Almosttendayslater, smallship-basedJi Yuan, Wang LiandZhang Ruigoin a creek, the fronthad gradually been close toConnecting Heavens River.
差不多十天之后,一艘小船载着计缘、王立和张蕊行驶在一条小河上,前方已经逐渐接近了通天江。
The small boatgoessteadily, has almost not swayedvery much, on the smalltableboard in cabin, but also is putting the wordspaperinkstone, Wang Liis writingto writeanythingon the table, Zhang Ruisitsin the nearbylooks.
小舟行驶得很平稳,几乎都没怎么摇晃,船舱内的小桌板上,还放着笔墨纸砚,王立正在桌上执笔书写着什么,张蕊则坐在边上看着。Long timelater, Wang Liwrote down the lastcharacterfinally, stretch/leisurelyhas the one breath, placeson the pen the pen rack.
良久之后,王立终于写下了最后一个字,舒出一口气,将笔放在笔架上。Looked around Zhang Rui, Wang Liremembered the beforehandlesson, hurriedto askJi Yuanone.
看了看边上的张蕊,王立想起了之前的教训,赶紧问了计缘一句。„Mister Ji, the person in your story, did not mind that Wangreorganizessomeplotsappropriately, something very not convenientbooks in circulation, changing intoprevious dynastyorfabricated a dynasty more appropriate.”
“计先生,您这故事中的人,不介意王某适当改编些情节吧,有些事情还是很不方便成书的,换成前朝或者杜撰一个王朝更合适一些。”Justlistened to the Ji Yuanlecture, springwashedin the river the story of thatoldturtle, sincewereMister Jimouthsays, thatmost likelyhave happened.
刚刚听计缘讲完的,正是春沐江上那老龟的故事,既然是计先生口里说出来的,那八成就是真实发生过的。HowWang Lidoes not know good from badagain, knew that thisstoryis not goodnot to make the revisiondirectlyon the book in circulation.王立再怎么不知好歹,也晓得这种故事不好直接不做修改就成书的。
The matter that these daysexperiencesisto a bigupheaval that in the Wang Liheartbrings, butrelated to the aspect of storytellingmisterlabor of duty, he can still maintain a relativemoderation.
这段时间经历的事情算是给王立心中带来的不小的震动,但涉及到说书先生本职工作的方面,他依然能保持一颗相对的平常心。„Hahahaha......, so long asdo not changetooexcessivelybecomes, thatoldturtlewill not mind.”
“哈哈哈哈……只要别改得太过分就成,那老龟是不会介意的。”„Un......”
“嗯……”Wang Licomplied withone, thought, hesitatesis continue open the mouth.王立应了一声,想了下,还是犹豫着继续开口。„Mister Ji, actuallyIthought the result of thisstoryis somewhat improper.”
“计先生,其实我觉得这故事的结局有些不妥。”Ji Yuanis sculling, speaks thoughtlesslyto replyone.计缘摇着橹,随口回答一句。„Mister Wangthinks where is improper? Mentionedlistens.”
“王先生以为何处不妥?说来听听。”For serveral daysWang Lihad understood the Ji Yuantemperamentroughly, thereforealsofelt relieved that saidboldly.
这些天来王立大致上已经了解了计缘的脾气,所以也就放心大胆的说了。„Mister Ji, thisstoryhadwindingly, hadmysteriously, the vicissitudesdo not lack, the depthare also many, butthisresult, Wangalwaysfeelsstrange, youthink that thistowardgreat-grandfathergreat-grandmotherthat sidealsogood, Xiao, theywill perhaps withstandsomeprices, this pointyouare the Divine Immortalnatureare clear, maynot be obviousme.”
“计先生,这故事曲折有了,神奇有了,沧桑不缺,深度也不少,但这结局,王某总觉得不妥,您想啊,本朝太祖那边也好,萧氏一门也罢,他们或许是会承受一些代价的,这一点您是神仙自然清楚,可于我而言却不明显。”Wang Liconsidered a languageto continueto say.王立斟酌了一下语言继续道。„Wangthinks, the storytellingtold the story, except forbringshappilyfor the populace, but alsoundertakesis alerting the function of the world, worldgood and evilis truly hardto speak the respectiveretribution, but at least in the story, shouldhave, canachieve, ifin the story of storytellercannothappyeliminationwicked, thatinsipidly......”
