Guidance: When we step the battle path , is doomed dutiful ( 7 ) classical collected sayings classical collected sayings „something, can only a person do ; Some passes/tests, can only a person ; Some groups, can only a person walk.” „Do two people certainly compare a person is not lonely?” „I find slowly, slowly, so-called father and daughter mother and child, just means that you and his fate is this life this life is gazing after his back to be increasingly estranged unceasingly.” The happiness is, in the morning waved to say „saying goodbye” person, in the evening came back ordinarily, book bag, recommendation visit: The meaning of being duty-bound not to turn back steps the heaven battle path 导读:当我们踏上征途,,就注定要义无反顾(共7篇)经典语录经典语录“有些事,只能一个人做;有些关,只能一个人过;有些路啊,只能一个人走。”“难道两个人一定比一个人不寂寞吗？”“我慢慢地、慢慢地了解到,所谓父女母子一场,只不过意味着,你和他的缘分就是今生今世不断地在目送他的背影渐行渐远。”幸福就是,早上挥手说“再见”的人,晚上又平平常常地回来了,书包,推荐访问:义无反顾的意思踏上天国征途 One: «Classical Collected sayings» 篇一:《经典语录》 Classical collected sayings 经典语录 „Some matters, can only a person do ; Some passes/tests, can only a person ; Some groups, can only a person walk.” “有些事,只能一个人做;有些关,只能一个人过;有些路啊,只能一个人走。” „Do two people certainly compare a person is not lonely?” “难道两个人一定比一个人不寂寞吗？” „I find slowly, slowly, so-called father and daughter mother and child, just means that you and his fate is this life this life is gazing after his back to be increasingly estranged unceasingly.” “我慢慢地、慢慢地了解到,所谓父女母子一场,只不过意味着,你和他的缘分就是今生今世不断地在目送他的背影渐行渐远。” The happiness is, in the morning waved to say „saying goodbye” person, in the evening came back ordinarily, the book bag lost in the same corner, smelly athletic shoes stopper under same chair. 幸福就是,早上挥手说“再见”的人,晚上又平平常常地回来了,书包丢在同一个角落,臭球鞋塞在同一张椅下。 The mother was that builds „time machine” to come here , but could not find the traveler of return trip car(riage) again. 妈妈是那个搭了“时光机器”来到这里但是再也找不到回程车的旅人。 The family/home, turns into one incautiously not warm, place that only then oppresses. Outside world is no doubt bleak, but the family/home can be colder. A person is no doubt lonely, under two person this solitary one lamps speechless can actually be lonelier relatively. 家,一不小心就变成一个没有温暖,只有压迫的地方。外面的世界固然荒凉,但是家可以更寒冷。一个人固然寂寞,两个人孤灯下无言相对却可以更寂寞。 Desperately how we study succeed to sprint 100 meters, but no one has taught us: When you tumble, how to fall has the dignity ; When your knee breaks covered with blood, how to clean the wound, how to wrap up ; When you are painful is unable to endure, with what expression goes facing others ; When your carries next, how to treat the wounds that the innermost feelings bleed, how to obtain deep layer the mind tranquility ; The image glass broke to pieces a place time equally, how to tidy up? 我们拼命地学习如何成功冲刺一百米,但是没有人教过我们:你跌倒时,怎么跌得有尊严;你的膝盖破得血肉模糊时,怎么清洗伤口,怎么包扎;你痛得无法忍受时,用什么样的表情去面对别人;你一头载下时,怎么治疗内心淌血的创痛,怎么获得心灵深层的平静;心像玻璃一样碎了一地时候,怎么收拾？ When he is gradually old, he can return to home village, the mountains and rivers still, spring as before, were only parents' grave, in the too deep grass, the old age stiff knee, is unable to worship on bended knees. Native place, already for no reason person. 当他垂垂老时,他可以回乡了,山河仍在,春天依旧,只是父母的坟,在太深的草里,老年僵硬的膝盖,无法跪拜。乡里,已无故人。 The child, forgives him, any stemming from loving anxious can forgive. 孩子,原谅他,凡是出于爱的急切都是可以原谅的。 The time is one hides gentle the hand in darkness, in you are lost in thought absent-minded one, the thing star controlling traveler's fortunes move. 时间是一只藏在黑暗中的温柔的手,在你一出神一恍惚之间,物走星移。 «Gazing after» impressions of after-reading 《目送》读后感 „So-called father and daughter mother and child, just means, you and his fate is this life this life is gazing after his back to be increasingly estranged unceasingly. You stand in the end of alley, looks that he gradually disappears in the place that the alley makes a turn . Moreover, he uses the back to tell you silently: Does not need to pursue.” Reaches middle-age, when you read these words, can your heart shiver fiercely? “所谓的父女母子一场,只不过意味着,你和他的缘分就是今生今世不断地在目送他的背影渐行渐远。你站立在小路的这一端,看着他逐渐消失在小路转弯的地方,而且,他用背影默默告诉你:不必追。”人到中年,当你读到这段话的时候,你的心会不会剧烈的颤动一下？ This is a few words on Taiwan woman of letters Lung Ying-tai «Gazing after» flyleaf, said both feeling sad and helpless, enters the middle age, all when has is young yearns, pursues, fame and fortune, position and capital, but is tranquil to discover that the father has gone far away, mother also in dying of old age and sons slowly work loose the protection of own to take a long journey, friends to diverge, the brothers and sisters to operate the life of own when the tune finally gradually respectively, „me” is actually incapable of them 11 keeping hold Had found your shadow here, here how many our portrayals „was I”? This book is Ms. Lung Ying-tai's review and introspection to the own life, rather illuminates each of our growth course, illuminates the most precious thing that we lived neglect. Actually, every so often is not we looks at parents' back, more often is we withstands the vision that likes our people pursuing, withstands them not to abandon, they did not feel relieved that eyeful gazing. But we are leaving from infancy to maturity by all means wholeheartedly, has never then looked around. 