Chapter 1113 is such simple 第1113章就是这么简单 Three groups of troops were in attendance. The personnel of appraisal group also arrived, first comes out to meet with everyone, Zhang Tan did not know anyone, although he knew that are many their lines. 三组人马都到齐了。评审组的人员也到了,先是出来和大家见了一面,张叹不认识其中的谁,尽管他认识蛮多他们这行的。 The first group of advanced reporting, what lead is that 27 or 28-year-old female. The person who they lead is also most, eight, one big piles, entered the conference room one after another. 先进去汇报的第一组,领头的是那位二十七八岁的女性。她们带的人也是最多的,足足有八个,一大摞,鱼贯进入了会议室。 Zhang Tan through the door that opens instantly, saw inside scene. The conference room is very big, five appraisal personnel sit in inside, to the front door, is seeming very spacious, a large screen opened, has the staff to arrange the cast and crew notebook in the connection. 张叹通过刹那打开的房门,看到了里面的场景。会议室很大,五个评审人员坐在里头,正对着大门,显得很空旷,一个大屏幕打开了,有工作人员在连接编剧组的笔记本电脑。 The staff close the door, Zhang Tan takes back the line of sight. He does not have to review the material again, closed the notebook, thinks the key point of later reporting. 工作人员把房门关上,张叹收回视线。他没再温习材料,合上了笔记本电脑,思索着待会儿汇报的重点。 Chen Bin sits near him, was discussing with him low voice...... another two young screenwriters saw that go to the drinking fountain place to meet two cups of lukewarm water to bring, before placing their bodies, then stands in the one side audits. 陈斌坐在他边上,小声和他讨论着……另外两个年轻编剧见状,去饮水机处接了两杯温水拿过来,放在他们身前,然后就站在一旁旁听。 In the conference room, on the young woman face of lead the belt/bring smiles, valiant capable. Although she is young, but is experienced, informed and experienced rich, said to have clear enunciation, forceful, probably the radio announcer is speaking, enunciates has the flavor very much, even if did not listen to the content, only listened to her to speak, was enjoyment. 会议室里,领头的年轻女性脸上带笑,飒爽干练。她虽然年轻,但是久经沙场,历练丰富,讲起来口齿清楚,铿锵有力,像是播音员在说话,吐字很有韵味,哪怕不听内容,只听她说话,也是一种享受。 If said also had the content very much, that attraction doubled. 如果讲的还很有内容,那吸引力加倍。 Really, in her, as soon as the opens the mouth, appraised five people of group to be attracted immediately, steadily, as her explanation gaze screen. 果然,在她一开口,评审组的五人立刻被吸引了,目不转睛地随着她的讲解注视荧幕。 These five people are the Pujiang city judicial and public security organs' systematic leadership, experiences employed richly, several people are in charge of the propaganda specially, is not strange to the film and television play, even also wants the business more familiar than some film and television bosses. 这五人都是浦江市公检法系统的领导,从业经验丰富,其中几人专门分管宣传,对影视剧不陌生,甚至比一些影视老板还要业务熟悉。 They wear the uniform/subdue, straight that the physique sits, both eyes are fiery, has the boldness very much. 他们穿着制服,身姿坐的笔挺,双目炯炯有神,很有魄力。 The introduction has the time limit, 30 to 40 minutes, has the staff to time in the one side, to selecting will remind. 介绍有时间限制,30到40分钟,有工作人员在一旁计时,到点了会提醒。 After the first group ended, the second group entered immediately, uses for a half hour to come out, the third group, was Zhang Tan and Chen Bin one group enters. 第一组结束后,第二组随即进入,用了半个小时出来,第三组,也就是张叹和陈斌一组进入。 After four people enter the conference room, the division of labor is clear. Chen Bin is responsible for printing the synopsis of play issues five appraisal personnel, another two young screenwriters are fast and staff the notebook connection , the situation in Zhang Tan observation conference room, achieves to know fairly well, when everyone sat the seat, he started to explain. 四人进入会议室后,分工明确。