Opens sighs enters duty Pujiang Movie Studio officially, becomes one of the script assessment panel. 张叹正式入职浦江电影制片厂,成为剧本评估小组的一员。 Pujiang Movie Studio is the services department system, currently has the animation services department and honorable person film and television section, stretch/open Tan is divided in the animation services department, it is said is the script that because he submits is an animation script. 浦江电影制片厂是事业部制,目前有动漫事业部和真人影视部,张叹被分在了动漫事业部,据说是因为他提交的剧本是一本动漫剧本。 However, enters duty Pujiang Movie Studio, majority comes to the animation services department, here honorable person film and television section was very small and weak, did for 78 years, did not have the improvement, depended on 12 net plays to hang. 不过,入职浦江电影制片厂的,大部分都是冲着动漫事业部来的,这里的真人影视部还很弱小,做了七八年,一直没起色,靠着一两部网剧吊着。 The personnel in script assessment panel roughly can be divided into two kinds, a kind the rookie like stretch/open Tan, the enterprise only started, first starts from the script appraisal, the accumulation experience, another kind is the old person of quick retired, the experience is rich, steps down to the second line, is equivalent to the retirement. 剧本评估小组里的人员大致可以分成两类,一类是像张叹这样的新人,事业刚起步,先从剧本评估开始,积累经验,另一类是快退休的老人,经验丰富,退居二线,相当于养老。 The movie studio is a state-owned enterprise, the employee benefits are very good, quite user-friendly, raised a group of like this senior staff. 制片厂是国企,员工福利很不错,也比较人性化,养了一批这样的老员工。 Handled the procedure, opened sighs then became a being on duty screenwriter. 办好了手续,张叹便成了一名坐班编剧。 The being on duty screenwriter has the regular job, every day goes to work the punch-, monthly receives the wages, according to the project takes deducting a percentage. 坐班编剧有正式工作,每天上班打卡,按月领取工资,按项目拿提成。 Beside being on duty screenwriter, a kind of free screenwriter. They are the free workers, looks at the day to eat meal, has the project to have the income, has the dream, can endure the food and shelter problem, naturally, part has become famous, has the screenwriter of personal connection and resources, but is only a few. 坐班编剧之外,还有一类自由编剧。他们是自由工作者,看天吃饭,有项目才有收入,怀揣梦想,可以忍受温饱问题,当然,一部分是已经成名,有人脉和资源的编剧,但只是少数。 stretch/open Tan does not have the choice to be the free screenwriter, because he does not have the resources, without the personal connection, the written script cannot some people use. 张叹没有选择当自由编剧,因为他没有资源,没有人脉,写的剧本不会有人用。 He needs to accumulate now. 他现在需要积累。 Works first day, he looked at the work routine of movie studio, next day starts to read the script. The script is not in the network looks, but is the movie studio delivers. 工作第一天,他把制片厂的工作制度看了一遍,第二天才开始看剧本。剧本不是网络上找的,而是制片厂内部送过来的。 These script majorities are write a play to write, there are some free screenwriters throws. The movie studio before the use, with will appraise the verification to the script assessment panel generally. 这些剧本大部分是自家编剧写的,也有是一些自由编剧投过来的。制片厂在使用之前,一般都会拿给剧本评估小组评估审核。 The morning is to read the script, afternoon is to meet to discuss, everyone chatted the view, this examines the script, was makes the ability of movie studio to rookie have an understanding, was good to make the next working arrangement. 上午是看剧本,下午是开会讨论,每个人谈谈看法,这既是审剧本,也是让制片厂对新人的能力有个了解,好做下一步工作安排。 Every month, the movie studio will conduct grading to the personnel of assessment panel, who has progressive, who is may make the material, who can pull out to contribute labor and materials, who can assume sole responsibility for an important task...... the daily performance is the standard of appraisal. 每个月,制片厂会对评估小组的人员进行一次评分,谁有进步,谁是可造之材,谁能拉出去添砖加瓦,谁能独当一面……日常的表现就是评估的标准。 On this day after getting off work, the team leaders and vice-chairmen of assessment panel remained, holds a small meeting. 这天下班后,评估小组的组长和副组长留了下来,开个小会。 „Now in the group has 15 people, besides 5 senior screenwriters, another 10 rookies, these five days of performance everyone watches, chatted.” Team leader old Liu said. “现在小组里有15个人,除了五个老编剧外,另外十个新人,这五天的表现大家都看在眼里,都谈谈吧。”组长老刘说道。 