In the roomfalls into a peace.
屋中陷入一片安静。Althoughis noteveryoneis expected the Mid-Autumn Festivalpoem, butthistopicis not but actually difficultto write.
虽然不是大家预料中的中秋诗,但这个题目倒也不难写。Naturally, no matteris goodto writeis the matters of scholar, as fortheseyoung masterbuddies, so long aswaits for the retainerto offer the poemthen.
当然,不管好不好写都是读书人的事,至于那些公子哥们,只要等着门客献诗即可。Donegooddefinitelyto enjoylayer on layer/heavily, does not completelightly, thengoes backto get, the heavyheadmoves.
作的好肯定重重有赏,作不好轻则回去打上一顿,重则脑袋搬家。Sois simple.
就这么简单。
Front onegroup of writerretainerlookresemblesomewhattiredly, butactually the onetypeflattersYangliu Shi of intentlazy, suddenlytrain of thoughtspringwells up, variouspraisemind, is only waiting forthemvividly the arrangement.
一群文人门客看着面前似有些困乏,但却更有一种慵懒媚意的杨柳诗,一时间文思泉涌,各种赞美之词跃然脑海,只等着他们去排列组合。Quick, thenhadperson of to becomeShi.
很快,便有一人成诗了。Saw onlyhimto bend downinownyoung masterearto sayseveral, shouldread the poem that oneselfjustwrote, quitemade the lordpull out a first prize.
只见他俯身在自家公子耳边说了几句,应该是在念自己刚作的诗,好让主子拔个头筹。Butin that family/homeopensYoung Masterto congratulate in money shopactuallyto deeply frown, after listening, somewhathesitates, seems likecannotcarry.
可那位那家里开钱庄的贺公子却是眉头紧锁,听完之后有些犹豫,似乎是没能背下来。So after repeatedlyseveral, heis disinclinedto carrysimplyagain, the clear and resonant voice that a lookin the past, the retainer the mindcomprehendsimmediatelysaid:
如此反复几遍后他干脆懒得再背,一个眼神过去,门客立刻心神领会的朗声说道:„Miss Liushi, my familyyoung masterhas made the poem, mademeread aloudwith the misslistens.”
“柳诗姑娘,我家公子已作出诗来,特令我诵与姑娘听。”„Apologizedcelebrates the young master, the slaveis listening.”
“谢过贺公子了,奴家听着呢。”Yangliu Shiwill certainly not see through an affair, smilesto looktoYoung Masterto congratulate, probablythispoem is really general that hemakes.杨柳诗当然不会拆穿,笑看向贺公子,好像这诗真是他作的一般。
The voice of retainerresoundsin the roomclearly.
门客的声音在屋中清晰响起。„Milleniumis not outstandingly beautiful,”
“千秋无绝色,”„Good-lookingis the beautiful woman.”
“悦目是佳人。”„Causing the downfall of the nationbeautiful womanappearance,”
“倾国倾城貌,”„Startledis the worldperson.”
“惊为天下人。”Fourwordjueju poems, altogether20charactersthenread aloudquickly.
四言绝句,一共二十字很快便诵完了。Someperson of eyesonebright, butmost peopleactuallycurl the lip.
有人眼睛一亮,但大部分人却只是撇了撇嘴。
The milleniumoutstandingly beautifulandgood-lookingbeautiful woman and causing the downfall of the nationbeautiful woman, startledareCelestials.
千秋绝色、悦目佳人、倾国倾城、惊为天人。Thispoemadds a characterinfouridiomsrespectively, thenregards as the ingenious conception, mayregard asto be opportunistic.
此诗是在四个成语上各添一字而成,即可看做巧思,也可看做投机取巧。Most criticallytwoand42take the samecharacteras the tail, strictunqualifiedlaw.
更关键的是二、四两句以同字为尾,严格来讲并不合格律。Thereforegenerally speaking can only belaunches.
所以总体来看只能算是中下水准。Yangliu Shipraisedseveralthenno longerto speakwith a smile, was the poem is not quite obviously satisfied.杨柳诗笑着夸赞几句便不再说话,明显也是对此诗不太满意。ThatYoung Masterto congratulatecomplexioninstantaneouslybecomessomewhatugly/difficult to look at, but others are the confidencerise sharply, soonthenhas the secondpersonto standto offer the poem.
那位贺公子的脸色瞬间变得有些难看,而其他人则是信心大涨,很快便有第二个人站出来献诗。„Againhow does Miss Liushilisten tomy familyyoung master?”
