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#46: Bright struggle!


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Dongzheng Media. Literature Division. 东正传媒文学部 Xiao Pinqing is a Literature Division screenwriter, every day must be responsible for verifying a lot of manuscripts. 肖品青文学部的一名编剧,每天都要负责审核大量的稿件。 These manuscripts mainly have three origins: First, the Literature Division internal polish, according to the market quotation, above gives a story subject, the following screenwriter creates according to the story nuclear. Second, the screenwriters of some long-term collaborations send, naturally, these screenwriters become famous for a long time, the quantity are not many, dragging the manuscript to be serious, but the quality is extremely considerable. Also is the key following closely object in company. The third channel is some literary amateurs sends through the contribution mailbox of company, receiving the manuscript quantity is big, but majority are the waste manuscripts, is hard to use. 这些稿件主要有三个来源:一是文学部内部打磨的,根据市场行情,上面给一个故事主题,下面的编剧根据故事核来进行创作。二是一些长期合作的编剧发来的,当然,这些编剧成名已久,数量不多,拖稿严重,但是质量极其可观。也是公司的重点盯梢对象。第三个渠道则是一些文学爱好者通过公司的投稿邮箱发过来的,收稿量大,但是大多数都是废稿,难以使用。 The Xiao Pinqing routine opening company receives the manuscript mailbox, looks at that several-page newest mail, rubbed the somewhat bitter eye, vanished big steaming hot coffee, put into during this arduous work again. 肖品青习惯性的打开公司收稿邮箱,看着那长达几页的最新邮件,揉了揉有些酸涩的眼睛,泯了一大口热气腾腾的咖啡,再一次投入到了这繁重的工作之中。 Really did not have the script of means use, Xiao Pinqing to duplicate the good official reply glue directly in the past, then clicked on the transmission. 实在没办法使用的剧本,肖品青直接将复制好的官方回复粘贴过去,然后点击发送。 The manuscript that needs to revise, he will write the corrections in behind, waits for the opposite party to send in the brand-new manuscript again. 需要修改的稿件,他会在后面写出修改意见,等待对方再次发来全新稿件。 If the creativity, character and story very prominent manuscript, Xiao Pinqing will be prudent, the Literature Division interior will hold a panel meeting, if thinks that this script has the photography value, then contacts with the author by the copyright section that side, conducts the discussion and purchase of copyright. 倘若是创意、人物以及故事都非常突出的稿件,肖品青会慎重起来,文学部内部会召开一个小组讨论会,如果一致认为这个剧本有拍摄价值,便由版权部那边与作者联系,进行版权的洽谈和采购。 Although has the preparation, but most drafts are rotten to the core, the official reply that duplicates settles. 虽然早就有了心理准备,但是大多数稿子还是糟糕透顶,一封复制过来的官方回复来了事。 «Aircraft commander Mister», sees this name, Xiao Pinqing cannot help but has to plant at present a bright feeling. 《机长先生》,看到这个名字,肖品青不由得有种眼前一亮的感觉。 A successful script, first should have a name of bright eye. 一部成功的剧本,首先应该有一个亮眼的名字。 You give «Wild flower» «Did not say» «Brook» and so on name casually, was very difficult to hold the eyeball of reader and audience. As the matter stands, even your content is good, is still very difficult to obtain the approval in market in the earlier period. 你随便取一个《野花》《不好说》《溪流》之类的名字,很难抓住读者和观众的眼球。这样一来,就算你内容不错,也很难在前期就获得市场上的认可。 Naturally, your content outstanding to going against heaven's will words, that regards as another matter. For example «Muche Landau», first name that watches this movie, you know that what meaning it is? What content wants to express? 当然,你的内容优秀到逆天的话,那就另当别论。譬如《穆赫兰道》,第一眼看到这部电影的名字,你知道它是什么意思吗?想要表达什么内容? «Godfather» «Steel and iron Hero» «Spider Hero», these name can know its subject and story content. 《教父》《钢铁侠》《蜘蛛侠》,这些名字一眼就能够让人知道它的主题和故事内容。 Obviously, this is a book that writes the aircraft commander, is theme that in the market compares to be popular. 