RINAPE :: Volume #3

#240: The script makes a final decision

The new week has special significance to Li Mu. 新的一周对李牧来说意义非凡。 On Monday, Xu Jiaming accompanies him to sign to the worker and peasant two big banks. 周一,许嘉铭陪着他到工农两大银行签约。 On Tuesday, the Li Mu line and Construction Bank attained exactly the same contract. 周二,李牧从中行、建行又拿到了一模一样的合约。 In other words, after these four contracts take, Li Mu's Alipay plan thorough unimpeded, remaining, only then the access bank and online tested. 也就是说,这四份合约拿到手之后,李牧的支付宝计划已经彻底畅通,剩下的只有接入银行、线上测试了。 In order to encourage 3321 parents and students uses the Alipay payment and collection, Li Mu decided that in a week of time that Alipay gets online, pulls out to the commission of Alipay user helps exempt, because on 3321 the students take the week as the time node on the shelf class hour, therefore this preferential benefit is it can be said that minimal to the late stipend influence, but, preferential benefit, can certainly make the user take to use the Alipay first step bravely. 为了鼓励3321的学生家长以及学生使用支付宝付款与收款,李牧决定在支付宝上线的一周时间内,对支付宝用户的佣金抽成全免,因为3321上的学生都是以周为时间节点上架课时,所以这个优惠对后期的助学金影响可以说是微乎其微,但是,实打实的优惠,一定可以让用户勇敢迈出使用支付宝的第一步。 Once Alipay gets online, binding with 3321 can be very thorough, at present even online banking user, student class hour after bidding, but also needs the log in net silver, inputs and checks the remittance amount and remittance account number, the behavior cost comparison that the user uses is high, moreover must wait for 3321 custom services to verify artificially, because 3321 every day converges the amount is too many, this needs the time period. 支付宝一旦上线,和3321之间的绑定会是非常深入的,目前就算是网银用户,在竞拍下学生课时之后,还需要登陆网银,输入并核对汇款金额、汇款账号,用户使用的行为成本比较高,而且也要等待3321的客服人工审核,因为3321每天汇入金额太多,这个是需要时间周期的。 If online banking user changed to Alipay is very simple, the user bid finished, amount that the page direct demonstration needs to pay money, and gave the Alipay payment option, the Alipay user only needed to click on the Alipay payment, like Taobao of later generation, will produce an order, the order has the explicit amount, had the unique order number, the user can direct log in own Alipay payment, not need to input the amount and input collection account number again, so long as were uses Four Big Bank random the account of bank to transfer accounts Alipay, can achieve the real-time confirmation, because Alipay had the Online payment business account number in Four Big Bank, various line of account transfers, entered Alipay in various lines. Merchant account number, simple quickly. 如果网银用户改用支付宝就很简单了,用户竞拍结束,页面直接显示需要付款的金额,并且给出支付宝支付选项,支付宝用户只需要点击支付宝付款,就会像后世的淘宝一样,生成一个订单,订单有明确的金额,有独一无二的订单号,用户可以直接登陆自己的支付宝付款,不需要再去输入金额、输入收款账号,而且只要是使用四大行任意一个银行的账户转账进支付宝,都可以做到实时确认,因为支付宝在四大行都有网络支付商户账号,各行的转账,进支付宝在各行的商户账号,简单快捷。 Brings the convenient thing for the user truly, only needing makes them take bravely the first step, in the future matter will be simpler. All are successful. 真正为用户带来便利的东西,只需要让他们勇敢迈出第一步,往后的事情就简单多了。一切都是水到渠成。 Li Mu is waiting for official online of Alipay, in the meantime, must start to go to the Haizhou assistance the matter to prepare for this weekend. 李牧等待着支付宝的正式上线,同时,也要开始为本周末去海州助学的事情做准备了。 Li Mu about Haizhou knew very much, cannot calculate very poorly. But the poor student also has many, that town that for example grandparent lives, has a township middle school, although not like Liu Nian native place is so impoverished, but also many goes compared with their. 李牧对海州还是很了解的,不能算非常穷。