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#557: Remote of this field of endeavor

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Xue Mu looked up her one eyes, Xiao Qingwu shrank. 薛牧抬头看了她一眼,萧轻芜缩了一下。 „But master very good, Little Xiao thought before lives does not have the meaning, but also has thought might as well give the master to consider as finished, is the master has not wanted. Now thought that lived interestingly...... was considering as finished to marry marries, Little Xiao was so cleverly intelligent attractive lovable, what nights but also feared these seductresses/evil spirits?” “但是师父很好的啊,以前小萧觉得活着没意思,还想过不如就给了师父算了,是师父没要。诶,现在觉得活着有意思了……算了嫁就嫁吧,小萧这么聪明伶俐漂亮可爱,还怕那些什么夜的妖精？” Xue Mu looked at her one eyes, subsequently turned the head to look to fight, two what nights is being fought bravely. 薛牧又看了她一眼,继而转头看了看打架,两个什么夜的正在奋战中。 „Master hung Little Xiao obscenely with a smile on the grape trellis, that fearful lethal weapon......, good pain! The Little Xiao feeling is dying was the same, sent out the pitiful yell of shouting oneself hoarse, continued for a long time for a long time, the tears were about to drain off......” “师父淫笑着把小萧吊在了葡萄架上,那可怕的凶器……啊,好痛！小萧感觉要死了一样,发出了声嘶力竭的惨叫,持续了好久好久,眼泪都快流干了……” Does Little Xiao flow tears Xue Mu not to know, he only knows oneself tears were about to fall, this was what ghost! 小萧流不流眼泪薛牧不知道,他只知道自己的眼泪都快掉下来了,这是什么鬼啊！ „You write others not this! Looks very!” “你写别人的不这样啊！看着挺懂的啊！” „That is, that is studies the master beforehand article...... to be possible I to feel in fact they called very much miserably......” “那是、那是学师父以前的文……可我觉得实际上她们叫得很惨的……” „Good was good, finally these do not have the thing of positive result to erase, above takes the full text endings, leaves behind an open style result, making reader guess after this Little Xiao, can fight the seductress/evil spirit, good......” Xue Mu has a headache very much beckons with the hand: „Goes to go, goes to Yun State City to look for Qingqing, making her help you do the daily paper to serialize.” “行了行了,最后这些没名堂的玩意删掉,就以上一句作为全文结尾,留下一个开放式结局,让读者自己猜这个小萧以后到底能不能斗得过妖精,挺好的……”薛牧很是头疼地摆摆手:“去吧去吧,去云州城找青青,让她帮你搞上日报连载。” Xiao Qingwu great happiness: „I really can the book in circulation!” 萧轻芜大喜:“我真的可以成书啦！” „Ok.” Xue Mu is putting on a serious face saying: „Besides the individual silly places, the overall level is very high, could make the good progress.” “可以。”薛牧板着脸道:“除了个别傻兮兮的地方之外,整体水平很高,说不定能取得不错的成绩。” Xiao Qingwu happily good a ritual: „Many thanks the master taught the graciousness.” 萧轻芜高兴地行了一礼:“多谢师父教导之恩。” „I am the unqualified master, has not taught you.” Xue Mu is unemotional: „Later has the opportunity to teach you again slowly, you listened to them to call to be very long, that not because of pain.” “我是不合格的师父,没把你教好。”薛牧面无表情:“以后有机会再慢慢教你,你听她们叫了很久,那不是因为痛。” „...... Ha haha......” “哈……哈哈哈……” „Do not laugh foolishly.” The Xue Mu hesitation moment, said suddenly: „These days safes, I try to write a story outline, you also consider in detail together......” “别傻笑了。”薛牧沉吟片刻,忽然道:“这几日无事,我试着写一个故事梗概,你也一起参详……” The Xiao Qingwu eye was bright: „Before is the master, fat that said?” 萧轻芜眼睛亮了:“是师父之前说的大部头吗？” „Is...... regarding this book, I do not have the slight confidence, too difficult......, even if writes, does not know that several people can appreciate......” “是……对于这本书,我没有丝毫信心,太难了……即使写出来,也不知几人能欣赏……” „Why does the master want to write?” “那师父为什么要写？” „My article name enough, has the willful qualifications, even if no one looked, did not hinder me to write.” “我的文名已经够了,有任性的资格,就算没有一个人看,也不妨碍我写了。” The Xue Mu article name is not only enough...... present he, even if threw an elementary student thesis to go out, what were still many were the person hounds, in the self- analysis contained any truth. 薛牧的文名岂止是够了……现在的他即使是丢一篇小学生作文出去,也多的是人追捧,自我剖析里面蕴藏了什么什么道理。 Actually in the world has many people to brave „Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses” the name to write an article, what very tragedy is, without publication channel. The newspaper editor is completely Six Gates and Star and Moon Sect person, gave Ming Pao to submit a piece of writing to say like you oneself were Jin Yong, was not funny...... the printing, the printing workshop does not dare to help your blind seal, walked in who unable to endure by Star and Moon Sect. 