That sword, easier celestial phenomenon! 那一剑,更易了天象！ The rosy-colored clouds at dawn this inundate to well up like surging tides. 朝霞本如潮水般漫涌而出。 But in the thunder pricks in the backyard after the sharp blade, along with spraying of arc light, that ten thousand zhang (3.33 m) rosy cloud color resembles the ebb tide rapid dissipation. 但在雷霆如利刃般刺入后院之中后,伴随着弧光的喷射,那万丈霞彩又似退潮般迅速消散。 Sees only in the sky the thunder clouds to flash, the electricity glow such as the iron pole of prisoner's cage wrapped the entire Cao Residence. 只见天空中雷云闪动,电芒如囚笼的铁柱般将整个曹府都包裹了起来。 „This......” “这……” Around Cao Residence pleasure person happy does not come out now. 曹府周围的乐子人现在也乐不出来了。 They only feel depressing, as if hundred jin (0.5 kg) heavy burdens press on the waist, as if the back plowed late place last night, own waist being exhausted. 他们只觉得压抑,仿佛有百斤重担压在腰上,又似乎昨晚背犁耕了一晚的地,把自个儿的腰给累坏了。 . 啪啦。 Has the person who does not believe in evil doctrines to try to go forward one step, immediately was exploded the electric spark electricity that flashes jumped the extremely happy pure land. 有不信邪的人试图前进一步,顿时被爆闪的电火花电的跳起了极乐净土。 This pure land is also not the common fire. 这净土还不是一般的火。 From the clothes, to the pants, to the hair, was all on fire again. 从衣服,到裤子,再到头发,全都起火了。 „Help, help!” “救命,救命啊！” Bai Lian blows the one breath lightly. 白怜轻吹一口气。 The wave rippled then cancelled that flame. 水波荡漾间便抹去了那火焰。 The call for help goes, the entire Cao Residence neighbor fell into the deathly stillness extremely. 呼救声一去,整个曹府极其附近都陷入了死寂之中。 At this time no one dares close to that the shackles that was constituted by the Shenlan color electric arc. 这时候再也没有人敢靠近那由深蓝色的电弧所构成的牢笼了。 Also no one dares to retreat, they will for fear that cause other disasters. 也没有人敢就此退走,他们生怕会引发其他灾难。 But not everyone is afraid. 但并非所有人都害怕不已。 Bai Lian did not discuss that she respects at present the strength of this swordsman, does not fear him. 白怜就不谈了,她敬重眼前这个剑客的实力,可不怕他。 Her own strength is truly not enough to deal with this swordsman, but if opens the imaginary snow monarchy shape, wants to come to reverse the potential of offense and defense sufficiently. 她自己的实力确实不足以应付这个剑客,但若是开启幻雪君主形态,想来足以逆转攻守之势了。 Squatted begs this time also to lift the head in one of the street. 蹲在街边的一个乞儿此时也抬起了头。 His hair is chaotic like the chicken coop, above crawled completely the dust. But the disorderly hair and dirty face cannot cover up his pair to glitter the god eyes of light/only. 他的头发乱得像鸡窝一样,上面爬满了尘埃。但凌乱的头发以及脏兮兮的面庞掩不住他那双闪烁着神光的眼睛。 Immortals! 仙人！ The strength of immortal! 仙人的力量！ He so longs for all these. 他是如此的渴望这一切。 However at this time no one pays attention to the corner that he is. 不过此时没有人关注他所在的角落。 The center of Leize is located at this moment buys the city district Cao Residence backyard. 雷泽的中心在此刻位于沽城县曹府后院。 The swordsman vision of that suddenly arrival tranquilly and asked: „I heard that here does have the evil spirit to run amuck?” 那个突然到来的剑客目光平静地又问了一遍:“我听说这里有妖魔横行？” What the first opens the mouth is Priest horse. 第一个开口的是马道长。 He has the person of Cultivation Level after all, Cao people were about to break out of the influence of sword imposing manner. 他毕竟是有修为之人,比曹家众人更快摆脱了剑阵气势的影响。 He replied flustered: „Senior, very much so.” 他慌张地答道:“前辈,正是如此。” The swordsmen also asked: „Is that cat monster you raises?” 剑客又问:“那猫妖是你所养？” horse Daoist priest shakes the head hastily. 马道长连忙摇头。 