“王某以为,说书说故事,除了为大众带来一点欢乐,还承担着一些警醒世人的作用,世间善恶确实难以明言各自的报应,但至少在故事中,应该有,也能做到有,倘若连说书人的故事中都不能让人痛快的除恶,那得多没劲啊……”„......”
“啪啪啪啪啪……”Ji Yuanputs down the sculloar, rousedseveralto holdtowardWang Li.计缘放下橹桨,朝着王立鼓了几下掌。„Saidwell, saidwell! According tochanging that inyourheartthinks.”
“说得不错,说得好!按你心中所想的改吧。”„Hehe, did I...... change?”
“嘿嘿,那我……就改了?”Wang Lialsoconfirmed asked that Ji Yuanswings the scull, the nodstress of said.王立又确认性的问了一句,计缘重新摇起橹,点了点头重音道。„Changes!”
“改!”Such being the case, Wang Lino longeris also polite, took the pento moistenblack inkdirectly, openedonepageto writeagain.
既然如此,王立也不再客气,直接取了笔沾了墨,翻开一页再次书写。Hispresentis the draft, butbefore the memoryfadeswrites down a Mister Jilecture of contenton the whole, laterwill carve, is gradually improve perfect the story.
他现在的不过是初稿,只是在记忆消退之前把计先生讲的内容大体上都记下来,之后才会精雕细琢,逐渐将故事完善。Formsone to remember that the profoundgoodstory, essencenaturallycannot lack, butpolishing of storytellersimilarlyimportant, inthisprocessWang Li was also worked wholeheartedly, after allcompared withsomeformerday of hearsayortranscribed that otherfamousstories, thisrealgods and ghostsstorymaymakehimmore excited.
形成一篇能让人记忆深刻的好故事,本身的内核自然缺不得,但说书人的润色同样至关重要,这过程中王立也算是呕心沥血了,毕竟比起以前一些天传闻或者抄录其他有名的故事,这种真实的神异故事可令他更加兴奋不已的。SomeZhang Ruisurpriselooks atWang Li, thispersonwrote the storyandsaidstorytime, withacted like a different personin the brothel, justthatwith the Mister Jiquestion and answer, wassurprisesher.张蕊有些诧异的看着王立,这个人写故事和说故事的时候,同在青楼里判若两人,刚刚那一番同计先生的问答,更是令她意外。OnlyWang Licansayjustthatwords, causingMister Jiisitapplauds, madeZhang Ruihold in high esteemtoWang Li.
单凭王立能说出刚刚那一番话,引得计先生为其鼓掌,就令张蕊对王立刮目相看了。Thinkscarefully, «White Deer's Fate» that initiallyreorganized, actuallyalsosomesimilarmeaning, oneselffeeldisgustingly, butisbecauseby chanceis the reorganization„victim”, andWhite DeerandYoung Zhouresult, althoughthere is a sadessence, butreunitedin the nether worldafter all, becomes the family memberfinally, the tragedymadeonesobbedat the same time, the City Godlaw was also the impressionto be profoundsternly.
仔细想想,当初改编的《白鹿缘》,其实也有差不多的意味,自己感觉得恶心,不过是因为恰巧是改编的“受害人”,并且白鹿和周郎的结局,虽然有悲的内核,但毕竟在阴司团聚了,不失为终成眷属,悲剧更令人唏嘘的同时,城隍的法度森严也为人印象深刻。But the Wang Li not clearnether worldfloggingwas how muchat that time, making the storyby the understanding of this awarenesssomehard coreknowledgemore excessive.
