The timearrived in Julysuddenly, because seemed to be foundcomrade'sZhu Luyan that had a common goalto draw, theseschoolsandby the requests that before being taken awayvisitshim, to buildoffers an opinion, Yang Yi'sreturnedsomelate.
时间眨眼来到了七月,因为被仿佛找到了志同道合的同志的竺璐彦拉着,被带去参观他以前建的那些学校和被要求提意见,杨轶的归来有些晚了。ThereMo Feidoes not havewhatissuebut actually, theyparted on bad termson that day, has not affectedtheirevery nighttelephone conversations.墨菲那儿倒没有什么问题,两人那天不欢而散,也并没有影响他们每天晚上的通话。Thistelephone conversationcontentsomerare and beautiful flowers, theyonedid not discuss that the sentimenttwodid not say the love, butday after daywas talking about the Xixitopic.
这个通话内容有些奇葩,两人一不谈情二不说爱,只是日复一日地聊着曦曦的话题。IfXixiinYang Yihere, thatMo Feiwill inquirethatmakingYang Yireporton the same daydaughter'samusing thing, ifXixireturned tothat side mother to live, thatMo Feiwill also say the XiximatterwithYang Yi.
如果曦曦在杨轶这儿,那墨菲就会询问,让杨轶汇报当天女儿的趣事,而如果曦曦回到妈妈那边住,那墨菲也会跟杨轶说曦曦的事情。Suchhot pottelephonegruel is truly mysterious, what is more mysterious, Yang Yiveryenjoysthisprocess, but after Mo Fei is also hangs up the telephone, secretlyhappypreviousa while, as ifa moment agoYang Yiwill saywhatsweet words and honeyed phrasessamenaturallydo not have, will Yang Yithisklutzspeak the talk between lovers?
这样的煲电话粥确实很神奇,但更神奇的是,杨轶挺享受这个过程,而墨菲也是挂断电话之后,都会暗自甜蜜上一阵子,仿佛刚才杨轶说了什么甜言蜜语一样当然没有,杨轶这个木头人怎么会说情话?Yang Yicomes back, most delightedunexpectedlyiseditorQiang Zi!杨轶回来,最欢喜的居然是编辑强子!„MySir, youmaycome backfinally.”Qiang ZireceivedYang Yiin the SNSabovereply, almostweeps.
“我的大爷,您可总算回来了。”强子接到了杨轶在SNS上面的回复,几乎是喜极而泣。Yang Yiis somewhat puzzled: „Did Ibreak?”杨轶有些不解:“我断更了?”„No, the draft in rough draftboxalsoremains.”
“没有,草稿箱里的稿子还剩一些。”„Was thatmyreaderhas a falling out?”
“那是我的读者又闹翻了?”„Volume, some, after newfemale leadappearsbut actually, the readersare somewhat angry, range that but the situationstillincancontrol.”
“额,这个倒有一些,新女主出现之后,读者们有些愤慨,不过情况还在可以控制的范围。”Thismatter, but must mentionstarting from last week, the Japanese invaderstwobigmilitary forces, under the collaborationcounter-attack of some youngwarlords, finallyretreat in defeat again and againinternally, evenwas expelled the national territory, was chased downtheirmain island! FinallyJapanese invadersunconditional surrender...... Thishistory and Yang Yiprevious generationare somewhat similar, what are morearefeeling proud and elated of ourChinaarmy, the army of Europe and Americahave not mixed a footagain.
这事儿,还要从上周开始说起,日寇在国内两大军事势力、还有一些小军阀的联手反击下,终于节节败退,甚至被赶出国土,被追杀回他们本岛!最终日寇无条件投降……这个历史与杨轶前世有些类似,不过更多的是咱们中国军队的扬眉吐气,欧美的军队并没有再掺上一脚。
After winning, inevitablyis the start of civil war, in the combined military operation, the strength of youngwarlord was almost consumedcompletely, butremaining, are the showdowns of twobigmilitary forces.
大胜之后,必然是内战的开始,在联合作战中,小军阀的实力几乎被消耗殆尽,而剩下的,便是两大军事势力的对决。
The historychangesto trade the faceactually, actuallyalsoastonishingsimilar, afterYang Yihas made the artisticrevision, the path of storyreturned to the plot of original works: Li Yunlongis, military forcesbased onworkerandfarmer, withtakingentrepreneurandbanker who Chu Yunfeiis atfor the military forces of backing, has launchedbattleonvastChina.
