InMissZhao'sfamily/home.
赵小姐的家里。„Clash/To the duck, Imustgo to school~”toot tootfinished eating the dinner, runsto carry the smallbook bagenthusiastically, mustgo to the smallredhorsehopefully.
“冲鸭,我要去上学啦~”嘟嘟吃完晚饭,兴匆匆地跑去背起小书包,满怀期待地要去小红马。Howevershewas blockedbyher fatherZhaoGongcheng.
但是她被她爸爸赵功成拦住了。„Hiahia, Imustgo to the smallredhorse, the father.”Toot tootraises the smallfaceto say.
“hiahia,我要去小红马,爸爸。”嘟嘟昂着小脸说道。ZhaoGongchengputs out the cell phone, edits a paragraph of writing, the cell phone the male voicesaysimmediately: „Firsttells the storyto the parents.”
赵功成拿出手机,编辑了一段文字,手机立刻有一个男声说道:“先给爸爸妈妈讲讲故事。”Toot tootgrasps the smallface, has a look athim, has a look at mother, a littleworries, alwaysmadehertell the storybecause of the parentstothemgenerallyrecently, sheis notElder SisterjourneyChengxiao.
嘟嘟抓了抓小脸,看看他,看看妈妈,有点烦恼,概因爸爸妈妈最近老是让她给她们讲故事,她又不是程程小姐姐。„Spokeone.”InSunDongdong the cell phonealsospreads the speaking voice.
“讲一个嘛。”孙冬冬的手机里也传出说话声。Toot tootsighed, dejected, saton the smallstool, thatspokeone.
嘟嘟叹口气,垂头丧气的,坐在小凳子上,那就讲一个叭。Whatspoke?
讲个什么呢?Told the story of smallduck, coped, shecurrently is also in the process of learn/study.
讲个小鸭子的故事叭,对付对付,她目前还处在学习的过程中呢。
Since toot tootwill speak, twocouplesalwaysgrab the little friendto tell the story, practicespeechandlanguage enhancement, worry, becausefamily'sgrowth environmentwas extremely sadto delaytoot toot the language enhancement.
自从嘟嘟会说话后,两夫妻就老抓着小朋友讲故事,练习说话和语言能力,就担心因为家里的成长环境太过沉闷而耽误了嘟嘟的语言能力。Butis goodbecause, MissZhao the instinctis lively, is a smallchatterbox, evenno oneandshespokeathome, she should still whispernot to stop. Now, ZhaoGongchengandSunDongdong an sum total, pokesagain, every nightgrabsMissZhaoto tell the storytothem, spoke the amusing thing of littleredMali. Suchtime, theyhave found,in the littleredhorseacademy, the pomegranatepomegranateis most gluttonous, littlewhiteis the big sister, journeyjourneyis the storyking, Xierisgruff, the milletcanmake an arrest, the river bankis the Big Brother, LuoZikangisfartis black, Yingziwill educate the person, littleTeacherwillowin the stomachstomachhid the baby, Bossstretch/openwas a bigboss has the ground and soaked black beans......
但好在,赵小姐天性活泼,是个小话痨,即便在家没有人和她说话,她也会嘀嘀咕咕个没停。现在,赵功成和孙冬冬一合计,再添一把火,每晚抓着赵小姐给她们讲故事,讲小红马里的趣事。就这么点时间,她们已经了解到,小红马学园里,榴榴最贪吃,小白是大姐大,程程是故事大王,喜儿是憨憨,小米会抓人,江滨是大哥哥,罗子康是屁儿黑,小英子会教育人,小柳老师肚肚里藏了宝宝,张老板是个大老板好有钱钱……Toot tootracked brainsto give the parentsto tell a story of smallduck, was allowed to passfinally, went tosmallredhorseZhaoto playhappily.
嘟嘟绞尽脑汁给爸爸妈妈讲了一个小鸭子的故事,才总算被放行,高高兴兴去小红马找小朋友们玩。
The «Rumor»dramatic teamstraightens outgradually, shooting planmethodicalfast conducts, these daysstretch/openTanalsoverydiligent, almostwill transferevery daytwoto the dramatic team, will have the matterto be all rightwill stayhalf-dayoneday there.
