InYong Citycanyon邕城峡谷境内
The peopleworried, after alla moment agotransmittedshakes the heavensto move the placefromSouthern Sea the terrifyingaura, likewas the daywants the avalanche, makingallpeopleall over the bodysendcoldly, had the meaning of base and lowsubmitting tosince the moral nature.
众人担忧不已,毕竟刚才从南海传来一股股惊天动地的恐怖气息,像是天都要崩塌一样,让所有人都通体发寒,打从心底里生出卑微臣服之意。Especiallythinks that Li Jiayualsorushed towardSouthern Sea, the peoplewas worried, even if the octopuswentto help, being hardmadethemincreaseseveralpoints of security sense.
尤其是想到李佳玉也奔赴南海,众人就更加担心了,哪怕章鱼前去帮忙,也难以让他们增添几分安全感。Because the peopleknowtheirStrength unable to add onare too busy, alreadyorganized a groupto tear the space, ranSouthern Seato lead a cheertoLi Jiayu.
要不是因为众人知晓自己的力量帮不上太多忙,早就组团撕裂空间,跑去南海给李佳玉助阵了。„Wú......”
“唔……”In the anxiouswaiting, Fang Fangis covering the mouthsuddenly, frowns the delicate eyebrows, a quiteillappearance.
焦虑的等待中,方芳忽然捂着嘴巴,颦起秀眉,一副相当不适的样子。NearbyLi Banyuesees that hurriesto go forwardto supportFang Fangkindly, askedin a soft voice: „Fang Fang, you? Fortunately? Were manycharacters the recentpressureare too bighave not restedwell?”
旁边的李半月见状,赶紧关切地上前扶住方芳,轻声问道:“方芳,你怎么了?还好吧?不少字是不是最近压力太大了没休息好?”„I... Iam all right...... Suddenlya littlewantsto spit, possiblycultivatedforprogressing by leaps and boundsbacklashrecently... Youdo not needto be worried.”
“我…我没事……只是忽然有点想吐,可能是最近修为突飞猛进的反噬吧…你不必担心的。”„Reallyisthis? HowIfeelyoua littlestrangely...”
“真的是这样吗?我怎么感觉你有点怪怪的了…”„Banyueyouextremelycare aboutme many meeting... IachievementEpic, bodyalsohas been ableto go wrong......”
“半月你太过关心我才会想多…我都已经成就史诗,身体还能出什么毛病……”„Alsoright.”
“也对。”This timeLi BanyueandFang Fang, compared withhad the enormousdifferencecouple days ago, ifsaid before , theyare the flower budyoung girlcharacters and styles, thennowlooks like the crystalrose that is in full bloom, is sending out one matureflavor, graceshasfeminine qualities of bewitching, thenlinkedtheirstaturesbecomesplentifulmany, abundantchestbutt. Is dynamic.
此时的李半月和方芳,较之前几天有了极大的不同,若说以前她们还是花骨朵般的少女风情,那么现在就像是盛开的水晶玫瑰,散发着一股浅浅的成熟韵味,举手投足之间都带有一种勾魂的女人味,便连她们的身材都变得丰满了不少,丰胸翘臀。魅力四射。
Before Fang Fang, is the shape of amomum cardamomumyoung girl, the front is also the xiaolongbao, howeverthese2-3days. Shejust likes the air flush is the same, grows, the bodyis hotandslim, fromonemeter55longtoonemeter70, the beforehandclothesshecould not put on.方芳以前一直都是豆蔻少女的形态,胸前也不过是小笼包,然而这两三天的时间。她却犹如吹气一样,个头长高,身材火辣而又苗条,从一米55长到一米70,以前的衣服她都穿不下了。
Before Li Banyue, is a rashmiss, seems maintainingten6~7yearsappearances, isthese2-3 days of gong fu|effort. Herwhole personmakingsbig change, fromdynamicturnedmildlylike the water, sits in meditation there simplylikelynoble airprincess. The virtuous young womentoare not good, especiallyshehas also changed the hairstyle of slantingbangs, has explodedonbeautifulall of a sudden, nobodyregarded the neighboryounger sistersto regardheragain. Butthought that herheroic spiritthrives. Looks about the freshprestige.李半月以前也是个莽撞的姑娘,似乎一直保持着十六七岁的模样,可是这三两天的功夫。她就整个人气质大变,从活力四射变成了温润如水,静坐在那里简直像个贵气公主。淑女到不行,尤其她还换了个斜刘海的发型,一下子就美爆了,再没有人把她当成邻家小妹来看待了。而是觉得她英气勃发。顾盼生威。Actuallylet alonetheytwo......