历史其实改头换脸,却也惊人相似,在杨轶做了艺术性的修改之后,故事的轨迹又回归到了原著的情节:李云龙所在的、以工人和农民为基础的军事势力,和楚云飞所在的以企业家和银行家为后盾的军事势力,在辽阔的中国大地上展开了厮杀。Li Yunlongis unknown, actuallyshowed the slyandtenaciousbattle efficiency, making the matchhave a headache. Resembles the military forces that he to be the same, althoughlooks like the earthdoes not drawseveral, butis powerfulsufficientlyletsalllook down uponitspersonfromfana slap in the face.李云龙名不见经传,却展现出了狡猾而且顽强的战斗力,让对手头疼不已。就好像他所在的军事势力一样,尽管看起来土不拉几,但强悍得足以让所有看不起它的人自扇耳光。But the destinyisthatunusual, Li YunlongandChu Yunfeithesetwopityclearheadedly, actuallyhas toguard against the fellow who andbe hostile tomutuallyto meetmutuallyonce more.
但命运就是那么奇特,李云龙和楚云飞这两个惺惺相惜,却又不得不相互提防、相互敌视的家伙再次相遇了。Oncetheywere the regimental commander, Li Yunlongbecause oftheirtemperament, a whilekilled the prisoner of war, a whiledisobeyed orders, risesto rise and fallfalls, has stayedinregimental commanderposition, the army that even ifheledis an independent regiment of travelscale, as well aswas fighting, was expanded a division.( Inoriginal worksafterwardLi Yunlongwas promoted toteacher, but how to say that regimental commandernamestrikes root in the hearts of the people.)
曾经他们都是团长,李云龙因为自己的脾气,一会儿杀俘,一会儿抗命,升升降降,一直停留在了团长这个位置,即便他带领的部队已经是一个旅规模的独立团,以及在战斗中,被扩充到了一个师。(原著里后来李云龙还是被升任了师长,但怎么说还是团长这个称呼深入人心。)Chu Yunfeiis better, heis talented, the manneris also smoother than Li Yunlong, naturallyhas a meteoric rise, arrived at the major generalrank, naturally, theyleadsimilarlyis a division.楚云飞就好很多,他才华横溢,为人又比李云龙圆滑,自然是平步青云,已经到了少将级别,当然,他们率领的同样是一个师。Comes face to face with an adversary, tworeaders the role that likessuffering extreme distress, was doomedto have a timelife and deathshowdown.
狭路相逢,两个读者们都爱得死去活来的角色,注定了要有一次你死我活的对决。ButYang Yi'srepertoirecan it be thattheycanguess that obtains?
但杨轶的套路岂是他们能猜得到的?End ofChapter 12, Chu Yunfeiletsunderfire offtoLi Yunlong, butLi Yunlongalsomakesgun crewopen firetoChu Yunfei. The readerswere at that time brokenhearted......
在第12章末尾,楚云飞让手下对李云龙开炮,而李云龙也让身边的机枪手向楚云飞开枪。当时读者们都心碎了……Fortunately, finallyLi Yunlongbyhospitalfromdeathedgepulling back. The bedding bagbecomeshe of steamed rice dumpling, stuporeightdays, leisurelywoke up.
还好,最终李云龙还是还是被医院给从死亡边缘给拉了回来。被包成粽子的他,昏迷了八天,才悠悠醒来。
The delightedreadersas if„are listeningwithLi Yunlongsubordinatesamefeel as if it had happened to oneself, ourdivision commandersmusthave a good and evil, Ihave executedyoufirst, then executes the doctor, listensclearly?”
喜出望外的读者们仿佛跟李云龙的部下一样感同身受“听着,我们师长要有个好歹,我先毙了你,然后再毙医生,听清楚啦?”Side the boorish fellowswill always have the prettyyounger sisterpaperto appear.
莽汉身边总是会有娇滴滴的妹纸出现。Thesetimeis injured, sideLi YunlongthenpresentsyoungnurseTian Yu that in a as ifcanvaswalked. Zhao GangthisCommissarliterary mansawremembers the poem in Song of Eternal Sorrow„cotton rosesuch assurfaceLiuRumei”, obviouslyherbeautifulfine!
这一次受伤,李云龙身边便出现了一个仿佛画布里走出来的小护士田雨。赵刚这个文青政委看到了都想起长恨歌里的诗“芙蓉如面柳如眉”,可见她的美是有多精致!Butreadersnot, becauseherlookslikesto acceptattractively!
但读者们并没有因为她长得漂亮就欢喜接受!Verymysterious, originallywebnovelthisworld, maleversionbasicallyis the world of masculinist, the majority ofreaderswish one couldmale leadto receivein the pouchalla littlebeautywomen.
很神奇,原本网文这个世界,男版的基本上都是男权主义者的天下,大部分读者们恨不得男主将所有有点姿色的女人都收入囊中。Butinthisbook, in the book reviewareaonceappeareddid not welcome the summons of Tian Yuthisrole, almostshowed the antipathyone-sided!
但在这本书上,书评区里一度出现了不欢迎田雨这个角色的号召,几乎一边倒地表示了反感!PerhapsisbecausefrontXiu Qinextremelystruck root in the hearts of the people! Thattodyingis stubborn, is willingfor the staunchfemale who hismansacrificed, should notbeLi Yunlongsuchmanmatchescertainly?
