IATVOTB :: Volume #1 长夜未尽天既白

#41: Mid-Autumn Festival and fox( under)


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In the room falls into a peace. 屋中陷入一片安静。 Although is not everyone is expected the Mid-Autumn Festival poem, but this topic is not but actually difficult to write. 虽然不是大家预料中的中秋诗,但这个题目倒也不难写。 Naturally, no matter is good to write is the matters of scholar, as for these young master buddies, so long as waits for the retainer to offer the poem then. 当然,不管好不好写都是读书人的事,至于那些公子哥们,只要等着门客献诗即可。 Done good definitely to enjoy layer on layer/heavily, does not complete lightly, then goes back to get, the heavy head moves. 作的好肯定重重有赏,作不好轻则回去打上一顿,重则脑袋搬家。 So is simple. 就这么简单。 Front one group of writer retainer look resemble somewhat tiredly, but actually the one type flatters Yangliu Shi of intent lazy, suddenly train of thought spring wells up, various praise mind, is only waiting for them vividly the arrangement. 一群文人门客看着面前似有些困乏,但却更有一种慵懒媚意的杨柳诗,一时间文思泉涌,各种赞美之词跃然脑海,只等着他们去排列组合。 Quick, then had person of to become Shi. 很快,便有一人成诗了。 Saw only him to bend down in own young master ear to say several, should read the poem that oneself just wrote, quite made the lord pull out a first prize. 只见他俯身在自家公子耳边说了几句,应该是在念自己刚作的诗,好让主子拔个头筹。 But in that family/home opens Young Master to congratulate in money shop actually to deeply frown, after listening, somewhat hesitates, seems like cannot carry. 可那位那家里开钱庄的贺公子却是眉头紧锁,听完之后有些犹豫,似乎是没能背下来。 So after repeatedly several, he is disinclined to carry simply again, the clear and resonant voice that a look in the past, the retainer the mind comprehends immediately said: 如此反复几遍后他干脆懒得再背,一个眼神过去,门客立刻心神领会的朗声说道: Miss Liushi, my family young master has made the poem, made me read aloud with the miss listens.” 柳诗姑娘,我家公子已作出诗来,特令我诵与姑娘听。” Apologized celebrates the young master, the slave is listening.” “谢过贺公子了,奴家听着呢。” Yangliu Shi will certainly not see through an affair, smiles to look to Young Master to congratulate, probably this poem is really general that he makes. 杨柳诗当然不会拆穿,笑看向贺公子,好像这诗真是他作的一般。 The voice of retainer resounds in the room clearly. 门客的声音在屋中清晰响起。 Millenium is not outstandingly beautiful,” “千秋无绝色,” Good-looking is the beautiful woman.” “悦目是佳人。” Causing the downfall of the nation beautiful woman appearance,” “倾国倾城貌,” Startled is the world person.” “惊为天下人。” Four word jueju poems, altogether 20 characters then read aloud quickly. 四言绝句,一共二十字很快便诵完了。 Some person of eyes one bright, but most people actually curl the lip. 有人眼睛一亮,但大部分人却只是撇了撇嘴。 The millenium outstandingly beautiful and good-looking beautiful woman and causing the downfall of the nation beautiful woman, startled are Celestials. 千秋绝色、悦目佳人、倾国倾城、惊为天人。 This poem adds a character in four idioms respectively, then regards as the ingenious conception, may regard as to be opportunistic. 此诗是在四个成语上各添一字而成,即可看做巧思,也可看做投机取巧。 Most critically two and 42 take the same character as the tail, strict unqualified law. 更关键的是二、四两句以同字为尾,严格来讲并不合格律。 Therefore generally speaking can only be launches. 所以总体来看只能算是中下水准。 Yangliu Shi praised several then no longer to speak with a smile, was the poem is not quite obviously satisfied. 杨柳诗笑着夸赞几句便不再说话,明显也是对此诗不太满意。 