„This, thisisyouwritesreally?”
“这,这真的是你写的吗?”
The Liu Chuanfengeyepupilblushesfaintly, hesavedis instructingLi Qingshan, rallies the Master saying that the dignitythoughtslook. 刘川风眼眸隐隐发红,他本是存着指导一下李青山,重振师道尊严的心思去看的。【文字首发网】Un, military, seems does not havecultivatorWorld, backgroundactuallyverylikelymatter, butthisgrammar, was too rather white, actuallydid not haveincluding the introductionpoem, yes, Qingshanhewasin the ravinecomes out, wantedhimto compose a poem, extremelyhas forced, at this time, mustlookownthisMaster.嗯,武者,似乎是个没修行者的世界,背景倒是挺像回事的,不过这个文法,未免太白了吧,竟然连开篇诗都没有,是啊,青山他是山沟里出来的,要他写诗,也太过勉强了,这种时候,就得看自己这个师傅的了。Liu Chuanfengharborsa lot ofopinions, slowlylooks,thenhas forgotten the originalgoalgradually, in being linked togetherplotby the bookwas held, pages of looks, whenrecovers, saw the ending, the weatherhad gotten dark.刘川风怀着一肚子意见,慢慢看下去,然后渐渐忘了本来的目的,被书中环环相扣情节抓住,一页页的看下去,等到回过神来,已看到了结尾,天色已经黑了下来。
The mode of writing of entire chapternovel, is completely differentfromthese that hesawin the past, is the ideais great, the descriptionis exquisite, allscenes, wantto comenow, stillcomes clearly into view. Thisnovel is not only not bad, goodinconceivable, letshisthoughtsoriginallysimply, fellon the vacancycompletely.
整篇小说的写法,完全不同于他以往所看到的那些,却是构思宏大,描摹细腻,一切场景,如今想来,犹历历在目。这本小说非但不差,简直好的不可思议,让他原本的心思,完全落在了空处。Li Qingshansaid: „Naturally.”李青山道:“当然。”„Is impossible, thisis impossible.”Liu Chuanfengmuttered, hehas writtenthese manyyears, fully realizeddifficulty.
“不可能,这不可能。”刘川风喃喃道,他写了这么多年,深知其中的难度。„Ha, Iamgenius.”Li Qingshanis patting the shoulder of Liu Chuanfeng, really the story of Grandmasterhas the strength, naturally the localization of Little Anrevises, has lasting achievements.
“哈,我可是天才。”李青山拍着刘川风的肩膀,果然大师的故事是有力量的,当然小安的本土化修改,亦功不可没。„Well, what is this?”InLi Qingshanregardsoneself, discovered that originallygloomymeritDivine Symbol, is dodgingis lightening the light, raised the head, is looking atLiu Chuanfengfiercely, suddenlythought that feels quite at home.
“咦,这是什么?”李青山内视自身,发现原本黯淡无光的功德神符,其中正闪着一点亮光,猛地抬起头,望着刘川风,突然觉得倍感亲切。Alsowas worried, thing that copies. CancollectWish Power, didn't this firstreaderhave?
原本还担心,抄来的东西。能不能收集愿力,这第一个读者不就有了吗?Liu Chuanfengcould not find a betteranswer, has the frontto accept the explanation of Li Qingshan. ProbablyisbecausehecomesJiang Hu, thereforewrites the Jiang Humatterto come, sovivid, soeasily.刘川风也找不到更好的答案,只得面前接受李青山的解释。大概是因为他出身江湖,所以写起江湖事来,才会如此的生动,如此轻易。„Qingshan, youenterNovel School. Will not regretdecidedly, mythisdelivers toIllusory Cloud Associationto go, can youthink the pen name?”
“青山,你入小说家。决然不会后悔的,我这就送到云虚社去,你可想好了笔名?”Li Qingshanwas stumpedimmediately. Knits the browsto rack one's brains, in the mind the miraculous glowdodges, raises up the index finger: „CalledGold Dragonto be what kind of?”Thisistwowriters who heconsidersoneselfpossiblyplagiarism. Does not have the fusion of slight defecttheirnameisone.李青山登时被问住了。皱眉苦思,脑海中灵光一闪,竖起食指:“叫金龙怎么样?”这是他考虑到自己最可能抄袭的两位作家。将他们名字毫无瑕疵的融合为一。Liu Chuanfengstaggers, thinks that is looking fornot to be easier than the name of thisearth, exclaimed: „Youthink that youinvillage, gives the nameto the baby? WeareNovel School, the pen nameare our secondlife.”刘川风一个趔趄,想在找个比这土的名字都不容易了,吼道:“你以为你是在村里,给娃娃起名字呢?我们可是小说家,笔名就是我们的第二生命。”Li Qingshanfirst timefacesLiu Chuanfeng, thought that a littledoes not have the temperament, mumbled: „Gold Dragonmulti-domineering aurais auspicious.”Alsoisoneracks brains, asone„writing” the bigwriters of 1 millioncharacters, the pen namedifficulties of severalcharacters, but alsosomewhatis really awkward.李青山头一次面对刘川风,觉得有点没脾气,嘟囔道:“金龙多霸气多吉利。”又是一番苦思冥想,作为一个“写”了1000000字的大作家,几个字的笔名难处,还真有些尴尬。„Shameless. Shamelessgood!”
