„Ihad never fantasizedbecomessoldier, becauseIfear death. Butnow, Ihave profound respecttosoldier!”Mu Yuchengblog.
“我从未幻想过成为一名军人,因为我怕死。但现在,我对军人肃然起敬!”穆钰诚的博客。Mu Yuchengin a ITcodeagriculture of Guangzhouwork, usuallyworksis very busy, earlyninelatenine, although the treatmentis rich, butalsolostownindividuallife.穆钰诚是在羊城工作的一名IT码农,平时工作很繁忙,早九晚九,虽然待遇丰厚,但也失去了自己的个人生活。Thereforehelikesin broken bitscoming to see the novelwithtime, looks atwebnovel, throughothers'brushwork, completes itself the fantasyto the life.
所以他喜欢用细碎的时间来看小说,看网络小说,通过别人的笔触,完成自己对人生的幻想。Today in editorpushes, heseesmilitary novel, called«Soldiers Sortie».
今天编辑强推里,他看到一本军旅小说,叫《士兵突击》。
The nameis actually ordinary, butis a editorQiang Zirecommendation that hequitelikes, thereforeMu Yuchengcurious, has selected.
名字倒是平淡无奇,不过是他比较喜欢的一个编辑强子推荐的,所以穆钰诚好奇之下,还是点了进去。Mu Yuchengroutinelylooks at the synopsis and commentaryfirst.穆钰诚习惯性地先看简介和评论。But in commented, confrontation of polarization, makinghimhave a scare.
但评论里面,两极分化的对峙,让他吓了一跳。„Is ugly! Looked attwochaptersto abandondecisively!”
“难看得一匹!看了两章果断弃了!”„Violently poisonous, cautious!”
“剧毒,慎点!”„Thankin the buildingto try the toxin, has not lookedfortunately.”
“感谢楼上试毒,还好没看。”„Does not have the rebirth, does not havegolden finger, howtoldmeprotagonistto mix?”
“没有重生,没有金手指,告诉我主角怎么混下去?”„Is protagonist a good-for-nothing? Does not dareto resistowndestiny, has been scoldedbastard sonbyhis father, if I, could not endureironclad!”
“主角就是一个窝囊废好吗?不敢抗争自己的命运,一直在被他爹骂龟儿子,如果是我,铁定忍不了!”„Has not understood, whocantell my firstchapter of plotsuddenlyto jumpto the secondchapter? Was chaotic, Ithought that Iwroteam more attractive than the author.”
“没看懂,谁能告诉我第一章的情节怎么忽然就跳到第二章了?混乱死了,我觉得我写得都比作者好看。”„Inbuilding, thatis the mode of writing of flashback, does not understanddo not shoot off the mouth!”
“楼上,那是倒叙的写法,不懂不要乱喷!”„Writeswebnovelalsoto doflashback? Thisauthor is also StoneLezhi.”
“写个网络小说还搞倒叙?这个作者也是石乐志。”„Hello, who are yousendto be blackmyGreat Yangwater army? Thisnovelis very interesting, did Ilookto cryquickly?”
“喂,你们都是谁派来黑我杨大大的水军?这小说很好看,我都快看哭了好吗?”„Agrees in the building, the child who in your citywas borndoes not know that the pain of rural area, myrural areawas born, felt the authorwritesismystories, initially had almost been sent tobarrackby the father.”
“同意楼上,你们这些城里出生的小孩不知道农村的苦,我农村出生的,感觉作者写的都是我的故事,当初差点就被父亲送去了军营。”„Saidoneweakly, youdid not think that secondchapter of finalthere, Xu Sanduois making the surrender posturevery muchcomedyto the tank?”
“弱弱地说一句,你们不觉得第二章最后那里,许三多对着坦克做投降姿势很搞笑吗?”„in additionone, Ialmostsmiledto make noise!”
“加一,我都差点笑出声了!”„Do yousuchmeanlysmilereally? Xu Sanduowas seenby the leader, left a poor impression, the laterdayfeared that is sad!”
“你们这么幸灾乐祸地笑真的好吗?许三多被领导看到了,留下了不好的印象,以后的日子怕是难过咯!”Cansay the post in commentaryareato have different opinions, the person who likesis full of praise, the person but who does not likeis the manneris also bright, thismakesMu Yuchenglooksomewhatpuzzled.
可以说评论区里的帖子都褒贬不一,喜欢的人赞不绝口,但不喜欢的人也是态度鲜明,这让穆钰诚看得有些不解。Meanwhilealsostimulateshiscuriosity, Mu Yuchengto decideto purchase the currentseveralchaptersto read.
但同时也激发了他的好奇心,穆钰诚决定购买了目前的几个章节来阅读。Justopened, prologuethatchapterhas then givenhim the differentfeeling!
刚刚打开,楔子的那一章便给了他不一样的感觉!Said?
