FGOAA :: Volume #18

#1777: The tears of blood of divine wood( 12)


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His appearance is fierce, hiss exclaimed: Cannot make them run away, Li Tianming must die, everyone must die!” 他面目狰狞,嘶吼道:“不能让他们逃走,李天命必死,所有人都得死!” Right, making Li Tianming have no cares Xuanyuan Dragon Sect, that will be very troublesome, Emperor Venerable had no way to tidy up him.” “对,让李天命无牵无挂去了轩辕龙宗,那会很麻烦,帝尊都没法收拾他。” From this point, some actually people support Li Xuanyang. 从这一点上,倒是有人支持李玄阳。 But, they sit Star Sea Divine Ship to walk, what means do we have? Sun Divine Palace and Emperor Venerable not.” Some people spit the mortise. “可是,他们坐星海神舰走,我们有什么办法啊?太阳神宫帝尊又不在。”有人吐槽道。 This is the practical problem. 这是现实问题。 I have the means!” “我有办法!” Li Xuanyang clenches jaws, he stared at the blue sky divine wood, said: „Don't the people in these blue sky mainland, look at the blue sky divine wood are more important than the life? Has not walked while them, we cut trees down directly! Looked that they also do come back!” 李玄阳咬牙切齿,他盯上了青云神木,道:“这些青云大陆的人,不是把青云神木看得比命都重要吗?趁着他们还没走,我们直接砍树!看他们还回不回来!” The people look at each other in blank dismay. 众人面面相觑。 Some people want to say that the fruit of this tree is very useful, because does not want to oppose with Li Xuanyang, then bore the idea of speech. 有人想说这棵树的果子很有用,但因为不想和李玄阳作对,便忍住了说话的想法。 Everyone together, cuts trees down, cuts!” “所有人一起,砍树,往死里砍!” Yes!” “是!” Suddenly, dense and numerous Order Heavenly Clan regarding near the tree trunk of blue sky divine wood, a blade sword, Consciousness Spirit fell together crazily. 一时间,密密麻麻的秩序天族围绕在青云神木的树干边上,一刀一剑,还有识神一起疯狂砍伐。 Rumbling- 轰轰轰- This lived the innumerable year of old trees, starts to tremble and send out grating calling out in grief. 这活了无数年的古树,开始震颤、发出刺耳的悲鸣。 Buzz humming sound! 嗡嗡嗡! The crown shivers loudly, the innumerable blood change to the rainstorm to fall, the entire blue sky mainland, can see this pitiful condition. 树冠轰然颤抖,无数鲜血化作暴雨落下,整个青云大陆,都能看到这惨状。 Divine wood......” “神木……” Suddenly, countless people follow the blue sky divine wood to weep copiously together. 一时间,无数人跟着青云神木一起泪如雨下。 Bang bang bang! 砰砰砰! Cuts trees down is still continuing. 砍树还在继续。 The blue sky divine wood tree trunk is very thick, but is not firm, hundreds of thousands of people fell together, radically soon. 青云神木树干很粗大,但是并不坚固,数十万人一起砍伐,根本用不了多长时间。 With the incline of blue sky divine wood, the entire blue sky mainland is vibrating, the whole world is bursting into tears. 随着青云神木的倾斜,整块青云大陆都在震动,整个世界都在流泪。 On Nine Dragons Emperor Burial, resounded through the innumerable sad weeping sounds. 九龙帝葬上,响彻了无数悲戚的哭声。 Everyone is looking bright red that probably the burning down divine wood, the tears of blood are billowing, at that moment, they felt the tremor of bloodlines, that type flowed sorrowfully in the hearts of everyone, making them understand, as the weak one, others trampled the dignity, invaded the homeland the time, was painful. 人人望着那艳红的,好像正在焚烧的神木,血泪滚滚,那一刻,他们感受到了血脉的颤动,那种悲哀流淌在每一个人的心间,让他们明白,作为弱者,别人践踏尊严、侵占家园的时候,到底有多么痛苦。 Divine wood!” “神木!” Bang bang bang! 砰砰砰! In Emperor Burial, everyone knelt down. 帝葬内,所有人都跪下了。 