Su Haois lying downon the sandplays the cell phone.苏皓正躺在沙上玩手机呢。Recentlyhehad tried hard, finished«Seven Weapons»completely, thenreturned to an idleday.
最近他努力了一把,把《七种武器》全部写完,接下来又回到了一种无所事事的日子。Howeverfortunately, few days agoresentmentLuo Xintime, healsoknewmanyacquaintances.
不过还好,前些日子怼落心的时候,他也认识了不少的熟人。Hasfans in hisgroup, there is other author.
有他群里的粉丝,也有别的作者。Authorapplication of thatseveralhelpaddshisgood friend, invitinghimto enter the group, healsoagreed.
那几个帮忙的作者申请加他好友,邀请他入群,他也同意了。Naturally, Ai Xiancreatedonenewgroupneophyte storiesauthortaking advantage ofthis.
当然,艾娴借此又创建了一个新群小白文作者群。Insidefullis the authors, is not writingneophyte stories, wantsto writeneophyte stories.
里面满满的都是作者,其中不是在写小白文,就是想写小白文的。Su Haois teachingin the author.苏皓正在作者群里讲课。„neophyte stories, is direct.”
“小白文,就是要直接。”„Thischapterwritesyouto suppressme, the ending of chaptermusthaveprotagonistto startto a slap in the face, before or, makes the readerknow that youaffirmedthencanslap in the face, cannotdelay, constrainsis a toxin, will pressis pressingwill be making the readerrun away.”
“这一章写你打压我,章节的结尾就必须要有主角开始打脸,或者之前就让读者知道你肯定接下来能打脸,万万不能拖延,过于压抑是一种毒点,压着压着会让读者跑掉的。”„Hownaturally, to a slap in the faceto writeis not awkward, is not stiffis an issue, the toostiffcrisparticle, sameis unable to succeed, at this timewanted......”
“当然,如何将打脸写的不尴尬,不生硬就是一个问题,太生硬的爽文,一样无法成功,这时就要......”althoughteachingdoes not havemoney earned, butlooked, inseveralpeopleon the scenehave helpedintheirface, Su Hao not parsimoniousdirection.虽然讲课没有钱赚,但是看在在场的几人都帮过自己的面子上,苏皓也不吝啬一点指点。„So that's how it is......”
“原来如此......”„Great God Filthy Speech Using Hatesaidright, no wonder before me, writes the old booktime, the resultis not quite good.”
“污神说的对啊,难怪我之前写老书的时候,成绩不太好。”„That, Iunify the view of Great God Filthy Speech Using Hate, andthrew the streetbookto contrastbeforehandpopular book, presentlythrowsin the streetbookalsoto havewriting styleto be good, washisextremelyoppressiveLord, the resultinsteadis unsatisfactory!”
“那,我结合污神的说法,把之前的火书和扑街书对比了一下,现扑街书里也有文笔好的,可是他却太过虐主,成绩反而不佳!”„Said, actuallythesepopular bookwrite is also the crisparticle?”
“这么说,那些火书其实写的也是爽文?”everybodydiscussedone after another.众人议论纷纷。In the groupdoes not have the platinumauthor, highalsoon a Great Godlevel, majority is fivelevelsandfourlevels of Small God.
群里没有白金作者,最高也就一个大神级,大部分都是五级、四级的小神。Suddenly, the authorasked: „RightGreat God Filthy Speech Using Hate, yousaidwrites the traditionalliterature, calledFilthy Speech Using Hate?”
忽然,有一个作者问道:“对了污神,您说的写传统文学,是不是也叫污言以怼?”„Well? Do youknow?”Su Haosurprise[say / way].
“咦?你知道?”苏皓诧异的道。„Em, inmagazine that Isubscribe, piece of verygoodWuxianovel, Iat that timesurprisewhichauthorlooksis, has not thought that is the authornameis‚Filthy Speech Using Hate’, isn't this Great God Filthy Speech Using Hatename?”
“恩,我订阅的杂志里,有一片非常不错的武侠小说,我当时诧异的看是哪个作者呢,没想到是作者名是‘污言以怼’,这不就是污神的名字啊?”„, Thatshouldbethisissue.”Su Haoshrugs, the typingsaid: „Calculates the time, almostshould.”
“哦,那应该是这一期的吧。”苏皓耸耸肩,打字道:“算算时间,也差不多该了。”Generally speaking, the magazinepublishes6yourarticles, will also giveyourauthorto mail a magazine, ascommemorating.
一般来说,杂志登6你的文章,还会给你作者邮寄一本杂志,作为纪念。Howeverobviously, magazinetablecompared withmailonquickmany.
但是显然,杂志表的度比邮寄的度快上不少。„Igo, Great God Filthy Speech Using Hateopenednew book, Imusthave a look!”
“我去,污神开新书了,那我得去看看!”„Whatmagazine? I must buy a book!”