其实别说她们两……Sun WeiweiandIvy were also so, probablyovernighttheyhave grown up, just likewas a young married woman, had the maturecharmingcharacter and style, the frown and smilerousesinthatstringtoopposite sexheart.
就连孙薇薇、艾薇也是如此,好像一夜之间她们都长大了,活脱脱的就是个少妇了,散发出成熟妩媚的风情,一颦一笑都勾动到异性心中的那根弦。„Sins, ourYong City was really too the excess of Yin and shortage of Yang...... Top playersallfemale, thisalso...... Butwhy the femalemastersstart the secondgrowthnow, was longmore and morebeautifully...... God. Youwhysuchwas unfair, clarifiesis the sexual discrimination. Hownot to have seenyouto makeourYong Citysoldiers stronger and stronger, longermore graceful......”
“造孽哦,咱们邕城真是太阴盛阳衰了……顶尖高手个个都是女的,这也就算了……但为什么现在女高手们又开始第二次发育,长得越来越美了……老天爷。你为何如此的不公平,摆明了就是性别歧视啊。怎么就没见你让我们邕城儿郎们越来越强,越长越帅……”ThisisnumerousYong CitymasculineInheritoraspiration, seesFang Fang, Li Banyue, Sun Weiwei, Ivywait / etc.younger sisterseach timetime, theywill be shrieking and howling wildlyat heart, was very depressed.
这是众多邕城男性传承者们的心声,每次看到方芳、李半月、孙薇薇、艾薇等等妹子的时候,他们都会在心里鬼哭狼嚎,别提多郁闷了。„Can Fang Fang, makemecomeyourlineage/vein?”.
“方芳,可以让我来把把你的脉吗?”。Suddenly, Himura Sakurakimiwalkstowardhere, the looksomewhatsternlylooks atFang Fang, probablyassociatedto any awfulmatter.
忽然间,绯村樱君朝这边走过来,神色有些严峻地看着方芳,好像是联想到了什么糟糕的事情。Fang Fanghas gawkedstaring, howwonderedsecretlyHimura Sakurakimisuddenlybecomesthatwarm-hearted, butconcerned about the face, can only nodsay:方芳愣了愣,暗自纳闷绯村樱君怎么忽然变得那么热心了,不过碍于情面,只能点头道:„Un...... Ok, thattroubledSisterHimura......”
“嗯……可以的,那就麻烦绯村姐姐了……”
The Himura Sakurakimilookextendselementdignifiedly, buildsin the Fang Fangwrist|skill, with the lapse of time, herlookiseven moreis unexpectedly serious, tofinally, herhas gained directly ground, the complexionlooks atFang Fangstrangely:绯村樱君神色凝重地伸出素手,搭在方芳的手腕上,随着时间的推移,她的神色竟是愈发沉重起来,到了最后,她直接就抬起头,脸色古怪地看着方芳:„Toldme, did youhavein the custom in the bathtubtaking a bath?”...
“告诉我,你是不是有在浴缸里洗澡的习惯?”…„Yes...... How do youknow?”
“是啊……你怎么知道?”Looks atFang Fangthatsimple-heartedredpupil, Himura Sakurakimishakes the headis sighinggenerally, does not know that shouldcry to smile, hesitantquite a whiledifficultlyhas opened the mouth saying:
看着方芳那天真无邪的红眸,绯村樱君摇头概叹着,不知道该哭还是该笑,犹豫了半天才艰难地开口道:„Are youthis yearonly14 years old? Manycharacters”
“你今年才14岁吧?不少字”„Un...... Ageto14......”
