After He Yun Xiao hides the chivalric fiction novel that Fan Zi weak cannot read, is eased. 何云霄把范梓弱不能看的武侠小说藏起来后一身轻松。 The Fan Zi weak power of observation, He Yun Xiao knows. 范梓弱的观察力,何云霄是知道的。 Oneself had so many, several to her, are not only easy to make her suspect. Had the suspicion to have not to trust, has not to trust to fall the sensitivity. 自己带了这么多本,独独有几本不给她,非常容易引她怀疑。有了怀疑就有了不信任,有了不信任就得掉好感度。 But good sensitivity life! 好感度可是命啊！ The poor lives of two people. 还是两个人的小命。 Now, the book hid, the life preserved. 现在,书藏好了,命保住了。 Comfortable. 舒坦。 The chivalric fiction novel that three Fan Zi weak cannot read, has the good point in the movement description, very vivid vivid and live color unrefined resin. Discarded is a pity. After the He Yun Xiao preparation ended the learn/study of Fan Residence at noon, in the neutral gear of going home eating meal, dawdles under the fruit tree secretly, digs to bring back to the family/home to go the novel again. 那三本范梓弱不能看的武侠小说,在动作描写上颇有可取之处,非常生动形象、活色生香。丢掉太可惜了。何云霄准备中午结束范府的学习后,在回家吃饭的空档,偷偷遛来果树下,把小说再挖出来带回家去。 In Qi, the book was also the luxury goods, even if did not look, cleaning up was still very cost-effective, cannot waste. 在齐国,书还属于奢侈品,就算不看,擦屁股也是很划算的,可不能浪费。 He Yun Xiao arrives at the Fan Residence study room familiar and easy, unsurprisingly, Fan Zi has sat to wait for him before the table weakly. 何云霄轻车熟路地来到范府书房,不出意外,范梓弱已经在桌前坐好等着他了。 The He Yun Xiao politeness knocks on a door, the politeness enters the room. 何云霄礼貌敲门,礼貌进屋。 „Chinese catalpa is weak, morning.” “梓弱,早。” Fan Zi sets out from the chair weakly, salutes to say to He Yun Xiao leisurely: „He child, good morning.” 范梓弱从椅子上起身,向何云霄款款行礼道:“何公子,早上好。” He Yun Xiao as before, sits in the desk takes to publish books. 何云霄像以前一样,坐在书桌边拿出书。 Fan Zi looks at him to bustle about weakly, said unknowingly: „Last night when young master remembers walked, can me say what?” 范梓弱看他忙碌,不经意地说:“公子想起昨晚走时,要对我说什么了吗？” He Yun Xiao with the movement of book, careful recollection then wants to say anything. Detects the head air-to-air, anything cannot think. 何云霄拿书的动作顿了一下,仔细回忆当时的自己想说什么。发觉脑袋空空,什么也想不起来。 He wants to make up wild stories subconsciously, suddenly matter that actually thinks of the Nanzhu wife. 他下意识地想要胡诌,却猛然想到南珠老婆的事情。 The Nanzhu wife one made up wild stories by him for making up not to have. 南珠老婆就是被他一顿胡诌给诌没的。 He Yun Xiao cancelled the thought of making up wild stories, said with a smile sincerely: „Is sorry the Chinese catalpa to be weak, I have not thought.” 何云霄打消了胡诌的念头,真诚笑道:“抱歉梓弱,我还是没想起来。” Fan Zi is weak, although wants to know that time, He Yun Xiao actually wants to say anything, but she not only sensible, and has the cardinal principles in mind, naturally cannot care these minor matters. 范梓弱虽然想知道那时候,何云霄到底想说什么,但她既懂事,又识大体,自然不会把这些小事放在心上。 Nods, said that sound „being all right”, is not then puzzled. 点了点头,说声“没事”,便不纠结了。 He Yun Xiao oneself martial arts this/Ben who collects from the He Residence study room, piles with the chivalric fiction novel on the table, is thinking how to give to find the excuse to send to Fan Zi weakly, may not have he to find out the reason, Fan Zi actually first gives the thing that He Yun Xiao may look at weakly. 