„Good, your other pit I am good.” “好,你别坑我就行。” Li Jiayu selects nod, thing that writes does not make the person look that she did not mind shares the story that she forms in one's mind with the person, lay on the bed in any case her anything cannot do, was very bored. 李佳玉点点头,写的东西不就是让人看么,她并不介意跟人分享她所构思的故事,反正躺在床上她啥都干不了,很无聊的。 „Ha Ha, naturally pit you, my website is not the world biggest station, the reader base number is big, does not have the issue, the words said before , I am also mixing a food, although result not Taihang, but also calculates that is familiar with the major types, the work of profound imaginary immortal hero science fiction classics knows by heart, you can treat as half editor me......” “哈哈,当然不会坑你,我的网站算是全世界最大的站,读者基数大,没问题的啦,话说以前我也是混着一口饭的,虽然成绩不太行,但也算熟读各大类型,玄幻仙侠科幻经典之作倒背如流啊,你可以把我当做半个编辑的……” Mentioned this, Lin Jia started to be delighted, one such as initially Lin Jia showed off him in front of Li Jiayu is „the Profession player” is the same, finally applied makeup by Li Jiayu maliciously, did the game talent surmount his far more than thousand times? 一说起这个,林嘉又开始眉飞色舞起来,一如当初林嘉在李佳玉面前炫耀他是“职业玩家”一样,最后被李佳玉狠狠打脸,游戏天赋超越他何止千倍？ „Well, was right, what gadget that you write? Is practical or yy, is the sentiment love loves warm-blooded rushes?” “咦,对了,你写的什么玩意？是写实的还是yy的,是情情爱爱的还是热血澎湃的？” „Kills strangely......” “杀怪的……” „Kills strangely? Kills the strange promotion the crisp article? Oh, this type is very popular, is named the Little Bai crisp article.” “杀怪？杀怪升级的爽文么？哎呀,这种类型很受欢迎啊,俗称小白爽文。” Li Jiayu unemotionally shakes the head saying: „It is not the crisp article, is not feeling well... What I want to write is oppressive article, very sad that......” 李佳玉面无表情地摇摇头道:“不是爽文,一点儿也不爽的…我想写的是虐文,很悲伤的那种……” „You want to write to move people to tears? Also good, the female student excels at that feels the day to move makes a solemn pledge of eternal love, is very easy to make the soap opera!” “难道你想写催人泪下的么？也不错啊,女生就是擅长那个,感天动地海誓山盟,很容易拍成电视剧的！” „No...... I want to write purely oppressive, wants to write idea in my brain, for example, a big disaster, making the insect wreak havoc in the world, the lead nurses a grievance to be insulted, was used to betray repeatedly, all family member friends died bright light. He was also misunderstood the big evil person by all people, every day was chased down brutally, can only be a companion with the corpse...” “不……我想写的就是单纯地虐而已,想把我脑子里的构思都写出来,比如,一场大劫难,让虫子在人间肆虐,主角含冤受辱,屡屡被人利用出卖,所有的亲人朋友都死了个精光。他也被所有人误会成大恶人,每天都被残酷地追杀,只能与尸体为伍…” Why does not know. Li Jiayu especially wants to write this story, occasionally she sleeps, will have delimited some memory fragments, especially deeply the specially oppressive person, she really very wants to record these fragmentary memory fragments...... 不知为何。李佳玉就是特别地想写出这个故事,偶尔她睡觉的时候,会划过一些记忆碎片,特别深沉特别虐人,她是真的挺想把那些零碎的记忆片段记录下来…… Lin Jia hears to shake heads: „This...... Such oppressive, online reader does not like looking, ok. How you wrote, did not mind that first made me have a look?” 林嘉听得大摇其头:“这……这么虐,网上读者不爱看的啊,算了。