这是台湾女作家龙应台《目送》中扉页上的一段话,说得既令人心酸又无奈,步入中年,拥有年轻时所向往、所追求的一切,名利、地位、资本,但是平静下来才发现父亲已经远去、母亲也在慢慢的老去、儿子们挣脱自己的保护要远行、朋友们在曲终之际渐渐散去、兄弟姐妹各自经营着自己的生活,在别人眼中拥有一切的“我”却无力将他们一一挽留,环顾四周,惟有任凭他们渐行渐远,默默“目送”。有没有在这里找到你的影子,这里的“我”又是多少个我们的写照？这本书与其说是龙应台女士对自己生活的回顾与反省,倒不如说是照出了我们每个人的成长历程,照出了我们生活中所忽略的最珍贵的事物。其实,很多时候不是我们去看父母的背影,更多的时候是我们承受爱我们的人追逐的目光,承受他们不舍的,他们不放心的,满眼的目送。但我们从小到大只管着一心离开,从未回头张望过。 What the impression is most was before returns to one's old home, when walked each time, I held up the head in front with long hurried strides, to look back occasionally, always saw the paternal grandmother to pull up the corner/horn of apron to keep cleaning the eye. 印象最深的是以前回老家,每次走时,我昂头在前面大步流星,偶尔回首,总看见奶奶撩着围裙的一角不停地擦拭着眼睛。 At that time thought otherwise very much, is not does not see, like last time to be why moved. However, really one day became the last time. You leave no matter what, some people will no longer yearn for you, worries for you, waits for you. Even has thousands of turning head, who will have to gaze after my departure, even if makes a turn still did not hate to take back the vision? Our life, was gazing after by the parents, then we will gaze after our children to jump departure. However we are very difficult then to look around, because only we know the love that can depend upon has existed solid. Makes the clearness of children, in parents' lifetime, making their eye multi- points fall on our faces, rather than visits us to be increasingly estranged with tears. Is the parents is also clear, the child is not your accessory, „some groups! Only can a person walk”, what you can the child is only the spiritual consolation and support, making his ( her ) own realize that lonely, setback, failure and other rough, this is the true love, because of „something, can only a person do, some passes/tests, can only a person.” 那时很不以为然,又不是再也不见,干嘛就像最后一次般伤感。但是,真的有一天就成了最后一次。你不管怎样离开,都不再会有人为你留恋,为你挂牵,为你等待。就算有千万次的回头,会有谁人在一直目送着我的离开,哪怕转了弯仍舍不得收回目光？我们的这一生,被父母目送着,然后我们会目送着我们的孩子蹦跳着离开。但是我们都很难去回头张望,只因我们知道那份可以依靠的爱一直坚实地存在着。做儿女的要明白,在父母的有生之年,让他们的眼睛多点落在我们的面孔上,而不是含泪看着我们渐行渐远。做父母的也要明白,孩子不是你的附属物,“有些路啊！只能一个人走”,你能给孩子的只是精神上的慰藉和支持,让他(她)自己体会孤独、挫折、失败等种种坎坷,这才是真正的爱,因为“有些事,只能一个人做,有些关,只能一个人过。” Gazes after the impressions of after-reading 目送读后感 I in station and other car(riage)s, the side am one am being coordinated mother and child of street. The mother grips son's hand in the flash of start, the son is motionless, turns the head to visit her, an eyebrow wrinkle, will say anything, unexpectedly his facial expression at this moment got a panoramic view by mother, the son has turned the head, curls the lip, works loose the hand aunt gently personally, forwards with stride. Mother's body is startled, immediately goes forward. What I see, losing that in her pupil cannot cover up. 我在车站等车,身旁是一对等着过马路的母子。母亲在起步的一瞬间握住儿子的手,儿子却不动,转头看她,眉一皱,正要说什么,不料他此刻的神情被母亲尽收眼底,儿子转过头,撇撇嘴,轻轻把手从母亲手中挣脱,大步向前。母亲的身躯一怔,随即上前。我看到的是,她眸中掩不住的失落。 Gazes after their back, the train of thought is fluttering about. 目送着他们的背影,思绪纷飞。 When does not know from, own also like that son, the care that disdains the parents to hand over. A coat is 不知从何时起,自己也像那个儿子一样,不屑父母递过来的关心。一件外衣是 „It is not cold, takes away”, one cup of milk are „are difficult to drink, does not want”, a hand of concern, breaks away with no trace. Even if a concerned look, words of inquiry, still always by the indifferent line of sight, the impatient facial expression keep off. “不冷,拿走拿走”,一杯牛奶是“难喝,不要”,一只关怀的手,也是不着痕迹地挣开。即使是一个关切的眼神,一句询问的话语,也总是以无所谓的视线,不耐烦的神情挡回。 When also does not know from, that holds to write books to be upon the jump to ask that east asked the western form was diluted by the time, torn to pieces, what is gradually clear is a person flips through the book to access the net to seek the back of answer. Also no longer is that takes a color hair clip in the store single-handedly, which pretty child runs up to side mother to inquire cheerfully, after mother offers the suggestion, still left had a look hesitant, right traces, the ruthless under heart, does not lift an employing professional mourners face to request „mother, I do not elect well, both can be good?” But is familiar with a person to make the choice, another person withstands. Also is not wronged to run up to the father bosom the loud sob also to seek the comfort like the childhood, but is a person argued, a person counter-attacks. 