何云霄把自己从何府书房搜罗来的武功图本,和武侠小说堆在桌上,想着怎么给找理由给范梓弱送去,可没等他想出理由,范梓弱却先给了何云霄一个可看的东西。 One stack of manuscript paper. 一沓稿纸。 „Young master, Chinese catalpa weak last night wrote newly.” “公子,梓弱昨晚新写的。” Fan Zi presents manuscript paper both hands weakly to He Yun Xiao, the vision a little dodges, cheeks slightly red, shames intent. 范梓弱把稿纸双手奉给何云霄,目光有点闪躲,脸颊微红,略带羞意。 He Yun Xiao looks at this, yesterday when remembers bid good-bye, she truly is said that must rewrite the new novel. Also looked at this thick one pack of manuscript paper, in the He Yun Xiao heart expressed admiration secretly. 何云霄看她这样子,想起昨天分手时,她确实是说要重写新的小说。又看了看这厚厚一叠稿纸,何云霄心中暗暗称奇。 The action of this model/pattern miss is really high, said that writes writes, but how also wrote many. 这范姑娘的行动力真高啊,说写就写,还写了怎么多。 The He Yun Xiao character, is always „the graciousness of water drop, the spring reports”, Fan Zi is weak, since double hands over the novel to him, he then have no reason non- both hands to meet. 何云霄的性格,一向是“滴水之恩,涌泉相报”,范梓弱既然双手递小说给他,那他便没有理由不双手去接。 He Yun Xiao takes out the handkerchief to scour both hands especially, then, receives the Fan Zi weak manuscript paper with both hands respectfully. 何云霄特地取出手绢擦净双手,然后恭恭敬敬地,用双手把范梓弱的稿纸接下。 Others respect your hobby, most can rise the sensitivity. 别人尊重你的爱好,是最能涨好感度的了。 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 66 to become 68】 【范梓弱好感度由66变为68】 „Is the Chinese catalpa asks the young master to look weakly, the young master does not need like this.” “是梓弱请公子看,公子不必这样的。” Fan Zi sees He Yun Xiao to attach great importance to weakly like this, although at heart happy, but makes noise to urge. 范梓弱见何云霄这样重视,心里虽然开心,但还是出声劝道。 He Yun Xiao asked: „Was just wrote last night?” 何云霄问道:“是昨晚刚写的吗？” „Un.” “嗯。” „That said, I am first look?” “那这么说,我是第一个看的了？” „Yes.” “是的。” He Yun Xiao has the type to feel strangely. He bullies Fan Zi to understand weakly few, then the probe asked: „That Chinese catalpa weak first time, did I take away?” 何云霄有种怪怪地感觉。他欺负范梓弱懂得少,便试探问道:“那梓弱的第一次,我就拿去了？” Fan Zi thinks certainly what weakly He Yun Xiao said is the novel, therefore nods to say earnestly: „Un. The young master takes away.” 范梓弱当然以为何云霄说的是小说,于是认真点头道:“嗯。公子拿去吧。” Looks at the Fan Zi weak solemn beautiful appearance, listening to her to say this words. 看着范梓弱端庄美丽的样子,听着她说出这种话。 He Yun Xiao is a little excited. In various significances. 何云霄有点激动。各种意义上的。 Hiss...... 嘶…… Difficult top...... 难顶…… Good sensitivity many...... 68...... quick...... 好感度多少了……68了……快了快了…… Nuclear power farming...... 核动力耕地…… The train of thought almost runs up to cannot the examining place, 思绪差点跑到不能过审的地方, He Yun Xiao has to recycle the mind hastily, holds Fan Zi weakly to his new novel, looked every single word or phrase. First looked began 200 characters, un, is story that female military must kill male military. 何云霄只好连忙回收心神,捧着范梓弱给他的新小说,一字一句地看了起来。先看了开头二百字,嗯,是一个女武者要杀一个男武者的故事。 He Yun Xiao holds the draft, looked at Fan Zi weak one secretly. 何云霄捧着稿子,偷偷瞄了范梓弱一眼。 Does she always want to kill the man? 她怎么老是想杀男人啊？ Won't have that tendency? 