High-speed writing first round 高速文字首发 The cell phone read synchronously 手机同步阅读 Hears that reply without hesitation, the Leng Yueli corners of the mouth belt smiles. 听到那毫不犹豫的回答,冷月璃嘴角带笑。 although because of the family background, Leng Yueli was always worried that can have the distance with Su Hao. 虽然因为家世,冷月璃总担心会不会和苏皓产生距离。 However the rich family background will have similarly also this advantage! 但是有钱的家世同样也会有这种好处！ Leng Yueli smiles: „Em, that such has decided that in the evening also lives in My family, room also is happen to idle.” 冷月璃笑笑:“恩,那就这么定了,晚上也在我家住吧,正好房间还有空余。” However...... 不过...... 【dīng dōng!】 【叮咚！】 【Triggers Rivalry Mission!】 【触发对抗任务！】 【Swimming, the swim suit is most essential!】 【游泳,泳衣最关键！】 【Asked Host to make Su Hao choose a best swim suit for you, when went to the Host home to play, killed other competitors with your charm, conquered the Su Hao's eyeball!】 【请宿主让苏皓为您选一条最好的泳衣,并在去宿主家里玩的时候,用你的魅力干掉其他竞争者,征服苏皓的眼球！】 【Note: The Host's enemy is somewhat formidable, perhaps Host should ward off the shortcut in addition......】 【注:宿主的敌人有些强大,或许宿主应该另辟捷径......】 „Well?” Leng Yueli stares. “咦？”冷月璃一愣。 „Well, the swimming, has my one.” Su Qianxin gentle smiling: „Cousin I was also very long have not swum!” “咦,游泳啊,带我一个吧。”苏倩心温柔的笑着:“表姐我也很久没有去游泳了呢！” „Also calculates my one! I especially like this sports.” [Say / Way] that Su Xiaoyi refuses to admit being inferior. “也算我一个！我特别喜欢这种运动。”苏小怡不甘示弱的道。 Em, Su Xiaoyi also accepted the prompt of Mission. 恩,苏小怡也接受到了任务的提示。 However...... 不过...... „Why system did you light look to swim? Other?” Leng Yueli stares with big eyes: „also can do? Watches the movie, plays the game, plays the playing cards......” “为什么系统你光看游泳了？别的呢？”冷月璃瞪大眼睛:“还有很多可以做的吧？看电影,玩游戏,打扑克......” „Why system you only saw the swimming!” “为什么系统你只看到了游泳啊！” Leng Yueli will swim actually, tour good of , but issue...... 冷月璃倒是会游泳,游的还不错,但是问题...... The swim suit, is one type requests the extremely high clothes to figure. 泳衣,是一种对身材要求极高的衣服。 Half two meat, you do not dare to compare with others. 没有半两肉,你都不敢跟别人比一下。 Leng Yueli let alone half two, possibly did not have. 偏偏冷月璃别说半两了,可能一点都没有。 But her match...... 而她的对手...... „The swim suit that I bought last year was a little small, will Little Hao, accompany me to buy one tomorrow again?” Su Qianxin gesticulated own chest, raise one's head asked. “我去年买的泳衣有点小了,小皓,明天陪我再去买一件好吗？”苏倩心比划了一下自己的胸,抬头问道。 Su Hao stares, returns saying: „É...... Good.” 苏皓一愣,回道:“额......好的。” Are you still growing?! 你还在成长啊？！ Can give other place point Ying Yangfen? 能不能把营养分给别的地方点？ Suddenly, facing that colossus, inciting that Leng Yueli and Su Xiaoyi tooth bites makes noise. 一时间,面对那庞然大物,冷月璃和苏小怡牙咬的滋滋作响。 „Onii... -sama, please also accompany me to buy the swim suit.” Su Xiaoyi clenches teeth to say. “哥哥......大人,请也陪我去买泳衣。”苏小怡咬牙道。 „Happen, I also want to buy one newly, we together.” Leng Yueli clenches teeth to say. “正好,我也想买一件新的,咱们一起吧。”冷月璃咬牙道。 They firm unyielding line of sight looks at Su Qianxin Great Demon King, this miss will not admit defeat! 两人坚定不屈的视线看着苏倩心大魔王,本姑娘是不会认输的！ The Su Hao eye winks, but buys clothes, you as for such clench jaws? 苏皓眼睛一眨,只是买一件衣服而已,你们至于这么咬牙切齿的吗？ However he complies to say \; „Em, good, will go tomorrow together.” 