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#356: Carvin, asked for leave for day( to send mistakenly, do not subscribe

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Chapter 356 Carvin, asks for leave for day( sent mistakenly, do not subscribe, tomorrow will send one to make up free, sorry) 第356章卡文,请假一天(发错了,不要订阅,明天发一张免费补上,抱歉) Chatted this book! To be honest, this book is an immortal ever green heat degree opens, from the beginning writing, me is not familiar with this mode of writing very much, is unable to start, I acknowledged that this book has many insufficient, resembles lone ranger from the beginning writes, but leads the family, afterward wrote about Qing(青) Character Generation, I understand indistinctly family Immortal Cultivator and difference of lone ranger, to be honest, the beginning family article, I look now, but without examining carefully, I mainly look at reader's commentary, some readers said why the pig's feet family often extinguishes the person family, other family on timid. 聊一聊本书吧！老实说,这本书是噌仙道长青的热度开的,一开始写着,我很不习惯这种写法,无从下手,我承认本书有很多不足,一开始写的像独行侠,不过带着家族而已,后来写到青字辈,我隐约明白了家族修仙和独行侠的区别,老实说,现在起点的家族文,我都看了,不过没细看,我主要是看读者的评论,有的读者说,为什么猪脚的家族动不动灭人家族,其他家族就唯唯诺诺。 I cannot help but think why the pig's feet family can rise, can't other families, kill and burn to plunder? Does the bright struggle seize secretly? Matter that the pig's feet family can handle, other families are not why good, some people must say, you write the net article, does not write the red chamber, do you have that level to write to obtain the red chamber? I acknowledged, I cannot write, the thing that but, I send, has first wanted I, actually the following plot is Wang Changping, Wang Changhuan, Wang Qingqi and Wang Changyue actor's pay, Wang Changyue as the younger sister of lead, I have not truly written, then doesn't have the plot? It is not, has, but I do not feel appropriately, for example, Wang Changping discovered that some ancient cultivator cave mansion, the returns to the clan invitation same clan breaks through the formation, didn't this use Wang Changyue? Wang Changping is seriously injured, needs to refine some type of compounded drug, didn't this use Wang Qingqi? Discovered that some spirit ore, turns out in full strength, starts with other families, this needs to use formation master and pill refining master, either the discovery mystical place, opens the transcription, these plots, Ok, I feel the family article! What is most encouraging is the plot before Core Formation. 我不由得想,猪脚的家族为什么能崛起,其他家族不能,烧杀抢掠？明争暗夺？猪脚家族能做的事情,其他家族为什么不行,有人要说了,你是写网文的,不是写红楼的,你有那个水平写得出红楼么？我承认,我写不出来,但是,我发出来的东西,首先要过的了我这一关,其实接下来的剧情是王长平、王长焕、王青奇、王长玥的戏份,王长玥作为主角的妹妹,我确实没有写好,接下来没剧情？不是,有,但是我觉得不合适,比如,王长平发现某位古修士洞府,回族邀请同族破阵,这不就用到王长玥了么？或者王长平身受重伤,需要炼制某种丹药,这不就用到王青奇了吗？或者发现某座灵矿,倾巢出动,跟其他家族开打,这就需要用到阵法师和炼丹师,或者发现秘境,开启副本,这些剧情,都可以,我觉得家族文吧！最励志的是结丹前的剧情。 Other families have been why timid, family that arrives at the pig's feet, is the spirit stones ore and metal ore vein, I have to write this plot, fierce that quite but I suppress, how many advantage without giving pig's feet, I already the family that enough suppressed the pig's feet, otherwise made Third Rank monster core, how many Foundation Establishment Pill refined casually, how many Foundation Establishment Stage clansmen can also, or discovers the ancient cultivator cave mansion, made the marvelous ability rare book, but was this too easy? I confessed that cannot write classics, but I want to write the family article that I approve, discovered that the metalliferous ore, the spirit stones ore or the mystical place, can write, the issue is, this is early period , the critical moment that a family rises, however on acquired falls the pie, hundreds of thousands more than 200,000 do spirit stones fall? I might as well write the lone ranger! 为什么其他家族一直唯唯诺诺,一到猪脚的家族,又是灵石矿、金属矿脉,我也有写这种情节,不过我压制的比较厉害,没给猪脚家多少好处,我已经够压制猪脚的家族了,否则弄个三阶妖丹,随便炼制出几枚筑基丹,又可以多出几名筑基期的族人,或者发现古修士洞府,弄个神功秘籍,可是这样是不是太容易了？我自认写不出一部经典,但是我想写一本我自己认可的家族文,发现金属矿、灵石矿或者秘境,都可以写,问题是,这是前期,一个家族崛起的关键时刻,然后天上掉馅饼,十几万二十几万灵石掉下来？我还不如写独行侠呢！ The entire clan tries hard, deducts the expense, one year of profit is also several thousand spirit stones, then did the author open the gold/metal finger, the pig's feet family wrested away a spirit stones ore and metalliferous ore? Falls down from the space all of a sudden more than ten even several hundred thousand spirit stones? I could not accept, late stage can write like this, earlier cannot. 全族努力,扣去花销,一年的利润也就是几千块灵石,然后作者开了金手指,猪脚的家族就霸占了一座灵石矿、金属矿？一下子从天上掉下十几甚至几十万灵石？我自己接受不了,后期可以这样写,前期不能。 Today sat for quite a while, formed in one's mind many plots, was this pass/test, why other family cannot rise, the pig's feet family rose, therefore I reduced many plots, planned to write to farm honestly, from farming to start, has not farmed, will have the battle, but does not want to make the pig's feet family go against heaven's will, the mentality has not managed clearly, remembers wrote a symbol time, the buckle a book friend of reading wrote one long to comment, said that the immortal hero must write to like hating the rival in love, rather than killed, can kill, but was not hits frequently, so long as I wrote. The immortal hero article, I will remember this book friend's commentary forever. 今天坐了大半天,构思了好多个情节,就是过不了这一关,为什么别的家族不能崛起,猪脚的家族崛起,所以我砍掉了很多情节,打算老实写种田,从种田入手,不是一直种田,会有争斗,只是不想让猪脚家族太逆天,思路还没理清楚,记得写一符的时候,扣扣阅读的一位书友写了一个长评,说仙侠要写爱恨情仇,而不是打打杀杀,可以有打打杀杀,但不是经常打,只要我写仙侠文,我会永远记住这位书友的评论。 This book many shortcomings, I acknowledged, I had not said other family articles are not good, does not want, because this spurts me, the above is my viewpoint, I throw the street, I am not proud, but I want to be responsible for this book, that is all, 这本书还是有很多缺点的,我承认,我没说其他家族文不好,不要因为这个喷我,以上都是我个人观点,我扑街,我不骄傲,但是我想对这本书负责,仅此而已, Forgot to change to the words expressing feelings, the friend of subscription did not do right by, tomorrow sends a chapter of free main text, was sorry. 忘记改成感言了,订阅的朋友对不住了,明天发一章免费的正文,抱歉了。 (本章完)
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