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#547: The Xiao Qingwu dwelling fights the article


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Master you awakes.” Near the guest room window, Xiao Qingwu takes pen in hand to change the draft, is listening to talking to oneself of Xue Mu, is languid: Your that fishes three days and dries the nets two days, has not practiced the merit except for dual cultivation and bubble medicine, the actual combat tempers does not have, making you practice successfully the full strength you to be victorious anyone, but also wants to fight with the powerhouse......” “师父你还是醒醒吧。”客房窗边,萧轻芜提笔正在改稿子,听着薛牧的自语,懒洋洋道:“就你那三天打鱼两天晒网,除了双修和泡药就没怎么练过功的,实战磨炼更是丝毫没有,让你修成强毒你又能打得过谁,还想与强者一战呢……” Xue Mu was slanting the eye to look at the past: „Did you understand? Your present cultivation might as well I, understand a hammer.” 薛牧斜着眼睛看过去:“你又懂了?你现在修行还不如我,懂个锤子。” I only know that is lower than first-level I not to be victorious me, where can you good to go?” Xiao Qingwu curls the lip saying: I thought that you badly are more right than me, at least our Medicine King Valley practices martial art is also the required course, Medical Dao and Martial Dao complements one another. Where looks like you, considers myriad, the worry are innumerable, the woman are also many not to know that had several, but how can also be relieved cultivates?” “我只知道比我低一级的我都打不过,你能好到哪里去?”萧轻芜撇嘴道:“我觉得你比我更糟才对,起码我们药王谷习武也是必修课,医道武道相辅相成。哪里像你,思虑万千,顾念无数,女人又多得自己都不知道有几个了,还怎么能安下心来修炼?” Who said that I do not know has several?” “谁说我不知道有几个?” „Do you count?” “那你数数?” Under, first said you are, otherwise the statistics are inaccurate.” “等下,先说你算不算,不然统计不准确。” Does not calculate.” Xiao Qingwu was unresponsive, lowers the head to write a manuscript: Where has such master, is really......” “不算。”萧轻芜毫无反应,低头写稿:“哪有这样的师父,真是……” Xue Mu hmph hmph two: I cannot be victorious even same level, steamroll low level absolutely does not have the issue, not like your dying waste dwelling......” 薛牧哼哼两声:“我就算打不过同级,碾压低级的绝对没问题,可不像你个死废宅……” What is the dying waste dwelling? Do not think that newly creation words and expressions I cannot listen to this am despise.” Xiao Qingwu also hmph hmph saying: Said seems you to be able casual promotion, but also steamroll low level......” “什么叫死废宅啊?不要以为新创个词语我就听不出来这是鄙视。”萧轻芜也哼哼道:“说得好像你能随便升级似的,还碾压低级……” Why can't I promote casually? I have not met the mountain pass threshold from practicing martial arts to the present.” “我为什么不能随便升级?从练武到现在我就没遇过关隘门槛。” This Returning Spirit Stage card? Insightful Emptiness Primordial Yin gave you dual cultivation, antiquity poison qi gives you to absorb, the king of black flood dragon soaked the medicine to you, cannot break through. I said the master, was not the apprentice to say you, practiced martial arts, must carefully, steadfast came, cannot aim too high, thinks did not have the threshold, once really met the threshold perhaps on the card for a lifetime ?......” “这个归灵期卡了吧?洞虚元阴给你双修,上古毒气给你吸取,黑蛟之王给你泡药,还是突破不上去。我说师父,不是做徒弟的说你,练武呢,要一步一个脚印,踏踏实实的来,不能好高骛远,自以为没门槛的一旦真遇上门槛说不定就卡一辈子了,呃?呃呃呃……” Is saying, while sees Xue Mu whole body radiance greatly hold, the light green glow from the body week flood, the aura is very special, not only has the meaning of corrosion myriad poisons bites to nip, and spring junction safe of warm recovery is a little temperate, a little inclusive harmony of universe myriad things, the aura winds around in finally behind, changes to very pale very pale dragon shape. 