“柳诗姑娘再听我家公子这首如何?”„Slaveis listening.”
“奴家听着。”„......”
“……”One after another, quickhad/lefttenfirstpoems.
一首一首又一首,很快就出了十来首诗。Although the laterpoemwantsto be stronger than first, butalso can only be countedreluctantly.
之后的诗虽都比第一首要强些,但也只能算作勉勉强强。Althoughis the free verse written in the vernacular, does not have the new idea, butrepeatedlyis sayingseveralwords.
虽是新诗,却无新意,只不过是把几个词反复着说而已。Wei Changtianheardto be about to fall asleep, Liu Zongliangactuallystoodinthis timesuddenly.魏长天本来听得都快睡着了,柳宗亮却在此时突然站了起来。Becauseis the Liu Familyperson, hisstanding uppeoplethendid not speak.
因是柳家人,他一站起众人便都不说话了。ButLiu Zongliangothersfirstsmalltalk, do not shake the sleeves , after naturalread alouddirectlyloudly:
而柳宗亮也不似别人要先客套一番,潇洒抖了抖衣袖后就直接高声诵道:„Cotton roseis less than the beautiful womanmakeup,”
“芙蓉不及美人妆,”„Palace on the waterwindcomesbeadCuixiang.”
“水殿风来珠翠香。”„Whoseminute/shareincludingcryingto cover the autumn fan,”
“谁分含啼掩秋扇,”„Hovering flightbright moonlightperiod of five daysking.”
“空悬明月候君王。”„......”
“……”Inroompeacefulseveralseconds, at oncesomepeoplepound on the table, is blushing saying: „Goodpoem!!”
屋中安静几秒,旋即有人一拍桌子,红着脸赞道:“好诗!!”After his called, others alsofollowto respond, suddenly the applaudingsoundresounds.
经他这一吆喝,其他人也跟着反应过来,一时间叫好声响成一片。Young masterbuddytoflatterLiu Zongliangmostly, but the writersare the sinceritythoughtthispoemis good.
公子哥们大都是为了巴结柳宗亮,而文人们则是真心觉得这诗好。Firsttwoexplained the appearance of beautiful womanby the cotton rose, pearlandemerald, although the mentalitywas average, butmode of writingnatureas if made by Heaven, was not artificial.
前两句以芙蓉、珍珠、翡翠来喻美人的容貌,虽然思路平平,但写法却自然天成,毫不做作。Thentwowill put in order the level of firstpoemto raiseseverallevelsdirectly.
而后两句则更是直接将整首诗的水准拔高了数个层次。Whoseminute/shareincludingcryingto cover the autumn fan, the hovering flightbright moonlightperiod of five daysking.
谁分含啼掩秋扇,空悬明月候君王。
Compared with to wait for the bright moonlight of king, even if the metaphor the emperorprincesaw that Yangliu Shi must subdue...... thisto a brothelfemalewithout doubtis the bigglory.
将人比作等待君王的明月,暗喻即便是皇上王爷见到杨柳诗也要为之折服……这对一个青楼女子来说无疑是偌大的荣耀。Ifthispoemdoes not prepareahead of time, then can only explain a matter-
此诗如果不是提前准备的,便只能说明一件事-
The poetic talent of person of writing poetryis out of the ordinary.
作诗之人的诗才非同凡响。Listens topraising of people, Liu Zongliangto enjoyvery much, simultaneouslyslightlyappearsintentlookstoYangliu Shi.
听着众人的交口称赞,柳宗亮很是受用,同时略显得意的看向杨柳诗。„Young Masterwillow......”
“柳公子……”Yangliu Shifirstgawkeda while, at onceis charmingsmiles: „It seems like the slavetonightwasyourperson.”杨柳诗先是愣了一会儿,旋即娇媚一笑:“看来奴家今夜是你的人了。”
Under thissayingappears, although a tumult, butno onehas the opinion.
这话一出台下虽然一片骚动,但却没人有意见。AlthoughShuowendoes not havefirst, butthatisin the situation that in the articlepoetryis almost the samesaid.
虽说文无第一,但那是在文章诗词相差无几的情况下说的。Now the Liu Zongliangpoemobviouslybe higher thanseveralscalescompared withothers, somepeoplewill not naturally jumpto bring contempt upon oneself.