The swordsmen then look to Bai Lian: „Is that cat monster you raises?” 剑客便看向白怜:“那猫妖是你所养？” Bai Lian appears at present immediately the new duty option. 白怜眼前顿时浮现出新的任务选项。 【Task 1: „Closes your trifling thing!”( Completion Reward: Top-Grade Spirit Artifact Yin-Yang flying immortal sword)】 【任务一:“关你屁事！”(完成奖励:上品灵器阴阳飞仙剑)】 【Task 2: „Yes!”( Completion Reward: Hard Skill + 4)】 【任务二:“是！”(完成奖励:硬功)】 【Task Three: „It is not.”( Completion Reward: Soft Skill + 1)】 【任务三:“不是。”(完成奖励:软功)】 From the reward of Task 1, at present this is a violent temper. 从任务一的奖励看得出来,眼前这位是个暴脾气。 Moreover his strength...... 而且他的实力…… The heart of Bai Lian sinks slightly. 白怜的心微微一沉。 His strength is not in the surface looks that simple. 他的实力绝不是表面上看起来那么简单。 Incarnation peak? 化身巅峰？ Perhaps he relies on the magic weapon and secret technique also to be able with an ordinary fit initial cultivator war. 或许他凭借着法宝、秘术也能与普通的合体初期修仙者一战。 Also or he grasped the most powerful move- 又或者他掌握了最强大招- Swings the person! 摇人！ Also called 【Just の 2 vs 1】 Tactic. 又称【正义の二打一】战术。 Bai Lian decided that and line and looked, she is not wanting that 4 Hard Skill now anxiously. 白怜决定且行且看,她现在也不急着要那四点硬功。 „It is not.” “不是。” The vision of swordsman stayed a while on Bai Lian much. 剑客的目光在白怜身上多停留了一会儿。 Is cultivator, the strength possibly in Peak-Stage Nascent Soul to Early-Stage Deity Transformation. 是个修仙者,实力可能在元婴巅峰到化神初期之间。 Do not be worth mentioning! 不值一提！ He then looks to the Cao people. 他便看向曹家众人。 At this time, took the lead to weep and wail as before was Young Master Cao's cousin. 这时,率先哭喊起来的依旧是曹少爷的表妹。 „This dwelling place of celestial beings senior, matter is such......” “这位仙家前辈,事情是这样的……” She sneaks Cao the cat monster, kills secretly her sister-in-law, and must work as the people surface saying that „fact that” her sister-in-law robs listens to the purple clothes swordsman. 她将猫妖潜入曹家,暗害她嫂子,并要当着众人面将她嫂子抢走的“事实”说给紫衣剑客听。 The purple clothes swordsman is without turning a hair. 紫衣剑客面不改色。 „Not is only the wild monster, when kills!” “既是野妖,当杀！” This then such as the water under winter cold deep pool- 这一声便如冬日寒潭下的水- Cool. 凉。 Passed coolly. 凉透了。 Clever his mother is cool! 贼他妈凉！ The air/Qi of withering made cold resistant ability extremely strong forest ling also shake. 肃杀之气让耐寒能力极强的林姈也抖了一下。 forest Ling knows oneself cannot flinch. 林姈知道自己不能退缩。 The powerful immortal kills people only needs a thought. 实力强大的仙人杀人只需一个念头。 If she explained that cat monster big sister might be driven to death after suffering an injustice late. 她若解释地晚了,那个猫妖大姐姐或许就要枉死了。 forest Lingqiang supported to proceed one step. 林姈强撑着往前走了一步。 „Before, the senior, this misunderstands!” “前,前辈,这都是误会！” „Misunderstanding?” “误会？” The swordsmen glanced forest Ling one eyes. 剑客瞟了林姈一眼。 forest Ling nods hastily: „That big sister is not strategic point Eldest Miss, she wants to rescue Eldest Miss.” 林姈连忙点头:“那个大姐姐并不是要害大小姐,她是想救大小姐。” The scene that her completely will see said. 她一五一十地将自己看见的场面说了出来。 This story made that swordsman lift a lower lid actually. 这个故事倒是让那个剑客抬了一下眼皮。 „Does that cat monster have nothing to do with you?” “那猫妖与你无关？” forest Ling shakes the head. 林姈摇了摇头。 The swordsmen take a broad view to look out into the distance: „That was then right, wild monster, when kills!” 剑客放眼远眺:“那便对了,野妖,当杀！” Behind him has the sword that three modeling vary. 他背后有三柄造型不一的剑。 He took out the leftmost that to carve completely white sword of cloud pattern. 