They will soon go to the new battlefield, they won this time, but, they are doomed unable to defend this to nourish their ancient trees. 他们即将奔赴新的战场,他们赢了这一次,可是,他们注定守不住这一棵滋养他们的古老树木。 In order to force Li Tianming stops, Li Xuanyang makes a determined effort, fells simply not to suspend. 为了逼迫李天命停下,李玄阳发狠,砍伐起来根本没有暂停。 When saw that Nine Dragons Emperor Burial is above mundane thoughts goes, he is burning with anger. 当看到九龙帝葬绝尘而去的时候,他更是怒火中烧。 Reduces it!!!!” “砍掉它!!!!” His scream, resounds through the crown again. 他的尖叫,再度响彻树冠。 Bang! 轰隆! From some moment, divine wood called out in grief to the pinnacle desperately, after that suddenly transformed as angry howling, probably all leaves became the vocal cord, roared on this anger of extinct organism. 从某一刻开始,神木的悲鸣绝望到了极致,此后忽然转化为愤怒的吼叫,好像所有的树叶都成了声带,吼出了这上古生物的愤怒。 crack! 咔嚓 Bough incline. 树干倾斜。 Broke thoroughly. 彻底断了。 Humming sound humming sound! 嗡嗡嗡嗡! That stands erect in the blue sky mainland innumerable year of divine wood, loudly downward but actually, even if drops down, the direction of its tree trunk, is still the unpopulated mountainous area. 那屹立在青云大陆无数年的神木,轰然往下倒,即使倒下,它树干的方向,也是无人居住的山区。 At that moment, in Nine Dragons Emperor Burial, people stare the big eye, the tears spin in the eye socket, everyone lost one's voice, the tears blurred the eyes, loses the humiliation of homeland to fill to be filled with, these loses time, the eternal life is unable to make up. 那一刻,九龙帝葬之内,人们瞪大眼睛,泪水在眼眶内打转,所有人都失声了,泪水模糊了双眼,丧失家园的屈辱填满心间,这一次失去,永生都无法弥补。 The divine wood, dropped down. 神木,倒下了。 Again not cool. 再也没有荫凉。 Has not been the fine spring day above Sun again. 再也没有属于太阳之上的鸟语花香。 Does not have all over the sky stars same fruit again. 再也没有满天繁星一样的果子。 Has not shared the same roots again. 再也没有血脉相连。 Child who after that was born, they do not know, in the parental memory that happy blue sky divine wood is what appearance. 此后出生的孩子,他们也再也不会知道,父母记忆中那美好的青云神木是什么样子。 It green and luxuriant innumerable years, irrigated the innumerable generation of lives, to last blood red, with own dropping down, gave it the people under asylum to escape the birth day possibility. 它郁郁葱葱了无数年,灌溉了无数代的生命,到最后一身血红,用自己的倒下,给它庇护下的人们逃出生天的可能。 In Nine Dragons Emperor Burial, these tree seeds, although is the embryos, but they called out in grief, because they clearest, their mothers, have withered away at this moment. 九龙帝葬内,那些树种们,虽然都是胚胎,可是它们都悲鸣了,因为它们最清楚,它们的母亲,此刻已经消亡。 At that moment, Li Tianming got hold of the double fist, he has not turned head, but wiped the tears of corner of the eye, has this mainland final hope, flies loudly toward Sun south. 那一刻,李天命握紧了双拳,他没有回头,而是擦去了眼角的泪水,带着这块大陆最后的希望,朝着太阳南方轰然飞去。 ...... …… ...... …… Dies! Dies!” “去死!去死!” After divine wood collapse, raised everywhere dust to make the whole world fall into the dust world. 神木倒塌后,掀起了漫天尘土让整个世界都陷入了灰尘世界。 What does not see clearly. 什么都看不清楚。 Buzz humming sound! 嗡嗡嗡! Li Xuanyang is shouting curses, probably heard humming sound the sound, he stares the big eye, wants to see clearly is anything. 李玄阳正在叫骂的时候,好像听到了嗡嗡的声音,他瞪大眼睛,想看清楚是什么。 At present suddenly flashes. 眼前忽然一闪。 Probably a blood-color leaf? 好像是一片血色的树叶? Ding! 叮! That is really a leaf, its suddenly inserted on Li Xuanyang forehead, tore a wound unexpectedly, moreover withered and yellow that after that this leaf from bright red changed, withered thoroughly. 