如今柳宗亮的诗明显要比别人高出几个档次,自然也不会有人跳出来自取其辱。Liu Zonglianghearsword is also wild with joy, buthearsYangliu Shito continueto sayat once:柳宗亮闻言也是一阵狂喜,但旋即又听见杨柳诗继续说道:„Butdoes not know that actuallythispoemisyour family placewhichretainerdoes, requesting earnestly the young masterto inform the slave......”
“但不知此诗究竟是府上哪位门客所作,恳请公子告知奴家……”As beforeis the suppleglutinoustone, butthissayinglets the Liu ZongliangcomplexioninstantaneouslybywhiteBianhong, is changedazurered, fell into a hardplacecompletely.
依旧是柔柔糯糯的语气,但这话却是瞬间让柳宗亮的脸色由白变红,由红变青,完全陷入了进退两难的境地。Ifhethispoem does, not onlyunmannedmeeting believes that appears is in itself a falsedisciple.
他如果说这诗就是自己作的,不仅无人会信,更显得自己是一个虚伪之徒。
But if the acknowledgmentis notdoes, thatfalls the face......
可要是承认不是自己作的,那又太跌面子……Thinks it over the half of the day, Liu Zongliangis the directionstands a young manfinallyincrowd, squeezes a smileforcefully.
思来想去半天,柳宗亮终于是指向站在人群中的一个年轻男子,强行挤出一丝笑容。„Miss Liushi, isthispersondoes.”
“柳诗姑娘,是此人所作。”„?”
“哦?”Yangliu Shitransfers the pupilto look, in the lookfullis the tender feelingstraces of spring: „Does not know that thisyoung masterhonored name, does havesuchpoetic talentunexpectedly?”杨柳诗转眸看去,眼神中满是柔情春意:“不知这位公子尊姓大名,竟有如此诗才?”„Misserroneousapproved.”
“姑娘谬赞了。”Thatyouthonesteptakes the crowd, is calm: „Is only a Liu Residenceretainer.”
那名青年一步迈出人群,淡定道:“只是柳府一门客而已。”„Aren't young masterswillingto tell the slave the name?” The Yangliu Shisoundis touching.
“公子都不肯将名字告诉奴家么?”杨柳诗声音凄婉。„This......”
“这……”
The youthlooked atcomplexionpaleLiu Zongliang, has not resisted the seduction of beautiful womaneventually, havingseveralpoints of arroganceto throw out the chestto reply: „MyQinjade, transited the discipling fromSuI!”
青年看了一眼脸色铁青的柳宗亮,终究还是没有抵挡住美人的诱惑,带着几分傲气挺胸回答道:“吾名秦玉,师承苏吾!”„Whish!”
“哗!”
The peopleinstantaneouslyin an uproar.
众人瞬间哗然。WhoSu am I? Great poets!
苏吾是谁?诗圣啊!Thereforeat present is thisappearanceaverageyouthunexpectedly the disciple of great poet?
所以眼前这个样貌平平的青年居然是诗圣之徒?No wonderhasthispoetic talent!
难怪有此诗才!
A piecemakes noise, Yangliu Shireveals a surprisedsentiment for the first time, looked that seemed softerseveralpointsto the look of Qinjade.
一片喧闹中,杨柳诗第一次露出一丝惊讶之情,看向秦玉的眼神似乎更软了几分。ButLiu Zongliangis the bigfeelingis not wonderful, for fear thatYangliu Shishouldchange the ideathis waywithQinYushui, rushesto askloudly:
而柳宗亮则是大感不妙,生怕再这样下去杨柳诗该改主意跟秦玉睡了,赶忙大声问道:„Can have the poem to take?”
“可还有诗要拿出来的?”„......”
“……”Makes noisestops, no onespoke.
喧闹停止,没人说话。Althoughhalf ofpeoplehave not read aloud the poem, buteveryonewas clear, sincehas the pearls and jadebefore, thatpresentoffered the poemagainwithout doubtreally„revealing shortcomings”.
虽然还有一半人尚未诵诗,但大家都清楚既然已有珠玉在前,那现在再献诗无疑就是真的“献丑”了。„Good, without......”
“好,既然没有……”Liu Zongliangis impatient, waited forseveralbreathsthento prepareto overstep authority and get involved in another's affairsslightlyto announce that thissampled tea and seek pleasure in a brothelto finish.柳宗亮早已迫不及待,稍微等了几息便准备越俎代庖宣布本场打茶围结束。But, Wei Changtian of wordspokein the meantimefrom beginning to endfinally.