“嗯……虚岁到14了……”„Sins...... Reallysins...... Jiayustartedtoyou, Isaid how Ihave drunk upthatbowl of syrup, AwakenedpromotestoEpicMiddle Order...... OriginallyisJiayuone's old tricksheavy!”
“造孽啊……真是造孽啊……佳玉果真对你下手了,我说怎么我喝完了那碗糖水,一觉醒来就晋升到史诗中阶……原来是佳玉故技重施!”In the Himura Sakurakimiexpressionhas an inexplicablehatred, hasmanyhelplessness, sheknewthateveningwhat happened, but, Li Jiayuthisalsowent too far!绯村樱君的语气中带有一种莫名的恨意,却也有着更多的无奈,她已经知道了那晚上发生什么事,但,李佳玉这样也太过分了吧!HerHimura Sakurakimihas tacitly consented, Li Jiayualsosaidis responsible, the twowere the companionhave related, sincewere the companion, whyLi Jiayucannotwithout tricksset the requestwithher, musteatafterwardwipesdryonly, eliminated the memories of allpeople, thisyour motherwithconfusingsoulfragrantFlower Thiefhadanythingto distinguish!
她绯村樱君都已经默许了,李佳玉也说要负责,那两人就是伴侣关系了,既然是伴侣,为什么李佳玉就不能光明正大地跟她提出要求,非要事后吃干抹净,消除掉所有人的记忆呢,这尼玛跟迷魂香采花贼有什么区别!Thisbastard!
这个混蛋!Waits forLi Jiayuto come backonce more, musttidy upthisbastard, in the pastsheonetimehas harmedherto be pregnantalsoinsufficientlyin the Southern Seafan, aftertwoyears, has damagedheronetimeunexpectedly, afterwardhas not acknowledged mistakesas usual, was simply rotten to the core, goes badtoa lot ofBlack Water, butthose wholet the Himura Sakurakimihatredtuck diveis, sheis gettingherphysical examrapidly, discoveredownunexpectedlymaiden.
等李佳玉再次回来,一定要收拾这混蛋,当年在南海迷了她一次害她怀孕还不够,时隔两年,竟然又来祸害了她一次,事后还照旧不认账,简直坏透了,坏到一肚子黑水,而更让绯村樱君恨意翻腾的是,她迅速检查着自己的身体,发现自己竟然还是处女。This......
这……Initiallygave birth toFei Cuntongtime, is the easy childbirth......
当初生下绯村瞳的时候,是顺产的……ThereforeHimura Sakurakimithat mattermembranealreadynotin......
所以绯村樱君的那层膜已经不在了……Howevernowwere many a membrane......
然而现在却多了一层膜……Thison behalf ofwhat?
这代表着什么?Is having a guilty conscienceon behalf ofLi Jiayu, made uptoher!
代表着李佳玉做贼心虚,给她补上了!Thisbastard!
这个王八蛋!Definitelypicks the wild flower!
肯定又是采野花了!Himura Sakurakimiclenched teeth, no wonderover the two daysalwaysfelt that the buttocksare somewhat strangeitchy, sits down is not quite comfortable, originallyistwotimesby the reason of caihuaing!绯村樱君咬了咬牙,难怪这两天总感觉臀部有些怪痒痒的,坐下都不太舒服,原来是二度被采花的缘故!When the Himura Sakurakimitrain of thoughttuck dive, nearbyLi Banyue is also blinking the eye, saidinnocently:
就在绯村樱君思绪翻腾之际,旁边的李半月也眨巴着眼睛,无辜地说道:„, Was SisterHimura, whatyousaying? Fang Fangshelikesin the bathtubsoaking-bath, whatrelationshadwithmy family'sJiayu? Ido not likeblowing the frothin the bathtub, howto have seenmyill?”
“诶诶,绯村姐姐,你在说什么?方芳她喜欢在浴缸泡澡,跟我家的佳玉有什么关系了?我不也喜欢在浴缸里吹泡泡吗,怎么就没见我身体不适呀?”Himura Sakurakimihearsword, once more cannot help but intense, put on a serious faceto look atLi Banyue, saidwith deep veneration:绯村樱君闻言,不由得再次紧张起来,板起脸看着李半月,肃然道:„Youcome, Ialsotake the pulsetoyou.”
