Dongzheng Media. Literature Division.东正传媒。文学部。Xiao Pinqingis a Literature Divisionscreenwriter, every daymustbe responsible forverifyinga lot ofmanuscripts.肖品青是文学部的一名编剧,每天都要负责审核大量的稿件。Thesemanuscriptsmainlyhavethreeorigins: First, the Literature Divisioninternalpolish, according to the market quotation, abovegives a storysubject, the followingscreenwritercreatesaccording to the storynuclear. Second, the screenwriters of somelong-term collaborationssend, naturally, thesescreenwritersbecome famousfor a long time, the quantityare not many, dragging the manuscriptto be serious, but the qualityis extremely considerable. Alsois the keyfollowing closelyobject in company. The thirdchannelissomeliteraryamateurssendsthrough the contributionmailbox of company, receiving the manuscriptquantityis big, butmajorityare the wastemanuscripts, is hardto use.
这些稿件主要有三个来源:一是文学部内部打磨的,根据市场行情,上面给一个故事主题,下面的编剧根据故事核来进行创作。二是一些长期合作的编剧发来的,当然,这些编剧成名已久,数量不多,拖稿严重,但是质量极其可观。也是公司的重点盯梢对象。第三个渠道则是一些文学爱好者通过公司的投稿邮箱发过来的,收稿量大,但是大多数都是废稿,难以使用。
The Xiao Pinqingroutineopeningcompanyreceives the manuscriptmailbox, looks atthatseveral-pagenewestmail, rubbed the somewhatbittereye, vanishedbigsteaming hotcoffee, put intoduringthisarduousworkagain.肖品青习惯性的打开公司收稿邮箱,看着那长达几页的最新邮件,揉了揉有些酸涩的眼睛,泯了一大口热气腾腾的咖啡,再一次投入到了这繁重的工作之中。Reallydid not have the script of meansuse, Xiao Pinqingto duplicate the goodofficialreplygluedirectlyin the past, thenclicked on the transmission.
实在没办法使用的剧本,肖品青直接将复制好的官方回复粘贴过去,然后点击发送。
The manuscript that needsto revise, hewill write the correctionsinbehind, waits for the opposite partyto send in the brand-newmanuscriptagain.
需要修改的稿件,他会在后面写出修改意见,等待对方再次发来全新稿件。
If the creativity, character and storyveryprominentmanuscript, Xiao Pinqingwill be prudent, the Literature Divisioninteriorwill hold a panel meeting, ifthinks that thisscripthas the photographyvalue, thencontactswith the authorby the copyrightsectionthat side, conducts the discussion and purchase of copyright.
倘若是创意、人物以及故事都非常突出的稿件,肖品青会慎重起来,文学部内部会召开一个小组讨论会,如果一致认为这个剧本有拍摄价值,便由版权部那边与作者联系,进行版权的洽谈和采购。Althoughhas the preparation, butmostdraftsare rotten to the core, the officialreply that duplicatessettles.
虽然早就有了心理准备,但是大多数稿子还是糟糕透顶,一封复制过来的官方回复来了事。«Aircraft commanderMister», seesthisname, Xiao Pinqingcannot help buthasto plantat present a brightfeeling.
《机长先生》,看到这个名字,肖品青不由得有种眼前一亮的感觉。
A successfulscript, firstshouldhave a name of brighteye.
一部成功的剧本,首先应该有一个亮眼的名字。Yougive«Wild flower»«Did not say»«Brook»and so on namecasually, was very difficultto hold the eyeball of readerandaudience. As the matter stands, evenyourcontentis good, is still very difficultto obtain the approval in marketin the earlier period.
你随便取一个《野花》《不好说》《溪流》之类的名字,很难抓住读者和观众的眼球。这样一来,就算你内容不错,也很难在前期就获得市场上的认可。Naturally, yourcontentoutstandingtogoing against heaven's willwords, thatregards as another matter. For example«MucheLandau», firstname that watchesthismovie, youknow that whatmeaningitis? Whatcontentwantsto express?
