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Plot that Chapter 86 vermilion Yanan designs 第86章朱雅男设计的剧情 Sun Sūn had an accident...... turned into the vegetable. 孙荪出事了……变成了植物人。 Qin An...... is Sun Sūn prayed in the crossroad drawing violin. 秦安在路口拉小提琴……为孙荪祈祷。 Qin An in relaxing , a fearful and apprehensive pain subsides, hid at heart, already hid the trace under the scabs early, did not have the means to endure Ye Zhulan to treat as the simple story to raise. 秦安在松了一口气之后,一阵心惊肉跳的痛平息下来,隐藏在心里边,早已经在伤疤下隐藏了痕迹,却没有办法忍受叶竹澜当做简简单单的故事提起来。 Luckily, is not such that think, is not the same story. 幸好,不是自己想的那样,不是一样的故事。 „Really unlucky, how I was arranged the vegetable, disliked.” Sun Sūn already many times raised the protest to Ye Zhulan, because the vegetable lives cannot take care of oneself, did that have the means to make itself clean? This is Sun Sūn is intolerable. “真倒霉,我怎么被安排成植物人了,讨厌死了。”孙荪已经很多次向叶竹澜提出了抗议,因为植物人生活不能自理,那不是没有办法让自己干干净净了？这是孙荪不能容忍的。 „I am quite also miserable, I foster the child to grow up poor alone, can only visit him from afar.” Ye Zhulan sighs, is digging the small mouth pitifully, thought that own story was too simply perfect, so long as is not truly own love, compiles to cry the affected story, manages his, how the patho how arranges. “我也好惨的,我孤苦无依地独自抚养小孩子长大,只能远远地看着他。”叶竹澜叹了一口气,可怜巴巴地撅着小嘴,觉得自己的故事简直太完美了,只要不是真正属于自己的爱情,编造出来让人哭哭啼啼地感动的故事,管他的呢,怎么悲情怎么编。 „What story this is, can't you write to select? Finally three people are happy, doesn't live happily together good?” Qin An does not want to inquire that what result Ye Zhulan arranged to him, „in fairy tale finally not this?” “这是什么故事,你就不能写点好的？最后三个人幸幸福福,开开心心地一起生活不行？”秦安都不想去打听叶竹澜给他安排了个什么结局,“童话故事里最后不都这样吗？” „Is because our present already are happy, happy......” Ye Zhulan somewhat embarrassed blushing, the loves of three people were happy, happily, was too bad, „, therefore story or was the same, I thought that our stories wrote also no one to believe that because they do not know, cannot understand, wrote such story, quite fun...... like Sun Sūn, saw that the drama of complete result had not felt, looked the bitterness play looked with great interest.” “就是因为我们现在已经幸幸福福,开开心心的了……”叶竹澜有些不好意思的脸红,三个人的恋爱还幸幸福福,开开心心,是不是太坏了点啊,“所以故事才要不一样啊,我觉得我们的故事写出来也没有人信,因为他们不知道,不能理解啊,还是写这样的故事,比较好玩……就像孙荪,看到圆满结局的爱情剧都没有感觉,看苦情剧就看的津津有味。” „Really does not know how you think, this because of own happiness, looks others are unhappy, therefore oneself are happier? You two rather were also too bad.” Qin An said reluctantly, this he is actually clear, what the patho play is main is easy to write, delight that therefore the screenwriters also arrange. “真不知道你们怎么想的,难道这就是因为自己的幸福,看着别人不幸福,所以自己更幸福？你们两个也未免太坏了点。”秦安无奈地说道,这个他倒是明白,悲情剧最主要的是容易写,所以编剧们也编的不亦乐乎。 The patho play is easier than to write other scripts, how the patho play hardly needs to use the brain, the cancer, goes off track, third party, triangle love, four corner/horn love, wicked mother-in-law, abnormal dreadful male, package *...... these at sixes and sevens matters on one after another on line, even does not need too many logic. 悲情剧远比其他剧本容易写,悲情剧几乎不需要怎么用脑子,癌症啊,出轨啊,第三者啊,三角恋啊,四角恋啊,恶婆婆啊,变态猥琐男啊,包*啊……这些乱七八糟的事儿轮番上就行,甚至不需要太多逻辑。 This world is this, the happy matter needs the logic, needs to make people think the nature, cannot be too towering, where need may write tragedy, was thundered to deduct the vegetable by the day, but can also intertwine to defend various wife psychology of vegetable to intertwine. 