Looked atJudgement cardone in hand, Quinnstartledsaid:
看了手中的“审判”牌一眼,休怔了怔道:„Thisconforms tomyanticipationvery much.”
“这很符合我的期待。”Foolnodsbygrey mistis coveringgently, explainsto saylightly:
被灰雾笼罩着的“愚者”轻轻颔首,平淡交待道:
„ The Becklandtime, eachMonday, 3 : 00 pm, gets togetherhere, ahead of timeis ready.
“贝克兰德时间,每个周一,下午 3 点,在这里聚会,提前做好准备。„Atmeeting, canexchange the information, material, formula and knowledge, canpaycertainprice, entrusted the dutytoothermembers.”
“聚会上,可以交换情报、材料、配方和知识,也能付出一定的代价,将任务委托给其他成员。”Quinnrecalled, has the instituteto saysuddenly:休回想了一下,有所恍然般道:„Yes, Mister Fool.”
“是,‘愚者’先生。”Shethinks that todaystops, actuallyhearsonbronzelongtablemostto have the soundto transmitagain:
她本以为今天就到此为止,却再次听见青铜长桌最上首有声音传来:„What before youthatstrengthdid corrode, are made?”
“你们被那种力量侵蚀前做了什么?”Reallywas corroded...... Quinnto calm down, oneselfandForsiexplored the processcomplete description of old castle, raisedthatleafwas called„jet blackgate”large bronze doorwith emphasis, as well asoncesuffered the corrosionto turn into the resentful spiritold castleguard.
果然是被侵蚀了……休定了定神,将自己和佛尔思探索古堡的经过完整描述了一遍,重点提了提那扇被称作“漆黑之门”的青铜大门,以及曾经遭受侵蚀变成怨灵的古堡守卫。Then, shenoticesMister Foolnodded, the voiceopens the mouthto sayslightlygently:
然后,她注意到“愚者”先生微微点了下头,嗓音平缓地开口道:
„ Before Sequence Four, do not enterthatold castleagain.
“序列4之前,不要再进入那座古堡。„Goes back.”
“回去吧。”Quinnsets outimmediately, in the descriptionsfollowingvariousreligious rites, salutesto sayrespectfully:休当即起身,遵照各种宗教仪式里的描述,恭敬行礼道:„Yourwishismywill.”
“您的意愿就是我的意志。”Shefinishes speaking, at presenthasdark redto leap, whenalldissipations, had returned to the real world, is holdingthicktrees.
她话音刚落,眼前就有深红腾起,等到一切消散,已然回到了现实世界,正扶着一株粗大的树木。
The subconsciousnesslooked at the back of the hand, discovers the aboveblack spotafter the extreme velocitydesalinates, Quinnlifts the head, lookedtowas staring atownForsiheavyheartedly.
下意识看了看手背,发现上面的黑斑在极速淡化后,休抬起脑袋,望向了忧心忡忡盯着自己的佛尔思。During the line of sightconnection, Forsifirstisonehappy, at onceshowssmileembarrasedly, opens mouthclose to, does not know that shouldsayanything.
视线交汇间,佛尔思先是一喜,旋即露出讪讪的笑容,张了张嘴巴,不知道该说点什么。Quinnslowsighed, points at the front saying:休缓慢吐了口气,指着前方道:„Firstreturns to the small town.”
“先返回小镇。”„Good!”Forsirepliedwithout hesitation.
“好!”佛尔思毫不犹豫就回答道。Butat this time, above the grey mist, Klein the Foolis tapping the motleylongtableedge, thinks deeply aboutMagicianandJudgementtwo young ladiestoday'sbitter experience.
而此时,灰雾之上,“愚者”克莱恩正轻敲着斑驳长桌的边缘,思索“魔术师”和“审判”两位小姐今天的遭遇。„Jet blackgate” the thingorstrength of seal, withoutescaping, cancorrodeoutsideguardwith the seeker, the horroronlythinks, makes one dread!
