SAHDA :: Volume #6

#574: Changes the script


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In Miss Zhao's family/home. 赵小姐的家里。 Clash/To the duck, I must go to school ~ toot toot finished eating the dinner, runs to carry the small book bag enthusiastically, must go to the small red horse hopefully. “冲鸭,我要去上学啦~”嘟嘟吃完晚饭,兴匆匆地跑去背起小书包,满怀期待地要去小红马。 However she was blocked by her father Zhao Gongcheng. 但是她被她爸爸赵功成拦住了。 Hiahia, I must go to the small red horse, the father.” Toot toot raises the small face to say. “hiahia,我要去小红马,爸爸。”嘟嘟昂着小脸说道。 Zhao Gongcheng puts out the cell phone, edits a paragraph of writing, the cell phone the male voice says immediately: First tells the story to the parents.” 赵功成拿出手机,编辑了一段文字,手机立刻有一个男声说道:“先给爸爸妈妈讲讲故事。” Toot toot grasps the small face, has a look at him, has a look at mother, a little worries, always made her tell the story because of the parents to them generally recently, she is not Elder Sister journey Chengxiao. 嘟嘟抓了抓小脸,看看他,看看妈妈,有点烦恼,概因爸爸妈妈最近老是让她给她们讲故事,她又不是程程小姐姐。 Spoke one.” In Sun Dongdong the cell phone also spreads the speaking voice. “讲一个嘛。”孙冬冬的手机里也传出说话声。 Toot toot sighed, dejected, sat on the small stool, that spoke one. 嘟嘟叹口气,垂头丧气的,坐在小凳子上,那就讲一个叭。 What spoke? 讲个什么呢? Told the story of small duck, coped, she currently is also in the process of learn/study. 讲个小鸭子的故事叭,对付对付,她目前还处在学习的过程中呢。 Since toot toot will speak, two couples always grab the little friend to tell the story, practice speech and language enhancement, worry, because family's growth environment was extremely sad to delay toot toot the language enhancement. 自从嘟嘟会说话后,两夫妻就老抓着小朋友讲故事,练习说话和语言能力,就担心因为家里的成长环境太过沉闷而耽误了嘟嘟的语言能力。 But is good because, Miss Zhao the instinct is lively, is a small chatterbox, even no one and she spoke at home, she should still whisper not to stop. Now, Zhao Gongcheng and Sun Dongdong an sum total, pokes again, every night grabs Miss Zhao to tell the story to them, spoke the amusing thing of little red Mali. Such time, they have found, in the little red horse academy, the pomegranate pomegranate is most gluttonous, little white is the big sister, journey journey is the story king, Xier is gruff, the millet can make an arrest, the river bank is the Big Brother, Luo Zikang is fart is black, Yingzi will educate the person, little Teacher willow in the stomach stomach hid the baby, Boss stretch/open was a big boss has the ground and soaked black beans...... 但好在,赵小姐天性活泼,是个小话痨,即便在家没有人和她说话,她也会嘀嘀咕咕个没停。现在,赵功成和孙冬冬一合计,再添一把火,每晚抓着赵小姐给她们讲故事,讲小红马里的趣事。就这么点时间,她们已经了解到,小红马学园里,榴榴最贪吃,小白是大姐大,程程是故事大王,喜儿是憨憨,小米会抓人,江滨是大哥哥,罗子康是屁儿黑,小英子会教育人,小柳老师肚肚里藏了宝宝,张老板是个大老板好有钱钱…… Toot toot racked brains to give the parents to tell a story of small duck, was allowed to pass finally, went to small red horse Zhao to play happily. 嘟嘟绞尽脑汁给爸爸妈妈讲了一个小鸭子的故事,才总算被放行,高高兴兴去小红马找小朋友们玩。 The «Rumor» dramatic team straightens out gradually, shooting plan methodical fast conducts, these days stretch/open Tan also very diligent, almost will transfer every day two to the dramatic team, will have the matter to be all right will stay half-day one day there. 《风声》的剧组渐渐步入正轨,拍摄计划有条不紊的快速进行中,这段时间张叹也非常的勤快,几乎每天都会到剧组转两圈,有事没事都会在那里待个半天一天的。 Teacher stretch/open , is looking for you.” A manager of actor looks. “张老师,在啊,正找您呢。”一名演员的经纪人找过来。 Is Teacher Liu, please sit down, asks me to have the matter?” stretch/open Tan is looking at the shooting plan over the following several days in the small room, checks with the stage supervisor. “是刘老师,请坐,找我有事?”张叹正在小房间里看接下来几天的拍摄计划,和场务一起核对。 