只不过当时王立并不清楚阴司鞭刑有多重,使得故事被她这种知道一些硬核知识的理解过度了一些。Wang Li is still wielding a brush the revision, once for a whilewill also stopto grind ink, Zhang Ruiexcept forhad a look athimto writeanythingoccasionally, wholetimein the closing eyestraining, the incense and candlewere willing the strengthnot to thinktemporarily, butcanabsorb the Yinspiritual energy in the waterpassingslowly.王立还在挥毫修改,时不时还会停下来磨墨,张蕊则除了偶尔看看他写了什么,大部分时间在闭目修养,香火愿力暂时是别想了,但可以缓缓吸纳水中透上来的阴灵气。In the shipconvergesConnecting Heavens Riverafter the class/flow of creektogetherapproximatelysmallhalf day, the shipstartsto presentsomespecialair bubbles.
在船随着小河之流一起汇入通天江后大约小半日,船边开始出现一些特殊的气泡。„Mister Ji?”
“计先生?”DiscoveryunusualZhang Ruiopened the eye, inquired, discovered that Ji Yuanshakes the head.
发现异常的张蕊睁开了眼,询问了一声,发现计缘只是摇了摇头。„It is not in the way.”
“不碍事。”Really, inmet to return to the original condition, in the wateralsonostrangematter happened, Wang Lidoes not knowZhang Ruioncealerted, but alsoimmersedin the ownstoryworld.
果然,没过一会一切就恢复了原状,水中也没什么奇怪的事情发生,王立则根本不知道张蕊曾经戒备了一下,还沉浸在自己的故事世界中。ArrivedConnecting Heavens River, the mound of earth and forest landwere many, roughlypasses a momentmulti-bell, the small boatunderJi Yuanscullsto driveto turn around a windingregion, Zhang Ruisuddenlydiscovered after the mound of earth , the nearshoreis standingtwopeople.
到了通天江这边,土丘和林地就多了起来,约莫又过去一刻多钟,小舟在计缘摇橹带动下拐过一处蜿蜒区域,张蕊突然发现土丘后近侧的岸边正站着两个人。Thesetwopeoplewear the magnificentclothing, a man and a womanare delicate and pretty , the Hong Xiuappearancecontraststhatfemalesto be overshadowed, butthisremotebleakposition, howwill havesuchtwopeopleto standin the shore, the nearbydoes not have the carriages and horsesnot to have the ships.
这两人身着华丽的服饰,一男一女俊美非常,红秀的容颜对比那女子都黯然失色,但这种偏僻荒凉的位置,怎么会有这样两个人站在岸边,附近既无车马也无船只啊。„Yeah, Wang Li, that sidehas the beautifulmiss.”
“哎,王立,那边有美丽的姑娘呢。”„.”
“哦。”Wang Licomplied withonenot to raise the head, after writingseveralcharacters, seemsrecovers, lookedhastilyfollowingZhang Rui the direction of finger, reallysawthattwosemblanceoutstandingpeople.王立应了一声没有抬头,写了几个字之后好似才回过神来,连忙顺着张蕊的手指的方向望去,果然看到了那两个外表出众的人。AfterwardZhang RuiandWang Lidiscovered,besides the twoinlooking atboat, the boatis also approaching the shore.
随后张蕊和王立发现,除了那两人一直在看着小船外,小船也正在靠近岸边。„Ying FengYing Ruoli”
“应丰应若璃”„Pays respects toUncle Ji!”
“拜见计叔叔!”dragon childanddragon daughter, when the boatis away from the thisalso78zhang (3.33 m), seriousbowingasked the ritual.龙子和龙女在小船距离自己这还有七八丈的时候,就郑重的躬身问礼。Ji Yuanputs down the scullto return a courtesyin the bowsubmissively.计缘就在船头放下船橹拱手回礼。„Twovirtuousnephewsare good!”
“两位贤侄好!”NormalJi Yuanwill call„Your Highness Ying”generallyand„rivergodempress”.
正常来讲计缘一般是会称呼“应殿下”和“江神娘娘”的。ButthismeetsWang Lion the ship, calledthispersondirectlyonestartledonefor the first time, thereforethistimesimplyonname„virtuousnephew”.
但这会王立在船上,直接这么叫说不得这人又得一惊一乍,所以这次干脆就称呼“贤侄”了。Actuallylooks at the response of impactWang Lireceivedfew days ago, Ji Yuandoes not think that Wang Licontacted the matters of toomanygods and ghosts, rephrased in own wordsafterhim, as a purestorytellershouldbe ablemany.