当然,你的内容优秀到逆天的话,那就另当别论。譬如《穆赫兰道》,第一眼看到这部电影的名字,你知道它是什么意思吗?想要表达什么内容?«Godfather»«Steel and ironHero»«SpiderHero», thesename can knowitssubject and storycontent.
《教父》《钢铁侠》《蜘蛛侠》,这些名字一眼就能够让人知道它的主题和故事内容。Obviously, thisis a book that writes the aircraft commander, istheme that in the marketcomparesto be popular.
显然,这是一部写机长的本子,是市场上比较吃香的题材。
The Xiao Pinqingsomewhatexcitedpoint the documents, thenstartedto look.肖品青有些激动的点开文档,然后开始看了起来。
A presentgoes, could not pull outagain.
一眼下去,就再也拔不出来了。Bynoontime for the lunch, Xiao Pinqingrefused the lunch of colleagueto invite, the cell phoneorderedduckbloodfanssoupto appease hunger.
到了中午的午饭时间,肖品青拒绝了同事的午饭邀约,手机下单了一份鸭血粉丝汤充饥。Ateseverallunchessimply, Xiao Pinqingplaced«Aircraft commanderMister»on the mindagainthisscript.
简单的吃了几口午饭,肖品青再一次将心神重新放在《机长先生》这个剧本上面。Thislooksisonein the afternoon, got off workalsonotto detectuntil the company.
这一看又是一下午,直到公司下班了也毫无察觉。
The companyhasto work overtimeluckily the culture, especiallytheirLiterature Division, working overtimecatches up with the manuscriptsimplyis the potluck.
幸好公司有加班文化,特别是他们文学部,加班赶稿简直是家常便饭。Xiao Pinqingsent an informationin the group discussiongroup, requestgroupeveryonemetto the conference room.肖品青在小组讨论群里发了一条信息,要求小组所有人到会议室开会。Meanwhile, Xiao Pinqing « Aircraft commanderMister " scriptsent to the smallcohort, understands the time of scriptto everyone.
于此同时,肖品青将《机长先生》的剧本发到了小组群里,给每个人一些了解剧本的时间。„Hū......”
“呼……”Xiao Pinqinglongbreathed out the tone, thought,sees a goodbookfinally. If the literarygroupverifiesto pass, thatwasownwork achievements-肖品青长长的嘘了口气,心想,总算是看到一个不错的本子了。如果文学组这边审核通过的话,那就是自己的工作业绩了-Inconference room, after the groupsevenmembersarrive in fullcompletely, Xiao Pinqingdeclared meeting open.
会议室里,等到小组七名成员全部到齐之后,肖品青宣布会议开始。„Did Isend tobook«Aircraft commanderMister in»smallcohort everyone has looked?”Xiao Pinqingaskedwith a smile.
“我发到小组群里的本子《机长先生》大家都看过了吗?”肖品青笑着问道。„Has looked.”Whatfirstsaidwasbig sisterSunLi, script that shewill print in hand, made noise saying: „Styleis immature, but the mode of writingis very novel, the storyline and sentimentalline are very good.”
“看过了。”最先接话的是老大姐孙梨,她将打印出来的剧本拿在手里,出声说道:“文笔稚嫩,但是写法很新颖,故事线和感情线都很不错。”„Ithought that the storycontentwas insufficient, was too simpler, was hardto support the demands of dozensvolumes of soap operassaying.”
“我觉得故事内容不够,讲的太简单了些,难以支撑几十集电视剧的需求量。”„Writes the story of aircraft commander, so long asis nottoorotten, Ithought that wecanuse. The storyquantityare few, wefilledtowardinsidebecome.”-
“写机长的故事,只要不是太烂,我觉得我们都可以用。故事量少,咱们往里面填补就成了。”-Wheneveryonespoke, calm of Xiao Pinqing on the heart, heknows,thisbookshouldbe ableto verifyto pass.
