Inoffice, stretch/openTanwithJiangRongliao the script. After joining " HaplessBear » screenwritergroup, there issuch an experience, letsquick that shegrows, butstill many smallproblems, the mistake of rookiewriting a playeasysuspect, shestained.
办公室里,张叹正在和姜蓉聊剧本。加入《倒霉熊》编剧小组后,有这样一段经历,让她成长的很快,但是依然有很多小毛病,新人编剧容易犯的错误,她都沾上了。Beforescreenwriterevaluation groupteam leaderoldLiuaccurate of veryreview, JiangRongthoughtbracelet, had the imaginationvery much, butwas rash, the basic skillswere not solid.
以前编剧评审小组组长老刘点评的很准确,姜蓉思维跳脱,很有想象力,但是毛毛躁躁,基本功不扎实。Cansolidbe strange, whatheruniversitystudyisEnglish, does not build side with the screenwriter, does not know how sheenteredPujiang Movie Studio.
能扎实才怪,她大学学的是英语,和编剧根本不搭边,也不知道她是怎么进了浦江电影制片厂。„Iremember before , writes the smallmudadventurestimehas toldyou, do not present‚inplayplay’, how do youhavethisproblem?”
“我记得以前写小小泥历险记的时候就跟你说过,不要出现‘戏中戏’,你怎么又犯这毛病?”„Wherepossibleplays?”
“哪里有戏中戏嘛?”„Thisnot?”
“这不是吗?”„Where?”
“哪里?”„This!”
“这!”„Told the story?”
“讲故事?”„Told the storynot to calculate?”
“讲故事不算吗?”„Emmmm ~calculates.”
“emmmm~算算算。”Inscript that shewrites, the leading charactertold the storyto others, thenwrote the content of thisstory.
她写的剧本里,主人公给其他人讲故事,然后有一段把这个故事的内容写了出来。Sincere
笃笃笃Somepeopleknock on a door, JiangRongsaid the sentencepleaseenter, saw a strangemiddle-aged manto walk.
有人敲门,姜蓉说了句请进,就见一个陌生中年男人走了进来。„stretch/openTanin?”
“张叹在吗?”„Iam.”stretch/openTanraised the head, replied.
“我就是。”张叹抬起头,回答道。„stretch/openTanhello/you good, myname waswhatMiao, was the manager of screenwritersection.”
“张叹你好,我叫何苗,是编剧部的主管。”„Un?”
“嗯?”„The screenwritersection of film and televisiondepartment, hehe, is not the animationdepartment.”
“影视部门的编剧部,呵呵,不是动漫部门。”stretch/openTanlenggawked, film and televisiondepartment? How did the people of film and televisiondepartmentlook?
张叹愣了愣,影视部门?怎么影视部门的人找来了?„Do youlook formeare?”
“您找我是?”whatMiaolooked atJiangRong, JiangRongwas smart, gives a pretextimmediately, andtook the gate of office.
何苗看了看姜蓉,姜蓉机灵得很,立刻借口走了,并且把办公室的门带上了。
Are the screenwriters of film and televisiondepartmentin chargeto askstretch/openTanto do? Sois mysterious, looks atstretch/openTan the expression, clearlydoes not know the opposite partyvery much, two peoplepreviouslyshouldnot have the human relations...... JiangRongto indulge in flights of fancy.
影视部门的编剧主管找张叹干嘛?还这么神秘兮兮的,看张叹的表情,很明显不认识对方,两人此前应该没有交际……姜蓉胡思乱想着。In the office, whatMiaocomes straight to the point, explanationpurpose in coming.
办公室里,何苗开门见山,说明来意。stretch/openTanhas not thought that hejusthadthisidea, the opposite partywalks on own initiative, thispillowdeliverscomfortable, exemptedhimto rack brainsto ponder how to adjust the department.
张叹没想到他刚有这想法,对方就主动找上门来,这枕头送的舒适啊,免了他绞尽脑汁思考怎么调部门。In the afternoon, got off workquickly, FengDongaskedstretch/openTanto talk.
当天下午,快下班的时候,冯栋找上张叹谈话。stretch/openTangangarrived athisofficeto sit down, FengDongsaiddirectly: „Film and televisiondepartmentwantsto digyouto pass, did youagree?”
张叹刚到他办公室坐下,冯栋就直接说道:“影视部门想挖你过去,你同意了?”HejustobtainedYang Senlinnotice, said that the film and televisiondepartmentaskshimto wantindividual, thispersonisstretch/openTan, makinghimaskstretch/openTanto chat, askshiswish.
