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#82: Too attractive


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After having eaten meal, He Yun Xiao reviewed met the martial arts style, was supposing was similar. Then starts to go to the study room learn/study of Fan Residence again. 吃过饭后,何云霄温习了一会武功招式,估摸着差不多了。便再次启程去范府的书房学习。 Young lady Fan Zi of Fan Residence often does not go out weakly. 范府的小姐范梓弱是不常出去的。 The abatement pure brightness, will certainly go to outside the city every year, before mother's grave, worships. Other times , when only then occasional situation, while below light rain, rides the carriage, goes to Buddhist temple outside a city. 除却每年清明,一定会去城外,母亲的坟前祭拜。其他时候,也只有偶尔的情况,会趁着下小雨时,乘马车,去一趟城外的佛寺。 As for why while below light rain goes out, is about because Fan Zi weak unhappy noisy, when raining the person is little peaceful. Raining hard is not convenient, therefore when only then under light rain goes out. 至于为什么会趁着下小雨时出去,大约是因为范梓弱不喜吵闹,下雨时人少安静而已。下大雨则不方便了,于是只有下小雨时出去。 He Yun Xiao this time arrives at the Fan Residence study room, in the study room was not a person. 何云霄这次来到范府书房,书房里就不是一个人了。 Fan Zi weakly also in former position, peaceful, but her side, younger sister Du who then another beautiful woman, He Yun Xiao harbors intentions, Du Yinyun. 范梓弱还在从前的位置,安而她的旁边,则还有另一位美女,何云霄心心念念的杜妹妹,杜音韵 younger sister Du outside in the person eyes, is always faint, aloof, is unhappy happily chats. 杜妹妹在外人眼中,一向是淡漠、高冷,不喜言笑的。 Her does not like speaking yes I not to like you, you don't close to medoes not like speaking. 她的“不爱说话”是“我不喜欢你,你别靠近我”的不爱说话。 But Fan Zi weak does not like speaking is sorry, who is it does not like speaking. 范梓弱的“不爱说话”则是“对不起,请问你是谁”的不爱说话。 One is the living person do not enter, one is peaceful tranquil. 一个是生人勿进,一个是安静恬适。 Naturally, the Du Yinyun living person do not enter living person, the concrete explanation is person besides He Yun Xiao. Said literally, to be weak including her good sisters Fan Zi. 当然,杜音韵生人勿进中的“生人”,具体解释就是“除了何云霄以外的人”。不夸张地说,也包括她的好姐妹范梓弱。 He Yun Xiao estimated, what perhaps Fan Zi has not even seen younger sister Du weakly the true character is. 何云霄估计,恐怕连范梓弱都没见过杜妹妹真正的性格是什么样的。 In order to protect that is laborious the 50 good sensitivities of weakly from Fan Zi coming, the He Yun Xiao choice stands the study room entrance, knocks on a door well-mannered, after entering the room, well-mannered to two girls gives regards. 为了保护从范梓弱那辛苦得来的50好感度,何云霄选择站到书房门口,彬彬有礼地敲门,进屋后,又彬彬有礼地向二位姑娘问好。 Du Yinyun saw He Yun Xiao to come, knows that they must start learn/study, then let the desk, set out to say goodbye. 杜音韵何云霄来了,知道他们要开始“学习”,便把书桌让了出来,起身告辞。 Fan Zi weak does not hate the younger sister to walk, but thinks that the Du Yinyun temper, she will not like treating with He Yun Xiao in the same place, therefore has not made noise to detain. 范梓弱是舍不得好妹妹走的,但想到杜音韵的性子,想必她不会喜欢和何云霄待在一起,于是也没有出声挽留。 He Yun Xiao does not hate Du Yinyun to walk, she remains, could not say that can look like previous time resembles in Jiang Wuyou there, under her present Sister Fan eyes hide, plays some fun things. 何云霄也舍不得杜音韵走,她留下来,说不得可以像上次在姜无忧那里似的,在她现在的范姐姐眼皮子底下,玩些好玩的事情。 Although does not give up, may be in Fan Residence, after all is the guest, proposed that the strange request will be weary, He Yun Xiao intends to guarantee the Fan Zi weak good sensitivity, therefore has not made noise to retain younger sister Du. 虽不舍得,可身在范府,毕竟是客,提出奇怪的要求会惹人厌烦,何云霄有意保范梓弱的好感度,于是没有出声留住杜妹妹。 Right now, in the study room only remained two people. 这下子,书房里又只剩两个人了。 What Fan Zi settles weakly as usual and previous time is different, this time, she does not have to look at the weapon illustrated handbook again, but traded a history book to come to see. 范梓弱像往常一样安和上次不同的是,这次,她没有再看兵器图鉴,而是换了一本史书来看。 