Un... beforefinishing talkingthisfeelingsfirstreports the result of thisbook.
嗯…在谈完本感想前先汇报一下这本书的成绩吧。Is most direct, «CreationGameWorld»subscribes14,000, thisin the beginningis a goodresult, ifIcontinueto write to makea lot ofmoney.
就最直接的,《创造游戏世界》均订一万四,这在起点算是一个不错的成绩,如果我继续写下去的话能赚很多钱。ButIdo not have.
可我没有。Everyonethought that thisbookshortreasonis, Inever the waterplot , to continue the non-waterplot, tasteless, the plot of upholsteryIevencanreducereduce.
大家觉得这书短的原因是,我从来不水剧情,不止不水剧情,乏味,铺垫的剧情我甚至是能缩短就缩短。
The most direct-viewingexampleisHoly Spiritleague tournament that the competitionplotIcanwaterover a hundredchaptersnot be a problem, butIstillchoseto finish the most splendidpartfast.
最直观的例子就是圣灵联赛那一段,比赛剧情我可以水个上百章都不成问题,可我依然选择快速写完到最精彩的部份。Somemanypeoplesaid that star mapexploreda little, whydiscontinuesto continue?
有很多人说星图才探索了这么一点,为什么不继续写下去?
The words in thisaspect, whatmyviewisthiswritingisplays and reality, " CreationGameWorld » completecrisppoint and splendidplacelie in the conflict of gameandreality.
这方面的话,我的看法是这书写的是游戏和现实,《创造游戏世界》全部的爽点和精彩的地方都在于游戏与现实的冲突。star mapagainhowbroad, insidelifeform, god, eternal, againhowforplotservice.星图再怎么广阔,里面的生物,神啊,永恒者啊,再怎么强都只是为了剧情服务的。Plotcoreis... a playeris depending uponHoly Spirit in the realityobtainednotsomeposition and money, thisisbookmostfoundationcrisp.
本身的剧情核心点就是…一个玩家依靠着圣灵在现实里得到了以前不曾有的地位和金钱,这就是本书最基础的爽点。ThereforewhenHoly Spiritgraduallyrisesin the position of present society, when the position of Holy Spiritplayersalreadyhightocertain extent, thisbookarrivedshouldendthishalf ofsituation.
因此当圣灵在现实社会的地位逐渐升高,圣灵玩家们的地位已经高到一定程度时,这书就到了该完本一半的地步了。Alsosomepeoplewill think that the lightrigidly adherestoBlue Starpositionverylow, the playersinstar map, whyhad also cared aboutBlue Starthatsocial positionobviouslyvertically and horizontally/able to move unhindered.
也有人会觉得光是拘泥于蓝星的地位很low,明明玩家们都已经在星图纵横了,为什么还在意蓝星的那一点社会地位。ButI want to say that... thisbook the person of charactersupposesis rooted in themin the life and foundation of Blue Star, for exampleZhao Mingwei.
但我想说…本书的人物的人设是根植于他们在蓝星的生活和基础,例如赵明维。He is a powerfulNen Masterpremise... isheis the team leader of Monarch‘s Arrivalworld, a Blue Starordinarygameplayer, notbyinternet addicted youth that the worldunderstands.
他在是一位强大的念气师的前提…是他是君临天下的队长,一位蓝星普通的游戏玩家,一个不被世人理解的网瘾少年。Thisis the Zhao Mingwei’sfoundationpersonsupposes, rather thanRadiant Lion of whatvertically and horizontally/able to move unhinderedstar mapunmannedenergyenemy.
这才是赵明维的基础人设,而不是什么纵横星图无人能敌的狂虎帝。Had the frontsecularpersonto suppose, the followingstorylaunchedto be abletruegetto the crispcorepoint.
有了前面世俗的人设,后面的故事展开才能真正get到爽的核心点。Howthereforeto write the star mapexpansionagainisnothingsignificance, becausethishitsboss, pushes the map, thenhitsboss, pushes the mapagain.
所以再怎么写星图扩张都是没什么意义的,因为这就是打boss,推地图,然后再打boss,再推地图。Iduring this periodalreadyverystronglyis makingeachbossfightwith the differentwayssolves.
我在这期间已经很竭力的在让每场boss战用不同的方式来解决了。Mayarrive at the followingdevelopmentnothing butis the playerswins‚Dunshee’, but the rank of playersraises100levels, 1000levels, do 10,000levelshave the difference? No.
可到后面的发展无非就是玩家们打赢一个又一个‘邓希斯’而已,而玩家们的等级提升一百级,一千级,一万级有区别吗?没有。Finallythisbooktruly many insufficientplaces, actuallyIthought the most insufficientplacedoes not knowwhen a waterplot, shoulddelay the progress of main line.
最后这本书确实有很多不足的地方,其实我觉得最不足的地方就是不知道什么时候水一下剧情,应该延缓一下主线的进展。Like thisIcanlikejuston the shelfthatmeeting, every daythreefour, is insufficientsuchbrailleto end the itself/Ben.
这样我就能像刚上架那会一样,每天三更四更,也不至于就这么点字完本。ButIshould notcomplainanythingthings have gotten to this point, the wordslearned of as far as possiblenextbookmakes the rhythmslightlyslow, writes.
可事已至此我也不该抱怨什么,下一本书的话尽可能的学会让节奏稍微慢一点,多写一点吧。In briefanticipated that meetingagainwitheveryone, the new bookwordscalled«MonsterSpiritProtectionAssociation», 100,000characters, everyoneis interested to look.
总之期待与大家的再次见面,新书的话叫《妖灵保护协会》,已经十万字了,大家有兴趣可以去看一看。FinallywisheveryoneHappy New Year, the health! Health!!!
最后祝大家新年快乐,身体健康!身体健康!!!your mother‘s a prostitutemy familyon a standroad... mypresentdesiregoes on livingto the hospital that the epidemic diseaseaccepts, codemorecharacters.妈个鸡我家离疫病收容的医院就一站路…我现在的愿望就是活下去,码更多字。In briefthankedeveryoneuntil nowto support.
总之感谢大家一直以来的支持。
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