“漆黑之门”封印的事物或者力量,哪怕没有逃脱出来,也能侵蚀外面的守卫和探索者,恐怖程度仅是想一想,都让人畏惧!Moreoverthispollutionis rooted in spiritual body, wantsto solve, Kleinonly thentwomeans;first, to letbe held the completesecret contractceremonybycorrosion, oneselftransfer the above the grey mistmysteriousspace the strength, with the aid ofSun Brooch, completes the purification;second, drawsherespiritual bodydirectly, usesgrey mist„anti-virus”, in view of the fact thatthensituationdoes not have the time, hechose the latter.
而且这种污染根植于灵体,想要解决,克莱恩只有两个办法,一是让被侵蚀者举行完整的密契仪式,自己调动灰雾之上神秘空间的力量,借助“太阳胸针”,完成净化,二是直接将灵体拉到这里,利用灰雾“杀毒”,鉴于当时的情况已经没有时间,他选择了后者。
„ Whatcanbe?
“会是什么呢?
„ Mosthas the corrosivestrengthto belong toDevilpath...... thereto connect the abyss? Thishaspossibly, according to the description of little Sun, second eraearly period, Deviloftenleaves the abyss, enlivensabove the land, appeareduntilancient timesSun God, madeancient Godfall from the skycontinuously, theyreturned the abyss, sealed upthere, according tosuchview, northern continenthad the undergroundancientroadentrancetoabyss, quitenormal...... needsto constructcastle, sent peopleto guard, canimagine......
“最具侵蚀性的力量属于‘恶魔’途径……那里连通着深渊?这不是没有可能,根据小‘太阳’的描述,第二纪的中前期,恶魔时常离开深渊,活跃于大地之上,直到远古太阳神横空出世,连续让古神陨落,它们才退回深渊,封闭了那里,按照这样的说法,北大陆有通往深渊的地下古路入口,相当正常……需要修建城堡,派人看守,也能够想象……„But the issueis, over the past several thousand years, will there have to strike against the soundto exist? Do Devilwantto return to the land?”Kleinmade the guessinitially.
“可问题在于,已经过去几千年,那里怎么还会有拍击声存在?恶魔们想重返大地了?”克莱恩初步做出了猜测。Hedoes not haveto explorethatto abandon the old castletemporarily, confirms the plan of idea, becausetherewill seem likewill not havewhatbigchangein a short time- inhim, sincethiscastleinformationfromblood race, that can definitely makeEmlyn the Moonfirstmake the furthermaterialcollection, will clarify the castlehistory.
他暂时没有去探索那座废弃古堡,验证自己想法的打算,因为那里看起来短时间内不会有什么大的变化-在他心里,既然这城堡的情报来自血族内部,那完全可以让“月亮”埃姆林先做进一步的资料搜集,弄清楚城堡的历史。Restrains the idea, Kleinloosenscitrine pendant, divinationgets upto abandon the matter of old castleis whether urgent, got the negativeanswer.
收敛住想法,克莱恩解下黄水晶吊坠,占卜起废弃古堡之事是否急迫,得到了否定的答案。Hereturns to the real worldimmediately, the person who waits forlocalrulerGeneralMesaneshas the earnest moneyto come.
他当即回到现实世界,等待起本地统治者梅桑耶斯将军的人带着定金前来。............
…………Fenpottime2 : 00 pm,费内波特时间下午 2 点,Combs the biglong hair combed straight backto makeHargis that the northern continentgentlemandresses upunderprotection of oneteam of guards, is raising the blackleather suitcase, sounded the Dawn Dantesdoor.
梳着大背头做北大陆绅士打扮的哈吉斯在一队卫兵的保护下,提着黑色皮箱,敲响了道恩.唐泰斯的房门。„Please come in, Please come in.” The sound of modestscholarlypassed on, whatfirstusesisRuen language of Becklandtune, subsequentlychanged to the localfranklanguage.