怎么说呢?Veryliterary man! Butis notfalseliterary man of thatstackliterary flourishes, the language of author is very simple, described the antexquisitelyin every way possible, butcanunderstandasMu Yucheng of readerclearlythatthisant, was actually only the soldieranalogy!
很文青!但又不是那种堆砌词藻的假文青,作者的语言很朴实,却将蚂蚁描写得细腻入微,而作为读者的穆钰诚又能清楚地明白,这蚂蚁,其实只是军人的比喻而已!„Soldier antwill not sob......”Mu Yuchengto tastethese wordscarefully, the feelingis at heart suffocated.
“兵蚁不会哭泣……”穆钰诚细细地回味着这一句话,感觉心里堵得慌。
The firstchapterwhatwritesisXu Sanduocarries out the taskwith the teammates, herepresentedseveralnames, Cheng Cai, Yuan LangandWu Zhe, the disposition of everyone is different.
第一章写的是许三多和队友们执行任务,这里出现了几个名字,成才、袁朗、吴哲,每个人的性格都不一样。Make the Mu Yuchengmemoryquiteprofound, is the gruffness of Xu Sanduo, cold of Cheng Cai. Cheng Caiis a sniper, coldpointdoes not matter, even, Mu Yuchengalsothought that Xu Sanduois very difficultto fusewith the Cheng Caidisposition!
让穆钰诚记忆比较深刻的,是许三多的憨,还有成才的冷。成才是狙击手,冷一点也无所谓,甚至,穆钰诚还觉得许三多跟成才的性格很难融合呢!Butin the retreatingtime, Xu Sanduofollows ordersto shield, a performance of Cheng Cai, making the Mu Yuchenginnermost feelingsbe touched.
但在撤退时候,许三多奉命掩护,成才的一番表现,让穆钰诚的内心被触动了。
„ Cheng Cai: ‚Xu Sanduo, Iam waiting foryou.’
“成才:‘许三多,我等着你。’Xu Sanduo a fire that fromjustcompletedturns the head: ‚?’许三多从刚完成的一次射击中转过头来:‘啊?’Cheng Cailooks likewantsto punchhimvery much, buthas compared a sign languagein the sound of gunfirewithhim, thenfollowsinYuan LangandWu Zhebehind, firsttheywithdrew from the covertposition.成才看起来很想揍他,但只是在枪声中跟他比了一个手语,然后追随在袁朗和吴哲身后,前两人已经撤出隐蔽阵地。
When Xu Sanduorevealsto look atthatantsmiling face, heunderstands that sign language the meaning, thenhestartsto cope with the inexhaustibleenemy. ”许三多露出看那蚂蚁时的笑容,他明白那手语的意思,然后他开始独自一人对付无穷无尽的敌军。”Mu Yuchengsomewhatis at heart grieved, hefeltCheng Cai and friendship and tacit understanding of Xu Sanduointeractiontime, butalsoindistinctlythoughtthatbringing up the rearXu Sanduo, was perhaps more unfortunate than fortunate!穆钰诚心里有些酸楚,他感受到了成才和许三多互动时候的情谊和默契,但也隐约觉得,断后的许三多,恐怕是要凶多吉少了!Really, does not havehimto expect, Xu Sanduocannotclimb up the broken bridgesupport, layer on layerthrows downfrom the upper airin the ruins of factory......
果然,不出他所料,许三多没有能够爬上断桥支架,重重地从高空中摔倒在工厂的废墟里……
The Mu Yuchengmindshakescrazily, isXu Sanduosigh with emotionat the same time, suddenlydoes not thinkright.穆钰诚心神狂震,为许三多感慨的同时,忽然觉得不对。Damn, did protagonisthangin the firstchapter?尼玛,主角在第一章就挂了?Helooksthatunderstandswhy before , in the commentarysomepeoplementioned the flashback, protagonistwhenrealizedfuzzily, as ifsaw the father, thisstorywas then recalledby the authormoststarted, Xu Sanduobirthtime.
他看下去,才明白为什么之前评论里有人提到倒叙了,主角在意识模糊的时候,仿佛看到了父亲,这个故事便被作者回溯到了最开始,许三多出生的时候。wait a minute!等一下!Mu Yuchengwas also depressed.穆钰诚又郁闷了。Actually has protagonisthungorhas not hung? Then, do theirthisoperational missions, seem like the exercises?主角究竟是挂了还是没挂?然后,他们这个作战任务,怎么看起来像是演习?Then hasn't thisconfessed the clear, directreboundtomostto start?
然后就这样没有交代清楚,直接跳回到最开始?
The Mu Yuchengas ifhundredfingernailstorment the mind, felt that is very uncomfortable.穆钰诚仿佛百爪挠心,感觉到很难受。„!”Hecould not bearcallone, causedin the subwaylooking askance of people, Mu Yuchenghas then realizedright, did not smileawkwardly.
“啊!”他忍不住叫了一声,引起了地铁里众人的侧目,穆钰诚这才意识到不对,尴尬地笑了笑。
The storyis very splendid, heis not feeling wellfreelyvery much, butcannot bearthenlook.