那果然是一片树叶,它冷不丁的就插在了李玄阳的额头上,竟然撕裂出一道伤口,而且在那之后,这片叶子从艳红变的枯黄,彻底枯萎。 This indicated that blood red, swamped into Li Xuanyang body. 这说明那血红,涌入了李玄阳的身体。 Ah--!” 啊——!” He sends out a pitiful yell suddenly, because of red liquids, looked like the innumerable small insects to sneak in his head, is eating his flesh and brains. 他陡然发出一句惨叫,因为有一股红色的液体,就像是无数的小虫子钻进了他的脑袋,正在吃他的血肉、脑髓。 Saves me!” “救我!” Li Xuanyang does not know that this is anything, he called out pitifully panic-stricken, wants to bring to others' attention. 李玄阳根本不知道这是什么,他惊恐惨叫,想要引起别人的注意。 But the next quarter, and he equally extremely tragic pitiful yell sound, everywhere is. 可是下一刻,和他一样惨绝人寰的惨叫声,到处都是。 That fought before is more miserable. 比之前那一战还要惨。 Everyone is calling out pitifully. 所有人都在惨叫。 The whole world is calling out pitifully. 整个世界都在惨叫。 Seeing institute, is the blood-color leaves, so many leaves, only possibly come from the blue sky divine wood, this explained the divine wood that this drops down, the leaf flew. 入目所及,都是血色的树叶,那么多的树叶,只可能来自青云神木,这说明这倒下的神木,叶子都飞了。 pū pū! 噗噗噗! Li Xuanyang called out pitifully, his presents red leaf sea at present. 李玄阳惨叫的时候,他的眼前出现了一片红色的叶子海洋。 Very attractive. 很漂亮。 He was swallowed directly. 他直接被吞了。 After the leaf of this big piece withers, their all blood-color, swamped into Li Xuanyang body. 当这大片的叶子都枯萎后,它们所有的血色,都涌入了李玄阳的身体。 „......” “呃……” Li Xuanyang struggles and twitches, stares the big eye, the mouth spits the foam. 李玄阳挣扎、抽搐,瞪大眼睛,口吐白沫。 Finally, motionless. 最后,一动不动。 He died. 他死了。 Dying with injustice unredressed. 死不瞑目。 After dying, his corpse becomes and original leaf equally is bright red, on the skin even appeared the trace of leaf vein, in his mouth, unexpectedly azure little Miao is germinating, its fast growth, grew a pink-white small flower, no matter its leaf or the flowers, seemed especially pure, has not contaminated the blood. 死完后,他的尸体变得和原先的树叶一样艳红,皮肤上甚至显现出了叶脉的纹路,紧接着在他的嘴里,竟然有一株青色小苗在发芽,它快速的成长,长出了一朵粉白色的小花儿,不管是它的叶子还是花朵,都显得格外纯净,一点都没沾染到鲜血。 The dust gradually dissipates. 灰尘逐渐消散。 As can be seen, nearby this is the blood-color corpse, the corpse gradually is everywhere depressed, does not see clearly the appearance, only these colorful little flowers, symbolizing are pure and new student/life. 可以看到,这附近到处都是血色的尸体,尸体逐渐消沉,看不清楚模样,唯独那些五颜六色的小花,象征着纯净和新生。 The blue sky divine wood died, the place that but, it once took root, actually changed to one piece beautifully only like fairyland sea of flowers, the sea of flowers be continuous ten thousand li (0.5 km). 青云神木死了,但是,它曾经扎根的地方,却化作了一片唯美如仙境般的花海,花海绵延万里。 Some people do not know, each flower growth, means a death of Order Heavenly Clan. 不会有人知道,每一朵花的生长,就意味着一个秩序天族的死亡。 In the north of mainland, a sea of flowers, had most blood red leaves to flutter about toward that side at that time, finally withers. 在大陆的北方,还有一片花海,当时有大部分的血红树叶往那边纷飞,最终枯萎。 That sea of flowers is bigger, the dream, looking like the fairyland is the same. 那一片花海更大,更梦幻,就像是仙境一样。 Only then Order Heavenly Clan turned into the flower. 只有秩序天族变成了花。 But in this mainland, blue sky mortals but who also survive in the mountains and plains, but also is sobbing for the divine wood. 