“你过来,我也给你把把脉。”„As you like.”
“随你。”Li Banyuerefreshedcomplying. After a halfminute, Himura Sakurakimilooked that changedto the Li Banyuevisionchanged, finally. Himura Sakurakimicovers the volumeby the hand, sighedlow-spirited:李半月爽快的答应。半分钟后,绯村樱君看向李半月的目光变了又变,最后。绯村樱君才以手捂额,黯然叹息道:„Li, Li Jiayu... Really is an expert marksman... Every shot hits the target, the casenotemptysends... Yourwooldoes not have the longcompletesmall girl, whyalsohasto soak the badcustom of bathtubyo...”
“李、李佳玉…真是个神枪手…百发百中,例无虚发…你们两个毛都没长齐的小丫头,为什么也有着泡浴缸的坏习惯哟…”„?”
“啊?”Li BanyueandFang Fanglook at each other in dismay, has not understood what is heardcompletelyHimura Sakurakimiisanymeaning, closely examinescontinually, butHimura Sakurakimiconsidered that theytooearlyknowinsteadis not good. Gives the timeto solve, thenno longersaidanythingsimply, 32stepsran off.李半月和方芳面面相觑,完全没听明白绯村樱君到底是个什么意思,连番追问,但绯村樱君考虑到她们太早知道反而不好。还是交给时间去解决,索性便不再说什么,32步跑开了。Looks at the Himura Sakurakimiback. Li BanyueandFang Fangwonder, anyexpert marksman, anyevery shot hits the target, anyhairsdoes not have the longcompletesmall girl. Anybubblebathtubis a badcustom. Ohfeeds, SisterHimura Sakurakimi, what you were talking nonsense, hasn't awaked?
看着绯村樱君的背影。李半月和方芳都纳闷不已,什么神枪手,什么百发百中,什么毛都没长齐的小丫头。什么泡浴缸是个坏习惯。哎哟喂,绯村樱君姐姐,你到底在胡说些什么呀,是不是还没睡醒咧?At this time, just likedelegant young manYe Louwalked, hewore the white clothing, had an imposing appearance, fine-lookingbig. Althoughcannot compareYang An, actually is also in worldraredelicate and prettyman. Simplylooks like the peerlessimmortal who inlegendfallslightly.
这时,犹如翩翩公子般的叶楼走了过来,他身穿白衣,器宇轩昂,英挺高大。虽然比不上杨安,却也是个世间罕见的俊美男子。简直就像是神话传说里翩然而降的绝世仙人。„Monthyounger sister, waited for that is also useless, Tathagatadoes not drink the cuptea.”
“月妹,等待亦是无用,不如来喝杯茶吧。”Ye Loupoliterefinedwas saying, changesfrom the spaceringonetea set, the tea setis fine, the tea leaves is also precious, hot waterbubble, the teaoverflowsimmediatelyfragrant, did not know that is the topimmortaltea in whichimmortalcave mansion, is only smellsthatteato be fragrant, madepeopleall over the bodycomfortable, floatingwanted the immortal.叶楼温文儒雅地说着,从空间戒指里变出一套茶具,茶具精美无比,茶叶也是珍贵至极,热水一泡,顿时茶香四溢,也不晓得是哪个仙人洞府里的顶级仙茶,光是闻到那茶香,就令人通体舒坦,飘然欲仙。Ye Louis deeply in loveinLi Banyue, since the previousSouthern Seastartledgreat wild goosemeets by chance, Ye LouthenregularlyrunsYong CityandLi Banyuemeets, is carefultoherextremely, afterwardLi Jiayurecovered, has drawn ontwosuperSaiyan, whenInstructor, Ye LouandFang Yunalsoledlarge quantities ofmastersto hire oneselfYong City, so, Ye LouthendailyhadopportunitycloseLi Banyue.叶楼钟情于李半月,自从上次南海的惊鸿偶遇,叶楼便隔三差五地跑来邕城与李半月见面,对她极为上心,后来李佳玉复苏,招来了两位超级赛亚人当教练,叶楼、方云也带着大批高手投靠了邕城,如此,叶楼便天天都有机会接近李半月了。Whatis helplessis......
