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The Lanke chess reason terminated finally! 烂柯棋缘终于还是完结了！ Actually some stories do not need to manifest thoroughly in the book, the Lanke sixty year cycle time, regarding world is really short, after such as the black ink flood dragon dies Flowing Water, that supports he really spirit water clan perhaps is also only magical things, such as Lady Bai and his husband continues the predestined affinity again, inevitably was the world new student/life all tranquil later matters, such as white flood dragon Dragon Transformation, after catching up with the great misfortune naturally also to cross,...... 其实有些故事并非需要在书中彻底体现出来,烂柯不过一甲子时间,对于世间而言实在是短暂,如墨蛟死后走水,那承托他真灵的水族或许还只是一灵物,如白夫人和其夫的再续前缘,必然是天地新生一切平静之后的事了,如白蛟化龙,赶上大劫自然也得渡过之后了…… But was Ji Yuan one game to finish, just like that „reason” character, the immortal in Mister Ji heart was the free and unfettered also has the touch of humanity, the meet acquaintance all was the fate, he can see was this Lanke one game, hopes that this bureau the world will remain from now on, the fate remained, and can continue, terminated the book to here, perhaps does not calculate perfectly, but finally had a result....... 但属于计缘的一局已经结束了,正如那个“缘”字,计先生心中的仙是逍遥又有人情味的,相遇相识皆是缘分,他能看到的就是这烂柯一局,也希望此局过后天地尚存,缘分尚存,并且能够延续下去,书到这里完结,或许不算完满但总算有个结果。…… ...... Thanks edit Bei River greatly help and support until now, thanked the book friends until now to support, especially, especially, must thank especially in the back is supporting my operating officer little Elder Brother little elder sisters! ……感谢编辑北河大大一直以来的帮助和支持,感谢书友们一直以来的支持,尤其,尤其,尤其要感谢在背后支撑着我的运营官小哥哥小姐姐们！ 360 degrees in the air swivel three -and-a-half weeks kiss the ground to thank politely! 三百六十度空中转体三周半伏地拜谢！ ...... …… Actually I always cannot give a name, author also good, the book title is also, but Lanke chess reason name I am very satisfied, feels the ideal condition of comparison fitting immortal hero. 其实我向来不太会起名,作者名也好,书名也是,但烂柯棋缘这名字我个人还是挺满意的,觉得比较贴合仙侠的意境。 However behind I hit the face, a large number of book friends said the book title to be bad, that first will not select, some large number of book friends do not know „Lanke” the meaning, thought this author what's the matter, how got up coarse did not say, read reads not the smooth strange book title. 不过后面我还是被打脸了,相当一部分书友都说书名差,第一眼绝不会点的那种,更有相当一部分书友并不知道“烂柯”的含义,觉得这作者怎么回事,怎么起了难听不说,读都读不通顺的古怪书名。 Un, but this also makes me feel that this book title some significances, at least let some book friends was insufficient to forget „Lanke” the meaning. 嗯,但这也让我觉得这书名还是有一些意义的,至少让一些书友不至于忘了“烂柯”的意思。 Actually before is very early, many words think, when ended the itself/Ben saying that but really to this moment, on the contrary is somewhat stumped, can only say that lost joyfully, has happily has the frustration, just like a time experiences life, the good and bad in life is completely one of them, feeling a great deal! 其实在挺早以前,就有好多话想在完本的时候说,但真到了这一刻,反倒是有些词穷了,只能说有欣喜有失落,有得意有失意,犹如经历一次人生,酸甜苦辣尽在其中,感慨良多！ In any event, the progress that this book can make opened me before book not to think initially. 无论如何,本书能取得的成绩是当初开书前的我所没想到的。 However, in the writing a book process, was I of author also exposes the considerably large issue, except for sluggish and dragging sickness, the biggest problem was the control that fluctuating of condition caused fluctuates, but the essential cause of this, because sluggish and preparation was not sufficient, did not ponder comprehensively, or the ponder was comprehensive, every so often is writing with the feeling, caused the influencing factor that the mood fluctuated to increase. 不过呢,在写书过程中,身为作者的我也暴露出了相当大的问题,除了懒散和拖延症,最大的问题就是状态的起伏导致的掌控力起伏,而究其根本原因,还是因为懒散和准备不充分,思考不全面,或者思考过于全面,很多时候凭着感觉在写,也导致心情起伏的影响因素大增。 In I opinion, a story, or a plot, wants to write, the needed condition are not perhaps many, but wants to write, perhaps the needed condition quantity has not increased many, but actually must be rich much. 在我个人看来,一个故事,或者说一个情节,想要写出来,需要的条件或许不多,但想要写好,需要的条件或许数量没增加多少,但却要丰富不少。 Speaking of the environment, when day, terrain, wind direction, rainfall intensity and temperature, thunderous and ray wait/etc aspects must consider, do not think I said exaggeratingly, was actually more exaggerating, these aspects cannot exist for example solely, must integrate the background. 