Scroll of Order is mainly introduction, the essenceisto actually belong to vol. 1, becausetrades the map, thereforedivides.序之卷其实主要是一个引子,本质是属于第一卷内的,只是因为换地图,所以分割一下。Had said the new bookwantsto challengeoneself, writes a notSupreme Onenesstypestoryfrom the anotheraspect, althoughlooked likepresentssomescience fictionessential factorsnowinevitably, but did I feel supposedalsoin the normal range......?
说过新书想要挑战一下自己,从另外一个方面写一个不太一样的故事,虽然现在看来还是不可避免的出现了一些科幻要素,但是我觉得应该还在正常范围之内……吧?spiritual energy recoverythistheme, lookedinitially for the first time finds itveryinteresting, pointnotSupreme Onenesstype that butpossiblyIpay attention, whatIponderisin‚similar’modern age‚being built on stilts’( stress) underbackground, after presentingvarioustranscendent strength, the change of changeandperson of society, the details in somelifedailyaspects, wantto lookeach time, actually could not find the relatedplot, thereforethinks that oneselfwrites.灵气复苏这个题材,当初第一次看就觉得非常有趣,不过可能我关注的点不太一样,我思考的是在‘类似’现代的‘架空’(重音)背景下,出现各种超凡力量后,社会的改变和人的改变,还有一些生活日常方面的细节,每次想要看的时候,却总是找不到相关的剧情,所以就想自己写一点。
The resultwrotetoo.
结果写太多了。
The words of vol. 1, the rhythmis slow, is mainly told that Su Zhouis taken by surprise, concludes an agreementwithYalla, after becomingtrueTranscendent, howto solve the oneselffriendto be difficult, as well asgraduallybecomeshunts for the demonperson, graduallystory of firm determination.
第一卷的话,节奏偏慢,主要是讲述苏昼遭遇意外,和雅拉立约,成为真正的超凡者后,如何解决自己朋友困难,以及逐渐成为猎魔人,逐渐坚定决心的故事。The most important thing is, myin one's hearthasaboutspiritual energy recoverythisplotsignificance.
最重要的是,我心中有关于灵气复苏这个剧情点的意义。Butthisplot, was dilatory, Ihave not written, thismustacknowledge.
可这一段剧情,拖沓了,我没写好,这个必须要承认。Not was only urgedto push the plotby the editorseveraltimesa bit faster, oneselfwritesalsodiscovered that dailyare too many, canput behindseveralvolumeswriteanythingslowly......, butshouldnottoobe bad, after all the result of thisbookis better than the previousbooksame time, makingmeverydynamic, Ido not have the Perfectobsession that discoveredwrites not goodto collapseon the mentality.
不仅是被编辑催过好几次快点推剧情,自己写出来的时候也发现日常太多,是可以放在后面几卷慢慢写什么的……但应该也不算太坏,毕竟这本书的成绩远比上一本书同期好,令我非常有动力,我也没那么完美强迫症,发现写的不好就心态崩了。Slowly the correction, Iwas used to write a book.
慢慢改正吧,我习惯了这么写书。
The shortcoming that thisvolumesummarizesis‚settingexplanation are too much, the duplicate message are too much, the rhythmis slow’( andburns the soul of steel‚quicklyrhythm to dieto putsettingto startto readtiredthisshortcomingentirelyto be unexpectedly oppositewell’, it seems a little rectifiesexcessively), as well asseemed many readers unable to acceptone‚nottoonormallead’.
这一卷总结出的缺点是‘设定讲解过多,重复信息过多,节奏偏慢’(和燃钢之魂‘节奏快的要死放完设定就开打读起来好累’这个缺点居然完全相反,看来有点矫正过头),以及好像有很多读者接受不了一个‘不太正常的主角’。obviouslyIthought that power user+ the smallinsanethislabelis very obvious.明明我觉得超能者+小疯这个标签挺明显的。Su Zhouthatcharacterobviouslyis nottwosickness, twosicknessgood and evilmusthaveoneto think oneself infallible, thought that the worldtransfers...... Su Zhou to compel the numberaroundoneselfvery much, hemostreally is a little insane, the logic and normal personare different, thisis very easyto understand.苏昼那种性格明显不是中二病啊,中二病好歹要有一个自以为是,觉得世界绕着自己转……苏昼很有逼数的,他最多就是真的有点疯而已,逻辑和正常人不一样,这个挺容易理解的吧。In brief, thankseveryone'sreading, the story of vol. 2is more splendid- was not splendidmustthrow the street.
总而言之,谢谢大家的阅读,第二卷的故事更精彩-再不精彩就要扑街了。Thankedfellowdozen of enjoyingbookfriends, youwere really good, 5555!
还有感谢各位打赏的书友们,你们真棒,5555!Before dawnrenewsvol. 2 Chapter 1.
凌晨更新第二卷第一章。Followinghas the idle talkaboutworldstructuresetting.
