MGHAS :: Volume #2

#139: Thunderbolt?


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Follows, is a knowledge. 跟风,也是一门学问。 For example these breaking an engagement class Xuanhua works, are follow actually the Battle Through The Heavens' plot. 比如那些退婚流的玄幻作品,其实都是跟风斗破的剧情。 You looked possibly thought that greatly is not similar, but you, so long as refines the program, basically is: 你看的时候可能觉得没太大相似,但是你只要把大纲提炼出来,基本上就是: protagonist, trash, breaking an engagement with heroine, talent, the protagonist influence is weak, by the heroine influence suppression, being compelled protagonist to break an engagement, protagonist says the brave words, oneself rest heroine, sets making of third year, after the third year practice, defeats heroine...... 主角,废柴,退婚女主,天才,主角势力弱,被女主势力镇压,逼得主角退婚,主角放出豪言,自己休掉女主,定下三年之约,三年修炼后,击败女主...... The middle does not have the least bit difference. 中间毫无半点差异。 This is also very normal, after all this type of thing is only the program, so long as the frame so, you at most can only come a partial innovation, changed the frame to have no way to write. 这也是很正常,毕竟这种东西只是大纲,只要框架如此,你顶多只能来个局部创新,更改框架就没法写好了。 This that however Su Hao sees was different. 不过苏皓看到的这本就不一样了。 From the synopsis and book title, Su Hao also thinks that is one follows own book, the result goes in thoroughly looks. 从简介和书名来看,苏皓还以为是一本跟风自己的书呢,结果深入进去一看。 Begins first three, broke an engagement, protagonist angrily rebukes, then instead applied makeup by heroine? 开头前三张,被退婚,主角怒斥,然后反而被女主打脸? Then practices, goes all out to practice, was liked some heroine's two generations sending for pursuing hitting? 接着修行修行修行,拼命修行,然后被喜欢女主的某位二代派人追着打? Has constrained enough several, finally works loose, has killed two generations of pursuing troops, then by getting rid of two generations of becoming angry out of shame, was extinguished the protagonist parental family? 压抑了足足十几张,终于挣脱出来,干掉了二代的追兵,然后被二代恼羞成怒的出手,灭了主角的父母家族? Em, very typical world novel style. 恩,很典型的本世界小说风格。 If only this, does not have anything, in any case this world is this repertoire, too in a big way has not distinguished with besides Su Hao novel anything. 如果只是这样,也没什么,反正这个世界都是这种套路,跟除了苏皓之外的小说没什么太大区别。 However he also wants to study the Su Hao's style, thereupon was considered as writing style a little, turns into the trash instantaneously. 不过他还偏偏想学一下苏皓的风格,于是乎本来算得上有点的文笔,瞬间变成渣渣。 Su Hao fell into immediately silent. 苏皓顿时陷入了沉默。 What kind, big, he studies that your book writes, studies your writing style, your writing style, for this reason has it is said suppressed for a long time, because of the difference of writing style, a day can only write two......” Feng Shu still to type to say there. “怎么样,大大,他是学习您的书才写的这本,学习您的写法,您的文笔,据说为此憋了好久,因为写法的不同,一天只能写两更......”枫树还在那里打字道。 „Is this studies my?” “这是学我的?” Yes, Zi Ye, but every day helps him point out that is different from your writing style, making him correct, it is said almost compels him insanely......” “是啊,紫夜可是天天帮他指出和你的写法不同,让他改正呢,据说差点把他逼疯......” Feng Shu has not said that Su Hao direct typing. 枫树还没有说完,苏皓直接打字。 Feng Shu is big, you let I teach, to me won't arrange the student who such silly lacks?” 枫树大,你让我讲课的时候,不会给我安排这么傻缺的学生吧?” This person, even if makes him copy from a book, he will not copy! 这种人,就算让他抄书,他都不会抄! Feng Shu gawked obviously has gawked, asks: Big, Wind and Cloud Under the Heaven how?” 