“什么杂志?我也要去买一本!”„«Martial Artist World», novel called«Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword».”
“《武者世界》,小说名叫《七种武器之长生剑》。”„Good! Ilooknow!”
“好!我现在就去找!”„Has thankedyou.”Su Haosays with a smile, buthe is also very curioushisWendeng6to come outanyappearance.
“谢谢了你们。”苏皓笑着道,不过他也很好奇自己的文登6出来什么模样的。Naturally, hedoes not have the thoughtsto exitto buy, he who innormallydoes not read the magazine, wantsto look for a bookstore to depend on the map.
当然,他没心思出去买,平日里不看杂志的他,想找一个书店都得靠地图。Howeverdoesn't matter, Su Haohas the meansto attainmostupdate the magazine.
不过没关系,苏皓有办法拿到最新版的杂志。Knocked on a doorin the Su Xiaoyientrance.
在苏小怡门口敲了敲门。„Xiaoyi? Inroom?”
“小怡?在屋里吗?”
The slightlychillysoundresounds.
略显清冷的声音响起。„Gatehas not locked, comes.”
“门没锁,进来吧。”Su Haoshrugs, pushes the doorto enter.苏皓耸耸肩,推门而入。Enters the Su Xiaoyi'sroom, whatheaving in sightisthatfamiliarpinkisfocusmain keyyoung girlwindlady's room.
走进苏小怡的房间,映入眼帘的是那熟悉粉红色为主基调的少女风闺房。Su Xiaoyiis lyingon the bed the looks atmagazine, twoslenderlonglegsswing, are having a uniquerhythm, is leisurely and carefreeandcomfortable.苏小怡正趴在床上看着杂志,两条纤细的长腿一摇一摇,带着一种独特的节奏感,悠闲而自在。„Xiaoyi, your does herehave«Martial Artist World»?”Su Haoasked.
“小怡,你这边有《武者世界》吗?”苏皓问道。Right, Su Hao'smeansbySu Xiaoyi!
没错,苏皓的办法就是靠苏小怡!Thisyounger sisterlikesWuxialovingcrazy, lovescrazilycrazy, anymartial artsforum, martial artsmagazine, Wuxianovel......
这妹妹爱武侠爱到疯癫,爱到痴狂,什么武术论坛,武术杂志,武侠小说......All and martial arts, fight, Wuxiato have the book of relations, ishermostloves!
一切和武术、打斗、武侠有关系的书,都是她的最爱!„Em.”Su Xiaoyisaidin a soft voicethatis not excessivelifts.
“恩。”苏小怡轻声道,不过头都抬一下。„Is reading?”Su Haosaid.
“在看书?”苏皓道。„Em.”
“恩。”„Wuxianovel?”
“武侠小说?”„Em.”
“恩。”
The voice of young girl, light and livelyclear, such as the orioleleaves the valleyto be limpidandinteresting to listen.
少女的声音,轻灵清脆,如黄莺出谷般清澈而动听。althoughSu Xiaoyireturned toseveral, butSu Haodoes not needto lookknowsthatthisgoodsimmersedinWuxia Worldnow.虽然苏小怡回了几句,但是苏皓不用看都知道,这货现在已经沉浸在武侠世界里。Heranswering, is only the subconsciousnessshouldone, simplyhas not been distracted.
她的回话,只是下意识应一声而已,根本没有走心。Su Haohas not disturbed, Wuxiamagazinesingleis not in any case long, Su XiaoyibeforeSu Haocomes, was looking, lookedat mostagainseveralminutesalsolooked.苏皓也没打扰,反正武侠杂志单篇都不长,苏小怡在苏皓进来前,就在看了,顶多再看个几分钟也就看完了。Sure enough, crossed a smallmeeting, Su Xiaoyilonghad breathed a sigh of relief.
果不其然,过了一小会,苏小怡长舒了一口气。„Really, suchnovelWuxia! Beforethesewere the trash!”
“果然,这样的小说才武侠!之前那些都是垃圾!”Hercorners of the mouthbrim with wipe the satisfiedsmiling face, as ifate the glutton of peerlessdelicacyto be ordinary, is having the fullhappy heart.
她的嘴角洋溢起一抹满足的笑容,仿佛吃到了绝世美味的老饕一般,带着满满的幸福感。At this time, shepassed the godto come, to noteSu Hao'sbody.
这个时候,她才晃过神来,注意到苏皓的身体。„Well, whenOnii... -sama do youcome in?”
“咦,哥哥......大人你什么时候进来的?”„A moment ago, Ihad knocked on a door, youalsocomplied.”Su Haosighed.
“刚才,我敲门了,你也答应了。”苏皓叹了一口气。
The Su Xiaoyieyewinks, blushing face.苏小怡眼睛一眨,脸上一红。Good, shewallows, is unable to extricate oneself.
好吧,她又沉迷其中,无法自拔了。Bookworth that howeverthistime, shelooks atmakes the personwallow!