故事很精彩,他尽管很不爽,但还是忍不住接着看下去。But the followingstylechanges, no longeris the tensebattlefield, butarrived at the backwardandpoorrural area. The farmersplainspoken language, infamily|home the length, isno onelikes, no wonder after somereaderswill look, does not abandon the bookpatiently.
但接下来画风一变,不再是紧张的战场,而是来到了落后、贫穷的农村。农民们质朴的言语,家里长短,并非谁都喜欢,难怪会有一部分读者看了之后,不耐烦地弃书。ButMu Yuchengsois not superficial, because to the favorable impression of authorstyle, Mu Yuchengbears the temperto look.
但穆钰诚没有这么肤浅,因为对作者文笔的好感,穆钰诚还是耐着性子看下去。However, has not imagined the obscurityto be difficultto understand.
不过,并没有想象中的晦涩难懂。Father Xuhadthreeboys, the BosscalledYile, the second childto callErhe, to the third child, thatturned intoSanduo!许老爹生了三个男孩,老大叫一乐,老二叫二和,到了老三,那就变成三多了!Right, the children of village headfamily|homecalledCheng Cai, originallyCheng Caiwas the Xu Sanduoneighbor!
对了,村长家的孩子叫成才,原来成才是许三多的邻居啊!Just, the family circumstanceshave very bigdifference!
只不过,家境有很大的差别!Cheng Cai has the golden keyto grow up the birth, butXu Sanduo, that was borninpoorothers, the thirdchild, left a mouth of eating meal, on the shoulder of Father Xuwere also many a heaviness.成才是含着金钥匙长大出生的,而许三多,那是出生在贫穷的人家,第三个孩子,多出了一张吃饭的嘴,许老爹的肩上又多了一份沉甸甸。Because the wifedies young, Father Xudoes not haveabilityto create the conditiontothreechildren, can only place hopes to deliver the childto become a soldier, making the nationalhelpeatto the grain ration. ButYile, isErhe, theydo not have the prospect, makingFather Xube greatly disappointed.
因为妻子早逝,许老爹没有能力给三个孩子创造条件,只能寄希望于送孩子去当兵,让国家帮忙给口粮吃。但无论是一乐,还是二和,他们都没有出息,让许老爹大失所望。Actually the style of authorisveryhumorous, butthislanguagedescriptionmade the reality that onecould not resist, insteadappearedheavy.
其实作者的文笔还是很诙谐的,只是这种语言描述令人抗拒不了的现实,反而更显得沉重。Mu Yuchengseveraltimeswantto smile, actuallycannot smile. Severaltimesfeeldesperate, buthad been dilutedbysomeinterestingfragmentssadly.穆钰诚好几次想笑,却笑不出来。好几次感到绝望,但又被一些有意思的片段冲淡了感伤。Hassuchelder brother?
怎么有这样的哥哥?Let the younger brotherhelphimbuy the smallpornography......
让弟弟去帮他买小黄书……But the Yilethose words„my30s people, has felt all right”, makingMu Yuchengsomewhatfeelto feel sad, yes, 30s people, has not married, making the personlaugh!
但一乐那句话“我三十几的人了,怎么好意思”,让穆钰诚有些感到心酸,是啊,三十几的人了,还没结婚,让人笑话呢!Yileis poorcannotmarry, butMu Yuchengisbusy......一乐是穷得没能结婚,而穆钰诚则是忙……Thischapteris very long, moreoverlikeotherwebnovel, Mu Yuchengdoes not lookverycarefully, looksfascinated, the subwayhas almost sat in the station.
这一章很长,而且不像其他网络小说,穆钰诚看得很细致,也看得入迷,差点地铁坐过了站。Muststartto go to work!
要开始上班了!Mu Yuchengdoes not give upcell phoneputs down, but before putting down, cannot bearwith.穆钰诚不舍得将手机放下,但放下之前,又忍不住拿起来。„Give an exaggerated account of things, weepswith emotion, whenmisterwas enjoyedbythis! Mu Yuchenhitto enjoy100000Qiyuecoinsto«Soldiers Sortie».”
“天花乱坠,感动涕零,先生之才当受此赏!沐雨辰给《士兵突击》打赏了100000起阅币。”Are not many, 1000, thisregarding the Mu Yuchengincomeis onlya drop in the bucket, butreads the work that wants to stop but cannotto hitto enjoytooneself, Mu Yuchengis glad!
不多,1000块而已,这对于穆钰诚的收入来说只是九牛一毛,但给自己看得欲罢不能的作品打赏,穆钰诚乐意啊!„Butothercourt eunuch, I must knowthatactuallyXu Sanduodoes haveto plunge to death!”Mu Yuchenglaughed in one's hearthas been making upa few words.
“可别太监了,我还要知道,许三多究竟有没有摔死啊!”穆钰诚暗笑着补了一句话。
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