„Masteryouawakes.”Near the guest roomwindow, Xiao Qingwutakes pen in handto change the draft, is listening totalking to oneself of Xue Mu, is languid: „Yourthatfishes three days and dries the nets two days, has not practiced the meritexcept fordual cultivation and bubblemedicine, the actual combattempersdoes not have, makingyoupractice successfully the full strengthyou to be victoriousanyone, but alsowantsto fightwith the powerhouse......”
“师父你还是醒醒吧。”客房窗边,萧轻芜提笔正在改稿子,听着薛牧的自语,懒洋洋道:“就你那三天打鱼两天晒网,除了双修和泡药就没怎么练过功的,实战磨炼更是丝毫没有,让你修成强毒你又能打得过谁,还想与强者一战呢……”Xue Muwas slanting the eyeto look at the past: „Did youunderstand? Yourpresentcultivationmight as wellI, understand a hammer.”薛牧斜着眼睛看过去:“你又懂了?你现在修行还不如我,懂个锤子。”„Ionlyknow that is lower than first-levelInot to be victoriousme, where can yougoodtogo?”Xiao Qingwucurls the lip saying: „Ithought that youbadlyare more right than me, at leastourMedicine King Valleypractices martial art is also the required course, Medical DaoandMartial Daocomplements one another. Wherelooks likeyou, considersmyriad, the worryare innumerable, the woman are also manynot to know that hadseveral, but how can also be relievedcultivates?”
“我只知道比我低一级的我都打不过,你能好到哪里去?”萧轻芜撇嘴道:“我觉得你比我更糟才对,起码我们药王谷习武也是必修课,医道与武道相辅相成。哪里像你,思虑万千,顾念无数,女人又多得自己都不知道有几个了,还怎么能安下心来修炼?”„Whosaid that Ido not knowhasseveral?”
“谁说我不知道有几个?”„Do youcount?”
“那你数数?”„Under, firstsaid you are, otherwise the statisticsare inaccurate.”
“等下,先说你算不算,不然统计不准确。”„Does not calculate.”Xiao Qingwuwas unresponsive,lowers the headto write a manuscript: „Wherehassuchmaster, is really......”
“不算。”萧轻芜毫无反应,低头写稿:“哪有这样的师父,真是……”Xue Muhmph hmphtwo: „Icannot be victoriousevensame level, steamrolllow levelabsolutelydoes not have the issue, notlikeyourdyingwastedwelling......”薛牧哼哼两声:“我就算打不过同级,碾压低级的绝对没问题,可不像你个死废宅……”„Whatis the dyingwastedwelling? Do not think that newly creationwords and expressionsIcannot listen tothisamdespise.”Xiao Qingwualsohmph hmph saying: „Saidseemsyouto be ablecasualpromotion, but alsosteamrolllow level......”
“什么叫死废宅啊?不要以为新创个词语我就听不出来这是鄙视。”萧轻芜也哼哼道:“说得好像你能随便升级似的,还碾压低级……”„Why can't Ipromotecasually? I have not met the mountain passthresholdfrompracticing martial artsto the present.”
“我为什么不能随便升级?从练武到现在我就没遇过关隘门槛。”„ThisReturning Spirit Stagecard? Insightful EmptinessPrimordial Yingaveyoudual cultivation, antiquitypoison qigivesyouto absorb, the king of blackflood dragonsoaked the medicinetoyou, cannot break through. Isaid the master, was not the apprenticeto sayyou, practiced martial arts, mustcarefully, steadfastcame, cannotaim too high, thinksdid not have the threshold, oncereallymet the thresholdperhapson the cardfor a lifetime?......”