显然,这是一部写机长的本子,是市场上比较吃香的题材。 The Xiao Pinqing somewhat excited point the documents, then started to look. 肖品青有些激动的点开文档,然后开始看了起来。 A present goes, could not pull out again. 一眼下去,就再也拔不出来了。 By noon time for the lunch, Xiao Pinqing refused the lunch of colleague to invite, the cell phone ordered duck blood fans soup to appease hunger. 到了中午的午饭时间,肖品青拒绝了同事的午饭邀约,手机下单了一份鸭血粉丝汤充饥。 Ate several lunches simply, Xiao Pinqing placed «Aircraft commander Mister» on the mind again this script. 简单的吃了几口午饭,肖品青再一次将心神重新放在《机长先生》这个剧本上面。 This looks is one in the afternoon, got off work also not to detect until the company. 这一看又是一下午,直到公司下班了也毫无察觉。 The company has to work overtime luckily the culture, especially their Literature Division, working overtime catches up with the manuscript simply is the potluck. 幸好公司有加班文化,特别是他们文学部,加班赶稿简直是家常便饭。 Xiao Pinqing sent an information in the group discussion group, request group everyone met to the conference room. 肖品青在小组讨论群里发了一条信息,要求小组所有人到会议室开会。 Meanwhile, Xiao Pinqing « Aircraft commander Mister " script sent to the small cohort, understands the time of script to everyone. 于此同时,肖品青将《机长先生》的剧本发到了小组群里,给每个人一些了解剧本的时间。 ......” “呼……” Xiao Pinqing long breathed out the tone, thought, sees a good book finally. If the literary group verifies to pass, that was own work achievements- 肖品青长长的嘘了口气,心想,总算是看到一个不错的本子了。如果文学组这边审核通过的话,那就是自己的工作业绩了- In conference room, after the group seven members arrive in full completely, Xiao Pinqing declared meeting open. 会议室里,等到小组七名成员全部到齐之后,肖品青宣布会议开始。 „Did I send to book «Aircraft commander Mister in» small cohort everyone has looked?” Xiao Pinqing asked with a smile. “我发到小组群里的本子《机长先生》大家都看过了吗?”肖品青笑着问道。 Has looked.” What first said was big sister Sun Li, script that she will print in hand, made noise saying: Style is immature, but the mode of writing is very novel, the story line and sentimental line are very good.” “看过了。”最先接话的是老大姐孙梨,她将打印出来的剧本拿在手里,出声说道:“文笔稚嫩,但是写法很新颖,故事线和感情线都很不错。” I thought that the story content was insufficient, was too simpler, was hard to support the demands of dozens volumes of soap operas saying.” “我觉得故事内容不够,讲的太简单了些,难以支撑几十集电视剧的需求量。” Writes the story of aircraft commander, so long as is not too rotten, I thought that we can use. The story quantity are few, we filled toward inside become.”- “写机长的故事,只要不是太烂,我觉得我们都可以用。故事量少,咱们往里面填补就成了。”- When everyone spoke, calm of Xiao Pinqing on the heart, he knows, this book should be able to verify to pass. 等到所有人都发言完毕,肖品青就心中大定,他知道,这个本子应该是可以审核通过了。 My lord pushes «Aircraft commander Mister», mainly has the reasons in three aspects. First, selected topic. Such that just like Teacher Cai said that so long as writes the story of aircraft commander, we can use. After all, were too many at the film and television play of this domain fire. Hollywood «Fighting spirit Lingyun», our «Rushes to Clouds» has the good performance. One group of handsome fellow beautiful women put on the aircraft commander to take and stewardess clothing/taking, walking is a pretty scenery line. Encircles the powder for our artists very much easily.” “我之所以主推《机长先生》,主要有三个方面的原因。第一,选题。正如蔡老师所说的那样,只要是写机长的故事,咱们都可以用上。毕竟,在这个领域大火的影视剧太多了。无论是好莱坞的《斗志凌云》,还是我们的《冲上云霄》都有着不俗的表现。一群帅哥美女穿上机长服和空姐服,走出去就是一道靓丽的风景线。很容易为我们的艺人圈粉。” Second, story and emotion. Just like Teacher Sun said a moment ago, can look, the style of author slightly obviously immature, moreover many place processing insufficient clear mature. However, this instead is its highlight is not a shortcoming. Because it has not received in the market the influence of mainstream repertoire, he wrote the new plot to come out.” “第二,故事和情感。