High-speed writing first round 高速文字首发 The cell phone read synchronously 手机同步阅读 The opening, is an atmospheric boundless poetry. 开头,就是一首大气磅礴的诗词。 Short four words, one type the scenery that has the fairyism described. 短短四句话,就将一种极具仙气的景色描绘出来。 „Li Bai? Who is Li Bai? How haven't I heard so the atmospheric boundless poetry?” Ye Zi in the eyes flashes through wipes the doubts, immediately searches. “李白？李白是谁？我怎么没听说过如此大气磅礴的诗词？”叶子眼中闪过一抹疑惑,当即搜索一番。 However does not have a result, then can only be 然而却没有一个结果,那么就只能是 „Poem that author write?!” “作者自己写的诗？！” Ye Zi stares with big eyes, the writer wrote novel in the ancient times time, meets each point of volume to add an own poetry frequently. 叶子瞪大眼睛,古代文人写小说的时候,经常会每一分卷加一首自己的诗词。 However the modern people who has this ability? 但是现代人谁有这种能力？ „Moreover what relations does this poem have with the Wuxia novel?” The Ye Zi heart doubts, continued to look. “而且这首诗跟武侠小说有什么关系？”叶子心头疑惑,继续看了下去。 Then she discovered that originally in «Longevity Sword» the male protagonist name was called ‚Bai Yujing’, but his saber called ‚Longevity Sword’! 然后她才发现,原来《长生剑》中男主角的名字就叫‘白玉京’,而他的佩剑则叫‘长生剑’！ Coordinates the above poetry, held the eye of Ye Zi all of a sudden. 配合上面的诗词,一下子就抓住了叶子的眼睛。 Moreover the setting of Bai Yujing this protagonist is also entirely different from normal Wuxia, when he enters the stage on strong fearfulness! 而且白玉京这个主角的设定也与正常武侠截然不同,他出场时就强的可怕！ The obsolete scabbard, entangles the satin on sword hilt similarly to be also obsolete, could not look that he has anything murderous aura. However the sword in this obsolete scabbard, is much sharper. 陈旧的剑鞘,缠在剑柄上的缎子也同样陈旧,根本看不出来他有什么杀气。然而这陈旧剑鞘中的剑,却锋利得可怕。 This is in the rivers and lakes the most fearful sword -- Bai Yujing's Longevity Sword! 这本就是江湖中最可怕的一把剑--白玉京的长生剑! The person in rivers and lakes fears Bai Yujing, fears the Bai Yujing's sword. Because only then homicide person, can kill him from nobody! 江湖中的人怕白玉京,怕白玉京的剑。因为只有他杀人,从没有人能杀死他! Su Hao chooses this novel reason to be very simple by the novel of person is only the novel, the Gu Long's novel, almost can regard is the art regards! 苏皓选择这部小说的理由很简单被人的小说只是小说,古龙的小说,几乎可以当成是艺术来看待！ He integrated in play, inference, poetry and other elements the Wuxia novel, by the philosophy of novel elaboration life. 他将戏剧、推理、诗歌等元素融入武侠小说中来,更以小说阐述人生的哲理。 This is no exception, in the «Longevity Sword» surface writes is the sword, but in fact writes, is actually the smile strength. 这一部也不例外,《长生剑》表面上写得是剑,但实际上写的,却是微笑的力量。 Therefore Bai Yujing most fearful is not his sword, but is his smiling. 所以白玉京最可怕的不是他的剑,而是他的笑。 Because his smiling made many rivers and lakes jorums defeat under his sword, his smiling also innumerable made itself be saved from death from others' sword. 因为他的笑使许多江湖大腕败在了他的剑下,他的笑也无数次使自己从别人的剑下死里逃生。 «Longevity Sword» not only writes Longevity Sword master Bai Yujing, but also writes woman Yuan Yixia. 《长生剑》不光是写长生剑的主人白玉京,还写弱女子袁紫霞。 She cleans up the gateway, every large or small martial arts world Expert set at the deathtrap by her with ease. 她一个人来清理门户,大大小小的武林高手被她轻轻松松地置之死地。 „A person, so long as understood that uses own strong point, does not need also same to strike down the person with martial arts.” “一个人只要懂得利用自己的长处,根本不必用武功也一样能够将人击倒。” Her strong point smiles regardless of the how sharp sword, cannot compare that movingly smiles. 她的长处是笑无论多么锋利的剑,也比不上那动人的一笑。 The life forever is a fraud, any matter will happen, nobody knows that who can laugh last. 人生永远是一场骗局,任何事都会发生,没有人知道谁能笑到最后。 The Ye Zi one breath will put in order a novel to look, then in end of article, has discovered a few words of author. 叶子一口气将整部小说看完,然后在文章的末尾,发现了作者的一句话。 „The first weapon that therefore I said that is not the sword, but smiles, only then smiles to conquer the will of the people. When you understand this truth, should receive your sword to smile!” “所以我说的第一种武器,并不是剑,而是笑,只有笑才能真的征服人心。所以当你懂得这道理,就应该收起你的剑来多笑一笑！” Trembles!!! 战栗！！！ Ye Zi becomes the Editor enough five years, has looked at Wuxia novel more than thousand, never have so had felt! 