你写得怎样了,不介意先让我看看？” „Who cherishes the reader, likes looking. I write my, do they look under none of my business!” “谁稀罕读者啦,爱看不看。我写我的,他们看不看得下关我屁事！” Li Jiayu ahem, transferred immediately her notebook to Lin Jia, Lin Jia is interested looked at looking. Oh. Unexpectedly has written the 7~8 thousand characters, this speed also quick! 李佳玉哼唧了一声,随即把她的笔记本转过去对向林嘉,林嘉颇感兴趣地瞄了瞄。哎哟。居然写了七八千字,这速度也蛮快的嘛！ ...... 只是…… After he looked for several minutes, on face cannot help but flood several points of strange smiling face. 当他看了几分钟之后,脸上不由得泛起了几分怪异的笑容。 Li Jiayu is not feeling well to say very much: „You smile anything to smile! Does not think very oppressive! You should shed tears to be right!” 李佳玉很不爽道:“你笑什么笑！不觉得很虐吗！你应该流眼泪才对！” Lin Jia cannot bear finally, raises head to laugh loudly: „Oh my young lady, you writes the sincerity comedy...... I did not say that your style had was much immature, you were really has not gotten up including the elementary school the silly girl, the punctuation mark abuse me not to spit the trough, but your narration was the blotter. The style is also an elementary student, not only writes dry. Did not have the attraction...... Wants me to summarize the words, that was weakly explodes!” 林嘉终于忍不住,仰头放声大笑起来:“哎哟我的大小姐,你写得真心搞笑……我就不说你的文笔有多稚嫩了,你果然是个连小学都没上过的黄毛丫头,标点符号乱用我就不吐槽了,可你的叙事就是流水账。文笔也是小学生,非但写得干巴巴的。还毫无吸引力……真要我总结一下的话,那就是弱爆了！” Li Jiayu hears word, cannot help but fly into a rage out of humiliation, was similar to is stepped on the female cat of tail to glower and make threatening gestures to Lin Jia equally, her body Taihang, soon did not throw to punch him one. 李佳玉闻言,不由得恼羞成怒,如同被踩了尾巴的母猫一样对着林嘉怒目而视、张牙舞爪,要不是她身体不太行,都快要扑过去揍他一顿了。 „Fart! You are the elementary student style! Writes the novel is not makes every effort succinctly, wants that many literary elegances of being an eyesore to do! Said my elementary student, I thought that well where you do not have to go, have the skill puts out you to write come to me to look!” “放屁！你才是小学生文笔！写小说不就是力求简洁么,要那么多碍眼的辞藻干嘛！说我小学生,我看你也没好到哪里去,有本事拿出你写过的来给我看啊！” Saw that Li Jiayu so is not convinced, Lin Jia said calm: „Ok, this makes you look, the good and evil I am also the top university, the minoring in Chinese department, come, making you have a look at anything to be called the god to do!” 看到李佳玉这般不服气,林嘉淡定地说:“行,这就让你看,好歹我也是重点大学,兼修中文系的,来,让你看看什么叫做神作！” Lin Jia ran desk there to flip, extracts a black book, in the title page has been printing a very attractively game beautiful woman, submitted a written statement to several golden large character «Please To call Me Dragon Arrogant Huge Person»! 林嘉跑去书桌那里翻了翻,抽出了一本黑皮书,封面上印着一个很漂亮的游戏美女,上书几个金色大字《请叫我龙傲天大人》！ That several golden large characters, glitter splendid light that is shocking the soul, is quite dazzling, almost makes Li Jiayu unable to open the eye...... 那几个金色大字,闪烁着一股震撼灵魂的华光,极为耀眼,差点就让李佳玉睁不开眼睛来…… „, Good bright good dazzling......” “啊,好亮好刺眼……” Lin Jia tiger body shakes, appearance Feiyang said: „Ha, shivers, this is I had written god book «Please Call Me Dragon Arrogant Huge Person», this is left the version, in the past, this book was very popular.” 