他取出最左侧那柄雕满了云纹的白剑。 The sword blade shakes lightly, then makes people think that sword point in the emitting foam. 只是剑刃轻晃,便让人觉得那剑尖在喷吐白沫。 Foam to become cloud, the fairyism curls. 白沫成云,仙气袅袅。 forest Ling stared in a big way the eye immediately: „How can like this, that big sister not do the misdemeanor obviously!” 林姈顿时瞪大了眼睛:“怎么可以这样,那个大姐姐明明没有做坏事！” The swordsmen sneer saying: „Ignorant, she does not do today wickedly, tomorrow won't then do wickedly?” 剑客冷笑道:“愚昧,她今日不做恶,明日便不做恶了？” forest Ling is not convinced: „How you can believe firmly that she will do evil tomorrow?” 林姈不服气:“你怎么能确信她明日会作恶？” „How you believe firmly that she will not do evil tomorrow.” “那你又如何确信她明日不会作恶。” „Your you...... your bar essence!” forest Ling stamps with rage. “你你你……你这个杠精！”林姈气得跳脚。 The index finger and middle finger that the swordsmen to gather stroke the sword: „Can you block me?” 剑客以并拢的食指和中指拂剑:“你要阻我？” „I...... I cannot look at you to do the misdemeanor!” “我……我不能看你干坏事！” „Misdemeanor? Stupid, the trust monster is evil, then cruelly harms others! Looks in your young share, I can forgive the action of your impoliteness.” “坏事？愚蠢,信任妖邪,便是残害他人！看在你年纪小的份上,我可以原谅你的无礼之举。” Swordsman reveal cold glow. 剑客目露寒芒。 Strength that took several points of principle. 那一眼带上了几分法则的力量。 forest Lingzhi felt oneself fell into the purple surges thick plasma. 林姈只觉得自己落入了紫色翻腾的浓稠电浆中。 Her whole person hemp. 她整个人都麻了。 She could not speak, but is looking at the swordsman obstinately. 她说不出话来,只是执拗地望着剑客。 The grandfather said that some big strengths do the big matter, that said right, but must make her look that like this she feels unwilling. 爷爷说有多大力量做多大的事,话是这么说没错,可要让她就这样看着她又觉得心有不甘。 The swordsmen said: „I am unhappy kill people, but you, if anti- I, I then linked you to kill again together.” 剑客道:“我不喜杀人,但你若再阻我,我便连你一起杀了。” He acts seriously. 他是动真格的。 She...... 她…… forest Lingwang own hand. 林姈望着自己的手。 Her head was inferior eventually others' sword is hard. 她的头终究不如别人的剑硬。 At this time, a hand fell above her suddenly. 这时,一只手忽然落在了她头上。 Gently according to rubbing. 轻轻按揉着。 forest Ling raised the head sees the person is Bai Lian. 林姈抬起头就看见走来的人是白怜。 Did you come? 你怎么又来了？ Bai Lian smiles to forest ling. 白怜冲着林姈笑了笑。 Her smile always only blooms to the Junior Sisters, then before master, she more also plays the role cleverly. 她的笑容向来只对师妹们绽放,便是在师父面前,她更多的也只是扮乖巧。 In front of her also had the duty. 她面前又有任务了。 This time does not need to think much, chooses the reward to be 8 Hard Skill Task 1 decisively. 这次不用多想,果断选奖励为八点硬功的任务一。 Do some people bully Fifth Junior Sister? 有人欺负五师妹？ That can also endure! 那还能忍！ Then, Bai Lian looks up that swordsman. 然后,白怜抬头望着那个剑客。 If said that the swordsman comes across bitter cold such as the polar snow and ice. 倘若说剑客给人的感觉是酷寒如极地冰雪。 That Bai Lian feels is spatial. 那白怜给人的感觉就是空。 Looked that then makes people think oneself pulled out to empty, temperature ? Does not have the temperature. 看一眼便让人觉得自己被掏空了,温度,啊？已经没有温度了。 The swordsmen said indifferently: „Can you also block me?” 剑客淡然道:“你也要阻我？” Bai Lian said: „I in this stand, you am then giving a try to injure to my Junior Sister!” 白怜道:“我便在这站着,你试试看能不能伤害到我师妹！” hears word, the look of swordsman changes to the sharp blade to fly to shoot toward Bai Lian suddenly. 闻言,剑客的眼神忽然化作利刃朝白怜飞射而来。 Thousand imaginary real eyes that but even have not activated still read the impact on swing easily that god of journeys. 