Su Hao is opening the voice with the apprentice. 苏皓正在和徒弟开语音。 „, Teacher, I started to write you to make me write that rebirth of an expert.” “呐,老师,我开始写你让我写点那强者重生流了。” „, Right, feels what kind of?” “哦,是吗,感觉怎么样？” „Feeling...... Hangs is a little big, what later can also write?” “感觉......是不是挂开的有点大,后期还能写什么吗？” „Living of control?” “控制的住吗？” „É...... A little difficult.” “额......有点难。” Su Hao laughs: „neophyte stories you have not imagined to write!” 苏皓哈哈一笑:“小白文没有你想象中好写吧！” „Is......” Ai Xian a little embarrassed acknowledgment. “是的......”艾娴有点不好意思的承认了。 neophyte stories do not look at writing style to be simple, repertoire is not complex, but Su Hao previous life is almost is all writing neophyte stories, truly writes how many have? 小白文别看文笔简单,套路不复杂,但是苏皓前世几乎全是在写小白文,真正写好的有几个？ A rhythm, has killed one group of people. 一个节奏,就干掉了一群人。 Then controls the protagonist strength, has killed one group of people. 然后一个控制主角实力,又干掉了一群人。 „Moreover Teacher, although I the thing that uses you saying that but this such portrait doesn't have the issue?” Ai Xian cannot bear ask. “而且老师,虽然我用上了您说的东西,但是这个这么写真的没问题吗？”艾娴忍不住问道。 „What issue?” Su Hao said. “什么问题？”苏皓道。 „You look, such protagonist, is unitary, slap in the face directly, feeling...... Too monotonous.” “您看,这样的主角,性格单一,打脸直接,感觉......太单调了点。” „You want to say that doesn't have the sentiment, the role not three-dimensional? Said straightforwardly that the role doesn't have the connotation?” “你是想说,没有感情,角色不立体？或者直白的说,角色没有内涵？” „hehehe......” Ai Xian leaves the embarrassed sound. “呵呵呵......”艾娴出不好意思的声音。 although initially saw Su Hao to write the Seven Weapons' time, she has recognized the Su Hao Great Master writing skill. 虽然当初看到苏皓写七种武器的时候,她认定了苏皓大师的手笔。 But now writes web novel, the pattern of that repertoire makes her not adapt very much. 可是现在写网文,那种套路化的模式让她很不适应。 However she feels indeed right, the majority of neophyte stories connotation are not really many, even also some neophyte stories of manufacturing in a rough way, do not attend to the logic, but pursues crisply. 不过她感觉的的确没错,大部分的小白文的内涵真的不多,甚至还有一些粗制滥造的小白文,连逻辑都不顾了,只是追求爽点。 True neophyte stories, is not but simple! 可是真正的小白文,可没有那么简单！ Su Hao thinks that said: „What appearance protagonist in your article is, do you know?” 苏皓想了想,道:“你文里的主角是什么样子,你知道吧？” „Em, the conduct is overbearing, innermost feelings are arrogant, fight is experienced, is good to the person on one's own side, to the bystander powerful, opens to persuasion but not to coercion......” Ai Xian like this field of endeavor. “恩,行事霸道,内心高傲,战斗经验丰富,对自己人好,对外人强势,吃软不吃硬......”艾娴如此道。 This is very standard Xuanhua neophyte stories protagonist. 这是一个很标准的玄幻小白文主角。 „You thought that such character, doesn't have the connotation?” Su Hao asked. “你觉得这样的人物,没有内涵吗？”苏皓问道。 „É...... Is a little.” “额......是有点。” „You thought Battle Through the Heaven that I write calculates has the connotation?” “那你觉得我写的斗破算有内涵的吗？” Ai Xian reply without hesitation: „Teacher writes naturally some!” 艾娴毫不犹豫的回答道:“老师写的当然是有的了！” although Battle Through the Heaven is also neophyte stories, but light preliminary ‚not bullies the youth to be poor’ makes the entire article lose face. 虽然斗破也是小白文,但是光一个前期的‘莫欺少年穷’就让整个文章十分出彩。 „But you carefully analyzed to know, my protagonist, with your protagonist setting overlapped place.” “可是你仔细分析一下就知道了,我的主角,跟你的主角设定很多重叠的地方啊。” „É......” “额......” „Ai Xian, the connotation is makes by story, does not make by the protagonist setting.” Su Hao chuckle, said: „This, I give the classical models of several characters to you.” “艾娴,内涵是由故事弄出来的,不是靠主角设定弄出来的。”