When Shanshen Temple, threepeoplearrive, liquorswordimmortalreallyalready.
山神庙,三人来到时,酒剑仙果然已经在了。.SeesLi Xiaoyaoto come, liquorswordimmortalhahahas smiledseveral: „Young fellowreallycame. However......”
看到李逍遥过来,酒剑仙哈哈笑了几声:“小伙子果然来了。不过……”Hehas a look atShen Yi, the facial colorto sinksuddenly: „Imakeyoucome, are why many a person?”
他看看沈奕,面色突然一沉:“我让你们两个人过来,为何又多一人?”Reallyheis not feeling welltoShen Yi that comes outsuddenlyvery much.
果然他对突然多出来的沈奕很是不爽。Li Xiaoyaois busy atgoing forward saying: „Senior, thisismyBig Brother, tenli (0.5 km)slopemonstrous talentrun amuck, heisworried that mysafetyspeciallyfollowsprotectsme.”李逍遥忙上前道:“前辈,这位是我大哥,十里坡妖孽横行,他是担心我的安危才特意跟随保护我。”
The liquorswordimmortallooked atShen Yi, had ponderedslightlyjust nownods: „So that's how it is, that.”
酒剑仙看了看沈奕,略略思考了一下方才点头:“原来如此,那就罢了。”HeletsLi Xiaoyaoto the mountain spiritvisit of bride to ancestral templehe, hadto testto compare withhisguts the intention, the monster who nowthinksthesetenli (0.5 km)slopesalthoughis not formidable, is actually not the Li Xiaoyaoordinary peoplecancope, oneselfbeforehanddecision many were somewhatowesto consider. If not forsomethese twoaccompanyingprotections, onlyfeared that has not saidLi Xiaoyao to come here.
他让李逍遥到山神庙见他,本就有考较他胆量的意图,现在想想这十里坡的妖怪虽不强大,却也不是李逍遥凡夫俗子能够对付的,自己之前的决定多少是有些欠思量了。若不是有这两人随行保护,只怕还真不好说李逍遥能不能走到这里。At presentthis, feature, althoughis handsome, actually the hiddenbeltmurders, the stepis steady, but the aurais long, obviously is the same tothatWei Chibai, is the people of Jianghuwalk, this timecomes, not necessarilydoes not haveotherintentions.
只是眼前此子,眉目虽俊朗,举手投足间却隐带杀伐,步履稳健而气息悠长,显然与那卫弛柏一样,都是江湖行走之人,此番过来,未必就没有其他意图。
A native of Suchuanswordsmanshipgreatprofoundcannotpass onlightly, Li Xiaoyaois„talentdifferentBing who healreadyfavored, the dispositionis mellow” the person, teaches the swordsmanship, these two are actually the Jianghuslippery customers, ifmadethembe truant the Mount Shuswordsmanship, somewhatwas rather improper.
蜀人剑术博大高深不可轻传,李逍遥是他早已看好的“天赋异秉,心性醇厚”之人,传授剑术也就罢了,这两人却是江湖老油条,若是让他们偷学了蜀山剑法,未免就有些不妥了。Hehesitates, Shen Yisaw that in the liquorswordunconventional ideaworries, cups one hand in the other across the chest saying: „Seniorperson of high skill, accepts the discipleto impart a skill, the Shen Yino talent, does not dareto listenabsurdly, alreadydelivered the free and unfetteredto arrive atthissafely, fromworking asunderdrawing back.”
他正犹豫间,沈奕已看出酒剑仙心中顾虑,拱手道:“前辈高人,收徒授艺,沈奕不才,不敢妄听,既已送逍遥安全到此,自当退下。”Was sayingretreatedbackward.
说着已向后退去。
His draws back, toismakesWei Chibaionestartled, thinks how thisboybecamesuchwellspeaks.
他这一退,到是让卫弛柏一惊,想这小子怎么变得这么好说话了。Shen Yiactuallywithdrew fromShanshen Templebeyondhundredmeters, looked for the placerockto sit downat will, thenlookedtoShanshen Temple. HehasHeavenly Eyeto be beyond line of sight, thispeepingabilityunparalleled in the world, even if not might as wellhesteal the masterscholarshipin the side. Hedoes not have the Wen Rouhearing, the distancewas far, somewordsmanysomehearsare not clear, can only guessaccording to the shape of the mouth.沈奕却已退出山神庙百米之外,随意找了处山石坐下,然后看向山神庙这边。他有天眼超视距,这偷窥能力天下无双,哪怕不在身边也无妨他偷师学艺。只是他没有温柔的听力,距离远了,一些话语多少就有些听不清楚,只能根据口型来猜测了。Attends togiving up liquor the swordimmortalability, actuallyhewantsto emit the electronic reconnaissancebeevery much.
要不是顾忌酒剑仙的能力,其实他是很想放出电子侦察蜂的。Hereliquorswordimmortallooks atShen Yito draw back, saidtoWei Chibai: „Youalreadypresent as a giftliquorin saying that alsocalculates that is predestined friendswith the oldsay|way. Thisswordsmanship, oldcannotpass onlightly, butotheraspects, the oldsay|way can also direct12. Yourthisstudies the techniqueto demonstrateyou, oldDow Jones Indexselectsyou. Come, attackstome!”
这边酒剑仙看沈奕退开,已对卫弛柏道:“你既赠酒于老道,也算与老道有缘。本门剑法,老道不可轻传,但是其他方面,老道还能指点12。你这就把你所学技艺展示一番,老道指点你。来,向我进攻!”„Yes!”Wei Chibairespectfulreply.
“是!”卫弛柏恭敬回答。HealsohopelesslycanobtainSword Controlling Technique, even if is only the direction of liquorswordimmortal, causeshisstrengthpromotingsufficiently.
他本来也没指望能获得御剑术,但哪怕只是酒剑仙的指点,也足以使他实力提升。Thisquarterboth armsshake, a boxingto the liquorswordimmortal, simultaneously the fistunitbringsbone-chilling coldincorruptible, Wei Chibaihas assaultedfully. Him, thisliquorswordimmortaleitheristrueexpert, canpromotinghisstrength, eithernot hitmultipurpose, killedhas not neededto love dearly, thereforetake actionwas not all forgiving.
这刻双臂一震,一拳击向酒剑仙,同时拳部带起凛冽冰霜,卫弛柏已是全力抢攻。就他而言,这酒剑仙要么是个真正高手,可以提升他的实力,要么就没打多用,打杀了也不用心疼,因此出手全不留情。Seesthisfistinspiring the incorruptiblefrozenair/Qi, the liquorswordimmortalalsovoices the slightsurprise: „Well? Where is this fistroad?”
看到这一拳引动的冰霜冻气,酒剑仙也不由发出轻微诧异:“咦?这是何方拳路?”Simultaneouslyhas wielded the sleevesstandardto live inWei Chibaithisfist, thatgroup of incorruptiblefrozenair/Qifront surfacesplunge the liquorswordimmortal the face, gentlywas actually blownbyhim, thickstrong liquorair/Qicompletelyblows off the Wei Chibaiincorruptiblefrozenair/Qiunexpectedly.
同时已挥动衣袖格住卫弛柏这一拳,那一团冰霜冻气迎面扑向酒剑仙的脸,却被他轻轻一吹,一股浓烈酒气竟是将卫弛柏的冰霜冻气全然吹散。Wei Chibaihas given a loud shout, bullies the bodyto be progressive, the left fistreceives, the right armwieldsreversepounds the liquorswordimmortal.卫弛柏已大喝一声,欺身进步,左拳收,右臂反向挥砸酒剑仙。In the eye of liquorswordimmortaleven moreappears the color of surprise, figuredodges, has evadedthisto sweep away, simultaneouslypoints atlight shellseveral, blocks the attack of Wei Chibai, in the mouthsaidagain and again: „Amongtake actionhas the incorruptibleaura, isTianshansends the discipleor the snowterritoryhanger-on? No, is not right. Tianshanmartial artsspatialbrightlofty, does not havesoswift and fierceviciouscertainly. Although the snowterritoryknife skillis tyrannical, butbecomes a school, dominateswith the snow and icesharp knife, althoughthischildicevigor the foot, the sharp knife is actually not necessarily. Does not have the repertoiremethodicalnessobviously, actuallyincursmove of viciousevil and cruel, thisis the technique of actual combat, the technique of non-taking care of health, mustnot stem from the wealthy and prominent familybigfaction, butcomprehendsvoluntarily.”
