OriginalHan Qiongzhisees the Li Qingshanstate of mindis not, smilesslightly, not adeptwieldsinhimat present: „Whatis thinking?”
原创韩琼枝见李青山神思不属,微微而笑,不拿手在他眼前挥一挥:“在想什么?”Li Qingshansaid: „To cope withthissoldierlittleelder brother'scountermeasureIto want”李青山道:“想对付这位褚小哥的对策我要”Han Qiongzhiknits the brows: „Has the meansreally?”韩琼枝皱眉道:“真的有办法吗?”„Might as welltries. ”Li Qingshanshows a faint smile, the bronzeface, is brimming with the sunlightself-confidence.
“不妨试一试。【文字首发网】”李青山微微一笑,古铜色的面孔,洋溢着阳光般的自信。In the Han Qiongzhiheartswings the ripples, the cupstopsin the hand.韩琼枝心中荡起涟漪,杯停于手中。„HanSenior Apprentice Sister, Commanderpleasego back.”
“韩师姐,统领请回去。”Qian Rongzhiarrives at the bambooporchmoney, lowers the headto salute, to the presentall, as ifhears something never heard of before.钱容芷来到竹轩钱,低头行礼,对眼前的一切,似乎闻所未闻。„Liquor that thanks.”Han Qiongzhiputs downwine cup, runs awayalsoresembleshurries away.
“谢谢的酒。”韩琼枝放下酒杯,逃也似的匆匆而去。Li Qingshangazes afterherto depart, fallsonQian Rongzhi, the smiling facevanishedimmediately, changesmakeswithering of winter.李青山目送她离去,落在钱容芷身上,笑容顿时消失了,变做冬日的肃杀。„Qian Rongzhi, am Ijust aboutto look? CanChapter 69explain the Ancient Wind Citymatterby the pictureto the picturetome?”
“钱容芷,我正要找呢?能第69章以画对画给我解释一下古风城的事吗?”About the matter that Qian Rongzhidoes, Gu Yanyinghas issued the sealcommand, istothisclaims credittogreat„Night Eagle” a protection, byknowing the person of inside storyare not many. Li Qingshanalsowith the understandingQian Rongzhi, canguess correctly12.
关于钱容芷所做的事,顾雁影是下了封口令的,算是对这个居功至伟的“夜鹰”的一点保护,是以知晓内情的人并不多。李青山也是凭着对钱容芷的了解,能猜出12。Qian Rongzhiarrives under the porch, sitsslantingly, takes upwine cup that Han Qiongzhileaves behind, underattention of Li Qingshan, drinks with flies, thenstartsto narrate the process of matter.钱容芷走到廊下,斜坐下来,拿起韩琼枝留下的酒杯,在李青山的注目下,自斟自饮,然后开始讲述事情的经过。
After listening, Li Qingshanalsosighs with emotion, inthesemonths that hecloses up, althoughcultivation baseanythingtooin a big wayhas not progressed, butshehas not been idling, is seeking personal gainwithownway.
听完之后,李青山也不禁感慨,在他闭关的这几个月时间里,虽然修为没有什么太大长进,但是她并没有闲着,在用自己的方式钻营着。„Thismatter, will not haveanydanger, Little Anwill not haveanydanger, Ido not have the qualificationsto remindanything.”
“这件事,不会有什么危险,小安也不会有什么危险,我也没资格提醒什么。”„Cansurelynot have the danger?”
“能肯定没有危险?”„Cannot. Butthatonlyblamedusbeing too weak, starting today, IcannotleaveHundred Philosophical Scriptures Academyagain.”Qian Rongzhicups is drinking.
“不能。但那只怪我们太弱了,从今天起,我不能再离开百家经院了。”钱容芷一杯杯的喝着。Li Qingshanunderstands clearly, howWhite LotusHoly Motherreceivesinjures is heavy, mustkillherlikegrinding the stinking insectsimple, this White Lotus Culttoprebel, henceforthcautiouslydate. Seeks profitby the betrayal. Mustpaypriceforitsbetrayalfinally.李青山了然,白莲圣母受得伤再怎么重,要杀她还是像碾臭虫一样简单,她这个白莲教的头号叛徒,从此得小心翼翼的过日了。靠背叛谋利。终要为其背叛付出代价。„Commander Guhas promisedme, ifIChapter 69cancultivateFoundation Establishment Realmby the pictureto the picture, leadsmeto go toRuyi County.”