枫树显然愣了一愣,问道:“大大,风云天下怎么了?” Wind and Cloud Under the Heaven, is that tries to follow the Su Hao neophyte stories Great God author. 风云天下,就是那位试图跟风苏皓小白文大神作者。 What he writes is neophyte, is not neophyte stories!” The Su Hao typing said: Let alone he is studies me to write, I cannot teach such awesome student.” “他写的是白文,不是小白文!”苏皓打字道:“别说他是学我写的,我教不出这么牛逼的学生。” shit, felt that this person is to link IQ? 马丹,感觉这人是不是连一点智商都没有? neophyte stories is writing style is white, plot crisp abbreviation. 小白文文笔白,剧情爽的简称。 He writes? 他写的呢? Oppressive neophyte? 白文 if this become popular it would be weird! 这要是能火才怪了 Feng Shu stares, present that actually neophyte stories presents, let alone the author, was their these Editor cannot catch the key point of neophyte stories. 枫树一愣,其实小白文才出现的现在,别说作者了,就是他们这些编辑也抓不到小白文的重点。 In his opinion, the style that Wind and Cloud Under the Heaven and Su Hao write is very near, why said that he does miss? 在他看来,风云天下苏皓写的风格很近啊,为什么说他差? However now he actually knows how to say to Su Hao. 不过现在他却知道怎么跟苏皓说。 Felt relieved greatly that does not need the teaching to live greatly, but makes an issue of writing training battalion, does not need to meet with the author.” “大大放心,大大不需要教学生,只是弄一期的写作训练营而已,并不用与作者见面。” Under the Feng Shu's explanation, Su Hao is clear so-called teaching is any meaning. 枫树的解释下,苏皓才明白所谓的‘讲课’是什么意思。 Briefly, makes phase of written teaching, oneself write one neophyte stories writing attainment the report, will then select the website to announce that in the home page of writer special area, will read for all authors. 简单地说,就是做一期的书面讲课,自己写一份‘小白文写作心得’的报告,然后点起网站会公布在作家专区的首页上,供所有作者阅读。 This naturally does not need to teach specially, does not need to gather the author, naturally does not have the view of what student. 这样自然不需要专门授课,也不需要聚集作者,自然也就没有什么学生的说法。 Su Hao touches the chin, makes a time writing attainment not anything issue, happen to he also wants to have a look at the novel that oneself like, but in which writing style flower does not look at gaudy, in fact oppressive article that must die. 苏皓摸摸下巴,做一次写作心得没什么问题,正好他也想看看自己喜欢的小说,而不是看哪种文笔花里花哨,实际上虐的要死的文。 However routine, he closely examined one. 不过习惯性的,他还是追问了一句。 I make the written report, “我做书面报告啊, Can this type? That is Feng Shu big, writes this to have the payment for published piece? 1000 character how much money? ” Feng Shu: „......” 这得打字吧?那枫树大,写这个有稿费吗?1000字多少钱?”枫树:“......” ...... ...... Really is, that two fellow points with have not sent!” Su Xiaoyi lightly snorted, completely not indignation. “真是的,那两个家伙一点用都没派上!”苏小怡轻哼一声,满是不忿。 From the beginning is three people of alliances meets head-on Great Demon King, but result Gu Shishi leaves, Leng Yueli leaves, now remaining she is still insisting. 一开始是三人联盟迎战大魔王的,可是结果顾诗诗离开,冷月璃离开,现在就剩下她一个人还在坚持了。 Can you a little use! 你们能不能有点用! Su Xiaoyi lightly snorted, extremely angry sitting on the bed, this rare she also complained the past Leng Yueli. 苏小怡轻哼一声,愤愤的坐在床上,这一次难得的她把冷月璃也埋怨了过去。 You are my idol, is the hero! 你可是我的偶像啊,是英雄啊! Why can't kill Great Demon King?! 为什么不能干掉大魔王啊?! Yeah, now only remaining I.” Su Xiaoyi sighed. “哎,现在只剩下我了。”苏小怡叹了一口气。 dīng dōng, triggers Temporary Mission. Obstructs the Great Demon King footsteps 叮咚,触发临时任务。阻挠大魔王的脚步】 Great Demon King arrives, your two allies are not reasonable, now can depend upon, only then you!】 大魔王来到,你的两个盟友并不靠谱,现在可以依靠的,只有你自己!】 Asked Host to obstruct the motion of Great Demon King, defeated the plan of Great Demon King, please feel relieved that your system was you firmest assistant!】 