FSM :: Volume #17

#1610: Not competent husband

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In a while, on the Capital City city gate opened greatly, has the pursuing troops to pursue, heard several people of sound finally to achieve faintly consistently, progressed to start toward east Golden Serpent Camp to go. 没过多久,上京城城门大开,有追兵追了出来,隐隐听到动静的几人终于达成了一致,策马开始往东边的金蛇营而去。 Song Qingshu most all the way what is worried is the A'Zi status is seen through, but luckily the performing skill of young seductress is also levers, deceives two old Jianghu (rivers and lakes) to run around in circles forcefully, has not gotten suspicious slightly. 一路上宋青书最担心的是阿紫的身份被识破,不过幸好小妖女的演技也是杠杠的,硬生生骗得两个老江湖团团转,丝毫没有起疑心。 Naturally this is also the reason that the father and son have not guarded against slightly, otherwise A'Zi installs the resembles again, always the flaws of some traces. 当然这也是父子二人丝毫没有防备的原因,不然阿紫装得再像,总有些蛛丝马迹的破绽的。 Hurries to toward east, after entering Golden Serpent Camp within the boundaries, Xiao Yuanshan then says goodbye to depart, after all he is old, does not want by the earthliness tired, only wants to study diligently martial arts, Xiao Feng is not good to stop, but hears him to return to Shaolin actually to have a big shock. 一路往东赶去,入了金蛇营境内后,萧远山便告辞离去,毕竟他年纪已大,不想被俗世所累,只想钻研武功,萧峰也不好阻拦,只不过听到他要回少林却是大惊失色。 „Relax, will not be discovered by my martial arts hidden trail.” Xiao Yuanshan is proud said. “放心吧,以我的武功隐藏形迹不会被发现的。”萧远山自负地说道。 A Xiao Feng brow wrinkle: „But that sweeping the floor monk......” 萧峰眉头一皱:“可是那扫地僧……” In the Xiao Yuanshan eye also flashes through one to dread: „This time I will leave the Buddhist scriptures pavilion to be distant, big Shaolin, is not only then the Buddhist scriptures pavilion is stealing the study.” 萧远山眼中也闪过一丝忌惮:“这次我会离藏经阁远远的,偌大一个少林,又不是只有藏经阁才有偷学。” Xiao Feng understands that the father is because was unjust to go to Shaolin by the Central Plain martial arts world people initially to steal martial learn/study, finally was ambushed by various school of experts in Yanmen Pass, causing mother dead. These year of fathers kill the person who the past years participated in a Yanmen Pass service one after another, simultaneously is stealing the study the Shaolin martial arts to retaliate, you are not unfair to me to steal martial learn/study, I steal to you look! 萧峰明白父亲是因为当初被中原武林人士冤枉要去少林盗取武学,结果在雁门关被各派高手伏击,导致母亲身亡。这些年父亲相继杀了当年参与雁门关一役的人,同时偷学少林武功以示报复,你不是冤枉我要盗取武学么,那我就盗取给你们看！ Because of related to mother, Xiao Feng is not good to persuade, can only by Xiao Yuanshan. 因为涉及到母亲,萧峰也不好相劝,只能由着萧远山了。 Sees off Xiao Yuanshan , the group will return to Tai' in two days finally, originally in the Golden Serpent Camp sphere of influence Jinan, Yangzhou even Jining wants to be bigger than Tai'an, but northern Jinan is the Yellow River, again north is Hebei Plain, it may be said that the vast stretch of flat land does not have the danger to defend ; Although Yangzhou is lively, but approached Southern Song Dynasty, once Southern Song Dynasty dispatched troops, Yangzhou then bore the brunt ; Jining is occupying the Surabaya water conservation then, can facilitate transports quickly assembles the resources across Yellow River and Huai River, but west it is an Central Plain, similarly does not have the danger to defend, once Jin Empire east-bound pushes directly into, Jining then direct exposure under its soldier/weapon front. 送别萧远山,又过了两天一行人终于回到了泰安,本来金蛇营势力范围内济南、扬州甚至济宁都比泰安要大一些,不过济南北面就是黄河,再北面就是河北平原,可谓一马平川无险可守;扬州虽然繁华,但是太靠近南宋,南宋一旦出兵,扬州便是首当其冲;济宁占着泗水水利之便,可以方便快捷地运送调集黄河、淮河各地的资源,不过它西面就是中原,同样是无险可守,金国一旦东进长驱直入,济宁便直接暴露在其兵锋之下。 