他刚得到杨森林的通知,说影视部门找他要个人,这人就是张叹,让他找张叹聊聊,问问他的意愿。stretch/openTansupposed that the upper layerhas communicated, thensaiddirectly: „To try.”
张叹估摸上层已经沟通好了,便直接说道:“想去试试。”FengDongquanhis, butopenssighs the intentionto decide, sighed, said: „Sinceyou decided that Irespect certainlyyourwish, agreed that makesyougo to the film and televisiondepartment, MinisterYangthere, hesaid that respectsyourdecision, youare willingto go tohimnot to block, ifyouremain, wecantrainyouwith emphasis.”
冯栋劝了他一番,但是张叹心意已决,叹口气,说道:“既然你决定了,我当然尊重你的意愿,同意让你去影视部门,杨部长那里,他说尊重你的决定,你愿意去他不拦着,你要是留下来,我们会重点培养你。”Ijustpreparedto developyoufor the party member, finallyyoumustwalk, FengDongsaid. Heregards as importantstretch/openTanvery much, but since abovehas communicated, moreoveropenssighsoneselfalsoto want, hesaid that manydid not have the meaningagain, althoughstretch/openTanwas good, butthatfavorshisfuture, cannot shake the foundation of animationeditorial department.
我刚准备发展你为党员,结果你就要走,冯栋心里说道。他很看重张叹,但既然上面已经沟通好,而且张叹本人也愿意,他说再多就没意思了,张叹虽好,但那是看好他的未来,动摇不了动漫编辑部的根基。stretch/openTanthankedrepeatedly, came outafterhere, returning to the office, the timeto crosshas gotten off work, butJiangRongstill, sawhimto come back, asked: „Has the matter?”
张叹连声感谢,从这里出来后,回到办公室,时间已经过了下班点,但是姜蓉还在,见他回来,问道:“是不是有事啊?”„Reallyhas the matter.”stretch/openTansaid,„must tellyou.”
“确实有事。”张叹说,“也要跟你说。”„Iguessed correctly, yousaid.”
“我就猜到了,你说吧。”„Iprepareto adjust the film and televisiondepartment.”
“我准备调到影视部门去。”„...... What??? Adjusts the film and televisiondepartment? Were yousent to frontier service? Whom did youoffend?”
“哦……什么???调到影视部门?你被发配了?你得罪了谁?”„Ino onehave offended, thisismy ownidea.”
“我谁也没得罪,这是我自己的想法。”„In the morningthatwhatMiaolailooks foryou, forthismatter?”
“上午那个何苗来找你,就是为这事?”„Right, compared with the animation, Iwantsto try the film and television.”
“对啊,比起动漫,我还是更想试试影视。”„But, the film and televisiondepartmentis quite weak, whereratioresulted in the animationsection?”
“但是,影视部门好弱啊,哪里比得了动漫部?”Thatis only a movie studio, opens up the vision, has a look at the nation, the film and televisionandanimationwhichmarket prospectis broader, obviously.
那只是制片厂内部而已,把眼光放开,看看全国,影视和动漫哪个市场前景更广,显而易见。„After Iwalked, the team leaderwill arrange a teachertoyou, youfollowto studywell.”
“我走了后,组长会给你安排一个老师,你跟着好好学习。”JiangRongfall in the blues, stretch/openTandid not knowto sayanything, after the farewell, drove home, after the alley11 p.m. to 1 a.m, saw„the heartluckluck of having good things to eat”hotel, remembersprevioustimehas eaten the waterto boil the soft-boiled egg, thenworms one's way into.
姜蓉情绪低落,张叹也不知道说什么,告别后,开车回家,经过小巷子时,看到“心福口福”饭店,想起上次吃过的水煮糖心蛋,便钻了进去。In the shopis very small, only then a guest, is turning away from the entrance, looking at the backis a female.
店里很小,只有一个客人,背对着门口,看背影是个女性。„Boss, coming the bowlwaterto boil the soft-boiled egg.”
“老板,来碗水煮糖心蛋。”stretch/openTansaid, the frontvoltturns headin the female who on the tableeats the thingsuddenly, looks.
张叹说完,前面伏在餐桌上吃东西的女性猛然回头,看过来。„stretch/openTan?”
“张叹?”„Emmmyouin?”
“emmm你怎么也在?”„Whichwalkscanrun intoyou, comesquickly, wesit the same place.”
“走哪都能遇到你,快来,我们坐一起。”ThisisyellowMeimei.
这是黄莓莓。
Before stretch/openTanwangherbody, sits, asked: „How do youeattooutside? Doesn't Auntie Huanggiveto prepare food? Were youcaught up?”