That Young Master to congratulate complexion instantaneously becomes somewhat ugly/difficult to look at, but others are the confidence rise sharply, soon then has the second person to stand to offer the poem. 那位贺公子的脸色瞬间变得有些难看,而其他人则是信心大涨,很快便有第二个人站出来献诗。 Again how does Miss Liushi listen to my family young master?” 柳诗姑娘再听我家公子这首如何?” Slave is listening.” “奴家听着。” „......” “……” One after another, quick had/left ten first poems. 一首一首又一首,很快就出了十来首诗。 Although the later poem wants to be stronger than first, but also can only be counted reluctantly. 之后的诗虽都比第一首要强些,但也只能算作勉勉强强。 Although is the free verse written in the vernacular, does not have the new idea, but repeatedly is saying several words. 虽是新诗,却无新意,只不过是把几个词反复着说而已。 Wei Changtian heard to be about to fall asleep, Liu Zongliang actually stood in this time suddenly. 魏长天本来听得都快睡着了,柳宗亮却在此时突然站了起来。 Because is the Liu Family person, his standing up people then did not speak. 因是柳家人,他一站起众人便都不说话了。 But Liu Zongliang others first smalltalk, do not shake the sleeves , after natural read aloud directly loudly: 柳宗亮也不似别人要先客套一番,潇洒抖了抖衣袖后就直接高声诵道: Cotton rose is less than the beautiful woman makeup,” “芙蓉不及美人妆,” Palace on the water wind comes bead Cuixiang.” “水殿风来珠翠香。” Whose minute/share including crying to cover the autumn fan,” “谁分含啼掩秋扇,” Hovering flight bright moonlight period of five days king.” “空悬明月候君王。” „......” “……” In room peaceful several seconds, at once some people pound on the table, is blushing saying: Good poem!!” 屋中安静几秒,旋即有人一拍桌子,红着脸赞道:“好诗!!” After his called, others also follow to respond, suddenly the applauding sound resounds. 经他这一吆喝,其他人也跟着反应过来,一时间叫好声响成一片。 Young master buddy to flatter Liu Zongliang mostly, but the writers are the sincerity thought this poem is good. 公子哥们大都是为了巴结柳宗亮,而文人们则是真心觉得这诗好。 First two explained the appearance of beautiful woman by the cotton rose, pearl and emerald, although the mentality was average, but mode of writing nature as if made by Heaven, was not artificial. 前两句以芙蓉、珍珠、翡翠来喻美人的容貌,虽然思路平平,但写法却自然天成,毫不做作。 Then two will put in order the level of first poem to raise several levels directly. 而后两句则更是直接将整首诗的水准拔高了数个层次。 Whose minute/share including crying to cover the autumn fan, the hovering flight bright moonlight period of five days king. 谁分含啼掩秋扇,空悬明月候君王。 Compared with to wait for the bright moonlight of king, even if the metaphor the emperor prince saw that Yangliu Shi must subdue...... this to a brothel female without doubt is the big glory. 将人比作等待君王的明月,暗喻即便是皇上王爷见到杨柳诗也要为之折服……这对一个青楼女子来说无疑是偌大的荣耀。 If this poem does not prepare ahead of time, then can only explain a matter- 此诗如果不是提前准备的,便只能说明一件事- The poetic talent of person of writing poetry is out of the ordinary. 作诗之人的诗才非同凡响。 Listens to praising of people, Liu Zongliang to enjoy very much, simultaneously slightly appears intent looks to Yangliu Shi. 听着众人的交口称赞,柳宗亮很是受用,同时略显得意的看向杨柳诗 Young Master willow......” “柳公子……” Yangliu Shi first gawked a while, at once is charming smiles: It seems like the slave tonight was your person.” 杨柳诗先是愣了一会儿,旋即娇媚一笑:“看来奴家今夜是你的人了。” Under this saying appears, although a tumult, but no one has the opinion. 这话一出台下虽然一片骚动,但却没人有意见。 Although Shuowen does not have first, but that is in the situation that in the article poetry is almost the same said. 