林嘉虎躯一震,神采飞扬道:“哇哈哈哈,颤抖,这就是我曾经写过的神书《请叫我龙傲天大人》,这可是出了版的哦,当年,这本书很受欢迎。” Here, Lin Jia suddenly expression one gloomy, 45 degrees corner/horn looked up the day, said sadly in a low voice: „Was a pity that my Main Profession is a player, has no way the minute too to write a book oversensitively, moreover in the past I must gain admission to the university, has no way to strike while the iron is hot to promote continues makes «Dragon Aotian Palaces and houses» and «Journey of Dragon Aotian Wandering about destitute Different Conquering», otherwise, my present how to go so far as to is only a third-class author, only depends on my «Dragon Aotian» trilogy, can an achievement godship series beginning......” 说到这里,林嘉忽然表情一黯,45度角抬头望天,忧伤地低声道:“可惜啊,我的主职业是玩家,没法分太多心去写书,而且当年我也要考大学,没法趁热打铁推出续作《龙傲天的三宫六院》和《龙傲天流落异界征服之旅》,否则的话,我现在何至于只是个三流作者,只凭我的《龙傲天》三部曲,就能成就神格一统起点……” Li Jiayu disdain casts aside excessively: „Boasted!” 李佳玉不屑地撇过头:“吹牛！” „Blows, you look apparent, yeah, what a pity I go through life without a good opportunity, if the time backs up for ten years, making me return to 2012, at that time Mo Yan won an award, age that the novel field will most vigorously develop, if wrote my «Dragon Aotian» at that time, can earn plate full Boman depending on a book.” “吹不吹,你自己一看便知,哎,可惜我生不逢时啊,如果时间倒退十年,让我回到2012年,那时候正是莫言获奖,小说业界最为蓬勃发展的年代,如果是那时候写我的《龙傲天》,啧啧,光凭一本书就能赚得盘满钵满了。” Appearance that a Lin Jia brave soldier grasps the wrists, but he also has given Li Jiayu that book, Li Jiayu maliciously white his eyes, has not actually rejected, she wants to have a look at Lin Jia to be able actually to write any nonsense thing. 林嘉一副壮士扼腕的模样,但同时他也把那本书递给了李佳玉,李佳玉狠狠地白了他一眼,却也没拒绝,她倒是想看看林嘉能写出点什么狗屁东西。 In the vision of Lin Jia that anticipation, Li Jiayu has opened the first page...... 在林嘉那期待的目光中,李佳玉翻开了第一页…… „Wú? The first chapter what that writes, trash, once talent actually turned into the mediocre person, is head of the clan's son, dies funnily, um? Also broke an engagement by the fiancee? This face hits the pā pā sound, yo, even/including the consanguinity brothers dare to beat and scold to the lead...... Oh, Lin Jia, you writes to look to intertwine......” “唔？第一章写的什么啊,一个废柴,曾经的天才却变成了庸才,还是族长之子,好笑死啦,嗯？还被未婚妻退婚了？这脸打得啪啪响啊,哟,连同族兄弟都敢对主角打打骂骂……哎呀,林嘉,你写得让人看着好纠结……” Lin Jia writes clearly is one „breaking an engagement class” profound imaginary article repertoire, of rotten avenue, but with emphasis lies, Lin Jia's style is extremely good, the tip is quite sharp, narration clear lively rhythm, pours is also fascinating. 林嘉写的分明就是一个“退婚流”玄幻文套路,烂大街的那种,不过重点在于,林嘉的文笔极好,笔锋颇为锐利,叙事清晰节奏明快,倒也算是引人入胜。 „He He, you look, looked that you knew.” Lin Jia smiled, he is very confident to his work, the crisp writer person loves, particularly has not looked at crisp article Little Bai, the taste is not generally nitpicking, the charm of breaking an engagement class crisp article, is not they can resist. “呵呵,你看下去呗,看下去你就知道了。”林嘉笑了笑,他对自己的作品很有信心,爽文人人爱,尤其是没看过爽文的小白,口味一般都不挑剔,退婚流爽文的魅力,可不是他们能抵挡的。 Sure enough...... 果不其然…… When Li Jiayu looks...... 当李佳玉看下去的时候…… Unexpectedly by Lin Jia's «Dragon Aotian» attracting! 