After having eaten meal, He Yun Xiaoreviewedmet the martial artsstyle, was supposingwas similar. Thenstartsto go to the study roomlearn/study of Fan Residenceagain.
吃过饭后,何云霄温习了一会武功招式,估摸着差不多了。便再次启程去范府的书房学习。Young ladyFan Zi of Fan Residenceoftendoes not go outweakly.
范府的小姐范梓弱是不常出去的。
The abatementpure brightness, will certainly go tooutside the cityevery year, before mother'sgrave, worships. Othertimes , when only thenoccasionalsituation, whilebelowlight rain, rides the carriage, goes toBuddhist temple outside a city.
除却每年清明,一定会去城外,母亲的坟前祭拜。其他时候,也只有偶尔的情况,会趁着下小雨时,乘马车,去一趟城外的佛寺。
As for whywhilebelowlight raingoes out, is about becauseFan Ziweakunhappynoisy, when raining the personis little peaceful. Raining hardis not convenient, therefore when only thenunderlight raingoes out.
至于为什么会趁着下小雨时出去,大约是因为范梓弱不喜吵闹,下雨时人少安静而已。下大雨则不方便了,于是只有下小雨时出去。He Yun Xiaothistimearrives at the Fan Residencestudy room, in the study roomwas not a person.何云霄这次来到范府书房,书房里就不是一个人了。Fan Ziweaklyalsoinformerposition, peaceful, butherside, younger sisterDu who thenanotherbeautiful woman, He Yun Xiaoharbors intentions, Du Yinyun.范梓弱还在从前的位置,安而她的旁边,则还有另一位美女,何云霄心心念念的杜妹妹,杜音韵。younger sisterDuoutsidein the personeyes, is always faint, aloof, is unhappyhappily chats.
杜妹妹在外人眼中,一向是淡漠、高冷,不喜言笑的。Her„does not likespeakingyesInot to likeyou, youdon'tclose tome ” does not likespeaking.
她的“不爱说话”是“我不喜欢你,你别靠近我”的不爱说话。ButFan Ziweak„does not likespeaking”is„sorry, who is it”does not likespeaking.
而范梓弱的“不爱说话”则是“对不起,请问你是谁”的不爱说话。Oneis the living persondo not enter, oneispeacefultranquil.
一个是生人勿进,一个是安静恬适。Naturally, the Du Yinyunliving persondo not enter„living person”, the concreteexplanationis„personbesidesHe Yun Xiao”. Saidliterally, to be weakincludinghergoodsistersFan Zi.
当然,杜音韵生人勿进中的“生人”,具体解释就是“除了何云霄以外的人”。不夸张地说,也包括她的好姐妹范梓弱。He Yun Xiaoestimated,whatperhapsFan Zihas not even seenyounger sisterDuweakly the truecharacteris.何云霄估计,恐怕连范梓弱都没见过杜妹妹真正的性格是什么样的。In order toprotectthatis laborious the 50goodsensitivities of weaklyfromFan Zicoming, the He Yun Xiaochoicestands the study roomentrance, knocks on a doorwell-mannered, after entering the room, well-manneredtotwogirlsgives regards.
为了保护从范梓弱那辛苦得来的50好感度,何云霄选择站到书房门口,彬彬有礼地敲门,进屋后,又彬彬有礼地向二位姑娘问好。Du YinyunsawHe Yun Xiaoto come, knows that theymuststart„learn/study”, thenlet the desk, set outto say goodbye.杜音韵见何云霄来了,知道他们要开始“学习”,便把书桌让了出来,起身告辞。Fan Ziweak does not hate the younger sisterto walk, butthinks that the Du Yinyuntemper, shewill not liketreatingwithHe Yun Xiaoin the same place, thereforehas not made noiseto detain.范梓弱是舍不得好妹妹走的,但想到杜音韵的性子,想必她不会喜欢和何云霄待在一起,于是也没有出声挽留。He Yun Xiaodoes not hateDu Yinyunto walk, sheremains, could not say that canlook likeprevioustimeresemblesinJiang Wuyouthere, underherpresentSister Faneyeshide, playssomefunthings.何云霄也舍不得杜音韵走,她留下来,说不得可以像上次在姜无忧那里似的,在她现在的范姐姐眼皮子底下,玩些好玩的事情。Althoughdoes not give up, maybe inFan Residence, after all is the guest, proposed that the strangerequestwill be weary, He Yun Xiaointendsto guarantee the Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivity, thereforehas not made noiseto retainyounger sisterDu.
