Su Haolooked atapproximately the change of thisworld, basically, the previous lifeclassics, thisworldcompletelydoes not have.苏皓大致看了一下这个世界的变化,基本上来说,前世的经典,这个世界全然没有。But the side that thisworldentertainmentdevelopsis low, the goodsongto have, but the work of classics is actually very few.
而本世界娱乐方面发展的极低,好歌不是没有,但是经典之作却是少之又少。HoweverafterSu Haoglances over, finallydecidesto writeweb novelfirst.
不过在苏皓浏览完毕之后,最终决定先写一本网络小说。Does not have the means that the novelprofessionwas a basicthresholdlowestprofession, onlyrequested to type, nextwas the writingis unobstructed, did not needany otherexpertises.
没办法,小说行业是入门门槛最低的一个行业了,只要求会打字,其次就是文字通畅,不需要其他任何专业知识。Like the composition, screenwriterand others, you have not studied, basicallyis equal tobeing hopeless.
不像作曲、编剧等,你没学过,基本上等于没戏。„Has been a pity, Istillremembermanysongs.”Su Haoshrugs, althoughheremembersmanysongs, will sing, butwill not compose, cannotsend a voicein the past.
“可惜了,我还记得不少歌曲呢。”苏皓耸了耸肩,虽然他记得不少歌曲,也会唱,但是不会谱曲啊,总不能发一段语音过去吧。Onealsodo not have the fame, even ifputs out the most classicalprogram, it is estimated thatcould not makehow muchmoney.
自己又没有名气,哪怕拿出最经典的曲目,估计也赚不了多少钱。Inparallelworld the biggestweb novelstationcallsto select the Chinese netnow, almoston a beginningstatuswithEarth, giant.
平行世界里现在最大的小说网站叫点起中文网,差不多和地球上的起点一个地位,龙头老大。Butweb novel of thisworldis also sametoprevious life, various types ofweb novel, Xuanhua, Xianxia, the game, the history, with the personwait / etc., appearedsuccessively.
而这个世界的网络文学也与前世一样,各种类型的网络小说,玄幻,仙侠,游戏,历史,同人等等,已经先后出现。Thismakeshima littleregrettable, founded the opportunity in newschoolnot to have.
这让他有点遗憾,开创新流派的机会没了。Howeveractuallydoes not matter, inSu Haomindalsoinnumerableclassicalworks. Takestheseclassicalwritings, canlet the entirenovelshakeabsolutely!
不过其实无所谓,苏皓脑海里面还有无数的经典作品。把这些经典大作拿出来,也绝对能让整个小说界震荡!Sincemustwriteweb novel, thatnaturallymustwrite the Xuanhuaarticle, canreorganize, is popular, most essentialis the copyrighthas not neededto be worriedby the river crab.
既然要写网文,那当然是要写玄幻文了,能改编,人气好,最关键是版权还不用担心被河蟹。Heglanced overapproximately the majorlistaboveranksas well as the works, has saying that insideliterarinesshas, or the literarinessis greatly strengthened, how manyGreat Godwritingsarrangesin the authorintroductions of first, unexpectedlyissuch and suchuniversityprofessor of literature?
他大致浏览了一下各大榜单上面的排名以及作品,不得不说,里面的文学性是有的,或者说文学性极强,排在前几的大神大作的作者介绍中,居然都是某某大学文学教授?Su Haoself-examinedthatwriting style of oneselfthisamateurauthorhas no wayto comparewiththeirtheseexpertcompletely, butthesenovelissuecrisppointsis insufficient!苏皓自问,自己这个业余作者的文笔跟他们这些专家完全没法比,不过这些小说却有一个问题爽点不足!What is the web novelessence? It is not crisp!网文的精髓是什么?不就是爽嘛!Theirplots, almost and Wuxianovel in 70-80ageis common, evenseveralalsolittle dragon girlcommongreenhatplots!
他们的剧情,几乎和七八十年代中的武侠小说一般,甚至其中几个还有小龙女一般的绿帽情节!His, the fatherswent to school, worktired a day, tolook atthistype of thing?
丫的,老子们上学、工作累了一天,就是为了看这种东西的?„Was the timeteachestheirweb novelcorrectwrittenway!”
“是时候教导他们网络小说的正确书写方式了!”Su Haochuckle, startsto strike.苏皓轻笑一下,开始敲打起来。Has registered the writerstatus, veryimpolitehadpowerfulpen name‚Very Handsome Author’.
注册了作家身份,很不客气的起了一个给力的笔名‘好帅的作者’。At that momentdoes not hesitateestablishes the book titledirectly: «Battle Through the Heavens»!
当下也不犹豫直接就设定书名:《斗破苍天》!Right, thisis the range pole in neophyte storieshistory, trashclasstop-level work, the work of breaking an engagementclassfoundation!
没错,这本就是小白文历史上的标杆,废柴流的顶级作品,退婚流的开创之作!Naturally, hisalthoughremembersgeneral plot, but the writing styleaspect can only be solved, insidewill have not the smallmodification, the rhythmwill also differ from.