“顾统领答应过我,我若第69章以画对画能修到筑基境界,就带我去如意郡。”Li Qingshansaid: „Originallyshehas helpedto arrange the escape route.”李青山道:“原来她已帮安排了后路。”„Escape route? CannotleaveHundred Philosophical Scriptures Academy. Imustbe ableto cultivateFoundation Establishmentwithhow long, tenyearsand20yearsand50years? Bigpossiblycannot repairFoundation Establishment, even ifcultivatedreluctantly. Canbe peacefulinRuyi County?”Qian Rongzhisaid with a smilemiserably, Gu Yanyinghas givenherrichgranting, butshewas notLittle An, is notChu Tian, evenwas notLi Qingshan. Depending onherqualification, cancultivaterefiningSixth Level, even ifwere the dayseesto feel sorry.
“后路?不能出百家经院。我要用多久能修到筑基,十年、20年、50年?大的可能是修不到筑基,就算勉强修到了。在如意郡就可以安生了吗?”钱容芷惨笑道,顾雁影是给了她一笔丰厚的赏赐,但她不是小安、不是楚天,甚至不是李青山。凭她的资质,能修到炼器六层,就算是天见可怜了。Inherheartbeyond controlhate deeplyGu Yanying, hatingherto operate itselflike the chess, hatingherto completely understandobviouslyownhatred, did not care. Hates the ability that oneselfmake a false counterchargecontinuallynot to have.
她心中无法控制的深恨顾雁影,恨她如棋般操纵自己,恨她明明看透了自己的恨意,仍不放在心上。恨自己连反咬一口的能力都没有。Li Qingshanis silent, was hatedbyGolden CoreCultivator. The worldis difficult the institute of hertaking shelter, thisarrives at the Hundred Philosophical Scriptures Academyviciouswomanwithhimtogether, althoughlooks like the scenery, buthas actually arrived in a dead end.李青山默然,被一个金丹修士所仇恨。天下再难有她容身之所,这个同他一起走到百家经院的恶毒女人,虽然看起来风光,但却走到了一条绝路上。Qian Rongzhisets outsuddenly, takes outonebunch of thingsfromHundred Treasure Pouch. Bigmedicine pillandspirit stones, evenhasDao Elements Pill, manyMiddle GradeHigh GradeSpirit Artifact, Top GradeSpirit Artifact. Dao Elements PillandTop GradeSpirit Artifact, isGu Yanyinggives, regardingQi Refining Warrior. Can be calledsimplyis the most precious object.钱容芷豁然起身,从百宝囊中取出一堆东西来。大笔的丹药和灵石,其中甚至有一颗道行丹,还有诸多中品上品灵器,还有一件极品灵器。道行丹和极品灵器,都是顾雁影给的,对于一个炼气士来说。简直称得上是至宝。Li Qingshanalsosuspected that Qian Rongzhihas gotten drunk, moreoverfierce that must be drunkcompared withChu Danqing.李青山也怀疑钱容芷是不是喝醉了,而且比褚丹青还要醉的厉害。„Imustcarry out the task, thesethingsgivetaking carefirst, ifIdo not come back, gaveLittle An.”
“我要去执行任务了,这些东西先给保管,如果我回不来,就送给小安了。”„Now?”Li Qingshanhas also gawked, hearsformidableCultivator, knows the techniques of someDivination, sheexitsnow, how could it not beto walk into a trap, perhapsWhite LotusHoly Mothersuffers dead.
“现在?”李青山也愣了一下,听闻强大的修士,都知晓一些卜算之术,她现在一出去,岂非是自投罗网,恐怕白莲圣母折磨到死。„Ido not want dead, butdoes not wantto livelike this.”Qian Rongzhismiledcharmingly, has gathered togetherhair, shejusttamed the destiny, candefer toownwillto plan the plan. Nowactuallybecause ofWhite Lotus Cult, loses the leeway that went throughto organize, anyplanhas flooded the possibility of failure, compared withdying, thissituationin additionmadeher unable to tolerate.