竟然被林嘉的这本《龙傲天》给吸引住了！ The second chapter...... The main ceratop arrogant day starts the counterattack, obtained the soul of gold/metal finger antiquity grandfather, that was one ten thousand years ago supreme powerhouse who died! 第二章……主角龙傲天开始逆袭,得到金手指上古老爷爷之魂,那是一个万年前陨落的至尊强者！ The tenth chapter...... Main ceratop proud Tian won at the family martial arts contest congress, has defeated young one generation of first master Long Aojiao, shocking four directions, and established the gambling to make with several father's younger brothers, three months later the arena fought it out, at this time, Long Aojiao to dragon arrogant celestial pole for curious, has had the interest to him. 第十章……主角龙傲天在家族比武大会上夺魁,击败了年青一代第一高手龙傲娇,震惊四方,并且与几个叔父立下赌约,三个月后擂台一决胜负,此时,龙傲娇对龙傲天极为好奇,对他产生了兴趣。 Chapter 20... Main ceratop proud Tian goes out informed and experienced, the fire-worship saintess who the meeting by chance imperial capital travels, under the chance coincidence the hero rescues beautiful, obtained the saintess favorable impression, immediately Flower Protector of saintess appears, because of being rivals for sexual favor, but the severe wound Dragon Aotian, Dragon Aotian pledged that one day will arrive at an imperial capital also his palm. 第20章…主角龙傲天外出历练,偶遇帝都来旅游的拜火教圣女,机缘巧合之下英雄救美,获得了圣女好感,随即圣女的护花使者出现,因争风吃醋而重伤了龙傲天,龙傲天发誓,总有一天会到帝都还他一掌。 Chapter 30, advocated ceratop proud Tian to find the buried treasure between mountains and plains, all moved, disguised as the mysterious person to attain the auction in city to sell, immediately caused a tendering upsurge, earned leniently. 第30章,主角龙傲天找到了山野间的宝藏,全部搬出来,假扮成神秘人拿到城里的拍卖会出售,顿时引起一阵竞价热潮,赚得手软。 Chapter 40...... Dragon Aotian the status exposes, because of buried treasure, but encounters several families to chase down, but Dragon Aotian has cultivated to rise suddenly, direct counter- goes back oppressively...... 第40章……龙傲天身份败露,因宝藏而遭遇几个家族追杀,但龙傲天已经修为暴涨,直接反虐回去…… The Li Jiayu's reading speed is extremely fast! 李佳玉的阅读速度极快！ A thick book, 300,000 characters, she only spent for 15 minutes to look, she closed the books, long breathed a sigh of relief, on the face as if was also having the look of having not given full expression, looks at Lin Jia dao inconceivable: 厚厚的一本书,300000字,她只花15分钟就看完了,她合上书本,长长地舒了一口气,脸上似乎还带着意犹未尽的神色,不可思议地看着林嘉道: „Could not see that you have many skills......” “看不出你还有两把刷子嘛……” „Aha, that also used saying that the good and evil I was also a talent, played the game unable to stump me, writing a book naturally how me, moreover I minored in Chinese, was not has unearned reputation.” “啊哈哈,那还用说,好歹我也是个天才嘛,玩游戏难不住我,写书当然也奈何不了我,况且我兼修中文,可不是浪得虚名的。” „The second book? I also want to continue to look.” “第二本呢？