其实世上有很多人想冒“三好薛生”之名写文章,很悲剧的是,没有发表渠道。报纸编辑全部都是六扇门和星月宗的人,就像你给明报投稿说自己是金庸一样,不是搞笑嘛……自己印书吧,印刷作坊也不敢帮你瞎印,被星月宗找上门来谁都吃不消。 Also causes the Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses work until now only then such several, many fans wait, awaits eagerly. 也就导致三好薛生作品至今还是只有那么几本,很多粉丝翘首以待,望眼欲穿。 The literature of Xiao Qingwu makes a debut, reaches the sky in a single bound simply. The «Yun State Daily» big length has the advertisement, submits a written statement: The Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses quarrying a mountain big disciple and Curing Fairy Maiden Xiao Qingwu literature maiden work, asks respectfully the anticipation. 萧轻芜的文学出道,简直是一步登天。《云州日报》大篇幅打广告,上书:三好薛生开山大弟子、医仙子萧轻芜文学处女作,敬请期待。 This may be serious, the explosive response that the Curing Fairy Maiden of Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses quarrying a mountain disciple and Rivers and Mountains' Outstanding Beauties Register, two reputations add is unequalled, caused a stir in entire Yun State in a flash. The next day newspaper quantity issued rises dramatically more than ten times, was sold out. No matter inside wrote anything, even to the reputation, some countless people are only willing to be all eagerness to see it. 这可不得了,三好薛生开山弟子、江山绝色谱之医仙子,两个名头加起来的爆炸性反应无与伦比,转瞬就轰动了整个云州。以至于次日的报纸发行量暴增十几倍,还是被人抢购一空。不管里面写了什么,就算只冲着名头,都有无数人愿意先睹为快。 Zhuo Qingqing may be maturer than Xiao Qingwu is more discrete, she also has the qualifications to the person who Xue Mu investigates Quebu leaks. With one stroke of the pen, first changed to «Garden Deep» the book title , is easy to have the name of reality association to change not to have the connection entirely, for example „Little Xiao” during the name in Xiao Qingwu wanted to cry but have no tears is changed to „A'Qing” by her, and added a few words „this story to be a sheer fabrication”. 卓青青可比萧轻芜成熟谨慎多了,她也是有资格给薛牧查缺补漏的人。大笔一挥,首先把书名改成了《庭院深深》,又把所有容易让人产生现实联想的名字统统改得毫无关联,比如“小萧”的名字在萧轻芜欲哭无泪之中被她改成了“阿青”,并加了一句话“本故事纯属虚构”。 Such a, because this article not wait/etc. had the person of intense identity related to Xue Qingqiu and Xiahou Di, in addition no one knows that Curing Fairy Maiden once felt oneself „live does not have meaning”, causes the ordinary reader also really not easy the story and reality links, only considers the story that Curing Fairy Maiden fictionalize, borrowed masters and disciples to laugh uproariously. 这么一来,由于此文没有涉及薛清秋和夏侯荻等有强烈身份标识的人,再加上谁也不知道医仙子曾经觉得自己“活着没意思”,导致普通读者还真不容易把故事与现实联系在一起,只当是医仙子自己虚构出来的故事,借了个师徒噱头而已。 This story was fun, unexpectedly takes family residence internal fight and female to quarrel out of jealousy to principal, is this world takes the Jiang Hu legend as main body origination pure running water in story unrest absolutely, the angle is novel. 这故事就好玩了,居然是以家宅内斗、女子争风为主打,绝对是此世以江湖传奇为主体的故事风潮里的一股首创清流,角度新颖绝伦。 Although compares Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses own work, this article pattern is very small, limits in a man surrounding story , some quite Jiang Hu people are not interested. But the angle novel is big killing tool, has been sick the person of killing is many, this exquisite emotion dispute poked the interest of countless person, was the life easy and comfortable stable person, more thought that this article was interesting, the female reader was the resonance is more incomparable , said: Worthily is the work of fairy maiden, understands the woman. 虽然相比于三好薛生自己的作品而言,此文格局很小,就局限在一个男人周围的故事,颇有一些江湖人不感兴趣。但角度新颖就是大杀器,早就看腻了打打杀杀的人还是不少的,这细腻的情感纠葛还是戳到了无数人的兴致,越是生活安逸稳定的人,就越是觉得此文有趣,女性读者更是共鸣无比,纷纷表示:不愧是仙子之作,就是懂女人。 As for very dirty description, was unjustly discredited to be carried by Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses. 至于其中很污的描写,黑锅被三好薛生背走了。 „Curing Fairy Maiden personality desolate Szo, renouncing society and living alone, how possibly is the miss who writes the dirt piece? Was needless saying that this was also her master compels to write.” “医仙子性情萧索,遗世独立,怎么可能会是写污段子的姑娘？