叶子当上编辑足足五年,看过的武侠小说不下千部,从未有过如此感觉！ Obviously is only a novel, even in the novel is short story, the overall 20,000-30,000 characters, but makes her deep has wallowed, finally the words of author, is incomparable exciting. 明明只是一部小说,甚至在小说中都是短篇,总体不过两三万字,但是却让她深深的沉迷了进去,最后作者的话语,也是无比的扣人心弦。 „Does a Wuxia novel, have such charm unexpectedly?” Ye Zi stares with big eyes, her goose flesh got up. “一篇武侠小说,居然也有如此魅力吗？”叶子瞪大眼睛,她鸡皮疙瘩都起来了。 As Editor she cannot help but gives birth so sigh with emotion. 身为编辑的她都不由得生出如此感慨。 The writing, has shakes the will of the people the strength! 文字,有都撼动人心的力量！ This words she had already heard, is to the present, she first time by oneself felt the feeling of that trembling! 这种话语她早就听说过,可是到了现在,她才第一次亲身感受到那种战栗的感觉！ „Wizard, who the author of this piece of novel is, is really the wizard!” “鬼才,这片小说的作者是谁,真乃鬼才！” She turns hastily looks for the front information, then had discovered a little makes her ascertain the unclear name. 她连忙翻找前面的信息,然后发现了一个有点让她捉摸不清的名字。 Filthy Speech Using Hate? 污言以怼？ What name is this? Which Great Master had such one to conform to the new times characteristics name? 这是什么名字？哪位大师起了这么一个符合新时代特色的名字？ Yes, Great Master. 是的,大师。 She had recognized that which Great Master recent work this absolutely is, but has used new pen name. 她已经认定,这绝对是哪位大师的新作,只是用了一个新笔名而已。 „It is not good! I must hurry to tell Editor!” She without hesitation, direct impact Editor office. “不行！我得赶紧告诉主编！”她毫不犹豫,直冲主编办公室。 The Editor working space and Editor office distance is not far, looks at of all Editor surprise she, looks at she runs into the Editor office, then draws Editor to come out. 编辑的工作区域和主编办公室距离不远,所有编辑都诧异的看着她,看着她冲进主编办公室,然后拉着主编出来。 Editor Feng Yun she draws before her computer, above is putting is Su Hao's «Longevity Sword». 主编风云被她拉到自己的电脑前,上面放着的就是苏皓的《长生剑》。 The drafts of 20,000-30,000 characters, in quick that the front of these professionals look, at most ten minutes can read. 两三万字的稿子,在这些专业人士的面前看的很快,顶多十分钟就能阅读完。 But Feng Yun actually looked repeatedly, has used for a half hour, raised the head. 可是风云却看了一遍又一遍,足足用了半个小时,才抬起头来。 He stares, this discovers all Editor surprise looks at he. 他一愣,这才发现所有的编辑都诧异的看着他。 Feng Yun stares, then a chuckle sound track: „I think that perhaps the gold medal of this Wuxia article, did not have the suspense!” 风云一愣,然后轻笑一声道:“我想,这次武侠征文的金奖,或许已经没有悬念了！” Such remarks, an audience silence. 此言一出,全场一片寂静。 Because the people of familiar Feng Yun attitude know that he is not one person who likes speaking at a venture! 因为熟悉风云作风的人都知道他可不是一个喜欢乱说话的人！ ...... ...... Ai Xian looks unfamiliar not to be possible the love expression, collapses before the computer table. 艾娴一脸生无可恋的表情,瘫倒在电脑桌前。 Her symbol many years, never have the so pitiful expression. 她码字多年,从未有过如此可怜兮兮的表情。 On the cheek brings blushing that is wiping unable to stop. 偏偏脸蛋上带着一抹止不住的羞红。 She has copied Jin Ping Mei of 50,000 characters, in which the happiness of various lady's room, she has written more than ten types...... 她已经抄了50000字的金瓶梅了,其中的各种闺房之乐,她写了不下十种...... Let one say individually has married, the girl is written this type of thing including the body by the male student has looked at...... No wonder living of her face does not have to be possible the love expression. 让一个别说结婚了,连身子都没有被男生看过的女孩写这种东西......难怪她一脸的生无可恋的表情。 „I...... Was tarnished......” “我......被玷污了......” 【Host little pulls these uselessly, a bit faster turned on the computer, Su Hao must start to your teaching.】 【宿主少扯那些没用的,快点打开电脑,苏皓就要开始对你的讲课了。】 The system devil sound appears. 系统魔鬼般的声音出现。 „Right...... Teaching......” Ai Xian in the eyes appears wipes the hope, right, her also web novel, the dream of her also become a God. “对......讲课......”艾娴眼中浮现一抹希望,对,她还有网络小说,她还有成神之梦。 Ai Xian is supporting body, opens the dialog box. 艾娴强撑着身体,打开对话框。 „Teacher, you in?” “老师,您在吗？” „, You came out, happen, I just want to speak your article to you.” “哦,你出来了啊,正好,我正想跟你讲一下的你的文呢。” Quick of Su Hao reply, obviously also in front of computer. 