“这个归灵期卡了吧?洞虚元阴给你双修,上古毒气给你吸取,黑蛟之王给你泡药,还是突破不上去。我说师父,不是做徒弟的说你,练武呢,要一步一个脚印,踏踏实实的来,不能好高骛远,自以为没门槛的一旦真遇上门槛说不定就卡一辈子了,呃?呃呃呃……”Is saying, whileseesXue Muwhole bodyradiancegreatlyhold, the lightgreenglowfrom the bodyweekflood, the aurais very special, not onlyhas the meaning of corrosionmyriad poisonsbitesto nip, andspringjunctionsafe of warmrecoveryis a little temperate, a little inclusiveharmony of universemyriad things, the aurawinds aroundinfinallybehind, changes toverypaleverypaledragon shape.
一边说着,就一边看见薛牧浑身光华大盛,淡淡的绿芒从身周泛起,气息十分特别,既有万毒噬咬的侵蚀之意,又有点春暖复苏的交泰温和,又有点乾坤万物的包容和谐,最终气息缭绕于身后,化作很淡很淡的龙形。
The spiritmortal formturns over to the hole, the human attributesto finalize.
灵魄归窍,五蕴定型。Inapprenticeverbosecomplaining, Xue Mudoes not have the thresholdto break throughReturning Spirit Stage.
在徒弟絮絮叨叨的吐槽中,薛牧毫无门槛地突破归灵期。Xiao Qingwupartlyis opening the smallmouth, could not sayexcept for„”anything, sideXue Mu, Ye Guyingalsostaredin a big way the eye, was very shocking.萧轻芜半张着小嘴,除了“呃呃呃”什么都说不出来,薛牧身边,叶孤影也瞪大了眼睛,很是震惊。
The Soul Entangling Realmfourstages, Illuminating HeartandRaising Soul, are the first half that soulwarmsupportexercises, butReturning SpiritandInner Transformation, is the solidshapestage of strength of trueinvestmentoperation and applicationsoul. FromRaising SoultoReturning Spiritis a bigthreshold, does not know that the deactivationmanypeoplewere outstanding, oncetoReturning Spirit Stage, inmajorsect is also the elite, is the topsectdisciplecan the conventionalstandard that leaves the mountainto walk.萦魂境界四阶段,照心、养魄,是灵魂温养锻炼的前半段,而归灵、化蕴,则是灵魂之力真正投入战斗使用的固形阶段。从养魄到归灵是个大门槛,不知道卡死了多少人杰,一旦到了归灵期,在各大宗门里也已经是精英了,是顶级宗门弟子可以出山行走的常规标准。Yue Xiaochanjustentered the stagethatlittle while, whennational capitalHundred Flower Gardenpunches the Righteous Daojuniorsfat, isReturning Spirit Stage. The Xue Qingqiu14years old justmade a debutwalksJiang Hu the time , are just Returning Spirit Stage.岳小婵刚刚出场那会儿,在京师百花苑胖揍正道子弟时,就是归灵期。薛清秋十四岁刚刚出道行走江湖的时候,也只不过是归灵期。Luo Qianxuewait/etc.followedXue Qingqiuto enterpersonal guards of Capitalinitially, isReturning Spirit Stage.罗千雪等当初跟随薛清秋入京的亲卫们,也是归灵期。Thisstage can also withownstrengthflightbeginning, althoughfliesquiterottenly, compared withverticalleapsto grazelittle, canfloat the spatialdanceto be spatial, butthatreallycanfly...... to flyto mean that broke through the standard of mortal, was supreme......
这个阶段也是可以用自己的力量飞行的起点,虽然飞得比较烂,也就是比纵跃飞掠好一点点而已,能够浮空舞空,可那真的是能飞了……能飞就意味着突破了凡人的标准,是超人了……Althoughsaid that othersachievedthisrealm13 or 14-year-old, Xue Muthis year28, nosaid the head. But since hepractices martial art, is more than oneyear......