或许是因为前面秀芹太过深入人心了吧!那个到死还是倔强、还是愿意为自己男人牺牲的刚烈女子,不是应该才是李云龙这样的男人的绝配吗?Why the wifedied, „sowas quick”hasotherseductressto sneak inhismind?
凭什么老婆死了,就“这么快”就有别的狐狸精钻进了他的脑海?Naturally, inside the book the plotjumpedactuallyverylongtimespan, the readerswereinseveraldayssawthisdevelopment, cannotrealizethatin factXiu Qinwalked for manyyears.
当然,书里边情节其实跳跃了很长的时间跨度,读者们是几天内看到了这个发展,并没有能意识到,实际上秀芹已经走了好多年。
The followingseveralchapters, the manner of readersactuallyquietlyhad the change.
接下来几章,读者们的态度却悄然发生了变化。
Side suchtwolook likecompletelydoes not build the role, because ofeach other, occurredmade the chemical change that the readerdoes not would ratheractuallyhave totitter.
就这么两个看起来完全不搭边的角色,因为彼此,发生了令读者不情愿却又不得不偷笑的化学变化。CameTian Yu of scholararistocratic family, herchivalryfeelings, not onlyhas protectedLi Yunlongcarefully, had the thoroughunderstandingtohim, but can also understand the Li Yunlongpast, the matter that evenkilled the wifewith the devilforLi Yunlongtogether, disputeswith the colleaguediligently.
原本出身书香世家的田雨,她侠义心肠,不但细心地呵护了李云龙,也对他有了深入的了解,还能理解李云龙的过去,甚至为了李云龙将自己老婆跟鬼子一起炸死的事,努力地跟同事辩驳。ButLi Yunlongalsofromcoarseman, turnedhad the coloredfeelingscoarseman, hetried hardto recite poetrywithTian Yu, but alsochanged the nurseto pent up angertooneselffor the hospital, playedto makeTian Yumovenarrow-mindedly......
而李云龙也是从糙汉子,变成了有了花花心肠的糙汉子,他努力跟田雨念诗,还为医院给自己换了护士而生闷气,耍小心眼让田雨调回来......Suchis not coordinated, makespeoplethink that graduallyunexpectedlyactuallytheyare also a match!
这样的不对等,渐渐地,竟然让人觉得其实两人还蛮般配的!Finally, has stood guardto proposetoTian JiatoLi Yunlong......
最终,到了李云龙到田家站岗求婚……Although the readers have are not convincedare shouting, but the majorityaccepted the arrangement of plot.
读者们虽然还有一些在不服气地叫嚷着,但大部分已经接受了故事情节的安排。
It is not right, as ifpulleda littlefar! Returns to the dialog of Yang YiandQiang Zi......
不对,似乎扯得有点远了!回到杨轶和强子的对话……Yang Yiaskedpuzzled: „Yourextremely worriedwhat?”杨轶不解地问:“那你火急火燎什么?”Qiang Zisaidhastily: „«Soldiers Sortie»physical publicationissue! Yourcontractdid not say that wantsyouto participate to discuss the copyright? Nowseveralpublishing houseshave walked, evenalsosomepeoplewantto signyourtwobooks......”强子连忙说道:“《士兵突击》的实体出版问题啊!你的合约不是说要你参与才能谈版权吗?现在有好几个出版社找上门了,甚至还有人想一口气签了你两本书……”There areto take a long-range approach, has not serializedhalfin«Drawing Sword», thensaw the «Drawing Sword»potential.
得嘞,还是有高瞻远瞩的,在《亮剑》还没连载到一半,便看出了《亮剑》的潜力。That sideQiyuenaturallyishopesto strike while the iron is hot, gainsmorebenefits, isYang Yinotin!起阅那边当然是希望趁热打铁,争取更多的利益,可是杨轶一直不在啊!„Iunderstood.”Yang Yihas hesitated, saidthat„youmakethemcomemeto discuss, next week, next weekIbasicallyinshop.”
“我明白了。”杨轶沉吟了一下,说道,“你让他们过来我这边谈,下周吧,下周我基本上都在店里。”„Good, Iarrangeimmediately, the colleagues of Qiyuecopyrightdepartmentalsowill when the time comes accompanyto go.”Qiang Zifastresponded.
“好,我马上安排,起阅版权部门的同事到时候也会陪同前去。”强子飞快地回应。DelightedQiang Ziis away from the screennaturallynot to seethat the Yang Yicorners of the mouthhave also brought back the happy expression, a slightlysomewhatprofoundhappy expression.
欢喜的强子隔着屏幕当然没看到,杨轶嘴角也勾起了笑意,一个略微有些深邃的笑意。
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