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#168: White hair demoness

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Actually Xue Mu felt oneself in matter really somewhat meaning of vertically and horizontally/able to move unhindered doing, naturally this vertically and horizontally/able to move unhindered is the strategic maneuvering of his world, is the say/way of diplomacy, are little significance with Unhindered Dao of this world, he will make the commerce, but the essence is not a merchant. 其实薛牧觉得自己在做的事真有几分纵横之意,当然这个纵横是他那世界的合纵连横,也就是外交之道,和这世界的纵横道没多大关系,他会做商务,但本质不是商人。 Manifestation of strategic maneuvering is actually very clear, for example and negotiations of Unhindered Dao are completed, he went to Wind and Waves Building. 合纵连横的体现倒是很清晰,比如和纵横道的谈判完成,他又去了风波楼。 Unlike the Unhindered Dao function, a Ying Yi such great reputation side overlord outside, such person sits in the authority that on the judge stage can represent this martial arts contest, in addition Xue Qingqiu, who will this grade of specification do the Ling State small range martial arts contest congress also not to feel qualified? 与纵横道作用不同,影翼这样盛名在外的一方霸主,这样的人坐在评委台上都能代表这个比武的权威性,再加上薛清秋,这等规格搞个灵州的小范围比武大会还有谁会觉得不够格？ Raises while convenient, these days came, the firing tea project that Star and Moon Sect Elder Chu they studied, announced the research failure unfortunately, proved transmigrator did not raise idea anything to become. However this is the minor matter, this time Xue Mu does not have the thoughts on this, Star and Moon Sect that group of woman tossed about the interest actually, will measure with the eye this project to develop the appearance in the future, when will be nonchalant in the future blossoms and bears fruit. 顺带一提,这些日子来,星月宗的楚长老她们去研究的炒茶项目,不幸宣告研究失败,证明了穿越者也不是提个主意就什么都能成的。不过这是小事,这时候的薛牧已经没心思在这上面了,倒是星月宗那帮女人自己折腾出了兴趣,目测这个项目将来会自行发展出模样,在未来不经意的时候开花结果。 Actually demon edition correction «The Bride with White Hair» has written the first half with the efforts of beautiful woman work room. Xue Mu polished one personally all day, bringing the sample manuscript to find on Ying Yi. 倒是魔改版《白发魔女传》在美女工作室的努力下已经写出了前半部。薛牧亲自润色了一整天,带着样稿找到了影翼头上。 „Manager Xue......” Ying Yi read the half draft, sighed very much: „You cannot come a story purely, must in story Rieda to other goals.” “薛总管……”影翼看完了半部稿子,很是感叹:“你就不能单纯来个故事吗,非要在故事里达到一些其他目的。” Xue Mu hehe smiles: „Was looked by you?” 薛牧呵呵一笑:“被你看出来了啊？” „So long as isn't silly to look? Your this was Star and Moon Sect washes the white repertoire is too obvious, was washed by your story, this Bloody Hands Bathing in the Autumn Breeze must turn into white hands peeling a fresh orange.” Ying Yi sighed: „Must acknowledge, your story really compared with others' interest.” “只要不傻都看得出来好吗？你这为星月宗洗白的套路太明显了,被你这故事一洗,这血手洗清秋都要变成素手剥新橙了。”影翼叹了口气:“不过必须承认,你的故事真的比别人的有趣。” Xue Mu strange say/way: „Others? How?” 薛牧奇道:“还有别人的？怎样的？” „Haven't you very long paid attention to this aspect?” Ying Yi smiles: „Since you cause the unrest in national capital several articles, my Wind and Waves Building storytelling guest full of something in the whole family, the person who now writes the story are getting more and more, has formed a new job.” “你很久没关注过这个方面了吧？”