Is such Teacher stretch/open, our Sun Hao pondered over the script for several days frequently, always praises good that your script writes, specially fascinating, he has wanted to find the time and you chats the script, chatted his role, he pondered over for a long time, to some role sensibility, wants to verify with you, look was right.” “是这样的张老师,我们孙浩这些天经常琢磨剧本,总是夸您的剧本写的好,特别的引人入胜,他一直想找时间和您聊一聊剧本,也聊一聊他的角色,他琢磨许久,对角色有些感悟,想和您印证一下,看是不是对的。” stretch/open Tan said with a smile: This custom, estimates the role much, can quickly deeper substitution in, do not regard the dying thing the role, must regard a living person it, he has the joy, anger, sorrow, and happiness, has own idea and judgment. I, although is the screenwriter, but cannot control them, how to deduct, how to develop, is they decided that with my hand, wrote, therefore, discussed with me naturally, but what is more important understood, oneself grasped well.” 张叹笑道:“这习惯好啊,多揣摩角色,才能更快更深的代入其中,千万不要把角色当成死物,要把它当成一个活生生的人,他有喜怒哀乐,有自己的想法和判断。我呢,虽然是编剧,但并不能左右他们,怎么演绎,怎么发展,都是他们自己决定的,就是借我手,写出来了而已,所以,和我讨论当然可以,但更重要的是自己理解,自己把握就好。” You fool me, the broker will of the people said that on the face brings smiling, particularly said sincerely: Right, Teacher stretch/open these characters of writing, are lifelike, is very vivid. Last night, our Sun Hao read the script to ponder over, to a tomorrow's small plot a little idea, he thought that his role should have room for bigger display in the plot, the point of emotional outburst that was......” 你就唬我吧,经纪人心说,脸上却带着笑,特别诚恳地说:“对对对,张老师笔下的这些个人物,都活灵活现的,特别生动。昨晚啊,我们孙浩看剧本琢磨,就对明天的一个小剧情有点想法,他就觉得吧,他那角色在剧情里应该有更大的发挥空间,情感爆发的点啊那是……” ...... …… Sent with great difficulty, stretch/open Tan to oneself! the mineral water, this person said for quite a while but actually, actually wants to change the script, the additional play cup 好不容易把人打发走了,张叹给自己倒了杯矿泉水,这人说半天,其实就是想改剧本,加戏! Not is only he, since beginning shooting, the every large or small actor or the manager have always looked for him, pleasant to hear that said discusses the plot, actually rushes to in addition to play. 不仅是他,自从开拍以来,大大小小的演员或者经纪人总来找他,说的好听是讨论剧情,其实都是奔着加戏来的。 This is the common phenomenon in industry, stretch/open Tan very understood actually, but understands to turn over to the understanding, the plot he will not easily revise, did not say other, said that if spilled this openings, later is serious, added to him, not very adds to her, the supporting roles added that my lead also not?...... 这是行业里的普遍现象,张叹倒是挺理解的,不过理解归理解,剧情他绝不会轻易修改,不说别的,就说要是开了这口子,以后不得了,给他加了,不好不给她加吧,配角都加了,我主角还不加吗?…… He sets out to look to make a movie to outside, stands in director Ren Zhicheng behind, this play Sun Hao and ten thousand Kun's opponent plays, ten thousand Yin principle are the old play bones, every action and every movement and lines skill are deep, the ordinary lines were said by him, has the flavor. Although Sun Hao is inferior to ten thousand Kun, good that also but displays. 他起身到外面看拍戏,站在导演任志成的身后,这段戏正是孙浩和万坤的对手戏,万坤是老戏骨,一举一动和台词功力非常深,普普通通的台词经他说出来,都别有韵味。孙浩虽然不如万坤,但表现的也不错。 stretch/open Tan looks with great interest, gawked suddenly staring, listens to Sun Hao to read the lines carefully, looking pensive. 张叹看的津津有味,忽然愣了愣,仔细听孙浩念台词,若有所思。 Sun Hao's lines and script is not right! 孙浩的台词和剧本的不对! Director Ren Zhicheng had not detected, ten thousand Kun detected, the expression stayed, performed the issue, the director shouted ut, retook. 导演任志成没有察觉,万坤察觉到了,表情呆了呆,演出了问题,导演喊ut,重拍。 Sorry, sorry, is my issue, I was a little distracted.” Ten thousand Kun apologized. “对不起,对不起,是我的问题,我有点走神了。”万坤道歉道。 Ren Zhicheng is the temperament very good director, sighed with beforehand has cooperated several entirely different, until now, stretch/open Tan has not listened to Ren Zhicheng to curse at people and speak the bad language. 任志成是脾气很好的导演,和张叹之前合作过几位性格截然不同,到现在为止,张叹还没听任志成骂过人、说过脏话。 That rests for 5 minutes, drinking water of drinking water, going to bathroom of going to bathroom. After 5 minutes begins shooting, should not be late.” “那就都休息五分钟吧,喝水的喝水,上厕所的上厕所。五分钟后开拍,不要迟到啦。” Opens stretch/open Ling who sighed found not far away, wanted a today's refined script, flips, difference that in the script Sun Hao's lines and he said. 张叹找到不远处的张凌,要了一份今天的细化剧本,翻了翻,剧本上孙浩刚才的这段台词和他说的不一样。 „Did you notice a moment ago? Difference in lines and script that Sun Hao said.” “刚才你注意到没?