虽然说人家十三四岁达到这个境界,薛牧今年都二十八了,没什么说头。但他习武至今,不过一年多啊……Xiao Qingwualmostsheds bitter tears, otherspractice martial artsfor a lifetime, how manydangers and difficultiesreceivedforwhat? Wherehas your, byreads the dossieron the chair, while and femaleapprenticechattedto talk nonsense, pulledis pullingwas breaking through?萧轻芜差点痛哭流涕,别人练武一辈子,受了多少艰难险阻是为了什么啊?哪有你这样,一边靠在椅子上看卷宗,一边和女徒弟聊天扯淡,扯着扯着就突破了的啊?Xue Muopens the eye, does not have the self-satisfiedcolor that Xiao Qingwuimagines, insteadgets angry: „Was day, why green?”薛牧睁开眼睛,却没有萧轻芜想象的得意之色,反而怒道:“日,为什么又是绿的?”Xiao Qingwu: „......”萧轻芜:“……”„Don't Iwantthiscolor to change the color? QingwuyourMedicine King Valleyhas the meansis right?”
“我不要这个颜色啊能不能改颜色啊?轻芜你们药王谷有办法的对不对?”„Do youcare aboutthisdoing? Isn't the greenvery welllooks?”
“你在意这个干嘛?绿色不是挺好看?”„Ido not want!”
“我不要啊!”Xiao Qingwuis incapable ofcomplaining: „Greenis onlypoisonousbasicallydraftsobviously, whoaskedyouto cultivate the poison? A more poisonousthingis in any case more gorgeous, gives up affectation the poisonto the pinnacle, so long asyoucontinueto practice is not green.”萧轻芜无力吐槽:“绿只是毒的基本显征,谁叫你修毒?反正越毒的东西就越艳丽,毒到极致就返璞归真,你只要继续练下去就不绿了。”„Haven't youdeceivedme? Yourthisabdomenblackspeechcannotbelievenow.”
“你没骗我?你这腹黑说话现在不能信。”
The Xiao Qingwuair/Qiflingson the draft manuscript on tablehisface: „Draftimproved, asking the masterto check.”萧轻芜气得一把将桌上的手稿甩到他脸上:“稿子改好了,请师父把关。”„......”Xue Mucaught the maidapprenticeto bring the lightdelicate fragrancedraft manuscript, the gatheringtip of the nosefrom the faceto smelllightly, inXiao Qingwuhoweverin the redcomplexion, byread the manuscripton the chaireasely.
“哦哦……”薛牧从脸上抓下女徒弟带着淡淡幽香的手稿,凑到鼻端轻嗅了一下,在萧轻芜咻然通红的脸色里,悠然靠在椅子上看稿。Regarding the Jiang Huperson'slong-awaitedReturning Spirit Stagebreakthrough, is just the master and disciplecreates a disturbance here twosmallspray, might as welllooked that the Xiao Qingwudraftis important.
对于江湖人梦寐以求的归灵期突破,在这儿只不过是师徒俩打闹两句的小小浪花,还不如看萧轻芜的稿子重要。ThereforeXue Muthatwants...... the apprenticesnot to believewith the heart that the powerhousefights.
所以说薛牧那点想和强者争锋的心……连徒弟都不信。Xiao Qingwuthisis the originaldwellingfights the article, selects materialfromXue Mustory, is based onseveralwomenregardingcircumstances of man, the younger sisterimagines the struggling for favorplot of displayin additionfreely, looks atXue Muto thinkoneselfput on, was looking atearlynetwritingNvpin......萧轻芜这一篇是个原创宅斗文,取材于薛牧身边的见闻,以好几个女人围绕着一个男人的情事为基础,加上妹子自由想象发挥的争宠剧情,看得薛牧以为自己穿回去了,正在看早期的网文女频……Fortunatelyis this directionfemalefrequency, is not the counterharem, is notMary, does not filltowardcivil and militaryfalls in love withme...... Xue Muto have tears streaming down the face, thisapprenticehad been taughtbyoneselfcrookedly, don'tcrookedheavengood......