不过这一次,她看的书值得让人沉迷!„Whatmatterhas?”Su Xiaoyiasked.
“有什么事吗?”苏小怡问道。Su Haosaid: „, Yourherehas the latest magazine, «Martial Artist World», has a looktaking advantage ofme.”苏皓道:“哦,你这边有最新的杂志吧,《武者世界》的,借我看看。”„Did youalsostartto read the Wuxianovel?”Su Xiaoyihearword, high and lowhas sweptSu Hao, the surprise[say / way].
“你也开始看武侠小说了?”苏小怡闻言,上下扫了一眼苏皓,诧异的道。„É...... Is.”Su Haoshrugs.
“额......算是吧。”苏皓耸耸肩。„Em, is very good.”Su Xiaoyinodded, serious[say / way]: „The Wuxianovelis the proper way, next timerememberswrites the songtime, writesto select the Wuxiadirection the song.”
“恩,很好。”苏小怡点点头,一本正经的道:“武侠小说才是正途,下次记得写歌的时候,多写点武侠方向的歌曲。”„Saidthe writing style mirrors the writer, the songwantsto come is also so, thereforeyouwriteto selectMartial Arts and Wuxiasong.”
“都说文如其人,歌曲想来也是如此,所以你多写点武打、武侠的歌曲吧。”„Thisis the manshoulddo, alwaysdo not writethesesentiments the lovething, looks at not chatty......”
“这才是男人应该做的,别老写那些情啊爱啊的东西,看着也不腻歪......”Su Hao: „......”苏皓:“......”althoughisgirl, butdeep love of Su XiaoyitoWuxiais hardto imaginesimply.虽然是妹纸,但是苏小怡对武侠的热爱简直难以想象。Su Haoevensuspected, waits to gain admission to the universitytime, Su Xiaoyimeets the non-bulletinanythingmilitary academy, studiesoneset of military physical culturefist, or the simpleuniversitymass organizationchoosesKarate, Taekwondoand othermass organizations.苏皓甚至都怀疑,等考大学的时候,苏小怡会不会报个什么军校,来学一套军体拳,或者干脆大学社团选择空手道、跆拳道等社团。Em, was admitted toShaolin Monasteryalsoto have the possibility, althoughdoes not know that Shaolin Monasterydoes receive the lay familygirl student.
恩,考入少林寺也是有可能的,虽然不知道少林寺收不收俗家女弟子。„Was rareyou to look atWuxia, Iborrowedyou.”Saying, Su Xiaoyitakes that oneselfjustlooked atfrom the bed, has handed over.
“难得你想看武侠了,那我就借你吧。”说着,苏小怡从床上把自己刚看的这本拿起来,递了过去。„Is this«Martial Artist World»? Haven't youlooked?”Su Haosurprise[say / way].
“这是《武者世界》?你还没看完吧?”苏皓诧异的道。„Em, thereforedo not spoil.”Su Xiaoyisaid.
“恩,所以不要弄坏了。”苏小怡道。„OryoulookedfirstthatIam not anxious.”Su Haosaid.
“要不你先看,我不急。”苏皓道。Su Xiaoyisaid: „All right, a bestnovelIlookedin any case, otherverytrash.”苏小怡道:“没事,反正最好的一篇小说我已经看完了,其他的都挺垃圾的。”„......”Su Haoturns the table of contents,
“哦......”苏皓翻到目录,UU看书www.uukanshu.com
www.uukanshu.comSearches forownnovel, at the same timeasked: „Whatnovel do youlike?”
搜自己的小说,一边问道:“你喜欢什么的小说啊?”„Thatisto callanythingis coming...... Was right, «Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword», writeshas the flavor.”
“那本是叫什么来着......哦,对了,《七种武器之长生剑》,写的真有味道。”Su Xiaoyiwas saying, excitedstartAinleygets up: „Whatthisnovelwritesisreallyattractive, is leading you makings that is hardto imagine, protagonistis also good, the supporting roleis also good, specialhandsome!”苏小怡说着,兴奋的开始安利起来:“这篇小说写的是真的好看,带着一种你难以想象的气质,主角也好,配角也好,都特别的帅!”„Youwill write the songalso to study the style of studentfamily|homenext time, writessuchwriting, is the man! Canbe likedby the female student!”
“你下次写歌也得学学人家的风格,写这样的文字,才是男人!才能被女生喜欢!”„Youborrowedmymagazine, no matterotherI, butthisnovelyoumustlook!”
“你借了我的杂志,别的我不管,但是这篇小说你必须看!”Saying, sheveryearnest[say / way]: „Remembersthatlooked, writesimpressions of after-readingtome, thousandcharacterscratch coats!”
说着,她很认真的道:“记得,看完后给我写一篇读后感,千字打底的!”Pleaserememberthisbookfirst rounddomain name:. Cell phoneversionreadingwebsite:
请记住本书首发域名:。手机版阅读网址:
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