但贫困学生也有不少,比如爷爷奶奶生活的那个镇子,就有一所乡镇中学,虽然不像刘念老家似的那么贫困,但也比他们那里强不出多少去。 Monday Li Mu decided this with Dong Ai the middle school. Let Dong Ai go with the school authorities to relate, will decide the assistance time next Monday, happen to can also find time, will have a look at the parents. 周一李牧就跟董艾定了这所中学。让董艾去跟校方联系,把助学时间定在下周一,正好自己也可以抽空回去一趟,看看爸妈。 Heard that Dong Ai knows this time must go to the Li Mu hometown to make the assistance, suddenly like hitting chicken blood, a lot are doing it yourself, all details repeatedly are deliberating, very intention. 听说董艾知道这次要去李牧家乡做助学,忽然像打了鸡血一样,很多事情都在亲力亲为,所有的细节都在反复推敲,非常之用心。 Tuesday night Li Ya only returned to the bedroom still to say to Li Mu: „Senior Sister Ai this week is a little strange, before many things gave us to be responsible, this time grasped suddenly. In the evening drew several of us to celebrate the detail to cross several.” 周二晚上李亚唯回到寝室还在跟李牧说:“艾学姐这周有点怪啊,以前不少事情都交给我们来负责,这次忽然又都自己抓过去了。晚上拉着我们几个过细节过了好几遍。” Li Mu has not thought, after all the first time is to own hometown, oneself are 3321 founders, Dong Ai looked that the multipurpose desserts in own face is also normal. 李牧也没多想,毕竟是第一次到自己的家乡去,自己又是3321的创始人,董艾看在自己的面子上多用点心也属正常。 ...... …… Li Mu in the brain is only thinking for several days two matters, write the core frame of social software, to write the script. 李牧这些天脑子里只想着两件事,写出社交软件的核心框架、写剧本。 Used to fire with Tencent seizes the social Instant Messenger software of war of base, Li Mu prepares to it is named as YY, he thinks to make the voice actually not now, but is these two letter groups and because of is quite together good to record is also quite good to read, askew. 用来与腾讯打响夺基之战的社交通讯软件,李牧准备给它定名为yy,倒不是他想现在做语音,而是这两个字母组和在一起比较好记也比较好念,歪歪。 Has experienced to Li Mu this person who moves the internet comprehensive steamroll tradition internet time, he understands that the effect is certain is good to record to read catchy. Has many meanings as for inside, does not need to pursue, the user will not pay attention. 对李牧这个经历过移动互联网全面碾压传统互联网时代的人来说,他明白名字的作用一定得是好记好念朗朗上口。至于里面有多少含义,没必要去追求,用户不会关注。 QQ, is msn and uc. WeChat and Mo Mo, chatted, the name had no big significance. 无论是qq,还是msn、uc。或者微信、陌陌、米聊,名字都没什么大意义。 Li Mu to the YY first edition of setting, not only need have at present QQ all functions, but must have several quite important functions, big function for example: The good friend group chatted the function, the user hierarchy, individual cartoon show function and digital pet function. 李牧对yy第一版的设定,不但要具备眼下qq的所有功能,还要具备几个比较重要的功能,大的功能比如:好友群聊功能、用户等级体系、个人卡通秀功能、电子宠物功能。 These four core functions are Li Mu thought that at present the most necessary product, the good friend group chatting use in view of network Game and athletics Game that the present is in vogue. The same hobby, the user of same attribute label needs an immediate Instant Messenger group to chat the tool, but the QQ group service will not have appeared over the next 1-2 years, therefore this function takes, has certainly very strong attraction to the QQ user ; 这四个核心功能是李牧觉得眼下最有必要的产品,好友群聊的用处是针对眼下盛行的网络游戏和竞技游戏。同爱好、同属性标签的用户亟需一个即时通讯的群聊工具,但是qq群服务未来一两年还不会出现,所以这个功能拿出来,对qq用户来说一定有很大的吸引力; The user hierarchy to strengthen the user viscosity, this is not no need to say much it is well known ; 用户等级体系为的是增强用户粘度,这个不必多说、世人皆知; Individual cartoon show, is to imitate the QQ show, because the present internet vision was too monotonous, present QQ ugly must die, does not have the detail and aesthetic sense, present website also old-fashioned to pinnacle, upright, pity that to open the speed and economical band width, even the pixel of picture lowers, user need powerful visual impact, QQ show, if this time took, to the young people absolutely was the earth-shaking big event ; 个人卡通秀,就是要模仿qq秀,因为现在的互联网视觉太单调了,现在的qq丑的要死,毫无细节与美感可言,现在的网站也都古板到了极致,方方正正,为了打开速度、节省带宽,连图片的像素都低的可怜,用户需要强烈的视觉冲击,qq秀如果这个时候拿出来,对年轻人来说绝对是惊天动地的大事件; The digital pet was very simple, this thing to increase the user viscosity designs, its logic is like Happy Farm, must stimulate the user to achieve as far as possible gets online every day, and guaranteed when online is long . Moreover, the pets of pet and between good friend can do alternately, will promote the interaction between users to a certain extent. 电子宠物就很简单了,这个东西就是为了增加用户粘度而设计的,它的逻辑和开心农场一样,要刺激用户尽可能做到每天都上线,并且保证在线时长,而且,宠物与好友的宠物之间可以做很多交互,一定程度上会促进用户之间的交互。 Besides these three functions, Tieba (Post It) auxiliary personal space and Happy Farm, Tieba (Post It) will also change name when the time comes is YY Tieba (Post It), implements the depth conformity with the YY software, these sets of cocktails of moves get down, enough Tencent dumbfounded, found it hard to cope with. 除了这三个本身的功能之外,还有贴吧辅助的个人空间、开心农场,到时候贴吧也会改名为yy贴吧,和yy软件实行深度整合,这几套组合拳下来,就足够腾讯目瞪口呆、应接不暇了。 As for what email, network hard disk, file transfer wait/etc functions, to the present Internet users, almost does not have any function, therefore did not consider temporarily. 至于什么电子邮箱、网络硬盘、文件传输等等功能,对现在的网民来说,几乎没有任何作用,所以暂不考虑。 Besides these big plates, some segmentation functions, for example: Customizing good friend grouping and customizing good friend note and customizing good friend visit the space, the photo album jurisdiction wait/etc, these belong small detail that strengthens the user experience. 除了这几个大板块之外,还有一些细分功能,比如:自定义好友分组、自定义好友备注、自定义好友访问空间、相册权限等等,这些属于增强用户体验的小细节。 Last important matter was the VIP privilege, the Li Mu preparation copies future QQ directly, the VIP red name, and in the good friend listed tops, VIP online, to be able the stealth, to be able the customizing to leave the condition to reply and can have fun expression package to the specific user stealth to the specific user obviously automatically, most importantly, was the clouds service, as a result of present most user not own computers, in Internet cafe Browsing, therefore, Li Mu must to VIP customer development a function that chatted the record cloud storage, was similar to the chat record of QQ roams. 最后一个重要的事情就是vip特权了,李牧准备直接照搬日后的qq,vip红名并且在好友列表内置顶、vip可以在线对特定用户隐身、可以隐身对特定用户可见、可以自定义离开状态自动回复、可以有更多好玩的表情包,最重要的,是云端服务,由于现在大部分用户没有自己的电脑,都是在网吧上网,所以,李牧要给vip用户开发一个聊天记录云储存的功能,也就类似于qq的聊天记录漫游。 Except for these, remaining was the ui design. Is certainly attractive, Xinying and tall Bige, must on windows98, windows2000 and windows-xp, become ui to design the most beautiful software. 除了这些,剩下的就是ui设计了。一定要漂亮、新颖、高逼格,一定要在windows98、windows2000、windows-xp上,成为ui设计最美的软件。 If these can achieve, seized the war of base to win 99%. 如果这些都能做到,夺基之战就赢了90%九。 The demand arranged in order. But the compilation of core frame is actually a long process, but does not worry in Li Mu well, the YY software at least wants, when personal space and Happy Farm get online, and after the fire, will take suddenly, hits everyone one to be caught off guard, at that time. Tencent possibly could not realize, Tieba (Post It) all actually to hatch a model of social software, they possibly are just about or plagiarizing oneself Happy Farm, didn't expect, oneself will take one more advanced than all of a sudden the new social software QQ in some moment, gives them to come one to remove firewood from under the pot instantaneously. 