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#1505: Ends this words expressing feelings

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Finally ended originally, in July at heart was also somewhat sigh with emotion. 终于完本了,七月心里也是有些感慨。 In March of last year sent the book, in April started to renew officially, close tael|two year, four hundred 600,000 characters, renewed are not quick, but was not too slow, by dregs of July fast, can achieve this point to be also content, although very envy (admire) these speed several thousand tentacle strange ← _ ← 去年3月份发书,4月份才开始正式更新,接近两年的时间,四百六十万字,更新不算快,但也不算太慢,以七月的渣手速,能做到这一点也知足了,虽然很羡慕那些时速好几千的触手怪←_← Villain from just started to write, the result is not very good, the top carriage First day decides more than 600, according to the view of net article, throws the street, but this expected in July, because the beginning Wuxia result is not at that time good, 600 many decided at then beginning Wuxia arranges Top 10. 反派从刚开始写的时候,成绩很不好,上架第一天均定600多,按照网文的说法,就是扑街,不过这点七月料到了,因为当时起点的武侠成绩就没有太好的,600多的均定在当时的起点武侠都排前十了。 At that time July had not thought that many, looked at more than ten years of Wuxia and net articles, what always wants to write, regardless of the result is good or bad, at least proved did oneself come has not been? Initially top carriage 600 many decided also very much chuckles to oneself in July, at least has not written white/in vain, but can also after -working hours made a spending money. 那时候七月也没想那么多,看了十多年的武侠和网文,总想写点什么,无论成绩是好还是坏,起码证明自己来过不是？当初上架600多的均定七月还很窃喜,起码没白写,还能在工作之余赚点零花钱。 Has not thought after the top carriage, the Villain result rises, decides the violent to increase more than ten times. The Wuxia sale list, one year 365 days has 300 days is Villain First, the total list also has entered Top 10, this must thank everybody, really could not think of other words except for thanks really in July. 没想到从上架之后,反派的成绩一路走高,均定暴增十多倍。武侠销售榜,一年365天有300天都是反派第一,就连总榜也都进过前十,这点真要感谢大家,真的,除了感谢七月也实在想不到其他的话了。 Naturally these are good, bad also has, Villain is in July the First itself surpasses the 2 million character the work, acknowledged to late July, oneself regarding general situation and rhythm controlling some issues, has patched, but also has many slight defects, but here, made contribution in July bold handwriting vigorous style really very much. 当然这些都是好的,坏的也有,反派是七月第一本超过二百万字的作品,到了后期七月也承认,自己对于大局和节奏的把控出了些问题,修修补补,但也还是有很多瑕疵,但七月笔力在这里,真的很尽力了。 If must make give the Villain allocation in July, that in July can only divide to 70, compared with passing an examination, because of the rhythm issue, later has the thing that some want to write not to write. 如果要让七月自己给反派打分的话,那七月只能给七十分,比及格好一点,就是因为节奏的问题,后期有一些想写的东西都没写出来。 During program setting, in July what Hell's main character prepares mainly to write is four, King Kṣitigarbha, Old Lady Meng, Hòutǔ and Judge Cui, Old Lady Meng and Judge Cui felt in July oneself write is also satisfied, King Kṣitigarbha's artistic charm is worse, can only to eight points, as for Hòutǔ, because the rhythm controlling, can only buy the soy sauce. 大纲设定当中,地府的主要人物七月准备主要写的是四个,地藏王、孟婆、后土、崔判官,孟婆和崔判官七月感觉自己写出来还算是满意,地藏王的神韵差一些,只能给八分,至于后土,因为节奏没把控好,只能打酱油了。 In the middle of Seven Gangs Under Heaven Clanging Swords Alliance Di Jingfei, is the preparation writes as a strong character actually, has him with some Hòutǔ's sentiment plays, finally has not written, is somewhat regrettable. 还有天下七帮当中铮剑盟的狄惊飞,其实也是准备作为一个重要角色来写的,其中还有他跟后土的一些感情戏,最后也没写出来,有些遗憾。 Naturally most regrettable was female has advocated, many people spat the trough to let the Su Xin lonely life in July, actually established has the female main, but sentimental play aspect could not write in July throughout, more is more irritable. 当然最遗憾的就是女主了,很多人吐槽七月让苏信孤独一生,其实原本设定是有女主的,不过感情戏这方面七月始终写不好,越想越别扭。 The female Lord wrote is the pen of adding the finishing touch, could not write has become the faulty stroke in handwriting, therefore thought it over, can only not write. 