无奈的是……Unrequited loveuninterested love, Li Banyueregards the intimatefriendYe Lou, the sentiment of littlemen and womendoes not have, butYe Lou is actually not discouraged, morecannot obtain, hemorewantsto obtaincrazily . Moreover, Li Banyuehas not likedonobject, so long asheholds on to the last, certainlycanmove the heart, hugs the beautiful womanto turn over.
落花有意流水无情,李半月只是把叶楼当成知心的朋友,一点点男女之情都没有,可叶楼却不气馁,越是得不到,他就越是想疯狂地得到,况且,李半月也没有喜欢上的对象,他只要坚持到底,就一定能打动芳心,抱得美人归。ToLi Jiayu, Ye Loudoes not dareto expect, Yang Anlearns from another's mistakesheiswatches, cannot occupyYang Ancheaply, Ye Louhas not hope that withitsthis, might as welldraws backto seek the time, becomes the Li Jiayu'sbrother-in-lawis also good, ha, thisabacusreallyhits the pā pāsound.
对李佳玉,叶楼是不敢奢望,杨安的前车之鉴他是看在眼里的,连杨安都占不到便宜,叶楼就更没希望了,与其这样,还不如退而求次,成为李佳玉的妹夫也好,哇哈哈哈,这一步算盘真是打得啪啪响啊。„Un...... Many thanks, Iam just thirsty.”
“嗯……多谢,我刚好口渴呢。”Li Banyuecarried the teacup, gū lū lūtwohas drunk up, looked at the Ye Loucorners of the mouthto twitch, thiswas the immortaltea, the immortalteathiscarefullysavored, wherehadsuchwholeswallows the jujubeOxJiaopeony, simplycareless and wasteful use of nature's products!李半月端起茶杯,咕噜噜两口就喝完了,看得叶楼嘴角直抽搐,这可是仙茶啊,仙茶就该细细品味,哪有这么浑沦吞枣牛嚼牡丹的,简直暴殄天物!However...... Ye Lou is also ultralikesLi Banyuethatrefreshed not shylysinceretemper, ifsheone daybecameelegant, healsometis not familiar with.
不过……叶楼也是超喜欢李半月那爽快不扭捏的率真性子,如果她有一天变得风雅了,他还会不习惯呢。Looks at the Li Banyuethatmore and morebeautifulcheeks, as well as the stature of even morerichmatureflavor, Ye Lousaid with a smile:
看着李半月那愈来愈美丽的脸颊,以及愈发富有成熟韵味的身材,叶楼笑道:„Does moon/monthyounger sister, my familyhave a plain meal to be goodtonight? Igood food that preparedyoumostto like.”
“月妹,今晚来我家吃个便饭可好?我准备了你最喜欢的美食哦。”Li Banyueturns down saying: „Does not need... Nowworried that mySisterJiayu, where can also eat meal?”李半月婉拒道:“不必了…现在担忧我佳玉姐姐,哪里还吃得下饭?”Ye Lousaidwarmly: „Worriesalsouselessly, who your older sisteris, Proud Daughter of Heavensis not enoughto describeher1/10, whatdifficulty didn't shesurmount? Youare waiting forhergoodnews... Howeverthisdinner, actuallyhas toeat, wehave not sat togetherfor half a month......”叶楼热情道:“担忧也没用,你姐姐是什么人,天之骄女都不足以形容她1,什么难关她跨越不了?你就等着她的好消息吧…但是这晚饭呢,却是不得不吃的哦,我们都半个月没坐在一起了……”„This...... Considers as finished, next timewill sayagain, wú............”
“这……还是算了吧,下次再说,唔……呜……”Li Banyuealsowantedto sayanything, suddenlyshefelt that throatitched, covered the mouthwith the handhastily, retched.李半月还想要说什么,忽然间她感到喉咙一阵发痒,连忙用手捂住嘴巴,干呕起来。„Monthyounger sisteryouhow?”