需求都列出来了。但核心框架的编写却是一个漫长的过程,不过好在李牧也不着急,yy软件至少要等到个人空间、开心农场上线并且大火之后才会忽然拿出来,打所有人一个措手不及,那个时候。腾讯可能根本意识不到,贴吧的一切其实都是为了孵化一款社交软件,他们可能正要或者正在抄袭自己的开心农场,却没想到,自己会在某一刻一下子拿出来一个比qq先进许多的新社交软件,瞬间给他们来一个釜底抽薪。 Since seizes the war of base, is ruthlessly is naturally better. 既然是夺基之战,自然是越狠越好。 The 《Old Boy》 short film script, Li Mu made some changes based on original works. 《老男孩》微电影的剧本,李牧在原著的基础上做了一些更改。 First, the lead was turned into Simple Plan by the chopsticks brothers, two people change four people. The core Male lead corner/horn is Zhang Kexuan, the second Male lead corner/horn was Ye Tianming, Female lead is Zhang Kexuan this role first love in high school, as for the third Male lead corner/horn was the big villain, he at first with lead in same high school, but has been suppressed the crest of wave by the lead, even had been taught by the lead, afterward after entering the society, made the good money, to obtain Female lead. 首先,主角由筷子兄弟变成了简单计划,两人变四人。核心男主角是张克轩,第二男主角是叶天明,女主是张克轩这个角色在高中时的初恋,至于第三男主角则是大反派,他起初和主角在同一所高中,但一直被主角压住风头,甚至被主角教训过,后来步入社会之后赚了大钱、又得到了女主。 In the plot, the Li Mu's setting is: When Simple Plan four person 11 th grade is infatuated with Boss eyond crazily, when the schoolmates are preparing for the college entrance examination. They instead played Band, but the Male lead corner/horn and Female lead corner/horn had the favorable impression mutually, showed the campus dim emotion of bringing back the youth recollection, the villain also liked the Female lead corner/horn. But cannot attract the Female lead attention ; 剧情上,李牧的设定是:简单计划四个人高三时疯狂迷恋beyond,当同学都在备战高考的时候。他们反而玩起了乐队,而男主角和女主角互有好感,展现出一段勾起青春回忆的校园朦胧情感,反派也喜欢女主角。但一直没能吸引到女主的注意力; In a campus singer competes on, Simple Plan performed Boss eyond classical love song «To like Your», Male lead that Zhang Kexuan played before mounting the stage, taking advantage of this song affectionate confession Female lead corner/horn, after the performance, two people finally in the same place. Also approximately good to go to the common dream Yanjing to go to school, the didn't expect male villain is actually the envy, told the teacher the matter of two people love, causes being furious of school teacher, afterward the teacher informed two people guardians, Zhang Kexuan to be slapped by the father of being furious in the presence of everyone, Female lead is arranged to transfer the school by the parents. 紧接着,在一场校园歌手比赛上,简单计划演出了一首beyond的经典情歌《喜欢你》,张克轩饰演的男主在上台前,借这首歌深情告白女主角,演出之后两人终于在一起。原本还约好要去共同梦想的燕京上学,没想到男反派却出于嫉妒,把两人恋爱的事情告诉了老师,引起学校老师的震怒,后来老师通知了两人家长,张克轩被震怒的父亲当众打了一个耳光,女主则被父母安排转校。 Male lead that Zhang Kexuan plays because among the contradiction with fathers, bringing a guitar to leave home, becomes a vagrant singer, Female lead achieved wishes to test into Yanjing name brand university, but how actually unable to contact with him, agreed Lenovo | mental association to two people initially, Female lead sadly, when she takes the train goes to Yanjing to go to school, the male villain also along with her together steps the train to go to Yanjing, Male lead that Zhang Kexuan plays in a midway city at the back of the guitar also stepped this trains, but two people is tossed in the sleeping berth, smoked night of smoke in the hard seat compartment attachment point, has not met. 