《风声》的剧组渐渐步入正轨,拍摄计划有条不紊的快速进行中,这段时间张叹也非常的勤快,几乎每天都会到剧组转两圈,有事没事都会在那里待个半天一天的。„Teacherstretch/open, is looking foryou.” A manager of actorlooks.
“张老师,在啊,正找您呢。”一名演员的经纪人找过来。„IsTeacherLiu, please sit down, asksmeto have the matter?”stretch/openTanis looking at the shooting planover the following several daysin the smallroom, checkswith the stage supervisor.
“是刘老师,请坐,找我有事?”张叹正在小房间里看接下来几天的拍摄计划,和场务一起核对。„IssuchTeacherstretch/open, ourSun Haopondered over the scriptfor several daysfrequently, alwayspraisesgood that yourscriptwrites, speciallyfascinating, hehas wantedto find the timeandyouchats the script, chattedhisrole, hepondered overfor a long time, tosomerolesensibility, wantsto verifywithyou, lookwas right.”
“是这样的张老师,我们孙浩这些天经常琢磨剧本,总是夸您的剧本写的好,特别的引人入胜,他一直想找时间和您聊一聊剧本,也聊一聊他的角色,他琢磨许久,对角色有些感悟,想和您印证一下,看是不是对的。”stretch/openTansaid with a smile: „Thiscustom, estimates the rolemuch, canquicklydeepersubstitutionin, do not regard the dyingthing the role, mustregard a livingpersonit, hehas the joy, anger, sorrow, and happiness, hasownidea and judgment. I, althoughis the screenwriter, butcannotcontrolthem, howto deduct, howto develop, istheydecided that withmyhand, wrote, therefore, discussedwithmenaturally, but what is more importantunderstood,oneselfgraspedwell.”
张叹笑道:“这习惯好啊,多揣摩角色,才能更快更深的代入其中,千万不要把角色当成死物,要把它当成一个活生生的人,他有喜怒哀乐,有自己的想法和判断。我呢,虽然是编剧,但并不能左右他们,怎么演绎,怎么发展,都是他们自己决定的,就是借我手,写出来了而已,所以,和我讨论当然可以,但更重要的是自己理解,自己把握就好。”Youfoolme, the brokerwill of the people said that on the facebringssmiling, particularlysaidsincerely: „Right, Teacherstretch/open these characters of writing, are lifelike, is very vivid. Last night, ourSun Haoread the scriptto ponder over, to a tomorrow'ssmallplota littleidea, hethought that his roleshouldhave room forbiggerdisplayin the plot, the point of emotional outburstthatwas......”
你就唬我吧,经纪人心说,脸上却带着笑,特别诚恳地说:“对对对,张老师笔下的这些个人物,都活灵活现的,特别生动。昨晚啊,我们孙浩看剧本琢磨,就对明天的一个小剧情有点想法,他就觉得吧,他那角色在剧情里应该有更大的发挥空间,情感爆发的点啊那是……”
......
……Sentwith great difficulty, stretch/openTantooneself! the mineral water, thispersonsaidfor quite a whilebut actually, actuallywantsto change the script, the additionalplaycup
好不容易把人打发走了,张叹给自己倒了杯矿泉水,这人说半天,其实就是想改剧本,加戏!Not is only he, sincebeginning shooting, the every large or smallactoror the managerhave always looked forhim, pleasant to hear that saiddiscusses the plot, actuallyrushes toin additionto play.
不仅是他,自从开拍以来,大大小小的演员或者经纪人总来找他,说的好听是讨论剧情,其实都是奔着加戏来的。Thisis the common phenomenon in industry, stretch/openTanveryunderstoodactually, butunderstandsto turn over to the understanding, the plothewill not easily revise, did not sayother, said that ifspilledthisopenings, lateris serious, addedtohim, notveryaddstoher, the supporting roles added that myleadalsonot?......