苏皓轻笑一声,道:“这样,我给你举几个人物的经典范例吧。” „?” Ai Xian a little ignorant compels. “啊？”艾娴有点懵逼。 However Su Hao actually clear settles the throat, coughs two, is having a meaning proudly, direct start to talk. 不过苏皓却清了清嗓子,咳嗽两声,带着一种傲然之意,直接开口。 The sound is melodious, leading a nobody to be possible and haughtiness. 声音抑扬顿挫,带着一种无人可及的狂傲。 „Hand picks the stars with the livelihood, in society altruism so person!” “手拿日月摘星辰,世间无我这般人！” Su Hao's sang to have the system addition, although sings and reads aloud differently, but after all somewhat common ground. 苏皓的唱歌有系统的加成,虽然歌唱和朗读不同,但是总归有几分共同点。 The short lines, by the profoundness that he read aloud. 短短一句台词,被他诵读的入木三分。 Ai Xian hear word, as if saw an unsurpassed powerhouse, eyes full is proud intent, in Shi is independent. 艾娴闻言,仿佛看到了一个无上强者,双眼满是傲意,于世而独立。 Being proud...... Arrogant...... Even is passing several points of dismal faintly. 自负......高傲......甚至隐隐透着几分悲凉。 „, Ai Xian, you said how you write some character time, is he in some specific environment saying lines proudly, the image so unplentiful?” Su Hao smiles, this awakened Ai Xian. “呐,艾娴,你说如何你写某个人物的时候,他在某种特定的环境傲然的道出如此台词,形象还不丰满吗？”苏皓笑着,这才惊醒了艾娴。 „Again for example......” “再比如......” The Su Hao look changes , to continue to say. 苏皓神色一变,继续道。 „a thousand tribulations, a hundred disasters, permanent in a hurry, in a flash!” “千重劫,百世难,恒古匆匆,弹指间！” „undying body, Inextinguishable soul, shaking the old and illuminating the new, unmanned enemy!” “不死躯,不灭魂,震古烁今,无人敌！” „When counter is chaotic to the Yin-Yang, I used the demon blood to dye the blue sky! Trillion lives are the soldiers, million Gods and Demons will be, Bai Jiangtai leaves, many Gods awe into submission submissive. The subduing the demons stone dyes Saint Blood, seals world Wan demon greatly, dares the day to resist!” “待到阴阳逆乱时,以我魔血染青天！亿万生灵为兵,百万神魔为将,拜将台出,众神慑服。镇魔石染圣者血,大封天下万魔,敢于天抗！” The voice falls, Ai Xian as if feels a dreadful demon prestige, the direct impact horizon. 话音一落,艾娴仿佛感觉到一股滔天魔威,直冲天际。 Even if not add any description, Ai Xian can also feel that ‚person’ image! 哪怕不加任何的形容,艾娴也能感觉的出那‘人’的形象来！ „Again for example......” “再比如......” Su Hao expression one positive, said. 苏皓表情一正,又道。 „Moral bodhi non- fruits of virtue, know me now are I!” “道德菩提非正果,如今方知我是我！” Words although is extremely short, but Ai Xian actually as if saw that from the moral karma escapes, but form. 话语虽然极短,但是艾娴却仿佛看到一个从道德业果脱而出的身影。 On his face, very real, very real, meaning of the liking. 他的脸上,很真,很真,更有一种欢喜之意。 Image? 形象？ Are the images of these people not very complete? 这些人的形象还不够圆满吗？ Connotation? 内涵？ Even if not perform other plots, Ai Xian can also imagine obtains their images, even make up a series of details on the brain, with their passing experiences. 哪怕不加以其他情节,艾娴也能想象得出他们的形象,甚至自己就脑补出来一系列的细节,和他们过往的经历。 This may compared with direct-viewing many that any writing comes! 这可比什么文字都来的直观的多！ „Now understood? The protagonist image, has not related with theme anything, but will write the issue that will not write.” Su Hao says with a smile. “现在懂了吗？主角的形象,跟题材没什么关系,只是会写不会写的问题而已。”苏皓笑着道。 „Yes, Teacher!” Ai Xian is at heart excited, should say. “是,老师！”艾娴心里激动,应道。 Su Hao shows a faint smile, he said not wrong. 苏皓微微一笑,他说的并没有错。 Perhaps neophyte stories cannot like other articles, making people feel the inspiration of any energy, but in the characterization, actually does not fall in leeward. 或许小白文不能象其他文一样,让人感受到什么正能量的鼓舞,但是人物塑造上,却丝毫不落于下风。 Especially previous life that several big shot...... 