当然,他虽然记得大概剧情,但是文笔方面就只能自己解决了,里面还会有不小的改动,节奏也会有所不同。Is bringing the excitement of goalbecome a God, hewrites with vigor, one breathfirstthreechapterswriting.
带着目标成神的兴奋,他奋笔疾书,一口气把前三章给写了出来。
The firstchapter, protagonisttrash, disdaining of surroundingsperson, heroine'scomfort.
第一章,主角废柴,周围人的不屑,女主的安慰。
The secondchapter, selectsring, introduced the background, then the breaking an engagementobjectappeared, varioustypessuppressedprotagonist.
第二章,点出戒指,介绍背景,然后退婚对象出现,各种压制主角。
The thirdchapter, 30years of east of the river, 30years of west river, notbullies the youthto be poor!
第三章,30年河东,30年河西,莫欺少年穷!Threecomplete a high tide! Crisppointeruption!
三张完成一个高潮!爽点爆发!Inspects, directissue!
检查一遍,直接发布!„Reallybig shotisbig shot, I who in the pastlook atwarm-bloodedrushed, nowIwrite was also warm-bloodedrushes, hates unable the bodyforit!” The Su Haoheartsaidthatthenalsosighed.
“果然大佬就是大佬,当年看的我热血澎湃,现在我写的也是热血澎湃,恨不得以身替之!”苏皓心道,然后又叹了一口气。Inprotagonistwithothersnovelcompares, oneselfthissystemgolden finger is really the waste, is really, but also is known as‚protagonist’......
跟人家小说里的主角比起来,自己这个系统金手指真是废物,真是的,还号称‘主角’呢......Su Haois thinking, openedownsystem.苏皓想着,打开了自己的系统。【Side MissionX1completes, rewardHostSinging Skill+ 0.1.】
【支线任务X1完成,奖励宿主歌唱技能+0.1.】„Well? Mission when completes?”Su Haolooks atSystem Notification, cannot help butstares.
“咦?什么时候完成的任务?”苏皓看着系统提示,不由得一愣。Ownthissystemcompletelyisonepile of mojibake,
自己这个系统完全就是一堆乱码,Let aloneMission Reward, Missionintroduced that cannot see clearly. NowunexpectedlycompletesMission? Alsohas indicatedsystemreward?
别说任务奖励了,任务介绍都看不清。现在居然完成一个任务?还表明了系统奖励?„Ok, this is also good deed, alwayscomparesanythingnot.”Su Haothinksthatthenthrewhimone side.
“算了,这也是好事,总比什么都没有强啊。”苏皓想了想,便把他扔到了一边。After allthisbrokensystemis unable to see clearly the Missioninformation, whenhesurfs the webwas known as that the Missionyoungexpert, has no alternative.
毕竟这破系统无法看清任务信息,哪怕他玩网游时号称任务小能手,对此也无可奈何啊。Hehas not paid attention, naturallyhad not discovered that afterSide MissionX1completes, behindshinesSide MissionX2.
他没有注意,自然也就没有发现,在支线任务X1完成之后,后面又亮起来一个支线任务X2。Butwhatis more important, followingash-grayMissiongoal【Main MissionL1】, Alsohas shonegradually.
而更重要的是,后面一个灰色的任务目标【主线任务L1】,也逐渐亮了起来。
......
......Su Haoschoolbaghas not brought, bringsexcitement that the workwill soon be taking off, withprogramnotebook that the preparationfillsgradually, goes to schooldirectly.苏皓书包也没带,带着自己作品即将起飞的兴奋,和准备逐渐填补的大纲笔记本,直接上学。
The booksthrewin the classroomin any case, goes homewords that had the timeto study, whycan'tfind timeto write a novel?
反正书本都扔教室里了,回家有时间学习的话,为什么不能抽空写点小说呢?Earthdoes not explode, the authordoes not have a vacation!
地球不爆炸,作者不放假!
The universedoes not restart, the authordoes not rest!
宇宙不重启,作者不休息!As an author, does not go to school, oneselfcousinwill killfrom the thousand li(500 km), Su Haoalsowantsto play hookywritestenagain!
作为一名作者,要不是不上学,自家表姐会从千里之外杀过来,苏皓还想逃学再写十张!Proceedsto walk, the schoolentrancehas encircled a person of smallpile.
往前走去,校门口已经围了一小堆的人。Su Haocollects, the giantheart shape that is spreadbyseveral thousandroses, was placedin the schoolentrance, making the studentstamp the foot, making the teacherwait and see.苏皓凑过去,一个由数千朵玫瑰花铺成的巨大心形,摆在了校门口,让学生顿足,让老师观望。Butin the middle of rose, is standingrich second generation of wearsuittie.
而在玫瑰花的中间,站着一个穿着一身西装领带的富二代。heroinewalkedeasely.女主角悠然的走了过来。Snow whitejeans, wrap the slenderexquisitecalf.