也不知从何时起,那个捧着书跑来跑去问东问西的身影被时光冲淡,支离破碎,渐渐清晰的是一个人翻书上网寻求答案的背影。也不再是那个在商店里一手拿一个颜色的发夹,欢快地跑到母亲身旁询问哪个漂亮的孩子,在母亲给出建议后,仍然犹豫地左看看,右摸摸,狠不下心,抬起一张哭丧的脸请求“妈妈,我选不好,两个都要行不行？”而是习惯一个人作出抉择,再一个人承受。也不像儿时受了委屈跑到父亲怀中大声哭泣并且寻求安慰,而是一个人辩解,一个人反击。 The «Gazing after» child said goodbye to mother, a person stepped that everyone to path. In the farewell, mother is gazing after child's increasingly estranged back, stands in the end of motley alley, looks that the back vanishes in the place that the alley makes a turn, the wind and frost that in the eye reveals is the trace that the years stay behind. She does not hate the child to suffer hardships, accepts years baptism. The mother understood that difficulty on this road, past she has also yearned, has been duty-bound not to turn back, however has also tumbled, has burst into tears, but, did not regret. Now she can only drop, making child own walk, because- 《目送》中的孩子告别母亲,一个人踏上那条每个人必经的道路。在告别的时候,母亲目送着孩子渐行渐远的背影,站在斑驳小路的这一端,看着背影消失在小路转弯的地方,眼睛里流露的风霜是岁月留下的痕迹。她舍不得孩子去受苦,去接受岁月的洗礼。母亲太懂得这条路上的艰辛,当年的她也向往过,义无反顾过,然而也跌倒过,流泪过,但,不后悔。如今她只能放手,让孩子自己走,因为- Some matters, can only a person do ; Some passes/tests, can only a person ; Some groups, can only a person walk. Am I the preparation take a person to step the battle path? 有些事,只能一个人做;有些关,只能一个人过;有些路啊,只能一个人走。我是准备要一个人踏上征途吗？ The front child turns around to leave in the eye has does not abandon, has fear to front unknown thing, what are more is looks forward to and looks disdainfully joyfully all self-confidence. He was with smile on the face to take the first step, left mother one „not used to pursue” ’ the back. Even if front thorn everywhere, by to bind cut and bruised, does not turn head. 前边的孩子转身离开的时候眼中有不舍,有对前方未知事物的畏惧,但更多的是喜悦憧憬和睥睨一切的自信。他面带微笑迈出了第一步,留给母亲一个“不用追”’的背影。哪怕前方荆棘遍地,被扎得遍体鳞伤,也绝不回头。 Difficulty on this road, only then own understands ; The scenery on this road, only then the own appreciation can smile, the fruit on this road, only then own picks feels pleasant and tasty, the end of this road, only then in others final gazing, own walks. 这条路上的艰辛,只有自己懂;这条路上的风景,也只有自己欣赏才能会心一笑,这条路上的果实,只有自己采摘才更觉得甘美,这条路的尽头,也只有在别人最后的目送中,自己走。 However, if a person lingers at the branch crossroad, on the land of mud throws down, the person for you points out the direction, extends the aid to you, that is how lucky. With person who has a common goal, in this road precipitousest section, the mutual support, the mutual encouragement, fights side-by-side, frequently is full of the fighting spirit ; In crossing the mountain, across the forest, sees the victory dawn, sings while drinking, getting drunk, the share is joyful. If really runs into such person, goes hand in hand with him, after all a journey of person is extremely lonely lonely, but the end of this road, is unattainable. 但是,倘若一个人在分岔路口徘徊,在泥泞的土地上摔倒时,有一个人为你指明方向,向你伸出援手,那是何其幸运啊。跟一个志同道合的人,在这条路最险峻的地段,互相扶持,互相勉励,并肩作战,时刻充满斗志;在越过高山,穿过森林,看到胜利曙光时,对酒当歌,一醉方休,分享喜悦。倘若真的遇到这样的人,就跟他结伴而行吧,毕竟一个人的旅途太过孤独寂寞,而这条路的尽头,又是那么遥不可及。 Classical sentence 经典语句 The people have a physical body to seem like an awkward matter. That losing a child mother stops sobbing finally, carries the rice bowl, because she was hungry. That loving miss has to leave a sweetheart small little while, she needs to go to bathroom. That philosopher a moment ago also in discussion facing the gods tranquility of misery, however moaned to continue because of the toothache. When our souls enjoy the happiness in the heaven or in the hell appreciates the tragedy, the physical body often pulls back this mortal world it inopportunely. 人有一个肉体似乎是一件尴尬事。那个丧子的母亲终于停止哭泣,端起饭碗,因为她饿了。那个含情脉脉的姑娘不得不离开情人一小会儿,她需要上厕所。那个哲学家刚才还在谈论面对苦难的神明般的宁静,然而却因为牙痛而呻吟不止。当我们的灵魂在天堂享受幸福或在地狱体味悲剧时,肉体往往不合时宜地把它拉回到尘世。 Love 9/10 are created by spousal own, 1/10 depend on that loved object. [ 3 ] 爱情的十分之九是由爱人自己造成的,十分之一才靠那被爱的对象。 Dissipation is the fate of person, but there is longing, dissipating is not absolute, lost the childhood, we have the childlike innocence, lost the youth, we have the love, lost the years, we have the history and wisdom, without fondly remembering, person then with wood and stone not different. 消逝是人的宿命,但是有了怀念,消逝就不是绝对的,失去了童年,我们还有童心,失去了青春,我们还有爱,失去了岁月,我们还有历史和智慧,没有怀念,人便与木石无异。 Everyone pursues successfully, however, compared with succeeding more precious thing, this is the pursue. 每个人都追求成功,然而,还有比成功更宝贵的东西,这就是追求本身。 