“月妹你怎么了?”„Notanything...... Wassuddenly the gastric disorder, possiblywasyourteais expired? Manycharacters”
“没什么……就是忽然反胃了,可能是你的茶过期了吧?不少字”„Thisis how possible! My, butimmortaltea! Idrankhave been all right......”
“这怎么可能!我的可是仙茶呀!我喝了都没事……”„Possiblyismyphysiqueis not quite suitableto drink the immortaltea...... It is not quite comfortabletoday, Ye Louyougo backfirst, next timewill gatheragain......”
“可能是我体质不太适合喝仙茶……呃,今天不太舒服,叶楼你先回去,下次再聚聚……”„Good, yourest......”
“好吧,你多休息……”SomeYe Lou of losing can only losereluctantly, ifhehad known the truth of matter, onlyfearedwill be madto spit blood, finenobleBanyuegoddessinhisheart, has been pregnantunexpectedly......
有些失落的叶楼只能无奈地铩羽而归,如果他得知了事情的真相,只怕会被气得吐出血来,在他心中纯美高贵的半月女神,竟然已经怀孕了……Perhaps【reallyshouldwelcomelast act, in this year, told the readerto finishinnumerableimmediatelyreturnsto finishimmediately...... Buttime and time again, Ido not hate the casuallanerottentailresultto be perfunctory the bookfriend...... Yes, the lateresult of thisbookis unsatisfactory, fromsecond-classfellfourclassesdirectly, theyurgedmeto hurry the abandonedpit, whysincedid not make moneyalso to do a thankless jobto write, even/includingDashenfewcanwritecompletely the result, why your third-classwriterdid this, but alsowroteisthreeyears more than 5 millioncharacters, yourconvulsion......】
【也许真的该迎来尾声了,这一年来,无数次告诉读者马上会结束马上回结束……但一次又一次,我都不舍得随便弄个烂尾结局敷衍书友……是的,这本书的后期成绩并不佳,直接就从二流跌到了四流,他们都劝我赶紧弃坑,既然不赚钱了干嘛还要吃力不讨好地写下去,连大神都没几个能把结局写完整的,你一个三流写手干嘛这样做,还一写就是三年5000000多字,你丫抽风了是吧……】【, Theysaidright, Iwhydid a thankless job, innumerableIoncehave also thoughtmustabandon the pit, butwantsto write the rottentailresulteach timetime, Ican the handcramp, unable to start...... Becauseperhaps, is I have the greatsentimenttothisbook, in the subconsciouswantsto write the most satisfiedresult, althoughmymoral behavioris very rotten, breaksfrequently, butmyintuitiontoldme, thiswas my firstbook, even ifwere not approvedby the mainstream, even iffell the personto denounce, even ifwrote the difficultyto multiply, I must writeit, did not askitto become the work of classics, actually must makeit the immortalexcellent work in smallnumerousarticle, even ifinmillions ofreaders, only thenfewhundredpeopleraised up the thumbtothisbook, said that „, this. Thisbookis very unique, the plotsees what one never saw before, newstimulation, inIreadinallnovels to arrangefirstten”, thiswas enough......】...