“请进,请进。”温和儒雅的声音传了出来,先用的是贝克兰德腔调的鲁恩语,继而改成了本地都坦语。Hargistwists the hand, pushes the doorto enter, seeing only the templeis graying, blueeyedeep and quietDawn Dantesis pressing the lower end of blackwaistcoat, stands upfrom the easy chair.哈吉斯拧动把手,推门而入,只见鬓角斑白,蓝眼幽邃的道恩.唐泰斯正按着黑色马甲的下端,从安乐椅上站起。„Good afternoon, friend of mine.”Thiscontour and makingsverygoodRuengentlemangoes forwardtwosteps, stretched outright palm.
“下午好,我的朋友。”这位外形和气质都非常不错的鲁恩绅士上前两步,伸出了右掌。Thistime, hechangedRuen language.
这一次,他改回了鲁恩语。HargisrespondedwithRuen language of aristocrattune:哈吉斯用贵族腔调的鲁恩语回应道:„Canbecomeyourfriend, ismybeing honored.”
“能成为你的朋友,是我的荣幸。”
After heandDawn Dantesgraspedonelightlynext, looks all around, laughed:
他与道恩.唐泰斯轻握了一下后,环顾一圈,呵呵笑道:„Is thisyourservant?”
“这是你的仆人?”Herefers tostandingin the oppositearms dealerleans the rearhybridyoung people, the implicationis„trustworthy”, after all when Dawn Dantesvisited the generalmansionyesterday, has not ledanyservant.
他指的是侍立于对面军火商人侧后方的混血年轻人,言外之意则是“值得信任吗”,毕竟道恩.唐泰斯昨天拜访将军府邸时,并未带任何仆役。„Yes, hebiggestmeritexcels in the conservativesecret.”Dawn Dantessmileresponseat the same time, referred toeasy chairoppositeleather sofa.
“是的,他最大的优点是擅于保守秘密。”道恩.唐泰斯微笑回应的同时,指了指安乐椅对面的皮质沙发。Hargissurrounded bytwoguard, turns off the doorconveniently, sat, saidwith a smile:哈吉斯在两个卫兵簇拥下,随手关好房门,坐了下来,笑着说道:
„ Ihad heard a Intisproverb, the hearsayisthatGreat Emperor Russelllecture.
“我听说过一句因蒂斯谚语,传闻是那位罗塞尔大帝讲的。„He said that only then the deceased personcankeep the secret.”
“他说,只有死人才能保守秘密。”Dawn Dantescannot help laughingsay:道恩.唐泰斯哑然失笑道:
„ Great Emperor Russellhas added other few words:
“罗塞尔大帝还说过另外一句话:„Corpsecanopen the mouth.”
“尸体能开口。”„Right? Iheard for the first time.”Hargisenjoysvery muchwith the process that the northern continentgentlemanexchanges, chattedgood, raisedplacesnearbyleather suitcase, openedit.
“是吗?我第一次听说。”哈吉斯很享受与北大陆绅士交流的过程,闲聊了好一阵,才提起放在旁边的皮箱,将它打开。Thisinstance, in the leather suitcaseas if there is goldenclass/flowcolorto overflow, undershining of out of the windowsunlight, making the entireroomas ifbrightlittle.
这个瞬间,皮箱里面似乎有金色的流彩溢出,在窗外阳光的照耀下,让整个房间都似乎明亮了少许。Hargislooks atDawn Dantessaidimmediately:哈吉斯随即看着道恩.唐泰斯道:
„ 5000Ruengold pound, as well asvalue5000poundsgold coinandgold bar.
“5000鲁恩金镑,以及价值5000镑的金币和金条。
„ Thisis the earnest money.
“这是定金。„The remaining30.000poundbillsandgold, Ihave carried, when the munitionsdelivercompleteagaintoyou.”