其实看了王立前些日子受到的冲击的反应,计缘就不想王立本身接触太多的神怪之事了,由他转述后,作为一个纯粹的说书人应该会更好些。Thismeetingshipsjustapproach shore, dragon childanddragon daughtervisit the bowtogether, later the boatthencontinuesto goalong the surface of the riverto the country capitaldirection.
这会船只刚好靠岸,龙子和龙女一起踏足船头,随后小船这才继续沿着江面行驶向京都方向。Embarksfromthese two, althoughnostrengthlawgodlight/onlyappears, butZhang Ruidoes not dareto speaksubconsciously, evenWang Li is also onlydaresto look attwo peoplesecretly, mainlywriteswriting.
自这两人上船,虽然没什么力法神光显现,但张蕊下意识就不太敢说话,连王立也是只敢偷瞄一下两人,主要还是执笔书写。„Uncle Ji, do youwantto go toCapital City? My fatheris sleeping, canawakenhim?”
“计叔叔,您是要去京城?我爹在睡觉呢,要叫醒他么?”Looked that Ji Yuanthisstancedefinitelydoes not comeConnecting Heavens Riverspecially, inthiseyedragon childhas.
看计缘这架势肯定不是专门来通天江的,这点眼里龙子还是有的。„Doesn't use.”
“不用不用。”„Uncle Ji, thesetwo are?”
“计叔叔,这两位是?”dragon daughterarrives at the cabin, salutestowardinsidetwo peopleinnumerable blessings, whileinquiredone.龙女走到船仓边,一边朝着里头的两人万福施礼,一边询问一声。Zhang RuiandWang Lihurryto return a courtesy.张蕊和王立赶紧回礼。„IcalledZhang Rui, was...... a native of Yanzhou, hecalledWang Li, a storytellingartisan.”
“我叫张蕊,是……燕州人,他叫王立,一个说书匠。”Wang Lilooks that the Zhang Ruimouthpulled out.王立看着张蕊嘴抽了一下。„, Below Wang Li, is the storytellingmister.”
“呃呵,在下王立,是个说书先生。”„Un, girlYing Ruoli, thatiselder brotherYing Feng, is the Mister Jilater generation.”
“嗯,小女子应若璃,那一位是兄长应丰,都是计先生的后辈。”AfterwardYing Ruolientered the cabinto understandWang Liafterwhy, soonwent outto chatwithJi Yuan.
随后应若璃进了船舱了解了一下王立在干什么之后,就很快出去和计缘聊天了。In the laterhalf-daytime, on the small boatwere manytwo people, until the nextwharf, Ji Yuanapproaches shore the small boat.
之后的半天时间里,小舟上就多了两人,直到下一个码头,计缘才将小舟靠岸。Zhang RuiandWang Liknowdistinctiontime, theycame ashore, Ji Yuanandanothertwohave not movedon the ship.张蕊和王立知道到了分别的时候了,他们两人上了岸,计缘和另外两位则在船上没动。„Travels by boatfromthiswharf, alongConnecting Heavens Riverinsoutheast, canarrive inYanzhouquickly.”
“从这个码头坐船,沿着通天江往东南方向,就能很快到达燕州。”Thiswasreached an agreement, Zhang Ruinaturallycannotgo tocountry capital, not onlywantsto improve the storyandwantsto followDivine Immortal, butJi Yuandid not have the planto leadhim, took away the austeremansionto fearhimthispersonwas criticizedby the brothelthat side, saved the meaning of lettinghimfar away from the place of courtesan.
这是早就说好的,张蕊自然不会去京都,既想完善故事又想跟着神仙,但计缘没打算一直带着他,将他带离成肃府既是怕这人被青楼那边清算,也是存了让他远离花柳之地的意思。ThismeetsZhang Ruihiddento go to the figureto standsideWang Li, buton the persontoshipsalutes the farewell, Wang Liobviouslyis more excited.
这会张蕊已经隐去身形站在王立身边,只是冲着船上的人施礼告别,王立则更显激动一些。„Mister Ji, whenI can also seeyou, youlooked that Ido have the opportunityto be able... to bebecomesuch asyourcharacterso......”