陈斌负责把打印出来的剧本大纲发给五位评审人员,另外两个年轻编剧则快速和工作人员把笔记本电脑连接上,张叹观察会议室里的情况,做到心中有数,等大家都坐回座位了,他才开始讲解。 Some appraisal group person of vision carefully examine him, said: „Is Zhang Tan, I have looked at your «People Name», was too hot, written is very good, pats is also very good.” 评审组有人目光审视他,说道:“是张叹啊,我看过你的《人民的名义》,太火了,写的很好,拍的也很好。” Several other people said with a smile, in the spoken language the impression to Zhang Tan was very good, after all before having, did in the body, some time ago broadcast, reception and echo very good. Most critically, «People Name» is also a RFP program of government, just like of their present, in nature same, therefore they will have a closeness naturally. This is the Zhang Tan advantage. 另外几人笑着接话,言语中对张叹的印象很好,毕竟有前作在身,不久前才播放完,收视和反响都非常的好。更关键的是,《人民的名义》也是一部政府的招标项目,和他们现在的这部一样,性质上相同,所以他们自然而然会产生一股亲近感。这就是张叹的优势。 Chen Bin sits on the seat, on the face maintains composure, is very at heart happy, Zhang Tan has not said that has won many impression marks, really looks for him right, does not know that he is advantageous with the relations of oneself greets. 陈斌坐在座位上,脸上不动声色,心里却很开心,张叹还没讲呢,就已经博得了不少的印象分,果然找他没错,就是不知道他有没有利用自己的关系打招呼。 Several people chatted several, sat stopped the topic in five people of middle middle-aged men, said: „Zhang Tan, you prepared to start.” 几人闲聊了几句,坐在五人正中间的一位中年男子停止了话题,说道:“张叹,你准备好了就开始吧。” Zhang Tan nods, turning page in hand, on the screen presents " Black Blood Violent » three black large characters, the vision of people was attracted. 张叹点点头,把翻页器拿在手里,屏幕上出现《黑血暴》三个黑色大字,众人的目光被吸引。 „Before reporting script, I first spoke the creation mentality of this script.” Zhang Tan said. “在汇报剧本之前,我先讲一下这份剧本的创作思路。”张叹说道。 Chen Bin eyebrow selects, Zhang Tan this has not started according to their beforehand hypotheses, what can do?! 陈斌眉毛一挑,张叹这是没有按照他们之前的设定开始啊,要搞什么？！ He flashes through a thought that must remind Zhang Tan, but gives up at once, watches changes quietly, the choice believes Zhang Tan. 他心里闪过一个念头,要不要提醒张叹,但旋即就放弃了,静观其变,选择相信张叹。 Follows two young screenwriters who come is the eye greatly is bright, can hear the screenwriter to speak the creation approach, this compared with the pure explanation script, has the function to them, this is teaching a man to fish is superior to giving him one, in the ordinary work, who will speak this to them, becomes aware by oneself. 跟随而来的两位年轻编剧则是眼睛大亮,能听到编剧讲创作思路,这比单纯的讲解剧本,对她们更有作用,这是授之以鱼不如授之以渔,平常工作上,谁会给她们讲这个呢,都是靠自己去悟。 „Before the creation, I have three creation approaches ; first, to stress dramatic, strengthens the story the suspense and interest, this can guarantee the attraction, thus raises the viewing ratio ; Second, to stress the process of each case, brings into full play the inference and suspense of story ; Third, to stress the reasonable authenticity of story, with the real case, selects some elements, matches to improve, did not stress the inference and suspense of story, but stresses the warning of story, let in the attention set of points of audience in the caution of story, who rather than guessed is the chief instigator......” “在创作之前,我有三个创作思路,一是侧重戏剧性,增强故事的悬疑和趣味,这能保证吸引力,从而提高收视率;二是侧重每个案子的过程,充分发挥故事的推理和悬疑;三是侧重故事的合理的真实性,采用真实案例,从中选取一些元素,重新搭配完善,不侧重故事的推理和悬疑,而是侧重故事的警示作用,让观众的关注点集中在故事的警示上,而不是猜来猜去谁是主谋……” „Finally what you adopt is which mentality?” Sits the middle appraisal leader to ask curiously, they have read the script, which type but must make them mention the creation approach is, they really could not have said that after all is not specialized, the layman looks is a liveliness, looks in a hurry, what in the mind stays behind is only the preliminary impression. “那你最终采取的是哪一条思路？”