张克轩饰演的男主因为和父亲之间的矛盾,带着一把吉他离家出走,成为一个流浪歌手,女主如愿考上燕京一所名牌大学,但却怎么都联系不到他,联想到两人当初的约定,女主伤心不已,当她乘坐火车前往燕京上学的时候,男反派也随她一同踏上火车前往燕京,张克轩饰演的男主则在中途的一个城市背着吉他也踏上了这列火车,不过两人一个在卧铺辗转难眠,一个在硬座车厢连接处抽了一夜的烟,没有见面。 The time passes gradually, many years later, Male lead that Zhang Kexuan plays was still the bar singer in the Yanjing bar, male 2nd that Ye Tianming played has given up the music, king Taili in inverse image plot was the same, opened a worn-out barber shop in the corner of native place, created obstacles by the customer intentionally ; 时光荏苒,多年以后,张克轩饰演的男主还在燕京的酒吧里做酒吧歌手,叶天明饰演的男二号早已经放弃音乐,像原剧情中的王太利一样,在老家的街角开了一家破旧的理发店,被顾客成心刁难; Meanwhile, Zhang Kexuan contributed money to buy a second-hand Aotuo in Yanjing, just had own car(riage) for oneself when was happy, starting off had/left the rear-end accident, hit Mercedes of male villain, here was also like the original plot, Male lead that Zhang Kexuan played will be smiled to hit the face by the male villain, and informed him, oneself produced a grade of music competition program in TV Station, here, Li Mu made a modification, making the male counter- faction tell Male lead personally, oneself in his missing these years, exhausted the thoughts, finally married his past first love. 与此同时,张克轩在燕京攒钱买了一辆二手奥拓,刚为自己有了属于自己的车而高兴时,上路就出了追尾事故,撞了男反派的奔驰,这里也跟原剧情中一样,张克轩饰演的男主会被男反派微笑打脸,并且告知他,自己在电视台制作了一档音乐比赛节目,这里,李牧做了一点改动,让男反亲口派告诉男主,自己在他失踪的这些年里,用尽心思,终于娶了他当年的初恋。 Male lead that Zhang Kexuan plays by the attack, drowned sorrow later recollection past Brother Band taking advantage of the liquor and first love girlfriend, suddenly buoys up, he buys a ticket to return to the native place immediately, found opened the barber shop and elegant unsuccessful Ye Tianming, found another two to be smoothed by grinding the ideal friend by the basic kitchen necessities, their four people for bonus, to be ideal, the group had Band again, and wrote «Flying Higher». 张克轩饰演的男主倍受打击,借酒消愁之后回想当年的乐队兄弟和初恋女友,忽然重新振作起来,他立刻买票返回老家,找到了开理发店、郁郁不得志的叶天明,找到了另外两个已经被油盐酱醋磨平了理想的朋友,他们四个人为了奖金、为了理想,重新组起了乐队,并且写出了一首《飞得更高》。 Brings «Flying Higher» arrives at Yanjing, four people won first in the preliminary contest, the male villain sees to outsmart oneself, tries to use oneself relations to make them be defeated in the finals of live broadcast, when didn't expect, finals, Band put out 《Old Boy》 this tear gas program, impresses all judges and audience, even if the male villain gives the judge to send the message in behind unceasingly, intimidating them to change grading, but these judges remain unmoved. 带着《飞得更高》来到燕京,四人在预赛中赢得第一名,男反派见弄巧成拙,试图利用自己的关系让他们在现场直播的决赛中失败,没想到,决赛时,乐队拿出了《老男孩》这首催泪曲目,把所有评委和观众打动,纵使男反派在后面不断给评委发短信,威逼他们改掉评分,但这些评委都不为所动。 Finally, the Simple Plan four people achieved wishes to reach in the competition finally, in the mansion looked that the live broadcast Female lead cries the tears person, her reckless setting out, dashes about wildly to go out, the play gradually ends in her back, in the 《Old Boy》 song. 最后,简单计划四人终于在比赛中如愿登顶,在豪宅中看直播的女主哭成泪人,她不顾一切的起身,狂奔出门,全剧在她的背影中、在《老男孩》的歌曲中逐渐落幕。 In the original script, Female lead basically is a role that buys the soy sauce, moreover somewhat worships money the female flavor, in the edition script that but, writes in Li Mu, the Female lead image by his upfront as far as possible, was not portrayed a realistic worshipping money female her, but molds injured, many th the years Zhang Kexuan evading by Male lead that Zhang Kexuan plays her not to see, but the opposite party is actually also loving his upfront women image several years later. 