张叹往她身前坐好,问:“你怎么到外面来吃?黄姨不给做饭?还是你被赶了出来?”yellowMeimeihiseyes, saidwhite/in vain: „Youalsoreallysaidright, Iwas retaliated, toavoidmeeting with a disaster, can only slip awayto fill in the belly.”
黄莓莓白他一眼,说:“你还真说对了,我是被人报复了,为了避免遭殃,只能溜出来自己填肚子。”„Haha, makingmeguess,wonUncle Huanga lot ofmoney?”
“哈哈,让我猜猜,是不是又赢了黄叔不少钱?”yellowMeimeisaidwith amazement: „Okstretch/openTan, thisyoucanguess correctly, is really the roundworm in mybelly.”
黄莓莓惊讶道:“行啊张叹,这你都能猜到,果然是我肚子里的蛔虫。”„Sufficesto be disgusting.”
“够恶心的。”„Drawsyou.”
“把你拉出来。”„Do youalsoeat!!”
“你还吃不吃!!”„Ha”
“哈哈哈”„Youeatsuchsweetly?”
“你吃这么甜的吗?”„Changes the taste.”
“换换口味。”stretch/openTanzongcannottellher, becauseeats the stickgoodchicken that slightlygave in vain, histhese daysurgent matter, the deficiency-firewas exuberant.
张叹总不能告诉她,因为吃了小白送来的棒棒鸡,他这几天火烧屁股,虚火旺盛。Two peoplehave had the dinner, openedsighsotherpackedagaintwo, is raisinggoing out.
两人吃过晚饭,张叹另外再打包了两份,提着出门。„Tolittlewhite?”yellowMeimeiaskedcuriously.
“给小白的?”黄莓莓好奇地问道。stretch/openTan: „Weight/Quantitywere too few, mysuchgiant, cannot eat to the full, goes backto continueto eat.”
张叹:“分量太少了,我这么个大个子,吃不饱,回去继续吃。”„Deceived people?”
“骗人吧?”„Really, eatsinthisembarrassed, a personeatsthreebowls, be not regarded the pig.”
“真的,在这不好意思吃,一个人吃三碗,别被当成猪了。”„Hey, you are really the pig.”
“嘿,那你真是猪啊。”„HowIeatwill not gain weight, eatthreebowlsto be equal tonot eating, you? According to the insidernews, youdrink the cold waterto gain weight, ha”
“我怎么吃都不会长胖,吃三碗等于没吃,你呢?据知情人士消息,你喝凉水都会长胖,哈哈哈”Clenching teeth that yellowMeimeiair/Qi, right, shewill bethattypedrinks the cold waterfatperson, butwill do toherappetiteisgood, will not eat the hungrydizzinessvertigo.
黄莓莓气的咬牙,没错,她就是那种喝凉水都会胖的人,但奈何她胃口就是好,不吃饿的头晕眼花。yellowMeimeientered the teahouse of roadside, the invitationopenedto sighto drink a pot, stretch/openTansaid that hemustgo back the drinking waterto boil the soft-boiled eggbefore it's too late, walked.
黄莓莓进了路边的茶馆,邀请张叹进去喝一壶,张叹说他要回去趁热吃水煮糖心蛋,走了。Returns to the academy, yo, the roar that but alsowithoutentering the room, hearslittlewhite, thisSichuanyounger sisterpaperis quarrelling! Oppositepersoncannot resistcompletely, is defeated, the shrivelledmouth, sooncried.
回到学园,哟呵,还没进屋呢,就听到小白的吼声,这四川妹纸在吵架!对面的人完全招架不住,丢盔弃甲,瘪瘪嘴,快要哭出来了。AlsoisunluckyLuoZikang.
又是倒霉的罗子康。littleTeacherwillowtries to break up a fight, separatestwo people, preventsandfights.
小柳老师拉架,把两人隔开,防止又打架。Although the bodyseparated, butlittlewhiteimposing mannerdoes not reduce, is still teachingLuoZikangominously.
虽然身体分开了,但是小白气势不减,依然凶巴巴地在训罗子康。„Called the elder sister~called the elder sister, Ilet offyou.”littlewhiteindulges in fantasyto say.
“叫姐姐~叫姐姐,我就放过你。”小白异想天开道。„Youare only4 years old!”LuochildKangQifenshouted.
“你只有四岁!”罗子康气愤地大喊。
A 4-year-oldkid, wantsto be 5-year-oldheto shout the elder sister, wasFish Leonggaveherfivecouragegems?
一个4岁的娃,想要5岁的他喊姐姐,是梁静茹给了她五颗勇气宝石吗?„My4 -and-a-half years old! Called the elder sister, a bit fastersai.”littlewhitesimilarlyloudreply.
