AIP :: Volume #7

#7 Part 2: 5 Yue Chaozong

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However immortal cultivation, been fastidious is elegant, has the dust, is separated from this world. 但是修仙,讲究的就是飘逸,出尘,脱离凡尘。 Therefore is practical and immortal hero is essentially contradictory. 因此写实与仙侠在本质上是矛盾的。 This is these things why the immortal road fate excels in quite few reasons that in this book sees, because of attribute hedge. 这就是为什么仙路缘分擅长的那些东西在本书中看到的比较少的原因,因为属性对冲了。 This point I had not realized from the beginning, but I have also had the ponder. 这一点我一开始没有意识到,但我一直也有思考。 Afterward why until was suddenly enlighted the immortal road is claimed as does not have the immortal taste. 直到后来才恍然大悟为什么仙路被评价为没有仙味儿。 This is the style and attribute contradiction. Obviously is among the air elegant days, was actually bent on having to work as the soil use, the rusticity met, the fairyism were few. 这就是风格与属性的矛盾。明明是飘逸天间的空气,却偏要当泥土使用,地气是接了,仙气却少了。 But perhaps the fairyism, should not pursue to meet the rusticity from the beginning. 而仙气,也许从一开始就不该追求接地气。 Met the immortal of rusticity, is not elegant, naturally did not have the immortal taste. 接了地气的仙,不飘逸,自然就没了仙味儿。 Having gains and losses. 有得有失。 In addition, two important reasons. 此外,还有两个重要原因。 First, the logic and splendid really have the rebelling place. Writing a book everything is fastidious about the logic at the same time, splendid of story will also drop. When you made the logic yielded...... mother compel for the splendor, the entire world is selecting your problem. 一是逻辑性与精彩性真的有悖逆处。写书事事讲究逻辑的同时,故事的精彩性也会下降。而当你为了精彩而让逻辑让位时……妈了个逼,全世界都在挑你的毛病。 Yes, this is the second issue: Diligently you more want to write does not have the loophole, the reader more likes selecting the loophole. I once think that this is the mistake of sprayer, but thinks now, this is my mistake. I am giving the reader not to have the world of mistake and loophole from the beginning diligently. 是的,这就是第二个问题:你越是努力想写的没有漏洞,读者就越爱挑漏洞。我曾经以为这是喷子的错,但现在想想,这还是我的错。我从一开始就在努力给读者没有错误与漏洞的世界。 I was wrong. 我错了。 We write the novel, to reader attractive world, rather than not wrong world. 我们写小说,是给读者好看的世界,而不是没有错误的世界。 I forgot this, I forgot that I had said that for splendid, can sacrifice the rationality. 我忘了这点,我忘记我曾经说过,为了精彩性,可以牺牲合理性。 When I pursue constantly is reasonable, I not only cannot achieve reasonably, and lost splendidly. 当我一味追求合理时,我既做不到合理,又失了精彩。 Story, is primarily is attractive. 故事,还是以好看为主。 Unattractive novel, again reasonably also useless. 不好看的小说,再合理也没用。 Therefore, thought through in me these, I start to attempt to change some mode of writing. 所以,在我想通了这些事后,我就开始尝试改变一些写法。 This is the world of immortal hero, the writing must have the rule that to write according to the world of immortal hero. 这是仙侠的世界,写作就得按照仙侠的世界该有的规则去写。 Does not follow conservatively, no doubt can develop the new thing, will actually also lose some old splendors. 不遵循守旧,固然可以开拓出新的东西,却也会失去些旧的精彩。 Therefore, even the things in some repertoires, should have must have. 所以,就算是一些套路上的东西,该有还得有。 Immortal Cultivation is these matters, the mystical place, doubts, the murder promotes, I try hard to be unusual, means that with the splendid insulations of these repertoires, means that shoves open reader who likes these repertoires. Therefore, the repertoire that should use, must use, should study, study! 修仙就是那些事,秘境,打怪,杀人升级,我努力想与众不同,也就意味着和这些套路的精彩性绝缘,意味着推开喜欢这些套路的读者。所以,该用的套路,得用,该学的,得学！ This is why blood river to trade the map to add the reason of athletics class/flow introduction. 这就是为什么血河界以换地图加竞技流开篇的原因。 From this start, many things of immortal road, will study little white Wen's some repertoires. 从这篇开始,仙路的许多东西,会学习小白文的一些套路。 I know that this may disappoint some old readers, the result slides, but I must do that. Only what I can try hard, I will control the good degree as far as possible. We who should study must study, should retain must retain, can refined must take off/escape. 我知道这可能会让一些老读者失望,成绩下滑,但我必须这么做。我唯一能努力的是,我会尽量控制好程度。该学的咱得学,该保留的也还是得保留,能脱俗的还得脱。 The borrowism, will not copy overall, does not reject overall. 拿来主义,不会全盘照搬,也不全盘拒绝。 Behind of immortal road, is I studies , to promote own process from other angles. If you do not like, I indicated to be sorry, but I am really trying hard, has not been loaf, but after changing the mode of writing, producing some did not adapt is the inevitable situation. 仙路的后面,就是一个我重新学习,从其他角度提升自己的过程。如果你们不喜欢,我表示抱歉,但我真的是在努力,没偷懒,只是改变写法后,产生一些不适应是必然的情况。 Above, replied that cares about the question of my reader. 以上,回答一些关心我的读者的疑问。 If feels attractive, please recommend the home station website to your friend! 如果觉得好看,请把本站网址推荐给您的朋友吧！ Is away from home, on mobile 出门在外,就上移动版
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