一边说着,就一边看见薛牧浑身光华大盛,淡淡的绿芒从身周泛起,气息十分特别,既有万毒噬咬的侵蚀之意,又有点春暖复苏的交泰温和,又有点乾坤万物的包容和谐,最终气息缭绕于身后,化作很淡很淡的龙形 The spirit mortal form turns over to the hole, the human attributes to finalize. 灵魄归窍,五蕴定型。 In apprentice verbose complaining, Xue Mu does not have the threshold to break through Returning Spirit Stage. 在徒弟絮絮叨叨的吐槽中,薛牧毫无门槛地突破归灵期 Xiao Qingwu partly is opening the small mouth, could not say except for „” anything, side Xue Mu, Ye Guying also stared in a big way the eye, was very shocking. 萧轻芜半张着小嘴,除了“呃呃呃”什么都说不出来,薛牧身边,叶孤影也瞪大了眼睛,很是震惊。 The Soul Entangling Realm four stages, Illuminating Heart and Raising Soul, are the first half that soul warm support exercises, but Returning Spirit and Inner Transformation, is the solid shape stage of strength of true investment operation and application soul. From Raising Soul to Returning Spirit is a big threshold, does not know that the deactivation many people were outstanding, once to Returning Spirit Stage, in major sect is also the elite, is the top sect disciple can the conventional standard that leaves the mountain to walk. 萦魂境界四阶段,照心养魄,是灵魂温养锻炼的前半段,而归灵化蕴,则是灵魂之力真正投入战斗使用的固形阶段。从养魄归灵是个大门槛,不知道卡死了多少人杰,一旦到了归灵期,在各大宗门里也已经是精英了,是顶级宗门弟子可以出山行走的常规标准。 Yue Xiaochan just entered the stage that little while, when national capital Hundred Flower Garden punches the Righteous Dao juniors fat, is Returning Spirit Stage. The Xue Qingqiu 14 years old just made a debut walks Jiang Hu the time , are just Returning Spirit Stage. 岳小婵刚刚出场那会儿,在京师百花苑胖揍正道子弟时,就是归灵期薛清秋十四岁刚刚出道行走江湖的时候,也只不过是归灵期 Luo Qianxue wait/etc. followed Xue Qingqiu to enter personal guards of Capital initially, is Returning Spirit Stage. 罗千雪等当初跟随薛清秋入京的亲卫们,也是归灵期 This stage can also with own strength flight beginning, although flies quite rottenly, compared with vertical leaps to graze little, can float the spatial dance to be spatial, but that really can fly...... to fly to mean that broke through the standard of mortal, was supreme...... 这个阶段也是可以用自己的力量飞行的起点,虽然飞得比较烂,也就是比纵跃飞掠好一点点而已,能够浮空舞空,可那真的是能飞了……能飞就意味着突破了凡人的标准,是超人了…… Although said that others achieved this realm 13 or 14-year-old, Xue Mu this year 28, no said the head. But since he practices martial art, is more than one year...... 虽然说人家十三四岁达到这个境界,薛牧今年都二十八了,没什么说头。但他习武至今,不过一年多啊…… Xiao Qingwu almost sheds bitter tears, others practice martial arts for a lifetime, how many dangers and difficulties received for what? Where has your, by reads the dossier on the chair, while and female apprentice chatted to talk nonsense, pulled is pulling was breaking through? 萧轻芜差点痛哭流涕,别人练武一辈子,受了多少艰难险阻是为了什么啊?哪有你这样,一边靠在椅子上看卷宗,一边和女徒弟聊天扯淡,扯着扯着就突破了的啊? Xue Mu opens the eye, does not have the self-satisfied color that Xiao Qingwu imagines, instead gets angry: „Was day, why green?” 薛牧睁开眼睛,却没有萧轻芜想象的得意之色,反而怒道:“日,为什么又是绿的?” Xiao Qingwu: „......” 萧轻芜:“……” „Don't I want this color to change the color? Qingwu your Medicine King Valley has the means is right?” “我不要这个颜色啊能不能改颜色啊?轻芜你们药王谷有办法的对不对?” „Do you care about this doing? Isn't the green very well looks?” “你在意这个干嘛?绿色不是挺好看?” I do not want!” “我不要啊!” Xiao Qingwu is incapable of complaining: Green is only poisonous basically drafts obviously, who asked you to cultivate the poison? A more poisonous thing is in any case more gorgeous, gives up affectation the poison to the pinnacle, so long as you continue to practice is not green.” 萧轻芜无力吐槽:“绿只是毒的基本显征,谁叫你修毒?反正越毒的东西就越艳丽,毒到极致就返璞归真,你只要继续练下去就不绿了。” „Haven't you deceived me? Your this abdomen black speech cannot believe now.” “你没骗我?