但即便是没有激活的千幻真眼也轻而易举地将那道神念冲击荡开了。 Buzz. 嗡。 In the dusky sky the thunder flashes suddenly. 灰蒙蒙的天空中雷霆骤闪。 With bang the sound, that swordsman calm face of flashes through finally wipes dignifiedly. 伴随着轰隆的响声,那个剑客冷静的面庞终于闪过一抹凝重。 „You, being worth me having a to cover the day sword!” “你,值得我出一柄掩日剑！” „Hiss-” “嘶-” horse Daoist priest holds breath cold air. 马道长倒吸一口凉气。 Good...... 好…… Good fearful imposing manner! 好可怕的气势！ This then made him almost kneel down to shout the grandfather only. 单这一句便让他差点跪下喊爷爷了。 This is the true powerhouse, is completely different from the parallel import that his hiring person blows own horn. 这就是真正的强者啊,和他这种雇人自吹自擂的水货完全不同。 Pleasure people who cannot understand the atmosphere completely also know that this swordsman must be a person of high skill. 就是完全读不懂气氛的乐子人们也知道这个剑客必是高人。 Otherwise was he possibly in front of everyone to speak the obscene talk self-confidently? 要不然他怎么可能那么自信地当着所有人面说骚话？ In this world, liked speaking the obscene talk, but can also complete complete living the person, must have the professional skill! 在这个世界,喜欢说骚话,还能完整无缺的活着的人,必有一技之长！ Snort. 哼。 Bai Lian looks at the swordsman unemotionally. 白怜面无表情地看着剑客。 Such being the case, that gives a try is your sword is hard, is my fist is hard! 既然如此,那就来试试看是你的剑硬,还是我的拳头硬吧！ She just wants to try the might of thousand imaginary real eyes. 她正想试试千幻真眼的威力。 But some people snatched before Bai Lian make a move. 但有人抢在白怜之前出手了。 A sky loud sound, the flood dragon makes a dazzling entrance! 天空一声巨响,蛟龙闪亮登场！ That is cuts the dark clouds the yellow electric light. 那是划破阴云的黄色电光。 Electricity Mangqu folds to fall, as if cut a seam the world. 电芒曲折而落,似乎将世界都斩开了一条缝。 Then, a deep purple flood dragon „crack” drilled from that say/way. 而后,一条深紫色的蛟龙从那道“裂缝”中钻了出来。 Greatly is greatly big! 大大大大大！ This is everyone sees the azure thunder day after day the first feelings after Daoist immortal! It has the hundred zhang (333 m) to be long, occupies under the dark cloud, lives four feet, has five feet fully, by dragon whisker the purple thunder ball calm from the dance. 这是所有人见到青雷逐日真君后的第一感想！它有百丈长,盘踞于乌云之下,生有四足,足有五趾,龙须旁紫色的雷球无风自舞。 It was only gently snort/hum one. 它只是轻轻哼了一声。 The purple electricity shackles of suppression around Cao Residence was then easily punctured, but that duplicate pressure below imposing manner also dissipates. 原本镇压在曹府四周的紫电牢笼便被轻易戳破,那覆压而下的气势也随之消散。 The heavy rain that but dragon line/traverse the waterproof cloth, ten thousand li (0.5 km) dark clouds, the heavy rain dies then jumps to shoot. 正所谓龙行而雨布,万里阴云一张,瓢泼死的大雨便迸射而出。 Crash-bang- 哗啦啦- Sprinkles the world. 洒落人间。 This rain also wants „wildly” compared with the summer storm. 这雨比夏季的暴风雨还要“猖狂”。 Obviously is morning 7 to 9 a.m, after the rain gets down, buys the city district then to resemble enters into the endless night. 明明已是早上辰时光景,雨下起来后,沽城县便似重新迈入长夜般。 This also had several points of the shape of inverting the Yin-Yang. 这倒也有了几分颠倒阴阳的形了。 The azure thunder the Daoist immortal said day after day: „I am not willing to meddle this minor matter, but your action made me disgruntled.” 青雷逐日真君道:“我本不愿插手这种小事,但你的举动着实令我不悦。” The swordsmen laugh. 剑客哈哈一笑。 But this is false smile. 但这是皮笑肉不笑。 „You are disgruntled, I was happy!” “你们不悦,我就高兴了！” He took out two swords. 他取出了两把剑。 First covered day, first vertical. 一曰掩日,一曰纵地。 Covered since day the startling thunderclap, vertical good strong winds. 