Chu Gealmostblurted outIwantisyou......楚戈差点脱口而出我想要的就是你啊……Had words on the tip of the tongueto swallowforcefully.
话到嘴边还是硬生生吞了回去。
The Qiu Wujicheekis actually thin, reallysaidthatthis saying to be not the matters of severaldurians, was not beaten to death.秋无际面皮其实薄着呢,真把这话说出来那就不是几个榴莲的事儿了,非被揍死不可。Everyone'srelationsare very strange, in the surfacetwo peoplewere togetherlive togethernoto distinguishwith the male and femalefriend, but was actually not, veryobviousamong was also away from a thickwall, wascross, but, thistype„the word of rashsexually harassing”is not daringeasilyto say.
大家的关系很奇怪,表面上两人相处得都跟男女朋友同居没什么区别了,但实际并不是,很明显中间还隔着一堵厚厚的墙,就是跨不过,连带着连这种“孟浪调戏之言”也不敢轻易说。Except thatdemonstratedthatlittle whileto brace oneselfto hug a waisttoGu Ruoyan, usually was really herhanddoes not dareto bump, wherehadsuchmale and femalefriend.
除了对顾若言示威那会儿硬着头皮搂了一下腰,平时真是连她的手都不敢碰,哪有这样的男女朋友。Chu Geis also thinking,sheeasilyentersthistype„living togethercondition”, except forthinks„broad-minded”beside, reallyhas the effect of those words?楚戈也不由在想,她那么轻易进入这种“同居状态”,除了自以为“光风霁月”之外,是不是真的有那句话的影响?But...... those words are just „, ifmustlooklooks forworld creating god”, cannotlook, is notfalls in love. Ifyoudo not wantto lookfrom the start, thatthis is completely an idle talk, can itsinfluencereallyachievethis?
可是……那句话只不过是“如果要找就找创世神”,并不是必须找,更不是爱上啊。如果你压根不想找,那这句就完全是句废话,它的影响真能达到这一步么?Thereforeyourperformanceis the influence of those words , because ofyour ownintention, orwasyoureallygot up„, ifmustlook for” did the thoughtsthereforecause those wordsto become effective...... youto obtainclear?
所以你的表现是那句话的影响,还是因为你自己的心意,抑或是你真的起了“如果要找”的心思所以导致那句话生效……你分得清么?Was, shecould not distinguish clearly.
是了,她分不清。Probably is a good deedcoming?
好像是件好事来着?Chu Gelooks up the dim light of night, suddenlysmiled: „I want...... previously, I said I wanted you to become an independent existence, now, perhaps I want to add half a sentence——and from beginning to end can appear so lively by my side.”楚戈抬头看着夜色,忽然笑了:“我想要的啊……以前说是想让你成为一个独立存在的人,现在或许要加半句——并且能始终如此鲜活地出现在我身边。”Qiu Wujiis somewhat surprisedinthisreply, the headis taking a look athim.秋无际有些惊讶于这个回答,偏着脑袋打量他。Chu Geturns the headto blink: „Don't wehaveto strollat night? Happen to the outstandingly able persondeliveredthisbackground, doesn't walk?”楚戈转头眨眨眼:“我们是不是没有夜间漫步过?正好奇人送上了这番背景,不走走?”Qiu Wujilosessays with a smile: „Zhang Qirenknowswill irritate, heandyousaid that propermatter, was painfulis aboutto cry, the you used it to pick up......”秋无际失笑道:“张奇人知道了是不是会气死,他和你说那么正经的事情,痛苦得都快哭了,然后你用来泡……”
The wordshad not said that interrupted, Qiu Wujiopens the headslightly, has not goneto look athim.
话没说完自己截断了,秋无际微微偏开脑袋,没去看他。„Yes.”Chu Gesaid: „picking up this phrase is not quite possibly of pleasant to hear, changes a word...... the gentle and graceful girl, the gentlemanquitegathers together, Chu Gewantsto gather togetherQiu Wuji, sheis notfirstgod knows.”
“是啊。”楚戈却道:“泡字可能不太好听,换个词……窈窕淑女,君子好逑,楚戈欲逑秋无际,她又不是第一天知道。”Qiu Wujistaredin a big way the eye: „You......”秋无际瞪大了眼睛:“你……”„Iamextreme pervert that paperman in a fantasyandbookis in love.”Chu Geproceedseasely: „Was always looking that papermandoes not give the opportunity.”