“我不是想死,只是不想这样活。”钱容芷妩媚一笑,拢了拢发丝,她刚刚将命运驯服,可以按照自己的意志去策划筹谋。现在却因白莲教,失去了辗转腾挪的余地,任何计划都充斥了失败的可能,比起死,这种情况加令她无法容忍。Now, shemustwrestle a fighting tooth and nailnumberagain, onlyforcannot depend onitto survive.
现在,她要再去搏一搏命数,只为可以再也不靠它生存。Inthis time, the skywas twisting, densemist, againhundredislandsblockades. Afterday after dayemergency repair, Dragon SnakeGreat Formationrevolvesfinallyagain, aidshundredyounger brothers.
正在这时候,天空扭曲了一下,稠密的雾气,再一次将百家诸岛封锁。经过连日的抢修,龙蛇大阵终于再一次运转起来,护佑百家弟。InHundred Philosophical Scriptures Academy, manyyounger brothers, stop the footsteps, goes out of the construction, raises headto watch.百家经院中,许多弟,停下脚步,走出建筑,仰头观看。Each otherwas discussingquietly: „Thenmaybe good!”
彼此悄声议论着:“这下可好了!”„Beforethought that was very restricted, nowdoes not feelthisGreat Formation, withnot havingclothes.”
“以前觉得挺受拘束,现在感觉没这大阵,就跟没衣服似的。”Innumerableterrifiedrestlessminds, because ofrestarting of thisGreat Formation, butreturns to normal.
无数个惶恐不安的心灵,因这大阵的重启,而平复起来。Qian Rongzhiself-ridiculessmiles, leavesIllusory Cloud Island, leavesHundred Philosophical Scriptures Academy, steps into the wavecraftyYunJuefate.钱容芷自嘲一笑,离开云虚岛,离开百家经院,踏入波诡云谲的命数中。Li Qingshanreceivessilentlythesethings, did not bless, did not curse.李青山默默将那些东西收起来,既不祝福,也不诅咒。Looked at a weather, returns to the roomto startto write.
望了一眼天色,回屋开始写作。
The balled paperlosesfallsplace, Li Qingshanis worried, Li Baifightsliquorpoemhundred, can't hisLi Qingshanfight of liquoractuallywrite a fairy tale?
纸团丢落一地,李青山苦恼,李白斗酒诗百篇,他李青山斗酒却写不来一篇童话吗?In the heart the miraculous glowdodges, Li Qingshansets out, „thisstory, suchdoes not write!”
心中灵光一闪,李青山起身,“这个故事,不是这么写的!”Arrives atIllusory Cloud Association, Sun FubaiandLiu Chuanfengis making the intenserevisiontohisnovel, butthisresilienceis nothing less thanbig. Is the novels of 1 millioncharacters, changesto want the entirerevision, moreover around canecho, even ifwatches, is notseveraldayscanchange.
来到云虚社,孙福柏和刘川风正对他的小说进行紧张的修改,但这个工程量不可谓不大。长达1000000字的小说,一改就要全篇修改,而且还得能够呼应前后,纵然不眠不休,也不是几天能改完的。Sun Fubaialsosaid: „Qingshan, was too hastythis time.”孙福柏也道:“青山,这个时间太仓促了。”„Onlyhastrieswith every effort.”Li QingshanalsosaidtoLiu Chuanfeng: „Helpsmedraw something.”
“唯有尽力一试。”李青山又对刘川风道:“帮我画些东西。”„Mywherehas the time!”Liu Chuanfengcalled out.
“我哪有时间啊!”刘川风叫道。„Ilook forotherartist.”Li Qingshanremembers, Illusory Cloud Associationis also raisingmanyartists, originallyisspeciallyfor the novelpictureillustration.
“那我去找别的画师。”李青山想起,云虚社也养着不少画师的,本是专门为小说画插画的。Li Qingshanhas selected the meetingpainterbrush strokeyoungartist, thensaidin the heartto thinkthathowevertheydrew.李青山点了会画工笔画的年轻画师,然后道出心中所想,然他们画图。VisitsafterLi Qingshan, the Illusory Cloud Associationpeoplethenknow that this is one of the threebigowners, how dareto neglect, the strength that hurriedto put outto nursedraws.