从环境上讲,天时、地形、风向、雨势、温度、雷鸣和光线等等方面都要考虑,不要觉得我说得夸张,其实还更夸张一些,比如说这些方面并不能单一存在,要融入背景。 Writes solely directly these contents, is some cavities, how then I usually like doing, manifests from another single layer essential factor, namely the character, the condition of character, character's response, the mood of character, will feel the wind and rain low temperature to tremble, hears thunder will frighten suddenly, dazzling will narrow the eye, the rain cats and dogs umbrella top to the wind and rain whence, the palm arm pinches the blue vein to stick out suddenly manifests the wind heavy rain in a big way wait/etc. 单一地将这些内容直接写出来,是有些空洞的,那么我通常喜欢怎么做呢,从另一重要素上体现,即人物,人物的状态,人物的反应,人物的情绪,感受到风雨低温会哆嗦,骤然闻雷会有惊吓,刺目则眯眼,大雨倾盆伞顶向风雨来处,手掌手臂捏得青筋暴起体现风大雨大等等。 Then, then had the environment and character, needed is the background story, is the thing that you must express, front is the important beautification, here is the core, the two complement one another indispensably. 然后,然后有了环境和人物,需要的就是背景故事,也就是你要表达的东西,前边是重要的修饰,这里则是核心,二者相辅相成缺一不可。 The content of this story can the frightened terrifying, be able gratifying warm, can fill the accident/surprise, the process can write an ideal condition, can manifest part of humor, can pay great attention to the intense immension and third dimension, for example Golden Armor and corpse monster that fights. 这故事的内容可以惊悚恐怖,可以喜人温馨,可以充满意外,过程可以写出一种意境,可以体现一部分诙谐,也可以注重强烈的沉浸感与真实感,比如金甲和尸妖的那一场打斗。 All these all, are presents one „picture”. 这一切的一切,为的就是呈现出来一幅“画”。 Is superimposed by numerous details mutually, unifies not a bad content, a story that „picture” comes out, in overall story vein part of that story scenes. 由众多细节相互叠加,结合一个不差的内容,所“画”出来的一个故事,处于整体故事脉络一部分的那个故事场景。 Then makes the issue? 那么这么做有没有问题呢？ Has! A common problem and a major problem! 有！一个普遍问题和一个大问题！ The common problem is mainly, as the overall level promotion is not good to refine, that exquisite feeling is hard to match with the force system in the later period, wants to manifest the picture so to be no longer relaxed on the resembles in front , is also easy to lose interestingly. 普遍问题主要是,随着整体层级的提升不好细化,那种细腻的感觉在后期难以与力量体系所匹配,想要体现出画面就不再像前面那么轻松,也容易失去趣味性。 But the major problem is the issue of author, continuity that must maintain this language, first sleep is sufficient, the condition is still permissible, is the basic condition. 而更大的问题是作者本人的问题,要维持这种文字的连贯性,首先睡眠充足,状态尚可,是基本条件。 Next cannot break the mentality, with my own imagination picture is, the pigment is mobile, flows the distant place following the long white paper, in which detail grows slowly, but if the paper was interrupted here, will then also cause a series of issues. 其次就是不能断思路,用我自己的想象画面就是,颜料是流动的,顺着长长的白纸流淌远方,其中的细节慢慢生长而出,可若是纸张在这里被截断了,那么也就会导致一系列问题。 Then, such as in reality the things of some bits and pieces, such as, because was spurted is scolded causes the mood despondent situation, temporary worry that such as the preparation fully does not cause, is the influencing factors. 然后呢,如现实中一些鸡零狗碎的事情,如因为被喷被骂导致心情抑郁的情况,如准备不充分导致的临时顾虑等,都是影响因素。 Writes for a long time the later tired issue, this type tired was very fearful, will make the person desire low, making one unable to raise the spirit to ponder the following plot, could not mention the power to improve the content, relaxed to own requests, to relax the request to the writing, causing the plot to be dilatory, the plot control dropped, event character applying opera makeup wait/etc. 还有就是写久了之后的疲乏问题,这种疲乏是很可怕的,会让人欲望低下,让人提不起精神去思考后续剧情,提不起动力去完善内容,放松对自己的要求,放松对文字的要求,导致剧情拖沓,情节掌控力下降,事件人物脸谱化等等。 Because the book looks after all, the author condition quality, an eye from the writing may read, „drew ugly”, then the book friend will also vent own to be discontented, but this will also cause some chain-reactions. 因为书毕竟是给人看的,作者状态好坏,从文字上一目可阅,“画得丑了”,那么书友也会发泄自己的不满,而这也会导致一些连锁反应。 In the final analysis, the person as author had/left some problems, but wants to avoid, except for self- change, most important is the preparatory work, continuing in beforehand preparation and matter lays down and improves, the importance of program and setting also manifested in this. 归根结底来说,是身为作者的这个人出了一些问题,而想要避免,除了自我改变,最重要的就是准备工作,事先的准备和事中的持续铺设和完善,大纲和设定的重要性在这也就体现出来了。 