“剩下的3万镑钞票和黄金,我会一直携带,等到军火交割完成再给你。”Dawn Danteslooked atpacks of bills, gold coins and the one after anothergold barsleather suitcase, takes back the vision, the smilesaid:道恩.唐泰斯瞄了眼皮箱内的一叠叠钞票、一枚枚金币和一根根金条,收回目光,微笑说道:„When?”
“什么时候出发?”Hargiscloses the leather suitcase, gave the Dawn Dantesservantit, saidsimply:哈吉斯合上皮箱,将它递给了道恩.唐泰斯的仆人,简单说道:„Tomorrow morning.”
“明天上午。”Hetwoseconds, thenopened the mouth saying:
他顿了两秒,转而开口道:„Mr.Dantes, the generalhas an honored guest to visityou.”
“唐泰斯先生,将军有位贵客想要拜访你。”
The Dawn Dantesexpressionhas not changed, silentseveralseconds of say/way:道恩.唐泰斯表情未变,沉默了几秒道:„When?”
“什么时候?”„Now.”Hargissaidwith the stance that onetypedoes not dareto be perfunctory, „heindownstairs.”
“现在。”哈吉斯以一种不敢敷衍的姿态道,“他就在楼下。”Dawn Dantesslight nod:道恩.唐泰斯微微点头:„Askedhimto come up.”
“请他上来吧。”Hargisimmediatelyrelaxed, leading the guardto leave the room, along the staircasedeng deng dengdownwardline.哈吉斯顿时松了口气,带着卫兵离开房间,沿楼梯蹬蹬蹬往下行去。In a while, put onto inlayLuca of brasssilk threadpure whitelong gownto walk, combedsilver-hairedveryneatly.
没过多久,穿镶黄铜丝线素白长袍的卢卡走了上来,满头银发梳理得非常整齐。Arrives at the Dawn Dantesgate, heis just aboutto lift the hand, has the soundto spreadonhearingin:
来到道恩.唐泰斯的门边,他正要抬手,就听见里面有声音传出:„Please come in.”
“请进。”Thistime, whatusedisAncient Fusac language.
这一次,用的是古弗萨克语。Lucadoes not have the change of expression, naturallyshoved open the door.卢卡没有表情的变化,自然推开了房门。Hesawyesterdaythatappearance and makingsquitegoodmiddle and old agegentlemanerectimmediatelyby the easy chair, sidetooneself.
他随即看见昨天那位长相和气质都相当不错的中老年绅士正立在安乐椅旁,侧对着自己。Butonthateasy chair, sits a young man, the black hairbrownpupil, faceis thin, is distinctive, the makingsare cold and gloomy.
而那安乐椅上,坐着一位年轻男子,黑发棕瞳,脸庞消瘦,棱角分明,气质森冷。Lucastartled, thentakes a stepforward, enters the room, closed the wooden door.卢卡怔了怔,然后向前迈步,进入房间,关上了木门。
After helookscalmly a sofasat down, greyish-greenpupilsclearlyscreened the form of oppositeyoung man.
他从容找了张沙发坐下后,灰绿色眼眸清晰映出了对面年轻男子的身影。„Gehrman Sparrow?” The Lucainquirynameopens the mouthto say.
“格尔曼.斯帕罗?”卢卡似询问似称呼地开口道。Gehrman Sparrowoutlined the corners of the mouth saying:格尔曼.斯帕罗勾勒起嘴角道:„Calledothers'full namedirectlyis not a politematter.”
“直接称呼别人的全名并不是一件有礼貌的事情。”Lucanods saying:卢卡点了点头道:„Sorry, wasIwas disrespectful, Iremember that youpromotedSequence Fivenotovera halfyear, evenonly then3months, un, shouldcompletein the Battle of Godsvestige, has not thought that...... youhave becomehalf Godnow, thismademea littlerude.”