不会有那种倾向吧？ Should not, if there are, the system will write in the character. 不应该呀,要是有,系统会在性格里写的。 Fan Zi has waited for He Yun Xiao to give her weakly anxiously the impressions of after-reading, in seeing He Yun Xiao looks at her secretly, but after does not read the novel, then felt not a little wonderful. 范梓弱一直紧张地等着何云霄给她读后感,在看到何云霄偷偷看她,而不看小说之后,便感到有点不妙。 „Young master had what issue to say.” “公子有什么问题都可以说的。” Was peeped by the Fan Zi weak discovery, He Yun Xiao takes back the vision hastily. 被范梓弱发现偷看,何云霄连忙收回目光。 „Un. At present fortunately, I have a look again.” “嗯。目前还好,我再看看。” Good ghost! 好个鬼！ What this writes is what thing? 这写的是什么东西？ From the beginning is two people fights, the time, background, motive and character had not confessed! 一开始就是两人打架,时间、背景、动机、人物一个都没交代！ This I looked that a hammer I look! 这我看个锤子我看！ Possibly is because yesterday's practicing martial arts was effective, Fan Zi truly was weakly more exquisite in the description in fighting aspect. 可能是因为昨天的练武有效,范梓弱确实在打斗方面的描写更细腻了一些。 Also on this merit. 也就这一个优点了。 He Yun Xiao continues to bear the temper to look downward, after all is the novel of friend, must look to give an appraisal. If this net article, kindly gave her on a big withdrawal key early. The watching trace will not stay behind. 何云霄继续耐着性子往下看,毕竟是朋友的小说,总得看完给个评价。这要是网文,老早就一个大大的退出键赏给她了。连一点观看的痕迹都不会留下。 He Yun Xiao keeps cool to look, more looks more does not have the patience, in brief, the following plot these two people are fighting. 何云霄耐住性子看着,越看越没耐心,总而言之,后面的剧情还是这两个人在打架。 Because of without the confession the reason of time, place, character and motive, the plot that this fights, although the style draws fully, the description is in place, but is a substitution feeling does not have. The two people in novel, do not have the mood resonance with the reader, can be said as is defeated very much. 因为没有交代时间、地点、人物、动机的原因,这打架的情节虽然文笔拉满,描述到位,但就是一点代入感都没有。小说中的两人,与读者没有情绪共鸣,已经可以说是很失败了。 Is good because of the Fan Zi weak put flowers in hair on hat small is very delicate and pretty, style shows the man, many disaffection of sweeping off the He Yun Xiao heart. 好在范梓弱的簪花小楷还是非常俊美的,字如其人,多少扫去了何云霄心头的不满。 One page looks, He Yun Xiao opens the manuscript paper, when looks next page, discovered that did not have...... 一页看完,何云霄翻开稿纸,去看下一页时,发现没了…… One page of you give me that thick one pack of manuscript paper to do...... 只有一页你给我那么厚的一叠稿纸干嘛…… He Yun Xiao realizes a very serious matter. 何云霄意识到一件挺严重的事情。 „Chinese catalpa is weak, you write this page of novels, how long spent?” “梓弱,你写这一页小说,花了多长时间？” „Two double-hour.” “两个时辰。” He Yun Xiao:...... 何云霄:…… Four hours wrote more than 1000 characters, this...... 四个小时写了一千多字,这…… He Yun Xiao stopped own net Wen Siwei immediately, he considers as finished secretly, this speed, in writing the author of entity book, is actually quick. 何云霄立马停止了自己的网文思维,他暗暗算了一下,这个速度,在写实体书的作者中,其实算是蛮快的。 The Fan Zi weak shortcoming, He Yun Xiao has known actually. 范梓弱的缺点,何云霄其实一直都知道。 To put it bluntly, is she will not tell the story. 说白了,就是她不会讲故事。 