He is a senior screenwriter, did for more than 30 years in Pujiang Movie Studio, has soon retired, steps down to the second line, when appraises the group leader, trains the rookie with single-hearted devotion, does not work busily, has fun. 他是名老编剧,在浦江电影制片厂干了30多年,已经快要退休,退居二线当评估小组长,专心培养新人,工作不忙,乐在其中。 Although rookies one month appraises one time, but as the group leader, will open to appraise the small meeting every week one time. The appraisal opinion per week is the important reference in monthly appraisal meeting. 虽然新人们一个月才评估一次,但作为小组长,每个礼拜都会开一次评估小会。每周的评估意见将是月度评估会上的重要参考。 „river Fan is not good, this young fellow could not pull back.” A vice-chairman said. “江帆不行,这小伙子拉不回来了。”一名副组长说道。 Another person said pitifully: „His well-known colleges and universities Chinese graduates specialized, the foundation is most solid, but follows a prescribed pattern, rigid way of thinking.” 另一人可惜道:“他名校中文专业毕业,基础最扎实,但太一板一眼,思想僵化。” old Liu nods, writes the name of lower reaches of the Changjiang River sail in the notebook, as well as D. 老刘点点头,在笔记本上写下江帆的名字,以及一个D。 „Jiang Rongdai one month, growth rapidness that I have not thought.” “姜蓉待了一个多月,成长的没有我想的快。” „I thought that she has the spiritual energy very much, the powerful and unconstrained style, a little meaning. The methodicalness can the day after tomorrow study, but spiritual energy thing, inborn.” “我觉得她很有灵气,天马行空,有点意思。章法可以后天学,但是灵气这东西,天生的。” old Liu said: „Jiang Rong can continue to train.” 老刘说:“姜蓉可以继续培养。” He writes down Jiang Rong the name in the notebook, as well as B. 他在笔记本上写下姜蓉的名字,以及一个B。 Three people to rookies appraisals, are one's turn stretch/open Tan. 三人对新人们一个一个评估,轮到张叹。 Two vice-chairmen almost also said: 两个副组长几乎同时说道: „This sighed is a talent......” “这张叹是个人才……” „Where looks, very good......” “哪找来的,很不错……” old Liu listens to two people after opening sighs review one, said: „Tomorrow gives them a topic, writes the story program, has a look at the effect.” 老刘听两人对张叹点评一番后,说道:“明天给他们个题目,写个故事大纲,看看效果。” He writes down stretch/open Tan the name in the notebook, behind wrote A. 他在笔记本上写下张叹的名字,后头写了一个A。 Was made the dinner by stretch/open Tanzheng of their review at home, treated in the assessment panel routinely for 5 days, he does not have the least bit is not impatient, on the contrary very enjoys, happen to takes the opportunity to the film and television and animation work of this world makes a quite detailed understanding, ponders over fondness of market. 被他们点评的张叹正在家里做晚饭,按部就班在评估小组待了五天,他没有半点不耐烦,相反挺享受的,正好借机对这个世界的影视和动漫作品做一次比较详细的了解,琢磨市场的喜好。 The script writes again good, must meet the need in market, is not the good script to take to be able by the market to be welcome. 剧本写的再好,也要适应市场的需要,不是好剧本拿出来都能受到市场欢迎。 When on for example previous generation «That Mountain That Person of That Dog», screening internally the box office is zero, but in the next door island country (Japan), receives 8 crazily hundred million, this is the demand different differences in causing market. 就比如前世的《那山那人那狗》,上映时在国内票房为零,但在隔壁岛国,狂收八个亿,这就是市场的需求不同导致的差异。 In the courtyard in out of the window transmits the child to play the noisy sound. 窗外的院子里传来小孩子玩闹的声音。 One group of children are playing the eagle to catch the chicken, what when eagle is little white. 一群小孩子正在玩老鹰抓小鸡,当老鹰的是小白。 This little friend is only 4 years old, is youngest that several in many children, in addition her stature, obviously small. 这个小朋友才四岁,在众多小朋友中属于年纪最小的那几个,加上她个子小小的,更显小只。 Although little white baby shoe age and stature being able to stand in line number, but spoiled child, has a spicy vigor, tigerish, strives to be the first everywhere, no one feared, is very unexpectedly convincing, many ages are older than her, the stature is willing to listen compared with her tall little friend her. 小白童鞋虽然年龄和个子都排不上号,但是小霸王似的,有股辣劲,虎虎的,处处争先,谁也不怕,竟然还很让人信服,好些年纪比她大,个子比她高的小朋友愿意听她的。 At this moment, such tiny tot, worked as the eagle unexpectedly, must catch one group of big kids. What when old mother hen is a tall boy, is in the academy is biggest, 8 years old. 此刻,这么个小不点,竟然当起了老鹰,要抓一群大孩子。当老母鸡的是一个高个子男孩,是学园里最大的,已经八岁了。 stretch/open Tanzhen worries for little white. 张叹真为小白捏了把汗。 