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#415: So masters and disciples

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Xue Mu accepts the disciple, actually is also an important matter. 薛牧收徒,其实也是一件大事。 Since " Journey to the West » bang passes on the world, there is top dao lineage of Faultless Temple this grade of rank, for own goal helps him promote, Xue Mu had been regarded as establish a sect one generation of literary grandmaster by many people at that time. According to „sets up say/way”, did not say the literature saying that at least is also the first ancestor of say/way of writer of fiction, supported many people. Still the world has innumerable as well as writes the writer who the daily paper serializes by the storytelling story-telling script, regards as Xue Mu clears the way ancestral master. 自从《西游记》轰传天下,又有无咎寺这等级别的顶级道统为了自己的目的帮他鼓吹,薛牧那时候就已经被很多人视为开宗立派的一代文宗了。按“立道”来看,不说文学道,至少也是小说家之道的鼻祖,养活了很多人。至今天下有无数靠说书话本以及写日报连载的文人,把薛牧视为开道祖师。 Regarding the present age negligible track that although the say/way of novel does not enter the mainstream, but no one can deny that this truly is a say/way, and sees with own eyes strikes root in the hearts of the people more and more. 虽然小说之道对于当世只是不入主流的微末小道,但谁都不能否认这确实是一种道,并且眼见越来越深入人心。 Xue Mu is short mainly does not have the argument of system to be the base, as well as has not accepted the disciple to proselytize officially, must therefore say that establish a sect also said no on. But at present takes to receive disciple step finally, then opened official beginning that opens the sect, henceforth the say/way of novel has one to be able the acknowledged legitimate source and course, even he did not present argument can reorganize the words and deeds by the apprentice, spread the later generation his „say/way”. 薛牧所欠缺的主要是没有系统的立论为基,以及没有正式收徒传道,所以非要说开宗立派还说不上。但眼下终于迈出了收徒这一步,便是开启了开宗的正式起点,从此小说之道算是有了一个能够被人承认的正统源流,即使他不立论都可以由徒弟整理言行,将他的“道”流传后世。 This regardless of regarding the historic importance of the whole world, is regarding the Xue Mu individual, is very important nodes. 这无论对于整个世界的历史意义,还是对于薛牧个人,都是非常重要的节点。 What a pity Xue Mu do not have such big on consciousness from the start, the brain transfers is sexually harasses the female apprentice to compare the pleasure...... 可惜薛牧自己压根没有这么高大上的意识,满脑子转的不过是调戏女徒弟比较有乐趣而已…… „That, Qingwu......” Xue Mu helps up her very much gently, the thought explored for quite a while in the ring, smilingly fishes out a bead chain: „Has not brought any appropriate doing gift on first meeting for the master, this ordinary decorations make to accept as a memento.” “那个,轻芜啊……”薛牧很是慈祥地把她扶起,意念在戒指里探索了半天,笑眯眯地摸出一条珠链:“为师没带什么合适的做见面礼,这普通饰物做个留念吧。” This is a strange bead chain, compared with general term of chain length, actually not falling decoration, big and full bead substring to become string, the pearly luster is gentle, and seduces, does not know where should wear. 这是一个奇怪的珠链,比普通项链长了很多,却又没有坠饰,大而饱满的珠子串成串,珠光柔和且诱惑,都不知道应该是戴在哪儿的。 What Xiao Qingwu does not recognize this is, secretly thought have no research to the accessory, can stem from the hand of Star and Moon Sect manager definitely is the quite high-end decorations that the seductively attractive girls use? She is somewhat resisting embarrassed: „Is Qingwu must be right to the ritual of acknowledging as teacher, how can make the master go to the expense?” 萧轻芜不认得这是什么,暗道自己对饰品没什么研究,能出自星月宗总管之手的肯定是妖女们所用的比较高端的饰物吧？