“我就是个幻想和自己书里的纸片人谈恋爱的死变态啊。”楚戈悠悠然地往前走:“从来都只是在看纸片人给不给机会而已。”Qiu Wujifuriously stomped her heels: „Iam notpaperman!”秋无际愤愤然跟了上去:“我不是纸片人!”„Shouldsay that yourmygoalis, no longerispaperman.”Chu Gesaid with a smile: „Perhapsnowdoes not consider as finished, en...... thatis notpaperman, doesn't give the opportunity?”
“应该说你我的目标都是,不再是纸片人。”楚戈笑道:“也许现在已经不太算了吧,嗯……那不是纸片人,给不给机会?”„Does not give!”Qiu Wujigets angry: „Lecher, extreme pervert! Wherehaspeople like you!”
“不给!”秋无际怒道:“登徒子,死变态!哪有你这样的人!”„Huu…… quieten a bit, quiet at dead of night, spokeabout the buildingto hear......”
“嘘……小声点,夜深人静,这么说话左右楼房都听见了……”Qiu Wujisaidloudly: „extreme pervert!”秋无际大声道:“死变态!”
The soundis bindingwith the supernatural power, delivers to hisearspecially.
声音用法力裹着,专门送到他耳朵里。Chu Gemuttered: „extreme tsundere.”楚戈咕哝:“死傲娇。”Qiu Wujiglowers.秋无际怒目而视。Chu Geactuallychanged the topic: „Yousaid that the outstandingly able personpain...... exactlyisbecausehisbitter experienceremindedme.”楚戈却转了话题:“你说奇人痛苦……恰恰是因为他的遭遇提醒了我。”Qiu Wujihas not kept up with the mentality, saidill-humoredly: „What?”秋无际没跟上思路,没好气道:“什么?”„Iam thinking, ifthathonestoutstandingly able person were not so initially shy, said something to smooth things overwithYue Yingdirectlyevenvindicated,story-telling sessionto have the differenttrends?”Chu Gelooks atmoon above heavento be bright, saidin a low voice: „Thereforeshouldsaysaid,whatsecretivedoesn't sendto miss...... likeshaving?”
“我在想,如果当初那个老实的奇人不那么腼腆的话,直接和月影搭讪甚至表白,故事会不会有不一样的走向?”楚戈看着天上的月亮,低声道:“所以该说就说,才不致错过……喜欢有什么不可告人?”Qiu Wujireallydoes not know that thissayingreplytois not right. Saidheto the words, are equal toapprovinghisvindicating?秋无际实在不知道这话该回答对还是不对。说他对的话,是不是等于认可他的表白?Thismattersowill be how troublesome, was more troublesome than cultivation.
这种事情怎么会这么麻烦的,比修行麻烦多了。Chu Gehas not continuedto speakfor a while, Qiu Wujiis smelly the faceto followsilentlyinside. At nightsilent, the lightsound of sound of footsteps of two peopleonspaciousavenue, probably every stepcantreadfluttering flags.楚戈也一时没继续说话,秋无际臭着脸默默跟在旁边。夜晚无声,只有两人的脚步声在空旷的大街上轻响,好像每一步都能踏出一声旖旎。single man and woman togetherissuchtroublesome, no mattermakesanything, can always voluntarilysomewhatnot be strange.孤男寡女就是这么麻烦,不管做些什么,总是能不自觉地就有些怪怪的。Walkscontinuallystrangely.
连走路都怪怪的。Qiu Wujia littlecannot receivefinally, opens the mouth saying: „Goes back, havinganythingis good.”秋无际终于有点受不住,还是开口道:“回去吧,有什么好走的。”„Whenaccompaniesmeto relax.”Chu Gesaidin a low voice: „Looks at the transformation of outstandingly able person, Iam somewhat depressed, actuallydoes not knowmentionsfrom where, relaxeswell. Yousaid that thisis the ordinary affairsis troubled, yes, is that Ihave not become an immortal.”
