„Kisses one, kisses one......” “亲一个,亲一个......” Creating a disturbance never dislikes the matter to be big, in any case is not their matters. 起哄的从来不嫌事大,反正也不是他们的事情。 However is actually Su Hao and Su Xiaoyi's matter! 不过却是苏皓和苏小怡的事情啊！ „Then what to do? What to do? Damn Su Hao, immediately has also flustered with fully......” Su Xiaoyi to own younger sister, she possible own Su Hao? “这下怎么办？怎么办啊？该死的苏皓,对自家妹妹也用全力......”苏小怡顿时慌了,她怎么可能去亲苏皓啊？ But the shout of surroundings person...... 可是周围人的喊声...... Unavoidably, she cannot help but complained. 难免的,她不由得埋怨起来。 Em, is really Su Hao's is wrong. 恩,果然都是苏皓的错。 although makes Su Hao leave fully...... Is one. 虽然让苏皓出全力的......是自己。 Su Hao also sighed, oneself were a little slightly was a moment ago childish. 苏皓也叹了一口气,自己刚才还是有点小孩子气了。 Creates a disturbance, is why earnest. 打闹而已,何必认真的。 However doesn't matter, kisses anything, the book is the joke between young young girls, Su Hao spoke two words of praise, for example wants a moment ago to that Ouyang's long legs...... 不过没关系,亲不亲什么的,本就是少年少女间的玩笑而已,苏皓说两句好话,比如刚才想对那位欧阳长腿...... cough cough, to ‚this that Ouyang Yan said is a joke, left seriously’ words, everybody also knows in any case this type ‚kissed one’ the commitment was only the joke of creating a disturbance nature, openly expressed did not have any issue. 咳咳,对欧阳雁说的‘这不过是个玩笑,别当真’的话语,反正大家也知道这种‘亲一口’的承诺只是打闹性质的玩笑,说开了也就没什么问题。 Naturally, everybody are disappointed, but how that closes the Su Hao anything matter. 当然,众人们失望,不过那又如何,关苏皓什么事情。 Therefore Su Hao thinks start to talk: „Xiaoyi, I” 于是苏皓就想开口:“小怡,我” Su Xiaoyi's on the face suddenly blushed, then turns head to run. 苏小怡的脸上骤然一红,然后扭头就跑。 Under slender longleg several runs up to the Dojo entrance, at the maximum speed changes the shoes, immediately did not have the shade. 纤细的长腿几步之下就跑到武馆门口,以最快速度换鞋,顿时没影了。 Su Xiaoyi, escaped...... 苏小怡,逃跑了...... „Yeah, the little elder brother has been a pity, that girl although age dot, but the person may very attractive!” “哎,小哥可惜了,那妹纸虽然年纪小点,但是人可挺漂亮的啊！” „After all young, also shyness.” “毕竟年龄小,还有点害羞。” „Brothers, be not gawking, pursues, perhaps you can also meet good meeting with!” “哥们,别愣着,追啊,你说不定还能遇到一场不错的邂逅呢！” The crowds talked at once a big pile. 围观群众们七嘴八舌说了一大堆。 Su Hao stiff there, mouth results in goldfish, gathers. 苏皓就僵硬在那里,嘴巴跟金鱼似得,一张一合。 „My words have not said......” “我话还没说完呢......” ...... ...... When Su Hao goes home, Su Xiaoyi went home, closes oneself in the room, does not come out. 等苏皓回家的时候,苏小怡已经回家了,把自己关在房间里,根本不出来。 Cousin Su Qianxin as if exited to do grocery shopping, she diligently went forward toward the image of housewife. 表姐苏倩心似乎出去买菜了,她正在努力的朝着家庭主妇的形象前进。 Su Qianxin does grocery shopping every day, moreover buys is a big pile, then basically the food exactly less than 24 hours will consume. 苏倩心每天都去买菜,而且一买就是一大堆,然后基本上食材活不到24小时就会消耗一空。 although Su Hao has not eaten to the meal that she makes...... 虽然至今苏皓没吃到一口她做的菜...... Waste! 浪费啊！ The Su Hao's heart is a little sore. 苏皓的心有点疼。 He thought suddenly promises the cousin to prepare food is a wrong decision. 他忽然觉得答应表姐做饭是一个错误的决定。 Only is the buying money for vegetables of waste, can make Su Hao love dearly for a long time, this affected the review absolutely. 光是浪费的买菜钱,就能让苏皓心疼好久,这绝对影响了复习。 „Ok, first writes writing style director who Feng Shu said.” Su Hao deeply inspired, sits in front of the computer. “算了,先把枫树说的写法指导写出来吧。”苏皓深吸一口气,坐在了电脑前。 neophyte stories writing style said that's all actually on the highlight \; first, to be small \; second, white. 小白文的写法其实说罢了就亮点,一是小,二是白。 Small is crisp, white is quick, naturally, about is, crisp. 小是爽,白是快,当然,合起来就是一点,爽。 ‚Crisp’ character, on the survey the entirety of neophyte stories, like one ‚handsome’ character, the Su Hao's life was the same on the survey. 一个‘爽’字,就概况了小白文的全部,就像一个‘帅’字,就概况了苏皓的一生一样。 Em, Su Hao thinks so. 恩,苏皓就是这么觉得的。 Naturally, such simple writing is not definitely good, this type has not distinguished with program anything, you must pour water toward, making the program plentiful, can turn into the article. 当然,这么简单的写肯定不行,这种跟大纲没什么区别,你得往里注水,让大纲丰满起来,才能变成文。 Thereupon Su Hao writes with vigor, regarding ‚crisp’ character is the center, has written more than 2000 characters natural. 于是乎苏皓奋笔疾书,围绕‘爽’字为中心,潇潇洒洒写了2000多字。 although can also many of water, who lets this time not have the payment for published piece. 虽然还能水的更多,但是谁让这次没稿费呢。 Does not make money, water do that many do? 不赚钱,水那么多干嘛？ After finishing, Su Hao gave Feng Shu to send. 写完后,苏皓就给枫树发了过去。 Editors already waited awaited eagerly, if not ‚subscription’( to payment for published piece), they want to take the blade to go to Su Hao's Family to urge to go! 编辑们早就等的望眼欲穿了,如果不是自己没‘订阅’（给稿费）,他们都想拿着刀去苏皓家里催更去！ The authors can neophyte stories Writing Skill, because the present authors are the literary article family background , to continue to write the literary article, can support itself. 作者可以不懂小白文的写作技巧,因为现在的作者都是文青文出身,继续写文青文,也能养活自己。 Editor is not but good! 可是编辑不行啊！ As Editor, 身为编辑, You will not finish the main point, verifies? How does the mental perception know brave? „Sent in the Little White writing technique greatly!” After Feng Shu receives the document, immediately shouted loudly one. 你不会写完要点,怎么审核？怎么慧眼识英？“大大发来小白写作手法了！”枫树接到文件后,顿时高呼一声。 , Editors all encircled. 唰的一下,编辑们全围过来了。 „Where where?” “哪里哪里？” „Writes, why my author feeling under same writes, completely throws the street?” “怎么写的,为什么我手下的作者感觉一样写,就完全扑街？” „What successful method does here have?” “这里有什么成功的法门吗？” They gather round the Feng Shu's computer, in the eyes full is curious and excited. 他们围着枫树的电脑,眼中满是好奇和兴奋。 Editor Zi Ye that even if not cope with Su Hao has also collected. 哪怕是跟苏皓不太对付的紫夜编辑也凑了过来。 Does not have the means that this is the rice bowl that they eat meal. 没办法,这是他们吃饭的饭碗。 Finally Editor Lan Zao coughs: „Feng Shu, puts the first curriculum of author special area, then passes to us with the mail.” 最终还是主编蓝枣咳嗽一声:“枫树,先把作者专区的课程放上去,然后用邮件传给我们。” „Good, Editor.” Feng Shu has operated quickly, he gave back to Su Hao's teaching to add a title. “好的,主编。”枫树很快操纵了起来,他还给苏皓的讲课加了个标题。 «Great God Filthy Speech Directs Personally, by neophyte stories Writing Skill» 《污言大神亲手指点,论小白文的写作技巧》 Then gave each Editor to send one, oneself looked. 然后又给每一个编辑发了一份,自己才看了起来。 The Su Hao introduction said: 苏皓开篇就道: „So-called neophyte stories, is actually the abbreviation of crisp article, how is centered on to make the reader crisp, is the skill of commercial article. But does not comply with the mainstream literary writing style......” “所谓小白文,其实就是爽文的简称,以如何让读者爽起来为核心,是商业文的技巧。