SAHDA :: Volume #5

#450: Too quick


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This is a story of small goldfish.” stretch/open Tanna the manuscript paper, is sitting in front of the children said. “这是一只小金鱼的故事。”张叹拿着稿纸,坐在小朋友们面前说道。 little white eyes shone. 小白眼睛亮了起来。 The pomegranate pomegranate incites to attract little bear drink with all one's heart, 榴榴滋滋滋一门心思在吸小熊饮料, stretch/open Tan disregards this fellow, the indigestion really does not look for her with no reason at all. 张叹无视这个家伙,积食果然不是无缘无故找上她的。 He continues saying: Name was «Cliff Goldfish Wave Little girl» on.” 他继续讲:“名字叫《悬崖上的金鱼波妞》。” Xier whispered a good coarse name, but spoke anything. 喜儿嘀咕一句好难听的名字吖,但是讲什么呢。 stretch/open Tan: „......” 张叹:“……” He treats as has not heard, the one breath told this story, observed children's response, was good to make the revision. 他当作没听到,一口气把这个故事讲完,观察小朋友们的反应,好做修改。 In the response looked, is roughly good, only then the pomegranate pomegranate and her little friend in the same world, did not drink up little bear to start to pinch the fruit dessert on tea table to eat. 反应上看,大体是不错的,只有榴榴和她的小伙伴不在同一个世界,喝完了小熊又开始捏茶几上的水果点心吃。 That is good, stretch/open Tanxin said, feels relieved at heart much. 那就是不错咯,张叹心说,心里放心不少。 You play in this, must look that words of television open.” stretch/open Tan said. “你们在这玩吧,要看电视的话自己开。”张叹说。 Xier holds the remote control curiously, here presses, there pinches, cannot turn on the television. 喜儿好奇地捧着遥控器,这里按按,那里捏捏,打不开电视。 stretch/open Tan sits on the sofa, the nest in the corner, on the knee is putting the paint brush and manuscript paper, observes the children, paints a portrait to them, the prototype of wave little girl came from their several. 张叹坐在沙发上,窝在角落里,膝盖上放着画笔和稿纸,观察小朋友们,给她们画像,波妞的原型来自于她们几个。 The pomegranate pomegranate sits side him, sways unceasingly, stretch/open Tan cannot bear say: Why pomegranate pomegranate you must eat do not sit near the tea table eat, wants the tea table sofa to walk back and forth?” 榴榴就坐在他身边,不断晃来晃去,张叹忍不住说道:“榴榴你要吃干嘛不坐在茶几边上吃,一定要茶几沙发来回走吗?” The pomegranate pomegranate thinks, to the duck, how she not to have thought that selects to praise to Boss stretch/open, 6666 ~ ~ 榴榴想了想,对鸭,她怎么没想到呢,给张老板点赞,“6666~~” She does not sit, but stands near the tea table, eaten was quicker. 她不坐,而是站在茶几边,吃的更快了。 The Polish little girls is a chubby little girl, stretch/open Tan do not want to change this point, the chubby child is more lovable. 波妞是一个胖嘟嘟的小女孩,张叹不想改变这一点,胖嘟嘟的小孩子更可爱嘛。 However, little white is not fat. Xier is not fat, journey journey and millet are not fat, only then the pomegranate pomegranate is fat. 但是,小白不胖。喜儿也不胖,程程和小米都不胖,只有榴榴胖。 Without the means that stretch/open Tan has to add the pomegranate pomegranate, body uses the pomegranate pomegranate, the eye toot toot is a little lovable. 没办法,张叹不得不把榴榴加进来,身型就用榴榴吧,眼嘟嘟的有点可爱。 When their several preparations go back to sleep, opened sighs drew the wave little girl finally, looked to them. 在她们几个准备回去睡觉时,张叹终于画出了波妞,给她们看。 little white likes very much, stretch/open Tan gives to her. 小白很喜欢,张叹送给她。 His other drew one again, this handy. 他另外再画了一张,这回更加的得心应手。 He drew the wave little girl, drew sect Jie again, the men and women advocated had, the rough sketch and story manuscript put together, installed in a folder, tomorrow takes away to Xin Xiaoguang. 