Although now Jin and Qing two countries under the Song Qingshu in secret control, but this relations cannot announce to the public, therefore can only find a place for the supreme headquarters Tai'an here, northern Tai'an has Taiyi Mountains, in the past when Spring and Autumn Period Lu Guo shouldered the powerful Qi Empire several hundred years by this defense line forcefully, therefore the safety coefficient does not need to suspect. 虽然如今金、清两国在宋青书暗中控制下,但这层关系不能对外公布,所以只能将大本营安札在泰安这里,泰安北面有泰沂山脉,当年春秋时鲁国就是凭借这层防线硬生生扛了强大的齐国数百年,所以安全系数不用怀疑。 As the matter stands makes the Golden Serpent Camp internal person feel at ease, eliminates in Jin and Qing two countries some careerists to attack the idea of Golden Serpent Camp- if after all the success rate is enormous, as the emperor is unable to prevent to fill toward the civil and military opinion. 这样一来让金蛇营内部的人安心,同时也打消掉金、清两国内一些野心家突袭金蛇营的想法-毕竟如果成功概率极大,身为皇帝也无法阻止满朝文武的意见。 The Golden Serpent Camp aspect obtains the information, A'Jiu leads the Golden Serpent Camp zodiac leader and new promote core backbone to come out to greet, actually that time encircles after Qing Empire, Golden Serpent Camp zodiac several mountain top leaders betray, in addition this day Song Qingshu, A'Jiu promote the trusted subordinate, the so-called Golden Serpent Camp zodiac has survived in name only. 金蛇营方面早已得到情报,阿九率领金蛇营十二宫首领、新晋核心骨干出来迎接,其实经过清国那次围剿,金蛇营十二宫其中几座山头首领背叛,再加上这段日子宋青书、阿九提拔自己亲信,所谓的金蛇营十二宫早已名存实亡。 Naturally these mountain top leader position still venerate, but other relates the close leader except for Shui Jian, Situ Bolei with Song Qingshu A'Jiu, others are nominal, but they pour have no complaint, now Song Qingshu is rising, leads Golden Serpent Camp heavenshaking, they enjoy has gone far beyond had worked as the chief period initially, initially had not followed Chu Hongliu and the others to betray, demonstrated their big ambition, Song Qingshu has not dismantled the bridge after crossing, instead kindly treats them to satisfy them enough. 当然这些山头首领地位依然尊崇,但除了水鉴、司徒伯雷等少数几个与宋青书阿九关系密切的头领,其他的人早已有名无实,不过他们倒也没什么怨言,如今宋青书如日中天,带领金蛇营名震天下,他们这些人享受到的已经远远超过了当初当山大王时期,当初没有跟着褚红柳等人背叛,显示了他们并没有多大野心,宋青书没有过河拆桥,反而善待他们已经让他们足够满意。 „Pays a visit simultaneous/uniform king!” Takes the lead to kneel down by A'Jiu, the group salute to Song Qingshu in abundance, this is A'Jiu is also intentional, wants gradually to get rid of the Golden Serpent Camp Jianghu (rivers and lakes) aura, after all simultaneous/uniform king is a character king who the Han people emperor seals formally, compared with the title of Golden Serpent King this thick patch of grass chief has the rallying point in the world person heart many. “拜见齐王！”由阿九带头下跪,一行人纷纷向宋青书行礼,这也是阿九有意为之,想逐渐摆脱金蛇营的江湖气息,毕竟齐王是汉人皇帝正儿八经封的一字王,在天下人心中远比金蛇王这个草莽头子的称号有号召力得多。 A while ago Song Qingshu went to after Southern Song Dynasty publicly, A'Jiu then did not have to appear by his status again, after all does not want to present two Song Qingshu to be easy world amazed simultaneously, but this has not affected the routine work of A'Jiu, because of after these days operations, has made the monolithic bloc Golden Serpent Camp thoroughly, in addition the Song Qingshu prestige was getting more and more abundant, she only depended on mistress's status enough to deter the outstanding heroes, does not need to pretend to be Song Qingshu again. 前段时间宋青书公开去南宋过后,阿九便没有再以他的身份出现,毕竟不想同时出现两个宋青书容易让天下人惊诧莫名,不过这并没有影响到阿九的日常工作,因为经过这些日子的经营,早已彻底将金蛇营上上下下弄得铁板一块,再加上宋青书威名越来越盛,她仅凭主母的身份已经足够震慑群雄,不需要再冒充宋青书了。 „Fellow brothers please get up in a big hurry!” Song Qingshu quickly moves forward to meet somebody, now the great undertaking has not become, cannot exhibit the conduct of emperor, puts out a hand to stroke, these people of kneeling down thought immediately a gentle request strength transmits, the whole person cannot help but stood, in abundance panic-stricken incomparable, thought that this skill shocks everybody seriously ; However when is panic-stricken is also gratified, after all the leader is more powerful, they can follow to be better. “各位兄弟快快请起！”