她有些不好意思地推拒着:“是轻芜要给拜师之礼才对,怎能让师父破费？” „Ritual is mutual, receives is receiving.” Xue Mu rashly bead chain stopper in her hands, said: „Acknowledging as teacher ritual words...... the common thing I may be unable to have a liking, so long as on behalf of apprentice sincere thing.” “礼是相互的嘛,收着收着。”薛牧不容分说地把珠链塞在她手里,又道:“拜师礼的话……一般东西我可看不上哦,只要最代表徒弟诚心的东西。” Xiao Qingwu thinks, said slow: „Qingwu refines Heaven Prying Jade Spirit Marrow......” 萧轻芜想了想,呐呐道:“轻芜炼制一份窥天玉灵髓……” Ye Guying palpitates with excitement, almost said that is good...... actually to listen to Xue Mu to put on a serious face to me saying: „Wants that external object what to use? I want sincerely.” 叶孤影怦然心动,差点就说给我好不好……却听薛牧板着脸道:“要那外物何用？我只要诚心。” Xiao Qingwu asked carefully: „How to express Qingwu to be sincere?” 萧轻芜小心地问:“怎么表达轻芜诚心？” „Naturally is the intimate thing...... you also knows that I pursue not high......” “当然是贴心之物啦……你也知道我追求不高……” Xiao Qingwu understood the meaning of this sex maniac finally, passes is blushing to speak haltingly saying: „That......” 萧轻芜总算是懂了这色鬼的意思,通红着脸嗫嚅道:“那个……” Xue Mu sighed: „Really the heart is dishonest......” 薛牧叹了口气:“果然心不诚啊……” „Cannot!” Xiao Qingwu is nipping the lower lip, having a look in the room to have a screen, her half step hid, with a sound of xi xi su su, passed the moment, Xiao Qingwu took a pink small bellyband to come, both hands offered, the head hung to the place quickly comes up: „Master......” “不会的不会的！”萧轻芜咬着下唇,看看屋里有个屏风,她小步躲了进去,随着一阵窸窸窣窣的声音,过了片刻,萧轻芜拿了一件粉色小肚兜过来,双手奉上,脑袋都快垂到地上去了:“师父……” Xue Mu received the female apprentice also to bring the small bellyband of body temperature, the body to transmit with a smile fragrant lightly, the probably light plum is equally fragrant. 薛牧笑吟吟地接过女徒弟还带着体温的小肚兜,体香淡淡传来,像是轻梅一样芬芳。 Xiao Qingwu blushes the blood, Ye Guying sheds bitter tears. Heaven Prying Jade Spirit Marrow, can the helping other Insightful Emptiness divine object, even still has to Insightful Emptiness very much stabilizes the realm effectiveness consolidated, asking everywhere the world is difficult to ask! Your you, you changed a bellyband unexpectedly! The old ladies give you 10,000, do you give me the calcedony to be good? 萧轻芜脸红似血,叶孤影痛哭流涕。窥天玉灵髓,能助人洞虚的神物,即使对洞虚者也很有巩固稳定境界的效用,问遍天下都难求！你你你,你居然换了个肚兜！老娘给你一万件,你给我玉髓好不好？ This little while Ye Guying also thought that seemed like has seen that type of bead chain, that was the waist chain, naturally cannot say that was what immoral thing, but the female will not use generally, often was the seductress is revealing the small waist, surrounded with the bead chain serves as contrast, will increase the enchanting beautiful color. Ye Guying attempted to think a Xiao Qingwu this shy introverted appearance, the slender waist light reveal, the waist chain is actually sending out the beautiful and bewitching ray, that contrast visual impact strength truly very that anything...... this Xue Mu really understood the appreciation of beautiful very much...... 这会儿叶孤影也想起来了,似乎是见过那种珠链,那是腰链吧,当然也不能说是什么淫邪之物,不过一般女子是不会用的,往往是妖女露着小蛮腰,以珠链环绕衬托,会更增妖娆丽色。叶孤影尝试想了一下萧轻芜这羞怯怯的内向样子,却细腰轻露,腰链散发着妖冶的光芒,那种反差性的视觉冲击力确实很那啥……这薛牧果然很懂得美的欣赏啊…… But you give female apprentice type of gift on first meeting, receives that acknowledging as teacher ritual...... 可你给女徒弟这种见面礼,收那种拜师礼…… Like this outside receives the disciple ceremony to pass , the say/way of what novel also collapsed, is this was the Joyous Union say/way good! 这样的收徒仪式传到外面去,什么小说之道也坍塌完了,这是合欢道好不好！ „Qingwu, now you were my quarrying a mountain big disciple.” “轻芜啊,现在起你是我的开山大弟子了。” „Yes, Master.” Xiao Qingwu returned to normal reluctantly the mood, asked for instructions very much respectful and prudent: „This gate whether has the sect rule, asking the master to show.” “是,师父。”