掩日起惊雷,纵地行狂风。 End then in buying city district square inches. 末日便在沽城县这方寸之间。 The Cao person had been scared. 曹家人早已被吓傻了。 Young Master Cao and his cousin look at each other one, the lip blanch, the both legs keep trembling. 曹少爷和他表妹对视一眼,嘴唇发白,双腿不停地哆嗦着。 Should not so, not should so! 不该如此,不该如此啊！ They consider everything have not thought that the matter will develop this step. 他们千算万算也没想到事情会发展到这一步。 Black is not the sky, but is the will of the people. 黑的不是天空,而是人心。 Here buys the city district? 这里是沽城县？ No. 不。 Here is the netherworld hell! 这里是阴间地狱！ „Daoist immortal!” “真君！” At this time, was just now also pressed the cat monster that cannot move in the room to run. 此时,方才还被压得在房间里动弹不得的猫妖跑了出来。 The heavy rain falls on her cheek, but rolling the tears wash out. 大雨落在她面颊上,将滚滚而出的泪花冲散。 When murderous aura fixed she to be afraid very much. 被杀气锁定时的她很害怕。 But what she fears is dies, Eldest Miss was then incurable. 但她更怕的是自己一死,大小姐便没救了。 Previously she ran up to Lei Ze to implore urgently the azure thunder the Daoist immortal to help her rescue Eldest Miss day after day, the Daoist immortal was the big monster of ill-speaking but soft-hearted, although reprimanded her, but gave the Leize essence that she may cause to get a new lease on life. 先前她就跑到雷泽去苦苦哀求青雷逐日真君助她救大小姐,真君是个刀子嘴豆腐心的大妖,虽然斥责了她,但还是给了她可使枯木逢春的雷泽精华。 The cat monster has not thought that when she is on the verge of death, the Daoist immortal saved her unexpectedly. 猫妖万万没想到当她濒死时,真君竟然又来救她了。 The azure thunder the Daoist immortal deeply looked at cat monster one day after day. 青雷逐日真君深深地望了猫妖一眼。 The sentiment does not know to get up, one toward is deep. 情不知所起,一往而深。 Doing to...... 奈何…… The azure thunder Daoist immortal that fiery eyes are staring at the swordsman day after day stubbornly. 青雷逐日真君那炯炯有神的双眼死死地盯着剑客。 „Now receives the hand, respective well.” “现在收手,各自安好。” The swordsmen do not depend on: „Today I then must cut the purple dragon in this nameless small town!” 剑客不依:“今日我便要在这无名小城斩紫龙！” „Did not fear that the wind flashed the tongue greatly.” “也不怕风大闪了舌头。” The sound of flood dragon such as thunderous. 蛟龙之声如雷鸣。 Thunder after several times, the swordsman selects the sword light to directly soar the azure thunder the Daoist immortal to go together day after day. 几次轰鸣过后,剑客挑一道剑光直奔青雷逐日真君而去。 Covered day, vertical, to cut the monster lived! 掩日、纵地,皆为斩妖而生！ Setting and chat 设定与闲谈 Flood dragon 蛟龙 «Guangya» records the scale to say the flood dragon. 《广雅》记载有鳞曰蛟。 «Held Pozi» says female dragon Yuejiao.( Good) 《抱朴子》说母龙曰蛟。(挺好的) «Rhyme Meeting» said the flood dragon, dragon. Said the flood dragon without the corner/horn. 《韵会》说蛟,龙属。无角曰蛟。 What the flood dragon is long this to be open, after all is the ancient fantasized the thing that in the different books records completely differently. 蛟龙到底长什么样这是没有定论的,毕竟是古人幻想出来的东西,不同的书里记载完全不同。 ...... …… Part of great bear 30 six legal codes and evil spirits 72 techniques 天罡三十六法与地煞七十二术 The source is not «Journey to the West», but is «All previous generations Deity Passes Warning»( also calls «Confucianism , Buddhism , Daoism with Original Record»), that I download called «All previous generations Deity Historical novel». 出处不是《西游记》,而是《历代神仙通鉴》(也叫《三教同原录》),我下载的那本叫《历代神仙演义》。 From this books one sixth 源自本书卷一第六节 This is books that told the deity, the writings in classical style, were very long, having the interest can have a look, I was the headache of looking. 