“无忌。无忌不错吧!”„AsNovel School, howcanin the rolewith the bookof the same name, how will the readerlookhas thought?”
“身为小说家,怎能与书中角色同名,读者看了会怎么想?”„Qingshan!”
“青山!”„Has removed the surname, Beloved Disciple, be please earnest.”
“只是把姓去掉了,爱徒,请你认真一点。”Li Qingshansaid: „Iunderstood. ThatcalledLi Qingshan!”李青山道:“我懂了。那就叫李青山吧!”„Anything, this is not the real name......”
“什么,这不是就是真名……”„Right, is the real name!” The Li Qingshansmile, the whole bodyis brimming with the self-confidentray, recentlywas disturbedby the ordinary affairstoomany, almostforgets the longdateto vainly hope.
“对,就是真名!”李青山微笑,浑身都洋溢着自信的光芒,近来被俗事干扰太多,差点忘了久日梦想。One day. Hemust„Li Qingshan”thisname, spread overNine Provinces, makingtrillionpeoplepraise.
总有一天。他要将“李青山”这个名字,传遍九州,让亿万人传颂。Althoughthisis more like, the childto the fantasy that the skyis sending out, will saywill only make the personlaugh, eveneven/includingoneselfthink,will thinkinteresting, because ofso, cancall the dream.
虽然这更像是,孩子对着天空所发出的幻想,说出来只会让人发笑,甚至连自己想想,都觉得有趣,但真因为如此,才能称之为梦想。Refining upTrue Spiritual Pillis not the dream, buildsMonster Generalis not the dream, becausethey were too proper, will only make the facial expression that makesgrave, the person who listens tokeeps a serious look.
炼成真灵丹不是梦想,修成妖将也不是梦想,因为他们都太正经了,只会让做的神情庄重,听的人表情严肃。SoaksGu Yanying, ishalfdream, althoughhesoearnest, butactuallyalmostsmilessomefellowbut actually. Snort, corporalhearssay/way, laughsit, does not smilethinksto sayinsufficient.
泡到顾雁影,算是半个梦想,虽然他是如此的认真,但却差点把某个家伙笑倒。哼,下士闻道,大笑之,不笑不足以为道。Tube***howothersthink,myLi QingshanmustmakeworldNine Provincesstrongly and most famousperson, ormonster.
管***别人怎么想,我李青山就是要做天下九州最强、最有名的人,或者妖。Allconscientiousefforts, onlytotouch an illusion. So-callednovel, but also is thishugeplansfirst, whythinks of every means that thinksanyfictitious name.
一切脚踏实地的努力,只为触摸一个幻梦。所谓小说,不过也是这庞大计划中的第一步罢了,又何必费尽心机,去想什么假名。„BigNovel SchoolLi Qingshan, thisgiven nameIlike! LetFubaihelpmepropagandizewell, mywith own expense10.002 millionsilver, makingClear River Prefecture everyone knowmygiven name!”
“大小说家李青山,这个名号我喜欢!让福伯帮我好好宣传宣传,我自费10002000白银,让清河府每个人知道我的大名!”„Whatyourgiven name?”
“什么你的大名?”Li Qingshaninhigh-spiritedthoughtunderstandingtime, Hua Chengzanrides the wind.李青山正在意气风发念头通达的时候,花承赞乘风而来。Li Qingshanmoves forward to meet somebody: „How did youcome?”李青山迎上去:“你怎么来了?”Hua Chengzanheard that Li Qingshanwrites a novel, hesitantagainhesitant, asked: „It is not thattype, the Old Wangtemperament is not quite recently good!”花承赞听说李青山真的写出一本小说来,犹豫再犹豫,问道:“不是那种吧,近来老王的脾气不太好!”Li Qingshansaid: „Am Ithatperson?”LetLiu Chuanfengoneblush, indignant.李青山道:“我是那种人吗?”让刘川风一阵脸红,愤愤不平。„Iwantalsoto be, hearsthis afternoon, youinBenevolence Island?” The Hua Chengzanintenthas referred tosaying with a smile, soneatly and quickly, makes contact with the Hundred Philosophical Scriptures Academyfirstfemaleseat of honor, ripples the feelings of love that tomboyHan Qiongzhialsogangs up with, itscharm, non-Liu Chuanfengthispersoncancomparefirmly.
