yu Jun happy walks toward him. Fort Hua villagers called to make him speak one again. 好不容易等虞钧讲完,底下一阵热烈的掌声,虞钧高兴的向他走过来。华家堡村民都叫着让他再讲一个。 „A day can only speak one, today has spoken two unable to say again, elsewhere spoke me to leave goes to continue to walk randomly.” “一天本来就只能讲一个,今天已经讲了两个不能再讲了,讲完我就要离开去别处继续游走了。” Yu Jun speaks to the crowd that under yells, this world philosophers Hundred Schools scholar thought is pure, purely is not very difficult the great achievement, the way that they cultivation is all kinds, but each has the unique merit, this makes Hua Kai admire very much. 虞钧对下方叫喊的人群说到,这个世界诸子百家学子思想都非常纯粹,不纯粹也很难有大的成就,他们修炼的方式各式各样,但是每家都有自己独特之处,这让华凯很是佩服。 Hua Kai hears somewhat funnily, only met eight story that is not a place waits for eight days to leave? Dying of exhaustion that if Fiction School a story, that do not can only run? 华凯听见有些好笑,只会八个故事那不是一个地方待八天就必须离开了？如果一个小说家只会将一个故事,那不得跑的累死？ In two days Hua Kai will just come back from the village, today outside Fort Hua the desolate beast quantity increases much, about 600, this quickly to arriving at the danger line, from the new year 5 days of time, Fort Hua may also encounter the second wave of wild beast to attack the village this year. 过了两天华凯从村口刚回来,今天华家堡外荒兽数量又增多了不少,已经有600只左右,这已经快到到达危险线,距离新年还有五天时间,华家堡今年可能会遭遇第二波荒兽攻村。 Returned to living room Hua Kai to see Yu Jun to take a parchment to walk, offered valuable advice with looked to Hua Kai. 回到客厅华凯见虞钧拿着一个羊皮纸走了进来,献宝似的拿给华凯看。 „Head of household, this is the novel that I write, had not finished, the family/home mainly looked that Yu Jun first makes the family/home regard subjectively!” Yu Jun prudent hands over in the parchment Hua Kai. “家主,这是我写的小说,还没写完,家主要看虞钧先让家主观视！”虞钧慎重的把羊皮纸交到华凯手里。 Hua Kai knows precious of this knowledge of the world thought that but could not bear the curiosity look. 华凯知道这个世界知识思想的宝贵性,但是还是忍不住好奇心看了起来。 „Your this writes what is? How youngster sword Hakka can be the ordinary families? How the opening does not have the story to attract the reader, must change... to change to the aristocratic family juniors brothers to frame... then the severe wound to cultivate/repair to all lose......” “你这写的都是什么？少年剑客家里怎么能是普通人家？开头没有故事怎么吸引读者,必须改…改成世家子弟兄弟陷害…然后重伤修为全失……” „Should better add on the fiancee breaking an engagement swordsman three years approximately... the key is the following plot contrast, the swordsman leaves various family fortuitous encounters......” Hua Kai to look that Yu Jun records prefacing form one to complain completely. “最好加上未婚妻退婚剑客三年之约…关键是后面的剧情反差,剑客离开家族各种奇遇……”华凯看着虞钧全部记叙文形式一阵吐槽。 „This... this......” Yu Jun opens the eye to look that Hua Kai is ordinary like the devil. “这…这……”虞钧睁大眼睛看着华凯如同魔鬼一般。