【是的,他们说得太对了,我何必吃力不讨好呢,无数次我也曾想过要弃坑,可是每次想写个烂尾结局的时候,我都会手抽筋,下不了手……也许,是因为我对这本书抱有不浅的感情,潜意识里想要写个最满意的结局吧,虽然我人品很烂,经常断更,可我的直觉告诉我,这是我第一本书,哪怕不被主流认可,哪怕落人诟病,哪怕写起来难度倍增,我也要把它写好,不求它成为经典之作,却也要让它成为小众文里的不朽佳作,哪怕千千万万名读者里,只有那么寥寥百人对这本书竖起大拇指,说,“嗯,这。本书很独特,剧情见所未见,新鲜刺激,在我看过所有小说里能排进前十”,这样就足够了……】…【Ialsoknowactually...... The heavymouth of thisbookestablishesby the innumerablereadersspits the trough, seesothers„Damnfrequentlytothiscalling out in alarm of bookandmywaistcoat, thisis notthatmakesmecross the tribulationto rise the immortaldirectly the Apocalypsearticle”„Fuck, youarethatpervertedauthor”„biggod, howaskingyouto teachmeto write the labormoutharticleharmoniouslyalsonot”, regardingthistype of spittingtrough, Ialso can only smilereluctantly, Iwill certainly know the heavymouthsettingnot to conform to the mainstream market...... However, thisbookbeginningtookcrookedly the road, was deeper and deeperinfalsemothersetting, was hardto extricate oneself, finallyreluctantlyrealmother, evenwasdevelopsby the situation that severalfalseactorspursued to the end and hit hard...... ActuallytheseIalsowantto change, but the plotarrived in thatshare, changed unable to change, can only make the best of a bad situation......】
【其实我也知道……这本书的重口设定被无数读者所吐槽,以至于经常看到别人对本书和我马甲的惊呼“我擦,这不就是那本令我直接渡劫升仙的末世文吗”“卧槽,你就是那个变态作者”“大神啊,求你教教我怎么写工口文还不会被和谐吧”,对于这种吐槽,我也只能无奈地笑笑,我当然知晓重口设定不符合主流市场……然而,本书一开头就走歪了路,以至于在伪娘这个设定上愈陷愈深,难以自拔,最后无奈地真娘,甚至是发展到被几个伪男主角穷追猛打的地步……其实这些我也想改,但剧情已经到了那个份上,改也改不了,只能将错就错了……】【Is just likeYe Louthepit, Ye LoulikesLi Banyueis right...... Butin the settingwantsoppressiveYe Lou, but the lengthis insufficient, the bold handwriting vigorous stylefoundation of basic skillsis also short, thereforealso can only fill in the Ye Loupitwiththischapter......】
【就好比叶楼的这个坑,叶楼喜欢李半月对吧……可是设定里是要虐叶楼的,无奈篇幅不够,笔力功底也欠缺,所以也只能用这章把叶楼的坑填上了……】【Occasionally, Iwill look back on the frontplot...... However the spans of 5 millioncharactersweretoolong are too really long...... Has forgottenmanyhypothesestomelong, the plothas filled the loophole and contradiction, the BUGfrequencyleaves, butalwaysa littlemakesmeverygratified, thatis the master line in programhas not changed, at least the octopusandblackWhite Jiayuthesethreeroleswriteare plentiful, the basicplotalsoexpressedcompletely......】
【偶尔,我会回首前面的剧情……但是5000000字的跨度实在是太长太长了……长到我都忘记了好多设定,以至于剧情充满了漏洞和矛盾,BUG频出,不过总有一点让我很欣慰,那就是大纲里的主线没变,至少章鱼、黑白佳玉这三个角色写得还算丰满,基本的剧情也表达了个完全……】【Thanked the reader who canseethiscaptionsvery much, no matter the legal copy, orwaspirating, youcanendure the mouthdisorderlyplot and shoddyLittleBaistyle, not to have the controlfoundation of basic skills of rhythmemphatically, has insisted5 millioncharacters, without doubt, understood the oneaffirmation of nightwaltztome......】
【很感谢能看到这一段字幕的读者,不管是正版的,亦或者是盗版的,你们能忍受着重口的凌乱剧情、拙劣小白的文笔、毫无节奏感的驾驭功底,一直坚持了5000000字,无疑,也是对我晓夜圆舞曲的一种肯定……】【Finally, the «EndBlack»last acthas played, thispulled open the preparation of secondchapter, the new bookhas uploaded, the readersselectedmy„dawnnightwaltz”author to see, the new bookis the «EndBlack»companion volume, the world outlookwill havelittlesimilar, but was only restricted in the opening, the plotwill be more splendid.】
【最后,《末黑》的尾声已经奏响,该是拉开第二篇章的准备了,新书已经上传,的读者们点我的“晓夜圆舞曲”作者名就能看到,新书是《末黑》的姊妹篇,世界观会有一点点相似,但仅限于开头,剧情会更加精彩的。】
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