【请宿主阻挠大魔王的行动,击败大魔王的计划,请您放心,您的系统是您最坚定的助手!】 Success Reward: Taiji Fist + 1.】 成功奖励:太极拳+1。】 Failure Punishment: Does not have, but will affect Temporary Mission: Meets head-on Great Demon King success or failure.】 失败惩罚:无,不过会影响到‘临时任务:迎战大魔王’的成败。】 Note, this Mission Host can choose whether accepts, refusing Mission not to punish.】 【注,本次任务宿主可以选择是否接受,拒绝任务并无惩罚。】 „Do I obstruct her?” A Su Xiaoyi brow wrinkle, she is powerful of very clear that cousin. “我一个人去阻挠她?”苏小怡眉头一皱,她可是很清楚自家那位表姐的强悍。 Asked Host to feel relieved that system will help your.】 【请宿主放心,系统会帮你的。】 „Do you help me? Can this matter also help?” “你怎么帮我?这种事情还能帮?” system will trigger a random event, gives you a performance the opportunity.】 系统会触发一个随机事件,给你一个表现的机会。】 What event?” “什么事件?” 【It is not able to inform Host, but there is a movement, can have the flaw.】 【无法告知宿主,不过有动作,才能有破绽。】 Su Xiaoyi cannot help but frowned, the reply of system is so fuzzy, god knows will come out to any event. 苏小怡不由得皱起眉头,系统的回复如此模糊,天知道会给一个什么事件出来。 However it is said non- truth. 不过它说的并不道理。 Has the movement, can have the flaw. 有动作,才能有破绽。 Has the flaw, 有破绽,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Can defeat her. 才能击败她。 The silent moment, Su Xiaoyi sighed: Good, I accept Mission.” 沉默片刻,苏小怡叹了一口气:“好吧,我接受任务。” Receives.】 【收到。】 Su Xiaoyi shows a pre-combat posture immediately, a clear big eye sweeps everywhere, frequently prepares to greet the system event. 苏小怡立即摆出一副临战姿势,一双清亮的大眼睛到处扫荡,时刻准备迎接系统的事件。 However after a while, let alone the event, a wool did not have! 然而过了一会,别说事件了,连个毛都没有! system, your event?” Su Xiaoyi cannot bear say. 系统,你的事件呢?”苏小怡忍不住道。 Asked Host to maintain the normal life, the event started to trigger, but had the time to be undetermined specifically.】 【请宿主保持正常生活,事件已经开始触发,不过具体发生时间待定。】 In other words, was the event of triggering, for me also an incident?” Su Xiaoyi cannot bear frown. “也就是说,触发的事件,对我来说也是一件突发性事件了?”苏小怡忍不住皱起眉头来。 system has not replied, but the meaning is very obvious right. 系统没有回复,不过意思很明显没错。 The Su Xiaoyi's brow wrinkles was deeper, she a little regretted such direct trigger event suddenly. 苏小怡的眉头皱的更深了,她突然有点后悔这么直接触发事件了。 But Su Qianxin the Great Demon King rank enemy, sudden occurance draws them to the words of same level, are very disadvantageous? 苏倩心可是大魔王级别敌人,突发事件把两人拉到同一个层次的话,那自己岂不是很不利? Silent the moment, Su Xiaoyi sighed finally: Ok, first takes a bath, took a bath should also sleep.” 沉默了片刻,苏小怡最终叹了一口气:“算了,先去洗澡吧,洗完澡也该睡觉了。” Is waiting in the room, event does not know when can be triggered, might as well normal rest. 在房间里等着,事件也不知道什么时候能被触发,还不如正常的休息。 Enters the bathroom, closes, puts away water. 走进浴室,关上门,放好水。 Su Xiaoyi takes off the clothes, reveals such as jade general body. 苏小怡脱下衣服,露出如玉一般的身体 The arm is slender, the both legs are clear, flesh such as milk generally Run is also white, soaks in the warm bathtub, only reveals an attractive cheek. 手臂纤细,双腿圆润,肌肤也如牛奶一般润白,浸泡在温暖的浴缸中,只露出一张漂亮的脸蛋。 Has turned head, in looks at mirror, Su Xiaoyi not indignation [say / way]: I obviously also very attractive, why can be suppressed by her?” 扭过头,看着镜子里的自己,苏小怡不忿的道:“我明明也很漂亮的啊,凭什么要被她压制?” At this time suddenly a creak sound. 这时忽然吱嘎一声 The front door of bathroom was shoved open, Su Qianxin is binding a bathrobe, walked. 浴室的大门被推开,苏倩心裹着一身浴袍,走了进来。 Well? Xiaoyi you in inside?” “咦?小怡你在里面啊?”
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