一条雪白的牛仔裤,包裹纤细优美的小腿。Is treading the gracefulstep, shewalkstoward the schoolstep by step.
踏着优雅的步伐,她一步步往学校走去。Jet blacksuch as the black hair of black inkfalls in torrents, flutterswith the wind, serves as contrastthatto bully the frostmatchsnowin the smallfacebeautiful, indifferentline of sight, is havingseveralpoints of faintly recognizablefairyism.
漆黑如墨的青丝倾泻下来,随风飘扬,衬托得那欺霜赛雪的小脸更加的美丽,淡然视线中,亦带着几分飘渺仙气。Leng Yueli, attractivenesscrushschoolallfemale students, are honored ashundredyears of most beautifulSchool Flower.冷月璃,颜值碾压学校所有女生,被誉为百年最美校花。Thatrich second generationknees down, the [say / way] of incomparableaffection, „feels like old friends at the first meetingwithyou, isIthis life the most beautifulmeet. Permitswithyour, ismylifemost eternalscenery.”
那富二代单膝跪地,无比深情的道,“与你一见如故,是我今生最美丽的相遇。与你一诺相许,是我人生最永恒的风景。”„Yueli, ismygirlfriend, Iwill be forever good to you.”
“月璃,做我女朋友吧,我会永远对你好的。”Was sayingopens the box on hand, a diamond ringsparkleis eye-catching.
说着打开手上的盒子,一枚钻戒闪耀夺目。„Diamond ring!”
“钻戒!”„Big! Perhapswantedseveral hundred thousand?”
“好大一颗!恐怕都要几十万了吧?”
„ This whole lifeImustbe ableto receive a suchdiamond ring, www.uukanshu.com
“这辈子我要能收到一个这样的钻戒,UU看书www.uukanshu.comNext daydiedIalsoto prefer. ”
第二天去死我也情愿了。”
The schoolentrance, the innumerablefemale studentsare filled with admirethat the sound of exclamationrises from all directions.
校门口,无数女生满心艳羡,惊叹之声四起。What a pityLeng Yuelimerelylooked athisoneeyes, onindifferently said: „Sorry, Iam busypreparingcollege entrance examination, temporarilydoes not thinkothermatters.”
可惜冷月璃仅仅瞄了他一眼,就淡淡的道:“抱歉,我忙着准备高考,暂时不想其他的事情。”„doesn't matter, Iam willingto wait, when the college entrance examinationended, when the universitygraduates, when till youcomply.”rich second generationsaidhastily.
“没关系,我愿意等,等到高考结束,等到大学毕业,等到你答应为止。”富二代连忙道。Was only a pitythatLeng Yuelihas not managedhim, walkedwithout consulting anybody.
只可惜,冷月璃根本没理他,径自走了过去。Sidediscussedone after anotherimmediately.
旁边顿时议论纷纷。„ReallyworthilyisCold School Flower, the lines that rejectsfollowtimeto rejectexactly the same of thatschoolgrass, a characterhas not changed.”
“真不愧是冷校花,就连拒绝的台词都跟上次拒绝那位校草的一模一样,一个字都没改。”„How many were this month? Five? Six? Seven?”
“这是本月第几个了?五?六?还是七?”„Was not lost faceby the Cold School Flowerrejection, butdoes not know that finallywherethismost beautifulfresh flowerwill insert.....”
“被冷校花拒绝不丢人,只是不知道这朵最美的鲜花最终会插在哪里.....”Su Haoinone sidelooks at, helplessshrugging.苏皓在一旁看着,无奈的耸了耸肩。School FlowerLeng Yueli, attractivenessheaven defying, temperis desolate, the scholarshipis powerful, it is said the family background is also very good, for a long time, rich second generationand an official's second generation of bigpileconfession, has not seenoneto dareto moveanyhands and feetin any case.校花冷月璃,颜值逆天,性子冷淡,学力强悍,据说家世也很不错,反正这么长时间,告白的富二代、官二代一大堆,就是没见一个敢动什么手脚的。
The onlyissueis, the chestis small...... no, no, no, Imeant that the potentialis good.
唯一的问题是,胸小......不不不,我是说潜力不错。Em, butrequires the time, cantransform the potentialinto the strength!
恩,只是需要时间,才能将潜力转换为实力!Enteringcampus that Su Haodoes not care aboutcompletely, the Cold School Flowercharmis too big, even the alsoyoungmaleteacherimpulsesconfession, to the present, the studentswas aboutto be used.苏皓满不在意的走进校园,冷校花魅力太大,甚至还有年轻男老师冲动表白的,到了现在,学生们都快习惯了。Onlycansigh that attractivenessis just, the beautiful womanhas the privilege.
只能感叹一声颜值即正义,美女有特权。Entersin the class, justput downnotebook, suddenlysomepeoplegrippedtheirneckwith the arm.
走进班里,刚刚放下笔记本,忽然有人用胳膊夹住了自己的脖子。„Okyourboy, awesomesentgreatly!”
“行啊你小子,牛逼大发了啊!”
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