等到所有人都发言完毕,肖品青就心中大定,他知道,这个本子应该是可以审核通过了。„Mylordpushes«Aircraft commanderMister», mainlyhas the reasons in threeaspects. First, selected topic. Such that just likeTeacherCai said that so long aswrites the story of aircraft commander, wecanuse. After all, were too manyat the film and televisionplay of thisdomainfire. Hollywood«Fighting spiritLingyun», our«Rushes toClouds»has the goodperformance. Onegroup of handsome fellowbeautiful womenput on the aircraft commanderto take and stewardessclothing/taking, walkingis a prettysceneryline. Encircles the powderforourartistsvery mucheasily.”
“我之所以主推《机长先生》,主要有三个方面的原因。第一,选题。正如蔡老师所说的那样,只要是写机长的故事,咱们都可以用上。毕竟,在这个领域大火的影视剧太多了。无论是好莱坞的《斗志凌云》,还是我们的《冲上云霄》都有着不俗的表现。一群帅哥美女穿上机长服和空姐服,走出去就是一道靓丽的风景线。很容易为我们的艺人圈粉。”„Second, storyandemotion. Just likeTeacherSunsaida moment ago,canlook, the style of authorslightlyobviouslyimmature, moreovermanyplaceprocessinginsufficientclearmature. However, thisinsteadisitshighlightis not a shortcoming. Becauseithas not receivedin the market the influence of mainstreamrepertoire, hewrote the newplotto come out.”
“第二,故事和情感。正如孙老师刚才所说,可以看出来,作者的文笔稍显稚嫩,而且很多地方处理的不够圆润成熟。但是,这反而是它的亮点不是缺点。因为它没有受到市场上主流套路的影响,他写出了新鲜的情节出来。”„Third, substitutes the feeling. Weare the screenwriter, knowsin the market the characters of mostplaysto establishnowbad. Notenoughstory and emotionsupportthisrole, hislivingstandinginourat present. Eitherbigentire, eitherentirely whitesweet. Thisinsidecharacterhas the merit, naturallyalsohas the flaw. For examplefemale protagonist, namelygood, broker. But, sheinlittlechange, littlebecomesmustbe more outstanding. After somepeoplethinkis outstanding, theseshortcomingsdo not have. «Aircraft commanderMister»does not process, female protagonistchangesis more outstanding, butdesirealsointense. But, thatis not negative, butis the intenseenterprise. Shecanhelp itself and actorbecomematurer. Shehas been pursuing a comfort margin, is relentlessleavesit. Let the personhave the anticipationfeelingvery much.”
“第三,代入感。我们都是做编剧的,都知道现在市场上大部份剧的人物设定都非常的糟糕。没有足够的故事和情感来支撑起这个角色,将他活生生的立在我们的眼前。要么高大全,要么傻白甜。这里面的人物有优点,当然也有缺陷。譬如女主角,即善良,又市侩。可是,她在一点点的改变,一点点的变得更优秀。有人以为优秀之后,那些缺点就没有了。《机长先生》不是这么处理的,女主角变的更加优秀,但是欲望也更加的强烈。可是,那不是负面的,而是强烈的进取心。她能够帮助自己和男主角变得更加成熟。她一直在追逐一个舒适区,然后又毫不留情的离开它。让人很有期待感。”Xiao Pinqingobserves the situation the people, said: „Therefore, mysuggestionispurchases«Aircraft commanderMister»thiscopyright. Opinion?”肖品青环视众人,说道:“所以,我的建议是采购《机长先生》这个版权。各位的意见呢?”„Agreement.”
“同意。”„Canpurchase.”
“可以采购。”„Ialsofeelgood.”-
“我也觉得挺好的。”-Unanimously passes-
全票通过-Forthisscriptwrites the advantage analysisto reportto«Aircraft commanderMister»,is goodto submitto makethem conduct the copyrightpurchaseto the copyrightsection, Xiao Pinqingworks overtimein the evening the Ling Chenfivepoints.