坐中间的评审领导好奇地问道,他们都看过剧本,但要让他们讲出创作思路是哪一种,他们还真讲不出来,毕竟不是专业的,外行看的就是一个热闹,匆匆看一遍,脑海里留下的只是初步的印象。 „This «Black Blood Violent», what adopted is the third mentality, the warning and reasonable authenticity of stress story, excessively does not dramatize, excessively does not infer, does not make the suspense intentionally.” “这本《黑血暴》,采取的是第三条思路,侧重故事的警示作用和合理的真实性,不过度戏剧化,不过度推理,不故意制造悬念。” Zhang Tan continues to say along this mentality, but sits five appraisals on seat of honor is saying my goodness at heart, this Zhang Tan has many skills. 张叹沿着这个思路继续讲着,而坐在主位上的五位评审则在心里直呼好家伙,这个张叹有两把刷子。 Because two before Zhang Tan arranges cast and crew, basically uses is the first two mentalities that Zhang Tan said that was guessed by Zhang Tan. 因为在张叹之前的两个编剧组,基本用的就是张叹所说的前两种思路,都被张叹猜中了。 First group of youth females, what stress is dramatic of story, therefore their stories have the attraction, the plot change. 第一组的青年女性,侧重的是故事的戏剧性,所以她们的故事非常有吸引力,剧情跌宕起伏。 Second group of script previous group of plot fluctuating are not huge, is quite calm, what they stressed was the inference and suspense of story, looked like the style of Zhang Tan beforehand suspense trilogy actually very much. 第二组的剧本没有前一组那么剧情起伏巨大,比较沉稳,他们侧重的是故事的推理和悬疑,倒是很像张叹之前的悬疑三部曲的风格。 After a half hour, the Zhang Tan lecture, was invited, waits outside. 半个小时后,张叹讲完了,被请了出去,在外面等候。 The gate of conference room closes, five people start to discuss the result. 会议室的门关上,五人开始讨论结果。 „The angle of everyone is different, everyone spoke freely, thought that which good to choose.” “每个人的角度都不一样,大家畅所欲言,觉得哪个好就选哪个。” These five people come from the different systems, without the subordinate relationship, whom does not have mutually is whose leader or the higher authority, avoided following and flattering. 这五人来自不同的系统,相互没有隶属关系,不存在谁是谁的领导或者上级,避免了跟风和拍马屁。 „I thought actually the second group is more attractive, the story is calm, is very attractive, inferring the process logic is meticulous.” Sits said in the leftmost man. “我倒是觉得第二组更有吸引力,故事沉稳,很有吸引力,推理过程逻辑缜密。”坐在最左边的男人说道。 The man near his right hand said immediately: „Actually Zhang Tan spoke the script mentalities of three groups, I felt he said was very reasonable, the goals of our project were not for the viewing ratio, but for admonitory education, words that therefore I chose, Zhang Tan that group.” 在他右手边的男人随即说:“其实张叹把三个组的剧本思路都讲了,我觉得他讲的很有道理,我们这个项目的目的不是为了收视率,而是为了警示教育,所以我选择的话,张叹那组。” „I and old stretch/open viewpoint is consistent, the story must base on the reality, but must jump out of the reality. Like the first group, the complete powerful and unconstrained style, attractive is attractive, but does not conform to our truth. The second group makes one guess that who the chief instigator was went, the chief instigator to a certain extent was a lead, unexpectedly one share heroic spirit, drift off, therefore I also chose Zhang Tan that group.” “我和老张的观点一致,故事要立足现实,但又要跳出现实。像第一组,完全天马行空,好看是好看,但不符合我们的实情。第二组则让人猜主谋是谁去了,主谋在一定程度上才是主角,竟然有一股子英雄气概,跑偏了,所以我也选择张叹那组。” „The first group first removes, the story extremely powerful and unconstrained style and is divorced from the reality, moreover inside has many basic mistakes, our experts looked can look, feels this group of not under too many time studies. Second group and the third group a little elects anyone puzzled, finally the Zhang Tan passing result is more convincing, therefore I choose Zhang Tan that group.” “第一组首先排除,故事太过天马行空和脱离现实,而且里面有很多的基本错误,我们内行人一看就能看出来,感觉这一组没有下太多功夫钻研。