“计先生,我什么时候还能见着您啊,您看我有没有机会能…就是成为如您这般的人物……”Wang Li of ashorehas a look at the person in surroundingwharf, vaguelyinquiry of anticipation, thissayingprovoked laughterZhang Ruianddragon childdragon daughter.
岸上的王立看看周围码头的人,隐晦而期待的询问一句,这话把张蕊和龙子龙女都逗笑了。Ji Yuanunderstands that meaning of Wang Li, everyonesaid that Divine Immortalis good, actually, is truly good.计缘明白王立的意思,人人都道神仙好嘛,其实嘛,也确实挺好。„Hahahaha...... Mister Wangcompletesyourstoryteller, we can also meetagain.”
“哈哈哈哈……王先生做好你的说书人,我们还能再见面的。”Ji Yuanon the bamboo polewith the shipis supporting the wharfshorewith a smile, pushesis escorting to the surface of the river the boat, Wang Liononshoregazes after the small boatto be far away, is somewhat moved.计缘笑着以船上竹竿撑着码头岸边,推着将小船送往江面,王立在岸上目送小舟远离,有些怅然若失。When the boatleaveswharf several feet, Ji Yuanturned aroundto callonesuddenly.
在小船离开码头十几丈的时候,计缘突然转身吆喝了一句。„Mister Wang, before oneday, youin the words that on the shipspoke, cancontinuouslyso?”
“王先生,一日前,你在船上说的话,会一直如此吧?”Ji Yuanthese wordsaskedsomewhatwithout reason, dragon childdragon daughterdid not know the circumstances of the matter, Zhang Ruihas not respondedsuddenly,wasWang Liactuallyunderstandsin the flashon the contraryMister Jiis askinganything, in the day before the mindflashed throughhesaid that mustchange the matter of storyresult, as well asMister Jithenapplause.计缘这句话问得有些没头没脑,龙子龙女不知情,就连张蕊也一时间没反应过来,反倒是王立却在一刹那明白了计先生在问什么,脑海中闪过前一天他说要改故事结局的事情,以及计先生当时的掌声。„Mister JiWangcancontinuouslyso”
“计先生王某会一直如此的”Wang Liis calling the responsetoward the surface of the river.王立朝着江面吆喝着回应。Ji Yuannods, inshorewardsseriousarchedcupping one hand in the other across the chestagain.计缘点了点头,朝着岸上郑重的再次拱了拱手。Wang Lisees thatdoes not dareto neglect, rushesto return a courtesy, laterlooks the small boatis betteris farther, was quickly slurredin the line of sight.王立见状不敢怠慢,也赶忙回礼,随后看着小舟越行越远,很快在视线中就模糊不清了。„Walks, Mr.kingbig, do not thinkto be suspiciousis going toCapital City!”
“走吧,王大先生,别想偷摸着去京城!”„Yeah, Miss Zhangyou... goodall various professions...... the missyouhad not thought that is somewhat familiar-soundingon the name of miss?”
“哎,张姑娘你…行行行……不过姑娘你没觉得那位应姑娘的名字有些耳熟吗?”„Is ripe, youareseeothersto be attractive!”
“熟个屁,你是见人家漂亮吧!”„Reallyis not......”
“真不是……”Wang Lismiles bitterly, looked for the shipat the back of the travel bag, somepossibilitybrains that in the personeyes, thisgoodsthought aloudoutsidewere not normal.王立苦笑一声,背着行囊去找船了,在外人眼中,这货自言自语的可能有些脑子不正常。In the Connecting Heavens Riversurface, Ji Yuanscullssingle-handed, the right handfinds out the swordto refer , an aboveemptychildflashesto pass.通天江面上,计缘单手摇橹,右手探出剑指,其上的一枚虚子一闪而逝。„Hopesyouto be ablecontinuouslyso......”
“但愿你会一直如此吧……”„Uncle Ji?”
“计叔叔?”„All right.”
“没事。”Ji Yuanscullinggoodboat, the speed of thisboatwas faster than before.计缘摇橹行舟,这次小船的速度比之前快了许多。
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