虽不舍得,可身在范府,毕竟是客,提出奇怪的要求会惹人厌烦,何云霄有意保范梓弱的好感度,于是没有出声留住杜妹妹。Right now, in the study roomonlyremainedtwopeople.
这下子,书房里又只剩两个人了。WhatFan Zisettlesweaklyas usualandprevioustimeis different, thistime, shedoes not haveto look at the weaponillustrated handbookagain, buttraded a history bookto come to see.范梓弱像往常一样安和上次不同的是,这次,她没有再看兵器图鉴,而是换了一本史书来看。He Yun Xiaolooks at the Fan Ziweakthisstance, knows that isunderstands that shepreparesto write the novel, does not know that thinksshemustpublish the paper.何云霄看范梓弱这架势,知道的,是明白她准备写小说,不知道的,以为她要发论文。He Yun Xiaois readingpretentiously, actually the corner of the eyehas stared atFan Zito be weak.何云霄装模作样地看着书,其实眼角一直盯着身旁的范梓弱。Sure enough, Fan Ziputs down the chivalric fiction novelweakly, after taking up the history book, watched a meeting, suddenlylayon the tablefalls asleep.
果不其然,范梓弱放下武侠小说,拿起史书之后,看了一会,忽然趴在桌上睡着了。Had the previousexperience, He Yun XiaoknowsFan Zijustawokeweakly, will be very blurry, henaturallycannotmissthisopportunity.
有了上次的经验,何云霄知道范梓弱刚醒的时候,会特别迷糊,他自然不会错过这个机会。Waited forFan Zito sleep soundlyespeciallyweakly, He Yun Xiaoput out a handto pushher.
特地等范梓弱睡熟了,何云霄伸手推了推她。„Chinese catalpaweakmiss? Chinese catalpaweakyounger sister? The Chinese catalpaweakyounger sisterawakes.”
“梓弱姑娘?梓弱妹妹?梓弱妹妹醒一醒。”
The Fan Ziweaksleepy eyesraised the headdimly.范梓弱睡眼朦胧地抬起头。„Wú~who are you?”
“唔~你是谁呀?”„IamHe Yun Xiao, the cleverChinese catalpaweakbringsto givemeto have a look the novel that oneselfwrite, is good?”
“我是何云霄,乖梓弱把自己写的小说拿来给我看看,好不好?”„Good.”
“好呀。”Fan Zisets outfrom the deskweakly, arrives at the bookshelfvivaciously, opens a box, takes out the manuscript paper,...... is then in-situ.范梓弱从书桌上起身,蹦蹦跳跳地走到书架边上,打开一个盒子,从中取出稿纸,然后……然后愣在原地。He Yun Xiaolooks atherto be shocked, the heartsaid: Went bad, woke.何云霄看她愣住,心道:坏了,醒过来了。Hesets outimmediately, saidhastily: „Chinese catalpaweakmiss, how did youstandare being motionless?”
他立刻起身,连忙道:“梓弱姑娘,你怎么站着不动了?”Fan Ziweakalsowondervery much, hersensory memoryfragment. Oneselfarrived at the bookshelfa moment agoobviouslysuddenly, suddenlygives the chivalric fiction novel that oneselfdid writesecretlywith?范梓弱自己也很纳闷,她感觉记忆断片了。自己刚才明明怎么忽然就走到书架边上,忽然就把自己偷偷写的武侠小说给拿出来了?Sheisplansto write the chivalric fiction novel,
她是打算写武侠小说,
After writing, plannedto publish books. But the half-finished product and end productare not a matter.