尤其是前世的那几位大佬...... „Right master.” “对了师傅。” „What matter?” “什么事？” „dōng dōng dōng sound that in your room has broadcast, is what?” Ai Xian cannot bear ask finally. “你房间里一直传来的咚咚咚的声音,是什么啊？”艾娴终于忍不住问道。 Su Hao turned head, looked at one by the dōng dōng dōng straight loud front door that becoming angry out of shame Su Xiaoyi patted. 苏皓扭头,望了一眼被恼羞成怒的苏小怡拍的咚咚咚直响的大门。 Expression tranquil returning said: „All right, the My family cat is playing the gate.” 表情平静的回道:“没事,我家的猫在玩门呢。” Cat that „in teacher your family raises? Moreover can the trivial cat cause such big sound?” “老师你家里什么时候养的猫？而且区区猫能弄出这么大的声音吗？” These words Ai Xian has not said that but said finally: „The teacher, I continued the symbol first.” 这句话艾娴没说出口,只是最终道:“那老师,我先继续码字了。” „Goes.” “去吧。” The voice just hung up, Su Xiaoyi shamed the sound of anger to shout. 语音刚刚挂断,苏小怡羞怒之声就喊了出来。 „Onii... -sama! You come out to me!” “哥哥......大人！你给我出来！” This goods have knocked for two hours, in this period was beats to the door...... 这货已经敲了两个多小时了,期间更是对房门拳打脚踢...... Luckily Su Hao prepared meals and water ahead of time, otherwise exits now, will be shamed the angry Su Xiaoyi to bite to death absolutely. 幸亏苏皓提前准备好了伙食和水,不然现在出去,绝对会被羞怒的苏小怡咬死。 Su Hao looked at entrance one, shrugs, a face indifferent taking earphone, plays the music. 苏皓只是看了门口一眼,耸了耸肩,一脸淡然的带上耳机,放起音乐。 „In any case is not my mistake, who makes you that self-confident makes me study ‚Filthy Speech Using Hate’, but also makes me write any impressions of after-reading...... After I read the feeling am, making me write the impressions of after-reading big shot is real ‚big shot’.” “反正又不是我的错,谁让你那么自信的让我学‘污言以怼’的,还让我写什么读后感......我读后的感觉就是,让我写读后感的大佬是真‘大佬’。” Let the Su Hao study ‚Filthy Speech Using Hate’...... This saying also owes the exit / to speak that she said. 让苏皓学‘污言以怼’......这话也亏她说的出口。 In any case makes a mistake is not Su Hao, Su Hao then leisurely and carefree listened to two hours of music, in this period had eaten one pile of melon seed peanuts, but also watched a movie. 反正弄错的又不是苏皓,苏皓便悠闲的听了两个小时的音乐,期间吃了一堆瓜子花生,还看了一部电影。 After Su Xiaoyi no longer knocks on a door, Su Hao opens the front door. 等苏小怡不再敲门后,苏皓才打开大门。 „Why you did not tell me, were you Filthy Speech Using Hate?” The appearance that Su Xiaoyi clenches jaws, appears in front of Su Hao's immediately. “你为什么不告诉我,你就是污言以怼？”苏小怡咬牙切齿的样子,顿时出现在苏皓的面前。 „Blames me.” Su Hao shrugs: „My net ID is anything, you will not look.” “怪我喽。”苏皓耸耸肩:“我的网名是什么,你自己不会看啊。” „You” “你” „Do your what you, want me to write impressions of after-reading to you again?” “你什么你,要不要我再给你写一篇读后感？” Zizi of Su Xiaoyi two rows of small tooth air/Qi has rubbed, making Su Hao a little afraid. 苏小怡两排小牙气的兹兹的磨了起来,让苏皓有点心虚。 This girl will not nip directly...... 这丫头不会直接咬上来吧...... „Draft?” “稿子呢？” „Ha?” Su Hao stares. “哈？”苏皓一愣。 „I said the draft, Longevity Sword.” Su Xiaoyi clenches teeth saying: „After having magazine these?” “我说稿子,长生剑的。”苏小怡咬牙道:“有杂志的那些之后的没？” „É...... Has.” “额......有是有。” „Gives me to come!” “给我过来！” „Does?” Asking of Su Hao surprise. “干嘛啊？”苏皓诧异的问道。 Su Xiaoyi small face blushed, UU reads 苏小怡小脸一红,UU看书 www.uukanshu.co m www.uukanshu.com Spoke several slurred words in a low voice. 低声说了几句模糊不清的话语。 „What? Haven't I heard?” Su Hao [say / way]. “什么？我没听见？”苏皓愣愣的道。 „I said that I want to look!” “我说,我想看！” The Su Xiaoyi's look, seemed saying. 苏小怡的眼神,仿佛在说。 You asked again, I bit to death you! 你再问一遍,我就咬死你！ „also......” “还有......” „What?” “什么？” „A bit faster writes......” “快点写......” Please remember this book first round domain name:. Cell phone version reading website: 请记住本书首发域名:。手机版阅读网址: