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#42: Has different opinions ( 3 / 3 )


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I had never fantasized becomes soldier, because I fear death. But now, I have profound respect to soldier!” Mu Yucheng blog. “我从未幻想过成为一名军人,因为我怕死。但现在,我对军人肃然起敬!”穆钰诚的博客。 Mu Yucheng in a IT code agriculture of Guangzhou work, usually works is very busy, early nine late nine, although the treatment is rich, but also lost own individual life. 穆钰诚是在羊城工作的一名IT码农,平时工作很繁忙,早九晚九,虽然待遇丰厚,但也失去了自己的个人生活。 Therefore he likes in broken bits coming to see the novel with time, looks at webnovel, through others' brushwork, completes itself the fantasy to the life. 所以他喜欢用细碎的时间来看小说,看网络小说,通过别人的笔触,完成自己对人生的幻想。 Today in editor pushes, he sees military novel, called «Soldiers Sortie». 今天编辑强推里,他看到一本军旅小说,叫《士兵突击》 The name is actually ordinary, but is a editor Qiang Zi recommendation that he quite likes, therefore Mu Yucheng curious, has selected. 名字倒是平淡无奇,不过是他比较喜欢的一个编辑强子推荐的,所以穆钰诚好奇之下,还是点了进去。 Mu Yucheng routinely looks at the synopsis and commentary first. 穆钰诚习惯性地先看简介和评论。 But in commented, confrontation of polarization, making him have a scare. 但评论里面,两极分化的对峙,让他吓了一跳。 Is ugly! Looked at two chapters to abandon decisively!” “难看得一匹!看了两章果断弃了!” Violently poisonous, cautious!” “剧毒,慎点!” Thank in the building to try the toxin, has not looked fortunately.” “感谢楼上试毒,还好没看。” Does not have the rebirth, does not have golden finger, how told me protagonist to mix?” “没有重生,没有金手指,告诉我主角怎么混下去?” „Is protagonist a good-for-nothing? Does not dare to resist own destiny, has been scolded bastard son by his father, if I, could not endure ironclad!” 主角就是一个窝囊废好吗?不敢抗争自己的命运,一直在被他爹骂龟儿子,如果是我,铁定忍不了!” Has not understood, who can tell my first chapter of plot suddenly to jump to the second chapter? Was chaotic, I thought that I wrote am more attractive than the author.” “没看懂,谁能告诉我第一章的情节怎么忽然就跳到第二章了?混乱死了,我觉得我写得都比作者好看。” In building, that is the mode of writing of flashback, does not understand do not shoot off the mouth!” “楼上,那是倒叙的写法,不懂不要乱喷!” Writes webnovel also to do flashback? This author is also Stone Lezhi.” “写个网络小说还搞倒叙?这个作者也是石乐志。” Hello, who are you send to be black my Great Yang water army? This novel is very interesting, did I look to cry quickly?” “喂,你们都是谁派来黑我杨大大水军?这小说很好看,我都快看哭了好吗?” Agrees in the building, the child who in your city was born does not know that the pain of rural area, my rural area was born, felt the author writes is my stories, initially had almost been sent to barrack by the father.” “同意楼上,你们这些城里出生的小孩不知道农村的苦,我农村出生的,感觉作者写的都是我的故事,当初差点就被父亲送去了军营。” Said one weakly, you did not think that second chapter of final there, Xu Sanduo is making the surrender posture very much comedy to the tank?” “弱弱地说一句,你们不觉得第二章最后那里,许三多对着坦克做投降姿势很搞笑吗?” in addition one, I almost smiled to make noise!” “加一,我都差点笑出声了!” „Do you such meanly smile really? Xu Sanduo was seen by the leader, left a poor impression, the later day feared that is sad!” “你们这么幸灾乐祸地笑真的好吗?许三多被领导看到了,留下了不好的印象,以后的日子怕是难过咯!” Can say the post in commentary area to have different opinions, the person who likes is full of praise, the person but who does not like is the manner is also bright, this makes Mu Yucheng look somewhat puzzled. 可以说评论区里的帖子都褒贬不一,喜欢的人赞不绝口,但不喜欢的人也是态度鲜明,这让穆钰诚看得有些不解。 Meanwhile also stimulates his curiosity, Mu Yucheng to decide to purchase the current several chapters to read. 但同时也激发了他的好奇心,穆钰诚决定购买了目前的几个章节来阅读。 Just opened, prologue that chapter has then given him the different feeling! 刚刚打开,楔子的那一章便给了他不一样的感觉! Said? 怎么说呢? Very literary man! But is not false literary man of that stack literary flourishes, the language of author is very simple, described the ant exquisitely in every way possible, but can understand as Mu Yucheng of reader clearly that this ant, was actually only the soldier analogy! 文青!但又不是那种堆砌词藻的假文青,作者的语言很朴实,却将蚂蚁描写得细腻入微,而作为读者的穆钰诚又能清楚地明白,这蚂蚁,其实只是军人的比喻而已! Soldier ant will not sob......” Mu Yucheng to taste these words carefully, the feeling is at heart suffocated. “兵蚁不会哭泣……”穆钰诚细细地回味着这一句话,感觉心里堵得慌。 The first chapter what writes is Xu Sanduo carries out the task with the teammates, here presented several names, Cheng Cai, Yuan Lang and Wu Zhe, the disposition of everyone is different. 第一章写的是许三多和队友们执行任务,这里出现了几个名字,成才袁朗吴哲,每个人的性格都不一样。 Make the Mu Yucheng memory quite profound, is the gruffness of Xu Sanduo, cold of Cheng Cai. Cheng Cai is a sniper, cold point does not matter, even, Mu Yucheng also thought that Xu Sanduo is very difficult to fuse with the Cheng Cai disposition! 穆钰诚记忆比较深刻的,是许三多的憨,还有成才的冷。成才是狙击手,冷一点也无所谓,甚至,穆钰诚还觉得许三多成才的性格很难融合呢! But in the retreating time, Xu Sanduo follows orders to shield, a performance of Cheng Cai, making the Mu Yucheng innermost feelings be touched. 但在撤退时候,许三多奉命掩护,成才的一番表现,让穆钰诚的内心被触动了。 Cheng Cai: Xu Sanduo, I am waiting for you.’ 成才:‘许三多,我等着你。’ Xu Sanduo a fire that from just completed turns the head: ‚?’ 许三多从刚完成的一次射击中转过头来:‘啊?’ Cheng Cai looks like wants to punch him very much, but has compared a sign language in the sound of gunfire with him, then follows in Yuan Lang and Wu Zhe behind, first they withdrew from the covert position. 成才看起来很想揍他,但只是在枪声中跟他比了一个手语,然后追随在袁朗吴哲身后,前两人已经撤出隐蔽阵地。 When Xu Sanduo reveals to look at that ant smiling face, he understands that sign language the meaning, then he starts to cope with the inexhaustible enemy. ” 许三多露出看那蚂蚁时的笑容,他明白那手语的意思,然后他开始独自一人对付无穷无尽的敌军。” Mu Yucheng somewhat is at heart grieved, he felt Cheng Cai and friendship and tacit understanding of Xu Sanduo interaction time, but also indistinctly thought that bringing up the rear Xu Sanduo, was perhaps more unfortunate than fortunate! 穆钰诚心里有些酸楚,他感受到了成才许三多互动时候的情谊和默契,但也隐约觉得,断后的许三多,恐怕是要凶多吉少了! Really, does not have him to expect, Xu Sanduo cannot climb up the broken bridge support, layer on layer throws down from the upper air in the ruins of factory...... 果然,不出他所料,许三多没有能够爬上断桥支架,重重地从高空中摔倒在工厂的废墟里…… The Mu Yucheng mind shakes crazily, is Xu Sanduo sigh with emotion at the same time, suddenly does not think right. 穆钰诚心神狂震,为许三多感慨的同时,忽然觉得不对。 Damn, did protagonist hang in the first chapter? 尼玛,主角在第一章就挂了? He looks that understands why before , in the commentary some people mentioned the flashback, protagonist when realized fuzzily, as if saw the father, this story was then recalled by the author most started, Xu Sanduo birth time. 他看下去,才明白为什么之前评论里有人提到倒叙了,主角在意识模糊的时候,仿佛看到了父亲,这个故事便被作者回溯到了最开始,许三多出生的时候。 wait a minute! 等一下 Mu Yucheng was also depressed. 穆钰诚又郁闷了。 Actually has protagonist hung or has not hung? Then, do their this operational missions, seem like the exercises? 主角究竟是挂了还是没挂?然后,他们这个作战任务,怎么看起来像是演习? Then hasn't this confessed the clear, direct rebound to most to start? 然后就这样没有交代清楚,直接跳回到最开始? The Mu Yucheng as if hundred fingernails torment the mind, felt that is very uncomfortable. 穆钰诚仿佛百爪挠心,感觉到很难受。 „!” He could not bear call one, caused in the subway looking askance of people, Mu Yucheng has then realized right, did not smile awkwardly. “啊!”他忍不住叫了一声,引起了地铁里众人的侧目,穆钰诚这才意识到不对,尴尬地笑了笑。 The story is very splendid, he is not feeling well freely very much, but cannot bear then look. 故事很精彩,他尽管很不爽,但还是忍不住接着看下去。 But the following style changes, no longer is the tense battlefield, but arrived at the backward and poor rural area. The farmers plain spoken language, in family|home the length, is no one likes, no wonder after some readers will look, does not abandon the book patiently. 但接下来画风一变,不再是紧张的战场,而是来到了落后、贫穷的农村。农民们质朴的言语,家里长短,并非谁都喜欢,难怪会有一部分读者看了之后,不耐烦地弃书。 But Mu Yucheng so is not superficial, because to the favorable impression of author style, Mu Yucheng bears the temper to look. 穆钰诚没有这么肤浅,因为对作者文笔的好感,穆钰诚还是耐着性子看下去。 However, has not imagined the obscurity to be difficult to understand. 不过,并没有想象中的晦涩难懂。 Father Xu had three boys, the Boss called Yile, the second child to call Erhe, to the third child, that turned into Sanduo! 许老爹生了三个男孩,老大叫一乐,老二叫二和,到了老三,那就变成三多了! Right, the children of village head family|home called Cheng Cai, originally Cheng Cai was the Xu Sanduo neighbor! 对了,村长家的孩子叫成才,原来成才许三多的邻居啊! Just, the family circumstances have very big difference! 只不过,家境有很大的差别! Cheng Cai has the golden key to grow up the birth, but Xu Sanduo, that was born in poor others, the third child, left a mouth of eating meal, on the shoulder of Father Xu were also many a heaviness. 成才是含着金钥匙长大出生的,而许三多,那是出生在贫穷的人家,第三个孩子,多出了一张吃饭的嘴,许老爹的肩上又多了一份沉甸甸。 Because the wife dies young, Father Xu does not have ability to create the condition to three children, can only place hopes to deliver the child to become a soldier, making the national help eat to the grain ration. But Yile, is Erhe, they do not have the prospect, making Father Xu be greatly disappointed. 因为妻子早逝,许老爹没有能力给三个孩子创造条件,只能寄希望于送孩子去当兵,让国家帮忙给口粮吃。但无论是一乐,还是二和,他们都没有出息,让许老爹大失所望。 Actually the style of author is very humorous, but this language description made the reality that one could not resist, instead appeared heavy. 其实作者的文笔还是很诙谐的,只是这种语言描述令人抗拒不了的现实,反而更显得沉重。 Mu Yucheng several times want to smile, actually cannot smile. Several times feel desperate, but had been diluted by some interesting fragments sadly. 穆钰诚好几次想笑,却笑不出来。好几次感到绝望,但又被一些有意思的片段冲淡了感伤。 Has such elder brother? 怎么有这样的哥哥? Let the younger brother help him buy the small pornography...... 让弟弟去帮他买小黄书…… But the Yile those words my 30s people, has felt all right, making Mu Yucheng somewhat feel to feel sad, yes, 30s people, has not married, making the person laugh! 一乐那句话“我三十几的人了,怎么好意思”,让穆钰诚有些感到心酸,是啊,三十几的人了,还没结婚,让人笑话呢! Yile is poor cannot marry, but Mu Yucheng is busy...... 一乐是穷得没能结婚,而穆钰诚则是忙…… This chapter is very long, moreover like other webnovel, Mu Yucheng does not look very carefully, looks fascinated, the subway has almost sat in the station. 这一章很长,而且不像其他网络小说,穆钰诚看得很细致,也看得入迷,差点地铁坐过了站。 Must start to go to work! 要开始上班了! Mu Yucheng does not give up cell phone puts down, but before putting down, cannot bear with. 穆钰诚不舍得将手机放下,但放下之前,又忍不住拿起来。 Give an exaggerated account of things, weeps with emotion, when mister was enjoyed by this! Mu Yuchen hit to enjoy 100000 Qiyue coins to «Soldiers Sortie».” “天花乱坠,感动涕零,先生之才当受此赏!沐雨辰《士兵突击》打赏了100000起阅币。” Are not many, 1000, this regarding the Mu Yucheng income is only a drop in the bucket, but reads the work that wants to stop but cannot to hit to enjoy to oneself, Mu Yucheng is glad! 不多,1000块而已,这对于穆钰诚的收入来说只是九牛一毛,但给自己看得欲罢不能的作品打赏,穆钰诚乐意啊! But other court eunuch, I must know that actually Xu Sanduo does have to plunge to death!” Mu Yucheng laughed in one's heart has been making up a few words. “可别太监了,我还要知道,许三多究竟有没有摔死啊!”穆钰诚暗笑着补了一句话。
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