而这座大陆上,还在山野中生存的青云凡人们,还在为神木而哭泣。 On the day of Order Heavenly Clan will not forget. 秩序天族不会忘记这一天。 Because, in the history book will record, they in a common barren mainland, died in battle 7 million elite regiments. 因为,史书上会记载,他们在一座不起眼的贫瘠大陆上,战死了七百万精英军团。 And, 1.8 million die of azure soul Jianfeng. 其中,一百八十万死于青魂剑峰。 5.2 million, dead Yu Qingyun divine wood. 五百二十万,死于青云神木。 ...... …… ...... …… ...... …… 12 chapters, big eruption! 12章,大爆发! For a long time has not written so many. 好久没写这么多了。 After finishing, backbreaking, dizzy......, but the innermost feelings were fiery. 写完之后,腰酸背痛,头昏眼花……但是内心是火热的。 Returns to the plot of this solar part, when compared with the talent fights steps on the crispness of person, the war and homeland, protects and goes against heaven's will changes to assign/life this series of themes, can make me be choked up with emotions, as if places oneself in that scene , new student/life burst into tears for the death of blue sky divine wood together. 回到这太阳部分的剧情,比起天才争锋时踩人的爽,战争、家园、守护、逆天改命这一系列的题材,更能够让我自己心潮澎湃,仿佛置身于那个场景中,一起为青云神木的死亡、新生而流泪。 About this topic, I also want to say a small interlude. 关于这个话题,我还想说一个小插曲。 Last Saturday three chapters( the kneeling next station did not come these 3 chapters), I wrote was very long, the component was quite big, the number of words was quite full. 上周六的三章(跪下站不来这三章),我写了很久,份量比较大,字数比较足。 On the same day after finishing, I felt refreshing, startled was the Celestial, took a fresh look again, once bent for own talent. Because for sometime has not written the story of Sun, writes about the oppression and difficult position, oneself also produced the intense resonance, the life and death danger that probably azure soul palace faces, affected itself on. 当天写完后,我感觉神清气爽,惊为天人,重新再看一遍,一度为自己的才华所折倒。因为有一段时间没写太阳的故事,写到压迫、困境,自己也产生了强烈的共鸣,好像青魂殿面临的生死危难,作用到了自己身上。 Wrote too well! 写得太好了! I say with emotion. 我感慨道。 Own hot blooded gave the ignition! 把自己的热血都给点燃了呢! Flamboyant! 牛逼! Therefore I upload happily, wait for the reader to be subdued by my talent. 于是我开开心心上传,等着读者被我才华折服。 Next day, I look at the commentary area confidently. 第二天,我信心满满一看评论区。 Readers: Water. 读者:水。 My at the scene old blood blowout ~ 我当场一口老血喷出~ Society vicissitudes of life, really cannot interlinked 0.0. 人世间的悲欢离合,果然不能相通0.0。 About this issue, I have actually chatted with the wife 关于这个问题,我其实和媳妇聊过 ( Finished each time, I will make her first look, therefore she is white Piao No. 1 female powder) (每次写完,我都会让她先看的,所以她是白瞟的一号女粉) I said: Any high C needs the pinnacle suppressed upholstery, to have the fiercest eruption, the upholstery needs the number of words to accumulate, exaggeration of again and again, although arranges the lead to enter the stage the comparison to raise appetite end of Chapter 3, but even if in fact I make him enter the stage early, on the same day 3 chapters could not do anything. Might as well brings the upholstery to the pinnacle. And ; Li Xuanyang and profound Yang army this two opponent, needs( broom corn millet and color) to design with the detail, will make the reader have the hostility. 我说:任何高C都需要极致的压制铺垫,才会有最猛的爆发,铺垫就需要字数累计,一次次的渲染,虽然安排主角在第三章末尾出场比较吊胃口,但实际上就算我早让他出场,当天三章也干不了什么。还不如拿来铺垫到极致。