这是行业里的普遍现象,张叹倒是挺理解的,不过理解归理解,剧情他绝不会轻易修改,不说别的,就说要是开了这口子,以后不得了,给他加了,不好不给她加吧,配角都加了,我主角还不加吗?……Hesets outto lookto make a movietooutside, standsindirectorRen Zhichengbehind, thisplaySun Haoandten thousandKun'sopponentplays, ten thousandYin principleare the oldplaybones, every action and every movement and linesskillare deep, the ordinarylineswere saidbyhim, has the flavor. AlthoughSun Haois inferior toten thousandKun, good that alsobutdisplays.
他起身到外面看拍戏,站在导演任志成的身后,这段戏正是孙浩和万坤的对手戏,万坤是老戏骨,一举一动和台词功力非常深,普普通通的台词经他说出来,都别有韵味。孙浩虽然不如万坤,但表现的也不错。stretch/openTanlookswith great interest, gawkedsuddenlystaring, listens toSun Haoto read the linescarefully, looking pensive.
张叹看的津津有味,忽然愣了愣,仔细听孙浩念台词,若有所思。Sun Hao'slinesandscriptis not right!
孙浩的台词和剧本的不对!DirectorRen Zhichenghad not detected,ten thousandKundetected, the expressionstayed, performed the issue, the directorshoutedut, retook.
导演任志成没有察觉,万坤察觉到了,表情呆了呆,演出了问题,导演喊ut,重拍。„Sorry, sorry, ismyissue, Iwas a little distracted.”Ten thousandKunapologized.
“对不起,对不起,是我的问题,我有点走神了。”万坤道歉道。Ren Zhichengis the temperamentverygooddirector, sighedwithbeforehandhas cooperatedseveralentirely different, until now, stretch/openTanhas not listened toRen Zhichengto curse at peopleandspeak the bad language.
任志成是脾气很好的导演,和张叹之前合作过几位性格截然不同,到现在为止,张叹还没听任志成骂过人、说过脏话。„Thatrests for 5minutes, drinking water of drinking water, going to bathroom of going to bathroom. After 5minutesbegins shooting, should not be late.”
“那就都休息五分钟吧,喝水的喝水,上厕所的上厕所。五分钟后开拍,不要迟到啦。”Opensstretch/openLing who sighedfoundnot far away, wanted a today'srefinedscript, flips, difference that in the scriptSun Hao'slinesandhesaid.
张叹找到不远处的张凌,要了一份今天的细化剧本,翻了翻,剧本上孙浩刚才的这段台词和他说的不一样。„Did younoticea moment ago? Difference in linesandscript that Sun Haosaid.”
“刚才你注意到没?孙浩说的台词和剧本上的不一样。”stretch/openLingsaidlow voice: „Ijust want to say that, Sun Haonot onlychanged the lines, but alsoaddedpart, don't youknow? Ithink that isyouadds.”
张凌小声说:“我正想说呢,孙浩不仅改了台词,而且还加了一部分,您不知道吗?我以为是您加的。”„It is not Iadds, does he himselfadd?”stretch/openTanis frowningto ask.
“不是我加的,他自己加的?”张叹皱着眉头问。stretch/openLinglooked at a distant placejustSun Hao who andten thousandKunchatted, shook the head saying: „Ireallydo not knowbeforehand, looked athimto reada moment ago, Iknow that hechanged. Withoutuswrites a play the agreement, howhecanarbitrarily the touch playlines?”
张凌看了一眼远处正和万坤聊天的孙浩,摇头说:“我事先真不知道,也就刚才看他念,我才知道他改了。如果没有我们编剧同意,他怎么可以自己擅自修改剧本台词?”stretch/openTanseeshis not clearsituation, said the soundknew, thenlooks forSun Haodirectly, withoutbeating around the bush, inquiredwhystraightforwardlychanged the linesalsoto add the linesa moment ago.