接下来的是有关于世界构造设定的废话。= = =writessomeidle talkaftervolumeendwords expressing feelings, is not interested to jump over, is not interested to jump over, is not interested to jump over, said34times, looked the person who maylet aloneIbe wordy= = =
===写在卷末感言后的一些废话,不感兴趣可以跳过,不感兴趣可以跳过,不感兴趣可以跳过,都说了三四次,看下去的人可别说我啰嗦===Although the preamblehas written, butImustsay: Yallathismighty existence, withmanysnakegods, is the corresponding relationships, thesesnakegodsareindependentexistences, butreflectedItsomeside, otherare similar.
虽然前文写过,但是我还是要说一下:雅拉这种伟大存在,和诸多蛇神,是对应关系,那些蛇神都是独立的存在,但都反映了祂的一些侧面,其他类同。mighty existenceiswantsbrokento seal, butextraordinary of humancivilizationcircleexistswithgod, ispreventsthemto recover- theyare not the memberships, butis the oppositionrelations, Ordergrand formationthereforesupposes, exterminatesoverwhelming majorityEvil Spirit.伟大存在是想要破封而出,而人类文明圈的超凡存在和神祇,都是阻止祂们复苏的-祂们不是从属关系,而是对立关系,秩序大阵因此而设,剿灭绝大部分邪魔。
The immortalgod in this articleonly( reason that becauseyouknow, theywill in fact not enter the stage) andotherbooksare different, theydo not needto believe that does not needto exploit, the livepositive synergy, is very happy, discussedinsomerealitiesrandomlysomenorelatedbreaking a prohibition, Iwill seeto delete- herewas the cloudy dayfictional universeview.
本文中的仙人神祇(因为很多你们大家都知道的原因,祂们实际上不会出场)和其他所有书都不一样,祂们不需要信仰,不需要剥削,活的很正能量,很开心,乱讨论一些现实中有的没的相关违禁的,我看见都会删除-这里是阴天架空世界观。While convenient, Scroll of Ordersaid‚recoveredwickedly, recoveredgood, the confusionrecovered, Orderalsorecovered’these words, is not the empty talk.
顺便,序之卷所说的‘恶复苏了,善也复苏了,混乱复苏了,秩序也复苏了’这句话,可不是空话。Hastranscendent strength, anyevilmattermay happen, facingTranscendent, the average personis actually weak, andevenoneselfhad been cursed, was attackeddoes not know, can only withstandpassively. Facing the Transcendentevil intention, theyare helpless.
有超凡力量,任何邪恶的事情都有可能发生,面对超凡者,普通人其实非常无力,并且连自己已经被诅咒,被攻击都不知道,只能被动承受。面对超凡者的恶意,他们无能为力。Howeversimilarly, hastranscendent strength, anygoodmatter may also happen- a casualhigh rankTranscendentblessing, canbenefit a block, curesinternal injury that everyonehides, evendoes not allowto reject. Facingthisgood intentions, average personactuallyalsosame‚helpless’.
但是同样,有超凡力量在,任何善良的事情也都有可能发生-随便一个高阶超凡者一个祝福,就能惠及一个街区,治愈所有人潜藏的暗伤,甚至不容拒绝。面对这种善意,普通人其实也同样‘无能为力’。Naturally, somepeoplewill feel,cangain the benefitfor the wickedconfusion, paysforgoodOrderpurely, cannotsuchcomparison.
当然,有些人会觉得,为恶混乱可以获取利益,为善秩序只是单纯付出,不能这么比较。Butthisidea, is only the misconception.
但这种想法,只是错觉。Forwickedsamemustpay the strength, canharmothers, the benefit that theyobtain, pays the benefit that the strengthworkobtainsnot to have the difference from Orderone side ofessentially, is onlythisbenefitis more dangerous, brokeOrder of masses, but also the bitter experiencewill backlash. Trades a simplerexample: The evildoerswill obtain the negativeprestige of human society, forgoodispositive/direct, but the prestigioususeno doubtis different from person to person, howeverin the society is actually the solidreturn and strength, otherdid not discuss, if, the ballotare externally manysome can always haveabsolutely.
为恶一样要付出力量,才能伤害别人,他们取得的利益,本质上和秩序一侧付出力量工作取得的利益没有差别,只是这种利益更加危险,打破了大众的秩序,还会遭遇反噬。换个更简单的例子:为恶者会得到人类社会的负面声望,为善者是正面,而声望的用处固然因人而异,但是在社会中却是实实在在的回报和力量,别的不谈,倘若在国外,选票多一些总是绝对可以有的。Whyfeelsmanyfor the interests that wickedgetschaotic? Because the evildoercrosses the restraint that ‚law’brought, thisbenefitisattacks unable the resister, conducts the oppressionto obtain.
为什么为恶混乱获得的利益给人的感觉很多?只是因为为恶者越过了‘法律’带来的约束,这利益是去攻击无法反抗者,进行压迫获得的。Butthisefficiency, the slaverywas inferior,anyis ledto conduct the constructionproductionbyTranscendent, is the benefit that ‚Order’methodgains, comparesitto be many.
但这种效率,奴隶制都不如,任何由超凡者带领进行建设生产,也即是‘秩序’手段得到的利益,都远比它要多。
The formeris the zero-sum game, but the latter does in a big way the cake.