酒剑仙的眼中越发显出诧异之色,身形微闪一下,已躲过这一记横扫,同时手指轻弹几下,挡住卫弛柏的进攻,口中更是连连道:“出手间带有冰霜气息,难道是天山派弟子又或雪域门下?不,不对。天山武功空明高远,绝无如此凌厉凶狠。雪域刀法虽然强横,但自成一派,以冰雪快刀称雄,此子冰劲虽足,快刀却是未必。明明无套路章法,却招招凶狠歹毒,此乃实战之技,非养身之术,应当不是出自高门大派,而是自行领悟。”Heis the seniorperson of high skill, andWei Chibaifightswhileestimates the Wei Chibaiability, but also was seensomeissuesbyhim.
他到底是前辈高人,一边和卫弛柏交手一边揣摩卫弛柏的能力,还真被他看出些问题。
When Easternfeat of arms, practice, not only the promotingcombat capability, promotingoneself, the abilityfromcitymostlyis relatedat the actual combat, as forpromoting, thatisbuys the attributematter.
东方武技,修炼时不仅提升战斗能力,同时也提升自身,来自都市的能力却大多于实战有关,至于提升,那就是花钱买属性的事。Thisquarterpondered oversimilarly, the liquorswordimmortallaughedsuddenly: „, Rambledyouto favor, thisis the technique of myMount Shuimperialsword!”
这刻琢磨得差不多了,酒剑仙突然大笑一声:“原来如此,逍遥你看好了,这就是我蜀山一门的御剑之术!”Was sayinghebackhandssuddenlywields, the backlong swordalreadyflew, straight thrustWei Chibaiface. Wei Chibaigives a loud shout, a boxingtothatlong sword, the swordlightinairborneturning roundonerevolution, has evadedWei Chibaithisfist, changes the Wei Chibaivestplaceto puncture.
说着他突然反手一挥,背后长剑已然飞起,直刺卫弛柏面门。卫弛柏大喝一声,一拳击向那长剑,剑光在空中滴溜溜一转,已躲过卫弛柏这一拳,转向卫弛柏背心处刺去。Thisswordtransferssuddenly, Wei Chibaiactuallycompletelydoes not fear, fiercestrikesto the place, makes a sheet icefrostwave: „The link of frost!”
这一剑转得突然,卫弛柏却是全然不惧,猛的对地一击,打出一片冰霜冻浪:“霜之环!”
A sheet icewavealreadyfromhisdispersing, volumetoliquorswordimmortal.
一片冰浪已从他脚下散开,卷向酒剑仙。„Inhibits somebody's activities!” The liquorswordimmortalleft handindex fingerstretches out, drew a circlebeforeown, thatsheet icefrostair/Qitowas preventedto the liquorswordimmortalsideunexpectedlyautomaticallybeyond the circle that hedraws, simultaneouslyliquorswordimmortalfiguredodges, has hittoWei Chibai, aims at the Wei Chibaiforeheadto poke.
“划地为牢!”酒剑仙左手食指伸出,已在自己身前画出一个圆,那片冰霜冻气冲至酒剑仙身边竟然被自动阻挡在他画出的圆外,同时酒剑仙身形一闪,已撞向卫弛柏,一指向着卫弛柏额头戳去。
A swordfingersimultaneouslyconverging attackWei Chibai, Wei Chibailoudlyexclaimed: „Icesarmor!”
一剑一指同时夹击卫弛柏,卫弛柏已放声吼道:“冰甲!”Sheet icearmorpresentedonhim.
一片冰甲已在他身上呈现。Heis the fourth difficultybig shot, even if not the liquorswordimmortalmatch, does not represent to be defeatedeasily.
他到底是四难度的大佬,哪怕不是酒剑仙对手,也不代表可以被轻易击败。
The liquorswordimmortalhad no intentionto injurehim, butthisquartersaw that onWei Chibaiicearmorpresents, toalsocameseveralpoints of interest, thisfingerhas only usedthreeforce components, actuallyselectsonWei Chibai.
酒剑仙原本无意伤他,但这刻看到卫弛柏身上冰甲呈现,到也来了几分兴致,这一指只用了三分力,却还是点在卫弛柏身上。Wei Chibaisuch asis struck by lightning, was flownby a liquorswordimmortaldirection, simultaneouslythat the long sword a pointbehindhim, actuallydoes not offend somebodygentlythenautomaticallyflies back.卫弛柏如中雷击,已被酒剑仙一指点飞出去,同时那把长剑也在他背后轻轻一点,却不伤人便自动飞回。„Interesting, interesting!” The liquorswordimmortallookedonepoint atthatincorruptible that fills, suddenlylaughs.
“有趣,有趣!”酒剑仙看了看自己手指间弥漫的那片冰霜,突然哈哈大笑起来。Wei Chibai is also in the heartdarkstartled, Sword Controlling Technique of thisoldsay|way can also flyto offend somebody the sword, cityactuallyalsohassimilarskill, not necessarilystrange. Howeverhecanduringuseflyingsword can also continueto fight, andcanlong timecontrol the motion of flyingswordevento attackStrength, this was quite rare.卫弛柏也是心中暗惊,这老道的御剑术也就是可以把剑飞出去伤人,都市其实也有类似技能,未必有多稀奇。但是他能在使用飞剑的同时还能继续战斗,且能长时间控制飞剑的行动甚至攻击力量,这就比较难得了。ButSword Controlling Technique is actually the basicswordsmanship of Mount Shuswordsmanship.
而御剑术其实不过是蜀山剑法的入门剑法。Shen Yihas narrowedeyeslightly.沈奕则微微眯了眯眼睛。
Different fromWei Chibai, this observer, is actually to a certain extent clearer than Wei Chibai.
与卫弛柏不同,他这个旁观者,某种程度上看得其实比卫弛柏更加清晰。A moment agoliquorswordimmortalwhenusingSword Controlling Technique, but alsoremindedLi Xiaoyaoto see clearlyspeciallycarefully.
刚才酒剑仙在使用御剑术时,还特别提醒李逍遥小心看清楚。Ifthisis only the mostprimaryswordsmanship, the liquorswordimmortalis not necessarysoseriously.
如果说这只是最初级的剑法,酒剑仙大可不必如此郑重。Easternability system and Westare different, the Westernheavyactual combat, is fastidiousstrikes to kill, the Easternheavykeeping in good health, the artproceeds in an orderly way.
东方的能力体系与西方不同,西方重实战,讲究一击必杀,东方重养生,讲究循序渐进。ThereforejustSword Controlling TechniqueinMount Shu, althoughis only the basicswordsmanship, actuallynot necessarilymeans that itisweakest. In factoldafterdiscovering the Wei Chibaistrengthis not weak, stillusesSword Controlling Techniqueto meet the enemy, itselfexplainedmanyissues.
正因此御剑术在蜀山虽然只是入门剑法,却未必就意味着它是最弱的。事实上老道在发现卫弛柏实力不弱后,依然使用御剑术迎敌,本身就说明了许多问题。AssociatestoowncontrollingFirearmsagain, bothare the robot weaponcombat, in the Shen Yimindreappearedonetype
再联想到自己的控枪术,两者都是遥控武器作战,沈奕脑海中已不由浮现出一种
Can Sword Controlling Technique that possiblycanalwayssayalsoutilize the skillin the remote control?
可能会不会老道的御剑术在遥控中也可以运用技能?Thereforejust, Sword Controlling Technique is not only the Mount Shubasicswordsmanship, is the foundations of allformidableswordsmanship.
正因此,御剑术不仅是蜀山的入门剑法,同时也是所有强大剑法的基础。ThinksSky Sword, thatis a goldenlong swordremotethrows, range-typekills the enemy. Thinks the swordgodagain, thatis the innumerablesharp swordshas flown, target damage. Thesetwostrong capabilities are almost let go the utilization......
想想天剑,那是一把金色长剑遥掷而出,范围性杀伤敌人。再想想剑神,那是无数利剑飞过,杀伤目标。这两种强大能力几乎都是脱手运用……Thinks ofthis, the eye of Shen Yihas narrowed the eyes.
想到这,沈奕的眼睛眯了起来。If is really so, onlythisdiscoverysufficientlyletsenjoyinfinitely.
如果真是如此,单是这一发现就足以让受用无穷。At this timeliquorswordimmortalandWei Chibaistoppedfighting, chitchattedmutually. The liquorswordimmortalis the Jianghuperson of high skill, butseveraldirectionshave madeWei Chibaiprofitsignificantly.
此时酒剑仙与卫弛柏已经停止交手,相互攀谈起来。酒剑仙到底是江湖高人,只是几句指点就已让卫弛柏受益非浅。Butadventurerpromotingis the systematization, thereforealsogets quick results.
只不过冒险者的提升是系统化的,因此也是立杆见影的。Bloody Crestnotification soundalreadyresounded:血腥纹章的提示音已然响起:„Completes the direction of missionliquorswordimmortal, obtainsBPto reward40points, Fighting Proficiency promotingto the top. When sword-typecultivation techniqueinpromotingto the nextstage, the trainingexperience that needscuts in half.”
“完成任务酒剑仙的指点,获得血腥点奖励40点,格斗专精提升至顶级。剑类功法在提升到下一阶段时,需要的训练经验减半。”BesidesBP of systemreward, Wei ChibaialsoobtainedpromotingonFighting Proficiency andcultivation technique, comparesBP, the latterobviousadvantageare more, Wei Chibaimostregards as important. OnlyFighting Proficiency scroll , good and evilalsoonvalueover ten thousandpoints.
除了系统奖励的血腥点外,卫弛柏还在格斗专精和功法上都获得了提升,相比血腥点,后者显然好处更多,也正是卫弛柏最看重的。单是一个格斗专精卷轴,好歹也就值上万点。Howeverhismissionshouldreward50points, nowonlyhas actually resulted in40points, does not needto askthattenpointsweremakeShen Yidivide.
不过他的任务本应奖励50点,如今却只得了40点,不用问,还有十点是让沈奕分去了。In other wordsthisfellowhas not leftfrom the start, butis peepingfrom afar.
也就是说这个家伙压根就没离开,而是远远地在偷看。Thinks ofthis, Wei Chibaihates the toothto be itchy, does not know that hehas obtainedanyadvantage. Howeverthinks that hehas only resulted intenpoints, shouldnot have the advantageto be many..
一想到这,卫弛柏就恨得牙痒痒的,就是不知道他得了什么好处。不过想想他只得了十点,应该是没自己好处多的。。In fact, directadvantage that Shen Yiobtainsindeeddoes not haveWei Chibaito be many.
事实上,沈奕得到的直接好处的确没有卫弛柏多。HisBloody Crestonlyremindedhimto obtaintenBPto reward, then againdid not haveanyprompt.
他的血腥纹章只提醒他获得了十点血腥点奖励,然后便再无任何提示。HowevertoShen Yi, thishas sufficed.
不过对沈奕来说,这已经够了。Heknowshowonethenshoulddo.
他已经知道自己接下来该怎么做了。To a certain extent, the tour of thisShanshen Templelooks likemayfollowingmission, the rewarddoes not provideimmediately, butneeds the supplements of somefollowingmission, canobtain the truerichreward.