为了给《机长先生》这个剧本写优势分析报告,好提交给给版权部让他们进行版权采购,肖品青当晚加班到凌晨五点。
The secondzenithchicken coopwas just rushing to the company, Kong XimanagerWang Shaocaught up.
第二天顶着鸡窝头刚刚赶到公司,孔溪的经纪人王韶就赶了过来。Wang Shaowas the senioremployee in company, moreoverin the handhad a Kong Xisuchtrump card, naturallyreceived the respectandwelcome of peopletoLiterature Division.王韶本来就是公司的老员工了,而且手上有孔溪这样一张王牌,到了文学部自然受到众人的尊重和欢迎。„Does Sis Shao, howhave free timetodayourcopyrightsection?”
“韶姐,今天怎么有空到我们版权部?”„Whatcopyright did Sis Shaosettle on? Yousaidone, whichuswantsto givewhich......”
“韶姐是不是看中什么版权了?你说一声,要哪个我们给哪个……”„Sis Shao, whatbook does Sis Xiwant? Wewere compelledbyabovequicklyinsanely. Abovesaid that Sis Xiis not willingto receive an engagement, is the book that becausewelook foris not good, is the work of ourLiterature Divisionhas not completed.”-
“韶姐,溪姐到底要什么样的本子啊?我们都快被上面逼疯了。上面说溪姐不愿意接戏,是因为我们找的本子不行,是我们文学部的工作没有做好。”-Wang Shaois smilingandeveryone11greets, standssaidin the crowds: „Mythistime, for the Kong Xinew operascript.”王韶微笑着和大家一一打了招呼,站在人群中间说道:“我这次来,就是为了孔溪的新剧剧本。”„Ah?”“啊?”
The peoplecall out in alarmmake noise.
众人惊呼出声。„Did Sis Xihave the book of likingfinally? Thank God, the Godenlarged ones vision......”
“溪姐终于有喜欢的本子了?谢天谢地,老天爷开眼了……”„WhichbookiscanbyourSis Xihaving a liking for? WasIsentpast«TalentDoctor»yesterday?”
“到底是哪个本子能被咱们溪姐给看上?是我昨天发过去的《天才医生》吗?”„Was then good, Literature Divisioncangasp for breathfinally......”-
“这下好了,文学部终于可以喘口气了……”-
The line of sight of Wang Shaoshifted the body of Xiao Pinqing, saidwith a smile: „Is blue, heard that youdid find a bookto be called«Aircraft commanderMister»?”王韶的视线转移到了肖品青的身上,笑着说道:“品青,听说你们找到了一个本子叫做《机长先生》?”„Right.” The Xiao Pinqingspiritshakes. Said: „Sis Shao, our does Sis Xiwantto patthis?”
“对的。”肖品青精神为之一震。说道:“韶姐,咱们溪姐想拍这个?”Wang Shaonods, said: „Kong Xiis interestedinaircraft commanderliterature stylevery much, shehas wantedto play a femaleaircraft commander...... Ialsoto think that thisroleis good, good that ifcanplay . Moreover the roleenoughasks forhappily, the femaleaircraft commander who a charmingaircraft commandertakesattracts the powdervery much. The malepowderfemalepowder, shouldlikesuchKong Xi.”王韶点了点头,说道:“孔溪对机长这个体裁很感兴趣,她一直想演一个女机长……我也觉得这个角色蛮好的,如果能够饰演的好,而且角色足够讨喜的话,一身帅气机长服的女机长是很吸粉的。无论是男粉还是女粉,应该都会喜欢这样的孔溪。”„Right, Ialsothink.” The Xiao Pinqingchickencarves the meter/ricenod, thisisso-calledheroes think alike. Said: „IissueSis Shao the scriptnow, Sis ShaoissuesSis Xito have a look. Ibelieve that thisrolewordscertainlyunusuallosing face/showing off that is playedbySis Xi.”