他画了波妞,再画了宗介,男女主就都有了,画稿和故事稿放在一起,装在一个文件夹里,明天带去给辛晓光。 „Did you rest?” “你睡了吗?” Takes a bath, just lay down to go to bed, the cell phone vibrated, came the information, was Su Lan. 洗了澡,刚躺上床,手机震动,来了信息,是苏澜的。 The Su billows have not played the racket this afternoon, she participates in a brand to move, in Pujiang, just moved finished, she returns to the hotel, similarly just took a bath on the lying down bed. 苏澜今天下午没有戏拍,她参加一个品牌活动,就在浦江,刚刚活动才结束,她回到酒店,同样刚洗澡躺床上。 No, waits for your information.” “没呢,等你的信息呢。” Deceived people.” “骗人。” You moved did not finish, I did not feel relieved.” “你活动不结束,我不放心。” Although expressed that does not believe stretch/open Tan the words, but Su Lan still chatted with him with great interest. 虽然表示不相信张叹的话,但是苏澜依然和他聊的津津有味。 In the evening nearly 11 points, the dramatic team must make a movie tomorrow, Su Lan the actor's pay is very heavy, stretch/open Tan urged her to rest earlier. 晚上快11点了,明天剧组还要拍戏,苏澜的戏份很重,张叹叮嘱她早点睡。 You rest.” Su billows reply information. “你睡吧。”苏澜回复信息。 stretch/open Tan knows immediately cannot rest absolutely, the one's beloved obviously does not want to rest. 张叹立刻知道绝对不能睡,心上人明显是不想睡。 Although his trapped/sleepy is not good, wants to sleep, but knows that at this time was not good, at this time must display the spirit of pomegranate pomegranate, is standing sleeps while eats the thing. 尽管他困的不行,很想睡觉,但是知道这时候不行,这时候必须发挥榴榴的精神,站着边睡觉边吃东西。 He has not replied the information, Su Lan of that head thinks that silly stretch/open Tanzhen rested, rouses the drum cheek, puts down the cell phone, turns over/stands up is lying down face up, looks at the ceiling to be in a daze. 他没有回复信息,那头的苏澜以为傻张叹真的睡了,鼓鼓腮帮子,放下手机,翻身仰面躺着,看着天花板发呆。 Ding ~ ~ ~ ~ 叮~~~~ Suddenly cell phone on the nightstand made a sound, at this time generally was Zhou Li, she knows that Su Lan the matter were many during the daytime, therefore a lot were the evening ask Su Lan to discuss. 忽然床头柜上的手机响了,这个时候一般是周莉,她知道苏澜白天事情多,所以很多事情都是晚上找苏澜商量。 Takes up the cell phone to look, on Su Lan the face reveals the happy expression, is not Zhou Li, opens wide the fool. 拿起手机一看,苏澜脸上露出喜色,不是周莉,是张大傻子。 Her fast returning to normal mood, making one unable to listen to the happy anger: Hey ~ ~ didn't you rest?” 她快速平复心情,让人听不出喜怒:“喂~~你不是睡了吗?” I am not sleepy, how today moves? Very smooth?” “我不困,今天活动怎么样?很顺利吧?” Su billows: „, It is fortunately smooth.” 苏澜:“还好吧,挺顺利的。” stretch/open Tan listens, this topic is not she wants to chat, therefore shifts immediately, said: I was writing a cartoon story for these days, today just finished, do you want to listen? Checks to me, makes a suggestion.” 张叹一听,这个话题不是她想聊的,于是立刻转移,说:“我这几天在写一部漫画故事,今天刚好写完了,你要不要听听?给我把把关,提点建议。” The Su billows really came the interest, what story? I do not understand very much, does not dare to offer an opinion randomly.” 苏澜果然来了兴趣,“什么故事?我不是很懂呀,不敢乱提意见。” All right, you first listened, to have what idea to say. Told you, you were the 6 th audience.” “没事,你先听,有什么想法都可以说。告诉你,你是第六个听众。” „? Curious, who front 5 are?” “啊?好奇,前面五个是谁?” little white, Xier, pomegranate pomegranate and journey journey and millet.” “小白、喜儿、榴榴、程程和小米。” The Su billows laugh, in the mind appears stretch/open Tan to speak the picture of story to one group of little guys, having love, but is funny. 