Can by the pursue that the failure prevents certainly be a weak pursue, he exposed limited of strength, can the successfully prevented pursue certainly be a superficial pursue, it proved limited of goal. 能被失败阻止的追求一定是一种软弱的追求,他暴露了力量的有限,能被成功阻止的追求一定是一种浅薄的追求,它证明了目标的有限。 I walked on the own road, the success and failure, the happiness and misery have reduced to very secondary thing, the most important thing was this road it. 我走在自己路上了,成功与失败,幸福与苦难都已经降为非常次要的东西,最重要的东西是这条路本身。 I used the life, but has not enjoyed the life. 我只是使用了生命,而不曾享受生命。 «The Distance impressions of after-reading of Keeping watch» 《守望的距离》读后感 «Distance Keeps watch» that is a collection of Mr. Zhou Guoping, inside each prose read made people think exciting, each prose manifested Mr. Zhou to treat the life to fill to stir up 《守望的距离》是周国平先生的一本散文集,里面每一篇散文读了都让人觉得扣人心弦,每一篇散文都体现了周先生对待生活充满激 The sentiment and deep love, treat the life to be full of the wisdom and hope! But in prose the language of the maxim and verse of nearly these charm, deep touched my soul, making me ponder the own circumstances, show loving care for the own soul , to promote the own life goal! Prose said that „regarding universe, I am insignificant ; But regarding my own, I am all”. Yes, 情与热爱,对待人生充满睿智与希望！而散文里那些魅力的近乎格言和诗句的语言,也深深的触动了我的灵魂,使我不禁的思考自己的境遇,关怀自己的灵魂,提升自己的人生境界！散文里说“对于宇宙,我微不足道;可是对于我自己,我就是一切”。是的, Entire world about 7 billion people, they come from each place of the world, was saying different languages, the diet, the cultural also many differences, we put these 7 billion li (0.5 km) too to be simply tiny personally, even can ignore. Regarding the world, we did not expect that can change it by individual strength, do not presumptuously think to change anything. However, we can change our own, we are also capable of sufficient changing own, for example: We can treat work many sense of responsibility ; Treats colleague many care ; Treats own many confidence. When coming across any setback the word will never abandon, because own is the entirety of own, if own gave up own, who can also help us? In September, I officially become a kindergarener, I was also from now many a status, that is „gardener”, will shoulder to train the heavy responsibility of motherland flowers. Mr. Zhou in the foreword of prose mentioned that the word „towerman”, but at this moment I also want to talk into the towerman own, I keep watch will be that group of simple-hearted children, but I will also become their teachers! To own, I am own all, perhaps to these children, I is also their entirety, they need our teacher many points of affections, many points of care, many points of patience, they can healthy and happy the growth again like this in the company of the help and our teacher! Mr. Zhou in the prose thinks that „the responsibility of towerman” is: Maintains the appropriate distance with the trend of the times, protects the life these eternal values, toward with care human spiritual life basic orientation. Here, as a baby teacher, I thinks that my responsibility is: How teaches the baby to love, how to treasure! Goes to enter child's mind with my love, caused their health joyful pass every day! However from towerman, on the other hand, I may also be called the own life own, students are the annual rings of our teacher, keeps watch the student to keep watch the own life. Mr. Zhou indeed is a full of wisdom person, his words always make person become aware, sighed that he to the life hundred condition aloofness, the penetrating philosophy, making one forget to return. He after experiencing the misery did not groan like certain people like that with hardship, but dared to face the life the issue, dared the joke life and death, completely understood that lost and has. The person most valuable quality is when he is completely understanding the life many impossible and 全世界有近70亿的人,他们来自世界的各个地方,说着不同的语言,饮食,文化也有诸多的不同,我们把个人放到这七十亿里简直太渺小了,甚至可以忽略不计。对于世界,我们不奢望能够凭借个人的力量去改变它,也不要妄想去改变什么。但是,我们可以改变我们自己,我们也有足够的能力去改变自己,比如:我们可以对待工作多一份责任心;对待同事多一份关心;对待自己多一份信心。在遇到任何挫折时都永不言弃,因为自己是自己的全部,如果自己都放弃自己了,谁还会来帮助我们？九月份,我正式成为一名幼儿园老师,从此以后我也多了一个身份,那就是“园丁”,也将肩负起培养祖国花朵的重任。周先生在散文的序中提到“守望者”一词,而此刻我也想把自己说成守望者,我守望的将是那群天真无邪的孩子,而我也将成为他们的启蒙老师！对自己来说,我是自己的一切,也许对那些孩子来说,我也是他们的全部,他们需要我们老师多点爱心,多点细心,再多点耐心,这样他们才能在我们老师的帮助和陪伴下健康快乐的成长！在散文里周先生认为“守望者的职责”是:与时代潮流保持适当的距离,守护人生的那些永恒的价值,往和关心人类精神生活的基本走向。在这里,作为一名幼儿教师,我认为我的职责是:教会幼儿如何去爱,如何去珍惜！用我的爱去走进孩子的心灵,使他们健康快乐的度过每一天！然而从另一方面来说,我也可将自己称为自己人生的守望者,一届届的学生就是我们老师的年轮,守望着学生并守望着自己的人生。周先生的确是一位有智慧的人,他的话总让人似有所悟,感叹他对人生百态的超然,精辟的哲理,让人流连忘返。他在经历苦难后并不像某些人那般苦苦呻吟,而是敢于面对人生的问题,勇于笑谈生死,看透失去和拥有。