正如孙老师刚才所说,可以看出来,作者的文笔稍显稚嫩,而且很多地方处理的不够圆润成熟。但是,这反而是它的亮点不是缺点。因为它没有受到市场上主流套路的影响,他写出了新鲜的情节出来。” Third, substitutes the feeling. We are the screenwriter, knows in the market the characters of most plays to establish now bad. Not enough story and emotion support this role, his living standing in our at present. Either big entire, either entirely white sweet. This inside character has the merit, naturally also has the flaw. For example female protagonist, namely good, broker. But, she in little change, little becomes must be more outstanding. After some people think is outstanding, these shortcomings do not have. «Aircraft commander Mister» does not process, female protagonist changes is more outstanding, but desire also intense. But, that is not negative, but is the intense enterprise. She can help itself and actor become maturer. She has been pursuing a comfort margin, is relentless leaves it. Let the person have the anticipation feeling very much.” “第三,代入感。我们都是做编剧的,都知道现在市场上大部份剧的人物设定都非常的糟糕。没有足够的故事和情感来支撑起这个角色,将他活生生的立在我们的眼前。要么高大全,要么傻白甜。这里面的人物有优点,当然也有缺陷。譬如女主角,即善良,又市侩。可是,她在一点点的改变,一点点的变得更优秀。有人以为优秀之后,那些缺点就没有了。《机长先生》不是这么处理的,女主角变的更加优秀,但是欲望也更加的强烈。可是,那不是负面的,而是强烈的进取心。她能够帮助自己和男主角变得更加成熟。她一直在追逐一个舒适区,然后又毫不留情的离开它。让人很有期待感。” Xiao Pinqing observes the situation the people, said: Therefore, my suggestion is purchases «Aircraft commander Mister» this copyright. Opinion?” 肖品青环视众人,说道:“所以,我的建议是采购《机长先生》这个版权。各位的意见呢?” Agreement.” “同意。” Can purchase.” “可以采购。” I also feel good.”- “我也觉得挺好的。”- Unanimously passes- 全票通过- For this script writes the advantage analysis to report to «Aircraft commander Mister», is good to submit to make them conduct the copyright purchase to the copyright section, Xiao Pinqing works overtime in the evening the Ling Chen five points. 为了给《机长先生》这个剧本写优势分析报告,好提交给给版权部让他们进行版权采购,肖品青当晚加班到凌晨五点。 The second zenith chicken coop was just rushing to the company, Kong Xi manager Wang Shao caught up. 第二天顶着鸡窝头刚刚赶到公司,孔溪的经纪人王韶就赶了过来。 Wang Shao was the senior employee in company, moreover in the hand had a Kong Xi such trump card, naturally received the respect and welcome of people to Literature Division. 王韶本来就是公司的老员工了,而且手上有孔溪这样一张王牌,到了文学部自然受到众人的尊重和欢迎。 „Does Sis Shao, how have free time today our copyright section?” 韶姐,今天怎么有空到我们版权部?” What copyright did Sis Shao settle on? You said one, which us wants to give which......” 韶姐是不是看中什么版权了?你说一声,要哪个我们给哪个……” Sis Shao, what book does Sis Xi want? We were compelled by above quickly insanely. Above said that Sis Xi is not willing to receive an engagement, is the book that because we look for is not good, is the work of our Literature Division has not completed.”- 韶姐,溪姐到底要什么样的本子啊?我们都快被上面逼疯了。上面说溪姐不愿意接戏,是因为我们找的本子不行,是我们文学部的工作没有做好。”- Wang Shao is smiling and everyone 11 greets, stands said in the crowds: My this time, for the Kong Xi new opera script.” 王韶微笑着和大家一一打了招呼,站在人群中间说道:“我这次来,就是为了孔溪的新剧剧本。” „Ah?” “啊?” The people call out in alarm make noise. 众人惊呼出声。 „Did Sis Xi have the book of liking finally? Thank God, the God enlarged ones vision......” 溪姐终于有喜欢的本子了?谢天谢地,老天爷开眼了……” Which book is can by our Sis Xi having a liking for? Was I sent past «Talent Doctor» yesterday?” “到底是哪个本子能被咱们溪姐给看上?是我昨天发过去的《天才医生》吗?” Was then good, Literature Division can gasp for breath finally......”- “这下好了,文学部终于可以喘口气了……”- The line of sight of Wang Shao shifted the body of Xiao Pinqing, said with a smile: Is blue, heard that you did find a book to be called «Aircraft commander Mister»?” 王韶的视线转移到了肖品青的身上,笑着说道:“品青,听说你们找到了一个本子叫做《机长先生》?” Right.” The Xiao Pinqing spirit shakes. Said: Sis Shao, our does Sis Xi want to pat this?” “对的。”