虽说文无第一,但那是在文章诗词相差无几的情况下说的。 Now the Liu Zongliang poem obviously be higher than several scales compared with others, some people will not naturally jump to bring contempt upon oneself. 如今柳宗亮的诗明显要比别人高出几个档次,自然也不会有人跳出来自取其辱。 Liu Zongliang hears word is also wild with joy, but hears Yangliu Shi to continue to say at once: 柳宗亮闻言也是一阵狂喜,但旋即又听见杨柳诗继续说道: But does not know that actually this poem is your family place which retainer does, requesting earnestly the young master to inform the slave......” “但不知此诗究竟是府上哪位门客所作,恳请公子告知奴家……” As before is the supple glutinous tone, but this saying lets the Liu Zongliang complexion instantaneously by white Bianhong, is changed azure red, fell into a hard place completely. 依旧是柔柔糯糯的语气,但这话却是瞬间让柳宗亮的脸色由白变红,由红变青,完全陷入了进退两难的境地。 If he this poem does, not only unmanned meeting believes that appears is in itself a false disciple. 他如果说这诗就是自己作的,不仅无人会信,更显得自己是一个虚伪之徒。 But if the acknowledgment is not does, that falls the face...... 可要是承认不是自己作的,那又太跌面子…… Thinks it over the half of the day, Liu Zongliang is the direction stands a young man finally in crowd, squeezes a smile forcefully. 思来想去半天,柳宗亮终于是指向站在人群中的一个年轻男子,强行挤出一丝笑容。 Miss Liushi, is this person does.” 柳诗姑娘,是此人所作。” „?” “哦?” Yangliu Shi transfers the pupil to look, in the look full is the tender feelings traces of spring: Does not know that this young master honored name, does have such poetic talent unexpectedly?” 杨柳诗转眸看去,眼神中满是柔情春意:“不知这位公子尊姓大名,竟有如此诗才?” Miss erroneous approved.” “姑娘谬赞了。” That youth one step takes the crowd, is calm: Is only a Liu Residence retainer.” 那名青年一步迈出人群,淡定道:“只是柳府一门客而已。” „Aren't young masters willing to tell the slave the name?” The Yangliu Shi sound is touching. “公子都不肯将名字告诉奴家么?”杨柳诗声音凄婉。 This......” “这……” The youth looked at complexion pale Liu Zongliang, has not resisted the seduction of beautiful woman eventually, having several points of arrogance to throw out the chest to reply: My Qin jade, transited the discipling from Su I!” 青年看了一眼脸色铁青的柳宗亮,终究还是没有抵挡住美人的诱惑,带着几分傲气挺胸回答道:“吾名秦玉,师承苏吾!” Whish!” “哗!” The people instantaneously in an uproar. 众人瞬间哗然。 Who Su am I? Great poets! 苏吾是谁?诗圣啊! Therefore at present is this appearance average youth unexpectedly the disciple of great poet? 所以眼前这个样貌平平的青年居然是诗圣之徒? No wonder has this poetic talent! 难怪有此诗才! A piece makes noise, Yangliu Shi reveals a surprised sentiment for the first time, looked that seemed softer several points to the look of Qin jade. 一片喧闹中,杨柳诗第一次露出一丝惊讶之情,看向秦玉的眼神似乎更软了几分。 But Liu Zongliang is the big feeling is not wonderful, for fear that Yangliu Shi should change the idea this way with Qin Yushui, rushes to ask loudly: 柳宗亮则是大感不妙,生怕再这样下去杨柳诗该改主意跟秦玉睡了,赶忙大声问道: Can have the poem to take?” “可还有诗要拿出来的?” „......” “……” Makes noise stops, no one spoke. 喧闹停止,没人说话。 Although half of people have not read aloud the poem, but everyone was clear, since has the pearls and jade before, that present offered the poem again without doubt really revealing shortcomings. 虽然还有一半人尚未诵诗,但大家都清楚既然已有珠玉在前,那现在再献诗无疑就是真的“献丑”了。 Good, without......” “好,既然没有……” Liu Zongliang is impatient, waited for several breaths then to prepare to overstep authority and get involved in another's affairs slightly to announce that this sampled tea and seek pleasure in a brothel to finish. 