„Qingwu pays respects to the master.” The Xiao Qingwu chest front is hanging Yinye, helpless very said/tunnel: „Mail-armor and helmet in the body, the inconvenient entire ritual, invited the master no wonder.” “轻芜给师父请安。”萧轻芜胸前挂着夤夜,很是无奈地道:“甲胄在身,不便全礼,请师父莫怪。” Xue Mu has almost not smiled to spurt: „Qingwu you now are even more interesting, can consider to write the piece.” 薛牧差点没笑喷:“轻芜你现在越发有趣了,可以考虑写段子。” „Just because of facing master.” The Xiao Qingwu secretly thought gave you bellyband, but also there is anything to be good to cower, is not so open facing others her. “只不过是因为面对师父而已。”萧轻芜暗道连肚兜都给你了,还有什么好瑟瑟缩缩的,面对别人她才没这么开朗呢。 Xue Mu Dao Seeking/asks: „Is hands over the schoolwork?” 薛牧问道:“是来交功课？” „Yes, gave Ji Qingyuan to treat very early in the morning conventional, this asked the master to critically punctuate the schoolwork.” Xiao Qingwu endured for quite a while, finally carried in Yinye that her chest front rubbed endlessly exasperatedly, fished out one volume of drafts, said carefully: „Asked the master to direct......” “是的,一早去给姬青原常规治疗了一下,这就来找师父评点功课了。”萧轻芜忍了半天,终于忍无可忍地把在她胸前蹭个没完的夤夜拎了下来,摸出一卷稿子,小心道:“请师父指点……” Xue Mu startled: „So many!” 薛牧惊了:“这么多！” „Ten and 18 appearances, I wrote 18.” “十、十八般模样嘛,我写了十八场。” „......” Xue Mu such as looks at celestial/heaven and man: „You do not know that one can suspend 18 appearances?” “……”薛牧如看天人:“难道你不知道一场就可以摆十八种模样了吗？” Xiao Qingwu was ignorant: „?” 萧轻芜懵了:“啊？” Xue Mu expects too much taught: „Said again what 18 appearance 36 martial art combining various techniques, that was only a saying, so long as the appearance wrote generally loses face/shows off, that was the essence is. Wants you to write 18 types to do?” 薛牧恨铁不成钢地教导:“再说什么十八般模样三十六散手的,那只是一说,只要一般模样写得出彩,那就是精华所在。要你写十八种干嘛？” Xiao Qingwu listens to teach dejectedly, secretly record schoolwork. 萧轻芜垂头丧气地听训,暗自记录功课。 Xue Mu is supporting Liu Wanxi to read the draft together, on the mouth, although expects too much, actually in heart happy, looks at this frail Curing Fairy Maiden own writing by hand erotica, was interesting. 薛牧正在拥着刘婉兮一起看稿子,嘴上虽然恨铁不成钢,其实心中乐得不行,看这个娇怯怯的医仙子亲手写的小黄文,有趣极了。 The writing is good, is the scene structure writes not well, without feeling that few pens experience personally, slightly inflexible stiff. This does not have the means is to practice...... 文字还挺好的,就是场景构造写得不好,没有寥寥几笔身临其境的感觉,略死板僵硬。这个没办法,是要练的…… , The description about that matter is very interesting, is flooding the serious Medical Dao terminology massively, without the character expression has not said a word the exchange, writes the posture movement mechanically, even also appraised any posture is quite easy to live to be pregnant. 然后呢,关于那事儿的描写特别有趣,大量充斥着一本正经的医道术语,没有人物表情没有言语交流,刻板地写姿势运动,甚至还评价了一下什么姿势比较容易生孕。 Does not have the to rub point...... 毫无撸点…… Looks, in the Xue Mu brain flashes through a word suddenly: 看着看着,薛牧脑子里忽然就闪过一个词: Physical hygiene teaching material! 生理卫生教材！ „Did Wanxi, look had the response?” “婉兮,看了有反应么？” „Not and not......” “没、没有……” „Looks at the reader to be unresponsive, this is the writing of failure.” Xue Mu sighed, folded to hand over straight: „You are retaining, later looked again, can refer to the progress.” “看得读者毫无反应,这就是失败的文字。”薛牧叹了口气,还是端端正正地叠好交回去:“你自己保留着,以后重看,能够参照长进。” This saying also had the meaning of real teaching, Xiao Qingwu was blushing to receive earnestly, small sound said: „Also asked the master to direct.” 这话又有了真教学的意思,萧轻芜通红着脸认真收好,小声道:“还请师父指点。” „This kind of scene is also good, the regular scene, the story is first interesting. For example this scene has the grape trellis, this is the unusual interest point, you do not display, how said under the grape trellis to move, to waste?” “这类场景也好,正规场景也罢,故事首先要有趣。比如说这个场景有葡萄架,这就是与众不同的趣味点,你不发挥出来,就说在葡萄架下怎么活动,岂不是浪费？” If Xiao Qingwu has become aware nods, for: „How this unifies the use, disciple cannot think.” 萧轻芜若有所悟地点点头,又为难道:“这个怎么结合利用啊,徒儿想不出来啊。” Yinye access road/simply said: „Father writes one to look that to junior sister, do not feel embarrassed my junior sister.” 夤夜便道:“爸爸写一篇给师妹看嘛,不要一直为难我师妹。” „Your this little thing.” Xue Mu does not know whether to laugh or cry, thinks a little hand is also itchy, for a long time has not written erotica, this is the classical scene, should be in Water Margin! “你这小东西。”薛牧哭笑不得,想了想也有点手痒,好久没写过小黄文了,这还是经典场景,应该作为水浒里番的嘛！ Goes ahead, Xue Mu embraces Liu Wanxi to spread out a rolled paper to start directly to write the model essay. 说干就干,薛牧直接怀抱刘婉兮摊开一卷纸开始写范文。 The Liu Wanxi memorial to the emperor does not look, that side Xiao Qingwu Yinye Ye Guying collected, extends the head to look that „one generation of literary grandmaster” write the article. 刘婉兮奏折都不看了,那边萧轻芜夤夜连带叶孤影都凑了过来,一个个伸着脑袋看“一代文宗”写文。 Has not looked at both eyes, Yinye first, covered the eye to run, in a while, Ye Guying also turned around silently. Only remains Xiao Qingwu to suppress to blush, is ashamed and resentful is admires looks, wants to walk wants to study. 没看两眼,夤夜第一个受不住,捂着眼睛跑了,没过多久,叶孤影也默默转身走了。只剩萧轻芜憋红着脸,又是羞愤又是佩服地看着,想走又想学。 Bosom Liu Wanxi had become beach mud crisply. 怀里的刘婉兮早就酥成了一滩泥。 «Pan Jinlian Hangs upside down Grape trellis», this classical scene can immortal...... trivial different world person where experience? 《潘金莲倒挂葡萄架》,这种经典场景是可以不朽的……区区异界人哪里见识过？ Any becoming known leg opens, is hanging on the two sides grape trellis, but must describe carefully incomparable, such as Gold Dragon searches the claw nakedly, Hungkou...... imagines that base scene, Yinye is repulsed here directly. Ye Guying was repulsed in Ximen Qing takes the plum to throw the pot, three rounds of all bull's eyes...... Liu Wanxi weak in put the plum......, when dug out to eat the face of Xiao Qingwu to turn into the red cloud. 什么大白腿儿张开,悬挂在两边葡萄架上,还要描写得细致无比,如金龙探爪,红沟赤露……想象一下那种靡靡的场面,夤夜就在这儿直接败退的。叶孤影败退于西门庆取了李子投壶,三发俱中靶心……刘婉兮瘫软于把李子放进去……在抠出来吃掉的时候萧轻芜的脸已经变成了火烧云。 Is doing that matter as for it rear suspension, is really thinking is full of beauty and significance, compared with the Xiao Qingwu physical hygiene teaching material does not know where wise. 至于之后悬着做那事,果然想着就是妙趣横生,比萧轻芜的生理卫生教材不知高明到哪里去了。 