还好是这个方向的女频,不是逆后宫,不是玛丽苏,不是满朝文武爱上我啊……薛牧泪流满面,这徒弟已经被自己教歪了,可别歪上天就好……„This, writes...... Xue Mucarefullyto lookreallywell”,quitecommended: „ParticularlythisheartXue'er'spsychology, arrogantsect leaderfalls into the difficult problem, the forcedcommitteebodyrival, forresponsibility? Ismovesortrades? Is the loveorbeing familiar with?...... Describedprofoundly, quiteinteresting...... the malelord must ooze pusbadly, letting the personwantsto kill, was the namevegetable/dish, whatbloodsexual harasser, the wolf of blood-color? Tootwo, butis not the majorproblem, the overallprogressis very big.”
“这个,写得真不错啊……”薛牧仔细看完,颇为赞许:“尤其是这个心雪儿的心理,高傲掌门陷入难题,被迫委身敌手,为了责任还是自己?是动心还是交易?是爱情还是习惯?啧啧……描绘得入木三分,相当有趣……男主也坏得流脓,让人想打死,就是名字菜了点,什么血色狼啊,血色之狼?太中二,不过不是大问题,总体进步很大。”Xiao Qingwucompensatesto say with a smile: „Is the masterteacheswell.”萧轻芜赔笑道:“都是师父教得好。”„Is you are diligent...... Xue Muto nod the headintelligently”said: „Nowthissexual intercoursedescribesalsosees the skillmore and more, came outwith the mentality of strugglingcharmingly, making one onerespect...... the issueto haveslightlyhardly, this malemainmannertone was too frivolous, did not look likeone to makeso manyoutstandingfemalesvery muchsubmit to the encirclement the fierce and ambitious...... actuallyyouto refer to the masterto be similar......”
“是你自己聪明好学……”薛牧颔首道:“现在这个房事描写也越来越见功力,娇羞与挣扎的心态都出来了,让人微微一硬以示尊敬……不过问题还是有啊,这个男主的神态语气太轻佻了,不是很像一个能让那么多优秀女子臣服环绕的枭雄……其实你参照师父就差不多了……”„Master can youa littleself-knowledge?”Xiao Qingwuis mutteringlow voice, suddenlystartsto retrocedequietly.
“师父你能有点自知之明吗?”萧轻芜小声咕哝着,忽然开始悄悄后退。Xue Muis not earnest, staredheroneeyes, looks down the manuscript: „Also, thisextremely brightbeautifulpeerlessunusualrefinedfemaleapprenticewhat's the matter, writesofficial's capallfemalelords, snatching the playis incomparable, isn't the malelord? Doesn't receiveto writeso manyto do? The differencecomments...... wait/etc., do theseplotwhyIa littleregard the feeling?”薛牧倒没太较真,瞪了她一眼,又低头看稿:“还有,这个冰雪聪明美丽绝伦超凡脱俗的女徒弟怎么回事啊,写得冠盖所有女主,抢戏无比,偏偏又不是男主的?不收写那么多干嘛?差评……等等,这些剧情为什么我都有点即视感?”Xiao Qingwucontinuesto retreatcautiously.萧轻芜小心翼翼地继续撤退。Xue Muturned the home page, in the corneris raising a title: «Lustful Master and the Teacher's Wives». Hewas startledwas startled, turnedto look at the malemainname...... to thinkwas the wolf of blood-color, nowthinks so, wasLecher Xue!薛牧翻回了首页,角落里提着个标题:《色师父与师娘们》。他怔了一怔,又翻回去看了看男主的名字……本来以为是血色之狼,如今这么看,是薛色狼啊!OnlookingYe Guyinghas smiledto make noisesilentlyfinally, Xue Musuppressed the liver coloredshamelessly, Xiao Qingwuhid in the cornerthoroughly, heldto squatto guard.