这是一本讲述神仙的书籍,文言文,挺长的,有兴趣可以看看,我是看的头疼。 If only looks at the astral 30 six legal codes evil spirits 72 techniques, direct hundred degrees celsius was OK. 如果只看罡三十六法地煞七十二术,直接百度就可以了。 This book only takes the part, some can support interestingly. 本书只取部分,有些能力挺有意思。 ...... …… Reply 【Lead strength strengthen, causing god to walk everywhere】 回答【主角实力变强,导致化神遍地走】 The promotion article, a little this situation, after all in the reality, this is also unavoidably avoidless, studied to dominate a better school, that was studies the tyrant to walk everywhere. 升级文,难免有点这种情况,毕竟在现实,这也是无法避免的,学霸去了更好的学校,那就是学霸遍地走了。 In order to avoid this issue is extremely incisive, since 为了避免这个问题太过尖锐,从 With the strength not top Ascension Sect example, all Head and elders are Amalgamation Stage, has about 20 Amalgamation Stage, Deity Transformation Stage has several hundred people. 拿实力不顶尖的度仙门举例,所有首座、长老均为合体期,也就是有将近二十个合体期,化神期更有数百人。 But with the Ascension Sect school of the same class, has Blue Sky Sect to the Ascension Sect not far place. 而与度仙门同级别的门派,在离度仙门不远的地方就有碧落宗。 The leads have been having to do with the strength strong many people, because everyone thinks that she is very fierce, vol. 1 enters the stage has An Lan, Yan Yue, Jue Yuanzi, Gaoyi and the others. 主角一直在与自己实力强很多的人打交道,因为大家都以为她很厉害,第一卷出场就有安岚、颜月、珏云子、高邑等人。 As for the high-end strength, some readers suggested to propose early which people were fierce, this I also wrote. 至于高端战力,有读者建议早早提出哪些人厉害,这我也写了。 In very place near the top, mentioned the day reveres for most powerhouse, An Lan and An Lan opponent is strongest one group of people, this book main line also writes regarding „saving”. 在很靠前的地方,就提到了天尊为最强者,安岚以及安岚的对手就是最强一批人,这本书主线也是围绕“拯救”来写的。 Then lets Yaochi Holy Mountain and Wushan Spirit Palace arrives( this probably no significance) in the hearsay, behind explained Four Great Sects is 【Eastgod Continent】 The strongest influence, in the school has crosses tribulation period cultivator much, crosses Wandering Immortal and Immortal Artifact that the tribulation failure revolutions cultivates, this has not lied. 而后又让瑶池圣山和巫山神宫在传闻中登场(这个大概没什么意义),后面解释了四大门派就是【东神洲】最强势力,门派里有不少渡劫期修仙者,还有渡劫失败转修的散仙和仙器,这个没说谎。 Four Great Sects has arrived completely( has five): Supreme Mystic Sect, Taiqing Sect, Yaochi Holy Mountain, thousand sword cities and Wushan Spirit Palace. 四大门派已经全部登场(有五个):太玄道门、太清道门、瑶池圣山、千剑城、巫山神宫。 What in the subject saves is what? 主题里拯救的是什么？ An Lan, others, as well as one Yuan time great misfortune. 安岚,还有其他人,以及一元一次的大劫。 Here must elaborate the world outlook, 【River moon/month when initially】 The volume is used to explain the world outlook, and makes this/Ben book change over to the mid and late volume by the earlier upholstery. 这里就得阐述一下世界观了,【江月何年初照人】卷就是用来解释世界观,并让本书由前期铺垫转入中后期的卷。 The paradise in book in the world center, world of mortals branch beyond paradise. 书里的仙界在世界中心,下界分部在仙界之外。 This world not deficient cultivation resources, should also mention. I also write Eastgod Continent is quite relatively speaking peaceful, the murder seizes the valuable the matter is not many, to this time Eastgod Continent cultivator, the biggest crisis is the immeasurable tribulation. 这个世界不缺乏修炼资源,应该也有提到。我也写过东神洲相对而言比较和平,杀人夺宝的事不多,对这个时间点的东神洲修仙者而言,最大的危机是无量劫。 Under the immeasurable tribulation, the day reveres will also fall from the sky. 无量劫下,天尊也会陨落。 