前者是零和游戏,而后者是把蛋糕做大。Such being the case, whywill havethismisconception? Ifeelmerelyisbecauserobssoundsquitecrisp, moreoveris the freecontrol, does not seem likeOrderalso to according to the workdivision of laborreceive the wages, will refer toerraticallyis also exploitedbyabove- to be honest, thisconfusionevilcrisp will also be the humannatural dispositionpart, but the humannatural dispositionmajorpart, actuallywill beOrder.
既然如此,为什么会产生这种错觉?我觉得的仅仅是因为抢夺听上去比较爽,而且是自由支配,不像是秩序还要按劳分工领工资,指不定还会被上面剥削-说实话,这种混乱邪恶的爽也是人类本性的一部分,但是人类本性更大的一部分,却是秩序。Thisdoes not needto deny, even if Order that because the legalmoralsethicsalsoor the state regulationobtains, ishumanoneselfCreationcomes out, toproduce a biggerbenefiteffective the system of construction, the person who wantsto refutecanput down the cell phone, IknowseveralAfricanfriends, their sideis good at the law of the jungle...... not being rightvery much, even if Africaalsohas the chief, what to do, the tribesystemunexpectedlyis of Hey.modernOrdersysteminitialshapes
这点不用否认,哪怕是因为法律道德伦理亦或是国家管制得到的秩序,也是人类自己创造出来的,为了更有效率生产更大利益而建设的体系,想要反驳的人可以放下手机,我认识几位非洲朋友,他们那边很擅长弱肉强食……不对,哪怕是非洲也有酋长,怎么办啊,部落制度居然是现代秩序体系的最初形态之一诶。Orregressionancient timesapes and monkeystime?
那要不复归远古猿猴时代?Thenhassomeexplanationsaboutsetting- recoveredwickedly, recoveredgood, the confusionrecovered, Orderalsorecovered.
接下来是有关于一些设定的解释-恶复苏了,善也复苏了,混乱复苏了,秩序也复苏了。
The purechaoticandevilbehavior, canobtain the strengthbyabyssDuskwith the human naturewickedly, but the purewell-meaningbehavior, samecanobtains the strengththrough the meritandholy light.
纯粹的混乱与邪恶行为,可以透过深渊黄昏与人性之恶获得力量,而纯粹的善意行为,一样可以通过功德与圣光获得力量。Without the transcendent strengthworld, good mandonationhelpdisaster victims, establish the Hope School, generally speakingcannot obtainwhatmaterialreturn, mustfeel at easeandappreciate, howeverinhaving the extraordinaryworld- at least here, hecanobtain the meritdirectly( premise is really the ownmoney, andsolidhelp), holy light, the destiny, orgod knowsthatancestorspiritland featuresevenbyassistor the strength of asylum of faith, the effectgot quick resultssimply, and evil personkills peopleto seize the treasureto be equally neat, butdoes not have the sequela, refuses to acceptnot to debate.
没有超凡力量的世界,一个善人捐款帮助灾民,建立希望小学,一般来说是得不到什么物质回报,只得心安与赞赏,但是在有超凡的世界-至少在我这里,他就能直接获得功德(前提是真的是自己的钱并且实在的帮助到了),圣光,气运,亦或是天知道那个祖灵地脉甚至干脆就是被帮助者的信念之力庇护,效果立竿见影,和恶人杀人夺宝一样干脆利落,但是更没有后遗症,不服不辩。Naturally, the evildoernaturallyalsohastheirmethodsto obtain the strength, Ialsoneverdenied the humanewickedness, moreoverwantsto comeeveryone is not strangetothesemethods, Ishouldbe needlessto say.
当然,为恶者自然也有他们的手段去获得力量,我也从不否认人性的恶,而且想来大家对那些手段并不陌生,我应该不用多说。ActuallyIalsobelieve,theseare the goodmethods, supports the Orderstrength and system, the meritorholy light, are the ancestorshelteror the destinyspirit the bell, shouldalso a bignumerous, know. However when spiritual energy recovery, whyno oneremembersthem.
其实我也相信,这些为善的手段,支持秩序的力量和体系,无论是功德还是圣光,是祖灵庇护还是气运所钟,应该也不小众,都知道。但是灵气复苏时,为什么就没人想起他们呢。transcendent strength is never partial toeither one, sincehumanis the socialanimal, andcanformwesohugecivilizationin the longtime, Itacitly approve, in‚Order and Chaosscrew’, inthese days of human existence, was‚Order’has the advantage.超凡力量从不偏向任何一方,既然人类是社会性的动物,并且能在漫长的时间中形成我们如此庞大的文明,那我就默认,在‘秩序与混沌的螺旋’中,在人类存在的这段时间里,是‘秩序’占据优势了。Because in the extraordinaryworld, ifwere born the Orderstrength, thenitsexistence, compared withdoes not have anyconclusion, piece of Chaosthis lifeis stabler- because ofOrder, is a strength, the good mandoes good deeds, canbewickedis stronger.
正因为在超凡的世界,假如诞生了秩序的力量,那么它的存在,就远比没有任何定论,一片混沌的现世更加稳定-因为秩序本身,就是一种力量,善人行善,可以比为恶更强。
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