“就当陪我散心吧。”楚戈低声道:“看着奇人的转变,我有些发堵,却又不知从何说起,散散心也好。你说这是俗事纷扰,是,还是那句,我没成仙啊。”Qiu Wujisaid: „Mentioningyou is also very strange, inbook that youwrite, Zhang Qirensuchis very normal, perhaps some he can also makemain character. Youlook that the lifeis easy and comfortable, has the factor that cruelorrebels against, manifestsin the book.”秋无际道:“说来你们也挺奇怪的,你写的书里,张奇人这样的挺正常吧,说不定有一些他还能做主角。你们看着生活安逸祥和,却有暴戾或反叛的因子,在书中体现。”Chu Gewas startledbeing startled, losessays with a smile: „Perhaps. Now the onlinevicious tendenciesday by dayare also heavy, the novelis the realityprojection.”楚戈怔了怔,失笑道:“或许吧。现在网上戾气也一天比一天重,小说是现实投影。”Qiu Wujiseizes the chanceto pull backat the propermatter the atmosphere: „Iaskedwhatbeforeyouwantisanything, did not makeyousay the words of theselechers. In factwhatwantsto sayiswhat...... youwantsto create the world that is?”秋无际趁机把气氛拉回正经事上:“我之前问你想要的是什么,并不是让你说那些登徒子之言的。实际上想说的是……你想创造的世界是什么?”Chu Gelived in the footstepsslightly.楚戈微微顿住了脚步。Qiu Wujisaid: „Tosatisfyyourfantasize, there is a thing that wantsto pour out?”秋无际道:“只是为了满足你的意淫,还是有想要倾诉的东西?”Chu Gethought the period of timelost, shakes the head saying: „ReallywantsShuowenbyeverywhere along the road, thatdoes not have. Butifsaid that...... is also insufficientfor the fantasizebut actually. As a first thought of writer, at leastpresents the world in heart, listening tometo tell an interestingstory, the outstandingly able personalsosaid,showed the story in hearttoeveryoneis a verygoodmatter...... issuchimpulsionurgesusto open the documents, since was immersed, Ithought many writersynchronoushearts.”楚戈出神地想了好一阵子,摇头道:“真要说文以载道,那是没有的。但若说只是为了意淫……倒也不至于。作为一个写手的初心,至少是把心中的世界呈现出来,听我讲一个有趣的故事,奇人也说,把心中的故事展现给大家是一件很棒的事……就是这样的冲动驱使我们打开了文档,埋首至今,我想很多写手同此心。”Qiu Wujinodssaid: „Now?”秋无际颔首道:“现在呢?”„Now...... the pressure of lifehad bent, whatwantsto presentis onlyothers the story that likeslooking.”Chu Gesaid: „Are youurgingmeto retrieve the first thought?”
“现在啊……生活的压力早就把人压弯了,想要呈现的只是别人爱看的故事。”楚戈道:“你在劝我找回初心?”Qiu Wujisaid: „Whatwritesothers the story that likeslooking atto have is not right? How don't youmake moneyto raise itself...... live?”秋无际道:“写别人爱看的故事有什么不对?你不赚钱怎么养……活自己?”Chu Ge: „?”楚戈:“?”Qiu Wujisnorted: „Firstmakesyouchange the plotisI, thathasanythingat the worst.”秋无际“哼”了一声:“第一个让你改剧情的就是我自己,那有什么大不了的。”Chu Ge: „......”楚戈:“……”„Itoldyou, yourtruefirst thought that createsyourworld in the book, yourworldwas more plentifulfineis more real, wasgod of the even morequalifiedcreationworld. As forcanhaveunderthisworldplants the storyten million/countless, youselectedonenamedto come the key point that Chu Tiange the personexperiencedto tell, that is all.”