写成之后,也打算出书。可是半成品和成品不是一回事的。
The half-finished productregarding the author, does not seemto wear the clothes, withoutputting on the thing of clothes, howcanlooktootherscasually?
半成品对于作者来说,就好像没穿衣服,没穿衣服的东西,怎么能随便给别人看?Sheis preparingto put the novel.
她正准备把小说放回去。He Yun Xiaois not willingto missthischance of a lifetime!何云霄可不愿错过这个千载难逢的机会!Mustthink the meansto makehersend the noveltomelooks! In this case, wehad the commonsecret!
得想办法让她把小说送来给我看!这样的话,我们就有共同的秘密了!Oncetwo peoplehave the commonhobby, withcommonsecret, then the relations, will progressveryquickly.
两人一旦有共同的爱好,和共同的秘密,那么彼此之间的关系,就会进展得非常快。He Yun Xiaosaid: „Chinese catalpaweakmiss, youarefeared that Ido publicizeeverywhere?”何云霄道:“梓弱姑娘,你是怕我到处宣扬吗?”
The Fan Ziweakdoubtssaid: „Feared that whatyoudo publicize?”范梓弱疑惑道:“怕你宣扬什么?”He Yun Xiaosaid: „Relax. The girlsare willingto read the noveltome, Iwill naturally keep secretfor the miss.”何云霄道:“放心吧。姑娘愿意给我看小说,我自然会替姑娘保密。”Fan Ziasked backweakly: „Do Iwant?”范梓弱反问道:“我愿意?”He Yun Xiaosaidnaturally: „Yes. Otherwise, whom does the misstaketo giveto look the novel?”何云霄理所当然地说:“是啊。不然,姑娘把小说拿出来给谁看呢?”Fan Ziknits the browsweakly the recollection, cannot think, oneselfcomplyto giveHe Yun Xiaoto read the novel.范梓弱皱眉回忆,怎么也想不起来,自己答应给何云霄看小说。He Yun Xiaopretendsto lose, regrets saying: „Oh, Ithink that canappreciateto the work of miss, what a pity the missrenegestemporarily, wasHefuis thin.”何云霄假装失落,惋惜道:“唉,我原以为能欣赏到姑娘的作品,可惜姑娘临时变卦,是何某福薄了。”Fan Ziis weak: „I......”范梓弱:“我……”He Yun Xiaosaid: „AlsostrangeHe can only selectmartial arts, will not write an article, cannotgive the Chinese catalpa the weakmiss, even if a suggestion.”何云霄紧接着道:“也怪何某只会点武功,不会写文章,不能给梓弱姑娘哪怕一点建议。”Fan Zionlyremembersweaklyownanythinghas not done, actuallydoes not know why in the suddenheartraisesto the He Yun Xiaoguiltysentiment. Sheundera few wordsbyHe Yun Xiaowas reminded, understands, He Yun Xiaomeetsmartial arts, canseeinownnovel, careless mistakeaboutmartial arts.范梓弱只记得自己什么也没做,却不知为何突然心中升起对何云霄的愧疚之情。她被何云霄下一段话点醒,明白过来,何云霄是会武功的,想必能看出自己小说中的,关于武术方面的纰漏。Hadthesetwo, shedefeatedashamed in heartfinally, „has not wornclothes”half-finished productnovel, handed overin the hand of He Yun Xiao.