宋青书急忙迎上去,现在大业未成,总不能摆出皇帝的做派,伸手一拂,下跪的那些人顿时觉得一股柔和的托力传来,整个人不由自主站了起来,不由纷纷惊骇无比,心想这份功力当真是惊世骇俗;不过惊骇之余却又欣慰起来,毕竟首领越强大,他们才能跟着越好。 After having seen various people in turn, Song Qingshu draws Xiao Feng to introduce: „This is my becoming sworn brothers big brother Xiao Feng, from now on he will live in days in Golden Serpent Camp, everyone is familiar with mutually......” 依次见过诸人之后,宋青书拉过萧峰介绍起来:“这位是我的结义大哥萧峰,今后他会在金蛇营住一段日子,大家相互熟悉一下……” „Originally is south institute Great King Xiao!” “原来是南院萧大王！” „Famous northern Qiao Feng!” “鼎鼎大名的北乔峰啊！” „Beggars’ Sect Master Qiao!” “丐帮的乔帮主！” ...... …… On the scene many are in the martial arts world the person, it may be said that is long hears its name, goes forward to send regards, before Song Qingshu appears, younger generation Xiao Feng should be one of the present age reputation loudest characters. 在场的不少都是武林中人,可谓是久闻其名,纷纷上前问候,在宋青书横空出世之前,年轻一代萧峰应该是当世名声最响的人物之一了。 Drew A'Jiu while this time Song Qingshu one side: „A'Jiu, was laborious this period of time you.” 趁这个时候宋青书将阿九拉到一旁:“阿九,这段时间辛苦你了。” A'Jiu purses the lips to smile: „I daily in mansion where laborious, is you under rushes about on the contrary all over the sky, walks randomly in all influences, not only laborious also dangerous.” 阿九抿嘴微笑:“我天天在府中哪里辛苦,反倒是你满天下奔波,游走于各方势力之间,不仅辛苦还危险。” Hears the words that she is so with good intention, in the Song Qingshu heart is deeply moved, if is not in the glare of the public eye now, perhaps he will unable to bear her hugs in the bosom takes pity on quite. 听到她这般善解人意的话,宋青书心中不禁大为感动,若非如今众目睽睽,他恐怕会忍不住将她抱在怀中好生怜惜一番。 After one chatted, Song Qingshu knew that Xia Qingqing, Zeng Rou and Jiao Wan'er went at the outside business, now the sphere of influence is getting bigger and bigger, many places must the person of most core guard one to be just now good in the past. 经过一番聊天,宋青书得知夏青青、曾柔和焦宛儿都在外地公干去了,如今势力范围越来越大,很多地方都要最核心的人过去镇守一方才行。 „Once Younger Sister Rou, if knows that you must come back, perhaps said that anything will not leave Tai'an.” A'Jiu said after a sigh suddenly. “曾柔妹妹若是知道你要回来,恐怕说什么也不会离开泰安的。”阿九忽然感叹道。 „I am unfair to her.” Song Qingshu is silent, initially married Zeng Rou to mainly have a Situ Bolei school of support, getting married two people will be will gather from now on little leaves many, all year round will unable to see surface several times, really will not calculate a competent husband. In the original works her the existence feeling is very low, does not have to think own this world, she still so...... “我对不起她。”宋青书默然,当初娶曾柔主要是为了得到司徒伯雷一派的支持,成亲过后两人可谓是聚少离多,一年到头也见不到几次面,实在不算个称职的丈夫。原著中她的存在感就很低,没想到自己这个世界,她依然这般…… „But she never regretted,” A'Jiu Youyou (faintly/spookily) said that „she had mentioned with me, that late sees you in the window, knows that you are the man who she is destined...... she only need to hear your news to be able now happy quite a while, therefore you do not need to rebuke oneself.” “可是她从不后悔,”阿九幽幽说道,“她曾经跟我提起过,那一晚在窗边见到你,就知道你是她命中注定的男人……如今她只需要听到你的消息就能高兴半天,所以你也不必太自责。” „She more does not have to ask me instead more to rebuke oneself like this.” Song Qingshu is filled with emotion. “她越是这样无所求我反而越是自责。”宋青书感慨万千。 „You can rebuke oneself,” A'Jiu reveals a faint smile the expression, referred to not far away one selecting the young girl high, „in the future you will perhaps also fill to rebuke oneself to her.” “你自责得过来么,”阿九露出一丝似笑非笑的表情,指了指不远处一个高挑少女,“将来你对她恐怕也会充满自责的。” ---- ---- Many people responded to the monk, requested to receive A'Zhu, because thought that A'Zhu had been bumped by the lead, therefore was the woman of lead, gave Xiao Feng again, felt some green hat anything...... 不少人向和尚反应,要求收了阿朱,因为觉得阿朱被主角碰过了,所以是主角的女人,再送给萧峰,觉得有些绿帽什么的...... I am quite also depressed, Song Qingshu has not liked A'Zhu, A'Zhu does not like Song Qingshu,( what material relation because solely Song looked at her fruit body not to have), therefore she did become the woman of Song? 