从李青山参观之后,云虚社众人便知道这位这位是三大东主之一,怎敢怠慢,赶紧拿出吃奶的力气画了起来。Li Qingshansits in meditation, a moment later, an artistwill draw the goodtypepictureto hand over: „Master, youlooked that thismaybecome.”Anotherartistalsohurried the speed.李青山打坐,片刻之后,一个画师将画好的样画递上来:“东家,您看这样可成。”另一个画师也赶紧加了速度。Li Qingshanlooks, is really lifelike, fineextraordinary, an image of poor familyyouth, appears gloriously on the paper, butLi Qingshanactuallyshakes the head: „It is not good, picturewas good!”李青山一看,果然是栩栩如生,精致非凡,一个贫家少年的形象,跃然纸上,但李青山却摇摇头:“不行,画的太好了!”Pictureis goodinsteadnot to be how good, twoartistlook at each other in dismay.
画的好怎么反而不行,两个画师面面相觑。„Thisisto the childlooked that mustsimplybe as far as possible more transparent, moreoverdoes not want the blank, wants the entirecolor.”Li Qingshanin the heartdefinitelyownidea, thisstory, mustwith the picture, canexpressthattypeto comemysteriously, wantsinitially, heto lookis a picturebook.
“这是给孩看的,要尽量简单明了一些,而且不要留白,要全彩。”李青山在心中肯定了自己的想法,这个故事,非得用画面,能表达出那种神奇来,想当初,他看的就是一本画书。Moreover must guaranteethat the map-readknowsintent, the character that the childknowsis very limited. Changes mindthinksthathenowin the thing of doing, is not the so-callednovel, butis the picture-and-story bookor the cartoon.
而且务必要保证,看图知意,小孩认识的字很有限。转念一想,他现在在做的东西,已经不是所谓的小说了,而是连环画或者漫画。HoweverinitiallyNovel School, originallyis the hearsay, does not rigidly adherein the writing, regardless of whatmethod, so long asmakes the personknowandbelievethen, hethenmustdefeat the painterwith the method of painter.
不过初的小说家,本就是道听途说,并不拘泥于文字之中,无论用何种手段,只要让人知道且相信即可,他便是要用画家的手段来击败画家。StaysinIllusory Cloud Associationto the evening, finallyhas set the style, butsimplifiessimplifiesagain, picture that twoartistsdraw, himremembers that the picturebookis finer.
在云虚社呆到晚上,终于定下了画风,不过精简再精简,两位画师画出来的画,还是比他记忆中的画书精致许多。Thenimmediatelyconvenesallexcels at the painterbrush strokeartist, startsto imitate the plan, the storyis simple, altogetheralsoless than100pages of pictures.
然后立刻召集所有擅长画工笔画的画师,开始模仿绘制,故事非常简单,总共也不到100页画。
After Li Qingshanunder the picture, addsto the weakasidesimply, thenhas become a volume of picturebook.
后,李青山在画下面,添上简单到幼稚的旁白,便成了一册画书。Li Qingshanheftsin the hand, thisoriginal manuscript, issummonsin the book the key of character, defeatspainterChu Danqingtrump card.李青山掂在手中,这本原稿,是召唤书中人物的关键,亦击败画家褚丹青的杀手锏。
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……Clear River Prefecture, inside and outside60, in a small town.清河府,60里外,一个小镇中。dong dong donganddong dong dong, merchantis nipping the rattle-drum, is selecting the shoulder pole, passes throughalley that the blue stonepaves.咚咚咚、咚咚咚,货郎咬着拨浪鼓,挑着扁担,走过青石铺就的小巷。In the street, the leafopens, finds out a smallhead: „Does Unclemerchant, have the sugar?”
巷弄里,门扉开启,探出一个小脑袋:“货郎大叔,有糖吗?”„Has, the sesame candy, malt sugar and sweetcrunchy candy, every kindhave!”merchantis pulling the throat, sing songssent outonestring of goodsnames.
“有,芝麻糖、麦芽糖、甜酥糖,样样都有!”货郎扯着嗓,唱曲般报出一串货名。Oneflock of childsmallmonkeysflee, encirclestomerchantside, inpalmis pinchingseveralcopper coins.