人最可贵的品质就是当他在看透人生诸多不可能及 After senseless , can still unretentive loves it, did not complain, instead understood treasures and feels grateful. The writing is only a form, the writing is also only a stance, but we comprehend some substantive things from this form slightly, detected gradually from this stance a significance is, that is the true value is. From the writing of Mr. Zhou I saw a ponder of wise man, a sensibility of elder, found a strength to go to all trivial matters facing this world. The life is the play that the ringside walks sings, has too many liking with want us to use the life to taste sadly, keeps watch, records. But the life eventually is also beautiful, no matter mixes with the thing that many cannot be withstanding in disorder, comprehends a true meaning, a wisdom, is then gentle throughout and calm walks, will not be afraid to the conclusion, this is a perfect secular life! The rain crossed, then buoys up ; The wind came, then striving for success. Believes own, the keeping watch life, we never stint the sweat! The goose passing over gently and swiftly horizon, cut the blue sky the train of thought that actually left trace of striving for success- the distance of keeping watch far, whether you also prepared keeping watch life! Mr. Zhou child names as „the distance of this volume keeping watch”, I want also to indicate keeping watch of life needs the appropriate distance. Comes with the attitude of keeping watch facing the life, facing the life is actually a very happy matter, keeps watch to represent an anticipation, what it anticipates is a perfect secular life. I must be a joyful towerman, 无趣后仍能毫无保留的去爱它,不去埋怨,反而更懂得珍惜与感恩。文字只是一种形式,写作也只是一种姿态,而我们从这形式中稍稍领悟到一些实质的东西,从这姿态中渐渐发觉出一点意义的所在,那才是真正的价值所在。从周先生的文字中我看到了一位智者的沉思,一位长者的感悟,也找到了一份力量去面对凡尘中的一切琐事。人生是场边走边唱的戏,有太多的欢喜和悲伤要我们用一生去品尝,去守望,去记载。但人生也终究是美的,不管这其中夹杂着多少零乱不堪的东西,从中领悟一份真谛,得一份智慧,然后始终平和而从容的走下去,一直到结束也不会害怕,这就是一份完美的世俗人生！雨过了,便振作;风来了,便拼搏。相信自己,守望一生,我们从来就不吝惜汗水！大雁掠过天际,划破蓝天的思绪,却留下了拼搏的痕迹-守望的距离到底有多远,你是否也做好了守望人生的准备！周先生将这本集子命名为“守望的距离”,我想也正表明了人生的守望需要恰当的距离。以守望的态度来面对人生,面对生活其实是一件很幸福的事情,守望代表着一种期待,它期待的是一个完美的世俗人生。我要做一个快乐的守望者, Is keeping watch that groups of children, is keeping watch their health joyful growth, keeps watch they to understand to love, understood that treasures this world happy all ; Meanwhile I must keep watch my own, keeps watch the own hopeful life, keeping watch to be happy and joyful! 守望着那一群群孩子,守望着他们健康快乐的成长,守望着他们懂得去爱,懂得去珍惜这世间美好的一切;同时我也要守望我自己,守望自己充满希望的一生,守望幸福与快乐！ 2 二 Zhou Guoping said: „Towerman” the responsibility is, maintains the appropriate distance with the trend of the times, protects the life these eternal values. 周国平说:“守望者”的职责是,与时代潮流保持适当的距离,守护人生的那些永恒的价值。 Two: «Material Thesis „Stone” 5.15» 篇二:《材料作文“石头”5.15》 High language: Material thesis „stone” evaluation 高一语文:材料作文“石头”评析 First, thesis material: 一、作文材料: In the remote mountain has a lonely stone, always hopes one day to be able like the bird to hover high, although by the similar ridicule, was actually always persistent each time. Days , a person named Zhuangzi passed by, the stone poured out the aspiration to him, Zhuangzi said: „You first grow into a mountain!” Therefore essence of Spiritual Qi and the nature stone absorption world , to continue the grace of rain and dew, goes all out to grow, does not know that passed through many years, received the baptism of how much winds and rains, it grew into a mountain finally. 深山里有块寂寞的石头,总希望有一天能够像鸟儿一样高高翱翔,虽然每次总被同类嘲笑,却不改初衷。有一天,一个叫庄子的人路过,石头对他倾吐心声,庄子说:“你先长成一座大山！”于是石头吸取天地之灵气、自然之精华,承接雨露之惠泽,拼命生长,不知经过了多少年,受了多少风雨的洗礼,它终于长成了一座大山。 Therefore, Zhuangzi draws on Great Peng to strike the mountain by the wing, the sky is cloudy, thunder and lightning erupts, suddenly everything may become vulnerable, after an earth-shaking loud sound, the mountain blasted out, the stone flies to the sky, charges into the blue sky like the most vigorous eagle. Although crashes unavoidable, but the stone has kissed the sky of that dream, how could that type of happiness other stone realize? 于是,庄子招来大鹏以翼击山,天空乌云密布,雷电大作,一时间地动山摇,一声惊天动地的巨响之后,山炸开了,石头飞向天空,像最矫健的老鹰冲向蓝天。虽然坠落无法避免,但石头已经亲吻过那片梦想的天空,那种幸福别的石头又怎么体会得到？ Requests comprehensively to understand the material, but can choose side one, an angle idea thesis. The autonomous determination decides, definite title ; Besides poetry, literary style optional ; Do not be separated from the material content and meaning thesis, does not want the interplanting. 要求全面理解材料,但可以选择一个侧面,一个角度构思作文。自主确定立意,确定标题;除诗歌外,文体自选;不要脱离材料内容及其含意作文,不要套作。 Second, examines the topic prompt 二、审题提示 Material primary intention: The dream can create the miracle, the achievement life. 材料主旨:梦想可以创造奇迹,成就人生。 