“我只是告诉你,你真正的初心,是创造你的书中世界,你的世界越丰满越精细越真实,才是一个越发合格的创世之神。至于在这个世界下可以有千万种故事,你不过是挑了一个叫楚天歌的人所经历的来重点讲述,仅此而已。”In the Chu Geheartmoves slightly, seems anythingto flash throughin the heart, the captureis not distinct.楚戈心中微动,似有什么在心中闪过,却捕捉不分明。Qiu Wujifaintly said: „Beforeyoutoldme, firsthad the characterto have the world, IandChu Tiangedid not have, the worldcollapsed, Ido not think that...... orpossiblyso farwasthis, youfirstthink the storyconstructed the worldagain. ButIthoughtwhatyoumustachieve, even ifIandChu Tiangedied, thatworldthatworld, bythat time, you is a god, but can Ihaveandhavewhatdifficultyindependently?”秋无际淡淡道:“以前你告诉我,先有人物才有世界,我和楚天歌没了,世界就崩了,我不这么认为……或者说,可能目前为止是这样,你是先想好故事再构建世界的。但我觉得你要做到的是,哪怕我和楚天歌都死了,那个世界还是那个世界,到了那种时候,你便是神,而我要独立存在又有何难?”Chu Gefelt the group portraitmode of writing that suddenlynowtransferswalksonthisroad. Whenoriginallistmain character, allbased on the main characteroperation, main characterdiethatbookalsoto write a calf, the worldcollapse certainly; But after the group portraitsets up, everyone canbemain character, cansend the knifetoany, like《Song of Ice and Fire》?楚戈忽然觉得现在转的群像写法就是走在这条路上。当原先单主角的时候,一切基于主角运作,主角死了那书还写个犊子,世界当然崩了;可当群像树立之后,每一个人都可以算是主角,可以给任何一个发刀子,就像《冰与火之歌》?Butthistoochallenged, nowthisso-calledgroup portraitmaybe far from that there isexplicitmain character. Did not say the levelenough, does not have the meanssuchto writeby the webnovelnatureonly......
可这太挑战了啊,现在这种所谓的群像可远远没到那份上,还是有明确主角的。不说水平够不够,单论网文的性质也没办法那样写的啊……Howeverconstructsonenot to base on the completeworld that main charactercanoperate, poureddoes not needthismethod...... for examplethisgeneration of main characterstoryto finishand that's the end, yes......
不过构建一个不基于主角就能运作的完整世界,倒也不一定要这种方法就是了……比如本代主角的故事结束了,也是可以的……Waits for...... Chu Geto respond, the toneis a little faithful: „Isaid that youwhat's the matter, includingare sayingtodaydiestwice! No matterwhat do you mean, latercannotthink the matterinthisdirectionagain!”
等等……楚戈反应过来,语气有点不渝:“我说你今天怎么回事,连着说了两次死!不管你是什么意思,以后不许再往这种方向想事情!”Qiu Wujiwas saidbut actuallybythisimperative moodstares, was both happy and humouredsaid/tunnel: „Do youorderme?”秋无际倒被这命令语气说得一愣,又好气又好笑地道:“你命令我?”Chu Gegets angry: „Youknowmyanythingmeaning!”楚戈怒道:“你知道我什么意思!”
The Qiu Wujicorners of the mouthselect, holding the armsaid: „Butyoudo not knowmyanythingmeaning.”秋无际嘴角微挑,抄着手臂道:“可你不知道我什么意思。”
The Chu Geintentionrevolve like lightning, smiledsuddenly: „Iknowhow...... somebodywill considerthatworldnotherunceasingly, essentiallyafterconsidering the originalbodycomes outto keepherepossibilityforever......”楚戈心念电转,忽然笑了:“我知道了……某人会不断考虑那个世界没有她会怎样,本质上是在考虑原身出来之后永远留在这里的可能……”
The Qiu Wujieaseattitudedid not haveinstantaneously, saidbreathless: „Whosaid that Iamthismeaning!”秋无际悠然的态度瞬间就没了,气急败坏道:“谁说我是这个意思!”Chu Geturns aroundto run: „That is it!”楚戈转身就跑:“就是这个意思!”Qiu Wujipursuescrazily: „Whosaid that Icanstay inthissmellyplace? Youhalttome!”秋无际一路狂追:“谁说我要留在这个臭地方了?你给我站住!”„How can youalsomanagemeto think?”
“你还能管我怎么想?”„Cannotthink!”
“不许那么想!”„Do youorderme?”
“你命令我?”„Ikillyou!”
“我打死你!”
The formpursuesescapes, the noisysoundgoes far awayin the dim light of nightgradually, transmitssomebodyto be seizedahem the sound that the painpunchesindistinctly, as well asmaster'sinstruction: „On your movement, wantsto runthis Eminence!”
身影一追一逃,吵闹的声音在夜色之中渐渐远去,隐约传来某人被揪住痛揍的哼唧声,以及师父的教诲:“就你那身法,也想跑得过本座!”
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