而不是遵从主流的文青写法......” „The essence of crisp article lies in anticipation, slap in the face with ambiguous.” “爽文的精髓在于期待、打脸和暧昧。” „Anticipation feels, in Battle Through the Heaven that for example I write, first after the pressure raises, after protagonist broke an engagement, in the readers heart will constrain an anger, hopes to see protagonist all retaliates this air/Qi, after third year approximately, everybody knows that protagonist can defeat the fiancee, is one very good anticipation......” “期待感,比如我写的斗破中,先压后扬,主角被退婚后,读者们心中会压抑一种怒气,希望看到主角将这股气全都报复回去,当到了三年之约后,大家都知道主角可以击败未婚妻,就是一个很好的期待点......” „ Please must pay great attention, that constrains cannot extremely, for example I once noticed that tries to study my book, called Slaying Vault of Heaven, that author wrote protagonist also to be pressed, “不过请务必注重一点,那就是压抑不能太过,比如我曾经看到一本试图学我的书,叫斗斩天穹,那位作者写主角也被压了,UU看书 the www.uukanshu.com family has not exterminated an entire family, fiancee quilt, protagonist was chased down...... ” www.uukanshu.com家族没灭门,未婚妻被,主角被追杀......” „He is a silly fork, what the reader leads into is your protagonist, you make the reader experience one time this experience, others do not want to kill you to be strange!” “他就是个傻叉,读者带入的是你的主角,你让读者体验一次这种经历,人家不想杀了你才怪呢！” „Therefore constrains cannot be too much, making the reader anticipate that following slapping the face, but the letting reader who cannot press abandons the book......” “所以压抑也不能过多,让读者期待后面的打脸,而不能压的让读者弃书......” „then we receive slap in the face......” “然后我们接下来说打脸......” Su Hao's writing style is very white, this neophyte stories Writing Skill is also so, but is truly easy to understand. 苏皓的文笔很白,这篇小白文写作技巧也是如此,不过确实通俗易懂。 „So that's how it is!” “原来如此！” „This is neophyte stories, no wonder my author under writes the neophyte stories failure.” “这就是小白文啊,难怪我手下的作者写小白文失败。” „He said indeed is reasonable, the words said that he had pointed out, I discovered that seems like in the beforehand fire literary article, which majority of will not have depressing plot.” “他说的的确有道理,话说他点明了之后我才发现,貌似之前的大火文青文中,大部分都不会有哪些过于压抑的剧情。” „Indeed, our crowd of Editor, unexpectedly have lost to an author...... No wonder he can maintain top selling ranking first!” “的确,我们这群编辑,居然输给了一个作者......难怪他能保持热销榜第一！” Editor reads are many, they naturally can understand Su Hao's to explain that has profound understanding. 编辑看书都是很多的,他们自然看得懂苏皓的说明,更是深有体会。 But the issue is...... 可是问题是...... The line of sight of everybody is very strange, Su Hao was a little haughty by own novel example, unexpectedly also takes Slaying Vault of Heaven to act as the counter-example...... 众人的视线都很古怪,苏皓以自己的小说举例子就已经有点狂傲了,居然还拿斗斩天穹来充当反例...... This was naked slapping the face! 这可是赤裸裸的打脸了！ The Feng Shu corners of the mouth pull out: „My doesn't big, your day do the matter to be at heart uncomfortable?” 枫树嘴角一抽:“我的大大啊,你一天不搞事情心里难受吗？” They think is very right, in a remote rented room, the «Slaying Vault of Heaven» author, Wind and Cloud Under the Heaven fell the mouse directly. 他们想的很对,在遥远的一处出租屋里,《斗斩天穹》的作者,风云天下直接摔了鼠标。 „bastard! I remembered you!” “混蛋！我记住你了！” ...... ...... But in fact, in Su Hao not far away, little girl of also vitality is falling the pillow. 而实际上,在苏皓不远处,还有一个生气的小丫头在摔枕头。 „Damn Su Hao! He wants to make me kiss him absolutely!” “该死的苏皓！他绝对是想让我亲他！”