可也就在此时,自始至终未出一言的魏长天终于说话了。„Worries, is hurrying to the reincarnation?”
“着什么急,赶着去投胎呢?”„You!”
“你!”Liu Zongliangexceedingly indignantlooks,knowsnot to be victoriousWei Changtian, it is estimated thathas flushedto go all out.柳宗亮无比愤怒的看过来,要不是自知打不过魏长天,估计早就冲过来拼命了。Heis staringnot to speak, othersdo not dareto mixwillow the Weitwogratitude and grudges, at this timealsoonly thenYangliu Shicancome outto mediate.
他瞪着眼不说话,别人不敢掺和柳魏两家的恩怨,此时也就只有杨柳诗能出来打圆场了。„Young Master Wei, do you have the poem?”
“魏公子,您也有诗?”„Yes.”
“是。”„ButIhave not seenyouto lead the retainerto come......”
“可我未见您带门客过来……”Yangliu Shilooked atoneobviouslyisWang Er of military person, smiledto ask: „Thatthispoemisyoung masterdoes certainly?”杨柳诗看了一眼明显是武人的王二,笑问道:“那此诗就一定是公子自己作的喽?”„Yes. Wei Changtianis reticent, butLiu Zongliangalsofinallyfound the opportunity, hurriesto open the mouthto taunt: „ Hahahaha, todayIknow that anythingis the not knowing the immensity of heaven and earthbottom of the well......”
“是。魏长天惜字如金,而柳宗亮也终于找到了机会,赶紧开口嘲讽道:“哈哈哈哈,今日我才知道什么是不知天高地厚的井底之……”„Yousaid a characteragain, believesmeto makeyoulie downfromhere?”Wei Changtianicyinterruption.
“你再说一个字,信不信我让你从这里躺着出去?”魏长天冷冰冰的打断。„......”
“……”Like the throatcardphlegm, the Liu Zongliangflashcomplexionbecame flushed, butdoes not dareto speakeventuallyagain.
就像嗓子眼卡了一口痰,柳宗亮一瞬间脸色涨红,但终究是没敢再说话。Wei Changtiandoes not goto managehim, after taking a fast look aroundin a room the people, stands upslowly.魏长天不去管他,扫视了一圈屋中众人后才慢慢站起身。Carrieswine potface upwardsBoguannextbigliquor, the visionis looking straight aheadYangliu Shi.
拎起酒壶仰脖灌下一大口酒,目光直视着杨柳诗。„Youlisten, thiscalled the poem.”
“你听好,这才叫诗。”Beautiful women, personal enemiesandcrowds......
美人、仇人、围观群众……Passing through is so long, the laborwaited tillfinallyat this moment!
穿越过来这么久,劳资终于等到这一刻了!Li Taibai! So manypeoplehave usedyourpoemin any case, todayIalsoborrowto use!
李太白!反正那么多人用过你的诗,今天我也借来用一用!„Gurgle~gurgle~”
“咕嘟~咕嘟~”Liquor, a poem.
一口酒,一句诗。Fourliquorenter the throat, the poembecomes.
四口酒入喉,诗成。
The silverpotfalls to the groundto send out„clanglang” a resounding.
银壶落地发出“铛啷”一声脆响。In addition, the needlefallsmayhear.
除此之外,台上台下针落可闻。Everyonedumbfoundedlooks atWei Changtian, in the mindempty, is only left overthatmakesYangliu Shihenceforthworld-famoussufficiently20caret-shaped.
所有人都目瞪口呆的看着魏长天,脑海中空荡荡的,只剩下那足以让杨柳诗从此天下闻名的二十八字。„cloudthinksclothesflowerwantsto accommodate,”
“云想衣裳花想容,”„Spring breezestrokesthresholdRevlon.”
“春风拂槛露华浓。”„If notgroupJade Mountainsees,”
“若非群玉山头见,”„Will meetto the Yaostagemoon/month......”
“会向瑶台月下逢……”„Pūpasses!”
“噗通!”
A person's shadowstaggersto fallon the ground, was the disciple of great poet, Qinjade.
一个人影踉跄跌坐在地上,正是那诗圣之徒,秦玉。Heincrediblerelapsethesefourpoemlownanseveral, shiversto summarizeonefinally.
他不可置信的反复将这四句诗低喃数遍,最后颤抖着总结出一句。„Mymasterfearsalso......”
“吾师恐不及也……”
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