Decides the angle: In general, the narrative thesis material, the plot is quite mostly simple, when the content is quite centralized, examines the topic should from the material whole, comprehends the material primary intention, and according to it deciding. Should not neglect the material the overall connotation, the dismemberment separate, according to few words decides, thus causes the trick question even to diverge. But anything is not absolute, this material plot is relatively complex, the connotation is quite plentiful, can the series view material whole, according to the primary intention decide, can revolve the dream, interception partial, refinement viewpoint. For example: 立意角度:一般说来,故事性的作文材料,情节大多比较简单,内容比较集中,审题时应从材料整体出发,领会材料主旨,并据之立意。不应忽视材料的整体内涵,肢解割裂,根据只言片语立意,从而导致偏题甚至离题。但任何事情都不是绝对的,这则材料情节相对复杂,内涵比较丰富,既可以统观材料整体,依据主旨立意,也可以围绕梦想,截取局部,提炼观点。比如: 1 st, „in remote mountain has a lonely stone, always hopes one day to be able like the bird to hover high, although by the similar ridicule, was actually always persistent each time.”- Is unwilling ordinary, does not fear the ridicule, the intention vainly hoped for, can create the miracle. 一、“深山里有块寂寞的石头,总希望有一天能够像鸟儿一样高高翱翔,虽然每次总被同类嘲笑,却不改初衷。”-不甘平凡,不怕嘲笑,心怀梦想,就能创造奇迹。 2 nd, „, therefore essence of Spiritual Qi and the nature stone absorption world , to continue the grace of rain and dew, goes all out to grow, does not know that passed through many years, received the baptism of how much winds and rains, it grew into a mountain finally.”- Realizes the dream, needs the long-term effort, silently savings. Realizes the dream, lies in the struggle. Realizing the dream must insist the faith. Perseveres that lighthouse in your heart 二、“于是石头吸取天地之灵气、自然之精华,承接雨露之惠泽,拼命生长,不知经过了多少年,受了多少风雨的洗礼,它终于长成了一座大山。”-实现梦想,需要长期努力,默默积蓄。实现梦想,在于奋斗。实现梦想要坚持信念。坚守你心中的那座灯塔 3 rd, „, although crashes unavoidable, but the stone has kissed the sky of that dream, how could that type of happiness other stone realize?”- The value of life lies in the struggle, realizing the dream is the biggest happiness. Even instantaneously still splendid. 三、“虽然坠落无法避免,但石头已经亲吻过那片梦想的天空,那种幸福别的石头又怎么体会得到？”-人生的价值在于奋斗,实现梦想是最大的幸福。即使瞬间也精彩。 In the argumentation the good topic often can reveal the theme: «Has Dream Pursuing» «Dares To pursue « In Dream» Heart Has Dream To be able To succeed » «Dream Brings My Soaring» 议论文中好的题目往往能揭示题旨:《有梦就去追》《敢于追梦》《心中有梦才能成功》《梦想带着我飞翔》 Also there does not reveal, but the issue document must select in the introduction to the center: «Magnificent Under foot That Mountain» «Meteor Philosophy» 也有不揭示的,但行文在开篇必须点到中心:《辉煌脚下的那座山》《流星哲学》 Stone „dream” is the core of material, leaves this core, divergence intent. For example: 石头的“梦想”是材料的核心,离开这个核心,就会偏离题意。比如: 1 st, „one day, a person named Zhuangzi passed by, the stone poured out the aspiration to him, Zhuangzi said: ‚You first grow into a mountain!’ Therefore stone?? Finally grew into a mountain.”- Success needs to struggle. Is successfully valued in insisting. 一、“有一天,一个叫庄子的人路过,石头对他倾吐心声,庄子说:‘你先长成一座大山！’于是石头??终于长成了一座大山。”-成功需要奋斗。成功贵在坚持。 2 nd, „does Zhuangzi draw on Great Peng to strike the mountain by the wing ?? The mountain blasted out, does the stone fly to the sky ?? Fires into the blue sky.”- Must be good at drawing support from others. 二、“庄子招来大鹏以翼击山,??山炸开了,石头飞向天空,??冲向蓝天。”-要善于借助他人。 3 rd, „does not know that passed through many years, received the baptism of how much winds and rains, it grew into a mountain finally.”-( Is separated from dream)- only discussed insisted, discussed the faith. 三、“不知经过了多少年,受了多少风雨的洗礼,它终于长成了一座大山。”-(脱离梦想)-只谈坚持,谈信念。 4 th, is separated from the dream only to discuss instantaneous splendid / instantaneous happiness / happy instantaneous / the value of blooming life / happy that instantaneous( only discussed happy connotation) / once had on well / to weigh instantly forever / should be realizes the dream is the biggest happiness. Even instantaneously still splendid. 四、脱离梦想只谈瞬间的精彩/瞬间的幸福/美好的瞬间/绽放生命的价值/幸福的那瞬间(只谈幸福的内涵)/曾经拥有就好/刹那即永衡/应该是实现梦想是最大的幸福。即使瞬间也精彩。 5 th, treats optimistically will have harvest / optimistic diligently opportunity 五、乐观对待就会有收获/乐观努力机遇 Third, case deliberated 三、例文研讨 Read the following four theses, pondered their merits or the shortcomings. 阅读下面四篇作文,思考它们的优点或缺点。 1 st, sets out toward the dream 一、向着梦想进发 The sky does not leave the trace of bird, but I have flown. 天空不留下鸟的痕迹,但我已经飞过。 Tagore 泰戈尔 Like the river boat of long journey, does not attend to the difficult situation for the destination ; Like the rigid moth, and does not hesitate to be buried in the sea of fire for the light hotly. This lonely stone keeps absorbing the day Spiritual Qi and natural essence, to kiss sky of that dream, even if meets a cruel death also has no complain and regret. 就像远行的航船,为了目的地不顾惊涛骇浪;就像执着的飞蛾,为了光和热不惜葬身火海。这块寂寞的石头不停地吸取天的灵气、自然的精华,为了亲吻那片梦想的天空,纵然粉身碎骨也无怨无悔。 