而且;李玄阳和玄阳军这两个对手,也需要用细节(糜、色)来设计,才会让读者产生敌意。 She: Although words saying like this, but our readers look at the upholstery, will only initiate the anticipation to feel, at this time could not join, we will instead think the water. Because the upholstery, exaggerates that part, after everyone looked, anticipated that the feeling built, but will be mistaken built anticipation feeling uselessly some. We will not study ourselves to anticipate where the feeling comes( perhaps will produce suddenly?)...... You write like this, continuously look is very crisp, but with reading the reader will accuse, this suffers a loss very much, the key is you writes like this uses energy very much, might as well water dialogue, in any case this best water, moreover we are not good to distinguish. 她:话虽然这样说,但是我们读者看完铺垫,只会引发期待感,这时候接不上,我们反而会认为水的。因为铺垫、渲染那部分,大家看了之后,期待感营造好了,但偏偏又会误以为‘营造期待感’这部分没用。我们又不会去研究自己期待感是哪里来的(也许会陡然产生?)……你这样写,连续看的时候很爽,但是跟读的读者就会指责,这样很吃亏,关键是你这样写又很费劲,还不如‘水对话’,反正这最好水,而且我们还不好分辨。 I: Suffers a loss suffers a loss, writes a book this thing, cheerful person first cheerful oneself, if oneself are not happy, does not believe this story and joy, anger, sorrow, and happiness, how also to long for that the reader is happy? If I can write with the book in the character melt in the same place condition, what worry not hot blooded? I am water the upholstery that is difficult to write and use energy, not water dialogue! That wood has the technique content, the water does not have the challenging! 我:吃亏就吃亏吧,写书这东西,愉人先愉己,若是自己都不愉快,都不相信这个故事和喜怒哀乐,又怎么渴望读者愉快呢?如果我自己能写到和书中人物融在一起的状态,何愁不热血?我就是要‘水’难写、费劲的铺垫,就不‘水对话’!那个木有技术含量,水起来没挑战性! She: The final word, you are this/should! 她:煞笔,你就是该! I:...... 我:…… ( From writing a book first day, I understand a truth, everyone is the individuals of different thought that in 1000 reader hearts has 1000 Hamlet, to satisfy part of pursues knows plot result fast irritable demand, thus neglects to polish, upholstery and introduction , elucidation , transposition and summary, writes running water plot, is not my way. Each reader longs for that not too same written way and plot development, the road of writer believes itself, in the character with the book altogether melts. I wrote a book for ten years, how in this period at least several hundred readers taught me to write a book, I will refer, but completely will not believe. (从写书的第一天,我就明白一个道理,每个人都是不同思维的个体,一千个读者心中有一千个哈姆雷特,所以为了满足一部分追求‘快速知道剧情结果’的急躁需求,从而忽略润色、铺垫、起承转合,去写流水剧情,并不是我的方式。每个读者都会渴望不太一样的书写方式和剧情发展,作家的路就是相信自己,和书中人物共融。我写书十年了,期间起码有几百个读者教我要怎么写书,我会参考,但不会尽信。 My this way, sometimes even if suffers a loss and does not ask for happily, is misunderstood, but I dare saying that the daily renewal, I have not been perfunctory.) 我这种方式,哪怕有时候吃亏、不讨喜、被误解,但我敢说,每天的更新,我都没有敷衍。) Said so many, Key point Yes- 说了那么多,【重点】是- Asked the recommendation ticket!!!!! 求推荐票!!!!! Moreover, Li Tianming and Jiang Feiling, entered 32, this week of opponent traded another two books, troubled everyone 0.1 【...】 Books page details, Votes to them! 另外,李天命姜妃棂,都进32强了,这一周的对手换了另外两本书,麻烦大家点一下【…】【书籍页详情】,给他们投票吧! Thank, did 12 chapters, throw the family members?! 感谢,12章啊,投吧亲人们?!
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