不过他还是答应道\;“恩,好啊,明天一起去吧。” ...... ...... In the evening, Su Hao received the Little Apprentice news. 晚上,苏皓接到了小徒弟的消息。 „Teacher, I had finished the first 30,000 characters of new book, do you help me have a look?” “老师,我写完了新书的前30000字了,您帮我看看好嘛？” „Em, good, you send.” Su Hao said. “恩,好啊,你发过来吧。”苏皓道。 Then, documents have sent. 然后,一个文档发了过来。 Su Hao opens looks, em, Su Hao initially to rebirth of an expert that Ai Xian said. 苏皓打开一看,恩,正是苏皓当初跟艾娴说的强者重生流。 When the Heavenly Venerable Ye Xu name Venerable, was besieged by Ten Great Venerables, finally from exploding died, depends divine artifact to bury the day bead to return to him at age 17. 天尊叶序称尊之时,被十大尊者围攻,最终自爆身亡,仗着神器葬天珠回到他17岁那年。 Ye Xu youth time trash, only has beautiful woman elder sister to look after to Ye Xu devotedly, has therefore brought in the envy of kin, was bullied by the person of kin, after the rebirth, starts the tour of heaven defying slapping the face...... 叶序少年时期废柴,唯有美女姐姐一人对叶序悉心照顾,也因此引来了同族的嫉妒,被同族之人欺负,重生之后,开始逆天打脸之行...... Very typical repertoire, Su Hao teaches Ai Xian, what makes her putting oneself in another's place is the reader thinks that the male compatriots like any plot, you present any plot. 很典型的套路,苏皓只是教给艾娴,让她设身处地的为读者想想,男同胞们喜欢什么剧情,你就出现什么剧情。 Raises while convenient, rebirth time, is just the Heavenly Venerable Ye Xu youth time is stunned, was removed completely, smudges the medicine the time by the elder sister. 顺便一提,重生的时候,刚好就是天尊叶序少年时期被打昏,被姐姐脱光,涂抹伤药的时候。 „Em, very good repertoire...... neophyte stories, compared with before you writes, the head decides the high-quality goods is not the dream.” Su Hao says with a smile. “恩,很不错的套路......小白文,比你之前写的强多了,首定精品不是梦。”苏皓笑着道。 The previous life repertoire, places the present, instead non- repertoire. 前世的套路,放在现在,反而不套路了起来。 Because of this world, is the oppressive text...... 因为这个世界,全是虐主文...... „Right?” Ai Xian is very happy. “是吗？”艾娴很开心。 „Relax, the high-quality goods are very steady, so long as then does not crash well.” Su Hao said with a smile: „Also needs to pay attention to the character detail, your protagonist also soft.” “放心,精品很稳,只要接下来不崩盘就好。”苏皓笑道:“不过还需要注意一下人物细节,你的主角还有点软。” „Also soft?” “还软？” „Em, facing bullying your enemy, was defeats merely has shown mercy, least was also the bone fracture, even abandoned his dantian to be good.” “恩,面对欺负你的敌人,仅仅是击败太手下留情了,最少也是骨折,甚至废了他的丹田才行。” „É...... Such hot tempered?” “额......这么暴躁？” „Man, moreover slaughters the innumerable powerhouses, he will only keep the hand to his family member, the enemy will not keep the hand.” “男人嘛,而且还是杀戮无数的强者,他只会对自己的亲人留手,敌人是不会留手的。” „É...... Good.” Ai Xian is a little low. “额......好吧。”艾娴有点低落。 Is the female student, Ai Xian although likes the male-oriented novel, likes writing male-oriented, but subconsciously was gentler. 到底是女生,艾娴虽然喜欢男频小说,喜欢写男频,不过还是下意识温柔了许多。 Su Hao thinks that said: „Said honestly that your this has a very good merit, your description compared with me.” 苏皓想了想,道:“不过老实的说,你这本有一个很不错的优点,你的描写比我强多了。” „Description?” “描写？” „Em, particularly just rebirth time, the ambiguous plot of that applying medicinal ointment you write is very good, various descriptions have the flavor very much...... cough cough, will it is estimated that attract many readers.” “恩,尤其是刚刚重生的时候,你写的那个抹药的暧昧剧情很不错,各种描写很有味道......