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#77: World line change

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Chapter 77 world line change 第77章世界线变动 Chapter 84 modifies, the subscribed reader withdraws from the bookshelf, subscribes 84 chapters to see, will not deduct money. 第84章改动,已经订阅的读者退出书架,重新订阅84章就可以看到,并不会扣钱。 If buckled, told me, I in the later Gengxinli, will put the public chapter two chapters. 如果扣了,跟我说,我会在之后的更新里,把两章放到公众章节。 I am very uncomfortable, original the event after the ship joins a company, at that time the lead killed the four directions greatly, shows the astonishing spearplay talent, but blue white She the effect of not clear woodcarving, will therefore accept it directly, tests to him, after determining his effect will not be drown to death, delivers him to train. 我真的很难受,原定是在船上事件后入社,那时候主角大杀四方,展现出惊人的枪术天赋,而蓝白社又不清楚木雕的效应,所以会直接收容它,对他测试,直至确定他的效应只是不会溺死后,送他去培训。 But a wave of harmony really injures to me very much, the original plot all cannot join, what is most uncomfortable continues the place that after the ship already knows the blue white society, and lost woodcarving significant introduction. 但一波和谐对我真的很伤,原定剧情全都接不上,最难受的是续写的地方,是在船上已经知道蓝白社之后,并且是丢出了木雕这个重大引子的。 Follows to write in this behind, and intense fight plot, I am very not difficult to make him the treatment like before join a company. 跟在这后面写,而又没有激烈的战斗剧情,我很难让他像之前那样的待遇入社了。 The premise that now the lead joins a company completely changed, I wrote many chapters of games, because the on the shelf does not think the water, wants to transfer forcefully. Before has said that thinks that simple, made him join a company directly forcefully, now looks like, was I wants to miss. 现在主角入社的前提完全变了,我写了好多章游戏,因为上架不想水,想强行转回来。之前说过,想简单直接点,强行让他入社,现在看来,是我想差了。 The 84 chapters before modification, easily is a realistic faction, then does conforms to the character disposition, is the personal reason, minorities. Actually originally at this time not his play, I to join a company as soon as possible, makes to work as a wave of villain him ahead of time, making the lead beat him then to bring to attention ‚official personnel to lose to an average person unexpectedly’, drew out training. However as the first entering the stage official personnel, he indeed represented the blue white She first impression, I to have the rhythm earlier, neglected this point. 改动前的八十四章,洛易是个现实派,那么做是符合人物性格的,是个人原因,少数派。其实原本这时候没他的戏,我为了尽快入社,提前把他弄出来当一波反派,让主角击败他然后引起重视‘正式人员竟然败给了一个普通人’,引出培养。不过作为第一个出场的正式人员,他的确代表了蓝白社的第一印象,我为了早点起节奏,忽略了这一点。 The 84 chapters after modification, I gave up the original program line, letting the lead becomes the limitr. The limitr was being really limited. But since the lead took this route, can only not provide some rise opportunities reasonably. 改动后的八十四章,我放弃了原来的大纲线路,让主角成为限制者。原本限制者真的就只是被限制着。但既然主角走了这个路线,就只能不合理地提供一些崛起机会。 I really want dead, I made contribution, joins a company, making me hurry to launch the main line, I was quickly aggrieved. One bunch of things that I want to write must suffocate by a joining a company card actually, later you send the place that is realistic, please excuse me, I really have many limits. 我真的想死,我尽力了,就这么入社吧,让我赶紧展开主线吧,我快憋屈死了。我想写的一堆东西硬是被一个入社卡得窒息,以后你们发现不现实的地方,请见谅,我真的有很多限制。 Above, sorry. 以上,抱歉。 ( This chapter ends) (本章完)
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