MGHAS :: Volume #3

#208: The penalty duty starts


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High-speed writing first round 高速文字首发 The cell phone read synchronously 手机同步阅读 Does not know that is bad start that Su Hao makes, then to award time, these traditional writer although same taunts, but web novel no longer come under attack does not hit back. 不知道是不是苏皓开的坏头,接下来颁奖的时候,那些传统作家虽然一样嘲讽,但是网络小说家们不再是挨打不还手了。 This traditional writer said: You write does not conform with the historical detail.” 这位传统作家说:“你写的一点都不合乎历史细节。” That side web novel writer asked back: You know that what is the history? I look from «Selected Sources on the Literature and History», is it is right, is you are right?” 那边网文作家就反问:“你知道什么是历史吗?我是从《文史资料选辑》上找的,是它对,还是你对?” This said: Your this plot writes is unreasonable, where will have the enemy also to put a protagonist horse?.” 这位说:“你这剧情写的一点都不合理,哪有敌人还会放主角一马的?。” That side asked back: You know that what is the plot? The reason in front of me writing haven't you seen?” 那边就反问:“你知道什么叫剧情吗?我前面写的理由你没看到?” This said: Your metropolis writes extremely, did Vice-Director set out that many police vehicles? How possible!” 这位说:“你都市写的太过了,副局长出动那么多警车?怎么可能!” That side asked back: „Do you know the Vice-Director right? I have checked the material for this reason specially, what material you have read, mentioned listens?” 那边就反问:“你知道副局长权利吗?我为此特意查过资料,你看过什么资料,说来听听?” Similar dialog almost proliferates at the entire to award ceremony. 类似的对话几乎遍布整个颁奖典礼上。 Suddenly, at daggers drawn. 一时间,剑拔弩张。 However looks like disdaining of Su Hao that not mincing matter not to have actually, web novel authors one after another puts out the proof that oneself wrote at that time, showed directly they are chaotic despise, oneself anything does not understand, but also installs the big tail wolf stiffly. 不过像苏皓那种毫不掩饰的不屑倒是没有,网文作者们纷纷拿出自己当时写的证明,直接证明他们就是混乱鄙视,自己什么都不懂,还硬生生装大尾巴狼。 Xuanhua is good, these traditional authors of appraisal history oppressively had almost not died by the web novel authors. 玄幻还好,那些评价历史的传统作者差点没被网文作者们虐死。 The historical most tasteful historical data, your writes the novel, said that I did make a mistake? 历史最讲究史料,你一个写小说的,说我错了? I write according to the historical data, was I makes a mistake? Did you make a mistake? 我按照史料写的,是我错了?还是你错了? They admit defeat one after another, both sides even more are also in sharp opposition. 他们接连吃瘪,双方也愈发针锋相对。 When each refuted Great God of traditional author to leave office, always as if by prior agreement showed a faint smile toward Su Hao, seemed expressing anything. 偏偏每一个反驳了传统作者的大神下台时,总是会不约而同的朝着苏皓微微一笑,仿佛在表示着什么。 Is air/Qi Luo Xin and the others of blew the nose to stare. 更是气的落心等人吹鼻子瞪眼睛的。 ...... ...... Finally, the annual meeting ended. 最终,年会结束。 Going home that Su Hao does not care about completely, he has harvested a literary female apprentice, gave back to itself to add Mission. 苏皓满不在意的回家,他收获了一个文青女徒弟,还给自己加了一个任务 His Baidu It, searches the Wuxia magazine, the goal is these magazines that Luo Xin said. 百度了一下,搜索武侠杂志,目标就是落心说的那些杂志。 Happen to recently had a vacation, is idling being all right, he plans to write a novel again. 正好最近放假,闲着没事,他打算再写一本小说。 Right, must with others directly anus! 没错,就是要跟人家正面肛! He of anus is paralyzed, he of anus is panic at the news. 肛的他半身不遂,肛的他闻风丧胆。 Then, some people will not find fault! 然后,才不会有人来找茬! Su Hao did not impulse for a while had this decision, and farsighted. 