He Yun Xiao looks at the Fan Zi weak this stance, knows that is understands that she prepares to write the novel, does not know that thinks she must publish the paper. 何云霄范梓弱这架势,知道的,是明白她准备写小说,不知道的,以为她要发论文。 He Yun Xiao is reading pretentiously, actually the corner of the eye has stared at Fan Zi to be weak. 何云霄装模作样地看着书,其实眼角一直盯着身旁的范梓弱。 Sure enough, Fan Zi puts down the chivalric fiction novel weakly, after taking up the history book, watched a meeting, suddenly lay on the table falls asleep. 果不其然,范梓弱放下武侠小说,拿起史书之后,看了一会,忽然趴在桌上睡着了。 Had the previous experience, He Yun Xiao knows Fan Zi just awoke weakly, will be very blurry, he naturally cannot miss this opportunity. 有了上次的经验,何云霄知道范梓弱刚醒的时候,会特别迷糊,他自然不会错过这个机会。 Waited for Fan Zi to sleep soundly especially weakly, He Yun Xiao put out a hand to push her. 特地等范梓弱睡熟了,何云霄伸手推了推她。 Chinese catalpa weak miss? Chinese catalpa weak younger sister? The Chinese catalpa weak younger sister awakes.” “梓弱姑娘?梓弱妹妹?梓弱妹妹醒一醒。” The Fan Zi weak sleepy eyes raised the head dimly. 范梓弱睡眼朦胧地抬起头。 ~ who are you?” “唔~你是谁呀?” I am He Yun Xiao, the clever Chinese catalpa weak brings to give me to have a look the novel that oneself write, is good?” “我是何云霄,乖梓弱把自己写的小说拿来给我看看,好不好?” Good.” “好呀。” Fan Zi sets out from the desk weakly, arrives at the bookshelf vivaciously, opens a box, takes out the manuscript paper,...... is then in-situ. 范梓弱从书桌上起身,蹦蹦跳跳地走到书架边上,打开一个盒子,从中取出稿纸,然后……然后愣在原地。 He Yun Xiao looks at her to be shocked, the heart said: Went bad, woke. 何云霄看她愣住,心道:坏了,醒过来了。 He sets out immediately, said hastily: Chinese catalpa weak miss, how did you stand are being motionless?” 他立刻起身,连忙道:“梓弱姑娘,你怎么站着不动了?” Fan Zi weak also wonder very much, her sensory memory fragment. Oneself arrived at the bookshelf a moment ago obviously suddenly, suddenly gives the chivalric fiction novel that oneself did write secretly with? 范梓弱自己也很纳闷,她感觉记忆断片了。自己刚才明明怎么忽然就走到书架边上,忽然就把自己偷偷写的武侠小说给拿出来了? She is plans to write the chivalric fiction novel, 她是打算写武侠小说, After writing, planned to publish books. But the half-finished product and end product are not a matter. 写成之后,也打算出书。可是半成品和成品不是一回事的。 The half-finished product regarding the author, does not seem to wear the clothes, without putting on the thing of clothes, how can look to others casually? 半成品对于作者来说,就好像没穿衣服,没穿衣服的东西,怎么能随便给别人看? She is preparing to put the novel. 她正准备把小说放回去。 He Yun Xiao is not willing to miss this chance of a lifetime! 何云霄可不愿错过这个千载难逢的机会! Must think the means to make her send the novel to me looks! In this case, we had the common secret! 得想办法让她把小说送来给我看!这样的话,我们就有共同的秘密了! Once two people have the common hobby, with common secret, then the relations, will progress very quickly. 两人一旦有共同的爱好,和共同的秘密,那么彼此之间的关系,就会进展得非常快。 He Yun Xiao said: Chinese catalpa weak miss, you are feared that I do publicize everywhere?” 何云霄道:“梓弱姑娘,你是怕我到处宣扬吗?” The Fan Zi weak doubts said: Feared that what you do publicize?” 范梓弱疑惑道:“怕你宣扬什么?” He Yun Xiao said: Relax. The girls are willing to read the novel to me, I will naturally keep secret for the miss.” 何云霄道:“放心吧。姑娘愿意给我看小说,我自然会替姑娘保密。” Fan Zi asked back weakly: „Do I want?” 范梓弱反问道:“我愿意?” He Yun Xiao said naturally: Yes. Otherwise, whom does the miss take to give to look the novel?” 何云霄理所当然地说:“是啊。不然,姑娘把小说拿出来给谁看呢?” Fan Zi knits the brows weakly the recollection, cannot think, oneself comply to give He Yun Xiao to read the novel. 范梓弱皱眉回忆,怎么也想不起来,自己答应给何云霄看小说。 He Yun Xiao pretends to lose, regrets saying: Oh, I think that can appreciate to the work of miss, what a pity the miss reneges temporarily, was He fu is thin.” 何云霄假装失落,惋惜道:“唉,我原以为能欣赏到姑娘的作品,可惜姑娘临时变卦,是何某福薄了。” Fan Zi is weak: I......” 范梓弱:“我……” He Yun Xiao said: Also strange He can only select martial arts, will not write an article, cannot give the Chinese catalpa the weak miss, even if a suggestion.” 