肖品青精神为之一震。说道:“韶姐,咱们溪姐想拍这个?” Wang Shao nods, said: Kong Xi is interested in aircraft commander literature style very much, she has wanted to play a female aircraft commander...... I also to think that this role is good, good that if can play . Moreover the role enough asks for happily, the female aircraft commander who a charming aircraft commander takes attracts the powder very much. The male powder female powder, should like such Kong Xi.” 王韶点了点头,说道:“孔溪对机长这个体裁很感兴趣,她一直想演一个女机长……我也觉得这个角色蛮好的,如果能够饰演的好,而且角色足够讨喜的话,一身帅气机长服的女机长是很吸粉的。无论是男粉还是女粉,应该都会喜欢这样的孔溪。” Right, I also think.” The Xiao Pinqing chicken carves the meter/rice nod, this is so-called heroes think alike. Said: I issue Sis Shao the script now, Sis Shao issues Sis Xi to have a look. I believe that this role words certainly unusual losing face/showing off that is played by Sis Xi.” “对对对,我也是这么认为的。”肖品青小鸡琢米般的点头,这就是所谓的英雄所见略同吧。说道:“我现在就把剧本发给韶姐,韶姐发给溪姐看看。我相信这个角色由溪姐来饰演的话一定会非常的出彩。” Although the script is unearthed by Xiao Pinqing, if played female protagonist by company topest artist Kong Xi, the influence is bigger, the result is better, is easier becomes explodes the funds. If in these two three or 18 up-and-comers by company plays, even if there is a good book, may not make that big influence. 虽然剧本是由肖品青挖掘出来的,但是倘若由公司最顶尖的艺人孔溪来饰演女主角的话,想必影响力更大,成绩更好,也更容易成为爆款。若是由公司里面的那些二线三线或者十八线新人来饰演的话,就算有好的本子,也不一定能够制造出那么大的影响力。 The script can the achievement artist, the artist also same can an achievement good script. For example «Farewell to My Concubine». 剧本能够成就艺人,艺人也同样的能够成就一部好的剧本。譬如《霸王别姬》。 Sends.” Wang Shao said. My this goes to and Kong Xi chats this book.” “发过来吧。”王韶说道。“我这就去和孔溪聊聊这个本子。” But Sis Shao...... this book has not purchased, feared that is......” “可是韶姐……这个本子还没有采购回来,怕是……” „It is not in the way. First issues Kong Xi to have a look. If Kong Xi likes, in any event you must purchase to me the book.” The Wang Shao tone changes is severe. Also, I may reach an agreement with you, if this book had a liking for by Kong Xi, your Literature Division may be unable to give other artist.” “不碍事。先发给孔溪看看。如果孔溪喜欢的话,无论如何你们都要把本子给我采购回来。”王韶的语气变的严厉起来。“还有,我可和你们说好了啊,这个本子若是被孔溪看上了,你们文学部可就不能给别的艺人了。” Hears the Wang Shao words tightly, several person cannot help but hearts of literary group fiercely one. 听到王韶的话,文学组的几个人不由得心脏猛地一紧。 Now the copyright still in others hand, who knows that can certainly buy? 现在版权还在别人手里呢,谁知道能不能一定买回来? Also, bought even, Literature Division can decide that this book did give which " master " or " elder sister " plays? Although Kong Xi is our Dongzheng elder sister, but another crest of wave vigor, is deep above high-level liking. If she mentioned by name to snatch, their these unimportant people can be the lord? 再说,就算买回来了,文学部能够决定这个本子到底给哪位「爷」或者「姐」饰演?孔溪虽然是咱们东正一姐,但是另外一位风头正劲,又深得上面高层的喜欢。她若是点名要抢,他们这些小人物又能够作得了主? After Wang Shao attains « Aircraft commander Mister " script turns around to leave, Xiao Pinqing and many colleagues look at each other one, makes noise saying: My this gave the author to telephone...... not to make him sell to other families/home the book.” 等到王韶拿到《机长先生》的剧本转身离开后,肖品青和众多同事对视一眼,出声说道:“我这就去给作者打电话……千万不能让他把本子卖给其它家了。” Before he rushes to the computer, opens the mail, discovered that this author is extremely willful, the contact method has not stayed behind unexpectedly. 当他冲到电脑前打开邮件的时候,才发现这个作者极其任性,竟然连个联系方式都没有留下。 Xiao Pinqing is resigned-looking, must send a mail to the author, the sincere in words hope can chat with the author surface. 肖品青一脸无奈,只得给作者发过去一封邮件,言辞恳切的希望能够和作者面聊。
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