你这腹黑说话现在不能信。” The Xiao Qingwu air/Qi flings on the draft manuscript on table his face: Draft improved, asking the master to check.” 萧轻芜气得一把将桌上的手稿甩到他脸上:“稿子改好了,请师父把关。” „......” Xue Mu caught the maid apprentice to bring the light delicate fragrance draft manuscript, the gathering tip of the nose from the face to smell lightly, in Xiao Qingwu however in the red complexion, by read the manuscript on the chair easely. “哦哦……”薛牧从脸上抓下女徒弟带着淡淡幽香的手稿,凑到鼻端轻嗅了一下,在萧轻芜咻然通红的脸色里,悠然靠在椅子上看稿。 Regarding the Jiang Hu person's long-awaited Returning Spirit Stage breakthrough, is just the master and disciple creates a disturbance here two small spray, might as well looked that the Xiao Qingwu draft is important. 对于江湖人梦寐以求的归灵期突破,在这儿只不过是师徒俩打闹两句的小小浪花,还不如看萧轻芜的稿子重要。 Therefore Xue Mu that wants...... the apprentices not to believe with the heart that the powerhouse fights. 所以说薛牧那点想和强者争锋的心……连徒弟都不信。 Xiao Qingwu this is the original dwelling fights the article, selects material from Xue Mu story, is based on several women regarding circumstances of man, the younger sister imagines the struggling for favor plot of display in addition freely, looks at Xue Mu to think oneself put on, was looking at early net writing Nvpin...... 萧轻芜这一篇是个原创宅斗文,取材于薛牧身边的见闻,以好几个女人围绕着一个男人的情事为基础,加上妹子自由想象发挥的争宠剧情,看得薛牧以为自己穿回去了,正在看早期的网文女频…… Fortunately is this direction female frequency, is not the counter harem, is not Mary, does not fill toward civil and military falls in love with me...... Xue Mu to have tears streaming down the face, this apprentice had been taught by oneself crookedly, don't crooked heaven good...... 还好是这个方向的女频,不是逆后宫,不是玛丽苏,不是满朝文武爱上我啊……薛牧泪流满面,这徒弟已经被自己教歪了,可别歪上天就好…… This, writes...... Xue Mu carefully to look really well, quite commended: Particularly this heart Xue'er's psychology, arrogant sect leader falls into the difficult problem, the forced committee body rival, for responsibility? Is moves or trades? Is the love or being familiar with?...... Described profoundly, quite interesting...... the male lord must ooze pus badly, letting the person wants to kill, was the name vegetable/dish, what blood sexual harasser, the wolf of blood-color? Too two, but is not the major problem, the overall progress is very big.” “这个,写得真不错啊……”薛牧仔细看完,颇为赞许:“尤其是这个心雪儿的心理,高傲掌门陷入难题,被迫委身敌手,为了责任还是自己?是动心还是交易?是爱情还是习惯?啧啧……描绘得入木三分,相当有趣……男主也坏得流脓,让人想打死,就是名字菜了点,什么血色狼啊,血色之狼?太中二,不过不是大问题,总体进步很大。” Xiao Qingwu compensates to say with a smile: Is the master teaches well.” 萧轻芜赔笑道:“都是师父教得好。” Is you are diligent...... Xue Mu to nod the head intelligently said: Now this sexual intercourse describes also sees the skill more and more, came out with the mentality of struggling charmingly, making one one respect...... the issue to have slightly hardly, this male main manner tone was too frivolous, did not look like one to make so many outstanding females very much submit to the encirclement the fierce and ambitious...... actually you to refer to the master to be similar......” “是你自己聪明好学……”薛牧颔首道:“现在这个房事描写也越来越见功力,娇羞与挣扎的心态都出来了,让人微微一硬以示尊敬……不过问题还是有啊,这个男主的神态语气太轻佻了,不是很像一个能让那么多优秀女子臣服环绕的枭雄……其实你参照师父就差不多了……” Master can you a little self-knowledge?” Xiao Qingwu is muttering low voice, suddenly starts to retrocede quietly. “师父你能有点自知之明吗?”萧轻芜小声咕哝着,忽然开始悄悄后退。 Xue Mu is not earnest, stared her one eyes, looks down the manuscript: Also, this extremely bright beautiful peerless unusual refined female apprentice what's the matter, writes official's cap all female lords, snatching the play is incomparable, isn't the male lord? Doesn't receive to write so many to do? The difference comments...... wait/etc., do these plot why I a little regard the feeling?” 