张叹见他不清楚情况,说了声知道了,便直接去找孙浩,没拐弯抹角,直截了当地询问刚才为什么改了台词还加了台词。Sun Haogawkedstaring, obviouslyhas not thoughtthin that suchstretch/openTancanpay attention, moreoverdirectlyasked,thisletsomewhatstunned, sayawkwardly: „Teacherstretch/open, Iamacting in a playtime, being on sitedeal with changeschanges, does not want is too many, thought that at this timesaid is also very appropriate.”
孙浩愣了愣,显然没想到张叹会注意的这么细,而且直接来问,这让有些错愕,尴尬地说:“张老师,我是演戏的时候,临场应变改的,没想太多,就觉得这时候这么说也挺合适。”Ten thousandKunhas not spokenin the one side.
万坤在一旁没吭声。stretch/openTansaid: „Being on sitedeal with changesnaturally, butcannotchangetoo, youchangesomewhatmany, moreoveradded the play, how do youthink?”
张叹说:“临场应变当然可以,但不能变太多,你变的有些多,而且是加了戏,你是怎么想的?”Sun Haocomplexionchanged, made excusesawkwardlyseveral, finallywas forced, said before him , has greetedwithgrandsonEast Asia.
孙浩脸色变了变,尴尬地支吾了几句,最后被逼无奈,才说他之前有和孙亚东打过招呼。stretch/openTannods, said: „Thistimeeven, next time, eachlineswedo not considerlike thiscarefully, has the intention, changedto destroy the overalllayout.”
张叹点点头,说:“这次就算了,下次不要这样了,每句台词我们都是仔细斟酌过的,都有用意,改了破坏了整体布局了。”„Right that yeahwell, Teacherstretch/openyou said that sorry, was I am too rash.”
“哎好好,张老师您说的对,对不起,是我太莽撞了。”5minutes of relaxation time, making a moviemakes a fresh start, thisSun Haochanged the lines, well-manneredpatsthisplot.
五分钟休息时间到,拍戏重新开始,这回孙浩把台词改回来了,规规矩矩是拍完了这一剧情。stretch/openTanlooked at the little whileto leave, after grandsonEast Asia, said: „Does TeacherSunhave the time? Comestomyoffice.”
张叹看了会儿离开,经过孙亚东时,说:“孙老师有时间吗?到我办公室来一下。”GrandsonEast Asiadoes not doubthim, comes to the officewithhim.
孙亚东不疑有他,跟着他来到办公室。Outsidejourneyjourney the family/home, MengGuangxincame.
程程的家外,孟广新又来了。„Opens the doorjourneyjourney, the fatherdoes not walk, westay here, journeyjourney”
“开门啊程程,爸爸不走了,我们就留在这里,程程”journeyChengkai a crack in a door.
程程开了一条门缝。„journeyjourneyyouopened the doorfinally, didn't youplanto want the father?”Mengbroadlynewlyalmosttears.
“程程你终于开门了,你是不是不打算要爸爸了?”孟广新差点老泪纵横。„Doesn't father, reallywalk?”journeyjourneyaskedindefinitely.
“爸爸,真的不走了吗?”程程不确定地问。„Reallydoes not walk.”
“真的不走了。”Hebycompanyleave without pay, was said that has severaldays of falsetohim, awaits calmly the finalhandlingresult of company.
他都被公司停薪留职了,说给他放几天假,静待公司的最终处置结果。journeyjourneyopens the doorhappily, putshimto come.
程程开心地打开门,放他进来。Mengstandsin the entrancebroadlynewly, does not haveanxiously, butlooks aroundtoward, „yourmotherin?”
孟广新站在门口,没有急着进来,而是往里张望,“你妈妈在吗?”Finishes speaking, journeyjourney mother appearsin the kitchenentrance, the waistis the apron, after high and lowtakes a look athim, said: „Inshoescabinethas the slipper that youcanwear, oneselffoundto exchange.”
话音刚落,程程的妈妈就出现在厨房门口,腰间系着围裙,上下打量他后才说:“鞋柜里有你能穿的拖鞋,自己找到换上吧。”„...... Yeah, thanks.”
“……哎,谢谢。”
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