“我想也是,听说今天下午,你都在仁心岛?”花承赞意有所指笑道,如此三下五除二,就搭上百家经院的第一女首席,更将那个男人婆韩琼枝也勾搭的春心荡漾,其魅力之强,确非刘川风这种人所能比。„Do not misunderstand, butstudiesPill Concocting Technique.”Li Qingshanexplainedhastily, althoughRu Xin is very good, butdoes not haveanythingto readtohimobviouslythinks,hedoes not want the harming othersclearreputation, to be disinclinedto takethisopportunityto pursue.
“你不要误会,只是学习炼丹术罢了。”李青山连忙解释,如心虽然很是不错,但显然对他没什么念想,他也不想损人清誉,更懒得利用这种机会去追求。Pursues, must haveone„asking”character, herepugnantlyasks others for help, he was born inthis, whichwomantonot giveworks as the lackey, this point, even iftoGu Yanying is also same.
追求追求,少不了一个“求”字,他偏偏是最讨厌求人的,他生于此界,不是为了给哪个女人当奴才的,这一点,哪怕是对顾雁影也是一样。„, Did not saythis, can youhave the timerecently?”Hua Chengzanactuallydoes not believe that the personality of thatwoman, he is also manyasks for advice, the impossiblespendingtimefor no reasonteachesLi QingshanPill Concocting Technique.
“罢了,不说这个,你最近可有时间?”花承赞却是不信,那个女人的性情,他也是多有领教,绝不可能平白无故的花时间教李青山炼丹术。„Does?”
“干什么?”„trialduty.”
“试炼任务。”
Since thishas been the Eagle Wolf Guardcontinuouslytradition, newEagle Wolf Guard, Eagle Wolf Guard that promotes, mustcomplete a trialtask, toprove that itshas the qualificationsto hold the post ofthisduty. Althoughuntil now, the symbolic significancehas been bigger than the practical significance, butis indispensable. Li QingshanthisnewRed Wolf Guard, fromalsounavoidablysteps onto.
这是鹰狼卫一直以来的传统,无论是新加入的鹰狼卫,还是后晋升的鹰狼卫,都要完成一次试炼任务,以证明其有资格担任此职。虽然到如今,象征意义已经大于实际意义,但却是不可或缺的。李青山这新晋赤狼卫,自也免不了走上一遭。„Whatdutyis?”Li Qingshanthought that makesRu Xinteachalone, is a correctchoice, otherwiseall thingsdisturbance, does not know when canto learnPill Concocting Technique of holonomic system, refineTrue Spiritual Pill.
“是什么任务?”李青山更觉得让如心单独授课,是个正确的选择,否则诸事干扰,不知何时才能完整系统的学会炼丹术,将真灵丹炼制出来。„OurNight Eaglewas killed, possiblyis relatedwithWhite Lotus Cult, don't worry, butinvestigates the duty. Ifdiscovers the murderer, while convenientforourpersonrevenge, ifcannot discover, came backto report after carrying out orderson the line.”
“我们的一个夜鹰被杀了,可能与白莲教有关,不用担心,只是调查任务。如果找出凶手,就顺便为我们的人复仇,如果找不出,回来复命就行了。”Li Qingshansaid: „Myprevioustrialduty, investigates the duty.”Finallynot only need killDaoist Jiangshi, but alsobraisedBlessed Peace CityEagle Wolf Guardonespoon.李青山道:“我的上一个试炼任务,也是调查任务。”结果不但得杀僵尸道人,还把嘉平城的鹰狼卫一勺烩了。Hua Chengzansaid: „So long asdoes not have the Altar Lordlevelcharacterto appear, commonQi Refining Warriorfeared that could not injureyourslightest, Commander Guseveraltimesencircles, White Lotus CultallAltar Lord, alreadykilledalmost, the remainingfish slip throughdo not dareto appear, after completing the task, buthas the reward.”花承赞道:“只要没有坛主级人物出现,寻常炼气士怕是伤不了你分毫,顾统领几次围剿,白莲教的各方坛主,早就被杀的7788,剩下的漏网之鱼也不敢露头,完成任务之后,可是另有奖励。”„Whatrewards?”
“什么奖励?”Hua Chengzansaid with a smile: „Youexpect for a long time, goes toRuyi County, sees right in front of oneCommander Gu!”This is also a Eagle Wolf Guardmanyyears of tradition, the new personhas the qualificationsto see right in front of oneupperCommander, if the luckis good, has been regarded as important, many advantage.花承赞笑道:“你期待已久的,前往如意郡,面见顾统领!”这亦是鹰狼卫多年的传统,新人有资格面见上一级统领,如果运气好,得到看重,更有许多好处。„Thisis actually good.”Li Qingshan is also shows the smiling face, healsowantsto verifyin the heartthatsuspicion, approachesthathalfdream.
“这倒是不错。”李青山也是露出笑容来,他也想去印证一下心中那个猜想,去接近那半个梦想。, , , 看无广告,全文字无错首发小说,网-文字首发,您的最佳选择!
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