影翼笑笑:“自从你在京师几篇文章引起风潮,我风波楼说书又宾客盈门,现在写故事的人越来越多,已经形成一个新营生了。” „Un, initially listened to Menglan to raise has had many people to write the story, leading the story unrest I to be conceivable, but formed a new job to be actually unexpected quickly, originally thinks that approximately must develop 1-2 years.” “嗯,当初听梦岚提起过有不少人在写故事了,引领了故事风潮我可以想象,不过这么快形成一个新营生倒是出乎预料,本来以为大约还要发展个1-2的。” „Naturally, wanting the benign development truly to need 1-2 years. The present story many cannot withstand vulgarly, will only imitate you to do that erotic thing, writes shoddily, is unenjoyable. Another type is carves the writing extremely, the rhythmical prose style with four syllable and six-syllable lines in parallel, gorgeous exceptionally, in brief in story no attraction.” Ying Yi pats the draft to sigh: „Puts the cart before the horse, puts the cart before the horse!” “当然,想要良性发展确实要个1-2。现在的故事多数粗鄙不堪,只会模仿你搞那点情色的东西,偏偏又写得拙劣,毫无乐趣。还有另一种极端就是雕琢文字,骈四俪六的,华美异常,总之在故事本身上都没什么吸引力。”影翼拍着稿子叹气:“本末倒置,本末倒置啊！” Xue Mu cannot bear laugh, this Ying Yi also became half book review expert, it seems like that this day storytelling content vacuum, he looked for many stories for this reason, unknowingly gnawed an old bookworm? 薛牧忍不住发笑,这影翼还成半个书评专家了,看来这段日子说书内容真空,他为此去找了不少故事,不知不觉啃成一个老书虫了？ To be honest, the story design of Xue Mu also not necessarily has the level much, after is only the modern information baptism , the material were too many, casual looks like the story that the evil customs cannot withstand with modern people, for example jumps the cliff to result in the valuable this class thing, the person in this world looks like is also novel incomparable, let alone writing introduction , elucidation , transposition and summary rhythm foreshadowing atmosphere exaggeration wait/etc. skills , the person in this world has not learned, how his level again ordinary is also steamroll others one big section. 说实话,薛牧的故事设计也不见得多有水准,只是现代信息洗礼之后素材实在太多了,随便化用一个现代人看来恶俗不堪的故事,比如跳崖得宝这类的玩意,在这个世界的人看来也是新奇无比,何况写作的起承转合节奏伏笔气氛渲染等等技巧,这世界的人还没学会,他的水准再怎么普通也是碾压别人一大截的。 Wants in writing the level of story breaks through is not difficult, this world in fact has not the low writing foundation, but does not have a development of period, feared that puts the cart before the horse unable to grasp the key point. In the period of this considerable development, any transmigrator cannot become everyone grandmaster of deserving. 想要在写故事的水准上突破也不难,这世界实际上已经是有了不低的文字基础,只是没有一段时期的发展,怕都是本末倒置抓不住重点。在这尚未长足发展的这段时期内,任何穿越者都能成为当之无愧的大家宗师。 Ying Yi sighed: „I have a request, does not know whether Manager Xue can help.” 影翼叹道:“我有个请求,不知薛总管能否帮个忙。” „Our present relations add anything to request, said freely.” “我们如今的关系还说什么请求,尽管说。” „In this white hair demoness story, increases a positive image of assassin.” “在这个白发魔女的故事里,添加一位刺客的正面形象。” Xue Mu smiles to make noise finally, this Ying Yi also became aware finally, where spoke the real sense of story. 薛牧终于笑出声来,这影翼终于也悟了,讲故事的真正意义在哪里。 