一群孩小猴般窜出来,围到货郎身旁,手心里捏着几个铜板。„What is this?” A childseeson the cargo, thatpile of colorbrightpicturebooks, abovewritesfourcharacters, heonlyrecognizesone„horse”character.
“这是什么?”一个孩看到货物上面,那一堆色彩鲜艳的画书,上面写着四个字,他只认得一个“马”字。merchantsaid: „Is sharp-eyed, takes awayto look.”货郎道:“就眼尖,拿去瞧。”
A childeverybook, reads, perhapsalso the content in nottooclearbook, the onlythatfinepictures, attractedtheirmind, in the hearthave blown hot and coldimmediately, wasbuys the sugarorbuys the book?
孩人手一本,翻看起来,或许还并不太明白书中的内容,单凭那一幅幅精美的画,就吸引了他们的心神,心中顿时摇摆不定起来,是买糖还是买书?„Thisbookhow muchmoney? Ibought!” A fattrack, the copper coin in hishand is more than the little friends.
“这书多少钱?我买了!”一个胖小道,他手中的铜板比小伙伴都要多些。„Ialsobuy!” The oldchildsaidthathehas known the characterin the private school, lookedto understand the followingwriting, in the storybybookis attracted immediately then, even ifdid not eat the sugaralso to buy.
“我也买!”年纪大的孩道,他在私塾里识过字,看明白了下面的文字,立刻便被书中的故事所吸引,纵然不吃糖也要买。merchantsaid: „Does not ask for money, thisisdelivers, a person of book, does not take!”货郎道:“不要钱,这是送的,一人一本,不许多拿!”Childrencheers.
孩们一阵欢呼。„Can Ialsotake?”ChildtimidEarthly Dao, compared withcompanioncotton-wadded jacket, heis knitting the clothes of patch, appearsespeciallyfrail, inhishand a copper coindoes not have, butjoins in the fun.
“我也可以拿吗?”一个孩怯怯地道,比起同伴身上的棉袄,他打着补丁的衣服,显得格外单薄,他手里一个铜板也没有,只是来凑热闹的。„Takes away!”merchanthas filledtwosugarconvenientlyin the childmouth, deliversthesebooks, the silver money that results, usuallysells the entireloadgoods more, cancelebrate the new year, in the heart is also extremelyhappy.
“拿去吧!”货郎又随手塞了两块糖在孩嘴里,把这些书送出去,得的银钱,比平常卖整担货都多,能过个好年,心中也是极高兴。merchanthas walked away, the childrengatherinone.货郎走远了,孩们聚在一块。„Reallyattractive.”„Whatthispictureisanything!”
“真漂亮。”“这画的是什么呀!”That year the longchild, studied the misterto coughtwo: „Come, Ireadlisten!”
那年长的孩,学着先生咳嗽两声:“来,我读给们听!”
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……Sun Shupingtook a chapter of manuscriptfromSun Fubaithere, preparedto go backto reviewfirst, thinks how shouldsay, thentaughtotherstorytellers.
孙书平从孙福柏那里拿过了一章书稿,准备先回去温习一遍,想好了该怎么说,再去教给其他说书人。Althoughthought when thisbookchangesmight as wellnot to changehas the flavor, butdoes not haveanythingto changefortunatelyroughly, somepass/testholeparts, such ascanreach an agreementalsohad the good luck. A bladecuts offGuangmingding, poursinterestingalso.
虽然觉得这书改了还不如不改时有韵味,但还好大体没什么变化,一些关窍部分,如能说好了还有彩头。一刀斩断光明顶,倒也有趣的很。Thatyoung masterlooks likeyoung, the skill of thiswriting a bookalso was really, compared withthattwomasters, the love affairmastermaywantfiercemany.
那位小东家看起来年轻,这写书的本事还真是了得,比那二东家,风月主人可要厉害的多。ps: Treated as the hoodlumknotdoes not existpassedgenerally, yes, so long asdisregardedwere good, womananythingwas unimportant, so long asthere is a monthly ticket( to seek the demonto be enough, hehehehe, the having tears streaming down the facehome station the support, wasmybigpower.
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