有了这两条,她终于战胜了心中的羞耻,把“没穿衣服”的半成品小说,交到了何云霄的手上。He Yun Xiaomeetsinseveralvolumes of manuscript paper the handearnestly, thentook up the chivalric fiction novel that Fan Ziwroteweaklyto lookearnestly.何云霄非常认真地把几卷稿纸接到手里,然后非常认真地拿起范梓弱写的武侠小说看了起来。Fan Zisitsin the one sideweakly, looks atHe Yun Xiaoeagerly.范梓弱就坐在一旁,眼巴巴地看着何云霄。【The Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivityby50to become60】
【范梓弱好感度由50变为60】【The Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivityby60to become40】
【范梓弱好感度由60变为40】【The Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivityby40to become45】
【范梓弱好感度由40变为45】
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……He Yun Xiaolookednoveltimelooked atseveralFan Zito be weaksecretly, althoughin the complexioncould not look, but the listfromthisradicalgoodsensitivitychange, to detect, thismissreallyembarrassed.何云霄看小说的时候偷偷瞄了几眼范梓弱,虽然面色上看不出来,但单从这剧烈的好感度变化,就能发觉,这姑娘是真的不好意思。Takesto giveothersto look the half-finished product, aroused the courage.
把半成品拿出去给别人看,也是鼓足了勇气的。He Yun Xiaocanunderstandthisfeeling, heasoldbookworm, there are the thought of writing the novel, is thinkingbookto becomeGod. What a pity the realitytoldhim, hewas onlyalwaysthrows the street. Eveneven/includingthrows the street is not, can only be„oldcourt eunuch”.何云霄能理解这种感觉,他身为老书虫,也有写小说的念头,想着一书成神。可惜现实告诉他,他只是个老扑街而已。甚至连老扑街都算不上,只能算是“老太监”。Juststartedto sendseveral days of book, helooked at the commentaryareadaily, looksreadertohisappraisal. Afterward, lookeda lot, became the slippery customer, dead pig is not afraid of boiling water, said the court eunuchon the court eunuch.
刚开始发书的那几天,他天天去看评论区,去看读者给他的评价。后来,看得多了,就成了老油子,死猪不怕开水烫,说太监就太监。
The Fan Ziweakthisnovel, with the readingexperience of He Yun Xiaooldbookworm, and crude personnetarticlewritingexperience, can only summarizeisfourcharacters: The literary talentis striking.范梓弱这篇小说,以何云霄多年老书虫的阅读经验,以及半吊子网文写作经历,只能总结为四个字:过于文采斐然。Is the literary talentis really striking!
真的就是过于文采斐然!
Many word usages of thisnovel, He Yun Xiaocannot understand, althoughhecannot understand, butdoes not hinderhimfromfeeling, can write, writesmagnificentlyexquisitely.
这小说的很多用词,何云霄都看不懂,他虽然看不懂,但是不妨碍他从心里觉得,写得好,写得华丽优美。Eachsegmentwordsarethis.
每段话都是这样。Eachsmall, is a chapter of attractivearticle.
每一小篇,都是一章漂亮的文章。Butisgathersto look,is very strange.
但就是合起来看,很怪。Cannot touch on slightlywith the chivalric fiction novelleast bit.
和武侠小说半点都沾不上边。He Yun Xiaodoes not know how shouldappraise, in brief: IfFan Ziweakbywriting the noveleats meal, evenhercapacity for foodis not big, must starve to death.何云霄不知道该怎么评价,总之:假如范梓弱靠写小说吃饭的话,即便她饭量不大,也得饿死。In the vision of Fan Ziweakanticipation, He Yun Xiaoturnsto the lastpageslowly, puts down the novelslowly.
在范梓弱期待的目光中,何云霄缓缓翻到最后一页,缓缓放下小说。
His facesaidtoFan Zisolemnly and respectfullyweakly: „Chinese catalpaweakmiss. Yourthisnovel, reallywriteswell! Tooattractive!”
他一脸肃穆地对范梓弱说:“梓弱姑娘。你这小说,写得真好!太好看了!”【The Fan Ziweakgoodsensitivityby45to become65】
【范梓弱好感度由45变为65】
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