Must wash to the assassin, compared with giving demoness washes also with ease, after all demoness is called the demon, on hand bloody is very difficult to wash. If then Xue Qingqiu overawes the world that not to know many human lives trade, the innocent person is not infrequent, even Xue Mu, the toxin made her feel interesting initially, perhaps the Xue Mu grave grass three chi (0.33 m) are now high. This image in people heart deep-rooted, wants to wash white easier said than done? 要给刺客洗地,比给魔女洗地还轻松,毕竟魔女之所以被称为魔,手头的血腥很难洗。便如薛清秋威震天下那是不知道多少人命换来的,其中无辜者不在少数,就算是薛牧自己,要不是当初身上毒素让她觉得有趣,说不定现在薛牧坟草都三尺高了。这种形象在人们心中根深蒂固,想洗白谈何容易？ But assassin thing, only needs to emphasize one „is only the duty, does not slaughter”, or comes anything „three not to kill” custom, this bloody washed off half. Molds again keeps the word to be loyal is also callous the charming image, such as supposes to catch to use the Central Plain red this class person conveniently, can bring a fans big pile. 而刺客这玩意,只需要强调一个“只为任务,绝不滥杀”,或者来个什么“三不杀”的规矩,这血腥就洗掉一半了。再塑造一些守信用讲义气又冷酷帅气的形象,诸如随手把中原一点红这类的人设抓来用用,都能带来粉丝一大堆。 Xue Mu is in front of Ying Yi, took pen in hand to add a plot personally, Ying Yi looked directly silent, long time smiled bitterly saying: „Sometimes in Manager Xue, how I really want to cut open your brain have a look to be long, this story character hefts at fingertips, as if you have seen.” 薛牧当着影翼的面,亲自提笔添了一段剧情,影翼看了直接沉默,半晌才苦笑道:“薛总管,有时候我真想把你脑子剖开看看里面到底是怎么长的,这故事人物信手掂来,仿佛你见过似的。” I have really seen, the piece that I watch the person are more than you have seen. In the Xue Mu heart complained, in the surface said with a smile: „Brothers do not despise the writer, heard that the southern literary style is abundant, I looked that some people will write the genuine work not long.” 我真的见过很多啊,我看的片都比你见过的人多。薛牧心中吐槽,面上笑道:“兄弟别小看文人,听说南方文风较盛,我看不用多久就会有人写出真正的巨著来。” Ying Yi disdains saying: „That help/gang sour generation of aid the matter, the Manager Xue military strategy in the writing, they do not understand.” 影翼不屑道:“那帮酸腐之辈济得甚事,薛总管的韬略可不在文字,他们不懂。” Xue Mu is disinclined the military force outstanding person with this world to dispute the three views in civil and military aspect, but said: „Xue this comes, to have the matter to ask the brothers to help.” 得,薛牧懒得跟这世界的武力佼佼者辩驳文武方面的三观,只是道:“薛某此来,另有事请兄弟帮忙。” „I know, Ling State Martial Discussion Great Meeting, Six Gates has hung the official announcement, today Unhindered Dao also starts to send the form everywhere. What been able to think is, this first Ling State martial discussion, is your Star and Moon Sect Master holds unexpectedly. Hehe...... this is the Manager Xue military strategy is then. Others think that is only a martial arts contest, the man of insight naturally knows that means anything. Six Gates is willing to coordinate unexpectedly, this makes me very puzzled actually, does not know Xiahou Di how Manager Xue moves?” “我知道,灵州论武大会,六扇门已经挂出了榜文,今天纵横道也开始到处发单子了。想不到的是,这第一届灵州论武,竟是你星月宗主持。呵呵……这便是薛总管的韬略所在。别人以为只是一场比武,有识之士自然知道意味着什么。只是六扇门居然愿意配合,这倒是让我很是不解,不知薛总管是怎么打动的夏侯荻？” Really loves to talk about somebody's most vulnerable points, the Xue Mu egg said sorely: „Since you know fairly well that on the line, if this matter becomes, has the advantage to Traceless Dao.” 真是哪壶不开提哪壶,薛牧蛋疼道:“既然你心中有数那就行,此事若成,对无痕道也自有好处。” Ying Yi nods: „I will attend a meeting as a non-voting delegate.” 