But little white is confident, complacent, is shouting rampantly: 但小白信心十足,得意洋洋,又在嚣张地嚷嚷: „Some of your melon babies, the side skull, rub, meets the train, cannot make good one's escape” “你们介些瓜娃子,方脑壳,哈搓搓,遇到火车,跑不脱” She laughs, drilled from the old mother hen armpit flexibly, in a squeal, held the little friend of crane tail, seized...... 她哈哈大笑,灵活地从老母鸡腋下钻了过去,在一片尖叫声中,抓住了吊车尾的小朋友,捉了出来…… stretch/open Tan made the dinner, have a relish sits in the balcony, eats meal while sees the children to play the game. 张叹做好了晚饭,饶有兴致地坐在阳台上,边吃饭边看小朋友们玩游戏。 Suddenly was seen by a little friend, pointed at him to say to the young waiting in vain person: 忽然被一个小朋友看到了,指着他对小白等人说: „Look, fart is black” “看,屁儿黑” Children simultaneous/uniform simultaneous/uniform raises the small head, stands takes a look at him in the courtyard, in little guy, laughs, the words that spoke can a popularity be full. They create a disturbance shout blindly, fart black fart is white. little white shouted happiest. 小朋友们齐齐昂起小脑袋,站在院子里打量他,一个个地里种的小萝卜头似的,哈哈大笑,说的话能把人气饱。她们起哄瞎嚷嚷,屁儿黑屁儿白的。小白嚷的最欢。 stretch/open Tanpi is not black, is very white, but this moment face was black. 张叹屁儿不黑,挺白的,但此刻脸黑了。 He is carrying the rice bowl, on the chair, the fragrant meal is not stiffly fragrant, wants to fall the bowl, did this nickname spread?? Small white wine? Can the contradiction publicize? 他端着饭碗,僵在椅子上,香喷喷的饭菜已经不香了,想摔碗,这外号传开了？？小白干的？矛盾要公开是吧？ little Teacher willow hears the sound, catches up to stop. 小柳老师听到声音,赶来制止。 Is good has the foreknowledge because of her, if 1 : 00 pm, child possibly does not guarantee again, because stretch/open Tan had decided that falls the bowl to jump, fights to the death with the tiny tots, defends the reputation, especially that little white! Operates with her, punishes one as a warning to others, punishes properly according to law! 好在她有先见之明,要是再晚 1 点,小孩子可能一个不保,因为张叹已经决定摔碗跳下去,和小不点们决一死战,维护声誉,尤其那个小白！拿她开刀,杀鸡儆猴,明正典刑！ The bonus is so, little white baby shoe still makes faces toward him, sticks out one's tongue. 饶是如此,小白童鞋依然朝他扮鬼脸,吐舌头。 „Slightly slightly......” “略略略略……” She was stretch/open Tangang got up, possibly or died continuous, regarding contradictory public, this was not obvious, was early public. 她是和张叹杠上了,可能要不死不休吧,至于说矛盾公开,这不是明摆着吗,早公开了。 „Slightly slightly......” “略略略略……” „Slightly slightly......” “略略略略……” ...... …… Did not have, several children followed to make faces to stick out one's tongue. 没完了,好几个小朋友跟着扮鬼脸吐舌头。 little white this instigation time line. 小白这煽动功夫行啊。 stretch/open Tan:( Dish) 张叹:(皿) „Do not play do not play, perspired, returns to the classroom, we watch the television.” “别玩了别玩了,都出汗了,回教室,我们看电视啦。” little Teacher willow catches up with duck the children the hurrying back classroom, she is awkward for stretch/open Tan. 小柳老师把小孩子们赶鸭子似的赶回教室,她都替张叹尴尬。 When I finished eating the food to tidy up you again! stretch/open Tan is putting down the aggressive statement at heart, returns to the room, is vexed, was almost mad full. 等我吃完饭再来收拾你们！张叹在心里放下狠话,回到屋里,糟心,差点气饱了。 Deeply attracts several tones, endured, finished eating the dinner fast, like chewing wax, washed the dish, comes to two building Auntie Huang's office, inquired the news of millet. 深吸几口气,忍了,快速把晚饭吃完,味同嚼蜡,洗了碗,来到二楼黄姨的办公室,打听小米的消息。 Auntie Huang is weaving the small cloth shoes that the little darling wears, little side wife, her daughter-in-law, 5 months, had provided for a rainy day. 黄姨正在织小宝宝穿的小布鞋,小方的老婆,她儿媳,已经五个月了,未雨绸缪。 Listened to stretch/open Tan the inquiry, she said: „The day before yesterday called to ask the police station, family member but who is also looking for the millet, tomorrow I will go to the police station, has a look place that can add on.” 听了张叹的询问,她说道:“前天打电话问了派出所,还在找小米的家人,明天我到派出所去一趟,看看有能帮上的地方吗。” stretch/open Tan: „Also good.” 张叹:“也好。” The matter confession of millet, he certainly do not carry „fart is black” the nickname. If we had known should not extend the hand of God initially, little white that melon baby cannot trace. 小米的事情没个交代,他肯定要一直背着“屁儿黑”的外号。早知道当初就不该伸出上帝之手,小白那瓜娃子摸不得。 Right that Confucius said that annoys anyone not to annoy the concubine. 孔夫子说的对,惹谁也别惹小女人。