I think, in the earth-shaking that flash, the stone is happy, it is turning toward the dream to set out, its innermost feelings have mixed emotions surely, joyful, satisfied, then brings the gratified tears to crash. Is formidable for the individual association/will of dream unrelentingly struggle. 我想,在石破天惊的那一刹那,石头是幸福的,它在向着梦想进发,它的内心必定是百感交集,喜悦,满足,然后带着欣慰的泪水坠落。为着梦想执着奋斗的个体总会让人敬畏。 Perhaps ascends the sky is likes making fun of these to have people of dream, always for diligently regretless their obstacle. That barrier possibly is the Roman religion Saibanshomae's raging flame, possibly when is Columbus long-distance voyage new continent day after day wind and snow, possibly is the Red Army Long March snowy mountain lawn on the way. However lucky people, they have the dream. Under the direction of this beacon light, they such as Bruno join in the sea of fire generally, to guard the truth , but raging fire eternal life ; They such as Columbus step the battle path generally dutifully, to inquire about the unknown world is loyal and sincere ; They such as the Red Army soldier general heroic spirit fill with, conquer the long and trying journey, to save the nationality resists. Only because of persisting in protecting the dream in heart, twists Cheng ( 1 st dan ) rope the faith, they go smoothly everywhere. 也许上天就是喜欢捉弄那些怀揣梦想的人们,总是为孜孜无悔的他们设置障碍。那障碍可能是罗马宗教裁判所前的熊熊烈火,可能是哥伦布远航新大陆时的连天风雪,可能是红军长征途中的雪山草地。然而幸运的人们啊,他们还有梦想。在这盏明灯的指引下,他们如布鲁诺一般投身于火海,为捍卫真理而与烈火永生;他们如哥伦布一般义无反顾地踏上征途,为探寻未知世界而披肝沥胆;他们如红军战士一般豪气满怀,征服千山万水,为拯救民族而抗争。只因坚持守护心中的梦想,把信念拧成一段绳,他们无往而不胜。 Sometimes, dared „having a dream” even to decide a person can succeed. When does not know gets up, „grassroots” became a high-frequency glossary. Super girls, traveler, campus orchestra, migrant worker, these ordinary „grassroots” a clan, people of lower class, can stand in the respective dream finally „stage” on, depended is they dare „having a dream” the courage. The dream, is Lee Myung-bak changes into the source of forces of Repulic of Korea president from a poor scholar ; The dream, is Obama jumps to the root of US presidential election domineering dark horse to be by an obscure black boy. At any time, how regardless of our positions, cannot give up the power that vainly hopes, even if base and low, even if like that small stone that could not find the friend obscure, cannot give up vainly hoping for, gives up this leading to the successful way that must be taken. 有时候,敢不敢“做梦”甚至决定了一个人能不能成功。不知何时起,“草根”成了一个高频词汇。超女,驴友,校园乐队,农民工,这些平凡的“草根”一族,社会底层的人们,最终能站在各自梦想的“舞台”上,靠的就是他们敢于“做梦”的勇气。梦想,是李明博从一个贫困学子摇身变成大韩民国总统的力量源泉;梦想,是奥巴马由一个默默无闻的黑小子一跃而为美国总统大选强势黑马的根源所在。在任何时候,无论我们所处的位置如何,都不能放弃梦想的权力,纵使卑微,纵使像那块找不到知己的小石头一样默默无闻,也不能放弃梦想,放弃这通往成功的必由之路。 Keeps the mountain, without the firewood fever, keeps the dream , the adversity also improves. Does not need to manage it gossip and rumor, does not need to be offended these to taunt, that was they were timid, flinched, bowed to the heaven?? But we, then must, set out to the dream firmly rigid! 留得青山在,哪怕没柴烧,留得梦想在,逆境亦变好。不必管它飞短流长,不必介怀那些冷嘲热讽,那是他们怯懦了,退缩了,向上天低头了??而我们,则要坚定地,执着地向梦想进发！ 2 nd, bursts out \ in the savings {, when we step battle path , is doomed to be duty-bound not to turn back }. 二、在积蓄中迸发\{当我们踏上征途,,就注定要义无反顾}. The pure-heart wrote affectionately: „Successful flower, people only marvel at its present bright-colored, however its bud, soaked the struggle tears spring initially, perfused the tears of blood of sacrifice.” Yes, a person, only then can succeed after the effort, can burst out after the savings, just like that stone, experienced the baptism of wind and rain, goes all out to grow into a mountain, can charge into the blue sky, the upper air that the kiss vainly hopes. 冰心深情地写道:“成功的花儿,人们只惊羡它现时的明艳,然而当初它的芽儿,浸透了奋斗的泪泉,洒遍了牺牲的血泪。”是的,一个人只有经过努力才能成功,经过积蓄才能迸发,正如那块石头,经历了风雨的洗礼,拼命长成一座大山,才能冲向蓝天,亲吻梦想的高空。 Bursts out in the savings, one time is with engaging in fierce battle of lonely resistance. When Eastern Jin Dynasty left thought responded slowly, simple-hearted, but, he after ten years of effort, completed «Three Tax» in the loneliness, created „widespread popularity” myth. Renowned historian Fan Wenlan said: „Backless stools must sit ten years of cold, the articles do not write spatial.” Pores over the books, is lonely! Ten years of effort has not been in vain, his research lightens the dazzling rays. Soviet writer Mayakovsky said that „refines one gram radium, needs one year of practical training, but a character arrangement is appropriate , then takes one ton language the mineral resource.” He to construct the poetry building, makes extraordinary painstaking efforts, the high-rising high-rising poor year, with lonely is a partner, becomes one generation of everyone finally. Saves in the loneliness, with the lonely resistance, can make your energy burst out, lets your life increment. 