影翼点点头:“我会列席的。” Naturally will attend a meeting as a non-voting delegate, what matter do not do, who so long as makes an appearance the good deed that can gain the prestige not to do? Star and Moon Sect must be the political significance lord of Ling State, goes by it, assassin sect will not struggle this kind of matter. Notice congress also has the expansion influence on select the significance of talent, Star and Moon Sect is impossible to eat, does not gather is a matter, others are not necessarily willing, his Traceless Dao also to have the opportunity to fish an advantage here, harvest own influence or the talent. 当然会列席,什么事都不要做,只要露个面都能赚声望的好事谁不会做？星月宗要做政治意义上的灵州之主,由得它去,刺客宗门不会争这类事情。须知这种大会还有扩张势力选拔人才的意义,星月宗不可能全吃下去,道不合是一回事,别人也不一定肯,他无痕道还有机会在这里捞点好处,收获属于自己的势力或者人才。 „Right...... had other important matter.” The Xue Mu look enforces: „Hopes that west side Traceless Dao sends the manpower to go, collects Intention Sect all trends as far as possible. That side Star and Moon Sect person can also coordinate with you.” “对了……有件别的要事。”薛牧神色严肃起来:“希望无痕道多派人手去西边,尽量收集心意宗的所有动向。那边星月宗的人也会和你们配合。” Ying Yi narrows the eyes to focus: „Xie Changsheng that matter?” 影翼眯着眼:“谢长生那件事？” „Not only that matter, I suspected very much Intention Sect is planning anything, Xie Changsheng this matter perhaps is only a link. You know that Intention Sect this super sect, if there is a movement, that moves mountains, ahead of time will guard will not be always wrong. Even the result of ascertainment and we have not related, must achieve to know in heart.” “不独那件事,我很怀疑心意宗在谋划什么,谢长生这件事或许只是一个环节。你知道的,心意宗这种超级宗门,万一有了动作,那就是排山倒海,提前防范总是不会错的。就算探知的结果和我们没关系,也要做到心里有数。” „Knew.” Ying Yi puts out three characters simply, paused, said: „The matter, this eminence will go personally.” “知道了。”影翼简单吐出三个字,顿了顿,又道:“此间事了,本座会亲自前往。” This said Xue Mu to stare but actually, suddenly realized Ying Yi this not specially to oneself the face, but seemed to be underestimated the struggle of righteous and demonic. As fought one of the millenniums Demon Sect sect master with Righteous Dao, Ying Yi will be only more careful than his Xue Mu to this matter attaches great importance, lists as the highest priority to be right in the heart sufficiently. Just like various Unhindered Dao method resentment Intention Sect, that is also stress-free, the millenniums anything has not played...... 这倒说得薛牧愣了一下,忽然意识到影翼这个并不是特别给自己面子,而是自己似乎小看了正魔之争。作为和正道斗了千年的魔门宗主之一,影翼对这种事只会比他薛牧更上心更重视,足以在心中列为最高优先级才对。正如纵横道各种手段怼心意宗,那也是毫无压力,千年来什么没玩过啊…… What Xue Mu does not know, such as Ying Yi such cultivation, often will be born sometimes some dark premonitions, he felt perhaps the card faintly ten years of Insightful Emptiness turning points, here. 薛牧不知道的是,如影翼这样的修行,往往会在有些时候诞生一些冥冥的预感,他隐隐觉得说不定自己卡了十年的洞虚契机,就在此处。 Has not only depended on the technique of assassination to threaten the Insightful Emptiness top powerhouse as Insightful Emptiness, is master of a dao, once he Insightful Emptiness, the brought change may be much profounder than the breakthrough influence of Yinye...... 作为一位尚未洞虚仅靠暗杀之术就能威胁洞虚的顶级强者,又是一道之主,他一旦洞虚,带来的变化可比夤夜的突破影响深远得多了……
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