Does not give the reader to confess that in the story the need information, the plot does not have fluctuating wait/etc major collections of problems. The simple summary, will not tell the story. 不给读者交代故事里需要的信息,剧情没有起伏等等一大堆问题。简单的总结下来,就是不会讲故事。 However thinks Fan Zi now, the hard-won 68 good sensitivities, the criticism words of He Yun Xiao mouth, always also say weakly. 但是一想到范梓弱现在,来之不易的68好感度,何云霄嘴里的批评话语,就总也说不出口。 He Yun Xiao knows, some words did not say, she will not understand. However, price to be honest, but 68 good sensitivities that thinks of every means to obtain! 何云霄知道,有些话不说出来,她是不会明白的。但是,说实话的代价,可是费尽心思才得到的68好感度啊！ He Yun Xiao hesitated. 何云霄犹豫了。 He thinks, said simply the lie is coaxing her, after coaxing to 80 good sensitivities, is telling her the truth...... 他想,干脆说假话哄着她,哄到80好感度以后在把实话告诉她…… But this idea is overruled by He Yun Xiao immediately. 但这想法立刻就被何云霄自己否决了。 The mother egg, do I want to play this move? Thinks how the Nanzhu wife does not have! 妈蛋,我怎么又想玩这一招？想想南珠老婆是怎么没的！ „Young master.” Looks that He Yun Xiao hesitates there, Fan Zi weak many can also guess correctly. “公子。”看着何云霄在那里犹豫,范梓弱多少也能猜到一些。 „Young master, the Chinese catalpa knew weakly.” “公子,梓弱知道了。” He Yun Xiao is surprised the different way: „What did you know?” 何云霄诧异道:“你知道什么了？” „My novel, writes not well.” “我的小说,写得不好。” He Yun Xiao does not plan to walk to deceive the old route of little miss, had the Nanzhu wife's education, he has known thoroughly wrong. 何云霄不打算走骗小姑娘的老路,有了南珠老婆的教育,他已经彻底知错了。 Puts down the manuscript paper in hand, He Yun Xiao asks: „You know where writes not well?” 放下手中的稿纸,何云霄问道:“你知道,哪里写得不好吗？” The Fan Zi weak hand intertwines on the table mutually, but on the face said, „looks at young master’s appearance, starts to speak but hesitates. If there is a shortcoming, the young master will not hesitate probably like this. Therefore, my novel, where is not likely good.” 范梓弱的手在桌子上互相纠结,但脸上却笑着说,“看公子的样子,欲言又止。如果只有一点缺点,公子大概不会这样犹豫。所以,我的小说,很可能是哪里都不好。” He Yun Xiao is sighing at heart. 何云霄在心里叹了口气。 Has saying that the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister was too intelligent. 不得不说,梓弱妹妹还是太聪明了。 This truly is the idea of He Yun Xiao, but he has reneged now. 这确实是何云霄的想法,但他现在已经变卦了。 He Yun Xiao puts out a hand, holds the Fan Zi weak puzzled small hand on the table, the imposing vision is looking straight ahead her eye. 何云霄伸手,在桌上抓住范梓弱纠结的小手,凛然的目光直视着她的眼睛。 „Chinese catalpa is weak, so long as I you told me a matter, you wrote the novel time happy?” “梓弱,我只要你告诉我一件事,你写小说的时候开心吗？” Fan Zi most knows weakly the men and women give and receive do not kiss, she is not certainly willing He Yun Xiao to grab her hand, but He Yun Xiao looks that now her vision is warm like the winter, is rich in the strength warm, one made her forget the movement. 范梓弱是最知道男女授受不亲的,她当然不愿何云霄抓着她的手,只是现在何云霄看她的目光如同冬日暖阳,温暖又富有力量,一下让她忘记了动作。 Facing the He Yun Xiao issue, she replied subconsciously: „Un, happy.” 面对何云霄的问题,她下意识地答道:“嗯,开心。” „Chinese catalpa is weak, believes me. Do not care about others' view, so long as you can be happy, your novel is best!” “梓弱,相信我。不要去在乎别人的看法,只要你能开心,那你的小说就是最好的！” 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 68 to become 73】 【范梓弱好感度由68变为73】