孙浩说的台词和剧本上的不一样。” stretch/open Ling said low voice: I just want to say that, Sun Hao not only changed the lines, but also added part, don't you know? I think that is you adds.” 张凌小声说:“我正想说呢,孙浩不仅改了台词,而且还加了一部分,您不知道吗?我以为是您加的。” „It is not I adds, does he himself add?” stretch/open Tan is frowning to ask. “不是我加的,他自己加的?”张叹皱着眉头问。 stretch/open Ling looked at a distant place just Sun Hao who and ten thousand Kun chatted, shook the head saying: I really do not know beforehand, looked at him to read a moment ago, I know that he changed. Without us writes a play the agreement, how he can arbitrarily the touch play lines?” 张凌看了一眼远处正和万坤聊天的孙浩,摇头说:“我事先真不知道,也就刚才看他念,我才知道他改了。如果没有我们编剧同意,他怎么可以自己擅自修改剧本台词?” stretch/open Tan sees his not clear situation, said the sound knew, then looks for Sun Hao directly, without beating around the bush, inquired why straightforwardly changed the lines also to add the lines a moment ago. 张叹见他不清楚情况,说了声知道了,便直接去找孙浩,没拐弯抹角,直截了当地询问刚才为什么改了台词还加了台词。 Sun Hao gawked staring, obviously has not thought thin that such stretch/open Tan can pay attention, moreover directly asked, this let somewhat stunned, say awkwardly: Teacher stretch/open, I am acting in a play time, being on site deal with changes changes, does not want is too many, thought that at this time said is also very appropriate.” 孙浩愣了愣,显然没想到张叹会注意的这么细,而且直接来问,这让有些错愕,尴尬地说:“张老师,我是演戏的时候,临场应变改的,没想太多,就觉得这时候这么说也挺合适。” Ten thousand Kun has not spoken in the one side. 万坤在一旁没吭声。 stretch/open Tan said: Being on site deal with changes naturally, but cannot change too, you change somewhat many, moreover added the play, how do you think?” 张叹说:“临场应变当然可以,但不能变太多,你变的有些多,而且是加了戏,你是怎么想的?” Sun Hao complexion changed, made excuses awkwardly several, finally was forced, said before him , has greeted with grandson East Asia. 孙浩脸色变了变,尴尬地支吾了几句,最后被逼无奈,才说他之前有和孙亚东打过招呼。 stretch/open Tan nods, said: This time even, next time, each lines we do not consider like this carefully, has the intention, changed to destroy the overall layout.” 张叹点点头,说:“这次就算了,下次不要这样了,每句台词我们都是仔细斟酌过的,都有用意,改了破坏了整体布局了。” Right that yeah well, Teacher stretch/open you said that sorry, was I am too rash.” “哎好好,张老师您说的对,对不起,是我太莽撞了。” 5 minutes of relaxation time, making a movie makes a fresh start, this Sun Hao changed the lines, well-mannered pats this plot. 五分钟休息时间到,拍戏重新开始,这回孙浩把台词改回来了,规规矩矩是拍完了这一剧情。 stretch/open Tan looked at the little while to leave, after grandson East Asia, said: „Does Teacher Sun have the time? Comes to my office.” 张叹看了会儿离开,经过孙亚东时,说:“孙老师有时间吗?到我办公室来一下。” Grandson East Asia does not doubt him, comes to the office with him. 孙亚东不疑有他,跟着他来到办公室。 Outside journey journey the family/home, Meng Guangxin came. 程程的家外,孟广新又来了。 Opens the door journey journey, the father does not walk, we stay here, journey journey “开门啊程程,爸爸不走了,我们就留在这里,程程” journey Chengkai a crack in a door. 程程开了一条门缝。 journey journey you opened the door finally, didn't you plan to want the father?” Meng broadly newly almost tears. “程程你终于开门了,你是不是不打算要爸爸了?”孟广新差点老泪纵横。 „Doesn't father, really walk?” journey journey asked indefinitely. “爸爸,真的不走了吗?”程程不确定地问。 Really does not walk.” “真的不走了。” He by company leave without pay, was said that has several days of false to him, awaits calmly the final handling result of company. 他都被公司停薪留职了,说给他放几天假,静待公司的最终处置结果。 journey journey opens the door happily, puts him to come. 程程开心地打开门,放他进来。 Meng stands in the entrance broadly newly, does not have anxiously, but looks around toward, your mother in?” 孟广新站在门口,没有急着进来,而是往里张望,“你妈妈在吗?” Finishes speaking, journey journey mother appears in the kitchen entrance, the waist is the apron, after high and low takes a look at him, said: In shoes cabinet has the slipper that you can wear, oneself found to exchange.” 话音刚落,程程的妈妈就出现在厨房门口,腰间系着围裙,上下打量他后才说:“鞋柜里有你能穿的拖鞋,自己找到换上吧。” „...... Yeah, thanks.” “……哎,谢谢。”
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