某种程度上,这趟山神庙之行就象是一个可后续的任务,奖励并不是即时发放,而是需要一些后续任务的补充,才能得到真正丰厚的奖励。Thinks ofthis, the Shen YivisionfellonLi Xiaoyao.
想到这,沈奕的目光落在了李逍遥身上。At this timeWei Chibaiwas urgedto leavebyliquorswordimmortal, Shanshen Templehas only left behind the liquorswordimmortals and Li Xiaoyaotwopeople.
此时卫弛柏已经被酒剑仙劝离,山神庙只留下了酒剑仙与李逍遥二人。
Different from the game, the truestudy of Sword Controlling Techniquedid not look that onesuffices, mustgraspcore method that italsoneedsto correspond, the mnemonics.
与游戏不同,御剑术的真正学习可不是看一遍就够的,要掌握它还需要对应的心法,口诀。
The liquorswordimmortal is teaching the Li XiaoyaoSword Controlling Techniquecore methodmnemonicsat this moment, anddirectshimto practice.
酒剑仙此刻就是在传授李逍遥御剑术的心法口诀,并指点他练习。AlthoughShen Yicould not hear clearlyhiminsayinganything, butlooked at the appearance of oldtreating a matter seriously, will say mostlywhen the directionsomesuch as: „Thiscore method does not send the secret of passing on, can not teachother peoplewithout the permission, the offenderpunishes severely”warning.
虽然沈奕听不清他在说什么,但是看老道郑重其事的样子,多半在指点之余也会说些诸如:“此心法乃本派不传之秘,未经许可不得传授他人,违者重惩”的警告。Li Xiaoyaois the earnestnod, practices the sworddiligently. Heformerlydid not knowoldfoundation, thereforealsonot necessarilycares, now the oldswordsmanshipis shortly mysterious, earlyhas admiredfull of admiration.李逍遥则是认真点头,努力练剑。他先前不知老道根底,所以还未必太在意,如今眼看老道剑法神奇,早已经钦佩得五体投地。Wei ChibaiwasleisurelyhoweverwalkedfromShanshen Temple.卫弛柏则是施施然从山神庙走了过来。Henoticed that Shen Yisits, in the rockis calm and composed even in press of worklooks atthat sideShanshen Temple, turned headto look atseveral, onlydiscovered a distant placedarkness, knitting the browshead of: „Ialsothink that youusetelescopeto peep.”
他看到沈奕坐在山石好整以暇地看着山神庙那边,回头看了几眼,只发现远处一片漆黑,不由皱了皱眉头:“我还以为你用望远镜偷看的。”Shen Yisaidlightly: „Ihavebeyond line of sight, has no need forthat.”沈奕淡淡道:“我有超视距,用不着那个。”„Candisregard the darknessbeyond line of sight?”
“超视距能无视黑暗?”„Coordinates the witchkinghard helmet.”Shen Yiknowsonehave divided the Wei Chibaipoints, will unable to hide the truth fromhiminevitably, thereforesimplyacknowledgedonehavebeyond line of sight and witchkinghard helmet. These two'sunionseriouslyispeepingsharp weapon, compared withtelescopenight vision deviceand so onbeing much better, after all has the techniquebeen ablewith the technicalinstrumentunion.
“不过配合巫王头盔就可以。”沈奕知道自己分了卫弛柏的点数,势必瞒不过他,所以干脆承认自己有超视距与巫王头盔。这两者的结合当真是偷窥利器,比望远镜夜视仪之类的好多了,毕竟技能不能与科技仪器结合。„Whatlearns?”Wei Chibaialsoasked.
“学到什么?”卫弛柏又问。Shen Yilooked attohim the Crest prompt.沈奕已把刚才的纹章提示给他看。Saw that Shen Yihas only resulted intenBP, relaxing that Wei Chibaicannot conceal.
看到沈奕只得了十点血腥点,卫弛柏掩饰不住的松口气。
The expression that hetakes pleasure in others'misfortuneslooks atShen Yito laugh in one's heart, at this moment, the aircraft interphone in Shen Yibosommade a sound.