我还想继续看。” „...... This......” Lin Jia looks the embarrassment, makes excuses saying: „Second has not published... Does not have the means that the publishing house dislikes my book title to be too vulgar, the first volume of sales volume is also unsatisfactory, therefore cut in two at the waist...... You want to read the following plot, can only look at the Internet edition.” “呃……这个……”林嘉面露难色,支支吾吾道:“第二本没出版…没办法,出版社嫌我的书名太俗,第一集销量也不佳,所以就腰斩了……你想看后面的剧情,只能看网络版的了。” „But I thought that very well looked, how to cut in two at the waist?” “可我觉得挺好看的,怎么就被腰斩了？” Li Jiayu thinks certainly attractive, her first time contacts this type of Little Bai crisp article, moreover does not have the brain crisp article, regarding this IQ tall younger sister, naturally does not have the greatest attraction. 李佳玉当然觉得好看,她第一次接触这种小白爽文,而且还是无脑爽文,对于她这种智商不高的妹子而言,当然有着莫大的吸引力。 Lin Jia will certainly not say is because he writes rotten avenue the extremely, can only make excuses to look taking advantage of the tastes: „This...... Naturally is publishing house vision is too bad, does not recognize a superior perforated!” 林嘉当然不会说出是因为他写得太过烂大街,只能支支吾吾找借口道:“这……当然是出版社眼光太差,有眼不识泰山！” Li Jiayu does not trust looks at Lin Jia, snort|hum said: „With shows the most best-selling book me, I want to take a look actually, what the best book wrote.” 李佳玉不信任地看着林嘉,哼道:“拿给我看看最畅销的书,我倒是想看看,最好的书是写成个什么样。” „Good, I recommend you to read the potato tomato three few work, they have written for several 20 years, the skill is deep, holds in the mouth to fly, just my family also collected entity version «To fight Broken Sky» «Eats Starry sky» «Unparalleled Wudang»!” “好,那我推荐你看土豆番茄三少的力作,他们都写了十几20年,功力深厚,叼得飞起,刚好我家也收藏了实体版《斗碎天空》《吃掉星空》《盖世武当》！” Lin Jia turns out several thick books from the bookshelf, gives Li Jiayu, Li Jiayu politely, does not read but actually full of enthusiasm. 林嘉又从书架上翻出几本厚厚的书,递给李佳玉,李佳玉倒也不客气,兴致勃勃地翻看起来。 Her soul is formidable, reading speed is nothing less than scary, one hour can look at more than 1 million characters, the work of three big god only took three hours to look at seven 7~8 eight. 她的灵魂强大,阅读速度不可谓不吓人,一小时就可以看1000000多字,三本大神之作仅需三个小时就看得七七八八了。 She only looked at the refreshed earlier period to be unable to continue watching, following usually wrote lost control chaotically, did not need to look again. 她只看了爽快的中前期就看不下去了,后面的通常都写乱了失控了,也就无需再看下去。 „How? What has to feel?” “如何？有什么感受吗？” The Li Jiayu eye braves bright light: „Originally this is crisp article...... Really pretty good, but if only this degree of words, I can also try!” 李佳玉眼冒精光:“原来这就是爽文啊……果然不赖,但如果只是这种程度的话,我也可以试试的！” „Trial?” “试？” „Un, recommends my some crisp articles again, tonight looks at all the way, tomorrow I will open write, I do not write the oppressive article, I must write one dragon arrogant day legend of able to move unhindered in Apocalypse!” “嗯,再推荐我一些爽文,今晚看个够,明天我就开写,我不写虐文,我要写一本在末世中纵横的龙傲天传奇！” That night, Li Jiayu does not sleep, upturns to read the crisp article that Lin Jia recommends in the network, derives the essence fast, lets her elementary student style rapid evolution transformation...... 当夜,李佳玉根本就不睡觉,在网络上翻看着林嘉推荐的爽文,快速地汲取精华,让她的小学生文笔迅速进化蜕变…… Next day, Li Jiayu has studied similarly, pā pā pā starts to write «Dragon of Lin Jia's notebook Aotian Legend her Apocalypse», the lead calls Dragon Aotian, unbearably vulgar, does not endure to look straight ahead!( To be continued..) 第二天,李佳玉就已经学习得差不多了,啪啪啪地用林嘉的笔记本开始写她的《末世之龙傲天传奇》,主角就叫龙傲天,俗不可耐,不忍直视！(未完待续。。)