一直默默旁观的叶孤影终于笑出了声,薛牧老脸憋成了猪肝色,萧轻芜彻底躲到了角落里,抱头蹲防。Xue Muaerobicandfunny, looked that the younger sistervery moe moeappearancereallycannot scold, onlyobtains enlightenment: „Thatdeadappearance, don't Ipunchyouto be inadequate? Withchanges, the femaleapprentice who thissnatches the play...... pū...... toyoutwochoices, entersmasterhomeeitherhonestly, eitherdeletedthisrole.”薛牧又好气又好笑,看妹子萌萌哒的模样实在骂不出来,只得道:“别那副死样子,我还会揍你不成?拿回去改改,这个抢戏的女徒弟……噗……给你两个选择,要么老老实实进师父家门,要么删了这个角色。”Xiao Qingwucompensatesto say with a smile: „Deletes, Idelete.”萧轻芜赔笑道:“删,我删。”Xue Muhas not gotten the answer of wish, stares saying: „The behaviortone of thismasterchanges, formasterusuallybeforeyoulight......, is not frivolousbeforewhom! In any caseis notthatappearance! Whenchanged a manlikely, whenpublishedto print. Urges to go faster”薛牧没得到想要的答案,瞪眼道:“还有这个师父的行为语气都改改,为师平时只是在你面前轻……呃,在谁面前都不轻佻!反正不是那副模样!什么时候改得像个男人了,什么时候出版刊印去。去去去”Xiao Qingwutreads the smallbrokenstepto come, received the draft manuscriptto flyto runsame: „Mythischanges......”萧轻芜蹬着小碎步过来,一把接过手稿飞一样地跑了:“我这就去改……”Thinksall the way the Xue Muexpression, Xiao Qingwucould not bearsmile, toofunthismaster...... hesaidreasonable, oneselfusuallysawhissexually harassingtype, actuallyhismosttimenotthis, at leastoutwardnotthis. Oneselftoo the dwelling, the seenman were too but fewin the past, howshouldwritelikely a man?
一路上想到薛牧刚才的表情,萧轻芜自己都忍不住笑,太好玩了这个师父……不过他说的有道理啊,自己平时都见他的调戏样,其实他多数时候不这样,起码对外不这样。可是自己往常太宅,见的男人太少了,该怎么写才像个男人啊?Xiao Qingwuscratches the headworriedly, the front surfaceseesYinyeoneto run, sheshoutedsubconsciously: „senior sistersenior sister! Wait.”萧轻芜苦恼地挠挠头,迎面看见夤夜呼啦一下跑过去,她下意识喊:“师姐师姐!等等。”Yinye„”stops, turns head saying: „Smalljunior sister! Has the matter?”夤夜“唰”地刹住,扭头道:“小师妹!有事吗?”„Mastermakesmerevise a draft, does senior sisterhelpmeconsider in detail?”
“师父让我改稿,师姐帮我参详参详?”Yinyewill consider in detail a ghostmanuscript, naturallyfrontwas not willingair/Qiweaklyin„smalljunior sister”, threw out the chest saying: „Does not have the issue! Whatcontentcanchangeto saytosenior sister?”夤夜会参详个鬼的稿,当然在“小师妹”面前不愿弱了气去,挺胸道:“没问题!要改什么内容跟师姐说说?”Xiao QingwudirectDao Seeking/asks: „Fierce did a veryman, what kind oftoneusuallyspeak to beis quite vivid?”萧轻芜直接问道:“一个很厉害的男人,平时说话该是怎样的语气比较形象啊?”„Ha!”Yinyeis afraid, stillbraces oneselfhands on hips saying: „Isn't thissimple? The menspoke, was not...... is not......”
“哈哈哈!”夤夜心虚无比,依然硬着头皮叉腰道:“这还不简单?男子汉说话嘛,不就是……不就是……”„What?”
“什么啊?”Yinyeclenches teeth: „yingchirp.”夤夜咬牙:“嘤嘤嘤。”
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