“我四岁半啦!叫姐姐,快点噻。”小白同样大声回答。4years old and 4 -and-a-half years old differveryin a big way, more than 100days.
四岁和四岁半相差很大的,一百多天呢。LuochildKangQifacewas red, class/flowtears, whileangry.
罗子康气的脸都红了,一边流眼泪,一边怒气冲冲。„littlewhiteyouaremelonbaby”
“小白你是个瓜娃子”littlewhiteis gawked that hescolded, whatsituation? Did LuochildKangthismelonbabyactuallyscoldheris the melonbaby?!!
小白被他骂的愣了一下,啥子情况?罗子康这个瓜娃子竟然骂她是瓜娃子?!!even/includingchildKanglittlewhitepoison!
连罗子康都中了小白的毒!Thesechildrenandlittlewhitetogetherwere dull long, each onecanspeakseveralSichuan, MengChengchengcan, ShenLiuliucan, the millet, the smallalizarin red, sworn enemyLuoZikangbe able.
这些小朋友和小白呆一起久了,个个能讲几句川普,孟程程可以,沈榴榴可以,小米可以,小茜可以,就连死对头罗子康都会了。ShenLiuliuagitatesin the one side: „littlewhite, youscoldedhimquicklyis the melonbaby you are the youngfemale student, youcannotlose the duck.”
沈榴榴在一旁煽风点火:“小白,你快骂他是瓜娃子你是小女生,你不能输鸭。”Thismelonbaby! littleTeacherwillowpinchedhercheek, warned that shedo not watch the fundoes not dislike the matterto be big, thenmakeslittlewhitenot permitto quarrel, does not permitto curse at people, becauseshehad criedLuochildKangMa, but how can also? rich/forgiveRenchu, andrich/forgivepeople, mustlearnthistruthsince childhood.
这瓜娃子!小柳老师捏了捏她的脸蛋,警告她不要看热闹不嫌事大,然后让小白不准吵架,也不准骂人,因为她已经把罗子康骂哭了,还要怎么样?得饶人处且饶人,从小就要学会这个道理啊。littlewhitedoes not seem to let offLuoZikang, mustfollow up a victory with hot pursuit, saidplausibly: „LuoZikangthismelonbabyis the lovecryingghost, cries to changestrongersai that.”
小白似乎不打算放过罗子康,要乘胜追击,振振有词地说:“罗子康这个瓜娃子就是个爱哭鬼,哭过就会变的更加坚强噻。”Sheis is so powerful, nowsheis fierce, no onewantto scoldcriesshe, so long asshedoes not wantto cry, hitshitsdoes not cry.
她就是这么强大起来的,现在她多厉害啊,谁都别想骂哭她,只要她不想哭,打都打不哭。littleTeacherwillowseizedlittlewhite, anotheryoungteacheris comfortingLuoZikang.
小柳老师捉走了小白,另外一个小老师则在安慰罗子康。„Why did Ilose? Wū wū~”
“为什么我又输了?呜呜呜~”LuochildKangwipestears, whilecomplained tearfullyto the teacher, quarrelledheto lose, sadfromheart.
罗子康一边抹眼泪,一边向老师哭诉,吵架他又输了,不禁悲从心来。
The teachertalkedclose to, wantsto sayanything, butbore, quarrelledyounot to win.
老师动动嘴巴,想说什么的,但忍住了,吵架你就没赢过好不。Mustbegoodas the teacher, thereforeis suppressingimpulsive, has not made up the blade.
作为老师要为人善良,所以强忍着冲动,没有补刀。„littlewhite, littlewhitedo not walk~comesLuoZikangto shoutagain”comesonegameagain.
“小白,小白你不要走~再来吖”罗子康呼喊再来一局。Scolded is not very miserable? The youngteacher thought that sheforLuochildKangNanguo.
被骂的还不够惨吗?小老师心想,她都为罗子康难过。
When LuochildKangthinksquarrelleda moment ago, does not have the strength to hit back that littlewhitescolded, in the headonegroup of starch, hemorewantsmore to be angry, onegroup of starchblasted out, lightroseupward, heavysankdownward, in the mind a nextpure brightness, the miraculous glow of lightningpresently, in the worldsaidmanycursing at peoplewordsfor the first timefor the first timefor the first timefor the first timefor the first timefor the first time, listens, thesewordswere much good, whyhasn't thoughta moment ago? Ifa moment ago thought that slightlytook something for freebyhimis scoldedcries! Nowcrieswas nothe.