萧轻芜勉强平复了心情,很恭谨地请示:“本门是否有门规,请师父示下。” „Sect rule does not have, obedient on line.” Xue Mu smilingly takes in the bellyband the ring, said: „Do we on the first class, which you know 18 appearances today are 18?” “门规没有的,听话就行了。”薛牧笑眯眯地把肚兜收进戒指里,又道:“我们今天来上第一课吧,你知道十八般模样是哪十八般吗？” Xiao Qingwu really could not bear: „Master, that is the sex manual, is not the say/way of issue document......” 萧轻芜实在是忍不住了:“师父,那是房中术,不是行文之道啊……” I have the favorable impression to be willing you sexually harass to deliver you bellyband anything to you is not mattered, but you don't with me, when the fool flickers, I really want to study the thing...... 我对你有好感愿意被你调戏一下送你肚兜什么的都无所谓,可你别拿我当傻子忽悠啊,我是真的想学东西的啊…… „......” Xue Mu coughs two, sincere say/way: „You did not ask that before what is the person supposes? Person supposing, the character setting of story. For example you write a hero female, what appearance should she be daily? Writes a seductress, what appearance should she be? Besides the normal appearance, the hero female and seductress on the conjugal bed the meeting is willing to make you exhibit what appearance, respective different. This is the link that the character establishes.” “咳咳……”薛牧干咳两声,正色道:“你之前不是问什么是人设吗？人设者,故事的人物设定是也。譬如你写一位侠女,她日常该是什么模样？写一位妖女,她又该是什么模样？除了正常模样,侠女与妖女床笫之间又会愿意让你摆出什么模样,各自不同。这就是人物设定的环节嘛。” Knows obviously makes false analogies or strained interpretations forcefully forces, but Xiao Qingwu removed the quibble to listen to the valuable thing, said earnestly: „So that's how it is, before writing story, must complete the setting of the persona and character, in the story writing, the table of character now needs to conform to the character in setting......” 明明知道是强行附会生拉硬扯,可萧轻芜还是排除歪理听进了有价值的东西,认真道:“原来如此,在写故事之前,要做好人物形象和性格的设定,在故事写作中,人物的表现需符合设定中的性格……” Xue Mu was startled being startled, this apprentice has the perception very much, no wonder young Medical Dao studied very much strongly...... 薛牧怔了怔,这个徒弟很有悟性啊,难怪年纪轻轻医道就学得很强了…… He also received the thoughts of sexually harassing the shy young girl, replied earnestly: „Good. In the character setting, can be the fixed personality pattern, can be the growth potential, with experience change. You begin studies practice for the first time, when is primarily the short article, the strengthening ponders over the fixed personalities of 1-2 characters, do not aim too high.” 他也收起了调戏羞怯少女的心思,认真回答:“不错。人物设定中,可以是固定性格模式,也可以是成长性,随着经历变化。你初学乍练,当以短篇为主,强化琢磨1-2人物的固定性格,不要好高骛远。” This type of thing, the modern people thought that spoke thoughtlessly comes averagely not wonderful. But ancient China of literary style heyday, must starts even to Southern Dynasty «Literary Mind and Carving of Dragons» to the system elaboration of literary theory, how many years results that developed? Moreover that is not the novel research monograph. This just started to try to find out that not to mention literary Martial Dao world, this truly is this world alone say/way. 这种东西,现代人觉得随口即来平平无奇。可即使是文风极盛的古中国,对文学理论的系统论述都要到了南朝的《文心雕龙》开始,那是发展了多少年的结果？而且那也不是小说研究专著。更别提这个刚开始摸索文学的武道世界了,这确实是此世独一份的道。 Xiao Qingwu wrote one pile of waste manuscripts, a little comprehended fuzzily, was enlightened by such a saying simply, is delighted beyond measure respects to salute: „Thanks the master.” 