Xue Mu throws the pen, waves carefree drippingly: „With makes the model essay, estimates carefully.” 薛牧掷笔,畅快淋漓地一挥手:“拿回去做范文,细细揣摩。” The air is very peaceful, crossed several breaths, Xiao Qingwu cowered to receive the draft, had the thorn same not to dare with above to look again, forced in the small medicine pouch rapidly. 空气很是安静,足足过了好几息,萧轻芜才瑟瑟缩缩地接过稿子,跟上面有刺一样不敢再看,迅速塞进了小药囊。 Xue Mu comfortably by chair: „Qingwu your small book bag very moe......” 薛牧舒坦地靠在椅子上:“轻芜你这个小书包挺萌的啊……” „Thanks the master to direct, Qingwu went back to estimate.” Xiao Qingwu has listened to not clear Xue Mu to say anything, reluctantly good a ritual, cannot choose the exact way because of flurry springs through the door. Was almost cancelled by the threshold to the gate near but actually, the head knocked not to shriek with pain with enough time, holds the head eye tearful to run. “谢谢师父指点,轻芜回去揣摩了。”萧轻芜已经听不清楚薛牧在说啥了,勉强行了一礼,慌不择路地夺门而逃。到了门边差点被门槛勾倒,脑袋磕了一下都没来得及喊痛,抱着脑袋眼泪汪汪地跑了。 „...... Made an effort excessively fiercely?” “呃……是不是用力过猛了点？” Liu Wanxi eats smiles: „You receive the person to be the apprentice, teaches a real capability, like this sexually harassed extremely......” 刘婉兮吃吃地笑:“你收人做徒弟,也教点真功夫啊,这样调戏太过了吧……” „Speaking truth model essay is they requests......., although this specially fierce......” Xue Mu scratches the head: „Next time will teach her to select other, is not quite truly good.” “讲道理这范文是她们自己要求的啊。咳咳……虽然这篇特别厉害……”薛牧挠挠头:“下次还是教她点别的吧,确实不太好。” The Liu Wanxi coquettish look such as the silk muttered: „Such fierce scene, have you played with whom?” 刘婉兮媚眼如丝地喃喃道:“这么厉害的场面,你跟谁这么玩过？” „No, is not I, do not talk nonsense......” “没有啊,不是我,别胡说啊……” Liu Wanxi is swaying from side to side gently, the cherry lips have stroked his cheek, the sound such as the mosquito: „Thinks that...... and Wanxi does play?” 刘婉兮轻轻扭动着,樱唇拂过他的面颊,声如蚊呐:“想不想……和婉兮这么玩？” Xue Mu palpitates with excitement, coughs to conceal said: „Ok, this is not good. Pan Jinlian plays......” 薛牧怦然心动,干咳掩饰道:“算了,这个不好。潘金莲才那么玩……” „When please drink half remnant tea, I am not Pan Jinlian......” Liu Wanxi smile, had not said again, but said: „Good, I must handle a memorial to the emperor, waits to deal with Ji Qingyuan. We...... have a lot of time for that.” “请你饮半盏残茶之时,我可不就是潘金莲么……”刘婉兮抿嘴一笑,没再多说,只是道:“好啦,我还要处理一下奏折,等会应付姬青原。我们……来日方长。” ............ ………… Liu Wanxi must make the proper business, but not only to deal with Ji Qingyuan, how is also studying itself to handle the government affairs, this is the important matter, does not play the noisy time. 刘婉兮要做正事,可不仅仅是为了应付姬青原,同时也在学习自己怎么处理政务,这是大事,可不是玩闹的时候。 Although Xue Mu by her clear instructions was made the heart is itchy, has not gone to continue to disturb her, set out to go out carried Yinye, greeted Ye Guying, ran in the Xiao Qingwu palace the alone institute, planned taught her properly some made up. 薛牧虽然被她的明示弄得心痒痒,也没去继续打扰她,起身出门拎了夤夜,招呼了叶孤影,跑去萧轻芜的宫内独院,打算教她一些正经的弥补一下。 Has the palace maid to guide all the way , is burdened by children, really regarded the back garden inner palace. 一路上有宫女带路,又是拖儿带女的,真把个内宫当成了后花园。 „Father is really obscene.” “爸爸真下流。” „alliance master is the anomaly.” “盟主是变态。” This size two younger sisters talks over the redundant words all the way repeatedly, all incarnation Xianglinsao talked endlessly, without the sentences of other fresh ideas, it seems like really does not know how to describe. 这是一路上大小俩妹子反复念叨重复的话语,全都化身祥林嫂喋喋不休,又没有其他新意的语句,看来也是实在不知道怎么形容。 Xue Mu lowers the head by spurting does not say a word, seemed like that grape trellis to violate the popular anger excluding Liu Wanxi, the honest point was spurted good that one do not revolt against, teaches others properly, this vivid good and evil can recall little...... 薛牧低着脑袋挨喷不做声,看起来那篇葡萄架是犯了除刘婉兮之外的众怒了,还是老实点被喷一顿别反抗的好,去教人家一点正经的,这形象好歹能挽回一点点…… Xiao Qingwu alone institute residence there's a long story behind this, this was dwelling of past Xiahou Di in palace. Secluded and quiet and beautiful, in the institute several clumps of plum blossoms embellish, the environment suits the Xiao Qingwu taste extremely. Also some palace maids look after the personal habits, if according to her habit, if do not go is the Ji Qingyuan treatment, can the nest be for a lifetime motionless in inside. 萧轻芜的独院居所大有来历,这是当年夏侯荻在宫中的住处。僻静、清幽,院中几丛梅花点缀,环境极合萧轻芜的口味。又有宫女照料饮食起居,若是按照她的习性,如果不是要去为姬青原治疗的话,可以一辈子都窝在里面不动的。 The Xue Mu visit, on the Xiao Qingwu face the flushed has not shed. She cannot see Ye Guying, sees Xue Mu to bring Yinye, has not frightened actually closes, but salutes weakly: „Master......” 薛牧来访,萧轻芜脸上红潮还未褪。她看不见叶孤影,见薛牧带着夤夜,倒是没吓得关门,只是弱弱地行礼:“师父……” „, The model essay was I am inconsiderate, makes an effort excessively fiercely, apologized to you.” “咳,刚才的范文是我考虑不周,用力过猛了点,向你道歉。” Xiao Qingwu gawked staring, instead shakes the head saying: „Master article was very good, making me learn many things.” 萧轻芜愣了愣,反而摇头道:“师父此文很好,让我学到了不少东西。” Xue Mu is stunned: „What learned?” 薛牧愕然:“学到了什么？” „Scene and movement, the language and manner, various aspects link, can be vivid, lifelike, rather than mechanical wants to make an explanation the heart. As for these obscene representations, what Qingwu study is the say/way of issue document, how to describe the sexual intercourse with how to describe martial Shi, was actually common.” “场面和动作,语言和神态,各方面结合在一起,才能生动起来,活灵活现,而不是刻板的把心中所想做个解释就罢。至于那些淫靡不过表象,轻芜学的是行文之道,如何描写房事与如何描写武事,其实是共通的吧。” Xue Mu visits her, he knows, the talent has shown the talent, is in the world does not have his Xue Mu, Xiao Qingwu also to bloom sooner or later the radiant ray. 薛牧怔怔地看着她,他知道,天才已经展露头角,便是世上没他薛牧,萧轻芜早晚也会绽放出璀璨的光芒。 He deeply inspires, sincere say/way: „Previous time spoke the novel three essential factors, then we today structure and foreshadowing......” 他深深吸了口气,正色道:“上次讲了小说三要素,那么我们今天来讲结构和伏笔……” As the entertainment company manager, passes through beforehand Xue Mu also often to make some internal training teaching, is a guest performer the teacher work he is not strange, but he attended class in two potential surfaces never has such as today is so earnest. 作为娱乐公司主管,穿越之前薛牧也经常做一些内部培训讲课,客串老师的活儿他并不陌生,但他在两个位面上课都从来没有如今天这么认真过。