不用说这也是她师父逼着写的。” „Yes, these pieces look that is a little ripe, was not Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses the work changed long ago.” “就是,那些段子看着都有点熟,不就是三好薛生早年之作改一改嘛。” „Curing Fairy Maiden is also pitiful, in booth any master......” “医仙子也是可怜,摊上了一个什么师父啊……” „, Also let alone, the story level is so high, the description is exquisite, exciting, this ought to be the Scholar Xue of the Three Fondnesses merit. Actually these tangled up, in this story background should also have, otherwise was much more tasteless.” “咳,也别说,故事水平这么高,描写细腻,扣人心弦,这总该是三好薛生的功劳吧。其实那些缠绵,这种故事背景里也该有,否则无味得多了。” „That but actually is also, the famous teacher outstanding disciple, the story famous expert added the rookie.” “那倒也是,名师高徒,故事名家又添新人了。” Yun State person almost every «Yun State Daily», the streets and lanes are discussing this recent work, and at the extremely quick speed to the peripheral spread, Curing Fairy Maiden Xiao Qingwu opened small angle dwelling story half the sky, but is the reputation broadcasts in Yun State, popular. 云州人几乎人手一份《云州日报》,街头巷尾都在谈这部新作,并且以极快的速度向周边蔓延,医仙子萧轻芜打开了小角度宅院故事半边天,可算是美名播于云州,红得发紫。 But at this time „renouncing society and living alone” Curing Fairy Maiden, deeply is feeling own tiny at this time. 而此时“遗世独立”的医仙子,此时正在深深感受自己的渺小。 In front of Xue Mu, manuscript paper thick one pack, is only the story summary and plot establishment, arranged in order the big tens of thousands characters, but also has not ended in the packing. But each character establishes carefully incomparable, a character verdict, arranged in order a care the entire life story outset result, appearance attire spoken language personality, numerous and disorderly incomparable. 薛牧面前,稿纸厚厚的一叠,光是故事纲要、剧情设置,就足足列了大几万字,还在填充未完。而每个人物设定细致无比,一个人物一首判词,把生平故事起始结局都列了个仔仔细细,连带外貌衣着言语性情,庞杂无比。 But each detail each plot, the preamble foreshadowing later word echoes, the metaphor, the metaphor, various ambushes, the grass snake grey line, the layout thousand li (500 km), is exquisite makes Xiao Qingwu think that this is not a brain of person can the structure result. 而每个细节每个剧情,前文伏笔后文呼应,暗喻,隐喻,各种埋伏,草蛇灰线,布局千里,细腻得让萧轻芜觉得这根本不是一个人的脑子能构架得出来的。 Only was such summary, the value surpasses her article not to know many times. 光是这么个纲要,价值就超过了她那篇文章不知多少倍有余。 Most critically, on this article main body also mostly is the thinking of wealthy and powerful family family affairs, the inner chamber leisures, the visiting a park good commands and men and women, regarding just finished the dwelling to fight the article Xiao Qingwu, touches is unable to speak. 更关键的是,此文主体上也大多是豪族家事、闺阁闲情、游园行令、男女之思,对于刚刚写完宅斗文的萧轻芜,触动更是无法言说。 Moreover Xue Mu in the ponder packing slowly, has not ended...... 而且薛牧还在慢慢的思考填充,还没完…… Xue Mu also the first time is the row of such thin outlines, he also combs to remember taking advantage of this slowly. «Dream of the Red Chamber» is not the achievement that he can complete independently, he can do, only then makes best effort memory return to original state as far as possible, does not leave out a detail. 薛牧也是第一次列这么细的纲,他也是借此来慢慢梳理记忆。《红楼梦》不是他能独立完成的成就,他能做的只有尽最大的努力把记忆尽可能的还原出来,不漏下一处细节。 Actually before he could not accomplish this point, now can recall is so thin, towed luck that breaks through Returning Spirit Stage. The strength of soul solidifies, means that the thought is clear, memory is clear, once thinks puts behind, hidden in the thing of memory deep place, can recall the excavation slowly, reorganizes. 其实以前他办不到这一点,现在能回忆这么细,还是拖了突破归灵期的福。灵魂之力凝固,意味着思维清晰、记忆明朗,曾经自以为忘却的、隐藏在记忆深处的东西,也能慢慢的回忆挖掘,整理出来。 „full paper absurd word, bitter tears. cloud Zuozhe is crazy, who solves taste?” “满纸荒唐言,一把辛酸泪。都云作者痴,谁解其中味？” Xiao Qingwu looks, was crazy. 萧轻芜看着看着,不由痴了。 Zhu Chenyao exercises martial arts to return, looks that master and disciple writes one to look at the investment incomparable appearance, cannot bear say with a smile: „Qingwu raises Yun State now, in the valley many disciples wants to express admires, doesn't go out for a walk? When your master finished you to look again.” 祝辰瑶练功而回,看着师徒俩一个写一个看投入无比的模样,忍不住笑道:“轻芜现在名扬云州,谷中很多弟子想要表达仰慕呢,不出去走走？等你师父写完你再看呗。” Xiao Qingwu turned the head to look at her one eyes, in the eye no focal distance, muttered said: „Chenyao you know that...... I feel look like, the person of practicing martial arts, saw Dao Fusion. But remote of this field of endeavor, this life is also hard finally its eventuality.” 萧轻芜愣愣地转头看了她一眼,眼里没有什么焦距,喃喃地说:“辰瑶你知道吗……我感觉就像是,练武的人,看见了合道。而此道之遥,终此一生也难以得其万一。”
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