I write every so often, quite leaning stream of consciousness, said that the point of pleasant to hear called is not limited by the frame, said coarse, sometimes was thinks where wrote, meeting some fluctuations was easy, to cause in a region to linger or, the direct result did not extend forward, but excessively spread out all over toward the two sides. 我很多时候写作,比较偏意识流,说好听点叫不受框架局限,说难听点,有时候就是想到哪写哪,遇上一些波动因素容易出偏,或者说,导致在一片区域内盘桓,直接结果就是不向前延伸而是往两边过度铺展。 This situation will also cause the plot duplication enhancement, causes the duplicated ponder, causing the anxious losing sleep condition to drop, the decline of memory, causing the writing to be tired. 这种情况也会导致情节重复性提高,导致重复性思考,导致焦虑失眠状态下降,记忆力衰退,导致写作疲乏。 Sometimes, the thought of person situated in two levels, one type is experiencing you of this matter, one type stands in high place you, just like an observer, understood oneself, look oneself, record own sluggish, dilatory and laughable, even brings the taunt place to look oneself do some matters of self-deception. 有时候,人的思维处于两种层面,一种是正在经历这件事的你,一种是站在更高处的你,犹如一个旁观者,了解自己、看着自己、记录着自己的懒散、拖沓与可笑,甚至带着嘲讽地看着自己做一些自欺欺人的事。 „Clip clop ~ ~” “哒哒~~” Knocks the blackboard, really took time you to listen to me, wanted to cease such matter, must employs two methods to achieve one goal from the source and process. 敲黑板,真费事你给我听好了,想要杜绝这样的事,必须从源头和过程双管齐下。 First is the important preparatory work, the full construction of universal system, full combing of main vein, head and tail both sides, and some representative content of intermediate link wait wait/etc. etc., establishes and perfection of summary in brief. 第一是至关重要的准备工作,世界体系的充分构建,主要脉络的充分梳理,首尾两端、以及中间环节的某种代表性内容等等等等,简而言之就是设定和纲要的健全。 Second is to cease sluggishly, receives your glass heart, changes into the playdough simply, rubbing to pinch comfortably will not be being bad. 第二是杜绝懒散,收起你的玻璃心,干脆换成橡皮泥的吧,揉来揉去捏着舒服还不会坏。 Third, believes itself as always. 第三,还是一如既往地相信自己。 ...... …… Then also said that beyond some topics gave a pretext. 那么接下来也说说一些题外借口。 Before many people looked at me beyond of sending, namely „I can also rescue”, actually beyond this is the Lanke original body waste manuscript draft, originally plans to throw the metropolis. 想必不少人看了我之前的发的番外,即“我还能抢救一下”,其实这番外是烂柯的原身废稿初稿,本来是打算投都市的。 The words saying, at that time net article was blustery, in metropolis unstable, the violent storm blows bugle and beats drums unceasingly, the heavenly thunder billowing search for people life, my original old book also suffers disaster repeatedly, related to the country, politics wait/etc aspect in contents all for red string and even heavy line, regardless of content positive and negative, wants to launch the plot content to be hard in this aspect ascends to heaven, old book also once almost GG, causing the mood was extremely bad for a long time, was born opened the book the thought. 话说,彼时网文界风起云涌,都市之中动荡不安,狂风暴雨不断吹打,天雷滚滚索人性命,我原本的老书也频频遭难,涉及国家、政治等等方面的内容一律为红线乃至黑线,不论内容正负,想要在这方面展开剧情内容难于登天,老书也一度差点gg,引得长时间心情极差,诞生了重新开书的念头。 But I underestimated this day to fall the wind and thunder, thought of every means the portrayed content, has been hard unexpectedly examining, was not signing examines, UU read www.uukanshu.com 但鄙人还是小看了这一股天降风雷,费尽心思所刻画的内容,竟然难以过审,不是签约不过审,UU看书www.uukanshu.com But sends the book to examine, the mentality explodes. 而是发书不过审,心态更炸。 Prepares not to use, some were a pity, but I also looked at that meeting everyone to regard as the immortal hero of unexpected winner in this time, was the unexpected winner in classical immortal hero unexpected winner, after all classified calls the classical immortal hero, was always insufficient unable to write the matter of occult and uncanny things? 很多准备用不上,有些太可惜了,而我也是在此时瞄上了那会人人视为冷门的仙侠,还是古典仙侠这种冷门中的冷门,毕竟分类都叫古典仙侠了,总不至于不能写怪力乱神的事了吧？ Then had the Lanke chess reason. 然后就有了烂柯棋缘。 In the process of comp book book, harvested many praises, received many criticism, sometimes my mood same takes off and lands with the process car(riage), is really the pain is being joyful. 在写本书的过程中,收获了很多赞誉,也受到了很多批评,我的情绪有时候和过程车一样起起落落,真是痛并快乐着。 However at this moment, the book has terminated, just like Ji Yuan, I can also tranquil. 不过此时此刻,书已完结,正如计缘,我也可以平静一下了。 Thanks everyone to support for a long time, thanks everyone's criticism, I certainly make contribution the self- reorganization! 谢谢大家长久以来的支持,也谢谢大家的批评,我一定尽力自我整改！ Right, old book «This World Indigenous Good Fierce» must continue, marks a period to the old book. 哦对,老书《这世界的土著好凶猛》还得续写,给老书画上一个句号。
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