苏皓并不是一时冲动就有了这个决定,而且深谋远虑。 The need draft of Wuxia magazine are not many, by Su Hao's fast, even if the spare time sufficiently completes. 武侠杂志的需要稿子都不多,以苏皓的手速,哪怕是业余时间都足以完成。 This traditional literature is very easy to be reorganized as the television work, not like Su Hao's Battle Through the Heaven, is long, if cranks up TV series, does not know that 500 volumes can pat. 偏偏这种传统文学很容易被改编为影视作品,不像苏皓的斗破,那么长,如果拍成电视剧的话,都不知道500集能不能拍完。 Happen to he then must work as one to prepare director, coming one to suit itself to photograph the article that to be just right. 正好他接下来也要当一名‘预备导演’了,来一本适合自己拍摄的文正好。 Left has a look right to flip, finally, Su Hao decides to submit a piece of writing to a named «Martial Artist World» magazine company. 左看看右翻翻,最终,苏皓决定投稿到一部名为《武者世界》的杂志社。 The reason is very simple, one, the backbone of this magazine company is not these people who Su Hao runs into today, with Luo Xin and the others in the magazine company is the competitor. 原因很简单,一,这个杂志社的顶梁柱不是苏皓今天遇到的那些人,更是跟落心等人在的杂志社是竞争对手。 Similarly a also reason is...... 同样还有一个原因就是...... This magazine company recently in doing one was called Rivers and Lakes Novice the Wuxia article, Su Hao although in web novel was Great God, however in the traditional literature was a new person...... 这个杂志社最近在搞一个叫做‘江湖新手’的武侠征文,苏皓虽然网文大神,但是在传统文学里还是一个新人...... Em, can throw! 恩,可以一投! Writes anything...... short story, suits the reorganization, can practice acquiring a skill by oneself this new person director, but also is insufficient too to waste, that......” “写点什么呢......短篇,适合改编,能让自己这个新人导演练手,还不至于太浪费,那就......” Su Hao thinks that makes a title in the computer. 苏皓想了想,在电脑打出一个标题。 «Seven Weapons: Longevity Sword». 七武器之长生剑》。 ...... ...... Aiya, has acknowledged as teacher with great difficulty, system, you said that what I can make Su Hao direct my? Let him help to have a look at the old book? Isn't good, the old book is about to terminate, 2 million characters, are too really many, I write not good......” 哎呀,好不容易拜师了,系统,你说我要不要让苏皓指点我什么?让他帮忙看看老书?不行不行不行,老书都快完结了,2000000字,实在太多,我写的又不好......” Makes him help to have a look at the new book, but the creativity of my new book has not decided well ..... “让他帮忙看看新书吧,可是我新书的创意还没有决定好.....” Must take all creativities, making the teacher help me elect?” “要不要把所有创意都拿出来,让老师帮我选一下?” In Ai Xian went home, is filled with excitedly. 艾娴回到家里,满心兴奋。 Her rented room is a little small, is only a small single room, the position is not quite good, belongs to suburb Chengzhong Village. 她的出租屋有点小,只是一个小小的单间,位置也不太好,属于郊区城中村。 However that not big room responds is actually well-mannered, does not lose succinctly decorates, has the small thoughts of daughter family|home. 不过那不大的房间搭理的却是规规矩矩,简洁而不失装点,颇有女儿家的小心思。 Host, please allow this system to remind you, your Failure Punishment had not finished.】 宿主,请允许本系统提醒你,你的失败惩罚还没有结束呢。】 „, Is copies from a book, all right, that number of words is not the issue.” Ai Xian smiled, proud [say / way]: „The drafts of tens of thousands characters, are the transcriptions.” “哦,是抄书来着吧,没事,那点字数不算问题。”艾娴笑了笑,一脸自豪的道:“几万字的稿子,还是抄写。” Words whole-heartedly, most two days can finish, even go all out to write, one day is not cannot handle.” “全力以赴的话,最多两天就能写完,甚至拼命写,一天也不是不能搞定。” My anything does not have, result also misses, fast is living by the hand, I have the self-confidence on this point very much.” “我什么都没有,成绩也差,就是靠手速活着呢,就这一点我很有自信。” About the Host unmarried 20 years of hands fast, system does not want to say anything, but this system wants to remind Host, this Mission is divided into two way penalties.】 