薛牧倒没太较真,瞪了她一眼,又低头看稿:“还有,这个冰雪聪明美丽绝伦超凡脱俗的女徒弟怎么回事啊,写得冠盖所有女主,抢戏无比,偏偏又不是男主的?不收写那么多干嘛?差评……等等,这些剧情为什么我都有点即视感?” Xiao Qingwu continues to retreat cautiously. 萧轻芜小心翼翼地继续撤退。 Xue Mu turned the home page, in the corner is raising a title: «Lustful Master and the Teacher's Wives». He was startled was startled, turned to look at the male main name...... to think was the wolf of blood-color, now thinks so, was Lecher Xue! 薛牧翻回了首页,角落里提着个标题:《色师父与师娘们》。他怔了一怔,又翻回去看了看男主的名字……本来以为是血色之狼,如今这么看,是薛色狼啊! Onlooking Ye Guying has smiled to make noise silently finally, Xue Mu suppressed the liver colored shamelessly, Xiao Qingwu hid in the corner thoroughly, held to squat to guard. 一直默默旁观的叶孤影终于笑出了声,薛牧老脸憋成了猪肝色,萧轻芜彻底躲到了角落里,抱头蹲防。 Xue Mu aerobic and funny, looked that the younger sister very moe moe appearance really cannot scold, only obtains enlightenment: That dead appearance, don't I punch you to be inadequate? With changes, the female apprentice who this snatches the play...... ...... to you two choices, enters master home either honestly, either deleted this role.” 薛牧又好气又好笑,看妹子萌萌哒的模样实在骂不出来,只得道:“别那副死样子,我还会揍你不成?拿回去改改,这个抢戏的女徒弟……噗……给你两个选择,要么老老实实进师父家门,要么删了这个角色。” Xiao Qingwu compensates to say with a smile: Deletes, I delete.” 萧轻芜赔笑道:“删,我删。” Xue Mu has not gotten the answer of wish, stares saying: „The behavior tone of this master changes, for master usually before you light......, is not frivolous before whom! In any case is not that appearance! When changed a man likely, when published to print. Urges to go faster 薛牧没得到想要的答案,瞪眼道:“还有这个师父的行为语气都改改,为师平时只是在你面前轻……呃,在谁面前都不轻佻!反正不是那副模样!什么时候改得像个男人了,什么时候出版刊印去。去去去” Xiao Qingwu treads the small broken step to come, received the draft manuscript to fly to run same: My this changes......” 萧轻芜蹬着小碎步过来,一把接过手稿飞一样地跑了:“我这就去改……” Thinks all the way the Xue Mu expression, Xiao Qingwu could not bear smile, too fun this master...... he said reasonable, oneself usually saw his sexually harassing type, actually his most time not this, at least outward not this. Oneself too the dwelling, the seen man were too but few in the past, how should write likely a man? 一路上想到薛牧刚才的表情,萧轻芜自己都忍不住笑,太好玩了这个师父……不过他说的有道理啊,自己平时都见他的调戏样,其实他多数时候不这样,起码对外不这样。可是自己往常太宅,见的男人太少了,该怎么写才像个男人啊? Xiao Qingwu scratches the head worriedly, the front surface sees Yinye one to run, she shouted subconsciously: senior sister senior sister! Wait.” 萧轻芜苦恼地挠挠头,迎面看见夤夜呼啦一下跑过去,她下意识喊:“师姐师姐!等等。” Yinye „” stops, turns head saying: Small junior sister! Has the matter?” 夤夜“唰”地刹住,扭头道:“小师妹!有事吗?” Master makes me revise a draft, does senior sister help me consider in detail?” “师父让我改稿,师姐帮我参详参详?” Yinye will consider in detail a ghost manuscript, naturally front was not willing air/Qi weakly in small junior sister, threw out the chest saying: Does not have the issue! What content can change to say to senior sister?” 夤夜会参详个鬼的稿,当然在“小师妹”面前不愿弱了气去,挺胸道:“没问题!要改什么内容跟师姐说说?” Xiao Qingwu direct Dao Seeking/asks: Fierce did a very man, what kind of tone usually speak to be is quite vivid?” 萧轻芜直接问道:“一个很厉害的男人,平时说话该是怎样的语气比较形象啊?” Ha!” Yinye is afraid, still braces oneself hands on hips saying: „Isn't this simple? The men spoke, was not...... is not......” “哈哈哈!”夤夜心虚无比,依然硬着头皮叉腰道:“这还不简单?男子汉说话嘛,不就是……不就是……” What?” “什么啊?” Yinye clenches teeth: ying chirp.” 夤夜咬牙:“嘤嘤嘤。”
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