这个世界就是这样,喜事儿需要逻辑,需要让人觉得自然,不能太突兀,可写悲剧哪里需要啊,就是被天打雷劈成了植物人,还能纠结出守着植物人的妻子各种心理纠结出来。 Writing the comedy is difficult, writes the script and novel that alternate between joy and grief is more difficult, Qin An thought actually the Ye Zhulan primary attempt creates, found the shortcut, after all she had no life story, could not write the too complex thing, to pile toward the leads the pitiful matter, at all was not the technology lives, simple. 写喜剧难,写悲喜交加的剧本和小说更难,秦安倒是觉得叶竹澜初次尝试创作,算是找到了捷径,毕竟她没有什么人生阅历,写不出太复杂的东西,可把悲惨的事儿往主角们身上堆,根本不是什么技术活,简单的很。 „Writes playing in any case...... my cartoon, if really can publish, sells big, then reorganizes the novel, the soap opera, the movie, making you develop......” Ye Zhulan more to be happier, just started to work with any with the person of enterprise is the same, looked forward to the future infinitely. “反正是写着玩的……我的漫画要是真的能出版,最好大卖,然后改编成小说,电视剧,电影,让你们来演……”叶竹澜越想越开心,和任何一个刚刚开始工作和事业的人一样,对前途无限憧憬。 „I do not develop, your story is half real , half fake, developed shamed individual.” Sun Sūn shakes the head again and again, an interest of performance does not have. “我可不演,你那个故事半真半假的,演的羞死个人了。”孙荪连连摇头,表现的一点兴趣也没有。 „How to be half real , half fake?” Qin An asked curiously. “怎么是半真半假了？”秦安好奇地问道。 „Ye Zhulan felt, if our three people...... she were said that our three person exceptional cases, according to her story development, were the normal situation......, therefore she thought it was necessary to come out this story picture, good to remind us to treasure the present happiness.” Sun Sūn lowers the head, the sound is very light, is somewhat embarrassed, after all is such three people openly was discussing that the sentimental matter, felt like two people are in love together, said that own happiness is the normal nature, three people said together, appearance that approves together, makes Sun Sūn somewhat shy. “叶竹澜觉得,如果我们三个人……她是说我们三个人特例,按照她的故事发展,才是正常的情况……所以她觉得有必要把这个故事画出来,好来提醒我们要珍惜现在的幸福。”孙荪低着头,声音很轻,有些难为情,毕竟是这样三个人在一起公开地讨论感情的事情,心里边还是觉得两个人在一起谈恋爱,说自己的幸福才是正常自然的,三个人一起说,一起认同的模样,还是让孙荪有些扭捏。 „What is your story?” Qin An wants to know what in the small head of Ye Zhulan actually thinks is anything, or such story can also express certain consciousness that she hides. “那你的故事到底是什么样的？”秦安很想知道叶竹澜的小脑袋里到底想的是什么,或者这样的故事也能够表达出她心里边潜藏的某些意识。 „I original and I had said according to you many things that the story of dream, you said afterward unified...... you to listen to me saying that my story may grow, the cartoon picture came out to feel that will be very good.” Because the Ye Zhulan story used Qin An and Sun Sūn name, said very much embarrassed to others listens, but oneself think the story came out, how didn't tell others to listen to bear? “我就是根据你原来和我说过的梦的故事,还有你后来说的许多事情结合起来啊……你听我说啊,我这个故事可长了,漫画画出来感觉会很不错的。”叶竹澜的故事因为用了秦安和孙荪的名字,很不好意思去讲给其他人听,可是自己想了故事出来,不告诉别人听怎么受得了？ „My story, is the dream that you original and I said that in the story from the beginning is also a Qin An and Qin An liangs person, these two people naturally were not you and I, two people but who Qin An and Ye Zhulan also liked very much, the Qin An result was very good, he quite fierce, 16 years old enrolled the college entrance examination, the score was higher than Peking University, how many but also received the enrollment notice of international well-known colleges and universities, but he did not have, he a north elementary school, why? Because Ye Zhulan goes is that belongs to the university of electric power department, the Ye Zhulan father is the official of electricity authority, compared with my father's officer mostly, but Ye Zhulan actually thinks what Qin An tests is Southern-Central Industrial University, what Ye Zhulan report is Southern-Central Industrial University.” “我的故事啊,就是你原来和我说的梦,故事里一开始呢也是秦安个人,这两个人当然不是你和我了,不过秦安和叶竹澜也是很喜欢的两个人,秦安的成绩很好,他啊好厉害的,十六岁就参加了高考,分数比北大还高,还收到了几所国际名校的录取通知,可是他没有去,他去了北方一个小学校,为什么呢？因为叶竹澜去的就是那个直属于电力部的大学,叶竹澜的爸爸是电力部门的官员,比我爸的官大多了,可是叶竹澜却以为秦安考的是中南工业大学,叶竹澜报的是中南工大。” „Ye Zhulan is big in the labor, has regarded her boyfriend Qin An, until one day, her participates in the hobby of fellow student association to see that Qin An and Sun Sūn kiss, knows that original Sun Sūn has liked Qin An very much, with testing the northern that school, Qin An and Sun Sūn are 3 rd classmates, is a person in place, the strange place, two people are naturally developing the sentiment.” “叶竹澜在工大,一直把秦安当成她的男朋友,直到有一天,她去参加同学会的嗜好看到秦安和孙荪接吻,才知道原来孙荪一直很喜欢秦安,跟着考去了北方的那所学校,秦安和孙荪是初三的同桌啊,又是一个地方的人,在陌生的地方,两个人就自然地发展出了感情。” Qin An fluctuating, is very at heart difficult to understand how Ye Zhulan will find out such a specious story. 秦安心里边一阵起伏,很难理解叶竹澜怎么会想出这样一个似是而非的故事来。 „Ye Zhulan is very sad is very disappointed, has not looked for Qin An and Sun Sūn again, since then with Qin An, Sun Sūn separated. Qin An and Sun Sūn afterward actually not in the same place, because Qin An could not forget that Ye Zhulan, but Sun Sūn thought that Qin An has not forgotten Ye Zhulan, she will not marry Qin An...... afterward Tang Meilai, robbed from Sun Sūn Qin An, Sun Sūn rudely awakened at this time, sad under became the vegetable......” “叶竹澜很伤心很失望,没有再去找秦安和孙荪,从此和秦安,孙荪分开了。秦安和孙荪后来却也没有在一起,因为秦安一直忘记不了叶竹澜,而孙荪觉得秦安没有忘记叶竹澜,她就不会嫁给秦安……后来唐媚来了,把秦安从孙荪身边抢走了,孙荪这时候才后悔莫及,伤心之下成了植物人……” Ye Zhulan more said that vigorously, at the same time makes an effort to pay attention to Qin An and Sun Sūn expression. 叶竹澜越说越起劲了,一边使劲地留意着秦安和孙荪的表情。 „Wait...... your what at sixes and sevens story, how Tang charm also?” Qin An can determine now, this story truly, but Ye Zhulan arranges carelessly. “等等……你这什么乱七八糟的故事,怎么唐媚还出来了？”秦安现在可以确定了,这个故事确实,只是叶竹澜胡乱编的。 „Is unamusing?” Ye Zhulan the head, is somewhat looking at Qin An and Sun Sūn sadly. “不好玩吗？”叶竹澜偏着头,有些伤心地看着秦安和孙荪。 Qin An and Sun Sūn shake the head together. 秦安和孙荪一起摇头。 „Isn't touching?” Ye Zhulan has not lost heart. “不感人吗？”叶竹澜还不死心。 Qin An and Sun Sūn shake the head, particularly Sun Sūn, is discontented, how she is possibly defeated, if Ye Zhulan robbed Qin An, she thought that can also accept, why may be Tang charm, oneself first know Qin An, cannot detain Qin An, but also was robbed by Tang charm, making Tang Meidang small three, who, was Tang charm not. 秦安和孙荪还是摇头,尤其是孙荪,更是不满,她怎么可能这么失败啊,要是叶竹澜抢走了秦安,她觉得还可以接受,可凭什么是唐媚啊,自己先认识秦安,都留不住秦安,还被唐媚抢走了,让唐媚当了小三了,谁都可以,就是唐媚不可以。 „You change the story, does not want Tang charm that was very touching, the scene of vegetable model you want, I also develop to you.” Sun Sūn is seducing Ye Zhulan. “你改改故事,不要唐媚的那一段,就很感人了,你要的植物人模特的场景,我也给你演出来。”孙荪诱惑着叶竹澜。 „I thought that best writes we three present stories.” The Ye Zhulan story makes Qin An be somewhat anxious. “我觉得最好是写我们三个现在的故事。”叶竹澜的故事让秦安还是有些心神不定。 „Does not want...... me not to know that our three people like the present, is the ghosts who you do, how you deceive the same place our two, how am I clear? Coming out how to write. According to my story, I can arrange casually, Qin An you in story are not in any case fierce, is stupider than me.” Ye Zhulan happily is insisting, drawing the cartoon is fun, Qin An and Sun Sūn are operated by her. “才不要……我都不知道我们三个人怎么会像现在这样,都是你搞的鬼,你到底怎么把我们两个骗到一起的,我怎么明白？怎么写的出来。按照我的故事,我就可以随便编了,反正故事里的秦安没有你厉害,比我还笨。”叶竹澜得意地坚持着,画漫画就是好玩,秦安和孙荪都由她来操作。 „Is...... is...... you can arrange casually, the story that you make up is silly, inside everyone is silly, vermilion Yanan helped you change changing, your original story do you feel all right with Qin An now said?” Sun Sūn has naturally listened to another edition of Ye Zhulan story, raised does not want to raise, crossed each family same plot with the child completely. “是……是……你可以随便编,你编出来的故事傻乎乎的,里边的每一个人都傻乎乎的,要不是朱雅男帮你改了改,你原来的故事你现在好意思和秦安说？”孙荪自然是听过了叶竹澜故事的另外一个版本了,提都不想提,完全是和小孩子过家家一样的剧情。 „Said did not tell Qin An...... plot, although was the vermilion Ya male lord creates, but the picture was I draws, the detail also wanted me to enrich, Teacher summer cloud said, the detail was to decide the key of story success or failure.” Ye Zhulan somewhat said embarrassed. “都说了不告诉秦安的嘛……剧情虽然是朱雅男主创,可画还是我画,细节还要我丰富的,夏云老师说,细节才是决定故事成败的关键。”叶竹澜有些不好意思地说道。 „vermilion Yanan? Is this story she wants to come out for the lord?” The Qin An whole body trembles, recalled after noon has the dinner, vermilion Yanan and said goodbye alone. “朱雅男？这个故事是她为主想出来的？”秦安浑身一颤,回想起中午吃晚饭后,朱雅男和自己单独告别。 „Yes, actually I think is not so splendid......” Ye Zhulan to say embarrassed, „how vermilion Yanan helps me analyze arranges quite reasonably, then me according to her analysis, writes the plot, she felt to satisfy, was similar, whom I decided...... to make a Sun Sūn interest not have probably, otherwise I will not write the plot of Sun Sūn vegetable, now she blames me not to write her result.” “是啊,其实我想的没有这么精彩啦……”叶竹澜不好意思地说道,“朱雅男只是帮我分析怎么编比较合理,然后我根据她的分析,编出剧情,她觉得满意了,差不多了,我才定下来……谁让孙荪好像一点兴趣也没有,要不然我也不会写孙荪植物人的剧情啊,现在她又怪我没有把她的结局写好。” Qin An more wants to feel less right, the story and his experience that although vermilion Yanan makes up have not as if related truly, there are too different places, so long as has the little same place, will let Qin An, because vermilion Yanan unusual, but has too many strange things this little same place Lenovo. 秦安越想感觉越不对劲,尽管朱雅男编的这个故事和他的经历似乎没有真正联系,也有太多不同的地方,可是只要有一点点相同的地方,就会让秦安因为朱雅男的与众不同而把这一点点相同的地方联想出太多诡异的东西来。 Qin An and Tang charm, Sun Sūn had an accident together, a Ye Zhulan person leads the child, at least these most basic thing, does not have any mistake. 秦安和唐媚在一起了,孙荪出事了,叶竹澜一个人带着孩子,至少这些最基本的东西,没有出任何差错。 Qin An puts out the telephone, dialed to vermilion Ya groom's family. 秦安拿出电话,给朱雅男家里拨了过去。 Telephone „honk......”, „honk......” is ringing, no one meets, vermilion Yanan did not have the cell phone, Qin An to dial several, must give up, after all ate dinner to leave with Ye Zhulan Sun Sūn, vermilion Yanan and several girls came out to play in the weekend rarely, will not definitely go home immediately, where to played probably- 电话“嘟……”,“嘟……”地响着,没有人接,朱雅男也没有手机,秦安拨了几遍,只得放弃了,毕竟吃晚饭自己就和叶竹澜孙荪离开了,朱雅男和几个女孩子周末难得出来玩,肯定不会马上回家,大概是到什么地方玩去了- One, will deliver before 12 : 00, wait a bit. 还有一更,会在12点之前送上,稍等。
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