【关于宿主单身20年的手速,系统并不想说些什么,不过本系统想提醒一下宿主,本次任务分为两种方式惩罚。】 One, Host transcribe earnestly, typing every single word or phrase, so long as scribed 50,000 characters to be good.】 【一,宿主自己认真的抄写,一字一句的打字,只要抄50000字就好了。】 Two, Host does not want to transcribe, transcribes under the function of system forcefully, such need you write 100,000 characters, moreover during this process, system will control your spirit, making the Host's spirit centralized in the writing.】 【二,宿主不想抄写,在系统的作用下强行抄写,那样需要你写100000字,而且在此过程中,系统会控制你的精神,让宿主的精神集中在文字上。】 Please ask that what way Host does want to choose?】 【请问宿主想选择什么方式?】 Ai Xian thinks that said: Since is the penalty, that was as soon as possible good of conclusion.” 艾娴想了想,道:“既然是惩罚,那还是尽快结束的好。” I choose the first type.” “我选择第一种。” Good.】 【好的。】 „Under can wait to start again, I have not had the dinner.” Ai Xian small face blushed, said in a low voice: Eats in these of conference site, I eat embarrassedly too......” “不过能等下再开始吗,我还没吃晚饭。”艾娴小脸一红,低声道:“在会场的那些吃的,我没好意思吃太多......” The annual meeting is actually a glee feast, on each seat puts the point to eat, most front is the fruit tray and drink has everywhere, the cakes and pastries fine letting person is also unable to put down. 年会其实就是一个庆功宴,每个座位上都放着点吃的,最前排更是果盘、饮料到处有,糕点也精致的让人爱不释手。 However Ai Xian is really embarrassed eats too, she does not want to lose face to the teacher who just recognized...... 不过艾娴实在是不好意思吃太多,她不想给刚认的老师丢脸...... Felt relieved that Host can prepare food slowly, eats meal, after Host eats meal, system will start the disciplinary punishment.】 【放心,宿主可以慢慢做饭,吃饭,等宿主吃饭后,系统才会开始惩戒。】 Thank you, system.” Ai Xian said with a chuckle, sends at heart warmly. “谢谢你了,系统。”艾娴轻笑着道,心里发暖。 This system is very with good intention. 系统挺善解人意的啊。 The children of poor family early manage a household, Ai Xian may not have money every day point to go, if not close right up against being able to pass cook, she already starved to death. 穷人家的孩子早当家,艾娴可没有钱天天点外卖,如果不是靠着一首过得去的厨艺,她早就饿死了。 A food, stirs fry potato thread, UU reads 一顿饭,炒土豆丝,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Garlic hibiscus lettuce, in addition one bowl with Egg Fried Rice that the food left over copies, this is her tonight's meals. 蒜蓉油麦菜,外加一碗用剩饭抄的蛋炒饭,这就是她今晚的伙食。 Cooked food although is fine, but is very economical, leftovers also has admitted her small refrigerator. 菜肴虽然精致,但是十分节省,吃剩的也放进了她的小冰箱。 After the liquor full food is full, has rested a meeting. 酒足饭饱之后,又休息了一会。 Ai Xian also finally sits on the computer, the preparation starts to complete the penalty of system. 艾娴也终于坐在电脑上,准备开始完成系统的惩罚。 Come, system!” [Say / Way] that Ai Xian has plenty of fight in one. “来吧,系统!”艾娴斗志昂扬的道。 【The Jin Ping Mei material starts to transmit, invites Host earnest writing.】 【金瓶梅资料开始传输,请宿主认真书写。】 Good!” “好!” In Ai Xian heart certain, in the mind appears immediately seal plain books, the regard moves, it opens instantaneously, presents the main text. 艾娴心中一定,脑海里顿时浮现一本封皮古朴的书籍,心意一动,它瞬间翻开,呈现正文。 She opens the documents, types to say above directly. 她打开文档,直接在上面打字道。 First, Su Hao hot junction ten brothers, Takejiro cold reception biological elder brothers and his wives. 第一回,苏皓热结十弟兄,武二郎冷遇亲哥嫂。 Well? Can wait / etc., why be Su Hao? 咦?等等,为什么会是苏皓
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