何云霄紧接着道:“也怪何某只会点武功,不会写文章,不能给梓弱姑娘哪怕一点建议。” Fan Zi only remembers weakly own anything has not done, actually does not know why in the sudden heart raises to the He Yun Xiao guilty sentiment. She under a few words by He Yun Xiao was reminded, understands, He Yun Xiao meets martial arts, can see in own novel, careless mistake about martial arts. 范梓弱只记得自己什么也没做,却不知为何突然心中升起对何云霄的愧疚之情。她被何云霄下一段话点醒,明白过来,何云霄是会武功的,想必能看出自己小说中的,关于武术方面的纰漏。 Had these two, she defeated ashamed in heart finally, has not worn clothes half-finished product novel, handed over in the hand of He Yun Xiao. 有了这两条,她终于战胜了心中的羞耻,把“没穿衣服”的半成品小说,交到了何云霄的手上。 He Yun Xiao meets in several volumes of manuscript paper the hand earnestly, then took up the chivalric fiction novel that Fan Zi wrote weakly to look earnestly. 何云霄非常认真地把几卷稿纸接到手里,然后非常认真地拿起范梓弱写的武侠小说看了起来。 Fan Zi sits in the one side weakly, looks at He Yun Xiao eagerly. 范梓弱就坐在一旁,眼巴巴地看着何云霄 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 50 to become 60 范梓弱好感度由50变为60】 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 60 to become 40 范梓弱好感度由60变为40】 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 40 to become 45 范梓弱好感度由40变为45】 ...... …… He Yun Xiao looked novel time looked at several Fan Zi to be weak secretly, although in the complexion could not look, but the list from this radical good sensitivity change, to detect, this miss really embarrassed. 何云霄看小说的时候偷偷瞄了几眼范梓弱,虽然面色上看不出来,但单从这剧烈的好感度变化,就能发觉,这姑娘是真的不好意思。 Takes to give others to look the half-finished product, aroused the courage. 把半成品拿出去给别人看,也是鼓足了勇气的。 He Yun Xiao can understand this feeling, he as old bookworm, there are the thought of writing the novel, is thinking book to become God. What a pity the reality told him, he was only always throws the street. Even even/including throws the street is not, can only be old court eunuch. 何云霄能理解这种感觉,他身为老书虫,也有写小说的念头,想着一书成神。可惜现实告诉他,他只是个老扑街而已。甚至连老扑街都算不上,只能算是“老太监”。 Just started to send several days of book, he looked at the commentary area daily, looks reader to his appraisal. Afterward, looked a lot, became the slippery customer, dead pig is not afraid of boiling water, said the court eunuch on the court eunuch. 刚开始发书的那几天,他天天去看评论区,去看读者给他的评价。后来,看得多了,就成了老油子,死猪不怕开水烫,说太监就太监。 The Fan Zi weak this novel, with the reading experience of He Yun Xiao old bookworm, and crude person net article writing experience, can only summarize is four characters: The literary talent is striking. 范梓弱这篇小说,以何云霄多年老书虫的阅读经验,以及半吊子网文写作经历,只能总结为四个字:过于文采斐然。 Is the literary talent is really striking! 真的就是过于文采斐然! Many word usages of this novel, He Yun Xiao cannot understand, although he cannot understand, but does not hinder him from feeling, can write, writes magnificently exquisitely. 这小说的很多用词,何云霄都看不懂,他虽然看不懂,但是不妨碍他从心里觉得,写得好,写得华丽优美。 Each segment words are this. 每段话都是这样。 Each small, is a chapter of attractive article. 每一小篇,都是一章漂亮的文章。 But is gathers to look, is very strange. 但就是合起来看,很怪。 Cannot touch on slightly with the chivalric fiction novel least bit. 和武侠小说半点都沾不上边。 He Yun Xiao does not know how should appraise, in brief: If Fan Zi weak by writing the novel eats meal, even her capacity for food is not big, must starve to death. 何云霄不知道该怎么评价,总之:假如范梓弱靠写小说吃饭的话,即便她饭量不大,也得饿死。 In the vision of Fan Zi weak anticipation, He Yun Xiao turns to the last page slowly, puts down the novel slowly. 范梓弱期待的目光中,何云霄缓缓翻到最后一页,缓缓放下小说。 His face said to Fan Zi solemnly and respectfully weakly: Chinese catalpa weak miss. Your this novel, really writes well! Too attractive!” 他一脸肃穆地对范梓弱说:“梓弱姑娘。你这小说,写得真好!太好看了!” 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 45 to become 65 范梓弱好感度由45变为65】
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