我也比较郁闷,宋青书从来没喜欢过阿朱,阿朱也不喜欢宋青书,就单单因为宋看了她的果体(并没有发生什么实质关系),所以她就成了宋的女人？ I can understand plot that some reader entire places all receive, but leading ladies of A'Zhu this role in the original works is not even, does not have the appearance of causing the downfall of the nation beautiful woman, in this book her the status also does not have any( does not have maternal home influence that is worth displaying, without master gate was worth display), receiving her is easy, but after receiving ? wait/etc. was female like Zeng Rou, was put aside, what with also has to distinguish in the cold palace? 我能理解一些读者全处全收的情节,不过阿朱这个角色在原著中连女主角都算不上,又没有倾国倾城之貌,本书中她的身份也没有什么值得发挥的(没有娘家势力,没有师门等值得发挥),收她容易,但收进来后呢？就如同曾柔等女一样,被束之高阁,和在冷宫又有什么区别？ Such being the case, might as well helps in the original works she and Xiao Feng this to filling patho lover. 既然如此,还不如成全原著中她和萧峰这对充满悲情的情侣。 Many people complained the Huang Rong example before, A'Zhu here installed anything unable to start. I explained while convenient, Huang Rong and A'Zhu have the remarkable difference, she was more attractive than A'Zhu, she was the original works famous leading lady, the most important thing is, most readers have the Huang Rong plot now......, therefore their plots were entirely different. 很多人吐槽黄蓉例子在前,阿朱这里又装什么下不了手。我顺便解释一下,黄蓉与阿朱有显著的不同,她比阿朱漂亮,她是原著出名的女主角,最重要的是,如今大部分读者都有着黄蓉情节......所以她们的情节就截然不同。 Actually the Huang Rong plot monk somewhat regretted afterward, should write ambiguous that two people are neither friendly nor aloof, to stops is perfect, that feeling like " Best quality goods Male servant » in male lord and Madame desolate, only the monk writes pitifully has not controlled, after all the monk once was also a reader, similarly has thick Huang Rong plot ....... 其实黄蓉的情节和尚事后有些后悔,还是该写两人若即若离的暧昧,点到即止才是完美,就像《极品家丁》里男主与萧夫人那种感觉,只可惜和尚写的时候没有控制住,毕竟和尚曾经也是读者,同样有着很浓的黄蓉情节....... Moreover before the monk, has said that does not plan to receive A'Zhu, but did not remove very small probability plot to surpass my control to develop, for example writes about A'Zhu to disguise as A'Zi to deceive Song Qingshu this plot was writes suddenly temporarily thinks, because in the original works A'Zhu liked changed/easy Rongcheng Xiao Feng, Divine Doctor Xue, white Shijing, Duan Zhengchun deceiving people, finally finally folded oneself...... 另外和尚之前说过,不打算收阿朱,但不排除很小的概率剧情超过了我的控制自行发展,比如写到阿朱假扮成阿紫去骗宋青书这情节就是写的时候忽然临时想到的,因为原著中阿朱就爱易容成萧峰、薛神医、白世镜、段正淳去骗人,结果最后把自己折了进去...... At that time wrote her to disguise as A'Zi to go to the set of lead words, I thought that this conformed to her person to suppose very much, was she has matter that may come out competently. As the matter stands but was profited by the lead again, was the category that surpassed me to estimate from the beginning. 当时写她假扮成阿紫去套主角话,我觉得这很符合她的人设,也是她非常有可能干出来的事情。可是这样一来被主角再次占了点便宜,就是超出我一开始预计的范畴了。 Actually now wants to come should not arrange A'Zhu to look at the light by Song Qingshu the plot, at that time what thought is Song Qingshu to guarantee her does not betray, this is the inditron simultaneous/uniform under last insurance, makes the threat with her and Xiao Feng happiness, but has not thought regarding the reader, supports thinks such green Xiao Feng that does not receive, is inappropriate ; The support receives thought like this she and lead had the connection, should not give Xiao Feng, such will make the lead somewhat green...... 其实现在想来不该安排阿朱被宋青书看光的情节,当时想的是宋青书为了确保她不背叛,这是数管齐下最后一道保险,拿她和萧峰的幸福做威胁,可是没想到对于读者来说,支持不收的则认为这样绿了萧峰,不合适;支持收的则觉得这样她和主角有了瓜葛,就不该让给萧峰,那样会让主角有些绿...... Does not try to keep the favor of both sides seriously, yeah, regretted, apologized to everyone for this plot while convenient. 当真是两面不讨好,哎,后悔,顺便为这个情节向大家道个歉。
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