苏澜哈哈大笑,脑海里浮现张叹对一群小萝卜头讲故事的画面,有爱但好笑。 ...... …… Little red horse cartoon work room. 小红马漫画工作室。 „Did young tree, print?” “小树,都打印好了没?” Immediately good, a total of 5.” “马上就好,总共五份。” Hurry up, the meeting must start.” “快点,会要开始了。” Brother Su who will not delay.” “不会耽误的苏哥。” They take the printing to bind the good creativity manuscript, comes to the conference room, is placed before several spatial seats. 他们带上打印装订好的创意稿,来到会议室,摆在几个空座位前。 This was old Su for these days the belt/bring person brainstorm, several story creativities of proposing. 这是老苏这几天带人头脑风暴,提出的几个故事创意。 Because the time is limited, therefore is only the creativity and story outline, cannot improve the story structure and plot, that is the next work, only then the work room determined must use, will continue next, in order to avoid wasted effort. 因为时间有限,所以只是创意和故事梗概,没能完善故事结构和情节,那是下一步工作,只有工作室确定了要用,才会继续下一步,以免事倍功半。 old Su is confident to these creativities, altogether 3 story creativities, did not say 3 on, on at least does not have the issue. 老苏对这几个创意蛮有信心的,总共有三个故事创意,不说三个都上,至少上一个没问题。 Without a while, the colleague who stretch/open Tanlai, other attended the meeting also came to take a seat. 没一会儿,张叹来了,其他参会的同事也进来入座。 old Su eyes notices in Xin Xiaoguang hand to take a manuscript paper, possibly is also the story creativity, but feels not possible, because was too thick, the story creativity had two pages of papers at the most. 老苏一眼就注意到辛晓光手里拿着的一份稿纸,可能也是故事创意,但又觉得不可能,因为太厚了,故事创意有两页纸顶天了。 „Is this creativity?” Before stretch/open Tanna sets out the manuscript paper, old Su you have been working hard, or you first said that we looked.” “这是创意吗?”张叹拿起身前的稿纸,“老苏你们辛苦了,要不你先讲,我们边看。” old Su: Good, this time prepared three story creativities, two are the movement knight-errant classes, one is the daily kind. I first told this daily class story......” 老苏:“好,这次准备了三个故事创意,两个是动作武侠类,一个是日常类。我就先讲这个日常类的故事……” stretch/open Tan reads quickly the draft, places on hand, listens to old Su to speak their creativity original intentions and core selling points earnestly. 张叹很快把文稿看完,放在手边,认真听老苏讲他们的创意初衷和核心卖点。 Three stories are good, but stretch/open Tan has not first expressed the opinion, but makes the others in conference room chat the view. 三个故事都不错,但张叹没有先发表意见,而是让会议室的其他人谈谈看法。 Some people approve, some people raised the question, generally speaking, approval and almost 73 of meaning open. 有的人认可,有的人提出了疑问,总体来说,认可的和差点意思的七三开。 old Su complexion is serious, he thinks that can obtain to unanimously pass. 老苏脸色严肃,他以为能够获得全票通过呢。 Seeing the atmosphere is somewhat serious, Xin Xiaoguang said: „Here also creativity, some people submit a piece of writing, you have a look.” 见气氛有些严肃,辛晓光说道:“我这里还有一份创意,是有人投稿,你们也看看。” The people look to the manuscript paper on his hand, old Su has noticed, asked: Is a complete story?” 众人都看向他手上的稿纸,老苏早就注意到了,问道:“是个完整的故事?” Xin Xiaoguang advances in front of him: Right, complete story, that old Su you first looked that I give everyone to say simultaneously. What this story said was a story of small goldfish miss......” 辛晓光推到他面前:“对,完整的故事,那就老苏你先看吧,我同时给大家讲讲。这个故事讲的是一条小金鱼姑娘的故事……” old Su glances over fast, brow a while is wrinkling, a while stretches, finally spent for ten minutes to look, grew the tone. 