苏皓回复的很快,显然也在电脑前。 „Asked the teacher to direct.” “请老师指点。” „First, did your «Heavenly Venerate Battle Qi» protagonist disposition change one time? When about 300.” “首先,你的《斗气天尊》主角性格是不是变了一次？在大约300张的时候。” „É...... You looked, at that time I read the Snow Clear's new book, was fascinated, cannot help but......” “额......您看出来了啊,那个时候我看雪泓的新书,入了迷,就不由得......” „That is indecisive disposition, but your this obviously is the aggressive disposition, actually the midway turns indecisive...... Em, then about 500 trade the disposition that a color has narrowed the eyes.” “那本是优柔寡断的性格吧,可是你这本明明是霸气的性格,却中途变成优柔寡断......恩,然后500张左右又换了一个色眯眯的性格。” „cough cough, that is because looks......” “咳咳,那是因为看......” „You were too affected easily, others books, the protagonist disposition is continuously, do you study them to do? Must study also studies with your protagonist disposition and world setting same book!” “你太容易被影响了,人家的书,主角性格都是一直的,你学他们干什么？要学也学跟你主角性格、世界设定一样的书啊！” „......” “哦......” „A also matter, do you have to discover that your heroine's disposition is a little overlapped?” “还有一件事,你有没有发现你女主的性格有点重叠？” „Overlapped?” “重叠？” „Yes, this first heroine, Saintess Xue Yuanzhai, is the clever disposition, second heroine, the Heavenly Blade Wang Ming's daughter, is the clever disposition, then the also demon teaches the saintess...... The demon teaches also to be clever unexpectedly, you are really fierce.” “是啊,这个第一女主,雪缘斋圣女,是乖巧的性格,第二女主,天刀王明的女儿,是乖巧的性格,然后还有魔教圣女......魔教居然也能乖巧,你真是厉害。” „But, I looked that on Empty Dragon Forum said that the men like cleverly......” “可是,我看龙空论坛上说,男人都喜欢乖巧的......” „Likes, but your this image was completely consistent was not good! They besides fluctuating a status, also what different?” “是喜欢,不过你这形象完全一致了也不行啊！她们除了变幻一个身份之外,还有什么不同的吗？” „......” “......” Su Hao is also no trace of politeness, own previous life looked at the experience and Ai Xian's of book book directly likes contrasts, stresses several shortcomings. 苏皓也是毫不客气,直接把自己前世看喜欢的书的经验和艾娴的书对比一下,抓出好几个缺点。 In fact talked into the poisonous point more appropriate, Su Hao read her book time, was almost poisoned to death! 实际上说成毒点更恰当一点,苏皓看她书的时候,差点中毒身亡！ If not this is apprentice, Su Hao is unable to continue watching this type of book absolutely! 如果不是这位是徒弟的话,苏皓绝对看不下去这种书！ However under the Su Hao's venomous tongue, Ai Xian instead gradually recovered. 不过在苏皓的毒舌之下,艾娴反而渐渐恢复起了元气。 She even also puts out the notebook, a main point character character that Su Hao said that has recorded. 她甚至还拿出笔记本,将苏皓说的要点一字一字的记录了下来。 „Teacher said also really makes sense...... No wonder he can write the result that good article.” Ai Xian record, while the heart said. “老师说的还真是有道理......难怪他能写出成绩那么好的文。”艾娴一边记录,一边心道。 „If can make him direct well this......” “如果能一直让他指点该多好......” 【dīng dōng!】 【叮咚！】 【Triggering straight line Mission two!】 【触发直线任务二！】 【You have felt the charm and strength of that god common man initially, now is you approaches his time! As the disciple, should take care the master personal!】 【您已经初步感受到了那个神一般的男人的魅力和实力,现在就是您靠近他的时候！身为弟子,本就应该贴身服侍师傅的！】 【 Side Mission 2: Asked Host to enter in Su Hao's Family, 【支线任务二:请宿主走进苏皓家里,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Face-to-face learns writing technique from Su Hao. 】 向苏皓面对面学习写作之法。】 【Mission Reward: Writing Speed + 1.】 【任务奖励:码字速度+1。】 The Ai Xian body trembles, asked hastily: „Wait / Etc., Mission Failure?” 艾娴身子一颤,连忙问道:“等等,任务失败呢？” ...... 切...... She as if hears one silent light. 她似乎听见一声无声的轻哼。 【Failure Punishment: An earnest transcription book.】 【失败惩罚:认认真真的抄写一本书。】 „What book?” Ai Xian asked hastily. “什么书？”艾娴连忙问道。 【*.】 【*。】 Kitty that split second, Ai Xian as if has a fit of bad temper is the same, the eye shrinks suddenly. 一瞬间,艾娴仿佛炸毛的猫咪一样,眼睛猛然一缩。 Compared with giving a name implicit point Jin Ping Mei, * these three characters are really...... More direct-viewing! 比起起名含蓄点的金瓶梅,*这三个字实在是......更加直观！ „This Mission, cannot be defeated absolutely!” “这次任务,绝对不能失败！”