女主写好了是点睛之笔,写不好就成了败笔了,所以思来想去,只能不写。 As for ending, before many book friends , said that finally how many chapters did Human Sovereign only enter the stage as boss is too hasty? Actually this ending was already designed in July, moreover Human Sovereign is also not now enters the stage. 至于结尾,有很多书友之前就说了,人皇作为最终boss只出场几章是不是太仓促了？其实这个结尾是七月早就设计好的,而且人皇也并不是现在才出场。 From the First chapter, Great Hero System and Great Villain System are a foreshadowing, the mid and late part time through thing that Human Sovereign keeps, with Gautama Buddha, Great Heavenly Demon Venerate and the others in mouths fragmentary recollection, will mention occasionally Human Sovereign, is plentiful this image. 从第一章开始,大英雄系统和大反派系统便是一个伏笔,中后期的时候通过人皇留下来的东西,和佛陀、大天魔尊等人的口中零星一些的回忆,都会偶尔提到人皇,把这个形象丰满起来。 Initially designed Human Sovereign this image, in July actually has made a similar kind of person with Su Xin him, egotist. 当初设计人皇这个形象,七月其实是把他跟苏信做成了相似的一类人,利己主义者。 Regarding entire Human Race, Human Sovereign is Hero, but chooses, when Hero, because his previous life has worked as the bad person tragic death, therefore wants to change into the Hero way of living, when choice Hero, for him. Human Sovereign looks like with Su Xin very much, body tael|two surface, walks is very similar road. 对于整个人族来说,人皇是英雄,但选择当英雄,只是因为他前世当了坏人惨死,所以想换成英雄的活法,选择当英雄,也是为了他自己。人皇跟苏信很像,一体两面,走的都是很相似的路。 As for the result, Su Xin stood in peak of world, but merely was also only peak of this world, the place that Monster Sovereign and Human Ancestor went, other world in July one brought. 至于结局,苏信站在了世界的巅峰,但仅仅也只是这个世界的巅峰,妖皇和人祖去的地方,其他世界七月都一笔带过了。 Some people said that Villain can continue to write actually, writes the High Grade world, writes System to promote , to promote to immortal hero merit law, these actually, but wrote in July really motionless, the story had ended, continued forcefully, wrote was not Su Xin, but was another person. 有人说反派其实可以继续写,写更高级的世界,写系统升级,升级到仙侠功法,这些倒是可以,不过七月真的写不动了,故事已经结束,强行续写,写的也不是苏信,而是另外一个人了。 Summarizes Villain this to put in order this book, some people said that is the System class, some people said that is the black undercurrent, actually must let in July, compels a view with the attire, what I write is Jianghu. 总结一下反派这整本书,有人说是系统流,有人说是黑暗流,其实要让七月自己来说,用装逼点说法,我写的是一个江湖。 The places of some people have Jianghu these words to let have a vivid memory in July, especially after the work, deeply has sigh with emotion. 有人的地方就有江湖这句话让七月记忆犹新,特别是工作之后,更是深有感慨。 The thing that good, on Villain, should say said that gathers finally, must fellow book friends tell that thanks, without you, do not have the Villain present result, although has owed several hundred, hitting of 20 many Alliance Lord enjoy have not ended, so long as is still continue write in July, then. 好啦,反派上面,该说的东西都已经说完了,汇聚到最后,还是要跟各位书友说一声感谢,没有你们,就没有反派现在的成绩,虽然欠了几百更,二十多个盟主的打赏都没有还完,不过只要七月还在继续写,就会接着还的。 New book «Rebirth of the Demon Religion Founder» the 100,000 odd character, fellow book friends have been able to take a look, can collect fattening up first. 新书《重生之魔教教主》已经十多万字了,各位书友可以去瞧瞧,也可以先收藏着养肥。 Finally, New Year's Day drew near, says New Year's Day joyful ^ _ ^ to everybody ahead of time 最后,元旦快到了,提前跟大家说一声元旦快乐^_^ ps: End propagandizes the qq group and public number ps:末尾宣传一下qq群和公众号 Ordinary group ( 1 ): 486217939( is about to fill) 普通群（一）:486217939（快满了） Ordinary group ( 2 ): 460351422 普通群（二):460351422 VIP group: 63751643( needs fans value over 3000, goes to send fans value screenshot) vip群:63751643(需要粉丝值3000以上,进去发粉丝值截图） Slightly letter public number: Account number fengqiyue321, public number name: Bestowed Seven Moons( some news interesting rumor about book, somewhat did not facilitate saying that in article, I will write in the public number) 微信公众号:账号fengqiyue321,公众号名称:封七月（关于书的一些消息趣闻,有些在文章中不方便说的,我都会写在公众号里）
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