柳宗亮早已迫不及待,稍微等了几息便准备越俎代庖宣布本场打茶围结束。 But, Wei Changtian of word spoke in the meantime from beginning to end finally. 可也就在此时,自始至终未出一言的魏长天终于说话了。 Worries, is hurrying to the reincarnation?” “着什么急,赶着去投胎呢?” You!” “你!” Liu Zongliang exceedingly indignant looks, knows not to be victorious Wei Changtian, it is estimated that has flushed to go all out. 柳宗亮无比愤怒的看过来,要不是自知打不过魏长天,估计早就冲过来拼命了。 He is staring not to speak, others do not dare to mix willow the Wei two gratitude and grudges, at this time also only then Yangliu Shi can come out to mediate. 他瞪着眼不说话,别人不敢掺和柳魏两家的恩怨,此时也就只有杨柳诗能出来打圆场了。 Young Master Wei, do you have the poem?” 魏公子,您也有诗?” Yes.” “是。” But I have not seen you to lead the retainer to come......” “可我未见您带门客过来……” Yangliu Shi looked at one obviously is Wang Er of military person, smiled to ask: That this poem is young master does certainly?” 杨柳诗看了一眼明显是武人的王二,笑问道:“那此诗就一定是公子自己作的喽?” Yes. Wei Changtian is reticent, but Liu Zongliang also finally found the opportunity, hurries to open the mouth to taunt: „ Hahahaha, today I know that anything is the not knowing the immensity of heaven and earth bottom of the well......” “是。魏长天惜字如金,而柳宗亮也终于找到了机会,赶紧开口嘲讽道:“哈哈哈哈,今日我才知道什么是不知天高地厚的井底之……” You said a character again, believes me to make you lie down from here?” Wei Changtian icy interruption. “你再说一个字,信不信我让你从这里躺着出去?”魏长天冷冰冰的打断。 „......” “……” Like the throat card phlegm, the Liu Zongliang flash complexion became flushed, but does not dare to speak eventually again. 就像嗓子眼卡了一口痰,柳宗亮一瞬间脸色涨红,但终究是没敢再说话。 Wei Changtian does not go to manage him, after taking a fast look around in a room the people, stands up slowly. 魏长天不去管他,扫视了一圈屋中众人后才慢慢站起身。 Carries wine pot face upwards Boguan next big liquor, the vision is looking straight ahead Yangliu Shi. 拎起酒壶仰脖灌下一大口酒,目光直视着杨柳诗 You listen, this called the poem.” “你听好,这才叫诗。” Beautiful women, personal enemies and crowds...... 美人、仇人、围观群众…… Passing through is so long, the labor waited till finally at this moment! 穿越过来这么久,劳资终于等到这一刻了! Li Taibai! So many people have used your poem in any case, today I also borrow to use! 李太白!反正那么多人用过你的诗,今天我也借来用一用! Gurgle ~ gurgle ~ “咕嘟~咕嘟~” Liquor, a poem. 一口酒,一句诗。 Four liquor enter the throat, the poem becomes. 四口酒入喉,诗成。 The silver pot falls to the ground to send out clang lang a resounding. 银壶落地发出“铛啷”一声脆响。 In addition, the needle falls may hear. 除此之外,台上台下针落可闻。 Everyone dumbfounded looks at Wei Changtian, in the mind empty, is only left over that makes Yangliu Shi henceforth world-famous sufficiently 20 caret-shaped. 所有人都目瞪口呆的看着魏长天,脑海中空荡荡的,只剩下那足以让杨柳诗从此天下闻名的二十八字。 cloud thinks clothes flower wants to accommodate,” “云想衣裳花想容,” Spring breeze strokes threshold Revlon.” “春风拂槛露华浓。” If not group Jade Mountain sees,” “若非群玉山头见,” Will meet to the Yao stage moon/month......” “会向瑶台月下逢……” passes!” “噗通!” A person's shadow staggers to fall on the ground, was the disciple of great poet, Qin jade. 一个人影踉跄跌坐在地上,正是那诗圣之徒,秦玉。 He incredible relapse these four poem low nan several, shivers to summarize one finally. 他不可置信的反复将这四句诗低喃数遍,最后颤抖着总结出一句。 My master fears also......” “吾师恐不及也……”
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