“对对对,我也是这么认为的。”肖品青小鸡琢米般的点头,这就是所谓的英雄所见略同吧。说道:“我现在就把剧本发给韶姐,韶姐发给溪姐看看。我相信这个角色由溪姐来饰演的话一定会非常的出彩。”Although the scriptis unearthedbyXiao Pinqing, if playedfemale protagonistbycompanytopestartistKong Xi, the influenceis bigger, the resultis better, is easierbecomesexplodes the funds. Ifinthesetwothreeor18up-and-comersbycompanyplays, even ifthere is a goodbook, may notmakethatbiginfluence.
虽然剧本是由肖品青挖掘出来的,但是倘若由公司最顶尖的艺人孔溪来饰演女主角的话,想必影响力更大,成绩更好,也更容易成为爆款。若是由公司里面的那些二线三线或者十八线新人来饰演的话,就算有好的本子,也不一定能够制造出那么大的影响力。
The scriptcan the achievementartist, the artistalsosamecan an achievementgoodscript. For example«Farewell to My Concubine».
剧本能够成就艺人,艺人也同样的能够成就一部好的剧本。譬如《霸王别姬》。„Sends.”Wang Shaosaid. „Mythisgoes toandKong Xichatsthisbook.”
“发过来吧。”王韶说道。“我这就去和孔溪聊聊这个本子。”„ButSis Shao...... thisbookhas not purchased, feared that is......”
“可是韶姐……这个本子还没有采购回来,怕是……”„It is not in the way. FirstissuesKong Xito have a look. IfKong Xilikes, in any eventyoumustpurchasetome the book.” The Wang Shaotonechangesis severe. „Also, Imayreach an agreementwithyou, ifthisbookhad a liking forbyKong Xi, yourLiterature Division may be unable to giveotherartist.”
“不碍事。先发给孔溪看看。如果孔溪喜欢的话,无论如何你们都要把本子给我采购回来。”王韶的语气变的严厉起来。“还有,我可和你们说好了啊,这个本子若是被孔溪看上了,你们文学部可就不能给别的艺人了。”Hears the Wang Shaowordstightly, several personcannot help buthearts of literarygroupfiercelyone.
听到王韶的话,文学组的几个人不由得心脏猛地一紧。Now the copyrightstillinothershand, whoknows that cancertainlybuy?
现在版权还在别人手里呢,谁知道能不能一定买回来?Also, boughteven, Literature Divisioncandecide that thisbookdid givewhich " master " or " elder sister " plays? AlthoughKong Xiis our Dongzhengelder sister, butanothercrest of wavevigor, is deepabovehigh-levelliking. Ifshementioned by name to snatch, theirtheseunimportant peoplecanbe the lord?
再说,就算买回来了,文学部能够决定这个本子到底给哪位「爷」或者「姐」饰演?孔溪虽然是咱们东正一姐,但是另外一位风头正劲,又深得上面高层的喜欢。她若是点名要抢,他们这些小人物又能够作得了主?
After Wang Shaoattains « Aircraft commanderMister " scriptturns aroundto leave, Xiao Pinqing and manycolleagueslook at each otherone, makes noise saying: „Mythisgave the authorto telephone...... not to makehimsell tootherfamilies/home the book.”
等到王韶拿到《机长先生》的剧本转身离开后,肖品青和众多同事对视一眼,出声说道:“我这就去给作者打电话……千万不能让他把本子卖给其它家了。”
Before herushes to the computer, opens the mail, discovered that thisauthoris extremely willful, the contact methodhas not stayed behindunexpectedly.
当他冲到电脑前打开邮件的时候,才发现这个作者极其任性,竟然连个联系方式都没有留下。Xiao Pinqingis resigned-looking, mustsend a mailto the author, the sincere in wordshopecanchatwith the authorsurface.肖品青一脸无奈,只得给作者发过去一封邮件,言辞恳切的希望能够和作者面聊。
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