“抱歉,是我失礼了,我记得你晋升序列5没超过半年,甚至只有三个月,嗯,应该是在神战遗迹完成的,没想到……你现在已经成为半神,这让我有点失态。”Gehrman Sparrowshows a faint smile, has not givenanyexplanation.格尔曼.斯帕罗微微一笑,未做任何解释。
After shortsilentness, hislanguagefastaskednot so fast but so slow neither:
短暂的静默后,他语速不快不慢地问道:„Why do youwantto visitme?”
“你为什么要拜访我?”Lucaanswerstranquilly:卢卡平静做出回答:„Does not know.”
“不知道。”
The atmosphere in roomsuddenlybecomessomewhatstrange, Gehrman Sparrowas ifforgotoppositealsositsold mister, but alsoneedshimto open the mouthagain.
房间里的气氛陡然变得有些怪异,格尔曼.斯帕罗似乎忘记了对面还坐着位老先生,还需要他再次开口。
Under Lucaslightlycannot the insightmove the chin, said:卢卡微不可见地动了动下颔,自顾自说道:
„ Isthis, Imade a predictionbeforeaccidentally, inthatprediction, Iwill fall into the quitetroublesomesituationin the future, butsomebody who Iran intofor these daysherecanhelpmedeal.
“是这样的,我之前偶然做出了一个预言,那个预言里,我将在未来陷入相当麻烦的处境,而我这几天在这里遇到的某个人能帮助我应对。
„ Am Ido not determineyou, buthugsis rather admitting mistakes, the idea that alsocannotomit, the decisionseesyoufinally, knows each other.
“我不确定是不是你,但抱着宁愿认错,也不能遗漏的想法,最终决定来见见你,互相认识一下。„IcalledLuca Bluste, serves the God of Knowledge and Wisdomclergy, at presentis responsible forchurchatWest Balamvariousbusiness.”
“我叫卢卡.布鲁斯特,是侍奉‘知识与智慧之神’的神职人员,目前负责教会在西拜朗的各项事务。”Gehrman Sparrownods saying:格尔曼.斯帕罗点了点头道:„Good, Ihave knownyou, Ithink that Idon't needto makeself-introductionagain?”
“不错,我已经认识你了,我想我不需要再做自我介绍了吧?”„Naturally.”Lucathinks saying that „youshouldbeCrafty Mage, Ireceived the informationrecently, said that IntisSecret Religious Orderhas the change.”
“当然。”卢卡想了想道,“你应该是一位‘诡法师’,我最近收到情报,说因蒂斯的密修会有异动。”Hehas not seenGehrman Sparrowto show the astonishedexpression, thisfive seaswell-knownpowerfuladventurersilently affirmed:
他并未看见格尔曼.斯帕罗露出惊愕的表情,这位五海闻名的强大冒险家沉默了一下道:„Zarathreturned.”
“查拉图回归了。”
The pupil of Lucahas changedimmediately, at oncereturns tonormal.卢卡的瞳孔顿时有所变化,旋即又恢复了正常。Then, hestood, the nodexpressed best wishes:
然后,他站了起来,点头致意道:„Sincehad known, I should also say goodbye.”
“既然已经认识了,那我也该告辞了。”Spokethese words, hemoves towardnear the gate, twists the hand, left the room.
说完这句话,他走向门边,拧动把手,离开了房间。SitsGehrman Sparrowlooks at his backoneasy chairis coveredbywooden doorcuns (2.5 cm), untilvanishesthoroughly, suddenlychuckle:
坐在安乐椅上的格尔曼.斯帕罗看着他的背影被木门一寸寸掩盖,直至彻底消失,忽然轻笑了一声:„Really iszealot.”
“真是一个神棍啊。”„Yes.”Set upDawn Dantesbyeasy chairto look for a positionto sit down, carries the teacup on table, sippedone.