老苏快速浏览,眉头一会儿皱着,一会儿舒展,终于花了十分钟看完,长出了口气。 Xin Xiaoguang asked: What kind of?” 辛晓光问道:“怎么样?” old Su puts down the manuscript paper, person takes away immediately. 老苏放下稿纸,身边的人立刻拿了去。 „A very marvelous feeling, spoke the love probably, but was not, the 5-year-old child had what love, was more like to the childhood, did not have the childhood of boundary to that fantasy, this was each one good stories, at least I liked very much.” “一种很奇妙的感觉,像是讲爱情,但又不是,5岁的小孩子有什么爱情,更像是致童年,致那个幻想没有边界的小时候,这是个个好故事,起码我很喜欢。” At the meeting the not possible each people to look, the time is not enough, but everyone listened to Xin Xiaoguang to introduce orally, after more complete plot meeting, can circulate for perusal. 会上不可能每个人都看,时间不够,但是大家听辛晓光口头介绍了,更完整的故事情节会后可以传阅。 Finally Xin Xiaoguang said: Now 4 stories, our she votes the choice.” 最后辛晓光说:“现在有四个故事,我们她投票选择。” old Su complexion one positive, asked: Chooses one?” 老苏脸色一正,问:“选一个吗?” Xin Xiaoguang looked to stretch/open Tan, stretch/open Tan said: Does not stipulate the quantity, defers to be able to publish the magazine the standard to elect, if you think that 4 stories reached the level, that chooses 4.” 辛晓光看向张叹,张叹说:“不规定数量,就按照能够刊登杂志的标准来选,如果你们认为四个故事都达到了水准,那就选四个。” The people discussed the little while low voice, starts to vote by ballots one by one, «Cliff Wave Little girl» on was passed, simultaneously another daily story also agrees to advance downward. 众人小声议论了会儿,开始逐一投票表决,《悬崖上的波妞》获得了通过,同时另一个日常故事也同意往下推进。 That breaks up.” stretch/open Tan said, sets out to leave, the upstairs and downstairs transferred, walked, goes to the dramatic team. “那就散会吧。”张叹说,起身离开,楼上楼下转了一圈,走了,去剧组。 He walks, old Su found Xin Xiaoguang immediately, where inquired «Wave Little girl this story on Cliff» comes, who the author was. 他一走,老苏立刻找到辛晓光,询问《悬崖上的波妞》这个故事是哪里来的,作者是谁。 Xin Xiaoguang smiles not to speak, does to tight that old Su entangles, finally leads him to arrive in the corner, said low voice: Let me tell you, do not tell others.” 辛晓光笑而不语,奈何老苏缠的紧,最后带他到角落里,小声说:“我跟你说,你不要告诉别人。” What's wrong? Do the authors also keep secret? Is competitor who we dig?” “怎么?作者还保密?是我们挖的竞争对手?” „It is not, is the story that the boss writes.” “不是,是老板写的故事。” „, Does the boss dig? Un??? You said that is the boss writes?” “哦,老板挖的?嗯???你说是老板写的?” Right, story that the boss writes, therefore knows why the boss does not want to say.” “没错,老板写的故事,所以知道为什么老板不想说了吧。” „...... Understood, this story is good, looked came out he to put very big thoughts.” “……明白了,这个故事挺好的,看的出来他花了很大的心思。” This is uncertain.” “这就不一定。” Un? What do you mean?” “嗯?什么意思?” You know how long the boss did write this story to be colored?” “你知道老板写这个故事花了多长时间?” How long?” “多久?” Almost starts with you simultaneously, said strictly, compared with you also late a day.” “和你几乎同时启动的,严格说,比你们还晚了一天。” „??? You were said that only spent for a week?” “???你是说只花了一个礼拜?” Uh-huh.” “嗯哼。” This, is impossible ~ ~ “这,不可能吧~~” A week, he brings a small team, thinks three creativities, but «Cliff Wave Little girl» on is a complete cartoon story, almost can start to draw, this, was too quick. 一个礼拜的时间,他带个小团队,才想了三个创意,而《悬崖上的波妞》已经是一个完整的漫画故事了,几乎可以开始画了,这,也太快了吧。
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