他幸灾乐祸的表情看得沈奕暗笑,就在这时,沈奕怀中的通话器响了。IsMegatron.
是威震天。„Somepeopleattacked the island.”
“有人来攻岛了。”„ThatthreeMiaopeople? Youshouldbe ableto tidy up.”
“那三个苗人?你应该能收拾。”„Yes, butalsohasadventurer.”
“是,不过还有个冒险者。”„What did yousay?”Shen Yionejumpedfrom the stone.
“你说什么?”沈奕一下从石头上蹦了起来。ps: Severalwordshave wantedto confessthatthinkswhile the presentconfesses.
ps:有几句话一直想交代没交代,趁现在想起来交代一下。
The choicewrites the immortalswordplot is actually an attempt, the content of attempthas.
选择写仙剑剧情其实就是一个尝试,尝试的内容有许多。First, firsttimewrites the immortalheroclassthemeofficially, iswrites the immortalheroto lay the foundationforlater, looks for the issue, solves the problem. Finds the problemin a smallthickness and size, alwayscomparesin a fatfound that the problemis better. At leastthiswrites not well, nextI can also reverse. Puts in orderthisbook the words, butwas difficult.
一是第一次正式写仙侠类题材,也算是为以后写仙侠打个基础,寻找问题,解决问题。在一个小部头里发现问题,总比在一个大部头里发现问题要好。至少这一部写得不好,下一部我还能扭转回来。整本书的话,可就难了。Second, thisisfirstdoes not haveMain Missioncompletely, lacks the master lineto mean that deficientshort-termpriority target, the randomnessis bigger, the control that needsis strong, isto an ownexercise.
二是这是第一个完全无主线任务,缺乏主线就意味着缺乏短期主目标,随意性更大,需要的控制能力较强,也算是对自己的一个锻炼。Third, oncesomepeopleaskedme, Broken Blade Teamsowas strong, howbehindwrites. The plotlabyrinth is actually the way that an attemptbreaks through, the primary coverage of thisunitwill be centralized, in the plotchangeinteractswith the characteron, meets the relativereductionto the description of fight, this is also an attempt.
三是也曾有人问我,断刃队都那么强了,后面怎么写。剧情迷宫其实就是一个尝试突破的方式,本部的主要内容将集中在剧情变化与人物互动上,对战斗的描写则会相对减少,这也是一种尝试。Fourarebecause the time lineis long, the fieldscenic spotare many, the comp bookunitstory needs the ability of simplifying, after needs thattype the massivestoriesreduce and change, extremelyactuallynot to damage the completeconstruction the ability, needsthattype in writing in a straightforward manneralsopresents the ability of splendiddetail.
四就是由于时间线较长,场景点较多,写本部故事就需要有化繁为简的能力,需要有那种将大量故事极度压缩与变化后却不损伤完整架构的能力,需要那种在平铺直叙中也呈现出精彩细节的能力。ButIdo not do well enough the openingpartobviouslyto have the controlto be insufficientinthisaspectobviously, length too long issue.
而我显然在这方面做得还不够开头部分就明显有驾驭不足,篇幅过长的问题。Howto writearticleunderthesepremises, actuallytomeis a challenge, because before me, does not excel atthisaspect, wantsto disciplinetakingthisopportunity, promoting.
如何在这些前提下写好文章,其实对我是个挑战,因为我以前不太擅长这方面,想借这机会磨练一下,提升自己。In brief, immortalswordstyle, canfor various reasonswithfrontdifferent, for me, this , is not only the creationprocess, is the learning process.
总之,仙剑这一部的风格,因为种种原因,会和前面有许多不同,对我来说,这不仅是个创造过程,也是个学习过程。HowIdo not know the result, butIwill try hardto complete.
我不知道结果会如何,但是我会努力做好。Finally before isnext yearwill celebrate the new year, Ishouldnot have any extramatter, Iwill be usedto createalltimeon, will work hard, takes toeverybody a betterwork.
最后就是明年过年之前,我应该不会有什么额外的事了,我会把所有时间都用于创作上,努力工作,带给大家更好的作品。
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