“是的。”立在安乐椅旁的道恩.唐泰斯找了个位置坐下,端起桌上的茶杯,抿了一口。greying temples and deep blue eyesheandfacethinedges and cornersdistinctGehrman Sparrowlooked at each otheroneimmediately, simultaneouslyshows the smile.鬓角斑白蓝眸深邃的他和脸庞消瘦棱角分明的格尔曼.斯帕罗随即对视了一眼,同时露出笑容。............
…………Mondayin the afternoon, Dawn Dantespulls out the gold/metalshellpocket watch, according toopeninglooked atone, tosittingsaidinoppositeHargis:
周一下午,道恩.唐泰斯掏出金壳怀表,按开看了一眼,对坐在对面的哈吉斯道:„Arrived in the destinationquickly, Ithink that youneedto makeQuinnahead of timeentire.”
“快抵达目的地了,我认为你们需要提前做一个休整。”„Verygoodsuggestion.”Hargisquiteapproves.
“非常棒的建议。”哈吉斯相当赞同。Dawn Dantesreferred to the frontstreet:道恩.唐泰斯指了指前方街道:„Therehas the family/homehotel, ourrestquite a while, tomorrow morningagain.”
“那里有家旅馆,我们休息半天,明早再出发。”Hargishad not opposed,shifts to the front, toldcart driverseveral.哈吉斯没有反对,转向前方,吩咐了车夫几句。
After moving, Dawn Danteson the grounds ofmidday nap, declined the afternoon teainvitation of Hargis.
入住之后,道恩.唐泰斯以午睡为由,谢绝了哈吉斯的下午茶邀请。Crossed the mosthour, limitlessabove the grey mist, Kleinsatposition that belonged toFool.
过了大半个小时,无边无际的灰雾之上,克莱恩坐到了属于“愚者”的位置。PS1: Actually the frontchapter, Iwriteverysatisfied, basicallyeliminated the psychologicaldescription, depends upon the choice that the behavior of earlierupholsteryandcharacter, makesto give the character and style, avoidsrepertoire the situation, leaves leeway the after-taste, canponder overcarefully, thusunderstood that what personQuinnis, butas ifmanyfriendsdo not like, feelstoosuddenly, is too fast, the volume, laterI explained that heredid not analyzeQuinnat that timemovedat heart, eachmovement, eachchoice, eachwords, had the performancein any case.
PS1:其实前面一章,我写得很满意啊,基本摒除了心理描述,依靠前期的铺垫、人物的行为、做出的选择来给出性格和风格,避免套路化的情况,留有余味,能够细细琢磨,从而了解休是一个什么样的人,但似乎很多朋友不太喜欢,觉得太突然,太快速,额,以后我还是多解释吧,这里也不去分析休当时的心里活动了,反正每一个动作,每一个选择,每一句话语,都有表现。Whywill havesuddenfeeling, Ifeel the issuenotin the plot, butis the structure, as the greatlylengthy, manyupholstery and description, separatedwas too far, the time of finallycollecting, having a minddescribedis possibly more suitable than the outline drawing, before not , after being heavylight, canmakethelower berth that fellthick.
为什么会有突然感,我觉得问题不在情节,而是结构,作为大长篇,很多铺垫和描述,都隔了太远,最后归拢起来的时候,有心里描写可能比白描更适合,不会前重后轻,能让落的这一下铺得厚一点。Also, vol. 5Iam the preparationuse a newnarrativetechnique, meltedusedsomePOVthings, from Chapter 1start, fixed the lenson a character, describedfromhisangle, then in having happening togetherhad the relation, made the redeploymentagain, thereforedownplayedmanypsychology and behaviors of littleto subdue|grams, later, thismode of writing and normalmode of writingwill be taking turn.
还有,第五卷我是预备采用点新的叙事手法,化用了一些POV的东西,从第一章开始,都是把镜头固定在一个人物身上,从他的角度来描述,然后在有交集有联系时,再做转场,所以淡化了小克的许多心理和行为,之后,这种写法和正常写法会交替着来。PS2: Mondayaskedrecommendationticketmonthly ticket~
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