SF :: Volume #30

#2989: Terminates the words expressing feelings and to divulge to an outsider renewal explanation!

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Terminated, the entire three years, 8.5 million characters, more than 1000 days and nights, the cold has a fever, the stomach ache coughs up blood, cuts power the net...... slightly to move has not broken passes for day, every day racks brains finds out the plot, «Spirit Cauldron», slightly moved made complete effort within the area of competence. 完结了,整整三年,八百五十万字,一千多个日日夜夜,感冒发烧,胃痛咳血,停电断网……小迁没有断更过一天,每天绞尽脑汁的想出好情节,《灵鼎》一书,小迁付出了能力范围内的全部心血。 Some people said, slightly moves several before result, writes succinctly. Slightly moved wants saying that without the means that by this time, slightly moved has had no way the careful plot, slightly moved cannot achieve, this result slightly moved forms in one's mind to be very long, slightly moved itself very satisfied, did right by initially to ‚perfect result that’ everyone pledged. 有的人说,小迁结局前的几张,写得简练。小迁想说,没办法,到了这个时候,小迁已经没法细致的拉情节了,小迁做不到,这个结局小迁构思了很久,小迁自己十分满意,对得起当初对大家承诺的‘完美结局’。 Even, slightly moved can pat the conscience saying that slightly moved really made contribution, this was slightly moves in the area of competence a limit of book, slightly moved does right by oneself, did right by each to like " Spirit Cauldron » reader. 甚至,小迁可以拍着良心说,小迁真的尽力了,这是小迁能力范围内一本书的极限,小迁对得起自己,也对得起每一个喜欢《灵鼎》的读者。 ( ; (; Thank, thank, the thanks of sincerity! 感谢,感谢,真心的感谢！ Three thanks, feeling not all reader friends to the support that slightly moves, is you, lets slightly move from a student, becomes a professional author, was you accomplishes slightly moved. 三句感谢,感不尽所有读者亲们对小迁的支持和鼓励,是你们,让小迁从一个学生,成为了一个职业作者,是你们造就了小迁。 Again, bows thanks! 再次,鞠躬感谢！ Then said " Spirit Cauldron » content, to be honest, just wrote the spirit cauldron time, slightly moves is a full rookie, many places write are not good, the appearances of some characters are also very stiff. However is good because of the article gets down, slightly moved found the feeling, various plots also connected on, finally the overall general situation did not have the issue. 然后说一下《灵鼎》的内容,说实话,刚写灵鼎的时候,小迁还是一个十足的新人,很多地方写得不是很好,一些人物的出现也是很生硬。不过好在通篇下来,小迁找到了感觉,各种情节也都连接上了,最终整体大局也没有问题。 The shortcoming of spirit cauldron, the environment described, the character appearance described this, slightly moved is very bad, and some plot tensities have not controlled, the expansion insufficiently had, a quite bad point, was the mold of character misses, was not very bright. 灵鼎的缺点,环境描写,人物外貌描写这一块,小迁很差,并且一些情节张力没有掌控好,伸缩不够有度,还有比较差的一点,是人物的塑造差了一些,不够鲜明。 The good and bad points, naturally have the merit, some plots, slightly moved or thought that very good, the funny and warm-blooded fusion, the emotion and comprehension in, this should be manifestations of spirit cauldron article. 优缺点,自然也有优点,一些情节,小迁还是觉得很不错的,搞笑与热血融合,情感与领悟同在,这应该是灵鼎通篇的体现吧。 About the result, I think person who can guess correctly completely, should not be many, because of this result, slightly moves has such big frame from the beginning, but entire also wrote also had the new creativity finally, can say, this result, before slightly moved, did not expect completely, if who expected, that insight, was really powerful! 关于结局,我想能完全猜到的人,应该不多,因为这个结局,小迁一开始有这么个大框,但整个也是写到了最后才又有了新的创意,可以说,这个结局,小迁之前都不是完全预料到的,如果谁预料到了,那洞察力,真是给力！ Finally, the end of space and time, the sound conveys together, who is this sound? What is the goal of his saying? 最后,时空的尽头,一道声音传来,这道声音是谁？他这话的目的又是什么？ This is the suspense of slightly moving has, in other works that perhaps from now on you can slightly move found the answer. 这是小迁留的一个悬念,或许今后你可以在小迁的其他作品之中找到答案。 Slightly moves thinks, a book, if anything did not have to terminate thoroughly, that was also short of anything probably, this small suspense, everyone can think that will be to slightly moves from now on the engagement of work. 小迁想,一本书,如果什么都没有彻底的完结了,那好像还少了点什么,这一个小悬念,大家可以认为是对小迁今后作品的衔接。 Then said that the matter about to divulge to an outsider, the spirit cauldron terminated, but slightly moves has not given full expression, 然后再说说关于外传的事情,灵鼎完结了,但小迁意犹未尽, Slightly moves wants to write the to divulge to an outsider, this to divulge to an outsider writes many specifically, slightly moves has not thought specifically, mainly to make up for the insufficiency and regrets in some articles. 小迁想写外传,这外传具体写多少,小迁还没有具体想过,主要是为了弥补一些文章中的不足和遗憾。 Therefore everyone leaves a message positively, has what regret, or the issue, has anything to want slightly to move writes in the to divulge to an outsider, can leave a message. 所以大家积极留言,有什么遗憾,或者问题,有什么想小迁在外传中写到的,都可以留言。 There is a rumor that renews occasionally, possibly one Zhou Gengxin one time, more than ten days, this accurate world, all had not possibly looked that everyone's message and slightly moves to some new ideas of this book. 外传不定时更新,可能一周更新一次,也可能十几天,这个没有准确的世间,全看大家的留言和小迁对此书的一些新的想法。 Finally, slightly moved says the new book! 最后,小迁说一说新书！ The new book immortal, slightly moves has published, regarding this book, slightly moves the painstaking care of earlier consuming, but must surpass the spirit cauldron. 新书化仙,小迁已经发表,对于此书,小迁前期耗费的心血,还要超过灵鼎。 The overall layout, as well as some ingenious places, will surely give everyone to be pleasantly surprised. 整体的布局,以及一些巧妙之处,一定会给大家惊喜的。 Some friends said, melts the immortal cultivation rank anything, just like the spirit cauldron, said that slightly moves is too lazy. 有的朋友说,化仙的修炼等级什么的,和灵鼎一样,说小迁太懒。 Slightly moves here to explain below, is not slightly moves lazily, but the new faction cultivates virtue in order to become an immortal, the foundation rank practices breathing exercises, UU reads 小迁这里解释以下,不是小迁懒,只是新派修仙,基础等级都是练气,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com Building Foundation, gold/metal pill...... , if not these, lacked the flavor of immortal hero. www.uukanshu.com筑基,金丹……如果不是这些,就缺了仙侠的味道。 And, everyone should be able to see, slightly moves in the new book immortal to have many changes. 并且,大家应该可以看到,小迁新书化仙中有很多改变。 For example, soul, state of mind, with the concrete explanation of spirit sense. 比如,魂魄,神魂,和神念的具体解释。 For example, the spirit strength is divided to be the soul strength and ordinary spirit strength. 比如,灵力分为属性灵力和普通灵力。 For example, fission of spirit sense! 比如,神念的分裂！ ...... …… Later will have many different places, the book just started, slightly moves can the guarantee immortal certainly outrace the spirit cauldron, after this is slightly moves the writing had certain level, the first full power work in the true sense, therefore hopes that all friends support. 之后还会有很多不一样的地方,书才刚刚开始,小迁可以保证化仙一定会超越灵鼎,这是小迁写作有了一定水平之后,真正意义上的第一本全力之作,所以希望所有亲们支持和鼓励。 Said so many, for these days will renew the first to divulge to an outsider! 就说这么多了,这几天会更新第一篇外传！ The spirit cauldron terminates, melts the immortal to continue its magnificence, and dazzling...... 灵鼎完结,化仙会延续它的辉煌,并且更加耀眼…… Finally, slightly moves bows to thank all reader friends again, thanked you to follow slightly to move to walk, thanked...... 最后,小迁再次鞠躬感谢所有读者亲们,感谢你们跟随小迁一路走来,感谢……
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