萧轻芜自己写了一堆废稿,本就有点模糊领悟,被这么一说简直醍醐灌顶,喜不自胜地尊敬行礼:“谢谢师父。” „Character is soul of story, but the skeleton and flesh of story are......” Xue Mu told slowly primary novel theory, Xiao Qingwu took the written records to record earnestly, at the same time took the note in secret also had Ye Guying. “人物是故事的灵魂,而故事的骨架和血肉是……”薛牧慢慢讲述初级的小说理论,萧轻芜取了纸笔认真记录,与此同时暗中做记录的还有一个叶孤影。 The Traceless Dao disciple, basically no one does not attach great importance to the storytelling now, most is the interest is strong and interest ordinary difference, Ye Guying situated, without the Ying Yi that interest, that but also attaches great importance to very much, will therefore sit there Xue Mu personally and other drafts. Never expected that this time follows can also obtain the systematic elaboration accidentally/surprisingly, this is also thing as if one had found a treasure to her. 无痕道门下,现在基本上没有人对说书不重视的,最多就是兴趣浓烈和兴趣普通的差异,叶孤影介于之间,没有影翼那么浓的兴致,但也是很重视的那一层,所以才会亲自坐薛牧那儿等稿子。没想到此番跟随还能意外得到系统性的论述,这对她也属于如获至宝的东西。 Suddenly after even Heaven Prying Jade Spirit Marrow trades bellyband the brain of tommyrot throwing . 一时间连窥天玉灵髓换肚兜的荒唐事都抛之脑后了。 First teaching, Xue Mu has not said too, speaks the novel three essential factors simply, the access road/simply said: „This, although the track, has considerable. Really must carefully study, inside way is not inferior in your Martial Dao many, actually I during the exploration, cannot completely peep. Today first speaks a sketchiness, later I will also reorganize 12 carefully, slowly teaches you.” 第一次讲课,薛牧也没有说太多,简单地讲了讲小说三要素,便道:“此虽小道,亦有可观者。真要仔细研究,里面的门道也不逊色于你们的武道多少,其实我自己也在探索之中,没能尽窥。今日先讲个粗略,以后我也会细细整理一二,慢慢教你。” „Yes.” “是。” Two yes also transmit, salutes Xiao Qingwu to look at shadow amazed, for a while was ignorant. 两声“是”同时传来,行礼中的萧轻芜惊诧地看着身边的影子,一时懵了。 Also really has the person...... 还真有人啊…… That...... that delivers the matter of bellyband, wasn't seen? Male female? 那……那送肚兜的事儿,不是被看见了？男的女的啊？ Xiao Qingwu is pulling out the nose, concentrates to choke speechless. 萧轻芜抽着鼻子,无语凝噎。 „Said?” The gate was shoved open, Yinye jolted to run, stood hands on hips laughs in front of Xiao Qingwu: „In a big hurry, called senior sister! Ha haha......” “讲完了啊？”门被推开,夤夜屁颠颠地跑了进来,站在萧轻芜面前叉腰大笑:“快快,叫师姐！哈哈哈……” Xue Mu knocked her: „What ghost senior sister are you?” 薛牧敲了她一下:“你是什么鬼师姐？” „I am father's daughter, father's apprentice should not call me senior sister?” Yinye is happy: „I wanted junior sister for a long time, did not have the opportunity, waited till finally oh......” “我是爸爸的女儿,爸爸的徒弟不是应该叫我师姐的吗？”夤夜非常开心:“我想要一个师妹好久了,一直没机会,总算是等到了啊哈哈哈……” Xiao Qingwu blinked the eye to look at her quite a while, could not bear pinch her handsome, supple sound said: „Un, small junior sister hello/you good.” 萧轻芜眨巴着眼睛看了她半天,忍不住捏捏她的小圆脸,柔声道:“嗯,小师妹你好。” Yinye exploded: „I have senior sister, moreover that person very bad, bullies me specially! I take junior sister! I must bully the person!” 夤夜炸了:“我已经有师姐了,而且那个人非常非常的坏,专门欺负我！我要一个师妹！我也要欺负人！” Xue Mu carried her collar to raise: „Makes you contact with somebody, do you run to do?” 薛牧拎着她的衣领提了起来:“让你去联系某人,你跑回来干嘛？” Yinye brandishes the hands and feet to struggle: „He has come! In outside......” 夤夜挥舞着手脚挣扎:“他已经来了啊！就在外面……” „That has not hurried to make one to come in! Making senior sister is more important than the proper business?” The Xue Mu air/Qi does not hit one: „Decided, you are small junior sister!” “那还不赶紧叫人进来！做师姐比正事还重要吗？”薛牧气不打一处来:“决定了,你就是小师妹！” „Did not want......” Yinye to droop the hands and feet to be motionless: „Father I made a mistake, calls the buttocks to be good you, I must make senior sister......” “不要啊……”夤夜耷拉着手脚不动了:“爸爸我错了,给你打屁股好不好,我要做师姐……”
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