咳咳,估计会吸引不少读者。” Ai Xian hear word, small face immediately one red. 艾娴闻言,小脸顿时一红。 Yes, good of ambiguous plot description, was quite good. 是啊,暧昧剧情描写的不错,相当的不错了。 Because Ai Xian actually wrote the ambiguous plot to blush, she also has written the authors of several books, the ambiguous plot was not first time writes. 艾娴倒不是因为自己写了暧昧剧情而脸红,她好歹也是写了好几本书的作者了,暧昧剧情也不是第一次写了。 She is because write the ambiguous time, has blushed with the description of Jin Ping Mei! 她是因为自己写暧昧的时候,用上了金瓶梅的描写而脸红！ On writing style, Gu Yungu the fragrant Jin Ping Mei absolutely is the description high, but is not arrogant, does not do elegantly, is having a rich ambiguous aura obviously, is the writing actually elegantly simple incomparable, shocking. 论文笔,古韵古香的金瓶梅绝对是描写的高而不傲,雅而不作,明明带着一种浓郁的暧昧气息,可是文字却淡雅无比,令人震惊。 She has copied that long book, particularly was being compelled by system, speak unhurriedly and clearly, under earnest transcription. 她抄了那么久的书,尤其是被系统逼着,一字一顿的,认真的抄写下。 Naturally has been familiar with the writing style of Jin Ping Mei. 自然而然的熟悉了金瓶梅的写作风格。 Then ..... 然后..... With own book. 用到了自己的书里。 „Little Apprentice , to continue keep it up, wrote well, gets down originally become a God.” “小徒弟,继续加油吧,好好写,下本就成神了。” „Em! Good master!” “恩！好的师傅！” Ai Xian has closed QQ, earnest revision own article. 艾娴关了QQ,认真的修改起自己的文来。 When a little ‚soft’ after the plot revises, she sighed: „The is crisis that system, you send how a matter?” 等将有点‘软’的剧情修改过来后,她才叹了一口气:“系统,你发的这个危机是怎么一回事？” This afternoon time, system sends in a news. 今天下午的时候,系统发来一条消息。 【Encounters sudden occurance, Host will possibly lose your dearest natural most awesome to be handsome most charming .....( Middle abbreviates 10,000 characters) master.】 【遭遇突发事件,宿主可能会失去你最亲爱最英俊最潇洒最牛逼最帅气最.....（中间省略10000字）的师傅。】 【Asked Host to protect the Sensei-sama chastity, blocked the invasions of other people.( Note, do not look down on this time, you most will respect in the future master possibly to give up your this apprentice.)】 【请宿主务必保护着师傅大人的贞操,挡住其他人的入侵。（注,不要小瞧此时,日后你最尊敬师傅可能会放弃你这个徒弟。）】 „ If has any danger also to understand but actually, “如果是发生什么危险倒也能理解,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com But the protection chastity...... ” Ai Xian frowned. 可是保护贞操......”艾娴皱起眉头来。 „The chastity of man, is so important?” “男人的贞操,有那么重要吗？” Women , the chastity of man who in Hu? 女人也就算了,男人的贞操谁在胡？ Other did not say that many men request the maiden, is how many women some to own boyfriend, requests the virgin? 别的不说,很多男人都要求处女,可是有多少女人对自己的男朋友,要求处男的？ 【Is very important, especially to Host you!】 【很重要,尤其对宿主你来说！】 Also is a significance unclear reply. 又是一个意义不明的回答。 „, Can Sensei-sama be turned several hours by 200 jin (0.5 kg) female Fatty?” Ai Xian starts own brain, how regardless to think that finally also can only think of such a result. “难道说,师傅大人要被200斤女胖子轮几个小时？”艾娴发动自己的脑筋,可是无论怎么想,最终也只能想到这么一个结果。 Em, if this indeed is very dangerous. 恩,如果这样的话的确是很危险。 „, system, what do you have to suggest?” Ai Xian thinks that asked. “呐,系统,你有什么建议吗？”艾娴想了想,问道。 【Invites Host tomorrow, 12 : 00 pm, go......】 【请宿主于明天,中午12点,前往......】