罗子康想到刚才吵架时,被小白骂的没有还手之力,脑袋里一团浆糊,他越想越想生气,一团浆糊炸开,轻的往上升,重的往下沉,脑海里一下清明了,闪电的灵光乍乍乍乍乍乍现,天地间冒出许多骂人的话,听听,这些话多棒啊,为什么刚才没有想到?刚才要是想到了,小白要被他骂哭!现在哭的就不是他了。
It is not good, morewants is not unwillinier, littlewhitedo not walk, has come.
不行,越想越不甘心,小白不要走,重新来过一遍。„Yourquitepitifulduck, LuoZikang.”
“你好可怜鸭,罗子康。”LuochildKangShenhouemitssucha few wordsspookily.
罗子康身后幽幽地冒出这么一句话来。LuochildKangdoes not needthenalsoto know that waswho said that be angrybellowed: „Pomegranatepomegranate your bearchild”
罗子康不用回头也知道是谁说的,生气地大吼:“榴榴你这个熊孩子”ShenLiuliuleaps uptohimnearbyimmediately, hidesin the teacherbehind, onlyreveals the smallcheek, like thisspokewithLuoZikangis very safe, after allshedid not havelittlewhitesuchmilitary force, can only use the intelligence and ability.
沈榴榴立刻蹿到他跟前,躲在老师身后,只露出小脸蛋,这样和罗子康说话很安全,毕竟她没有小白那样的武力,只能用聪明才智咯。„Xiaomanteacher, LuoZikangscoldedme.”ShenLiuliucomplainedto the teacher.
“小满老师,罗子康骂我呢。”沈榴榴向老师告状。Xiaomanteacheris the heartis also tiredtoher, thisismixesto be liberalcompletely, is the littlewhitefaithfulpersonal servant, carries the palm-leaf fanalong, agitatesmostis an expert.
小满老师对她也是心累,这个完全就是混不吝,是小白的忠实跟班,随身扛着芭蕉扇,煽风点火最在行。
To punchher, is very lovable, the heartsaid the suckling babychildsuckling babychild, ok.
想揍她吧,挺可爱的,心说奶娃子奶娃子,算了。ShenLiuliucansayscoldsgood, withstood/topseveralmouths, being eager to try to reopen the battle of wordsLuoZikang who saying that in the head the waterwindfirearose suddenly, the worldbecameonegroup of starch.
沈榴榴能言善骂,顶了几句嘴,就把跃跃欲试想要重开骂战的罗子康说愣了,脑袋里地水风火突发,天地又成了一团浆糊。HisShenLiuliu said that but, butShenLiuliuis only3 years old, mostaddshalf, 3 -and-a-halfyears old.
他连沈榴榴都说不过,而沈榴榴只有三岁啊,最多加个半,三岁半。littlewhitewas orderedin the courtyardto reconsiderbylittleTeacherwillow, reconsiderationlittlewhitewas merry, canrun back and forth in confusionin the courtyardflagrantly, lookslooks, thinks that onsets up.
小白被小柳老师勒令到院子里反思反思,反思的小白快活了,可以明目张胆在院子里乱晃,瞄啊瞄啊,想上树。However, beforeontree, the mattermustdo.
不过,在上树之前,还有事要做。Sheruns up tounder the windows of twobuildings, raises the smallheadto shouttowardabove: „Milletmilletdo not cry, IhelpedyouscoldLuoZikangthatmelonbaby, hecried,”
她跑到二楼的窗户下,昂着小脑袋朝上面大喊:“小米小米别哭啦,我帮你骂了罗子康那个瓜娃子,他哭兮兮的,哈”stretch/openTanappearssideher: „How did milletcry?”
张叹出现在她身边:“小米怎么哭了?”littlewhitecomplained, said that LuoZikangsaid mother of milletdid not wanther, annoyedto cry the millet.
小白告状,说罗子康说小米的妈妈不要她了,惹哭了小米。„Thinks that Ibrave the jack-o'-lantern~”littlewhitewhispered, as ifindignantlywas still difficultto disappear.
“想起来我就冒鬼火嗷~”小白嘀咕道,似乎依旧气愤难消。ShenLiuliumysteriously appears and disappears, does not know where braved.
沈榴榴神出鬼没,不知道从哪里冒了出来。„LuoZikangalsosaidlittlewhite, butlittlewhitehas not cried, becauselittlewhiteisstronglittlewhite. LuochildKangalsosaid the pomegranatepomegranate, but the pomegranatepomegranatehas not cried, because the pomegranatepomegranateis the strongsmallpomegranate.”
“罗子康也说了小白,但是小白没哭,因为小白是坚强的小白。罗子康也说了榴榴,但是榴榴没哭,因为榴榴是坚强的小石榴。”
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