第二组和第三组有点纠结选谁,最后张叹过往的成绩更有说服力,所以我选择张叹那组。” Five people, three people had chosen Zhang Tan that group, therefore this time appraisal result has come out, did not have the suspense, but everyone waits for the last expression viewpoint. 五个人,已经有三个人选择了张叹那组,所以这次的评审结果已经出来,没有了悬念,但是大家还是等待最后一位表达观点。 This person not wordy, said directly: „I also decide Zhang Tan.” 这人也没有啰嗦,直接说:“我也属意张叹。” „That line, the final output is, the first group of 0 tickets, the second group of 1 tickets, the third group of 4 tickets, doesn't everyone has the objection?” “那行,最后结果就是,第一组0票,第二组一票,第三组四票,大家没有异议吧？” „No.” “没有啦。” „No.” “没有。” ...... …… „Finally that line, this project is selected is the Pujiang motion picture studio, shouted that they come.” “那行,这个项目最后中标的就是浦江电影制片厂,喊他们进来吧。” ...... …… When Zhang Tan and the others come out from the building, Sun west has fallen, horizon sunset glow everywhere. 当张叹等人从大楼里出来时,太阳已经西落,天边晚霞漫天。 Chen Bin is excited, in the hand takes the cell phone, is reporting the matter with Tang vast. 陈斌激动不已,手里拿着手机,正在和唐浩汇报事情。 In them behind, another two groups of troops come out one after another, they look sad, sees Zhang Tan and the others, first group of youth of female hesitant, walked, greeted with him, after the smalltalk exchanged greetings two, walked. 在他们身后,另外两组人马陆续出来,他们神情沮丧,看到张叹等人,第一组的青年女性犹豫了一下,还是走了过来,和他打声招呼,客套地寒暄两句后就走了。 The second group of middle-aged men are smiling bitterly going forward, after congratulating Zhang Tan, is thinks highly, said: „Is really unwilling, we spent lots of time and energy, finally lost, but loses to Teacher stretch/open, has nothing to refuse to accept, is only some regrets......” 第二组的中年男人则苦笑着上前,恭喜了张叹后,又是恭维一番,说道:“真是不甘心啊,我们花了大量的时间和精力,结果还是输了,不过输给张老师,也没什么不服的,只是有些遗憾而已……” He conveyed a hope finally, hopes that can have a look at the Zhang Tan complete script, quite had toward hears Daoxi dies flavor that may. 他最后提出一个希望,希望能够看看张叹的完整剧本,颇有朝闻道夕死可矣的味道。 Does not wait for Zhang Tan to answer, Chen Bin will first speak, inviting the opposite party to be a guest to the Pujiang motion picture studio tomorrow, can look to him on the spot, beyond the script will send is incorrect. 不等张叹回话,陈斌抢先说话,邀请对方明天到浦江电影制片厂做客,可以现场给他看,剧本外发是不行的。 The opposite party smile, branch to other topics. He is certainly impossible really to rush to the movie studio to read the script. 对方笑了笑,岔到其他话题上。他当然不可能真的跑到制片厂看剧本。 After they also send off, the scene only has the Zhang Tan four people. 把他们也送走后,现场只剩下张叹四人。 „I drive.” The rookie screenwriter said, goes to come the car(riage). “我去开车。”新人编剧说道,去把车开来。 Chen Bin said to Zhang Tan happily: „In the evening eats meal together, our four people, I invited, tomorrow Manager Tang must invite you.” 陈斌开心地对张叹说:“晚上一起吃个饭吧,就我们四个人,我请,明天唐厂长要宴请你。” Today handled over a billion project, in the record of merits had Chen Bin's one, this was his performance. 今天搞定了一个上亿的项目,功劳簿里有陈斌的一份,这是他的业绩。 „, I will invite you next time.” Zhang Tan said, „I must pick up the daughter to go home, complying with the evening to ask her to eat the fried chicken, the little miss kept thinking for two days, cannot put her pigeon, will be angry with me.” “不了吧,下次我请你们。”张叹说道,“我还要去接女儿回家,答应了晚上请她吃炸鸡,小姑娘惦记了两天,不能放她鸽子,会跟我生气的。” ...... …… Chen Bin gazes after Zhang Tan to leave, in the heart the reaching an agreement fellow, was selected also wind light cloud Dan such, as if minor matter, where looks like him, excited must jump. 陈斌目送张叹离开,心中说好家伙,中标了还这么的风轻云淡,仿佛小事一桩,哪像他,激动的都要蹦起来。 Really worthily is Zhang Tan! 果真不愧是张叹啊！