在积蓄中迸发,是一次与寂寞抗争的鏖战。东晋时的左思反应迟钝,木讷,但是,他经过十年的努力,在寂寞中完成《三都赋》,创造了“洛阳纸贵”的神话。著名历史学家范文澜说:“板凳要坐十年冷,文章不写一句空。”独自一人伏案疾书,何等冷清!只是,十年的努力并没有白费,他的研究闪出耀眼的光芒。苏联作家马雅可夫斯基说“提炼一克镭,需要一年的劳作,而把一个字安排妥贴则要一吨语言的矿藏。”他为了构筑诗歌大厦,苦心孤诣,兀兀穷年,与寂寞为伴,终成一代大家。在寂寞中积蓄,与寂寞抗争,能让你的能量迸发,让你的人生增值。 Bursts out in the savings, one time is with dream travel hand in hand. Jia Dao „ten years sharpens a sword, the frost blade has not tried”, in his heart, throughout without giving up setting up the dream of literary arena arrogantly, finally, he and others „today showing Monarch, who has the uneven matter?” A day. Du Xunhe „from a spinule deep grass, senses crowndaisy chrysanthemum at the present gradually”. His dream in poor and lowly body by tumultuous times, leaving a good name history. The long-time savings lets him when the group star-studded big Tang poem country, established belonged to his position, even if „the person did not know Lingyun wood, waited right up to Lingyun beginning high”. Su Shi „companion fish and shrimp, but friend elk”, the rough bitter experience can never obliterate his dream, he deeply believed that „ will pull to carve the bow like the full moon, 在积蓄中迸发,是一次与梦想携手的旅行。贾岛“十年磨一剑,霜刃未曾试”,他的心中,始终没有放弃傲立文坛的梦想,终于,他等来了“今日把示君,谁有不平事？”的一天。杜荀鹤“自小刺头深草里,而今渐觉出蓬蒿”。他的梦想就是以乱世中的寒微之身,留名青史。长久的积蓄让他在群星璀璨的大唐诗国里,奠定了属于他的一席之位,哪怕“时人不识凌云木,直待凌云始道高”。苏轼“侣鱼虾而友麋鹿”,坎坷的遭遇始终不能磨灭他的梦想,他深信“会挽雕弓如满月, west north, shoots a day of wolf ”. In the process of savings, must hold the dream forever, a day that anticipates to burst out. 西北望,射天狼”。在积蓄的过程中,要永远揣着梦想,期待迸发的一天。 Bursts out in the savings, one time is with the navigation that the hope is in the same boat. Gauguin seeks for the life of that most primitive living a solitary life in the Tassigny island, the illness and mourning female unfortunately never makes him lose the hope, after many years of seeking with hardship, after he enters into finally , the temple of Impressionism. Debussy cuts off the threat of his source of income facing the father, always smiles to the life, composes silently, finally won the competition of fauvism leader. Ai Qing is arrested to be put in prison, the old society darkness has not overthrown him, he has the hope, is wielding such as the rafter big pen, finally by «Dayanhe- My Nanny» becomes the well-known poet. The dream, is the oasis in desert, is the light in darkness, is the charcoal fire in snow. Always dreams in the accumulation, making your life burst out the dazzling brilliance. 在积蓄中迸发,是一次与希望同舟的航行。高更在塔希尼岛寻找那最原始的离群索居的生活,病魔与丧女的不幸从未让他失去希望,经过多年苦苦的寻找,他终于迈入后印象画派的圣殿。德彪西面对父亲断绝他经济来源的威胁,始终笑对生活,默默谱曲,终于摘取了野兽派领袖的桂冠。艾青被捕入狱,旧社会的黑暗并未打倒他,他带着希望,挥动着如椽大笔,终于以《大堰河-我的保姆》而成为家喻户晓的诗人。梦想,是沙漠中的绿洲,是黑暗中的灯光,是雪中的炭火。在积累中始终心存梦想,让你的人生迸发耀眼的光彩。 „In the person cuvette the water, the shallow part might as well have Wolong not.” The intention vainly hoped for, thin send/hair in the thick product, bursts out in the savings! “时人莫小池中水,浅处无妨有卧龙。”心怀梦想,在厚积中薄发,在积蓄中迸发！ Yearns for the sky 向往天空 „Do not let success go to the head, you are only a stone!” “别太得意忘形了,你只是一块石头！” The stone is riding the howling wind sound/rumor to prick the blue sky, suddenly in top of the head one black, the sunlight was blocked by a huge body. The stone in eagle claw felt that own was checked stops. 石头正乘着呼啸的风声刺入蓝天,突然头顶上一黑,阳光被一个庞大的身躯挡住了。鹰爪中的石头感到自己被刹停了。 „You think that own is the eagle?” The eagle contemptuously provokes the argument. “你以为自己是鹰吗？”鹰轻蔑地挑起争论。 „No, I am only a stone.” The stone rejoiced very much can be held by the eagle in in the air stays one, cool wind! „Good, calculates you to accept fate, after all the sky is not you.” “不,我只是一块石头。”石头很庆幸能被鹰抓住在空中多停留一阵,多凉快的风啊！“好吧,算你认命,毕竟天空不属于你们。” „But this is I earns.” The stone contradicts to say stubbornly. “但这是我应得的。”石头顽固地顶撞道。 The eagle said, I have seen many stones. The cobblestone in mountain stream, the strange rock on cliff, the broken reef on beach, their common features know one's place, stand the own position, realizes the own natural value, with myriad things normalizing?? 鹰说,我见过很多石头。山溪里的鹅卵石,峭壁上的怪岩,海滩上的碎礁石,它们共同的特点就是安分守己,站好自己的位置,实现自己的自然价值,与万物归一?? „Therefore they are doomed obscure.” The stone inserts Shangju. „Only can find when the sand with the stone of eternal harmonious coexistence is eternal, by the time is crushed. Existed with has not had no difference. But I only then stroke can obtain mediocrely eternal.” „ That, “所以它们注定默默无闻。”石头插上嘴。“只会与永恒和谐共处的石头在沙子中找到永恒时,已经被时光粉碎了。曾经存在过与不存在过没有什么区别。而我只有击打平庸才能获得永恒。”“那么,