在原剧本里,女主基本上是一个打酱油的角色,而且有些拜金女的味道,不过,在李牧写的这一版本剧本里,女主的形象被他尽可能的正面,不把她塑造成一个现实的拜金女,而是把她塑造成被张克轩饰演的男主伤害过、张克轩避之多年不见,但对方时隔多年却还爱着他的正面女性形象。 Reason that such setting , because Li Mu felt, this play with the original 《Old Boy》 maximum difference is: The original old boy to hold the red chopsticks two brothers, almost all energy is therefore pouring into toward their two people, in this case, the original naturally does not have the means to mold Female lead that makes the audience move and like, but, oneself this edition does not need deliberately to hold red Simple Plan these people, particularly Zhang Kexuan, he is red, he in this short film, itself will become the object of everyone attention and affection, in this case, might as well molds upfront Female lead, was moved Female lead that and liked truly by the audience, is the use resources as far as possible. 之所以这么设定,是因为李牧觉得,这部剧跟原版《老男孩》最大的不同在于:原版老男孩是为了捧红筷子兄弟二人,所以几乎所有的精力都在往他们两人身上倾注,这种情况下,原版自然没办法去塑造一个让观众感动并喜爱的女主,不过,自己这一版就不需要刻意捧红简单计划这几个人了,尤其是张克轩,他已经非常红了,他在这部微电影里,本身就会成为所有人关注和喜爱的对象,这种情况下,不妨塑造一个正面女主,一个让观众真正感动并喜爱的女主,也算是尽可能的利用资源。 Moreover, this Female lead is developed by whom, Li Mu has an excellent candidate at heart. 而且,这个女主由谁来演,李牧心里已经有了一个绝佳的人选。 This candidate, is previous time in that Du Wei that at the birthday party knows. 这个人选,就是上次在生日聚会上认识的那个杜薇。 Du Wei is young, the external condition is very good, looks at is very fresh clear , in addition she studies the music, the body has the share spiritual energy, localization of very suitable this Female lead, moreover she is Zhang Kexuan fans, tricks to develop this movie her, oneself feared that is even the salary can save, moreover this girl's condition is so good, perhaps after this short film is published, can let her also fire, even if later she does not take the film and television route, takes the music route, should still give her to bring very big help, even in Du Wei family/home again rich, not necessarily can help her find the good work., Also not necessarily can truly hold the mass base, but this short film previous life on the fire, now, this movie has had Simple Plan, to have Zhang Kexuan, to have sensational, has to remember past times and have the campus youth, there is a campus hot blooded, 《Old Boy》 this song revealed that so long as shot, it met the fire. 杜薇年纪不大,外在条件很好,看着很清纯、清新,再加上她是学音乐的,身上有股子灵气,非常适合这个女主的定位,而且她又是张克轩的粉丝,把她忽悠过来演这部电影,自己怕是连片酬都能省下,而且这女孩的条件这么好,没准这部微电影问世之后,能让她也火一把,以后她就算不走影视路线,走音乐路线,也会给她带来很大的帮助,就算杜薇家里再有钱,不见得能帮她找到好作品,也不见得能够真正捧出群众基础,而这部微电影上辈子就大火过,现在,这部电影有简单计划、有张克轩、有煽情、有怀旧、有校园青春,又有校园热血,还有《老男孩》这首歌来兜底,只要拍出来,它一定会大火。 After the script writes, Li Mu relates with Zhang Kexuan immediately, in the telephone uses for a half hour, script detailed and from beginning to end repeated to Zhang Kexuan, Zhang Kexuan was operating the speaker, other Simple Plan three people also listening that did not omit a single word in side. 剧本写好之后,李牧就立刻跟张克轩联系,在电话里用半个小时的时间,把剧本的详详细细、原原本本的给张克轩重复了一遍,张克轩开着扬声器,简单计划其他三个人也在旁边一字不漏的听。 After listening, four people have not spoken long time, how Li Mu closely examines one, four talent's exciting replies with one voice: „Good! Good! When pats? What needs us to make?” 听完之后,四人良久没有说话,李牧追问一句怎么样,四人才异口同声的激动回答:“好！太好了！什么时候拍？需要我们做什么？” Li Mu shows a faint smile: „Since this, you wait for me to return to Haizhou on Friday, we spoke in detail face to face!”( To be continued.) 李牧微微一笑:“既然这样,那你们就等我周五回海州,咱们当面详谈！”(未完待续。)
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