But this time immeasurable tribulation was also different from before, the latter extended session explained. 而这次的无量劫又与之前不同,后续会解释。 ...... …… Characterization 人物塑造 This is very difficult, can create the good role, a result of book will be doomed not to miss, I am also studying slowly. 这个挺难的,能塑造好角色,一本书的成绩注定不会差,我也在慢慢学习。 My suggestion is, a new role arrives, draws the conclusion unable to him in 我的建议是,一个新角色登场,给他下定论不能在 The role is sick are not related, because this role he is possibly sick- 说角色有病没关系,因为这个角色他可能就是有病- Worry! 心病！ But said that he does not have the brain, best look at one, was well-founded later said that because you fully had not possibly understood that this role experienced. 但说他无脑,最好在看一段,有理有据之后说,因为你可能还完全不了解这个角色经历。 Does not have the brain, must look on this role whether logical self consistent method. 是否无脑,要看在这个角色身上是否逻辑自洽。 The function of commentary is to point out own view, majority are the good intentions, supports the author, hopes that the book is better, but will somewhat comment will really affect a book the result. 评论的作用是指出自己的看法,大多数都是好意的,支持作者,也希望书更好,但有些评论真的会影响一本书的成绩。 I open at the beginning of the book, 300,000 characters about, some people give one 【Plot has collapsed】, I typed the half-day character not to know how should reply. 我开书之初,30万字左右,就有人上来给一句【剧情已崩】,我打了半天字都不知道该怎么回复。 Said confidently the following plot definitely how how, I do not know how should reply, it is not really long like this. 还有信心满满地说后面的剧情一定会怎么怎么样的,我也不知道该怎么回复,它真不长这样啊。 Cannot other books write, this originally certainly like this, I and other authors have not shared a brain. 不能其他书这么写,这本就一定这样吧,我和其他作者也没有共用一个大脑啊。 The play passes, is not good. 剧透吧,不行。 Not play passes, will really have to sprout/moe the new reader to believe that then subscribed did not have, changing body article tray was too small, the reader walked, was very difficult to supplement that the rookie came. 不剧透,真的会有萌新读者信了,然后订阅就没了,变身文这个盘子太小了,读者走了,就很难补充新人进来了。 Only can delete the placard probably. 大概只能删帖。 But you have not been able to delete the placard generally, because some people are very earnest, stickles, you deleted him to comment, was afraid. And what is more scolds directly, the commentary scolded, the private letter scolded, within the placard I did not have to look, amount to more than 80,000, was impossible to look, but commented had to look at several chapters to greet my entire family at that time, said that wrote to change body article many to moisten selects nt anything. 但你一般还不能删帖,因为有极少数人特别较真,坚持己见,你删了他评论,就是心虚。更有甚者直接开骂,评论骂,私信骂,间帖我没全看,总计八万多条,不可能全看了,但评论当时就有看了几章就来问候我全家的,还有说写变身文多少沾点nt什么的。 This book review does not have the chaotic war by the area, but has the influence commentary much, I have not basically deleted, because I feared that deleted is scolded. 这本书评论区没有乱战,但还是有不少有影响的评论,我基本都没删,因为我怕删了被骂。 Without the means that the glass heart, was scolded depressed several days. 没办法,玻璃心,被骂就会郁闷好几天。 The person of support must be much more, but is uncomfortable. 支持的人要多得多,但总归还是不舒服。 Thank continuously the person of subscription. 感谢一直订阅的人。 Also thanked can look that one bunch of discontent words saw here person. 也感谢能看一堆牢骚话看到这里的人。 Is redundant- 再重复一遍- 【On the principal role of this book does not have blade, this non- lie】 【本书的主要角色身上都没有刀,此非谎言】 Chatted the half of the day, when I take express to come back to renew today 唠嗑了半天,等我去取个快递就回来更新今天的